net45291 wrote:

As per your Request
hi!
I love Chata <3 me too<3
If this mod not helpful , Don't KUDOS this]
General

Set Audio Lead-in to 1.00 in all Diff pls I think .5 seconds is enough ww

Easy

AR -1 ?

00:05:717 (3) - New Combo
00:34:517 (3) - ^
00:35:889 (1) - Delete New Combo
00:37:260 (3) - New Combo
00:38:631 (2) - Move right 3 grid ? x:360 y:292
01:18:403 (1) - Finish ?
01:52:517 (1) - End here 01:54:060 ?
fixed most~~

Normal

00:26:289 (3) - New Combo
00:31:774 (1) - Move ? , When finish spin Text after spin will show and can't see a note ; w ;
00:41:374 (4) - New Combo
00:43:431 (1) - Remove New combo
00:45:831 (1) - ^
00:46:517 (5) - New Combo
00:49:603 (1) - Remove New Combo
00:50:974 (1) - New Combo
01:11:203 (1) - Remove New Combo
01:23:889 (1) - New Combo
01:25:260 (1) - Remove New Combo
01:26:631 (5) - New Combo
01:36:232 (1) - Remove New Combo
01:37:603 (8) - New Combo
01:52:517 (1) - Orz :3?
fixed most~
Insane

CS +1 ?

00:13:774 (4) - New Combo
01:26:631 (4) - ^
01:38:974 (5) - ^fixed~So tired = w ="
thanks!
I like this map , Star ~~!

wcx19911123 wrote:

from my que
hihi!
[General]
fine

[Easy]
this diff has many useless timing sections , check and delete them
01:55:432 (1) - remove whistle ?
oK~
[Normal]
this diff has many useless timing sections , check and delete them
00:12:574 (2) - delete , add slider from 00:12:403 to 00:12:746 and 00:12:917 to 00:13:260 ?
00:32:803 - add note
00:35:546 - ^
01:06:746 (3) - delete , add slider from 01:06:746 to 01:07:089
01:38:974 (5) - 1 more repeat ?
01:51:317 (1) - 1 more repeat , spinner start at 01:52:689 ?
01:55:432 (1) - remove whistle ?
fixed~

[Insane]
this diff has many useless timing sections , check and delete them
01:00:574 (1,2,3,4,5) - too hard.. I'll make a smaller star??
01:04:003 (2,3,4,5,6,1) - kinda confusing , but I don't know how to do ..
01:50:803 (5,1) - spacing kinda confusing here
fixed the last part~

that's all
good luck ThankS!

Ekaru wrote:

Note: I spent all day on this modpost (on and off of course), so you may have fixed some of this already. Anyways...

General:

20-30% Soft hitsounds are, like, impossible to hear, so I have to rely on my mouse's clicks for feedback. Can you please turn them up just a *tad*?
I think hitsounds are fine. Mainly because I'm not a big fan of loud hitsounds, especially on this song where it's not especially loud anywhere besides the accented beats which I've turned up already. Of course this is referring to insane only. I've turned up hitsounds for normal and easy because well, you really need them on lower difficulties. But for Insane, I'm quite satisfied with the hitsound volume right now.
Insane:

00:06:403 (1,2,3,4) - I would tilt this just a few degrees more; right now it looks too close to horizontal to look good and intentional, but rotating it by just a few more degrees will fix it. sure
00:10:174 (1,2,3) - Add hit circles in between (1) and (2) and between (2) and (3). Right now, the jump to the (4,5,6) stack is a bit sudden rhythm-wise; you want a smoother, more gradual increase in the rhythm's speed so it doesn't feel awkward. mmm no, nothing really happening in the music to map that much.
00:17:203 (1,2,3,4) - Make these hit circles jumps. The vocals here stand out a lot, so there should be jumps to fit with that. no, because it's too fast and the song is just starting. I don't want that many jumps.
01:04:260 (3,4) - This goes against the flow; the flow is to the left, but here you suddenly disrupt the flow by going abruptly down before going left again. Either stack these, or put (4) to the left of (3), not below it. Well, with the triangular jump you go left AND down so it's actually alright. And plus if you only go left, you wouldn't miss the beat anyway.
01:07:603 (1,2,3) - You have jumps in a very quiet part of the music. Jumps should be in "loud" parts of the music. So, put (2) a lot closer to (1,3), because right now it's awkward. sure, lowered the distance in between.
01:11:203 (1,2,3,4,5) - These should be a series of jumps where the spacing gradually decreases, not anti-jumps. This is simply because this part starts off with a high amount of emphasis, and then gradually decreases with each one. It's true they should be jumps, but I'd like them to stay as anti-jumps because the next part is the chorus and it picks up speed so I don't want that many jumps.
01:17:546 (1,2,3,4) - These jumps are too small for my tastes, but worse players might find them challenging, so eh.
01:26:460 (3) - This would look better if it was moved up just one grid. /nazi'ing sure
01:40:860 (3) - This sounds weird because it misses the loud "boop"; the "boop" has more emphasis than the vocals at this point, actually, so it's important to hit that "boop" so it doesn't feel weird. not quite sure what you mean but I guess I've added a normal hitsound green line?

Normal:

Up until the first spinner (~15 seconds in): The red ticks feel out of place and awkward. It's not too bad once you get used to it, but going with the beat for this entire section would probably feel much better.
00:45:831 (1,2,3,4) – This just feels weird to me; you're skipping the downbeat and stuff. Try deleting 4, moving 2 and 3 one beat back, and adding a hit circle one beat after 1. fixed~
01:11:203 (1,2,3,4,1) – I would put some small jumps here. Small jumps are allowed on a Normal and would fit perfectly here (just don't go overboard!).nah, I want this to be relaxing difficulty

Have a star. ~thanks a lot!

Miu Matsuoka wrote:

Lunet+
00:20:117 (5) - Clap at slider end
00:20:974 (7) - Clap at first repeat (Highlighted in red: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/143817&#41;
01:17:031 (3) - End at red or white tick
01:21:317 (6) - Clap at first repeat
01:55:517 (1) - Mute this spinner?

Zelos wrote:

Lunet+:
Remove the + in the name.
01:34:860 (3) - remove the clap on the beginning of this slider.fixed
01:55:517 (1) - end this spinner at the same time the last spinner ends on the Normal and easy difficulty.changed 01:58:174

loveFantasy wrote:

[Lunet+]

1. why have a "+" in the diff name..? fixed.
2. i don't know if this is [Normal] or [Hard], but i really think circle size = 4 better no.
3. 00:31:689 (T) - KIAI line snap to 00:31:774 please~ fixed.
4. from 00:53:717 to 01:03:317 you use soft claps, i think the volume is too high since this is soft paragraph (unlike KIAI, which is much stronger), maybe should lower by 15~20%. changed to 45%~
5. 01:05:717 (2) - spacing fixed.
6. 01:49:774 (5,6,1,2) - feel like whistles suddenly "disappear"... added to whistle for 5 and 6
7. 01:55:517 (1) - end on previous high white tick? (01:59:546) no.

cmn_891127 wrote:

Lunet+

1. HPDrainRate:2 -> 4 no. because I want to beginner cleared to the end~
2. 00:04:346 you can set like this, and avoid the spacing problem
   
   SPOILER

   ATTACH[screenshot004.jpg]
   nice suggestion~ fixed.
3. 01:54:060 (1,2,3) (1)01:54:060~01:54:403, (2)01:54:574~01:54:917 and with a repeat, (3)01:55:089~01:55:432 and with a repeat no.
4. 01:55:517 the spinner should end at 01:58:174 fixed.

karenying wrote:

Lunet+
00:10:003 (1) - maybe remove whisle of slider end?fixed
00:15:146 (3) - finish head~? no..
00:20:974 (7) - make like this sound better for me no..
01:55:517 (1) - maybe finish at 01:58:174 ? fixed.

