Little Glee Monster - Dakara, Hitori ja nai · forum

Ambrew

Joined January 2016

Ambrew 2017-05-20T21:43:44+00:00

Hey there, really enjoyed this mapset.
My computer is pobrbaly gonna shut down again so I'll add some more later in the future. here is what I have so far
both gd's are good

hard

00:05:124 (4,1) - if you're going to blanket these you could polish the shape a bit
00:09:458 (1,2,3) - How come you chose to make these all have different shapes?
00:10:458 (4) - x:210 y:102
00:22:124 (3) - I would take 00:22:458 (4) - and just have ctrl h ctrl j without the slight rotation
00:29:124 (4) - I would move this at x:324 y:58, so that gaps look more equal
00:31:791 (4) - I feel the spacing is different here but for no reason (1.92 amidst all the 1.5x), you could try maybe something like this?
00:37:458 (1) - move your green tick on this
00:41:791 (2) - I would make the tail of this clickable, but just my preference
01:02:624 (4) - stack
01:19:791 (4) - again, not sure why the slight rotation if it'll still flow into 01:20:124 (1) - just ctrl j the 01:19:458 (3) - slider
01:24:791 (3,4) - same with these

Shishou

512 posts

Joined November 2014

Topic Starter

Shishou 2017-05-21T09:54:34+00:00

Ambrew wrote:
Hey there, really enjoyed this mapset.
My computer is pobrbaly gonna shut down again so I'll add some more later in the future. here is what I have so far
both gd's are good
hard
00:05:124 (4,1) - if you're going to blanket these you could polish the shape a bit
00:09:458 (1,2,3) - How come you chose to make these all have different shapes? why not? lolol
00:10:458 (4) - x:210 y:102
00:22:124 (3) - I would take 00:22:458 (4) - and just have ctrl h ctrl j without the slight rotation
00:29:124 (4) - I would move this at x:324 y:58, so that gaps look more equal
00:31:791 (4) - I feel the spacing is different here but for no reason (1.92 amidst all the 1.5x), you could try maybe something like this?
00:37:458 (1) - move your green tick on this
00:41:791 (2) - I would make the tail of this clickable, but just my preference
01:02:624 (4) - stack
01:19:791 (4) - again, not sure why the slight rotation if it'll still flow into 01:20:124 (1) - just ctrl j the 01:19:458 (3) - slider
01:24:791 (3,4) - same with these

no reply = fixed
thanks for modding

-NeBu-

435 posts

Joined March 2014

-NeBu- 2017-05-21T10:08:39+00:00

Together:

00:04:791 (3) - maybe something like this? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8141692
00:08:624 (3) - make this flexure on this slider smaller (just make red points closer) - currently it looks pretty weird for me ;o
00:19:291 (2,4) - blanket
00:34:624 (5) - maybe put it little bit higher? there will be no overlap and distance will be same between 00:34:458 (4,5,1) - every note/slider
00:38:624 (3,4,5) - wrong rhythm, circle on red tick and next two sliders on white one's (just ctrl+g it and check rhythm this way)
00:46:124 (2) - rotate it by -10 and position it back (will look better since it kinda overlaps the slider - when you gonna check it, you will see what I was thinking of)
00:53:458 (1,3) - blanket
01:07:624 (3,4,5) - there's pretty bad flow here, but since I can't think of anything different because of current placeing it's up to you if you wanna change it your way :p

I like it, really, great map, just some small things that can make it better, good luck!

ps. OD7 seem to be pretty low, try OD8/8.5 and on Insane OD7.

Shishou

512 posts

Joined November 2014

Topic Starter

Shishou 2017-05-21T13:03:22+00:00

-NeBu- wrote:
Together:

00:04:791 (3) - maybe something like this? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8141692
00:08:624 (3) - make this flexure on this slider smaller (just make red points closer) - currently it looks pretty weird for me ;o
00:19:291 (2,4) - blanket
00:34:624 (5) - maybe put it little bit higher? there will be no overlap and distance will be same between 00:34:458 (4,5,1) - every note/slider
00:38:624 (3,4,5) - wrong rhythm, circle on red tick and next two sliders on white one's (just ctrl+g it and check rhythm this way) wat
00:46:124 (2) - rotate it by -10 and position it back (will look better since it kinda overlaps the slider - when you gonna check it, you will see what I was thinking of)
00:53:458 (1,3) - blanket
01:07:624 (3,4,5) - there's pretty bad flow here, but since I can't think of anything different because of current placeing it's up to you if you wanna change it your way :p

I like it, really, great map, just some small things that can make it better, good luck!

ps. OD7 seem to be pretty low, try OD8/8.5 and on Insane OD7.

no reply = fixed
thanks for modding

Cris-

Beatmap Nominator

552 posts

Joined March 2015

Cris- 2017-05-21T21:36:50+00:00

M4M from your queue

General: BG is wrong resolution, put this at 1366x768 or 1920x1080
Nice bg

Tyrant's Easy
Maybe use DS?

00:09:458 (3) - Move it left for better flow with 00:09:124 (2,1)
00:09:124 (2,1) - Stack?
00:13:458 (1) - Imo this spinner is too fast, you can change this for:

^ i think this emphazises better with the vocals

00:17:458 (3) - Clap in tail?
00:20:124 (3) - ^
00:22:791 (3) - ^
00:28:124 (3) - ^ - i stop with this but you cap the idea, you can check the normal for the hs (normal is really good hitsounded)
00:20:791 (4) - Move it down for flow
00:31:791 - Missing note
00:43:458 (1,2,3,4) - Very close, please expand this
00:46:124 (4,5) - Unstack?
01:02:458 (2) - x:400 y:112?
01:03:458 (4) - Down for flow

Finshie's Normal
*Good work at hitsounds, i really like it

00:07:291 (5) - Move it a bit down
00:11:791 (3,4) - You can do a blanket here
00:16:791 (2,3) - ^
00:42:458 (6,1) - ^
00:45:124 (6,1) - ^
01:04:124 (1,2) - ^
01:23:791 (3,4) - ^
00:14:791 (3) - Maybe you can put this up for better flow
00:15:291 (4,1) - Fix blanket
00:32:124 (1) - This slider is so down, i suggest move it up (anyway now is fine)
01:25:124 (6,1,2,3) - You can do something like 00:33:458 (3,4,5,6)
Funny diff

Hard
General: imo this is so distanced for a hard diff, please consider it. ~~Or create a new hard and rename this Hyper xdx~~
1/8 lul

00:09:791 (2) - Move this a bit down
00:18:791 (1) - Ctrl+H for better flow
00:38:124 (2) - I suggest replace this for sliders 1/4 for follow vocals
00:41:791 (2) - End this at 00:41:958
00:46:124 (2,3,4) - very close, space pls
00:57:458 (5) - This hitsound whistle is sooo long (And a little annoying) please remove it or change it for other more short (and down the volume please,
this broke my ears ;-;)
01:10:791 (1,2,3) - Very close, expand pls
01:13:458 (1) - Maybe expand a bit more the red ticks?
01:21:458 (1) - Ctrl+J
01:24:124 (1,2,3) - Expand this

Insane

00:04:291 (1) - Do this slider curved for better flow with 00:05:124 (2,3,4,5,1)
00:05:458 (1,3) - Stack?
00:10:458 (6) - x:256 y:32
00:22:791 (1) - Maybe make this slider as 00:24:124 (1) ?
00:36:458 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - Imo this jump section isn't good, decreass the distance please
00:37:291 (7,1) - Too far
00:42:458 (3,1) - Stack
00:46:124 (3,4,5) - Very close
00:47:458 (7,8) - Ok in this part, i had 2 suggestions: remove 8 and extend the kickslider at this or put a circle at 00:47:874
00:57:458 (1) - Same with hitsound i mentioned in Hard
00:59:458 (3,1) - Stack
01:00:791 (3,1) - ^
01:01:458 (1,3) - ^
01:02:458 (4,1) - Fix the blanket at tail
01:08:791 (3,1) - Stack?
01:19:458 (3,1) - ^
01:11:791 (4,5,1) - Bad flow, remap this part please
01:16:624 (2) - Too far from 1

Together

00:14:791 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - ~~nice pp~~
00:19:291 (2,4) - Fix blanket
00:29:458 (1) - Expand red tics
00:45:458 (1,2) - Bad flow
00:47:874 - Missing note?
00:56:124 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2) - Wtf this jump hahah, please decrease space
00:57:458 (1) - Same with hs
01:00:624 (2,3,4,5,6) - Fix this star jump
01:04:624 (2) - Put this at head of 01:03:791 (5)
01:05:791 (2,3,4,5) - convert this in a normal section, imo jumps aren't neccesary at this part ~~(or maybe not)~~
01:11:291 (2,3,4,5,6) - ^
01:12:791 (3,5) - Stack
01:25:458 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1) - This remember me Fycho's maps

thx for pp

I love this song and the anime, i really hope this gets ranked

GL!

Finshie

829 posts

Joined October 2012

Finshie 2017-05-21T22:04:12+00:00

Cris_1 wrote:
M4M from your queue

Finshie's Normal
*Good work at hitsounds, i really like it
00:07:291 (5) - Move it a bit down fixed
00:11:791 (3,4) - You can do a blanket here blanketing everything limits/ruins the flow so keeping all these
00:16:791 (2,3) - ^
00:42:458 (6,1) - ^
00:45:124 (6,1) - ^
01:04:124 (1,2) - ^
01:23:791 (3,4) - ^
00:14:791 (3) - Maybe you can put this up for better flow its fine.
00:15:291 (4,1) - Fix blanket blanket is fine?
00:32:124 (1) - This slider is so down, i suggest move it up (anyway now is fine) moved it up anyway
01:25:124 (6,1,2,3) - You can do something like 00:33:458 (3,4,5,6) it sounds different. the previous parts are for note per syllable of the vocals.
Funny diff

I love this song and the anime, i really hope this gets ranked
GL!

thanks for mod!

