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Natteke ft. tieff - Sunrise [Osu|Taiko]

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Strawberry
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This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2012年7月7日 at 22:04:54

Artist: Natteke ft. tieff
Title: Sunrise
Source: osu!stream
Tags: osu stream coiz iphone ipad ios SuzumiyaSama Yumeko Yuki AIR315 Yumeko_Yuki
BPM: 115
Filesize: 4087kb
Play Time: 01:59
Difficulties Available:
  1. AIR's Taiko Oni (4.83 stars, 501 notes)
  2. Expert (4.99 stars, 365 notes)
  3. Standard (4.24 stars, 194 notes)
  4. Suzumiya's Simple (2.3 stars, 129 notes)
  5. Yuki YukI (4.7 stars, 220 notes)
Download: Natteke ft. tieff - Sunrise
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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My First Ranked Map!
The song is from osu!stream (iphone&itouch&ipad's app)
Please REDOWNLOAD if you have download before 2012-Jul 6th.

(special thanks to SuzumiyaSama & Yumeko Yuki's guest diff !
AND AIR315's AWWWWWESOME TAIKO Diff~)
(Thanks aabc271 and HellDawn for Taiko and Simple,Standard,Yuki YukI BG~ >w<)

-Suzumiya's Simple(Easy) == 100%
-Standard(Normal+) == 100%
-Yuki YukI(Hard) == 100%
-Expert(Insane) == 100%
-AIR's Taiko == 100%

Thanks for playing!

Special Thanks(Modder list)
SuzumiyaSama
bakabaka
12BARRY21
kissfly
Niva
Byakugan249
S h i o n
Kawayi Rika
Nymph
bossandy
Anshi
L_P
Genkishi
Leorda
VocaloidTACU
wmfchris
stickmeister
merchat7
Scorpiour
nanda2009
AmamiyaYuko
kazenotama
bossandy
wmfchris
Hinsvar
Snowy Dream
HellDawn
Katty Pie
raririn
Real
Shulin
Leorda
-Baby Strawberry-
Maya-sama
pieguy1372
Leorda
Saturos-fangirl
lepidopodus
Derekku
wmfchris
The map is replace the original map(07th Expansion - Fly)
Last edited by Strawberry , edited 101 times in total.
dachooga
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dachooga
really awesome！

Strawberry wrote:

This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2011年8月31日 at 22:03:03

Artist: 07th Expansion
Title: Fly
Source: Umineko no Naku Koro ni Chiru
BPM: 180
Filesize: 3600kb
Play Time: 02:29
Difficulties Available:
  1. Extrame (5 stars, 613 notes)
Download: 07th Expansion - Fly
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Sun Rainbow
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Joined January 2011
Sun Rainbow
My Diff ?~~~~~~~~~~




这系统的限字规都是浮云呢~

Download: 07th Expansion - Fly (Strawberry) [Rainbow's Normal+].osu
SuzumiyaSama
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SuzumiyaSama
MOD+GD

expert和suzumiyasama's easy打包好了

Download: Natteke ft. tieff - Sunrise (Strawberry) [SuzumiyaSama's Easy].osu

Download: Natteke ft. tieff - Sunrise (Strawberry) [suzu mod].osu
Strawberry
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Strawberry

SuzumiyaSama wrote:

MOD+GD Thanks for mod&GD~~!

expert和suzumiyasama's easy打包好了
bakabaka
517 posts
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bakabaka
mod in irc :)
Strawberry
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bakabaka wrote:

mod in irc :)
:) thx~~bakabaka
Dino99
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Dino99
Hi~~!! :D

*把多餘沒用的綠線刪掉.......@@

*[SuzumiyaSama's Easy] [Stream] 忘了打Tags?

[SuzumiyaSama's Easy]

00:20:895 (1) - Finish

00:28:200 - ^

01:04:721 (1) - ^

01:07:852 (6) & 01:08:895 (1) - 疊到了~

01:29:253 - Remove Finish

01:29:775 (1) - Finish

01:30:808 (2) - 同上面~~ 把之前在第4拍的Finish改到第一拍,改的話後面順便~

01:36:026 (4) - Finish

01:56:905 (1,2,3,4,5) - 排成這樣? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/167965

[Stream]

音效部分....^ 第4拍----->第1拍 我是這樣覺得啦...