KoHaRuN wrote:

Lunet+
01:09:832(5)正常にスタックされなかったです。 ?_?
01:21:317(6)
ここのリバースを1個前の赤線までにしてみてはいかがですか？
もしかしたらつながりが悪くなるかもしれませんが検討してください；； no..
01:32:289(7)^ no..
01:48:574(3)New combo? fixed.

HellDawn wrote:

[b]Lunet+
Hp Drain Rate +1 no..
01:29:546- add a note ? no..

DragonSparta wrote:

Lunet+
00:53:717 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Maybe add a new combo somewhere in the middle cause other combos are 4 notes short fixed
01:29:374 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - ^ fixed

kokoroanime wrote:

~Lunet+~
[*]01:05:289 (2): Better if you move this to x:216 y:248???? no...but changed~

Suzully wrote:

[Lunet+]

• 
  HP+1. no.
  KIAI TIMEでほぼすべてのノートにwhistleが乗っていますが、特にclapと重なったときにちょっとうるさく感じます。
  もう少しKIAI TIMEでのwhistleは控えめにした方が良いと思います。 changed volume (60% > 50%)
  前にも何人かの人が言っていますが、Normal+の意味でも名前に+をつけるのはやはり不自然かなーと思います。fixed

1. 00:18:060 (1) - 始端にfinish。no.
2. 00:44:117 (3) - スペーシングが不揃いなので、gridlevel4で1grid上へ。fixed
3. 00:53:717 (T) - 他のdiffよりclap音で少しうるさく感じるのでここでボリュームを下げた方が良いと思います。no.
4. 01:04:689 (T) - ここの緑線は不要です。fixed
5. 01:04:689 (1) - SVの変化でdistanceも変わっていますが、ここで(4)とくっつくのは不自然なのでもう少し離した方が良いと思います。fixed
6. 01:05:717 (2) - (1)と近すぎます。 no.
7. 01:10:174 (1,2,3,4) - SVが1.00xと0.70xが混在していてスペーシングが非常に分かりづらいです。SVはそのままでいいので、スペーシングは統一しましょう。fixed
8. 01:17:031 (3) - 終端は赤線か白線に乗せてください。fixed
9. 01:21:317 (6) - Normal+と言えどプレイするのはビギナーなので、この折り返しスライダーは読みづらいと思います。no change.
10. 01:32:289 (7) - ^ no change.
11. 01:34:860 (3) - 始端のclap削除。 fixed
12. 01:55:517 (1) - 終端を他のdiffと同様に01:58:174に合わせた方が良いと思います。fixed

galvenize wrote:

[Lunet+]
00:03:660 (2) - needs to go two grid right one grid down. Don't really want to nazi more of that stuff so try to check if there aren't any other similar distance errors. fixed
01:32:289 (7) - End it at 01:32:974, fits the strings more. Start 01:33:489 (1) here instead at 01:33:317 and make the according changes to the next notes/sliders. no.

shikyu wrote:

[Lunet +]
CS -1 no.
00:04:346 (3) - 1 grid left changed.
00:20:974 (7) - add clap at third repeat, remove clap at last repeat fixed.
00:31:774 (1) - 1 grid down fixed.
01:07:432 (1) - remove whistle at the end of slider fixed.
01:08:117 (2) - add clap at the start of slider
01:32:289 (7) - same suggestion at 00:20:974 fixed.
01:34:860 (3) - remove clap at the start of slider fixed.

-Gamu- wrote:

[Lunet+]
●HP+1 no.
●00:04:346 (3) - spacing? changed.
●00:05:717 (1) - ^ changed.
●00:15:146 (3) - ^(Grid level 4）no.
●01:05:717 (2) - ^ changed.
●01:07:089 (4) - 1 grid left changed.
●01:11:203 (3) - spacing? no.
●Normal+であるのなら　spacingを1.20xで統一したほうがいいかもしれません（たぶん） no.

