Thanks for the mods!Fursum wrote:
Hello from my queue.
[Easy]
00:09:320 (1) - A simpler shape would look much better imo
00:13:427 (2,3) - I don't know if the overlap is intended but its very small, so avoiding it would be better.
00:20:034 (4) - Overlap is kinda ugly for me.
00:23:605 (1) - You can rotate this so it doesn't overlap with 00:21:998 (2)
00:24:855 (2) - Bad overlap with 00:22:891 (3)
00:29:677 (1) - Bad overlap, its not acceptable in an Easy diff.
00:40:034 (6,1) - I suggest making a circle into a reverse slider here.
00:49:320 (1) - You can curve this so it doesnt overlap.
01:01:998 (6) - Move upwards so it doesn't overlap with these 01:00:748 (4,1)
01:09:320 (1,2,3) - These overlaps too.
01:14:677 (1) - Overlap.
I don't have anything against overlaps but they look bad with low AR.
Actually did not notice those overlaps. i guess im to busy with the higher diffs
[Normal]
01:26:552 (1) - Start the spinner atleast 1/4 later. FIXED, also made it 1/4 later in easy
Also, following vocals could be a bit hard for a Normal player, I suggest following a simpler rythm. made some parts follow the vocals while some mixed with instruments.
[Hard]
01:24:677 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Timing gap change should be clearer. A NC on 4 and more contrasted spacing could help. FIXED
[Alice]
[url=https://puu.sh/wi1p9/083365df3f.osr] Here is my first try] Cannot download the replay for some reason but thanks for the effort of sending a replay
Plays okay, but having better slider shapes would help definitely. Not talking about the note shapes. Curved sliders seem to have a clunky shape in general. FIXED not sure what are those but made some unusual sliders the usual
However, there are some questionable rythm choices such as 01:08:784 (2) - Here you have to switch to the percussion but having a slider tick on the stronger percussion isn't ideal. FIXED
00:33:784 (1,2,3,4) - Same goes for this, you have to switch to the guitar sounds, but slider ends fall into them. FIXED
00:46:016 (8,9) - This was pretty hard to read. Maybe use a NC here? FIXED
Overall, map has a lot to improve on aesthetics, however I'm not good at it either so I can't really suggest things on that. I added some "note shape" sliders to add aesthetics. not really good at either.