Update

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TitleUnicode:だから、ひとりじゃない
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Version:Finshie's Normal
Source:僕のヒーローアカデミア 第2期
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Shishou

512 posts

Joined November 2014

Topic Starter

Shishou 2017-05-22T08:52:33+00:00

Cris_1 wrote:
M4M from your queue

General: BG is wrong resolution, put this at 1366x768 or 1920x1080
Nice bg

Hard
General: imo this is so distanced for a hard diff, please consider it. ~~Or create a new hard and rename this Hyper xdx~~
1/8 lul
00:09:791 (2) - Move this a bit down
00:18:791 (1) - Ctrl+H for better flow
00:38:124 (2) - I suggest replace this for sliders 1/4 for follow vocals
00:41:791 (2) - End this at 00:41:958
00:46:124 (2,3,4) - very close, space pls
00:57:458 (5) - This hitsound whistle is sooo long (And a little annoying) please remove it or change it for other more short (and down the volume please,
this broke my ears ;-;)
01:10:791 (1,2,3) - Very close, expand pls
01:13:458 (1) - Maybe expand a bit more the red ticks?
01:21:458 (1) - Ctrl+J
01:24:124 (1,2,3) - Expand this

Insane
00:04:291 (1) - Do this slider curved for better flow with 00:05:124 (2,3,4,5,1)
00:05:458 (1,3) - Stack?
00:10:458 (6) - x:256 y:32
00:22:791 (1) - Maybe make this slider as 00:24:124 (1) ? nah
00:36:458 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - Imo this jump section isn't good, decreass the distance please
00:37:291 (7,1) - Too far it's fine
00:42:458 (3,1) - Stack intentional
00:46:124 (3,4,5) - Very close
00:47:458 (7,8) - Ok in this part, i had 2 suggestions: remove 8 and extend the kickslider at this or put a circle at 00:47:874 nah
00:57:458 (1) - Same with hitsound i mentioned in Hard
00:59:458 (3,1) - Stack
01:00:791 (3,1) - ^ intentional
01:01:458 (1,3) - ^^
01:02:458 (4,1) - Fix the blanket at tail
01:08:791 (3,1) - Stack?
01:19:458 (3,1) - ^
01:11:791 (4,5,1) - Bad flow, remap this part please
01:16:624 (2) - Too far from 1

Together
00:14:791 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - ~~nice pp~~
00:19:291 (2,4) - Fix blanket
00:29:458 (1) - Expand red tics
00:45:458 (1,2) - Bad flow
00:47:874 - Missing note? no
00:56:124 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2) - Wtf this jump hahah, please decrease space
00:57:458 (1) - Same with hs
01:00:624 (2,3,4,5,6) - Fix this star jump
01:04:624 (2) - Put this at head of 01:03:791 (5)
01:05:791 (2,3,4,5) - convert this in a normal section, imo jumps aren't neccesary at this part ~~(or maybe not)~~ nop
01:11:291 (2,3,4,5,6) - ^nop
01:12:791 (3,5) - Stack
01:25:458 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1) - This remember me Fycho's maps ded

thx for pp

I love this song and the anime, i really hope this gets ranked
GL!

thanks for modding

zeliaR

430 posts

Joined June 2014

zeliaR 2017-05-22T11:40:00+00:00

Cris_1 wrote:
M4M from your queue

Tyrant's Easy
Maybe use DS?
00:09:458 (3) - Move it left for better flow with 00:09:124 (2,1)
00:09:124 (2,1) - Stack?
00:13:458 (1) - Imo this spinner is too fast, you can change this for:

^ i think this emphazises better with the vocals
00:17:458 (3) - Clap in tail?
00:20:124 (3) - ^
00:22:791 (3) - ^
00:28:124 (3) - ^ - i stop with this but you cap the idea, you can check the normal for the hs (normal is really good hitsounded)
00:20:791 (4) - Move it down for flow
00:31:791 - Missing note
00:43:458 (1,2,3,4) - Very close, please expand this it's fine coz i used 1x DS
00:46:124 (4,5) - Unstack? nah
01:02:458 (2) - x:400 y:112?
01:03:458 (4) - Down for flow

no reply=fixed

thanks

hi

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TitleUnicode:だから、ひとりじゃない
Artist:Little Glee Monster
ArtistUnicode:リトル・グリー・モンスター
Creator:Shishou
Version:Tyrant's Easy
Source:僕のヒーローアカデミア第2期
Tags:boku no hero academia my That's Why I'm not Alone ending season 2 s2 2nd ed misaka 10032 tyrantseye2014 Finshie
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Shishou

512 posts

Joined November 2014

Topic Starter

Shishou 2017-05-22T12:59:17+00:00

updated

Shiranai

2,186 posts

Joined August 2012

Shiranai 2017-05-22T13:52:37+00:00

Hello from your queue~
Sugestion,

General

You can try to add a silent soft-sliderslide on your set to silent the slider body

Easy

00:09:458 (3) - Forget whistle on slider tail?
00:46:124 (4,5) - Try to avoid stacked between them on lower diff, so far only that part that has a stacked notes and seems out of place imo
00:25:458 (3) - How about the shape on that one more paralel with previous slider, like https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8151083 ?
00:54:791 (3) - Maybe a bit more curve will looks good for aesthetic like https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8151022
01:13:458 (3) - Same thing as above, a bit curve may looks better https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8151044
01:25:458 (1) - Try to add clap on the spinner? you can highlight the drum sound better if you do that

Good one

Normal

00:00:125 (1) - and 01:26:958 (1) - Try to add finish to highlight the snare sounds better?
00:11:791 (3,4) - and 00:42:458 (6,1) - I think you can try to avoid that small overlaping? Looks a bit sloopy imo. For reference you can take a look on a better one 00:31:791 (5,1) -
00:56:124 (1,2,3,4,5) - Too many 1/2 beat makes the diff hard to play imo, considering the song itself is on 180 bpm
00:34:791 (1,2,3,4) - Same as above, maybe you should reconsider your rhythm choice
00:41:291 (3) - You miss whistle on slider tail for the bass sound

Great diff, nice hitsounding btw

Hard

00:03:791 (1) - If you try to follow the drum sequence, then I think that slider better be replaced by two circles instead like https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8151247 , I think by clicking the notes will give more impact on gameplay
00:04:291 (2) - On slider tail, I think you can delete the finish sound since it's a bit redundant with another finish sound here 00:04:791 (3) - on its slider head, also you can add anothe drum additions clap on here 00:04:958 - to follow both bass and drum sequences better
00:15:874 - 00:15:958 - 00:16:041 - Try to add clap on those three to higlight the drum sounds better
00:30:791 (1) - Just aesthetic things, try to move up that one a bit to x:425 y:47 to have a proper overlapping on 00:30:458 (4,1) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8151362
00:34:791 (1) - You're missing whistle on slider head, also by adding that, you can delete the whistle on the tail since they'll contradictive to each other
00:37:458 (1) - Missing whistle for bass on slider tail
00:46:624 (4) - Missing whistle on both head tail of the slider, also you can add whistle on the tail of 00:47:458 (6) - for the bass
00:50:791 (1) - Again missing whistle on tail

Nice diff actually, but sometimes you're missing important hitsound on some parts which make the overall hitsound sounds a bit odd xD

Good luck!

Shishou

512 posts

Joined November 2014

Topic Starter

Shishou 2017-05-22T14:26:10+00:00

Shiranai wrote:
Hello from your queue~
Sugestion,

General
You can try to add a silent soft-sliderslide on your set to silent the slider body

Hard
00:03:791 (1) - If you try to follow the drum sequence, then I think that slider better be replaced by two circles instead like https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8151247 , I think by clicking the notes will give more impact on gameplay
00:04:291 (2) - On slider tail, I think you can delete the finish sound since it's a bit redundant with another finish sound here 00:04:791 (3) - on its slider head, also you can add anothe drum additions clap on here 00:04:958 - to follow both bass and drum sequences better
00:15:874 - 00:15:958 - 00:16:041 - Try to add clap on those three to higlight the drum sounds better
00:30:791 (1) - Just aesthetic things, try to move up that one a bit to x:425 y:47 to have a proper overlapping on 00:30:458 (4,1) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8151362
00:34:791 (1) - You're missing whistle on slider head, also by adding that, you can delete the whistle on the tail since they'll contradictive to each other
00:37:458 (1) - Missing whistle for bass on slider tail
00:46:624 (4) - Missing whistle on both head tail of the slider, also you can add whistle on the tail of 00:47:458 (6) - for the bass
00:50:791 (1) - Again missing whistle on tail

Nice diff actually, but sometimes you're missing important hitsound on some parts which make the overall hitsound sounds a bit odd xD
Good luck!

no reply=fixed
thanks for modding

zeliaR

430 posts

Joined June 2014

zeliaR 2017-05-22T14:39:49+00:00

Shiranai wrote:
Hello from your queue~
Easy
00:09:458 (3) - Forget whistle on slider tail?
00:46:124 (4,5) - Try to avoid stacked between them on lower diff, so far only that part that has a stacked notes and seems out of place imo
00:25:458 (3) - How about the shape on that one more paralel with previous slider, like https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8151083 ?
00:54:791 (3) - Maybe a bit more curve will looks good for aesthetic like https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8151022 but this looks better ;w;
01:13:458 (3) - Same thing as above, a bit curve may looks better https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8151044
01:25:458 (1) - Try to add clap on the spinner? you can highlight the drum sound better if you do that

Good one

no reply=fixed

tnx!

mahal q

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Shishou

512 posts

Joined November 2014

Topic Starter

Shishou 2017-05-22T14:41:11+00:00

updated bhe

Finshie

829 posts

Joined October 2012

Finshie 2017-05-22T14:52:37+00:00

Shiranai wrote:
Hello from your queue~

Normal
00:00:125 (1) - and 01:26:958 (1) - Try to add finish to highlight the snare sounds better? added finish to both.
00:11:791 (3,4) - and 00:42:458 (6,1) - I think you can try to avoid that small overlaping? Looks a bit sloopy imo. For reference you can take a look on a better one 00:31:791 (5,1) - tried not to overlap it as best as i can.
00:56:124 (1,2,3,4,5) - Too many 1/2 beat makes the diff hard to play imo, considering the song itself is on 180 bpm nerfed alittle.
00:34:791 (1,2,3,4) - Same as above, maybe you should reconsider your rhythm choice also nerfed. probably the best i could do since reverse slider doesnt look good.
00:41:291 (3) - You miss whistle on slider tail for the bass sound fixedd

Great diff, nice hitsounding btw
Good luck!

Thanks for mod!

