1. Easy (1.55 stars, 67 notes)
2. Hard (4.46 stars, 133 notes)
3. Normal (3.44 stars, 103 notes)

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1. 【hard】的PreviewTime是33619，跟其他2个难度不一致，请保持一致
2. audio lead-in 1秒感觉略短,1.5秒或者2秒会更合适?

1. 00:42:846 (3) - 我觉得这里用soft finish感觉会更好,音量还可以更大,这样更有一音节结束后高潮开始的感觉
2. 00:46:717 (3) - 这个finish音感觉不合适,去掉或者用小音量的normal finish音会更好
3. 01:02:443 - 其实这Break也没必要,不过这个不是什么大问题,看你自己喜好吧

1. 00:38:249 (3) - 这个不管是玩还是听都很不顺，建议改成00:38:491 - 00:38:733的slider或者2个note
2. 00:42:846 (1) - 可以考虑加soft finish
3. 00:50:588 () - 音量可以再大一些

1. 00:09:459 (3) - 个人建议jump的地方new combo,这样会更好辨认,当然还是看你自己喜好
2. 00:16:475 (3,5) - ^
3. 00:18:411 (4) - ^,为了美观也可以3那儿new combo
4. 00:25:669 (6) - ^
5. 00:42:846 (1) - 建议加soft finish
6. 01:01:233 (5,6) - 不太好辨认,另外也不是你那么美观,建议要么把5上下翻转一下,要么把6放出来点

NoHItter wrote:

General
Add a space between ~ and (TV Size). It should be titled "Inori~You Raise Me Up~ (TV Size)"
Source should be Romeo x Juliet Both fixed!

Easy
00:19:862 (1) - Spinner doesn't fit here. Fixed
00:50:104 (3) - IMO there should be emphasis on 00:50:588, so I suggest you shorten slider to 00:50:588 and add a note at 00:51:072. Fixed
01:02:685 (x) - Just the break altogether. Removed break!

Normal
Audio Lead in is inconsistent with other diffs. (1500 in Normal compared to 2000 in other diffs) Fixed
00:04:136 (3) - How the slider plays (especially since it has a repeat) is odd. Fixed
00:31:233 (3) - Maybe make the volume increase little by little with each repeat instead of just once. Fixed

Hard
00:09:459 (5) - This jump doesn't fit at all. It plays awkwardly for me at least. Perhaps move it closer to (4)? Better yet - Remove the jump altogether. They usually don't fit well with songs like this. Fixed
00:14:419 (1) - I don't think this is a great place to put a spinner. Keep this spinner for now
00:15:991 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2) - I suggest against these kind of spacing. Although it's readable, it plays oddly. Oh,I have change this pattern during you were modding this.
00:25:669 (6) - Space this nearer? X
00:31:233 (5) - Maybe make the volume increase little by little with each repeat instead of just once. Fixed
00:58:088 (8,9) - Found the spacing here kind of sudden. Place them closer to the previous objects? X
01:00:628 (3,4) - Stack these. They're kind of confusing (and ugly) as is. They also may confuse the player at 01:01:233 (5,6). As both overlap the slider the same way. Fixed
01:08:128 (1,1) - Extend the first one to 01:12:846, and make the second one start at 01:13:814? Fixed

Kytoxid wrote:

[General]

Continuing the title nazi, usually you put a space with the ~ like, "Inori ~You Raise Me Up~ (TV Size)". As I know,that's unnecessary,keep it for me unil someone mention this again.
Could delete the .osb, not a big deal. You could end up with two soon though, because of the title change, so maybe you should. k

Very high definition video there. It looks like it's supposed to be widescreen though, with the constant black bars at the top and bottom, so maybe you can get a video guru to edit it so that those are cut out. Dunno if it'll make a difference. I can't see any problem here

01:13:814 (1) - Maybe delete this spinner; there's no real good place for the end to land without dragging it on too long, and the previous spinner ends in a fine spot. k

Add "Prayer" to tags? Inori means prayer. k

[Easy]

00:02:927 (2) - From here until 00:17:685 (1), every gap is a 1/1 gap. That's pretty boring for something that lasts a quarter of the map. Change something up? For example, I recommend changing 00:11:395 (1,2) to something like: http://puu.sh/4kXq It's particularly bad because the song there is already very boring. D: I also place some 1/2 slider here and there D:
00:36:556 (2,3) - Move both of them 1/2 back, and lose the repeats? Good opportunity for an easy 1/2 pattern here. Maybe remove the 4 if you do this just to make it a bit easier. k.
01:02:201 (4) - This break is too short to be useful, I'd just change this 4 to a slider that lasts until 01:04:136. Good chance to draw something nice-looking. Fixed in other way~

