1. Miracle Encounter - 4Key (4.55 stars, 4099 notes)

Kyousukee wrote:

m4m

00:15:864 - are you ignore this sound ? would be good if u add a note at here
00:33:692 - i think it's not a good idea when u make it empty at here , this LN 00:33:007 (33007|0) - need a pair up with a sound at here i think
00:34:207 (34207|1) - there are no sound like 00:34:892 (34892|2) -
02:22:035 (142035|1) - how about make some LN at here ?
02:48:864 - got a stream sound at here imo .
03:30:950 - put a single note ?
03:36:435 - ^
03:53:578 (233578|2) - i don't think this LN should start at here , maybe at 03:53:450 - with 1/8 ?
04:23:578 (263578|1) - LN ?
04:53:235 - would be nice if put a note from here

owo nice song bro !

Sandalphon wrote:

How to use Modv1 easy

[General]
Add GDer's id in the TAG added more tag, my bad

[Miracle Encounter]
00:43:464 - current is not really smooth imo, especially 00:44:064 (44064|0,44107|1,44150|0) - , can try something like img ok
00:45:692 - i dont really get this double, arent the double all for piano and kick only? yes and they are the same as 00:47:064 (47064|1,47064|2,47407|2,47407|3) - etc
03:26:664 - from here, not every sound is 1/4, like 03:30:778 (210778|2,210778|0) - 03:31:464 (211464|2,211464|3,211721|0,211721|2) - are clearly should be 1/2 length fixed some part, i layer 1/2 length most at the white line here

Sandalphon wrote:

How to use Modv1

[General]
Add GDer's id in the TAG

[Miracle Encounter]
01:47:064 (107064|2,107150|2) - yea quite sure they're not same pitch Indeed, but i intend to map it like this since the vocal sounds are quiet unique, to emphasize it and for more variation instead of generic 1/4 snap at different columns.
02:12:092 (132092|0) - hm? isnt the piano is suppose to be at 02:12:435 - just realized both have the piano sound, re-arranged.
02:15:178 - missing LN for the piano ^
02:41:235 - isnt this one is just as same as the 02:40:721 (160721|2,160892|1,161064|0,161407|3) - fixed.
04:41:750 (281750|3,281921|3,282092|3,282264|3,282435|3,282607|3,282778|3,282950|3,283121|3) - try break the stack by moving this 04:42:264 (282264|3) - to 1st perhaps re-arranged.

Sandalphon wrote:

02:16:378 - Not a calculation error really but, i notice this SV can kinda mislead the player, if you try testplay the part you will see the length is different compare with other LN but they are actually the same (02:16:378 (136378|3) - longer than 02:16:035 (136035|1,136207|2) - ). You can just fix that but changing the 1.5 to 02:16:464 - and the 0.5 at 02:16:592 - while having the same effect and not mess the LN length up

Maxus wrote:

qualify check here

[general]
try raise hs volume to 60%

[moe cs and dell]
01:35:407 (95407|3) - move to col 2? not sure the purpose of triple jack at 01:35:235 (95235|3,95407|3,95578|3) - moved to column 3.

02:22:892 - Seem the jack kinda focused on left hand, try move 02:23:750 (143750|0,144092|1,144264|0,144350|1) - to 3-1-2-1? re-arranged with different pattern but now should be fair enough.

02:40:721 - the PR and the pattern flow here kinda a bit awkward imo, try http://puu.sh/AjKjW/c8e2d89c7d.png re-arranged with different pattern.

04:41:492 (281492|1,281492|0,281578|1,281578|0) - The jack here kinda awkward even though it tries to follow the same sound but it kinda doesn't have the impact there since its unnoticeable in gameplay. i somehow want to keep this one for variation.

after you fix sandalphon mod and mine, let me know 'w'

Sandalphon wrote:

Sry for this but I found some miscalculated SVs that worth mention
01:12:521 -02:55:378 - These SV should be 2.5 as (0.5*3/4)+(2.5*1/4)=1
01:59:750 - 02:00:007 - 03:42:607 - 03:42:864 - 04:59:407 - 04:59:664 - should change them from 0.7 to 0.4 so (1.3*2/4)+(0.4*1/4)=3/4