Update

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Shishou

512 posts

Joined November 2014

Topic Starter

Shishou 2017-05-22T14:53:49+00:00

updated labyu 2

dsco

287 posts

Joined April 2014

dsco 2017-05-22T19:41:20+00:00

hi! m4m

Together
HP i think is just slightly too high, hp6.5 even would be a decent improvement
00:04:124 (1) - unnecessary NC (also it is inconsistent with the insane where 00:04:291 - is NC'd instead)
00:15:958 (8) - if you move this down 4 pixels the blanket will be better on the wave slider
00:21:458 (1,3) - vs 00:36:124 (1,3) - inconsistent, i dont think you should full overlap
00:33:958 (2,3) - this stack feels quite out of place, you dont use it anywhere else previous in the section
00:47:458 (3) - dont like the way this plays + its the only 1/4 slider with any repeats in this map
00:50:124 (3) - if the 1st and 3rd segment were parallel itd look nicer
00:57:624 (2,3) - i think this should have the same slight overlap spacing as 00:54:791 (1,3) - 00:36:124 (1,3) - 00:43:791 (3,1) - etc
01:12:791 (3,5) - should be slight overlap instead of full like elsewhere in section

Insane
00:14:791 (1,3,5) - would be a little neater if 1 was the midpoint of 3 and 5
00:22:458 (4,1) - minor blanket error
00:26:124 (3,5) - i think its better if these stack and you drop stackleniency to 5, 7 is overkill
00:31:791 (4,1) - fix blanket
00:32:624 (2,4) - slight overlap doesnt look great
00:33:124 (4,1) - fix blanket
00:46:458 (4,5) - ^
01:02:791 (1,4) - fix stack
01:15:791 (4,1) - fix blanket
01:18:458 (4) - i think this would flow better if it was rotated 180 since you use back and forth flow more than linear for this part of the song

Hard
AR feels a little low, very many objects visible at once. also AR7 to AR9 on insane is a big gap, maybe AR8 or just 7.5 for this diff
00:03:958 (2,2) - not a fan of this overlap in a hard diff but subjective i guess
00:16:791 (3,4,1) - inconsistent visual spacing, 1 is closer to 3 tail than 4 is
00:42:124 (3,4) - this is pretty confusing especially on such a slow AR since its around half of the DS as the jumps are but twice the rhythm gap. reads like 1/2. i think a 1/1 slider would make more sense for a hard, as well
00:50:458 (2,1) - again possible to misread, spacing more would help though the player is more familiar with rhythm now so might not be a problem
01:01:958 (2,4) - increase stackleniency so these dont overlap (-> 8)
01:06:624 (5,7) - ^
01:23:291 (2,4) - ^

Finshie's Normal
00:06:458 (3,4) - too close
00:31:458 (4,5) - minor spacing error

Tyrant's Easy
00:05:458 (1) - poor rhythm, the white tick in the middle is very emphasized by the vocals. (also: 00:08:124 (1) -
00:06:791 (3) - tail ought to be clickable (also 00:12:124 (2) - )
00:30:458 (2,4) - i think this overlap is not okay for an easy
00:36:791 (4) - tail should be clickable
00:38:791 (2,3,4) - rhythm is pretty poor, a lot of the vocals and music goes un-mapped and under emphasized
00:46:124 (4,5) - out of place stack, you stack nothing else in the map
00:58:791 (1,2,3,4) - rhythm doesnt feel like it follows the music well. the vocal on the tail of 01:00:124 (3) - should be clickable i think.

good luck!

Finshie

829 posts

Joined October 2012

Finshie 2017-05-23T00:20:40+00:00

dsco wrote:
Finshie's Normal
00:06:458 (3,4) - too close
00:31:458 (4,5) - minor spacing error

good luck!

fixed both. thanks for mod!

Update

osu file format v14

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[Metadata]
Title:Dakara, Hitori ja nai
TitleUnicode:だから、ひとりじゃない
Artist:Little Glee Monster
ArtistUnicode:リトル・グリー・モンスター
Creator:Shishou
Version:Finshie's Normal
Source:僕のヒーローアカデミア 第2期
Tags:boku no hero academia my That's Why I'm not Alone  ending season 2 s2 2nd ed misaka 10032 tyrantseye2014 Finshie
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zeliaR

430 posts

Joined June 2014

zeliaR 2017-05-23T04:36:01+00:00

dsco wrote:
hi! m4m

Tyrant's Easy
00:05:458 (1) - poor rhythm, the white tick in the middle is very emphasized by the vocals. (also: 00:08:124 (1) -
00:06:791 (3) - tail ought to be clickable (also 00:12:124 (2) - )
00:30:458 (2,4) - i think this overlap is not okay for an easy
00:36:791 (4) - tail should be clickable
00:38:791 (2,3,4) - rhythm is pretty poor, a lot of the vocals and music goes un-mapped and under emphasized
00:46:124 (4,5) - out of place stack, you stack nothing else in the map
00:58:791 (1,2,3,4) - rhythm doesnt feel like it follows the music well. the vocal on the tail of 01:00:124 (3) - should be clickable i think.

all applied except the last one. since it's easy diff i don't want it to be more difficult to newbie players.

thanks for modding!

mahal ang bigas

osu file format v14

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Title:Dakara, Hitori ja nai
TitleUnicode:だから、ひとりじゃない
Artist:Little Glee Monster
ArtistUnicode:リトル・グリー・モンスター
Creator:Shishou
Version:Tyrant's Easy
Source:僕のヒーローアカデミア 第2期
Tags:boku no hero academia my That's Why I'm not Alone ending season 2 s2 2nd ed misaka 10032 tyrantseye2014 Finshie
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461,180,13458,6,0,P|467:100|450:22,1,159.999976158142,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
376,54,14458,1,8,0:0:0:0:
299,78,14791,2,0,L|139:85,1,159.999976158142,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
113,245,16124,6,0,P|191:234|263:266,1,159.999976158142,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
326,315,17124,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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395,146,18124,2,0,P|365:109|326:88,1,79.999988079071,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
259,76,18791,6,0,L|81:74,1,159.999976158142,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
37,125,19791,1,8,0:0:0:0:
16,202,20124,2,0,L|16:303,1,79.999988079071,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
90,311,20791,2,0,P|137:300|194:309,1,79.999988079071,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
248,310,21458,6,0,B|291:321|327:310|327:310|363:297|412:307,1,159.999976158142,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
486,313,22458,1,8,0:0:0:0:
489,233,22791,2,0,L|489:132,1,79.999988079071,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
419,113,23458,2,0,P|379:111|340:122,1,79.999988079071,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
279,173,24124,6,0,P|189:188|108:128,1,159.999976158142,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
93,86,25124,1,8,0:0:0:0:
169,62,25458,2,0,L|268:57,2,79.999988079071,2|8|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
45,164,26791,6,0,L|51:336,1,159.999976158142,6|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
126,350,27791,1,8,0:0:0:0:
199,317,28124,2,0,P|236:304|307:306,1,79.999988079071,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
352,324,28791,2,0,P|389:337|429:340,1,79.999988079071,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
472,272,29458,6,0,B|483:229|472:193|472:193|459:157|469:108,1,159.999976158142,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
399,72,30458,1,8,0:0:0:0:
326,38,30791,2,0,L|223:36,1,79.999988079071,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
177,77,31458,2,0,P|168:121|175:166,1,79.999988079071,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
186,234,32124,6,0,P|211:302|300:329,1,159.999976158142,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
361,297,33124,1,8,0:0:0:0:
378,218,33458,2,0,L|375:132,1,79.999988079071,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
351,61,34124,2,0,P|312:52|262:61,1,79.999988079071,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
218,115,34791,6,0,B|155:112|155:112|124:125|124:125|62:119,1,159.999976158142,6|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
1,172,35791,1,8,0:0:0:0:
0,251,36124,2,0,L|8:330,1,79.999988079071,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
80,365,36791,2,0,L|159:356,1,79.999988079071,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
238,343,37458,6,0,P|261:292|242:178,1,159.999976158142,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
218,115,38458,1,2,0:0:0:0:
150,72,38791,2,0,L|59:76,2,79.999988079071,2|2|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
217,31,39791,1,2,0:0:0:0:
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388,193,42458,1,2,0:0:0:0:
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78,152,43791,1,0,0:0:0:0:
8,191,44124,2,0,L|15:270,2,79.999988079071,2|2|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
3,110,45124,1,0,0:0:0:0:
66,61,45458,6,0,B|129:58|129:58|160:70|160:70|223:64,1,159.999976158142,6|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
300,86,46458,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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402,92,47791,1,2,0:0:0:0:
467,137,48124,6,0,P|471:215|422:275,1,159.999976158142,6|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
356,321,49124,1,0,0:0:0:0:
275,317,49458,2,0,L|182:311,1,79.999988079071,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
117,292,50124,2,0,P|110:246|119:208,1,79.999988079071,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
144,138,50791,6,0,P|215:107|289:132,1,159.999976158142,6|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
352,182,51791,1,0,0:0:0:0:
391,251,52124,2,0,L|470:241,2,79.999988079071,2|2|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
318,284,53124,1,2,0:0:0:0:
252,331,53458,6,0,P|186:338|85:322,1,159.999976158142,6|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
67,248,54458,1,8,0:0:0:0:
53,169,54791,2,0,L|53:89,1,79.999988079071,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
121,45,55458,2,0,P|160:49|194:69,1,79.999988079071,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,56124,12,4,57458,0:0:0:0:
397,333,58791,6,0,B|354:344|318:333|318:333|282:320|233:330,1,159.999976158142,6|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
163,355,59791,1,8,0:0:0:0:
88,324,60124,2,0,L|83:219,1,79.999988079071,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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178,81,65124,1,8,0:0:0:0:
255,102,65458,2,0,P|332:118|410:99,1,159.999976158142,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
477,55,66458,1,8,0:0:0:0:
493,133,66791,6,0,L|487:233,1,79.999988079071,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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286,309,68124,2,0,P|208:325|131:306,1,159.999976158142,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
92,236,69124,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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322,150,70458,1,8,0:0:0:0:
400,133,70791,2,0,P|407:83|399:35,1,79.999988079071,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
327,29,71458,2,0,L|230:25,1,79.999988079071,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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224,229,73124,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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457,264,74124,2,0,P|460:315|448:357,1,79.999988079071,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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137,348,75791,1,8,0:0:0:0:
83,288,76124,2,0,P|97:212|71:98,1,159.999976158142,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
63,53,77124,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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282,161,80124,6,0,P|267:248|377:337,1,239.999964237213,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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282,161,82791,6,0,P|198:168|125:148,1,159.999976158142,6|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
69,86,83791,1,8,0:0:0:0:
29,155,84124,2,0,L|23:264,1,79.999988079071,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
91,279,84791,2,0,P|150:270|194:279,1,79.999988079071,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,85458,12,0,86791,0:0:0:0:

Shishou

512 posts

Joined November 2014

Topic Starter

Shishou 2017-05-23T05:38:43+00:00

dsco wrote:
hi! m4m

Together
HP i think is just slightly too high, hp6.5 even would be a decent improvement
00:04:124 (1) - unnecessary NC (also it is inconsistent with the insane where 00:04:291 - is NC'd instead)
00:15:958 (8) - if you move this down 4 pixels the blanket will be better on the wave slider
00:21:458 (1,3) - vs 00:36:124 (1,3) - inconsistent, i dont think you should full overlap
00:33:958 (2,3) - this stack feels quite out of place, you dont use it anywhere else previous in the section
00:47:458 (3) - dont like the way this plays + its the only 1/4 slider with any repeats in this map what's wrong with that
00:50:124 (3) - if the 1st and 3rd segment were parallel itd look nicer
00:57:624 (2,3) - i think this should have the same slight overlap spacing as 00:54:791 (1,3) - 00:36:124 (1,3) - 00:43:791 (3,1) - etc
01:12:791 (3,5) - should be slight overlap instead of full like elsewhere in section

Insane
00:14:791 (1,3,5) - would be a little neater if 1 was the midpoint of 3 and 5
00:22:458 (4,1) - minor blanket error
00:26:124 (3,5) - i think its better if these stack and you drop stackleniency to 5, 7 is overkill the flow is better this way
00:31:791 (4,1) - fix blanket
00:32:624 (2,4) - slight overlap doesnt look great
00:33:124 (4,1) - fix blanket
00:46:458 (4,5) - ^
01:02:791 (1,4) - fix stack
01:15:791 (4,1) - fix blanket
01:18:458 (4) - i think this would flow better if it was rotated 180 since you use back and forth flow more than linear for this part of the song flow will be bad at the next note

Hard
AR feels a little low, very many objects visible at once. also AR7 to AR9 on insane is a big gap, maybe AR8 or just 7.5 for this diff
00:03:958 (2,2) - not a fan of this overlap in a hard diff but subjective i guess
00:16:791 (3,4,1) - inconsistent visual spacing, 1 is closer to 3 tail than 4 is
00:42:124 (3,4) - this is pretty confusing especially on such a slow AR since its around half of the DS as the jumps are but twice the rhythm gap. reads like 1/2. i think a 1/1 slider would make more sense for a hard, as well
00:50:458 (2,1) - again possible to misread, spacing more would help though the player is more familiar with rhythm now so might not be a problem
01:01:958 (2,4) - increase stackleniency so these dont overlap (-> 8)
01:06:624 (5,7) - ^
01:23:291 (2,4) - ^

good luck!

no=reply = fixed
thanks for modding

Shion Maker

52 posts

Joined July 2014

Shion Maker 2017-05-23T06:36:48+00:00

Sorry for I am not good at modding

General

you can disable the widescreen support since you may not using storyboarding so it's useless.