[Normal]

00:08:975 (4) - This might be a bit hard for this difficulty, maybe use one less repeat and add a note instead? X,these slider are follow the spacing and music.
01:00:024 (2,3) - Not really lined up, intentional? If so, maybe move them a bit farther.Yes,I made it on prupose!
01:07:282 (3) - Mini-nazi: Move the repeat of this slider a bit farther from the 2, so that the distance between 2-3 and 2-repeat is the same?
k
[Hard]

00:14:419 (1) - Not sure about this spinner, a repeat on the 5 and a few more notes would be better imo. I must put a spinner here because the vocla sounds off here.
00:16:233 (1,2,3) - Don't really like this part, the notes land on counterintuitive spots and there's no music really either. k,remove the jump here.
00:18:411 (4) - This note is good though, and I'd put the new combo on it instead of the next one, and also properly space this with the note after. k
00:25:185 (5,6) - Bad place for a jump. k
00:41:636 (5,1) - Once again, slightly not-aligned, intentional? This is an error.
00:44:540 (6) - New combo for the jump? k
00:49:136 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Too quiet, can't hear myself bei ng bad at osu! here; raise the volume? k
00:57:362 (7,8) - This jump is surprising too. k
01:07:040 (1,2,3,4,5) - Messy, make this neater? Hum,I guess it's fine now~At least it doesn't hard to play!

1. folder check OK
2. 我也建議Inori和~中間加一個空白, 不過既然原title是全形的~, 最後怎麼決定的確完全見人見智._.

1. 00:11:395 (1) - 是不是改成1拍的repeat slider或圈+slider? vocal或鋼琴面都給我這感覺
2. 00:51:072 (4,1) - new combo提前

1. 我覺得過於強調vocal的感覺了..有些部份可能不太直覺
2. 00:29:298 (1,2,3) - (design mod) 我的話感覺會貼鋼琴, 29:298-30:265放一個一拍的repeat slider, 起頭的白線到藍線為止放紅色錨點去弄29:177-29:298和30:145-30:265的裝飾音, 30:749放空, (3)會拆成slider+repeat slider, 後面三個音比前面兩個要強
3. 00:58:088 (6) - 雖然懂為什麼, 但是紅線擺圈白線開始slider可能好些. 保持原樣的話紅色錨點的位置則可以調整一下 (要敲鼓的感覺是得往左移, 要vocal則是往右, 現在在一個沒感覺的位置上

1. no problem

pieguy1372 wrote:

General:

-Filesize: 20798kb I know it's only a little bit over 20mb, but still... The maximum is 24mb,so it's fine now~

Easy:

00:06:556 (3) - (nazi) align with (2)? Make it on purpose.
00:17:685 (1) - New combo? ?What do you mean?I have already done a new combo here.
00:21:314 (2) - Remove new combo? T_T

Normal:

00:16:475 (5) - New combo? k
00:21:314 (5) - New combo? No,sorry.

Hard:

00:57:362 (1) - (nazi) This? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/130460 (then make 2 a rotated version of this) k
01:02:201 (1) - (nazi) This? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/130462 k.

loveFantasy wrote:

8-)

[General]

1. folder check OK
2. 我也建議Inori和~中間加一個空白, 不過既然原title是全形的~, 最後怎麼決定的確完全見人見智._. 好把..

[Easy]

1. 00:11:395 (1) - 是不是改成1拍的repeat slider或圈+slider? vocal或鋼琴面都給我這感覺 這裏其實在跟剛琴
2. 00:51:072 (4,1) - new combo提前暫時保留

[Normal]

1. 我覺得過於強調vocal的感覺了..有些部份可能不太直覺
2. 00:29:298 (1,2,3) - (design mod) 我的話感覺會貼鋼琴, 29:298-30:265放一個一拍的repeat slider, 起頭的白線到藍線為止放紅色錨點去弄29:177-29:298和30:145-30:265的裝飾音, 30:749放空, (3)會拆成slider+repeat slider, 後面三個音比前面兩個要強 仔細聽的話這裏vocal其實off掉..1拍note會比較保險.
3. 00:58:088 (6) - 雖然懂為什麼, 但是紅線擺圈白線開始slider可能好些. 保持原樣的話紅色錨點的位置則可以調整一下 (要敲鼓的感覺是得往左移, 要vocal則是往右, 現在在一個沒感覺的位置上 k