00:31:721 (5,6) - 也許用漂亮點@@ 這樣? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/167974

00:55:340 (3,4,5,6,7) - 不是很好看...這樣? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/167976

01:28:210 (4,5,6,7) - 排正點

[Expert]

00:09:427 (2,3) - 一點點沒疊到..

00:13:340 (3) - 拉好看點

00:19:862 (2) - 沒疊到

00:37:079 (9) - Finish

01:25:601 (3) - ^

01:28:992 (7) - ^

01:31:340 - Remove Finish...奇怪的地方><

01:50:123 (7) - Finish

01:50:123 (7) - Remove Finish

*Finish的位置怪怪的@@ 最好改改....

不錯的圖~

繼續加油~ :) :)
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Raging Bull
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Raging Bull

Strawberry wrote:

bakabaka wrote:

mod in irc :)
:) thx~~bakabaka
You should provide a log or summarize what was changed :v (Like added NC/some finish hitsound/blah blah)
Strawberry
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12BARRY21 wrote:

Hi~~!! :D

*把多餘沒用的綠線刪掉.......@@

*[SuzumiyaSama's Easy] [Stream] 忘了打Tags?

[SuzumiyaSama's Easy]

00:20:895 (1) - Finish

00:28:200 - ^

01:04:721 (1) - ^

01:07:852 (6) & 01:08:895 (1) - 疊到了~

01:29:253 - Remove Finish

01:29:775 (1) - Finish

01:30:808 (2) - 同上面~~ 把之前在第4拍的Finish改到第一拍,改的話後面順便~

01:36:026 (4) - Finish

01:56:905 (1,2,3,4,5) - 排成這樣? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/167965

[Stream]

音效部分....^ 第4拍----->第1拍 我是這樣覺得啦...

00:31:721 (5,6) - 也許用漂亮點@@ 這樣? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/167974

00:55:340 (3,4,5,6,7) - 不是很好看...這樣? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/167976

01:28:210 (4,5,6,7) - 排正點

[Expert]

00:09:427 (2,3) - 一點點沒疊到..

00:13:340 (3) - 拉好看點

00:19:862 (2) - 沒疊到

00:37:079 (9) - Finish

01:25:601 (3) - ^

01:28:992 (7) - ^

01:31:340 - Remove Finish...奇怪的地方><

01:50:123 (7) - Finish

01:50:123 (7) - Remove Finish

*Finish的位置怪怪的@@ 最好改改....

不錯的圖~

繼續加油~ :) :)
:) all fixed~~~thx very much!
Strawberry
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Raging Bull wrote:

You should provide a log or summarize what was changed :v (Like added NC/some finish hitsound/blah blah)
thanks to remind~
Ayakura Mei
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Ayakura Mei
有点dream的味道 ;)
Natteke
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Natteke
D:
Colin Hou
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Colin Hou

Natteke wrote:

D:
rofl
Strawberry
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Strawberry

Natteke wrote:

D:
:o The song's author
Lucy_Heartfilia_old
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Lucy_Heartfilia_old
General
歌结束了，要放跟绿线，KIMI TIME不能一直到MP3的底

Easy
00:35:514(2) 在往下偏一点，不要让 00:38:123(2) 挡住他，因为EASY的AR低，所以后面的NOTE出来的快，挡着不美观
01:07:340(5) 也下来一点好了，不麻烦的
01:20:905(6) 这个是EASY，距离一下子变短，肯定不行
01:41:253(3) 和(1)对齐

Stream
00:56:123 (6)(7) 和(3)对齐
01:36:036 (4)~(10) 放成一个等5边形.(4)(6),(7)(8)对齐,(5)放成和所有的距离=距,(9)(10)反正是覆盖的，没问题，前面调整好就OK