Easy

Maybe OD3&HP3 is hard for this level ,i prefer using OD2(2.5) and HP2(2.5)
00:06:458 (3) - there is no sound so i prefer putting a note in 00:06:791 -
00:56:124 (1) - i think this spinner is too short , you can edit by using slider or note
00:58:791 - i can't feel it is kiai time , maybe you can increase the slider speed in kiai time or increase the distance snap
01:25:458 (1) - i prefer the spinner end at 01:28:124 -

Normal

Maybe AR5 is hard for this level ,i prefer using AR4(4.5)
00:09:458 (4) - NC
00:57:958 (6,7) - my preference is putting it at 00:57:958 (6) - and 00:58:462 - (7) , so that 00:58:791 (1) - maybe you can edit the distance snap ~~maybe 00:57:958 (6,7) - can insert a NC~~
00:58:791 - Same as easy level,i can't feel it is kiai time

Shishou

512 posts

Joined November 2014

Topic Starter

Shishou 2017-05-23T14:16:09+00:00

thanks for modding

Finshie

829 posts

Joined October 2012

Finshie 2017-05-23T14:25:56+00:00

-Noel wrote:
Sorry for I am not good at modding

Normal
Maybe AR5 is hard for this level ,i prefer using AR4(4.5) its fine 5 isnt that high
00:09:458 (4) - NC maybe but ill choose to keep 2 measure NCs
00:57:958 (6,7) - my preference is putting it at 00:57:958 (6) - and 00:58:462 - (7) , so that 00:58:791 (1) - maybe you can edit the distance snap ~~maybe 00:57:958 (6,7) - can insert a NC~~ what xD
00:58:791 - Same as easy level,i can't feel it is kiai time low diffs should stay only at 1.0x even if its kiai. its for beginners.

thanks for mod!

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My Angel Kitten

121 posts

Joined September 2015

My Angel Kitten 2017-05-23T14:34:29+00:00

m4m req

Insane

00:42:624 - add a circle
00:51:958 (5) - better make reverse slider

another diff are good for me ^-^

Shishou

512 posts

Joined November 2014

Topic Starter

Shishou 2017-05-23T14:48:52+00:00

My Angel Kitten wrote:
m4m req
Insane
00:42:624 - add a circle I don't hear a sound there
00:51:958 (5) - better make reverse slider will ruin the rhythm

another diff are good for me ^-^

thanks for modding
what map should I mod?

My Angel Kitten

121 posts

Joined September 2015

My Angel Kitten 2017-05-23T15:04:47+00:00

Shishou wrote:
thanks for modding
what map should I mod?

this one https://osu.ppy.sh/s/606732
thanks ^-^

fattypikachu

560 posts

Joined May 2015

fattypikachu 2017-05-24T16:30:03+00:00

Hello from your M4M queue! ^-^

[General]
AIMod says the BG image is too big. Downsize it to 1366x768.

[Tyrant's Easy]

Easy

00:09:458 (3) - Move slightly to the right to align with 00:09:124 (2) -
00:26:458 - Add a note here
00:35:791 (2) - Move to x372 y272 so it follows 00:35:791 (2) -
00:53:458 (1) - Move tail down so it's symmetrical
00:54:791 (3) - Add another point in the middle so it's blanketed by 00:53:458 (1) - (https://puu.sh/vVIRW/c5aafdeb6b.jpg)
01:00:791 (4) - Move a little to the left so it aligns with 01:00:124 (3) -
01:02:458 (2) - Move to the right so it follows 01:01:458 (1) -
01:07:458 (2) - Point the tail down so 01:08:124 (3) - follows it
01:12:124 (1,2) - Move down for more counter-clockwise rotation (https://puu.sh/vVJ6U/12ee6828a5.jpg)
01:17:458 (1) - ctrl+J for better clockwise rotation
01:19:791 (3) - Move up a little to form a triangle with 01:17:458 (1,2) -
01:24:124 (3) - Move to x45 y162 to form a triangle with 01:22:791 (1,2) -
01:24:791 (4) - If you do the above, you will have to move this out of the way

[Finshie's Normal]
00:24:624 (2) - Move to x118 y26 to line up with 00:24:124 (1) - (You will have to move 00:24:791 (3,4) - to keep DS)
00:42:458 (6,1) - Slight overlap
00:43:458 (2,3,4,5,6,1) - Make into a better hexagon, sorta like https://puu.sh/vYHOt/e4727bc6f1.jpg
00:57:458 (5) - NC
00:58:124 (6) - Start the slider at 00:57:958 - so it follows the vocals
01:25:124 (6) - Move to x53 y28 so it lines up with 01:24:624 (5) -

[Hard]

Hard

00:04:124 (1) - Remove NC, no strong beat here
00:05:124 (4) - Copy and paste 00:04:791 (3) - , then rotate -120 degrees
00:05:458 (1) - Move the head to x242 y117 so the bump blankets 00:04:791 (3) - , then move the tail down so it points to 00:05:958 (2) - (https://puu.sh/vYIEK/84ac045f7f.jpg)
00:07:791 (4) - Copy and paste 00:07:458 (3) - , rotate 180 degrees then stack on the tail of 00:06:791 (1) -
00:09:458 (1) - Maybe straighten so it compliments 00:09:791 (2) - ?
00:12:124 (1) - Move to x453 y157 so it forms a triangle with 00:11:624 (3,4) -
00:15:291 (3,4) - Change the rhythm to (https://puu.sh/vYJh7/fe77e6b516.png) so it makes a pattern with 00:14:791 (1,2) -
00:26:458 (4) - Maybe copy 00:26:458 (4) -'s curve?
00:26:458 (4) - Move down to x62 y349 so the head gets blanketed by 00:27:791 (4) -
00:28:791 (3) - Move a little to the right so the tail aligns with 00:29:124 (4) -
00:31:291 (2) - Stack on 00:31:791 (4) - ?
00:39:458 (3,1) - Space these farther apart? The DS is 1.1 here compared to the ~1.7 around it
00:41:791 (2,3,1) - ^
00:47:458 (6,1) - ^ especially, this looks like a 1/2 beat spacing when it's actually a 1/1
00:46:624 (4) - Move the head slightly up so it aligns with 00:46:458 (3) -
00:49:124 (4) - Blanket a little better
00:54:791 (1) - Blanket 00:55:124 (2) - ?
00:55:291 (3) - Point the tail up a little so 00:55:791 (4) - better follows it
00:57:458 (5) - Since you have a huge wind chime hitsound here, I suggest moving the NC here from 00:57:624 (1) -
01:00:124 (1) - Move the head down so it follows 00:59:958 (5) -

For the next two, I'm assuming the non-stacking is a deliberate style choice.

[Insane]

Insane

00:18:458 (4,1) - Overlap?
00:19:458 (3,4,5,1) - Make this a square?
00:20:124 (1,4) - Stack the tail of 1?
00:23:291 (2) - Move to x354 y142 so it fits inside 00:24:124 (1) -
00:26:458 (4,1) - Slight overlap
00:30:458 (4) - Either stack with 00:29:458 (1) - or blanket 00:29:958 (2) -
00:32:624 (2,4) - overlap
00:41:791 (2,3,1) - Space 3 out like in Hard, right now it looks exactly like 00:42:791 (1,2,3) - even though the time spacing is different
01:11:791 (4,1) - - ^
01:05:958 (2,4) - Stack
01:13:958 (2,3,4,5,1) - Make into a pentagon (https://puu.sh/vZnil/2010418f1b.jpg)

01:16:624 (2) - I think you should put this closer to the tail of 1, since the spacing seems to put an emphasis on 2 even though the music doesn't emphasize the beat (this idea can be applied across the map)

[Together]

Together

00:04:124 (1) - Remove NC
00:14:124 (3,4) - ctrl+G, then place 00:14:458 (5) - to the right of (4). Clockwise flow should reverse at 00:14:791 (1) -
00:19:791 (4) - Blanket better
00:33:958 (2,3) - I think you should move (3). Suddenly stopping motion here feels awkward.
01:01:958 (2,3) - ^
01:12:624 (2,3) - ^, but move (2)
00:34:791 (1) - I find it weird that you don't emphasise the drums at all here like what happened in Insane. I'd suggest a 1/2 slider with a repeat.
00:41:791 (5) - You have a 3.2 DS before it and a 1.1 after it. Either ctrl+G the slider or move it so people don't get furious why they hit (6) too early.
00:47:458 (3) - People won't have time to figure out how many repeats there are. Maybe try something like this (https://puu.sh/vZMAt/b5595f201a.jpg) or just add a stream here.
00:50:124 (3) - Slider looks uneven. Move the two red points back.
00:53:791 (2) - Move this up a bit so the follow line from 00:53:791 (2) - goes straight through it
01:06:291 (5) - Move to x423 y170 so it makes a better rectangle with 01:05:791 (2,3,4,5) -
01:10:124 (3) - Maybe copy 01:10:458 (4) - then rotate 180 degrees

Good luck on getting ranked!

Finshie

829 posts

Joined October 2012

Finshie 2017-05-24T18:02:46+00:00

fattypikachu wrote:
Hello from your M4M queue! ^-^

[Finshie's Normal]
00:24:624 (2) - Move to x118 y26 to line up with 00:24:124 (1) - (You will have to move 00:24:791 (3,4) - to keep DS)
00:42:458 (6,1) - Slight overlap
00:43:458 (2,3,4,5,6,1) - Make into a better hexagon, sorta like https://puu.sh/vYHOt/e4727bc6f1.jpg
00:57:458 (5) - NC its gonna ruin the 2 measure nc im doing so im keeping it.
00:58:124 (6) - Start the slider at 00:57:958 - so it follows the vocals it still follows the vocal on white tick and i wanna break the 1/2 chain there cause its too long and it also have those 2 1/2 sliders along with it.
01:25:124 (6) - Move to x53 y28 so it lines up with 01:24:624 (5) -

Good luck on getting ranked!

