hi! m4m
Together
HP i think is just slightly too high, hp6.5 even would be a decent improvement
00:04:124 (1) - unnecessary NC (also it is inconsistent with the insane where 00:04:291 - is NC'd instead)
00:15:958 (8) - if you move this down 4 pixels the blanket will be better on the wave slider
00:21:458 (1,3) - vs 00:36:124 (1,3) - inconsistent, i dont think you should full overlap
00:33:958 (2,3) - this stack feels quite out of place, you dont use it anywhere else previous in the section
00:47:458 (3) - dont like the way this plays + its the only 1/4 slider with any repeats in this map
00:50:124 (3) - if the 1st and 3rd segment were parallel itd look nicer
00:57:624 (2,3) - i think this should have the same slight overlap spacing as 00:54:791 (1,3) - 00:36:124 (1,3) - 00:43:791 (3,1) - etc
01:12:791 (3,5) - should be slight overlap instead of full like elsewhere in section
Insane
00:14:791 (1,3,5) - would be a little neater if 1 was the midpoint of 3 and 5
00:22:458 (4,1) - minor blanket error
00:26:124 (3,5) - i think its better if these stack and you drop stackleniency to 5, 7 is overkill
00:31:791 (4,1) - fix blanket
00:32:624 (2,4) - slight overlap doesnt look great
00:33:124 (4,1) - fix blanket
00:46:458 (4,5) - ^
01:02:791 (1,4) - fix stack
01:15:791 (4,1) - fix blanket
01:18:458 (4) - i think this would flow better if it was rotated 180 since you use back and forth flow more than linear for this part of the song
Hard
AR feels a little low, very many objects visible at once. also AR7 to AR9 on insane is a big gap, maybe AR8 or just 7.5 for this diff
00:03:958 (2,2) - not a fan of this overlap in a hard diff but subjective i guess
00:16:791 (3,4,1) - inconsistent visual spacing, 1 is closer to 3 tail than 4 is
00:42:124 (3,4) - this is pretty confusing especially on such a slow AR since its around half of the DS as the jumps are but twice the rhythm gap. reads like 1/2. i think a 1/1 slider would make more sense for a hard, as well
00:50:458 (2,1) - again possible to misread, spacing more would help though the player is more familiar with rhythm now so might not be a problem
01:01:958 (2,4) - increase stackleniency so these dont overlap (-> 8)
01:06:624 (5,7) - ^
01:23:291 (2,4) - ^
Finshie's Normal
00:06:458 (3,4) - too close
00:31:458 (4,5) - minor spacing error
Tyrant's Easy
00:05:458 (1) - poor rhythm, the white tick in the middle is very emphasized by the vocals. (also: 00:08:124 (1) -
00:06:791 (3) - tail ought to be clickable (also 00:12:124 (2) - )
00:30:458 (2,4) - i think this overlap is not okay for an easy
00:36:791 (4) - tail should be clickable
00:38:791 (2,3,4) - rhythm is pretty poor, a lot of the vocals and music goes un-mapped and under emphasized
00:46:124 (4,5) - out of place stack, you stack nothing else in the map
00:58:791 (1,2,3,4) - rhythm doesnt feel like it follows the music well. the vocal on the tail of 01:00:124 (3) - should be clickable i think.
good luck!
Together
HP i think is just slightly too high, hp6.5 even would be a decent improvement
00:04:124 (1) - unnecessary NC (also it is inconsistent with the insane where 00:04:291 - is NC'd instead)
00:15:958 (8) - if you move this down 4 pixels the blanket will be better on the wave slider
00:21:458 (1,3) - vs 00:36:124 (1,3) - inconsistent, i dont think you should full overlap
00:33:958 (2,3) - this stack feels quite out of place, you dont use it anywhere else previous in the section
00:47:458 (3) - dont like the way this plays + its the only 1/4 slider with any repeats in this map
00:50:124 (3) - if the 1st and 3rd segment were parallel itd look nicer
00:57:624 (2,3) - i think this should have the same slight overlap spacing as 00:54:791 (1,3) - 00:36:124 (1,3) - 00:43:791 (3,1) - etc
01:12:791 (3,5) - should be slight overlap instead of full like elsewhere in section
Insane
00:14:791 (1,3,5) - would be a little neater if 1 was the midpoint of 3 and 5
00:22:458 (4,1) - minor blanket error
00:26:124 (3,5) - i think its better if these stack and you drop stackleniency to 5, 7 is overkill
00:31:791 (4,1) - fix blanket
00:32:624 (2,4) - slight overlap doesnt look great
00:33:124 (4,1) - fix blanket
00:46:458 (4,5) - ^
01:02:791 (1,4) - fix stack
01:15:791 (4,1) - fix blanket
01:18:458 (4) - i think this would flow better if it was rotated 180 since you use back and forth flow more than linear for this part of the song
Hard
AR feels a little low, very many objects visible at once. also AR7 to AR9 on insane is a big gap, maybe AR8 or just 7.5 for this diff
00:03:958 (2,2) - not a fan of this overlap in a hard diff but subjective i guess
00:16:791 (3,4,1) - inconsistent visual spacing, 1 is closer to 3 tail than 4 is
00:42:124 (3,4) - this is pretty confusing especially on such a slow AR since its around half of the DS as the jumps are but twice the rhythm gap. reads like 1/2. i think a 1/1 slider would make more sense for a hard, as well
00:50:458 (2,1) - again possible to misread, spacing more would help though the player is more familiar with rhythm now so might not be a problem
01:01:958 (2,4) - increase stackleniency so these dont overlap (-> 8)
01:06:624 (5,7) - ^
01:23:291 (2,4) - ^
Finshie's Normal
00:06:458 (3,4) - too close
00:31:458 (4,5) - minor spacing error
Tyrant's Easy
00:05:458 (1) - poor rhythm, the white tick in the middle is very emphasized by the vocals. (also: 00:08:124 (1) -
00:06:791 (3) - tail ought to be clickable (also 00:12:124 (2) - )
00:30:458 (2,4) - i think this overlap is not okay for an easy
00:36:791 (4) - tail should be clickable
00:38:791 (2,3,4) - rhythm is pretty poor, a lot of the vocals and music goes un-mapped and under emphasized
00:46:124 (4,5) - out of place stack, you stack nothing else in the map
00:58:791 (1,2,3,4) - rhythm doesnt feel like it follows the music well. the vocal on the tail of 01:00:124 (3) - should be clickable i think.
good luck!