Expert
Stacking -1~2根据我下面有个地方提示你的问题
00:02:123(1)红线前面别放东西最好，而且这个转盘很不合适，BGM声音都没
00:40:210(2)这个条子最好结束的地方在下去点，不美观。我自己非常不喜欢弯条子，你MOD过我歌就知道了（全直的），很容易不美观
00:55:862(3) 和(2)倾斜度一样
01:02:514(7) GRID 下来一格
01:05:383(2)(3) 就是开头提到的改STACKING改到(2)(3)出来是和(1)的结尾重叠为止
01:48:557(1)和后面(5)这个排法不好，不是体现出难，是怪
01:58:992(1)也是，要么你前面4个分了开点，要么这个点拿到外面去，随便的

总体不错，细节问题多注意点。
Yumeko Yuki
135 posts
Joined December 2010
Yumeko Yuki
介不介意来个guestdiff :( (大概介于H和I吧)
Strawberry
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Strawberry

Yumeko Yuki wrote:

介不介意来个guestdiff :( (大概介于H和I吧)
:) 欢迎~
Strawberry
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kissfly wrote:

General
歌结束了，要放跟绿线，KIMI TIME不能一直到MP3的底

Easy
00:35:514(2) 在往下偏一点，不要让 00:38:123(2) 挡住他，因为EASY的AR低，所以后面的NOTE出来的快，挡着不美观
01:07:340(5) 也下来一点好了，不麻烦的
01:20:905(6) 这个是EASY，距离一下子变短，肯定不行
01:41:253(3) 和(1)对齐

Stream
00:56:123 (6)(7) 和(3)对齐
01:36:036 (4)~(10) 放成一个等5边形.(4)(6),(7)(8)对齐,(5)放成和所有的距离=距,(9)(10)反正是覆盖的，没问题，前面调整好就OK

Expert
Stacking -1~2根据我下面有个地方提示你的问题
00:02:123(1)红线前面别放东西最好，而且这个转盘很不合适，BGM声音都没
00:40:210(2)这个条子最好结束的地方在下去点，不美观。我自己非常不喜欢弯条子，你MOD过我歌就知道了（全直的），很容易不美观
00:55:862(3) 和(2)倾斜度一样
01:02:514(7) GRID 下来一格
01:05:383(2)(3) 就是开头提到的改STACKING改到(2)(3)出来是和(1)的结尾重叠为止
01:48:557(1)和后面(5)这个排法不好，不是体现出难，是怪
01:58:992(1)也是，要么你前面4个分了开点，要么这个点拿到外面去，随便的

总体不错，细节问题多注意点。
改好咯 thx :D
Yumeko Yuki
135 posts
Joined December 2010
Yumeko Yuki
完成了...顺便补了点音效...一个clap和两个sliderstide
希望能满意 ;)

Download: wave.rar

Download: Natteke ft. tieff - Sunrise (Strawberry) [Yuki YukI].osu
Strawberry
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Yumeko Yuki wrote:

完成了...顺便补了点音效...一个clap和两个sliderstide
希望能满意 ;)
:) 多谢！~
tieff
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tieff
oh hi
Strawberry
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tieff wrote:

oh hi
hi :)
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Niva
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Mod request via Mini Maya Queue ~

OH I love this song :3

[General]
-> The source should be osu!stream instead of OSU!Stream
-> Offset 4236?