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TitleUnicode:だから、ひとりじゃない
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Version:Finshie's Normal
Source:僕のヒーローアカデミア 第2期
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Shishou

512 posts

Joined November 2014

Topic Starter

Shishou 2017-05-25T11:50:34+00:00

fattypikachu wrote:
Hello from your M4M queue! ^-^

[General]
AIMod says the BG image is too big. Downsize it to 1366x768.

[Hard]
Hard
00:04:124 (1) - Remove NC, no strong beat here downbeat
00:05:124 (4) - Copy and paste 00:04:791 (3) - , then rotate -120 degrees
00:05:458 (1) - Move the head to x242 y117 so the bump blankets 00:04:791 (3) - , then move the tail down so it points to 00:05:958 (2) - (https://puu.sh/vYIEK/84ac045f7f.jpg)
00:07:791 (4) - Copy and paste 00:07:458 (3) - , rotate 180 degrees then stack on the tail of 00:06:791 (1) -
00:09:458 (1) - Maybe straighten so it compliments 00:09:791 (2) - ?
00:12:124 (1) - Move to x453 y157 so it forms a triangle with 00:11:624 (3,4) -nah
00:15:291 (3,4) - Change the rhythm to (https://puu.sh/vYJh7/fe77e6b516.png) so it makes a pattern with 00:14:791 (1,2) - it's fine
00:26:458 (4) - Maybe copy 00:26:458 (4) -'s curve? wat
00:26:458 (4) - Move down to x62 y349 so the head gets blanketed by 00:27:791 (4) -
00:28:791 (3) - Move a little to the right so the tail aligns with 00:29:124 (4) -
00:31:291 (2) - Stack on 00:31:791 (4) - ? too far
00:39:458 (3,1) - Space these farther apart? The DS is 1.1 here compared to the ~1.7 around it
00:41:791 (2,3,1) - ^
00:47:458 (6,1) - ^ especially, this looks like a 1/2 beat spacing when it's actually a 1/1
00:46:624 (4) - Move the head slightly up so it aligns with 00:46:458 (3) -
00:49:124 (4) - Blanket a little better
00:54:791 (1) - Blanket 00:55:124 (2) - ? nah flow's better that way
00:55:291 (3) - Point the tail up a little so 00:55:791 (4) - better follows it
00:57:458 (5) - Since you have a huge wind chime hitsound here, I suggest moving the NC here from 00:57:624 (1) -
01:00:124 (1) - Move the head down so it follows 00:59:958 (5) -

For the next two, I'm assuming the non-stacking is a deliberate style choice.

[Insane]
Insane
00:18:458 (4,1) - Overlap? nah
00:19:458 (3,4,5,1) - Make this a square? nope
00:20:124 (1,4) - Stack the tail of 1? intentional
00:23:291 (2) - Move to x354 y142 so it fits inside 00:24:124 (1) - no but i stack it instead
00:26:458 (4,1) - Slight overlap nah
00:30:458 (4) - Either stack with 00:29:458 (1) - or blanket 00:29:958 (2) - stacked it
00:32:624 (2,4) - overlap
00:41:791 (2,3,1) - Space 3 out like in Hard, right now it looks exactly like 00:42:791 (1,2,3) - even though the time spacing is different
01:11:791 (4,1) - - ^
01:05:958 (2,4) - Stack
01:13:958 (2,3,4,5,1) - Make into a pentagon (https://puu.sh/vZnil/2010418f1b.jpg)

01:16:624 (2) - I think you should put this closer to the tail of 1, since the spacing seems to put an emphasis on 2 even though the music doesn't emphasize the beat (this idea can be applied across the map)

[Together]
Together
00:04:124 (1) - Remove NC
00:14:124 (3,4) - ctrl+G, then place 00:14:458 (5) - to the right of (4). Clockwise flow should reverse at 00:14:791 (1) -
00:19:791 (4) - Blanket better
00:33:958 (2,3) - I think you should move (3). Suddenly stopping motion here feels awkward.
01:01:958 (2,3) - ^
01:12:624 (2,3) - ^, but move (2)
00:34:791 (1) - I find it weird that you don't emphasise the drums at all here like what happened in Insane. I'd suggest a 1/2 slider with a repeat.
00:41:791 (5) - You have a 3.2 DS before it and a 1.1 after it. Either ctrl+G the slider or move it so people don't get furious why they hit (6) too early.
00:47:458 (3) - People won't have time to figure out how many repeats there are. Maybe try something like this (https://puu.sh/vZMAt/b5595f201a.jpg) or just add a stream here. nah
00:50:124 (3) - Slider looks uneven. Move the two red points back.
00:53:791 (2) - Move this up a bit so the follow line from 00:53:791 (2) - goes straight through it
01:06:291 (5) - Move to x423 y170 so it makes a better rectangle with 01:05:791 (2,3,4,5) -
01:10:124 (3) - Maybe copy 01:10:458 (4) - then rotate 180 degrees

Good luck on getting ranked!

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zeliaR

430 posts

Joined June 2014

zeliaR 2017-05-25T14:25:24+00:00

-Noel wrote:
Sorry for I am not good at modding
General
you can disable the widescreen support since you may not using storyboarding so it's useless.

Easy
Maybe OD3&HP3 is hard for this level ,i prefer using OD2(2.5) and HP2(2.5) not really. i think its fine for beginners.
00:06:458 (3) - there is no sound so i prefer putting a note in 00:06:791 - done
00:56:124 (1) - i think this spinner is too short , you can edit by using slider or note i prefer spinner
00:58:791 - i can't feel it is kiai time , maybe you can increase the slider speed in kiai time or increase the distance snap i think that is not allowed in easy diff
01:25:458 (1) - i prefer the spinner end at 01:28:124 -yea but sound here 01:26:791 is more loud than you mentioned

fattypikachu wrote:
Hello from your M4M queue! ^-^

[General]
AIMod says the BG image is too big. Downsize it to 1366x768.

[Tyrant's Easy]
Easy
00:09:458 (3) - Move slightly to the right to align with 00:09:124 (2) - done
00:26:458 - Add a note here done
00:35:791 (2) - Move to x372 y272 so it follows 00:35:791 (2) - i move this instead 00:36:124 (3) -
00:53:458 (1) - Move tail down so it's symmetrical done
00:54:791 (3) - Add another point in the middle so it's blanketed by 00:53:458 (1) - (https://puu.sh/vVIRW/c5aafdeb6b.jpg) no changes since you said that i move the slidertail down on 00:53:458 (1) -
01:00:791 (4) - Move a little to the left so it aligns with 01:00:124 (3) - done
01:02:458 (2) - Move to the right so it follows 01:01:458 (1) - done
01:07:458 (2) - Point the tail down so 01:08:124 (3) - follows it done
01:12:124 (1,2) - Move down for more counter-clockwise rotation (https://puu.sh/vVJ6U/12ee6828a5.jpg) done
01:17:458 (1) - ctrl+J for better clockwise rotation done
01:19:791 (3) - Move up a little to form a triangle with 01:17:458 (1,2) - done
01:24:124 (3) - Move to x45 y162 to form a triangle with 01:22:791 (1,2) - done
01:24:791 (4) - If you do the above, you will have to move this out of the way done

thanks guys! sorry for late ;w;

update

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TitleUnicode:だから、ひとりじゃない
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Creator:Shishou
Version:Tyrant's Easy
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Shishou

512 posts

Joined November 2014

Topic Starter

Shishou 2017-05-25T14:40:21+00:00

updated bhe labyu

Winnie

1,343 posts

Joined November 2013

Winnie 2017-05-27T04:46:40+00:00

Hello from modding queue

[Together]

Based on my rule I'll be only modding the diffs that you made.
Using hp 6.5 or 6 would tone down the drain a bit for consistency
00:05:458 (1,3) - Could be blanketed better
00:09:458 (1,2) - Try to make them identical, they follow the same vocal train so keeping them identical potentially makes your map cleaner
00:10:124 (3,4,5) - These 3 could be identical in spacing because it follows the melody in the music which doesn't have that dramatic of a change to one another since your end goal was to make 00:10:624 (6,1) - have a gap for that strong beat
00:13:958 (2,3,4,5,6) - Could make pattern smaller and more intuitive of a design to make the next portion of jumps leave an impact. Just an Example: http://puu.sh/w2lhq/b02d48515c.jpg
00:16:624 (2) - Too much additive hitsounds, I think just having a whistle would leave a much cleaner hitsound palette. I'll be brought up a lot if it stays but I'll just mod accordinging to mapping style
00:23:291 (2,3) - This rhythm should be Ctrl+G to map intuitively to the vocals. Maybe another could be http://puu.sh/w2lqo/27f6fa9c16.jpg or http://puu.sh/w2lrj/94f2034ba4.jpg
00:29:291 (5,1) - Doesn't need to be a forced jump to a strong beat it'll do the same being just as close http://puu.sh/w2ltZ/552638df89.jpg
00:31:791 (4,1) - Ew Blanket
00:35:124 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - Excessive jumps just thrown in. Should've been a rhythm along the lines of http://puu.sh/w2lx5/01690b1dfb.jpg to map more according to the strong beginning vocals and then into the 4 notes
00:37:291 (5,1) - Quite a large spacing. Just something random definitely better to do it your way but spacing like this could work http://puu.sh/w2lAv/efff4cc364.jpg so it doesn't seem too forced
00:38:124 (2,3) - Not that clean of a rhythm choice here. Your main focus I believe should be following the vocals and making sure 00:38:624 - is clickable in its own right/ So something like http://puu.sh/w2lFz/1d4a43706a.jpg
00:40:791 (2,3,4) - Same with rhythm choice here, http://puu.sh/w2lHq/fffe7bb0a9.jpg Even though I do agree that mapping that downbeat sound is nice but it's lacking impact because the red ticks area the one that takes over this area You can do whatever you feel is good for you though
00:57:458 (1,2,3) - Such clean hitsounding makes me hot
01:05:791 (2,3,4,5,6) - Same with things previously, just feels like a back and forth pattern without much backing it up

[Insane]

00:36:458 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - pattern doesn't seem clean can somehow adjust this to make pattern intuitive. Not to hate or anything but visually it looks clustered

Not much more looks fairly clean

No matter what people tell you, words and ideas can change the world. ~Robin Williams
Do your best my friend.

