This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Minggu, 21 Mei 2017 at 10.50.44

Artist: KikuoHana
Title: Hibi Darake no Me
Tags: help me
BPM: 220
Filesize: 6752kb
Play Time: 04:02
Difficulties Available:

1. Fragile (6,08 stars, 781 notes)

Download: KikuoHana - Hibi Darake no Me
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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help me with the tags

For tags i'd put the song name, creator/artist, and if it's from anything then that as well.

00:15:891 (1,2,3,4) - is pretty unreadable, same with other sections like this. The slider velocity and distance snap makes it hard. And i don't think it'd be rankable as is. Not sure if you're trying to get it ranked though.

00:25:709 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6) - This section feels a bit out of place in my opinion. It's not like any of the other patterns so far.

00:45:891 (4) - I feel like this slider could be made a bit more interesting and attractive, rather than some slow moving weird shaped S.

00:52:709 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - is pretty hard to read imo. And is kind of unattractive and boring. Having the streams be a bit spread out across the play field would improve readability and interest.

00:55:982 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - Same ^

01:04:982 - Kind of weird to have no notes which makes sense. Into a break that has pretty interesting beats and music right next to it.

01:23:073 - 01:23:436 could have some notes in it to go with the beat. Same with other sections like it. Or at least add some later on to have the difficulty scale a little bit with the music.

01:41:527 - 02:01:164 I love this part a lot - i enjoyed playing it. Though i wish there would be some notes inbetween to help encapsulate the feeling of the music. But how it right now is fine too ;3

02:43:709 - forward - Interesting. I can't say much about it besides maybe clean up a bit of the overlaps.

03:44:527 - Last thing is it's just a pretty unattractive slider. Making it twist and turn and curve all over the place like the "interesting" section before it and then slowing it down and calming down would be cool.

I know this is a very stylistic and i don't think it's really meant to be ranked - But i hope i can help somewhat

thank you, i appreciate your mod, but i have to decline some part


that part is still readable (for me), and mostly just back and forth so east to follow (for me too). And yeah, i'm not going to rank it


changed the kickslider, but the other part, i'm trying something different


i like the way it is, but i changed some part


i tried to map it, but it looks ugly...


i like overlaps

hi m4m from modreq
01:25:573 (2,3,4,5) - Slides are not distinguishable(I'll put the circle in the same place.)
01:27:482 (5,6) - i want you overlap 5 and 6,
02:25:572 (2) - It looks like a circle. Let it look like a slider.
02:49:232 (2,3) - Make the slides separate.
03:05:323 (1,2) - I want to overlap
03:17:186 (4,5,6,7) - It's hard to distinguish number 7 slider
03:24:959 (4,5,6) - I wish it was regular
03:39:618 (1,1,1) - Make the slides separate.
Thank you for taking a look.


Please m4m my map too!
t/588826

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