1. God (4.88 stars, 1124 notes)
2. Taiko Collab (4.77 stars, 1958 notes)

Raging Bull wrote:

C2 A, C2 B, C3 BG, C4 A, C5 B, Lights, Reprise, Rose frame bottom, Rose frame top are above the SB max size of 800x600.

Derekku wrote:

The maximum dimensions for tall or wide scrolling images are 640x1440 and 1920x480 respectively.

Card N'FoRcE wrote:

For tall or wide scrolling images, the maximum dimensions are 640x1500 and 1200x480 respectively.

Uan wrote:

Nothing to say ;D
Good Map and StoryBoard~
ykcarrot is so pro ~~
S.T.A.R!!

bmin11 wrote:

[Map]
07:35:816 (1) - 이건 뉴콤보를 고려해보셔야할지도 모르겠네요. 변속이 꽤나 심하다 볼수 있습니다. // 몇 분에게 테스트 플레이 부탁했는데 다 틀리더라고요;; 뉴콤보말고 0.75x로 대체했습니다.
[Reprise] 부터 읽기 힘든 슬라이더가 몇몇 보이네요. 대체로 07:44:816 (2) - 이런류의 슬라이더들인데 이건 괜찮다만...
08:05:616 (2) - 여기서 제가 걱정되는게 1) 8분째 플레이한 사람이 집중력이 흐트려졌을지도 모른다. 2) 풀콤을 이어가는 도중이라 몸에 힘이 심히 들어가 실수할수도 있겠다. 3) 뒤에 거의 끝나감을 암시하는 SB 때문에 역시 집중력이 흐트려질수도 있다 란 점들이겠네요 (물론 개개인에 따라 틀리겠지만). 고치지 않아도 되겠지만 유의해두시는것도 좋으리라 봐요. // 지금까지 4명 테스트해서 틀린 사람은 없었습니다. 이 부분은 패스~


[SB]
각 챕터마다 열쇠가 등장하는데 열쇠가 정지하기전 좀 느려지면서 (감속을 하면서) 차차 정지하는게 더 자연스러울것 같아요. 지금은 등장시 이동속도를 유지하다 갑자기 멈추니 뭔가 부자연스럽네요. // 수정했습니다. 근데 시간이 짧아서 큰 차이는 없군요.
05:58:824 (1) - 오 여기서 딱 초록색이네요. 기왕 이런거...
06:04:607 (1) - 여기서 파랑으로 넘어가는건 어떨까요? // 음... 노래 분위기 맞춰 색변화를 한거라 좀;


최고입니다 ㅇㅅㅇb

bmin11 wrote:

그러고보니 SB도중 챕터1을 언급하는 파트가 없는데 챕터1이라기 보단 인트로의 성격이 강하니 기존의 챕터2를 챕터1으로 시작하는건 어떨까요? 챕터2부터 뭔가 시작된다는 뉘앙스도 풍기기도 하구요.
// 챕터1은 디자인에서 앞으로 가면 보입니다. MP3파일 시작 훨씬 전에 스토리보드가 설정돼있거든요.
그리고 이 곡이 '오라토리오'입니다. 뭔지 잘 모르시면 검색해보시길...
5막+종장의 실제 구성에 맞춰 작성된거예요.

03:00:088 (3,4) - 알게 모르게 멜로디에 어긋나는 느낌도 드네요 히트사운드가 연속적으로 나오다보니 // 악기에 맞춘겁니다.

P.S. 도대체 저 남자주인공과 PSP는 무슨 스토리가 엮여있는거죠 항상 들고있네ㅋㄷ (것도 옆에 여자를 두고) // 남자주인공이 미연시 마니아예요. 더 자세한건 스포일러라서 여기까지만~
P.S. 당연하지만 쿠도스 안주시는거 알죠?

Shiirn wrote:

This map is fucking incredible. I mean it.

General
Blahblah
I kinda wanted to see more than one kiai =( // Added kiai on Chapter 5A. It fit well with BG I think.