Shishou

512 posts

Joined November 2014

Topic Starter

Shishou 2017-05-27T16:36:04+00:00

Kocari wrote:
Hello from modding queue

[Together]
Based on my rule I'll be only modding the diffs that you made.
Using hp 6.5 or 6 would tone down the drain a bit for consistency
00:05:458 (1,3) - Could be blanketed better
00:09:458 (1,2) - Try to make them identical, they follow the same vocal train so keeping them identical potentially makes your map cleaner
00:10:124 (3,4,5) - These 3 could be identical in spacing because it follows the melody in the music which doesn't have that dramatic of a change to one another since your end goal was to make 00:10:624 (6,1) - have a gap for that strong beat
00:13:958 (2,3,4,5,6) - Could make pattern smaller and more intuitive of a design to make the next portion of jumps leave an impact. Just an Example: http://puu.sh/w2lhq/b02d48515c.jpg
00:16:624 (2) - Too much additive hitsounds, I think just having a whistle would leave a much cleaner hitsound palette. I'll be brought up a lot if it stays but I'll just mod accordinging to mapping style
00:23:291 (2,3) - This rhythm should be Ctrl+G to map intuitively to the vocals. Maybe another could be http://puu.sh/w2lqo/27f6fa9c16.jpg or http://puu.sh/w2lrj/94f2034ba4.jpg
00:29:291 (5,1) - Doesn't need to be a forced jump to a strong beat it'll do the same being just as close http://puu.sh/w2ltZ/552638df89.jpg
00:31:791 (4,1) - Ew Blanket
00:35:124 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - Excessive jumps just thrown in. Should've been a rhythm along the lines of http://puu.sh/w2lx5/01690b1dfb.jpg to map more according to the strong beginning vocals and then into the 4 notes
00:37:291 (5,1) - Quite a large spacing. Just something random definitely better to do it your way but spacing like this could work http://puu.sh/w2lAv/efff4cc364.jpg so it doesn't seem too forced
00:38:124 (2,3) - Not that clean of a rhythm choice here. Your main focus I believe should be following the vocals and making sure 00:38:624 - is clickable in its own right/ So something like http://puu.sh/w2lFz/1d4a43706a.jpg
00:40:791 (2,3,4) - Same with rhythm choice here, http://puu.sh/w2lHq/fffe7bb0a9.jpg Even though I do agree that mapping that downbeat sound is nice but it's lacking impact because the red ticks area the one that takes over this area You can do whatever you feel is good for you though
00:57:458 (1,2,3) - Such clean hitsounding makes me hot
01:05:791 (2,3,4,5,6) - Same with things previously, just feels like a back and forth pattern without much backing it up

[Insane]
00:36:458 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - pattern doesn't seem clean can somehow adjust this to make pattern intuitive. Not to hate or anything but visually it looks clustered

Not much more looks fairly clean

No matter what people tell you, words and ideas can change the world. ~Robin Williams
Do your best my friend.

No reply= fixed
Thanks for modding

Joe Castle

802 posts

Joined September 2014

Joe Castle 2017-05-28T02:54:52+00:00

Hi! i dont really know if you posted this map on #modreq or i saw you needed a mod :S but anyway, i think my mod will help a Little bit at least :S
I hope it helps:

Tyrant Easy:

1. 00:08:124 (1) - i think this slider (i mean they way its made) doesnt fit with the cheerful song, try doing this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8197706 (i know isnt place well, but im just showing you my idea of how it can look that specific slider)

2. 01:03:458 (4,1) - give this sliders the same spacing you used in the rest of the map uwu so they dont collide

3. 01:20:124 (1,2) - same reason as #2 here

Finshie Normal:

1. It looks amazing :3

Hard:

1. 00:14:791 (1,2) - why not giving this part the same spacing between their objects like 00:14:124 (3,4,5) ? im saying this because the space between the Green slider and the first circle looks weird (this is just my opinión, sorry if im wrong)

2. 00:24:124 (1,2,3) - try doing something like this? :S https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8197780

3. 00:43:958 (3) - move this circle probably to X:132-Y:360 or a similar coordinate, so there is a pretty good spacing between the sliders and the circle (maybe im wrong by saying that :S)

4. 00:54:791 (1,2,3) - kind of the same problem in #3, move the circle in a way that it can créate a cute triangle with the sliders (kinda like this *sorry for bad example x.x http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8197805)

5. 00:58:124 (3,4,1) - i dont know if i can say that this objects should have a equal spacing between them, but idk

6. 01:18:124 (3,4) - why not trying the same thing you did at 01:19:458 (3,4) ?

Insane:

1. 00:29:458 (1,2,3) - can you try move the "2,3" part a Little bit down? like https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8197827 this?

2. 00:40:791 (3,4,1) - should this part have an equal spacing? :S sorry if im wrong

3. 01:04:791 (3,4) - in my (maybe wrong) opinión, this sliders shouldnt be different, it kinda doesnt fit in the song, try looking at 01:06:124 (3,4) for example

Forever (*Together*) with you- (bad pun to a rick astley song :s)

1. 00:27:458 (3,4) - for me (i think im wrong again xd) this sliders should be the same (i mean, something like 00:31:458 (3,4) they are kinda the same)

2. 00:45:458 (1,2) - separate this sliders a bit more, they look too close

3. 01:09:124 (4,5,1) - move the circles a bit down, like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8197879

4. 01:18:458 (4,1) - fix the place of the purple slider like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8198017

i hope this kinda helps uwu

Shishou

512 posts

Joined November 2014

Topic Starter

Shishou 2017-05-28T13:28:37+00:00

Joe Castle wrote:
Hi! i dont really know if you posted this map on #modreq or i saw you needed a mod :S but anyway, i think my mod will help a Little bit at least :S
I hope it helps:

Tyrant Easy:

1. 00:08:124 (1) - i think this slider (i mean they way its made) doesnt fit with the cheerful song, try doing this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8197706 (i know isnt place well, but im just showing you my idea of how it can look that specific slider)

2. 01:03:458 (4,1) - give this sliders the same spacing you used in the rest of the map uwu so they dont collide

3. 01:20:124 (1,2) - same reason as #2 here

Finshie Normal:

1. It looks amazing :3

Hard:

1. 00:14:791 (1,2) - why not giving this part the same spacing between their objects like 00:14:124 (3,4,5) ? im saying this because the space between the Green slider and the first circle looks weird (this is just my opinión, sorry if im wrong)

2. 00:24:124 (1,2,3) - try doing something like this? :S https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8197780

3. 00:43:958 (3) - move this circle probably to X:132-Y:360 or a similar coordinate, so there is a pretty good spacing between the sliders and the circle (maybe im wrong by saying that :S)

4. 00:54:791 (1,2,3) - kind of the same problem in #3, move the circle in a way that it can créate a cute triangle with the sliders (kinda like this *sorry for bad example x.x http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8197805)

5. 00:58:124 (3,4,1) - i dont know if i can say that this objects should have a equal spacing between them, but idk

6. 01:18:124 (3,4) - why not trying the same thing you did at 01:19:458 (3,4) ?

Insane:

1. 00:29:458 (1,2,3) - can you try move the "2,3" part a Little bit down? like https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8197827 this?

2. 00:40:791 (3,4,1) - should this part have an equal spacing? :S sorry if im wrong

3. 01:04:791 (3,4) - in my (maybe wrong) opinión, this sliders shouldnt be different, it kinda doesnt fit in the song, try looking at 01:06:124 (3,4) for example
flow is better this way

Forever (*Together*) with you- (bad pun to a rick astley song :s)

1. 00:27:458 (3,4) - for me (i think im wrong again xd) this sliders should be the same (i mean, something like 00:31:458 (3,4) they are kinda the same) it's fine

2. 00:45:458 (1,2) - separate this sliders a bit more, they look too close

3. 01:09:124 (4,5,1) - move the circles a bit down, like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8197879

4. 01:18:458 (4,1) - fix the place of the purple slider like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8198017

i hope this kinda helps uwu

no reply = fixed
thanks for modding

aotti

51 posts

Joined April 2016

aotti 2017-05-29T14:47:14+00:00

Hard, ingame chat

21:14 lucciachan: is dat map really need another mods?
21:15 Shishou: nope
21:15 Shishou: i need a hard diff
21:15 lucciachan: need a hard diff?
21:16 Shishou: wait
21:16 Shishou: what map are you talking abou?
21:16 lucciachan: ur map
21:16 *lucciachan is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1290327 Little Glee Monster - Dakara, Hitori ja nai [Hard]]
21:16 lucciachan: u asking for NM
21:17 Shishou: ohh
21:17 Shishou: yes
21:17 Shishou: i need mod
21:17 Shishou: i thought you're talking abut this map
21:17 *Shishou is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1304276 Kokoru Genjin - Chiisana Koi no Uta (Synth Rock Cover) [Extra]]
21:17 lucciachan: lol
21:18 lucciachan: if u dont get any mods, maybe ur map is already good
21:18 lucciachan: good enough
21:19 Shishou: nah
21:19 lucciachan: hm....
21:19 lucciachan: mapping is harder than bigblack
21:20 Shishou: lol
21:20 lucciachan: i dont really cant give mods for this map, but can u....
21:21 lucciachan: um wait, my english bad
21:21 lucciachan: can u try..
21:21 Shishou: can i try what?
21:23 lucciachan: 00:34:958 i dont really know, but if u add whistle hitsound on slider tail, is that feel better?
21:23 lucciachan: and here 00:36:291
21:24 lucciachan: 00:36:291
21:24 lucciachan: oh,
21:24 lucciachan: this is hard diff
21:25 Shishou: oke
21:25 lucciachan: just learn some mapping stuff from phisi videos, but still need more...
21:25 Shishou: pishi
21:25 lucciachan: oh
21:26 lucciachan: sry, i dont remember
21:26 Shishou: pishifat xD
21:26 lucciachan: lel, ya
21:28 Shishou: good luck in mapping xD
21:29 lucciachan: lel, mapping sux but i want get ranked :p
21:30 Shishou: ye i know xD
21:32 lucciachan: oh
21:32 lucciachan: sir
21:32 Shishou: yes?
21:34 lucciachan: 00:41:208 (3) can u move this circle to x331 y339 for better looks? *sryfordamnenglish
21:34 Shishou: what duff?
21:34 Shishou: diff*
21:34 lucciachan: still hard XD
21:34 *lucciachan is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1290327 Little Glee Monster - Dakara, Hitori ja nai [Hard]]
21:34 lucciachan: cant move my hand to other diff :p
21:36 Shishou: moved
21:36 lucciachan: kk
21:36 lucciachan: i will try
21:36 lucciachan: trying giving good mods for this map
21:36 lucciachan: cuz i like the song too
21:37 Shishou: i like you too >///<
21:37 lucciachan: oh
21:37 Shishou: jk
21:37 lucciachan: so dat emoticon mean shy? lol
21:37 Shishou: yes xD
21:37 lucciachan: XD
21:37 lucciachan: nice, i need more emoticon...
21:38 Shishou:

21:38 lucciachan: um, should i repost my mods to forum?
21:38 Shishou: hey
21:38 Shishou: sure
21:38 Shishou: i was about to say that ^ xD
21:38 lucciachan: lol
21:38 lucciachan: um
21:38 lucciachan: i will take ss
21:38 Shishou: just type /savelog
21:38 lucciachan: oh
21:38 lucciachan: god
21:38 lucciachan: tyvm XD
21:39 lucciachan: almost catch ss
21:39 lucciachan: #ripengpls

Shishou

512 posts

Joined November 2014

Topic Starter

Shishou 2017-05-29T14:47:46+00:00

thanks for modding

makisokk

928 posts

Joined August 2013

makisokk 2017-05-30T08:44:51+00:00

Hi, M4M
[General]

BG should be 1360x768 or 1920x1080-1200
01:22:791 - Why kiai don't end here?