[SuzumiyaSama's Easy]
-> HP Drain -1?
  • 00:14:644 (3) - Remove whistle from start
    00:20:905 (1) - Note appear too early after a spinner for an Easy diff
    00:26:383 (1) - Add whistle on the first repeat
    00:43:862 (3,4) - Try to arrange like http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/172934 ? It follows the previous pattern better imo
    00:48:036 (3,4) - idk... Too tricky for an Easy imo
    01:06:818 (4) - New combo
    01:24:818 (x) - Remove break, and add a 1/2 slider here
    01:45:427 (6) - Add whistle on slider start?
    01:48:557 (4) - Why huge jump on Easy diff? Also add a repeat would sound better
[Stream]
  • 00:32:383 (6) - Change this slider into a circle followed by 1/2 slider after?
    00:37:601 (1) - Arrange like http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/172938, so it wouldn't touch the below slider?
    00:42:818 (3,4) - ...you could just copy-paste (1,2), press CTRL+H, and press CTRL+R you know ><
    00:44:775 (6) - This 1/4 sounds out of place imo, it doesn't follow anything on the song as I can hear
    01:06:818 (5) - New combo here (because of the anti-jump)
    01:26:644 (2) - Remove whistle on slider's start
    01:36:036 (4) - New combo here (to help players predict this is a jump)
    01:57:949 (3,4,5 - 6,7,8) - Triples feels weird for this diff imo. Repeating slider would be better
[Yuki YukI]
  • 00:04:210 (1) - Add whistle
    00:22:079 (4) - Add whistle on slider start
    00:31:340 (8) - The repeat arrow is concealed by the comboburst... (not fully concealed though)
    00:40:731 (2) - Add whistle on repeat
    00:44:644 (3) - Add clap or whistle on slider end
    01:11:514 (6) - 3/4 slider sounds forced imo. 1/2 slider is better here I guess
    01:32:775 (8) - Add whistle on slider start
    01:33:688 (12) - Add whistle
    01:43:601 (x) - Add note?
[Expert]
-> OD-1 ?
  • 00:26:253 (7) - Add whistle
    00:40:210 (2,3,4) - Arrange like http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/172945 ? Would be more flowy imo
    00:51:688 (7,8) - Switch their position?
    01:09:949 (4) - ...curved too much imo
    01:31:340 (10) - ...the finish should be added also on slider start I guess
    01:55:862 (1,2,3,4) - Hard to guess it's a diamond pattern because it's not symmetrical ><
Lovely~
Good luck Strawberry (:
Strawberry
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Niva wrote:

Mod request via Mini Maya Queue ~

OH I love this song :3

[General]
-> The source should be osu!stream instead of OSU!Stream fixed~
-> Offset 4236? i changed it to 4230 :3

[SuzumiyaSama's Easy] fixed~
-> HP Drain -1?
  • 00:14:644 (3) - Remove whistle from start
    00:20:905 (1) - Note appear too early after a spinner for an Easy diff
    00:26:383 (1) - Add whistle on the first repeat
    00:43:862 (3,4) - Try to arrange like http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/172934 ? It follows the previous pattern better imo
    00:48:036 (3,4) - idk... Too tricky for an Easy imo
    01:06:818 (4) - New combo
    01:24:818 (x) - Remove break, and add a 1/2 slider here
    01:45:427 (6) - Add whistle on slider start?
    01:48:557 (4) - Why huge jump on Easy diff? Also add a repeat would sound better the slider is should in01:48:838 (4) - it's a bug :3 fixed~
[Stream] all fixed~
  • 00:32:383 (6) - Change this slider into a circle followed by 1/2 slider after?
    00:37:601 (1) - Arrange like http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/172938, so it wouldn't touch the below slider?
    00:42:818 (3,4) - ...you could just copy-paste (1,2), press CTRL+H, and press CTRL+R you know ><
    00:44:775 (6) - This 1/4 sounds out of place imo, it doesn't follow anything on the song as I can hear
    01:06:818 (5) - New combo here (because of the anti-jump)
    01:26:644 (2) - Remove whistle on slider's start
    01:36:036 (4) - New combo here (to help players predict this is a jump)
    01:57:949 (3,4,5 - 6,7,8) - Triples feels weird for this diff imo. Repeating slider would be better
[Yuki YukI] fixed~
  • 00:04:210 (1) - Add whistle
    00:22:079 (4) - Add whistle on slider start
    00:31:340 (8) - The repeat arrow is concealed by the comboburst... (not fully concealed though)
    00:40:731 (2) - Add whistle on repeat
    00:44:644 (3) - Add clap or whistle on slider end
    01:11:514 (6) - 3/4 slider sounds forced imo. 1/2 slider is better here I guess
    01:32:775 (8) - Add whistle on slider start
    01:33:688 (12) - Add whistle
    01:43:601 (x) - Add note?
[Expert] all fixed
-> OD-1 ?
  • 00:26:253 (7) - Add whistle
    00:40:210 (2,3,4) - Arrange like http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/172945 ? Would be more flowy imo
    00:51:688 (7,8) - Switch their position?
    01:09:949 (4) - ...curved too much imo
    01:31:340 (10) - ...the finish should be added also on slider start I guess
    01:55:862 (1,2,3,4) - Hard to guess it's a diamond pattern because it's not symmetrical ><
Lovely~
Good luck Strawberry (:
:) thanks for your mod >< it's very useful to this map
YTYuyu
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YTYuyu
Yo modding this map because of ur request :)