Akemi_Homura wrote:

[Lunet+]
01:04:689(1) - add finish start of slider~ fixed
01:07:432(1) - ^
01:10:174(1) - finish~!
01:29:374(1) - add finish~(whistle,finish)

Byakugan249 wrote:

Lunet+
00:04:346(3,1) - 2 grids right on (3) and spacing.changed
01:09:832(5) - aline it with (4) no.
01:10:346(2,3) - Spacing if u follow this fix the spacing until ur at 01:15:660 no.

Verdisphena wrote:

Lunet+
00:15:146 (3) - New combo due the change of the speed fixed
01:03:317 (1,2,3,4) - This is a little hard for a normal+ imo @A@ no...
01:05:717 (2) - Spacing changed
01:11:203 (3) - New combo fixed

net45291 wrote:

Lunet++++
Use Custom Hit Sound please Lunet > A < ~~~~ :D~
01:04:689 (1,2,3) - Spacing error Orz no....mini jumps
01:09:831 (5) - Move up 1 grid ? fixed.
01:29:374 (1) - Finish instead Whistle ? fixed.
01:55:517 (1) - End here 01:58:174 ? fixed.

wcx19911123 wrote:

[Lunet+] ← why there is a "+" in diff name 0.0? changed.
00:02:974 (1,2,3) - strange spacing changed.
00:15:146 (3) - x:316 y:156 ? fixed.
00:16:689 (4,1,2) - kinda sudden here , for the slider speed changing no..
00:20:974 (7) - change to 2 sliders , each one repeat 1 time , other sliders all repeat 1 time , this is confusing no..
00:24:746 - add note ? no..
00:25:603 (3) - start at 00:25:432 ? no..
01:11:203 (3,4) - spacing bigger ? no..
01:17:031 (3,1) - change to a slider is better fixed.
01:32:289 (7) - confusing no..
01:55:517 (1) - end at 01:58:174 fixed.

VocaloidTACU wrote:

[Lunet+]
00:20:460 - missing clap
00:56:803 (7) - remove whistle and add clap
00:56:974 (8) - remove whistle too
00:57:489 (1) - add clap
01:21:489 - remove whistle and add clap
01:32:460 - ^
01:34:860 - remove clap

qilliam wrote:

01:04:689 - delete timing section fixed.

Medi-chan wrote:

Lunet+:
01:04:689 (1,2,3) - the spacing from 1 to 2 and from 2 to 3 is strange, unless it was intentional please fix it. fixed.
01:10:174 (1,2) - spacing feels a little wierd here as well between 1 and 2. fixed.
Up the health drain by like 2 or 3, it's way too low lol
Possibly up the AR by 1 as well no...

Snowy Dream wrote:

[Lunet+]
00:03:660 (2) - spacing? fixed.
00:05:717 (1) - ^ fixed.
00:20:974 (7) - reduce an reverse arrow no...
00:22:003 (8) - add a note no...

Mustaash wrote:

[Lunet+]
00:02:974 (1,2,3) - Remove these nonsense notes ;w; fixed.
00:35:889 (3) - Whistle fixed.
01:04:689 (1) - Don't like at all no..

Ekaru wrote:

Lunet+:
00:29:032 (1,2,3) – I would remap this section to the “beeps”. It would fit the music a lot better and flow better as a result. no..
00:45:831 (6,7) – Prior to this you're mapping to the beat. Suddenly putting a ½ here that goes to a quiet part in the music is unintuitive. no..
00:56:803 (7,8) – It's louder here, so it's okay, I guess. no..
01:04:689 (1,2,3) – The spacing between (1)'s end, 2, and the start of (3) is horribly, horribly uneven. Smoothing that out would look much nicer. changed
01:30:060 (3) – Consider changing this slider into a ½ stack instead. It would flow better IMO. no..
01:49:260 (4) - ^ no..