[Tyrant's Easy]

00:06:791 (3) - I think it's better to remove this note and finish the slider here 00:06:624 - , because there is a strong sound there, beginners can be mistaken in this moment
00:09:124 (2,3) - This moment is similar to the previous one
00:31:458 (4,1) - I think we need to make a stronger angle, only my opinion
00:40:124 (1) - Remove nc
00:41:458 (1) - nc. I think it would be better not to lose the beginner

[Finshie's Normal]

00:06:624 (3) - Why ignore stong sound?
00:12:124 (4) - I do not know if she touches the stripe of accuracy of hit, but in my opinion she popodayet on it, it is not possible to play objects out of the fields and hurt the hp bar, the number of points and combos.
00:45:124 (6,1) - blanket?
01:15:458 (2) - A little bit touches the strip of accuracy

[Hard]

00:04:124 (1) - Why nc?
00:05:124 (4,1) - Do blanket
In kiai Increase cv to 1.1-1.2x, kiai must play more dynamically than the whole map

[Isane]

00:05:124 (2,3,4,5) - Why you do this overmap?
I can not say anything more about the map except kiai
In kiai Increase cv to 1.1-1.2x, kiai must play more dynamically than the whole map

[Together]

In kiai Increase cv to 1.1-1.2x, kiai must play more dynamically than the whole map
00:56:124 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - I think that you could make this part more interesting, but not an star
01:01:458 (1,2,3) - I believe that here the curved flow

Okay, it's all good luck with map

zeliaR

430 posts

Joined June 2014

zeliaR 2017-05-30T10:18:12+00:00

Joe Castle wrote:
Tyrant Easy:

1. 00:08:124 (1) - i think this slider (i mean they way its made) doesnt fit with the cheerful song, try doing this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8197706 (i know isnt place well, but im just showing you my idea of how it can look that specific slider)

2. 01:03:458 (4,1) - give this sliders the same spacing you used in the rest of the map uwu so they dont collide

3. 01:20:124 (1,2) - same reason as #2 here

applied all. thanks for modding

makisokk wrote:
[Tyrant's Easy]
00:06:791 (3) - I think it's better to remove this note and finish the slider here 00:06:624 - , because there is a strong sound there, beginners can be mistaken in this moment
00:09:124 (2,3) - This moment is similar to the previous one
00:31:458 (4,1) - I think we need to make a stronger angle, only my opinion kinda weird
00:40:124 (1) - Remove nc it's fine
00:41:458 (1) - nc. I think it would be better not to lose the beginner there's no any downbeat here

no reply=applied/fixed
thanks for modding!

asfasda

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Shishou

512 posts

Joined November 2014

Topic Starter

Shishou 2017-05-30T11:38:36+00:00

UPDATED

Finshie

829 posts

Joined October 2012

Finshie 2017-05-30T12:57:25+00:00

makisokk wrote:
Hi, M4M

[Finshie's Normal]
00:06:624 (3) - Why ignore stong sound? focusing on vocals and its not that strong.
00:12:124 (4) - I do not know if she touches the stripe of accuracy of hit, but in my opinion she popodayet on it, it is not possible to play objects out of the fields and hurt the hp bar, the number of points and combos.
00:45:124 (6,1) - blanket?
01:15:458 (2) - A little bit touches the strip of accuracy
Okay, it's all good luck with map

no reply = fixed
thanks for mod!

update

osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: audio.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 57791
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 0.85
BeatDivisor: 2
GridSize: 16
TimelineZoom: 2.3

[Metadata]
Title:Dakara, Hitori ja nai
TitleUnicode:だから、ひとりじゃない
Artist:Little Glee Monster
ArtistUnicode:リトル・グリー・モンスター
Creator:Shishou
Version:Finshie's Normal
Source:僕のヒーローアカデミア 第2期
Tags:boku no hero academia my That's Why I'm not Alone  ending season 2 s2 2nd ed misaka 10032 tyrantseye2014 Finshie abanes16
BeatmapID:1293678
BeatmapSetID:610738

[Difficulty]
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CircleSize:3
OverallDifficulty:4
ApproachRate:5
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SliderTickRate:1

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Shishou

512 posts

Joined November 2014

Topic Starter

Shishou 2017-05-30T13:00:53+00:00

salamat bebe

Shishou

512 posts

Joined November 2014

Topic Starter

Shishou 2017-05-30T13:11:20+00:00

makisokk wrote:
Hi, M4M
[General]
BG should be 1360x768 or 1920x1080-1200
01:22:791 - Why kiai don't end here?
[Hard]
00:04:124 (1) - Why nc? Downbeat
00:05:124 (4,1) - Do blanket
In kiai Increase cv to 1.1-1.2x, kiai must play more dynamically than the whole map
[Isane]
00:05:124 (2,3,4,5) - Why you do this overmap?it's not overmapped
I can not say anything more about the map except kiai
In kiai Increase cv to 1.1-1.2x, kiai must play more dynamically than the whole map
[Together]
In kiai Increase cv to 1.1-1.2x, kiai must play more dynamically than the whole map
00:56:124 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - I think that you could make this part more interesting, but not an star what's wrong with the star?
01:01:458 (1,2,3) - I believe that here the curved flow what?
Okay, it's all good luck with map

thanks for modding
no reply = fixed

Einja

663 posts

Joined February 2015

Einja 2017-05-31T00:14:03+00:00

M4M

[together]
00:05:458 (1,3) - you should really blanket these and if you do, fix the stream to line up properly. blanket slider 1 head with slider 3

01:06:624 (6,1) - slight reading issue with the overlap it has currently
01:05:791 (2,1) - also slightly imperfect stacking, off by like 1 coordinate. stack slider 2 at x 232 y 218 to the end of slider 1's tail

[insane]
00:14:458 (4,2) - remove overlap, it looks ugly, this might look better http://prntscr.com/fe1bfx

00:26:124 (3,5) - ugly overlap zzz

00:36:791 (3,4,5,6) - you kinda used the exact opposite flow motion than to the previous 2 sliders. Ctrl + g 3 and 4 and readjust circle 3 for it to pair up with slider 2.

01:23:291 (3) - rotate by 20 degree for it to flow better and fix blanket with slider 4 once you do.

[the easy diff]
check aimod, ds issue on 00:49:958

that's all from me, good luck! (good map)

Shishou

512 posts

Joined November 2014

Topic Starter

Shishou 2017-05-31T03:57:25+00:00

Einja wrote:
M4M

[together]
00:05:458 (1,3) - you should really blanket these and if you do, fix the stream to line up properly. blanket slider 1 head with slider 3wat

01:06:624 (6,1) - slight reading issue with the overlap it has currently
01:05:791 (2,1) - also slightly imperfect stacking, off by like 1 coordinate. stack slider 2 at x 232 y 218 to the end of slider 1's tail

[insane]
00:14:458 (4,2) - remove overlap, it looks ugly, this might look better http://prntscr.com/fe1bfx ew

00:26:124 (3,5) - ugly overlap zzz zzz

00:36:791 (3,4,5,6) - you kinda used the exact opposite flow motion than to the previous 2 sliders. Ctrl + g 3 and 4 and readjust circle 3 for it to pair up with slider 2. i ctrl+g 5 and 6 instead

01:23:291 (3) - rotate by 20 degree for it to flow better and fix blanket with slider 4 once you do.

[the easy diff]
check aimod, ds issue on 00:49:958

that's all from me, good luck! (good map)

thanks for modding
no reply = fixed

Drummer

151 posts

Joined March 2014

Drummer 2017-05-31T19:45:20+00:00

m4m

mod

[General]
soft-hitclap2 is unused

can't find anything on easy

[Normal]
00:13:124 (6,1) - this could be a better blanket
01:26:958 (1) - the ending hitsound is quite strong, though in the song it's not emphasized. maybe lower the volume at the end? possibly applies to all difficulties, not only normal

[Hard]
00:31:791 (4,1) - improve that overlap, looks awkward right now imo
00:36:458 (2,3,4,5) - vertical flip that section? with minor adjustments it would flow a little better i think
00:40:124 (1) - might be unnecessary because there are no triples in the map, but i think it would fit here if moved closer to 00:39:458 (3)
00:51:791 (3,4) - slightly more spaced than 00:51:458 (2,3). maybe make them equal?
00:57:458 (1) - this note feels like it needs a stronger hitsound along with the soft one's it already has, maybe add a kick or something
01:26:874 (1) - same as normal

[Insane]
00:04:291 (1) - no nc here, maybe either on 00:04:124 (2) or 00:05:124 (2)
00:07:291 (2) - curve this towards 00:07:624 (3)
00:26:458 (4,5) - too big spacing maybe. move 00:26:458 (4) to around x397 y53 and 00:26:624 (5) to x344 y237
00:29:958 (2,4) - blanket?
00:46:458 (4,5) - improve this blanket too
00:47:458 (7,8) - put the circle a little higher so it would form a straight line with the slider instead of leaning to the left?
00:50:458 (4,1) - move the first slider to exactly the center of the long slider, it's just a bit off
00:57:458 (1) - same as in hard
01:26:874 (1) - again same as other diffs

[Together]
ar = 9.2?

00:05:458 (1,3) - this blanket can be improved
00:26:458 (4) - move that a bit further away from 00:26:791 (1)
00:30:458 (5,1) - make these parallel
00:57:458 (1) - same as in hard
01:26:874 (1) - same as others

neat. good luck

Finshie

829 posts

Joined October 2012

Finshie 2017-05-31T20:23:16+00:00

- Drummer- wrote:
m4m
mod
[General]

[Normal]
00:13:124 (6,1) - this could be a better blanket not updated. shishou pls
01:26:958 (1) - the ending hitsound is quite strong, though in the song it's not emphasized. maybe lower the volume at the end? possibly applies to all difficulties, not only normal fixed

neat. good luck

thanks for mod!