BakaHuang wrote:

[Easy]
00:05:588(2,3)-这个是不是要在同一直线上？

感觉前面的音量可以再大一点

其他没发现什么问题

好歌 小时候超喜欢

edit: no kds

• 我玩下来感觉offset-5。
  主歌部分10%的音量实在是太小了，这样效果显得很不好，既然你已经将slider静音了个人认为至少也要20%。
  00:33:411 - 用normal不是挺好的么。说实话你的自订音效在这里基本听不出……

• 01:04:015 - 对准终点就可以了不然音量突然一变不好听。这类的都这样重复的就不提了。

• 01:01:959 (4,1) - 4 new combo,1取消。

• 建议中圈，在这么低的AR下大圈实在略显呆板。
  01:00:628 (3) - 有点突兀。
  01:06:435 (6) - 同上。

kiddly wrote:

[General]

• 我玩下来感觉offset-5。恩好.
  主歌部分10%的音量实在是太小了，这样效果显得很不好，既然你已经将slider静音了个人认为至少也要20%。可以!
  00:33:411 - 用normal不是挺好的么。说实话你的自订音效在这里基本听不出…… 這裏我基本上是跟定音鼓的,我就加了volume.應該會好一點.

[Easy]

• 01:04:015 - 对准终点就可以了不然音量突然一变不好听。这类的都这样重复的就不提了。可!

[Normal]

• 01:01:959 (4,1) - 4 new combo,1取消。好的.

[Hard]

• 建议中圈，在这么低的AR下大圈实在略显呆板。很呆嗎 囧
  01:00:628 (3) - 有点突兀。這裏2-連好聽阿
  01:06:435 (6) - 同上。同上

frost-b-spec wrote:

thx reqs~

nice,perfect...XD

little sugguestion
[Hard]
OD+1~2 Now are okey because I don't want such a slient song to be really hard to catch!

Kytoxid wrote:

[Normal]

01:01:712 - Add a note? k

[Hard]

00:21:309 (2,3) - This jump felt kinda unnatural, since it occurs in the middle of a word. If you keep it, I think you should new combo it. k,did a new combo.
00:25:664 (6) - Remove, or move 1/2 back? k
00:50:341 (1) - Hard to guess when this note occurs. Really?Reduced spacing
01:01:954 (6) - Partially covered, doesn't look too great. ok!

Kytoxid wrote:

Created didn't really feel like putting a space between Inori and ~, I didn't think it was such a huge problem, so bubbled.

in the box!

James2250 wrote:

-The timing sounds pretty early to me at the moment, I might try and get that double checked

• BPM 124, Offset 305
  BPM 124, Offset 31260
  BPM 124, Offset 62215

James2250 wrote:

-I know I have said this before for videos 3:00+ but for a 1:30 minute video it really shouldn't need to be 18mb, see if you can find someone good at video editing to fix that for you without reducing the overall quality too much Ok,did it.
-The first section sounds kind of strange being so quiet (5% is still hard to hear imo) and might annoy some players. Make it at least 10-15%? trun to 10%
-The timing sounds pretty early to me at the moment, I might try and get that double checked Has been checked by aabc.Seems good now~

Doomsday wrote:

Hmm. I'm still not quite happy with the timing. Happy's timing is pretty good, but it still goes off at parts, mainly in the first section (Start - 00:35:142). The piano and drums don't play exactly on the beat because it's a live recording, but there are still parts where it feels like the entire section goes early or late.

I've had a mess around with Happy's timing, and I got this, I think this feels much better in the dodgy parts. I'm confident with it:

BPM: 123.00 Offset: 295
BPM: 124.00 Offset: 4175
BPM: 125.00 Offset: 59820
BPM: 124.00 Offset: 62200 //Yeah,change the timing base on happy's one.I mean add these on happy's Timing :S

As for the rest of the map, it's pretty nice. . Just one thing that bugged me on Hard:

01:07:056 (1,2,3,4,5) - When the rest of the map is slow, having a big jumpy bit right at the end like this doesn't feel too good to me. Perhaps you could use normal spacing for these instead of having big jumps? //Alright then,changed it to normal spacing and it should be fine now~

And that's about it. Call me back if you look at these, and I'll recheck ~

Doomsday wrote:

Oh. I guess I worded it wrong. I meant you only needed my timing, not use that timing AND use happy's timing. Sorry So you only need those 4 timing sections I posted, and no others.

Everything else looks good. Sorry again

KayeSara wrote:

这样也叫bye guys么