God
I'm not going to go too nazi into the timing since it seems fine atm
Everything is pure awesome.
03:04:852 (1,2,3,4) - i mother fucking love you // <3

04:04:846 (1,2) - I don't like combos like this, try to change it somehow? (I know that Slider->Hitcircle works great for this beat, but having the circle at the start is pretty bad, maybe stack it on the end?) // Hmm... they are intended. I tried various pattern of note position in this chapter for reducing boredom. Not so bad IMO.
04:05:769 (3,4,5,6) - ^ except something like this?
04:25:846 (1,2) - i combobroke on this like a noob, take that as you will // Improve your sightread skill! xD
04:34:846 - The storyboard here is hilarious as hell. I love it. // I'm inpired by http://puu.sh/4tVX
06:43:415 (4) - Actually using sliderticks to accentuate the song? I SIR, LOVE YOU // yup
07:35:816 (5) - This has a hitburst at the reverse arrow, but the slider is slow enough that you can easily see it. Anyone that has a problem with this should lrn2map. // Yep, there is no problem.


take my kudosu take it take it

kanpakyin wrote:

Due to this song is too long,so we decide to found 1 more Taiko mapper to collab with us >< diff's name will use Taiko collab and we're in progress,sorry for waiting ><

ykcarrot wrote:

@Taiko collab members
Added taiko diff.
By the way, timing points are old one. They should be fixed.
There are many green lines for change BPM, so I can't handle it.
Please fix it. Thank you.

Here is my current timing point.

BPM / Offset

120 / 130
120 / 4350
120 / 9100
90 / 56600
85 / 57276
75 / 58686
120 / 59486
163 / 89486
170 / 142500
150 / 197554
130 / 199154
166 / 280391
150 / 377258
135 / 386858
100 / 388635
60 / 391415
100 / 423116
100 / 423416
150 / 463016

Raging Bull wrote:

O-o-oh my god! It's pending!


My message isn't short.
Wow! Okay now my message isn't short.

Edit: Oh hey! You also fixed your Key image. Before it kinda showed two keys as it moved :3

Aug/17 - SB codes were moved into .osu. Delete your .osb file.

God, I need awesome skin elements! T^T

Raging Bull wrote:

Maybe you could use this?

Kanon wrote:

[God]
00:46:600 (1) - kind of silenced both tick and sliderbody? just saying. i dont feel confused here. but in case maybe volume a bit increase here? // I think it's fine. Both sounds doesn't fit in this section, but I didn't use it in whole time.
So sad I even can't nazi this map. It is so solid.
But finally i find something to nazi XD
06:20:958- useless greenline // Oops, it should be fixed. Thanks!
06:21:158- ^

lepidopodus wrote:

Taiko Collab
- If there are lots of BPM changes in the map, we can consider fixing speed of notes by putting custom SV, but when I played this I didn't feel that hard to read the patterns, so it might not be necessary. I'll leave this for Kana / Kpy to decide ~
- Nice collab, in general. Thx
- You can remove unnecessary barlines (like one in 00:09:100) by putting more uninheritted section, but make sure you need to mention about that to modders. (If you think troublesome about this, well, ignore this, or just find me before this one gets bubbled.) I think I'll leave this. Don't want to cause additional trouble to modders ~
- @Kanpakyin: To be honest, you don't really need to use this much even-numbered patterns for this map... Those even-numbered patterns you used doesn't sound that annoying with vocals, but considering other instruments, hmm... I'll leave this to Kpy ~

00:46:600 ~ 00:59:486 - Just to mention, this is nice method to deal with slow-down part in this map, since this part does not have many notes. Thx again ~
06:31:415 ~ 06:59:415 - I guess you could have used some drum rolls here... Added some notes. I can't add sliders because their hit rate are same as BPM 240 Orz
07:21:416 ~ 07:34:016 - You can use more notes if you want, since some more sounds were added, compared with previous part. OK~

I'll ask Kana / Kpy to check other parts ~

Pattern suggestions are not that important, since minor adjustment does not change the map that much, when I don't really like compositions of patterns. Try making more well-constructed map than this next time? Same as above ~
Well, though, nice map generally. Sorry for being stubborn and annoying. You guys are free to ignore everything from me since I have no authority.

This mod post is kinda short for 8-minute-long map. (But I really don't like making minor pattern suggestions, orz.)