Shishou

512 posts

Joined November 2014

Topic Starter

Shishou 2017-06-01T03:05:29+00:00

- Drummer- wrote:
m4m
mod
[General]
soft-hitclap2 is unused finshie is using it in his diff

can't find anything on easy

[Hard]
00:31:791 (4,1) - improve that overlap, looks awkward right now imo
00:36:458 (2,3,4,5) - vertical flip that section? with minor adjustments it would flow a little better i think
00:40:124 (1) - might be unnecessary because there are no triples in the map, but i think it would fit here if moved closer to 00:39:458 (3)
00:51:791 (3,4) - slightly more spaced than 00:51:458 (2,3). maybe make them equal?
00:57:458 (1) - this note feels like it needs a stronger hitsound along with the soft one's it already has, maybe add a kick or something nah
01:26:874 (1) - same as normal

[Insane]
00:04:291 (1) - no nc here, maybe either on 00:04:124 (2) or 00:05:124 (2)
00:07:291 (2) - curve this towards 00:07:624 (3)
00:26:458 (4,5) - too big spacing maybe. move 00:26:458 (4) to around x397 y53 and 00:26:624 (5) to x344 y237
00:29:958 (2,4) - blanket? nah intentional
00:46:458 (4,5) - improve this blanket too
00:47:458 (7,8) - put the circle a little higher so it would form a straight line with the slider instead of leaning to the left?
00:50:458 (4,1) - move the first slider to exactly the center of the long slider, it's just a bit off
00:57:458 (1) - same as in hard same as in hard
01:26:874 (1) - again same as other diffs

[Together]
ar = 9.2?

00:05:458 (1,3) - this blanket can be improved
00:26:458 (4) - move that a bit further away from 00:26:791 (1)
00:30:458 (5,1) - make these parallel
00:57:458 (1) - same as in hard
01:26:874 (1) - same as others

neat. good luck

no reply =fixed
thanks for modding

AlphaDude95

105 posts

Joined October 2015

AlphaDude95 2017-06-01T14:15:07+00:00

m4m

NORMAL

00:06:624 - there´s a loud sound here
00:46:458 - make this vocal clickable
*don´t be afraid to space out the 1/1 timing more, it´ll help the player distinguish the timing

HARD

00:03:791 (1,2,1,2) - i´m afraid this might not be readable
00:12:958 (3,4,1) - blanket off
00:19:791 (4,1) - why does the downbeat get buffed in spacing in only one case?
00:24:124 (1) - overlap with 00:23:458 (3)
00:26:458 (4) - straight might be better here
00:37:458 - ds could be slightly lower for the calmer part
00:56:124 (1,2,3,4) - space out more
00:59:958 (5) - space equally
01:09:124 (4,5,1) - why did the downbeat get lower spacing?
01:11:958 - make this vocal clickable
01:13:291 - ^ (and other important vocals i didn´t point out)
01:17:958 (2,3) - why does the slider go against circular flow at this point?
01:25:458 - ds should increase like in insane and extra

INSANE

00:06:458 (4,1) - blanket opportunity
00:09:458 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - i would make either all sliders or jumps
00:10:791 (1) - ctrl + j here?
00:13:458 (1,2,3,4) this pattern could´ve been better if 1,2 was copied onto 3,4
00:19:124 (1,2,3) - equal the distance?
00:21:458 (1,3) - the blanket is slightly off
00:26:124 (3,5) - make a 1/2 overlap
00:26:791 (1,2,3) - equilateral triangle would look nice here
00:29:458 (1,2,3) - ^
00:30:124 (3,4) - make them copypasted
00:32:791 (3,4) - ^
00:47:124 (6) - nc
00:47:458 (7,8) - i feel like one object here is better
00:51:458 (3,4,5) - make into an equilateral triangle
00:59:458 (3,1) - overlap is off
00:59:791 (4,5,1) - could be equilateral
01:03:291 (2,4) - blanket off
01:10:458 (4,1) - ^
01:17:458 (1,3) - make them parallel
01:18:124 (3,4,1) - equilateral triangle w/ the sliderends

TOGETHER

00:05:458 (1) - the blanket with 00:05:958 is off by a bit
00:06:458 (4) - this could make a 1/2 overlap with 00:05:791 on the slidertail
00:08:458 (2) - ^ w/ 00:07:291
00:09:124 (4) - overlap with 00:09:791 is a tiny bit off
00:12:124 (1) - i recommend a straighter slider for better flow
00:13:124 (4,1) - the blanket is off, check the approach circle
00:17:124 (4,1) - ^
00:22:458 (1,3) - that should be a full overlap
00:22:791 (1,3) - same with half overlap
00:23:291 (2,4) - ^
00:26:124 (3,5) - blanket off
00:31:458 (3,1) - again, this could be a 1/2 overlap
00:35:124 (2,3) - these hitobjects are too far apart imo
00:46:124 (2,3) - blanket off
00:57:458 (1) - the hitsound is nice but it´s way too long, consider cutting it/ fading it out
01:00:624 (1,2,3,4,5) - you could make this pattern with the tool to make it more geometrical (ctrl + shift + d)
01:11:291 (2,4,6) - at least these three should be equal distance apart
01:12:791 (3,5) - overlap is off
01:23:124 (2,5) - i´d like to see some emphasis on these
01:24:458 (2,5) - ^

Overall, I enjoyed both the Insane and Extra, the jumps are nice and satisfying to hit. Good luck!

Finshie

829 posts

Joined October 2012

Finshie 2017-06-01T14:53:07+00:00

AlphaDude95 wrote:
m4m

NORMAL

00:06:624 - there´s a loud sound here i dont wanna make the 1/2 chain longer and im focused more on vocals.
00:46:458 - make this vocal clickable nah its fine.
*don´t be afraid to space out the 1/1 timing more, it´ll help the player distinguish the timing i think its spaced enough can be easily distinguished since i only used .85x ds/

Overall, I enjoyed both the Insane and Extra, the jumps are nice and satisfying to hit. Good luck!

update since i forgot to put one on last mod.

osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: audio.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 57791
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 0.85
BeatDivisor: 2
GridSize: 16
TimelineZoom: 2.3

[Metadata]
Title:Dakara, Hitori ja nai
TitleUnicode:だから、ひとりじゃない
Artist:Little Glee Monster
ArtistUnicode:リトル・グリー・モンスター
Creator:Shishou
Version:Finshie's Normal
Source:僕のヒーローアカデミア 第2期
Tags:boku no hero academia my That's Why I'm not Alone  ending season 2 s2 2nd ed misaka 10032 tyrantseye2014 Finshie abanes16
BeatmapID:1293678
BeatmapSetID:610738

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:4
CircleSize:3
OverallDifficulty:4
ApproachRate:5
SliderMultiplier:1.1
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
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//Break Periods
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//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples

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37,49,56624,1,2,0:0:0:0:
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Kaitjuh

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Kaitjuh 2017-06-01T20:55:12+00:00

hell yea i love this ending

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Tyrant's Easy

Overall the diff is consistent, but 00:16:124 (1,2,3,4) - This rhythm is like the entirety of the difficulty. It's good to have consistency but imo you could have used some rhythm varieties to make the map more interesting. Like even in the kiai it still uses the same rhythm pattern which is kind of a shame

Finshie's Normal

Nice!

Hard

Same problem as the Easy imo, too little rhythm variation with 00:05:458 (1,2,3,4) - being pretty much the entire diff. The beginning of the kiai was decent but then you went straight back to mapping that exact same pattern.

Insane

01:17:124 (4,1) - 01:18:458 (4,1) - 01:19:791 (4,1) - the following patterns could be a bit more emphasized because of the downbeat.

would understand if no kds, i basically said the same thing over and over again.

Shishou

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Shishou 2017-06-02T02:39:39+00:00

AlphaDude95 wrote:
m4m

HARD

00:03:791 (1,2,1,2) - i´m afraid this might not be readable idk. an experience mapper (former bn) suggested that.
00:12:958 (3,4,1) - blanket off
00:19:791 (4,1) - why does the downbeat get buffed in spacing in only one case?
00:24:124 (1) - overlap with 00:23:458 (3)
00:26:458 (4) - straight might be better here i'll keep it that way
00:37:458 - ds could be slightly lower for the calmer part
00:56:124 (1,2,3,4) - space out more
00:59:958 (5) - space equally
01:09:124 (4,5,1) - why did the downbeat get lower spacing?
01:11:958 - make this vocal clickable i don't think this vocal is nesccesary
01:13:291 - ^ (and other important vocals i didn´t point out) ^
01:17:958 (2,3) - why does the slider go against circular flow at this point? is that a problem?
01:25:458 - ds should increase like in insane and extra

INSANE

00:06:458 (4,1) - blanket opportunity intentional
00:09:458 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - i would make either all sliders or jumps
00:10:791 (1) - ctrl + j here?
00:13:458 (1,2,3,4) this pattern could´ve been better if 1,2 was copied onto 3,4
00:19:124 (1,2,3) - equal the distance?
00:21:458 (1,3) - the blanket is slightly off
00:26:124 (3,5) - make a 1/2 overlap nah hard to read
00:26:791 (1,2,3) - equilateral triangle would look nice here
00:29:458 (1,2,3) - ^
00:30:124 (3,4) - make them copypasted
00:32:791 (3,4) - ^
00:47:124 (6) - nc why?
00:47:458 (7,8) - i feel like one object here is better
00:51:458 (3,4,5) - make into an equilateral triangle
00:59:458 (3,1) - overlap is off
00:59:791 (4,5,1) - could be equilateral
01:03:291 (2,4) - blanket off
01:10:458 (4,1) - ^
01:17:458 (1,3) - make them parallel
01:18:124 (3,4,1) - equilateral triangle w/ the sliderends

TOGETHER

00:05:458 (1) - the blanket with 00:05:958 is off by a bit
00:06:458 (4) - this could make a 1/2 overlap with 00:05:791 on the slidertail
00:08:458 (2) - ^ w/ 00:07:291
00:09:124 (4) - overlap with 00:09:791 is a tiny bit off
00:12:124 (1) - i recommend a straighter slider for better flow flow is better this way
00:13:124 (4,1) - the blanket is off, check the approach circle
00:17:124 (4,1) - ^
00:22:458 (1,3) - that should be a full overlap
00:22:791 (1,3) - same with half overlap
00:23:291 (2,4) - ^
00:26:124 (3,5) - blanket off
00:31:458 (3,1) - again, this could be a 1/2 overlap
00:35:124 (2,3) - these hitobjects are too far apart imo
00:46:124 (2,3) - blanket off
00:57:458 (1) - the hitsound is nice but it´s way too long, consider cutting it/ fading it out
01:00:624 (1,2,3,4,5) - you could make this pattern with the tool to make it more geometrical (ctrl + shift + d)
01:11:291 (2,4,6) - at least these three should be equal distance apart
01:12:791 (3,5) - overlap is off
01:23:124 (2,5) - i´d like to see some emphasis on these
01:24:458 (2,5) - ^

Overall, I enjoyed both the Insane and Extra, the jumps are nice and satisfying to hit. Good luck!

thanks for modding
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Kaitjuh wrote:
hell yea i love this ending

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Hard
Same problem as the Easy imo, too little rhythm variation with 00:05:458 (1,2,3,4) - being pretty much the entire diff. The beginning of the kiai was decent but then you went straight back to mapping that exact same pattern. well they have the same beat. will consider if some experience modder point this out
Insane
01:17:124 (4,1) - 01:18:458 (4,1) - 01:19:791 (4,1) - the following patterns could be a bit more emphasized because of the downbeat.
would understand if no kds, i basically said the same thing over and over again.

thanks for modding
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