Kawayi Rika wrote:

[Lunet+][/color]
This is Hard diff? noo
It is CZ+1 no..
01:11:203 (3) - add NC. fixed.

Bobo wrote:

-Lunet+-
Rename to just Lunet? fixed.
00:15:146 - New combo for the slider speed change? fixed.
01:07:089 - Re-Distance Snap with grid size 4. fixed.

winber1 wrote:

Lunet[/b]
00:31:774 - end kiai time here fixed.
00:15:146 (3) - new combo for SV change fixed.
01:04:003 (3,4,1) - not a very big fan of this spacing... no..
01:04:689 (1,2,3) - space more equally? D: fixed.
01:10:174 (1,2) - I would change this into one repeat slider. no..

Astom wrote:

[Lunet+]
[*]01:04:603 useless timing point, delete it. fixed.
[*]01:55:517 (1) - finish it in 01:58:174? fixed.

ziin wrote:

[skin]
spinner is wobbly. Please refer to my spinner guide (check signature). While you're there you can read on the osu theory topic, which explains a little more on why I don't like the sliders in insane. Alternatively just make it again, and make sure that you use a proper circle this time.
hope it's ok now
[easy]
00:56:460 (1,2) - why is there no clap on the end this time?

[normal]
01:43:774 (1,2) - this section was strange. I thought this rhythm here was prominent, but you only did it once at this part, and didn't do it later on. I think there should be a note of some sort at these locations:
01:47:032 -
01:47:374 -
01:49:774 -
Maybe it's too hard for normal, but IMO you have an easy already, and this one isn't quite hard enough.
yea I left this part this way because it's much easier to play than adding those beats you mentioned.

[insane]
A lot of the sliders seem lazy. I won't point them out because that's not my job as a modder (it's pretty much nazi stuff). I want you to want your map to be as perfect as it can be and when you attempt to make a symmetrical slider without even using ctrl H/J, it shows the low quality of your beatmap. For example:
00:26:974 (2) - is not symmetrical when it's really easy to make it symmetrical.
Is it rankable? Sure. Will changing it affect how the beatmap plays? No. It's just polish and could bring your map from a 9 in some people's eyes up to a 10.
fixed quite a few sliders that are meant to be symmetrical
A common mistake people make is sliding over the long white tick. This beat is very important. If you omit this, it ruins the map's flow in my eyes. As you learn more about music you should be able to feel where the beats that are emphasized are, and hopefully you'll put a note on those notes. For example:
00:20:460 (1) - this note slides over an important downbeat. That downbeat is the perfect place for a new combo, and by putting a slider on that, you can't do it. From what I can tell, odd numbered measures are the important downbeat (press timing, if the long white tick's measure is an odd number, you should try to put a note there)
I understand what you're saying and fixed that part. I think I have the rest of the down beats where they count.
00:31:345 (8) - delete, overmapped too hard to stream that way
01:39:574 - you mapped this earlier, but left it out this time? yea purposely left it out because it's weird to play and unexpected after that jump even though there is a drum beat there. So I omitted it and followed the vocals instead

ykcarrot wrote:

Hi there
hihi!

[Insane]
00:10:003 (4) - New combo here. Then remove new combo from next note.
00:11:032 (4) - New combo
00:11:889 (1) - Remove new combo
00:12:403 (3) - New combo. Yeah, this is the pattern of yours exactly.
00:37:260 (7) - New combo
01:11:203 (1,2,3,4,5,1) - (nazi) Make them same distance spacing
01:44:632 (4) - New combo to be consistent with 01:47:374 (1)
allfixed~

[Normal]
00:58:860 (3,4) - How about this shape? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/162438
01:51:317 (1) - Remove new combo to be consistent with 00:13:946 (4)
ok~


Cute song and map