Thx for your modding

Nymph_ wrote:

:) Hey~ Nymph here and from Jojo’s queue~

Really good job on this map, can't nazi anything T.T

Just some small issues:

I personally feel the offset at the beginning is a little off... I am not a expert but I always click late.. maybe it is just me.
// It's fine to me but it will be confirmed by the other.

and spinner-background and metre, most of them are 1023*692.. current is 1024, think it is ok, still not sure if it bothers or not.
// I think it is acceptable.

and...in god diff, 06:09:306 (1) - new combo is missing here. should add one.
// Oops, fixed. It's a silly bug.

nothing else~! then have my star~

lepidopodus wrote:

Taiko Collab
- If there are lots of BPM changes in the map, we can consider fixing speed of notes by putting custom SV, but when I played this I didn't feel that hard to read the patterns, so it might not be necessary.
- Nice collab, in general.
- You can remove unnecessary barlines (like one in 00:09:100) by putting more uninheritted section, but make sure you need to mention about that to modders. (If you think troublesome about this, well, ignore this, or just find me before this one gets bubbled.)
- @Kanpakyin: To be honest, you don't really need to use this much even-numbered patterns for this map... Those even-numbered patterns you used doesn't sound that annoying with vocals, but considering other instruments, hmm... I may try to reduce it but I guess if I put only odd number pattern and odd number patten then player may feel boring of this.

01:29:486 ~ 02:22:500 - Micro-fitting in to the music might be ok, but I think you need to concentrate more to macro-fitting in to composition of the music. It's kinda embarassing to see that similar music flows again with completely different pattern pops out. Also, consider 'spread of difficulty with in the map' when you are putting stream. All stream are really basic,and this is a transition for Kana's part.
01:36:111 (33) - Remove? (like 01:30:222) //k,fixed
01:39:792 (50,51,52,53,54,55,56) - 'o-o---o-ooo-o-ooo' or something like that. //Sorry I can't see any reason that it needs to do that.
01:45:866 (89) - To 01:46:050 and change it to k? (Piano sounds there.)
01:53:044 (7) - I guess using big notes here would be better... //change it to big kat.
01:55:989 (27) - ...Instead of here. //Yes,removed finish!
01:58:197 (40 ~ 48) - Too complex for this map, considering general difficulty of the map.//changed it to ddkkddkkddkk
02:21:203 (187,188,189,190) - D K D K. Well, you used big notes whenever string burst out before. //No sorry,I guess it's okey.
02:32:382 (1) - Even if you put finish in the end of the spinner, nothing comes out from that. Just add a big note in 02:33:794 and make the spinner shorter. //okey.
02:34:941 (7) - Remove? I felt somewhat crowded.//okey.
02:35:205 (9) - If you are following lyrics here, consider move this to 02:35:382 and change to k, or just remove it? //I think that's okey,so ?I'll hold this on!
03:02:029 ~ 03:04:676 - Keeping similar beats with 02:56:382 ~ 02:59:029? Since the music is quite similar. //Sorry keep this for now.
03:19:154 ~ 04:33:000 - I guess you noticed that this part of the music is really repetitive, but actually the music is slowly toned up. I guess it would be better if you can emphasize that... Unfortunatly you stared with too crowded pattern in 03:19:154... //Actually the music is repect and repect here.It's really hard to map imo.
03:50:077 (175 ~ 186) - I'm just making some examples for unstable note density. The music didn't become week, but notes are vanished. (Though don't end up filling this with more notes without general fixing of this part. If you don't want to make any fixes in 03:19:154 ~ 04:33:000, just ignore this too.) //Add Some notes here
04:03:461 ~ 04:33:000 - You can use more big notes in this part... Of course it should be appropriate.
04:52:680 (6) - Remove this to emphasize 3/4 beat in 04:51:957 (3,4,5)? //okey.
05:03:523 (71) - Try using big note here? //Sure.
05:07:228 (93,94) - Notes having 3/4 interval in 05:06:415 (90,91,92) are nice, but not for these two notes since interval of drum sounds become 2/4. //ok,change it to 1/2
05:09:848 (108,109) - K to 108, remove 109. //fixed something here.
05:10:300 (110,111) - Notes having 3/4 interval don't fit that well here. (You might try 'oo o' or something.) ^
05:15:089 (138) - Try using big note here? //Fixed.
05:21:234 (1) - Similar with 02:32:382.
05:41:113 (113) - It's weird to see big notes here because you didn't put big note at previous similar sounds.
05:54:125 ~ 06:08:945 - Consider using really long drum roll or spinner to express vocal here, since this kind of continuous notes are easily seen in lots of parts already... I am follow the drum sound here.
06:14:366 (302) - Try using big note here, since you used big notes in 06:14:909 (304,306).
06:20:458 (329,330,331) - 329, 330 --> D, 331 --> K? 328 and 329 sounds different, so it would be better to make some change between that. Also, 329 and 330 have higher tone than 331.
06:23:658 (342) - Big note?
06:25:258 (347) - Not that big sound here, so remove finish from here...
06:25:458 (X) - ...Then add something in here.
06:26:858 (355) - You can use big note here without removing any notes, since it's 1/3. You used big notes for 06:27:746 (356,357,358), so it is considerable.