SuzumiyaSama's Easy:
00:23:012(3) - x:256 y:64 from there fix the spacing until 00:30:838
00:50:143(1,2) - hidden repeat slider
01:26:664(3) - 1-2 grlds left for the end point
01:42:316(1) - 1 grid up(no distance snap)

Stream:
00:23:012(5) - NC
00:27:186(5) - ^
00:35:534(6) - ^
01:11:795 - add a circle
01:12:056(8,9) - replace this for a slider
01:40:751(7) - NC
01:44:403(4) - ^

Yuki YukI:
00:25:099(6) - NC
00:31:360(8) - ^
00:35:534(6) - ^
00:48:056(5) - ^ if u ignore this make the next note a NC
01:27:708(6) - NC
01:32:143(7) - ^
01:36:056(5) - ^
01:40:230(6) - ^
01:44:403(5) - ^
01:52:751(6) - ^

Expert:
01:02:925(9) - NC
01:06:838(6) - ^
01:11:273(8) - ^

This is the best i can do. GL :D
Yumeko Yuki
135 posts
Joined December 2010
Yumeko Yuki
感谢帮我修改了...最近没什么时间囧...
另外tag里还少了一个yumeko呢
Strawberry
osu! Alumni
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Joined October 2010
Topic Starter
Strawberry

Byakugan249 wrote:

Yo modding this map because of ur request :)

SuzumiyaSama's Easy:
00:23:012(3) - x:256 y:64 from there fix the spacing until 00:30:838
00:50:143(1,2) - hidden repeat slider
01:26:664(3) - 1-2 grlds left for the end point
01:42:316(1) - 1 grid up(no distance snap)

Stream:
00:23:012(5) - NC
00:27:186(5) - ^
00:35:534(6) - ^
01:11:795 - add a circle
01:12:056(8,9) - replace this for a slider
01:40:751(7) - NC
01:44:403(4) - ^

Yuki YukI:
00:25:099(6) - NC
00:31:360(8) - ^
00:35:534(6) - ^
00:48:056(5) - ^ if u ignore this make the next note a NC
01:27:708(6) - NC
01:32:143(7) - ^
01:36:056(5) - ^
01:40:230(6) - ^
01:44:403(5) - ^
01:52:751(6) - ^

Expert:
01:02:925(9) - NC
01:06:838(6) - ^
01:11:273(8) - ^

This is the best i can do. GL :D
all fixed ;) thankyou
S h i o n
1,053 posts
Joined July 2010
S h i o n
Hi. Strawberry <3


General
- [Diff name]diff名字也要连贯一点,要风格化就全部风格化，不要出现easy什么的。还有我觉得stream会让人误解是很多连打的，虽然和曲子本身可能有相关性。还有expert专家的意思，不太符合...


SuzumiyaSama's Easy
00:13:882 (2) - 难读的stack 而且后面一个节奏还在红线
00:29:795 (1) - ^
00:26:403 (1,2) - 这两个spacing不同?
00:37:621 (1) - jump ? !
01:18:838 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - ^


Stream
- 我觉得这个diff前后难度有点失衡...
00:32:403 (6) - 没必要跳吧~
00:45:969 (1) - spacing 有点太远 x1.12
00:50:143 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 排的不好看 DS很奇怪.. 不妨参照下后面你的01:09:447 (2,3,4,5,6)


Yuki YukI
-Why YuKI has an capitalized I ?
00:41:273 (3) - Curve ?
01:46:490 (7) - New combo
- I like this diff~!


