Hi .. Mod from Queue ..
General :
* You should respect DS in your map .. learn about it more .. to fix your errors in all diff .. and fix the blanket in this map as i mentiond below ..
* In Easy , Normal and Hard .. untick the widescreen support .. from design in song setup .. just like Alice one .. since you don't have a SB on this map ..
Easy :
* Check Aimod on this diff please .. to make your DS consistence ..
* I can see in this diff you didn't make one DS between the notes and it's quite hard to play it for the player and it's a normal diff too .. so keep mind to make it the same .. like x0.8 is good .. i'm not going to mention the distance cause you need to fix the whole map .. I'm really sorry about that .. beside DS helps to keep your map organized .. that's why ..
* And you need to fix the blanket between the notes too ..
There is a lot of things you need to fix it if you want to rank this map ..
* In Alice diff .. you increased the DS really too much at the end .. make it low that suit the song ..
Thant's all ..
Good luck
General :
* You should respect DS in your map .. learn about it more .. to fix your errors in all diff .. and fix the blanket in this map as i mentiond below ..
* In Easy , Normal and Hard .. untick the widescreen support .. from design in song setup .. just like Alice one .. since you don't have a SB on this map ..
Easy :
- 00:06:463 (1) - Make this slider curvy to be more beautiful like this http://i.imgur.com/lZdAKwV.png ..
- 00:06:463 (1,2) - DS these two notes since you start this slider here 00:07:713 - .. it should be the same DS in this diff .. to be easy for the player ..
- 00:08:605 (3,4) - How about if you changed this pattern to this .. http://i.imgur.com/zkiEtQU.png .. it will be more fun to play
- 00:15:034 (4) - Make this slider like this http://i.imgur.com/1WtvHAu.png .. instead of make it line .. it will be more nicer ..
- 00:17:177 (1) - I think here you should make distance between two ends .. cause it's quite hard to follow it from the start .. So , the best way to solve it is to blanket it with the next slider .. that would be great .. http://i.imgur.com/R8NoMIc.png ..
- 00:22:891 (3,1) - Fix blanket .. just move the tail down a bit of slider no.1 ..
- 00:26:462 (4) - I suggest here to change this shape of this slider .. doesn't have any creative or anything .. and it quite looks off .. just make a good shape of it .. and make the reverse section here 00:27:712 - it will follow the rhythm .. And add note here 00:29:320 - ..
- 00:29:677 (1,2) - Avoid stackes in this diff ..
- 00:30:034 (2) - Make this slider to two 1/1 sliders .. like this http://i.imgur.com/A3LWz04.png ..
- 00:32:534 (5) - Same ^ just because there is really strong beats that you ignored it .. and should not be ignored .. and you will follow the drum like that ..
- 00:35:391 - From this part i remapped it .. like this http://i.imgur.com/XihwhOR.png .. cause it sounds really off the way you did .. .. 00:35:748 - here is will follow the "chi" sound ..
- 00:41:105 (2) - This slider took a lot of beats behind it .. please make it something like this http://i.imgur.com/HqDb1oN.png ..
- 00:43:962 (6) - NC here ..
- 00:46:105 (9) - Again avoid stacks in Easy diff ..
- 00:46:462 (1) - Try another shape .. You can learn and get ideas from here -> t/37194 .. but like this it's so weird
- 00:52:534 (1) - Make the reverse here 00:53:070 - and add not here 00:53:962 - to follow the vocal ..
- 00:55:391 (1) - Same ^ .. and note too after it ..
- 00:57:177 (3) - This slider reverse no need for it .. how about if you make it like this http://i.imgur.com/lnYCMXZ.png .. a circle and then a slider 1/1 ..
- 00:58:248 (1,2) - Ctrl + G .. it will follow the vocal ..
- 01:00:748 (4,5) - No this part too hard for the beginners to play .. i suggest for you to delete slider 4 and replace it with a circle with NC ..
- 01:01:998 (3) - This slider should end here 01:03:248 - and the next white line add circle ..
- 01:03:962 (1) - You should remap this part .. you ignored soo many good beats .. and like that it looks really boring ..
- 01:09:320 (1) - Same ^
- 01:14:677 (1) - ^
- 01:26:462 (1) - you need to change this circle position .. it appears really fast beneath the previous slider .. and would be not clear .. so just change it to another position ..
* Check Aimod on this diff please .. to make your DS consistence ..
* I can see in this diff you didn't make one DS between the notes and it's quite hard to play it for the player and it's a normal diff too .. so keep mind to make it the same .. like x0.8 is good .. i'm not going to mention the distance cause you need to fix the whole map .. I'm really sorry about that .. beside DS helps to keep your map organized .. that's why ..
* And you need to fix the blanket between the notes too ..
- 00:06:998 (2,3) - Fix blanket ..
- 00:15:034 (2) - This slider should ends here 00:15:927 - and add a circle on the next white line .. cause you can't just ignore the strong beat here 00:15:927 - ..
- 00:20:034 (1,2) - Fix blanket ..
- 00:27:355 (3) - The reverse is sound a bit off .. remove it and make the spinner start from here 00:27:712 -
- 00:36:462 (7) - Remove the reverse section of this slider .. no need for it ..
- 00:41:105 (1) - Are you sure you are going to ignore this beat 00:41:462 - .. if not then make it like this http://i.imgur.com/8qhoVK5.png ..
- 00:43:248 (4) - Move this slider to here 00:43:070 - to follow the vocal ..
- 00:45:034 (5) - Make this like http://i.imgur.com/qW6Zdf6.png .. it would be more fun to play ..
- 00:46:462 (1,2,3) - These repeating sliders look like a hard diff .. you should remap this part ..
- 00:57:177 (4) - Remover the reverse slider and add circle here 00:57:177 - and let the slider (1/1) start from here 00:57:534 - ..
- 01:01:820 (1) - The spinner should start here 01:01:998 - .. cause the way you put it .. it follows nothing ..
- 01:14:320 (1) - I feel like this is not really easy to read .. for my opinion i think you should make it 1/1 slider with one reverse ..
- 01:20:391 (1) - and 01:22:177 (3) - Please remap this part .. one slider is just boring .. and it really not necessary to put it .. so just put notes to make it more fun to play ..
- 00:05:213 (2,3) - Why there is a big distance between this two notes .. and i can't hear any strong beat here .. please make it like 00:04:856 (1,2) -
There is a lot of things you need to fix it if you want to rank this map ..
* In Alice diff .. you increased the DS really too much at the end .. make it low that suit the song ..
Thant's all ..
Good luck