02:16:378 - Not a calculation error really but, i notice this SV can kinda mislead the player, if you try testplay the part you will see the length is different compare with other LN but they are actually the same (02:16:378 (136378|3) - longer than 02:16:035 (136035|1,136207|2) - ). You can just fix that but changing the 1.5 to 02:16:464 - and the 0.5 at 02:16:592 - while having the same effect and not mess the LN length up discussed with dell and we decide to fix this part

If they are intended, just let me know, but personally I dont see any reason to keep them that way rather than making them more smooth
changed all 0.7 points according to your advice, yes it is much smoother. thanks for mentioning haha

Maxus wrote:

qualify check here :333

[general]
try raise hs volume to 60% okay

[moe cs and dell]

00:23:921 (23921|0,24092|1,24264|0,24435|1,24607|0) - 00:23:921 (23921|0,24092|1,24264|0,24435|1,24607|0) - Is the trill here on purpose? since it felt like the left hand here kinda heavy for no purpose from my perspective, try https://puu.sh/AjGXP/98c727bf5c.png yea is was intended with this kind of arrangement. i think it is not that heavy considering it is only 1/2 layering

00:43:464 - Personally the burst kinda awkward for me x_x especially with the double at 00:43:635 - , I will recommend http://puu.sh/AjH6l/1d63ae663c.png instead, more structured imo. rearranged here slightly

01:01:635 (61635|3,61807|1) - Try column 2 and column 1? you already have many notes stack at col 4 at 01:00:778 (60778|3,60950|3,61121|3,61978|3,62150|3,62321|3) - anyway, so alleviate them is good. rearranged from previous pattern, i still like to keep these note at col 4 for some reason

01:11:235 (71235|1) - Prefer this at col 3 tbh, because you already have 01:10:607 (70607|1,70778|1,70892|1) - , so it keeps the pressure away from col 2. ok

01:13:292 (73292|0) - Prefer this at col 3 too since it's much easier to hit from my testplay. hmm, actually it was my intention > 01:13:121 (73121|0,73292|0) - i don't think it is really hard

01:15:692 (75692|1) - This LN seems like the only one that doesn't follow vocal in this entire section, so it kinda fall as an awkward one for me. removed the LN here, actually i layer that for the wub sound but since i emphasize more on vocal here, your point are much valid

02:54:092 (174092|2) - Col 2 for saame reason as 01:11:235 (71235|1) - ya

03:31:378 - there's still synth here, try add single 1/4 LN nice catch

03:34:635 - there's also still synth here, even more obvious one for single 1/4 LN ^

03:36:607 (216607|0) - Should be at col 4 since it's quite high pitched LN chord. ok

03:41:921 - 03:42:007 - same as before. some place i intended to give a break flow, somehow it play a little off when i add them

03:43:464 - I think starting at this point you can add note at crash sound like this to signify differences with the pattern before, since you keep use the same concept here and i think evolving it a bit will do a good thing. good idea, added a single note on each white tick here except some part i intended not to

04:16:721 - Having the burst here linear won't make it boring i think, try having 04:16:764 (256764|3,256807|2,256892|3,256935|2) - as 3-4-3-4. rearranged

after you fix sandalphon mod and mine, let me know 'w'

Dellvangel wrote:

Sandalphon wrote:

02:16:378 - Not a calculation error really but, i notice this SV can kinda mislead the player, if you try testplay the part you will see the length is different compare with other LN but they are actually the same (02:16:378 (136378|3) - longer than 02:16:035 (136035|1,136207|2) - ). You can just fix that but changing the 1.5 to 02:16:464 - and the 0.5 at 02:16:592 - while having the same effect and not mess the LN length up

@CS: tell me if u want to fix this one or not, if no i will just delete the last LN. I personally agree with SY though.
yes I agree too, lets fix it

Also CS, hp intended 7.6 not 7.5? Not really a problem though :ket:
changed HP > 8.5 OD > 8

AchsanLovers wrote:

bub and quali in page one
congrats

Sandalphon wrote:

Page 2 now, you happy?

Critical_Star wrote:

Sandalphon wrote:

Page 2 now, you happy?