Expert
00:20:795 (4,1) - 关grid 叠好~
01:00:056 (8) - 没堆叠好
01:27:969 (x) - 没理由不加个note在这把?
01:41:273 (4) - New combo


:) rank好运~~
Niva
Global Moderator
3,187 posts
Joined November 2009
Niva
(sorry for my lateness. I wasn't able to touch my osu! yesterday orz, only checking messages from school computer)

...Well, I don't think this need a recheck. It's already a good map.
However, I still personally think offset 4236 sounds better than 4230 (:

Don't kudosu this~ (enjoy a star btw :3)
Strawberry
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Topic Starter
Strawberry

S h i o n wrote:

Hi. Strawberry <3


General
- [Diff name]diff名字也要连贯一点,要风格化就全部风格化，不要出现easy什么的。还有我觉得stream会让人误解是很多连打的，虽然和曲子本身可能有相关性。还有expert专家的意思，不太符合...


SuzumiyaSama's Easy
00:13:882 (2) - 难读的stack 而且后面一个节奏还在红线
00:29:795 (1) - ^
00:26:403 (1,2) - 这两个spacing不同?
00:37:621 (1) - jump ? !
01:18:838 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - ^


Stream
- 我觉得这个diff前后难度有点失衡...
00:32:403 (6) - 没必要跳吧~
00:45:969 (1) - spacing 有点太远 x1.12
00:50:143 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 排的不好看 DS很奇怪.. 不妨参照下后面你的01:09:447 (2,3,4,5,6)


Yuki YukI
-Why YuKI has an capitalized I ?
00:41:273 (3) - Curve ?
01:46:490 (7) - New combo
- I like this diff~!


Expert
00:20:795 (4,1) - 关grid 叠好~
01:00:056 (8) - 没堆叠好
01:27:969 (x) - 没理由不加个note在这把?
01:41:273 (4) - New combo


:) rank好运~~
update~ 多谢>w<
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Strawberry
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Strawberry

Niva wrote:

(sorry for my lateness. I wasn't able to touch my osu! yesterday orz, only checking messages from school computer)

...Well, I don't think this need a recheck. It's already a good map.
However, I still personally think offset 4236 sounds better than 4230 (:

Don't kudosu this~ (enjoy a star btw :3)
:) thx
Kawayi Rika
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Kawayi Rika
Hi ~ Strawberry ~ :)

My some tips ~ from queue~

[General]

Delete Enable countdown in all diff plz.

[Expert]

Oh,why Stark Leniency 2?
Restore to default plz,the hidden player not good.
00:25:882 (4) - add NC.
00:45:577 (8) - Remove note will be better.
01:39:969 (9) - move to here X:376 Y:112.
01:42:316 (1) - 1 grid left.

[YukI YukI]

00:34:490 - add note.
01:19:360 (7) - add NC.
01:30:838 - add note.
01:46:490 (7) - add NC.
01:58:490 (1) - Remove NC.

[Stream]

01:19:360 (4) - add NC.
01:37:099 (5) - ^
01:40:490 (6) - Remove note will be better.


[SuzumiyaSama's Simple]

00:26:403 (1) - like this?
SPOILER
01:17:273 (1) - change 1/1 slider will be better.
01:19:360 (3) - add NC.
01:40:230 (1) - change 1 note.


nice BGM and map ~

good luck ~ ;)
Nymph
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Nymph
req from 草莓~

General:
我其实不太明白为什么你那两个难度KIAI之前还要设置一次喷星 我感觉是有点没必要……
countdown弄掉吧 多余

SuzumiyaSama's Simple:
Beatmap design/suggestion
01:14:664 (3) - spacing 没必要这里1.5吧

Hitsound
01:30:838 (2) - 我觉得whistle放尾巴上比放头上好一些
01:33:447 (6,1,2,3,4) - 这几个FINISH我个人觉得略乱了 尤其finish在slider1是在第二白线上 到slider4却是在头上 我觉得略违和 看了一下整个KIAI 我觉得可以考虑把这两个01:36:056 (4,1) - finish都放在尾巴上 当然只是建议^^;