1. Skin:
   
   1. The "Spinning" should be visible, right now it's really hard to tell if something is spinning. Try adding some white effects to the "Spinner-circle", here's an example.
   2. Perhaps, complete the slider-ball set so it runs smoothly?
   3. You should add "spinner-osu", "spinner-spin" and "spinner-clear", otherwise the spinner would look really odd with other skins.
2. Storyboard:
   
   1. Most of the "lyrics" have transparent pixels, crop them to reduce the SB Load and the OSZ Size. (If you use PS, the "Trim" tool should do this for you)
   2. Taiko names can be cropped too.

1. 01:43:657 (2) - This circle felt really odd, you should remove it just like you did with the next pattern.
2. 04:39:461 (1,2,3) - These jumps felt too forced, you should reduce them a bit.

Gonzvlo wrote:

My browser crashed and I lost my mod, I tried to remember most of it tho

[General]

1. Skin:
   
   1. The "Spinning" should be visible, right now it's really hard to tell if something is spinning. Try adding some white effects to the "Spinner-circle", here's an example. // Changed opacity. It is more visible than before.
   2. Perhaps, complete the slider-ball set so it runs smoothly?
      // Current difference of angle between sliderbx.png and sliderbx+1.png : 15 degrees
      It will be same shape when 45 degrees rotated. If I devide it to 5 degrees for complete set, it doesn't rotate well. I tried it already. So I won't fix.
   3. You should add "spinner-osu", "spinner-spin" and "spinner-clear", otherwise the spinner would look really odd with other skins. // Added
2. Storyboard:
   
   1. Most of the "lyrics" have transparent pixels, crop them to reduce the SB Load and the OSZ Size. (If you use PS, the "Trim" tool should do this for you)
      // I made them with same height for ease. If I trim it again, I should fix EVERYTHING. It isn't really necessary due to SB load isn't high.
   2. Taiko names can be cropped too. // Fixed

[God]

1. 01:43:657 (2) - This circle felt really odd, you should remove it just like you did with the next pattern. // No. I followed piano.
2. 04:39:461 (1,2,3) - These jumps felt too forced, you should reduce them a bit. // Changed from 3.0x to 2.7x

Well, that should be all, I hope I didn't miss anything.

OzzyOzrock wrote:

[Taiko Collab]
- Keep hitsound volume constant. //Just because some of the part were really calm,it wll be a little bit noisy if I consistent them
- Use normal hitsound. Not soft //^
This is all to assure that rhythm can be easily kept.

kanpakying: Whenever I talk about random patterns in your map, it's mainly stuff like 01:35:375 (28,29,30,31).//Nope,this is fine,I just put the k on the write tick. That kd dk doesn't really seem fitting, and just feels weird to play at a part of the song like that. You use kd dk like this many times in your maps, it's not very good. //In case,dk dk or kd kd is hard to fit the song unless some special case,so kd dk is the best choice for basic mapping.

But you mapped a lot of this well, so good job.

KanaRin: Lol, you mapped this song hardest of them all. This is fine, just make sure to only use kdk and stuff when you know it fits, because at some parts, it feels weird when my hand is d k d k d k k k, sort of stops flow. //Won't touch the pattern in his part.