Thank you very much! learned a lot from you especially those blanket thingies and the overlap (and also terminologies that i have to google )IceKalt wrote:
Hey~
Coming from my QAlice- Would use the same slider here 00:02:713 (3) - as 00:01:284 (3) - (maybe just strg+c and spin it)
- theese 2 blankets does look a bit ugly try maybe this: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8243423
- This section is a bit messy - maybe try this: https://puu.sh/w8JDz/5011af29f4.jpg
Reason 1(red) - you have a blanket then
Reason 2(puple) - the overlap (2) with (4) looks better cause (4) going right in the middle of (2)
Reason 3(green) - better overlap with (3)
Reason 4(idk the name of the color xD) (2) dont overlap with 00:06:106 (3) -
- Try to overlap sliderend 00:09:320 (1) - with sliderend 00:10:570 (4) -
- sry but dont like that sliderart 00:13:427 (8) - much ~
- Try to blanket 00:16:284 (6,7,1) - better like: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8243546
- 00:17:891 (1,2,3,4) - try to make that make that more orderly ^^
- 00:24:141 (5,7) - try to prevent that overlap, it doesnt look verly nice^^
- 00:27:712 (1,2) - increase the DS there
- maybe try to make sharp angle jumps there 00:35:391 (1,2,3,4) - , would play better
- 00:44:498 (4,7) - adjust 00:44:498 (4,7) - in this part like this: https://puu.sh/w8Klo/3e8ee13cab.jpg
Reason 1(red) - blanket with (2)
Reason 2(blue) - blanket with (5)
Reason 3(purple) - perfect blanket with (7)
Reason 4(green) - perfect circular flow
- 00:49:677 (3,4) - increase DS becasue there is no reason that its lower than 00:49:320 (1,2) -
- try not too curve slider that much like 00:55:391 (1) - when it does not have a reason - it just doesnt look nice - even if you think so
- 00:55:391 (1,2) - the gap is too small - ppl could think that it is an 1/2 gap
- try to replace 00:59:498 (2,3,4) - so they does not cause unnecesary overlaps
- 01:00:391 (6) - isnt compleatly in the middle of 01:01:284 (8) -
- dont use the same DS in 01:01:284 (8,1,2) - like in 01:02:355 (2,3,4,5,6,7) -
ppl get maybe confused when the 1/1 jump is as big as the 1/2 jump when they stand together^^
- 01:06:105 (1,2,3,4,5) - replace them so they dont cause unneccesary overlaps ^^
- 01:08:427 (1,2) - dont have an object over an reverse arrow - that just isnt a thing you do
- 01:08:784 (2,1) - increase the DS bettween theese 2
- 01:11:820 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^like at 01:06:105
Well that was it from me
I didnt list every problem of your map because you dont need to change too much with my mod -
As i saw this is the 2nd map from you - you need need knowledge of what you can do and exsepcially what you cant do.
This is somehing you cant learn in an hour, you need to learn them through mods/testplays and honest opinions.
Somebody who just say "wow this map is great!!!!!!!" may sound great at first but doesnt help you much to improve - so do not reject everyone who criticises you- just for side note ^^ (i know this becasue everyone starts like this)
I hope i could help with your diff (i wont mod the hard diff because i am not very experienced at hard either)
Gl with your improvement and have a nice day~
- sry but dont like that sliderart 00:13:427 (8) - much ~ill just recycle slider from 00:24:855 (7) like this
Again Thank You very much! Here's Your Kudosu.