Stream:
Hitsound
00:18:838 (4,5,6,1) - 音量增加略突然了 可以考虑逐渐10加大？00:18:838 (4) - 00:19:882 (6) - 这里加。
00:19:882 (6) - 这里感觉finish比whistle好点
00:37:621 (1) - 感觉这里应该finish
00:39:708 (5) - 这里不太应该……
00:44:925 (6) - finish略吵 囧
00:45:969 (1) - finish？
01:08:403 (4) - 开头也whistle吧？过渡感好一点
01:09:969 (3) - 这也加个whistle？其实我推荐3456都加上=A= 比较符合钢琴的样子
01:17:273 (1) - 这个finish很多余
01:29:273 (7) - 加个finish？ 配合你2结尾的finish
01:29:795 (1) - 然后感觉这个finish就不用了
01:32:012 (1) - 转盘也finish
01:33:969 (1) - 然后这个finish就没用了
后面不在重复了 大概说一下我的思路吧 如果你不认同那以上基本都可以忽略掉=A=
因为你KIAI部分的每一个小段落（除了结尾） 基本都是最后一个红线空掉 所以这样我觉得很适合用FINISH来强调最后一个白线的NOTE 而不是用FINISH来强调开头
从这里开始01:50:664 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - 你用的节奏变密集了 所以4白线上下FINISH就感觉有点怪了 就可以考虑都下在长白线上来强调重音
01:54:838 (1) - 结尾2个小段落相对比的话 01:50:664这里开始的这些蓝色的note更像一个过渡 所以我推荐一个FINISH都不加 可以考虑都加在后面红色和橙色note的13白线上
以上都是建议^^; 稍微看看就行了

YukI YukI:
Issues
00:11:273 (5,6) - 2个slider结尾都没有snap上 重新拉一下 都短了

Hitsound
00:35:534 (1,2,3,4,5,1) - ...其实我觉得这几个finish满多余的 听起来跟外面插进来的声音似的
01:25:621 (1)- 我不是很明白为什么要单独加finish音量 照我个人看来40其实正好的……
very nice


Expert:
饿了= = 排列似乎没问题
stack leniency那么低是为什么…………
FINISH好乱 =A=
…………没劲了 如果以后有需要再看……觅食去
Strawberry
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Strawberry
fixed ~>w< thanks to Rika&Nymph's mod ;)
Yumeko Yuki
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Yumeko Yuki

S h i o n wrote:

Yuki YukI
-Why YuKI has an capitalized I ? 嘛 这个I倒不是打错的原因 我原来的diff都这个名字 要是麻烦的话就现在这样吧 :)
00:41:273 (3) - Curve ?
01:46:490 (7) - New combo fixed
- I like this diff~!

Kawayi Rika wrote:

[YukI YukI]

00:34:490 - add note. there is no rhythm here :(
01:19:360 (7) - add NC. fixed
01:30:838 - add note. same as above
01:46:490 (7) - add NC. fixed
01:58:490 (1) - Remove NC. different hitsound so i use the newcombo

Nymph wrote:

YukI YukI:
Issues
00:11:273 (5,6) - 2个slider结尾都没有snap上 重新拉一下 都短了 fixed

Hitsound
00:35:534 (1,2,3,4,5,1) - ...其实我觉得这几个finish满多余的 听起来跟外面插进来的声音似的 这些finish都是另外插进去的 总是whistle和clap太单调
01:25:621 (1)- 我不是很明白为什么要单独加finish音量 照我个人看来40其实正好的…… 高潮部分finish音量都有加大...
very nice
感谢strawberry帮我改了许多 :)
我自己也看了下做出了一些修改

Download: Natteke ft. tieff - Sunrise (Strawberry) [YukI YukI].osu
bossandy
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bossandy
HIHI~ 來mod摟~

SuzumiyaSama's Simple:

SPOILER
00:43:882 (3) - NC
01:36:056 (4) - 開頭刪除finish 結尾加finish並刪除whistle
01:37:099 (5) - 刪除whistle
01:40:751 (2,3,4) - 這對初學者來說太困難了 試試這個~

P.S. 難度名稱會不會太長啊lol! 改成Suzumi's Simple不? (個人覺得這樣比較好~

Stream:

SPOILER
01:11:012 (7) - NC
01:19:360 (4) - NC?
01:48:577 (6) - NC
01:59:012 (5) - 先把他跟前面的三連拍slider三重疊後 在用Edit / Flip Horizontally 他就會對稱左右轉向 最後會變這樣

YukI YukI:

SPOILER
00:11:273 (5) - NC
00:14:664 (5) - NC
00:27:186 (6) - NC
00:28:230 (1) - 刪除NC
00:29:273 (4) - NC
00:48:056 (5) - NC
00:49:360 (1) - 刪除NC
00:50:143 (4) - NC
00:52:230 (4) - NC
00:56:403 (7) - NC?
01:06:838 (6) - NC
01:11:012 (4) - NC
01:13:099 (6) - NC
01:13:621 (1) - 刪除NC
01:15:186 (5) - NC
01:55:099 (6) - NC

Expert:

SPOILER
00:11:273 (5) - NC
00:14:664 (5) - NC
00:27:186 (6) - NC
00:28:230 (1) - 刪除NC
00:29:273 (4) - NC
00:48:056 (5) - NC
00:49:360 (1) - 刪除NC
00:50:143 (4) - NC
01:25:621 (3) - NC
01:26:143 (3) - 開頭刪除finish
01:26:925 (5) - 開頭刪除finish並加whistle
01:27:186 (6) - 開頭刪除finish
01:27:708 (1) - 加finish
01:28:229 (3) - 刪除finish並加whistle
01:29:012 (7) - 刪除finish
01:29:273 (8) - 開頭刪除finish並加whistle
01:29:795 (1) - 加finish
01:30:316 (4) - 刪除finish
01:31:360 (10) - 開頭刪除finish
01:31:882 (1) - 加finish
01:36:577 (4) - 刪除finish
01:37:621 (9) - 開頭刪除finish
01:38:143 (1) - 加finish
01:38:664 (3) - 刪除finish
01:41:273 (1,7) - 刪除finish且7加whistle
01:44:925 (4) - 開頭刪除finish
01:45:708 (7) - 刪除finish且開頭加whistle
01:46:490 (1) - 開頭加finish
01:48:056 (6) - 開頭加whistle
01:49:360 (5) - 刪除finish
01:50:143 (7) - 開頭刪除finish
01:54:838 (1) - 加finish
01:56:143 (2,3) - 刪除finish
01:56:925 (1) - 加finish
01:57:186 (3) - 結尾刪除finish並加whistle
01:58:230 (3) - 刪除finish
01:58:751 (3) - 刪除finish
01:59:012 (1) - 刪除finish

做的不錯喔~ 但是我覺得音效最好有YukI YukI難度的clap會比較恰當
可以的話把YukI YukI難度以外的diff音效加一加吧 ~
祝好運!
Sun Rainbow
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Sun Rainbow
最后一个难度还是保持恒定的DS值比较好吧……（我个人认为）
Anshi_old
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Anshi_old
yahoo~~~ :) TODAY IS SUNDAY RIGHT?!!!RIGHT?!!!
好多铜锣...creator的爱好吗 0 0

SuzumiyaSama's Simple
00:18:838 (1) - 删掉finish吗
00:23:012 (3) - 添加whistle
00:27:186 ↑
00:37:621 (1) - 改为whistle
00:41:795 (1) - 删掉finish吗
00:50:143 (1) - 删掉finish吗
00:54:316 (1) - 改为whistle吗
01:29:795 (1) - ↑
01:33:447 (6) - ↑
01:34:490 ↑
01:36:056 (4) - 删掉finish
01:37:099 (5) - 删掉whistle
01:40:751 (2) - 整个添加whistle
01:41:273 (3) - 后两个↑
01:41:795 (4) - 最后一个↑
01:44:925 删掉finish
01:45:969 改为whistle吗
01:57:447 (2) - 删掉finish吗
01:59:012 (5) - 添加whistle

Stream
好多铜锣 - -、、、finish啥的。。 建议是不要这么多更好。。。其他的倒没什么问题


YukI YukI
这幅很合我胃口...直接射星星了 0 0


Expert
还是铜锣太多了...我本身是不喜欢的 而已...

然后鸡蛋里挑骨头真是难过...
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