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DragonForce - Dawn Over a New World [Taiko]

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Zing
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Wednesday, October 24, 2018 at 11:45:46 AM

Artist: DragonForce
Title: Dawn Over a New World
BPM: 160
Filesize: 7738kb
Play Time: 05:09
Difficulties Available:
  1. Legendary Tatsujin (4.08 stars, 1344 notes)
Download: DragonForce - Dawn Over a New World
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DAWN OVER A NEW WORLD

(Please let me know if that title is in all actuality wrong.)

Project DONS #02. Active set. Full DONS list: https://docs.google.com/spreadsheets/d/1zOirD0DkiAakzKvp5VOPYZfoQFIEvJjA6N8ih3AYjzU/edit?usp=sharing

Ultra Tatsujin: 100% complete (Mods: Zigizigiefe on 6/21/2017)

Original beatmap by Monstrata: The Ultra Legend Is Real. https://osu.ppy.sh/s/386282
The BG is the same one that was on the ranked beatmap.
I do not claim ownership of DragonForce or their works. Rock on, dudes!

HISTORY
4/10/2018: Going in a radical new direction with the map.
8/14/2017: Applying mod changes, with a few personal tweaks.
6/6 2017: Minor changes to beatmap patterns, mellowed out some of the more disarming SV changes
4/29/2017: Finally resoved submission issues to get this out there for all to enjoy.
zigizigiefe
Let me tell you general issues:
Artist/Group name should be DragonForce
Title name should be Dawn Over a New World
And here is personal suggestion: 02:00:205 - Preview point would be better

quick irc
00:36 zigizigiefe: https://osu.ppy.sh/forum/p/6086577
00:38 Zing: Oh, you want to mod my map?
00:38 Zing: No need to ask permission for that
00:38 zigizigiefe: i told this 1 month ago but no one looked .w.
00:39 Zing: Yeah
00:39 Zing: I'm too busy making new maps
00:39 Zing: And school
00:39 Zing: And lots of other things
00:39 Zing: Posting on mod queues gives me a bit of anxiety
00:39 Zing: It's like applying for a job, for me
00:39 zigizigiefe: if you want to continue working on this map, i can help you
00:39 Zing: Totally
00:39 Zing: I was waiting until I got more rep
00:40 Zing: Because, you know, marathons
00:40 Zing: But, the fact I have a mod asking me to let them mod my map...
00:40 zigizigiefe: you need to fix metadata issues fix
00:40 Zing: I just can't say no to that
00:41 zigizigiefe: me too :D
00:41 Zing: Hm? What's wrong with metadata?
00:41 zigizigiefe: as mentioned on post
00:42 zigizigiefe: F of "DragonForce" must be capitalized
00:42 Zing: Seems a tad pedantic, but I have no qualms
00:43 zigizigiefe: oh, no no. don't think so
00:43 zigizigiefe: just want to help
00:43 Zing: The preview point is all a matter of opinion. I love to place my previews near the end.
00:44 zigizigiefe: that was personal suggestion, no need to apply xD
00:45 Zing: Don't a sufficient number of mods have to be documented in the feed?
00:46 Zing: In order for something to be considered for rank/approval?
00:47 zigizigiefe: beatmap nominators check mods you've got so far, that's what they need to make sure
00:48 Zing: I wanted to check, because I've gotten a couple of modding suggestions on a feed like this, and there's no documentation
00:48 Zing: So I should just tell them to post on my map
00:48 Zing: 's forum
00:49 zigizigiefe: probably they did quick check, so didn't feel like their checks don't need to be posted
00:49 Zing: Aha
00:50 Zing: Anyways
00:50 zigizigiefe: and yes, ask people who modded your map to post if necessary
00:50 Zing: I need to get this approved
00:50 Zing: Before the door on DragonForce songs closes completely
00:50 zigizigiefe: i love dragonforce
00:51 Zing: They've taken Symphony, they've taken Cry Thunder. Dawn will be next
00:51 zigizigiefe: iirc i have 30+ dragonforce maps made by me, whether it's uploaded or not
00:51 *zigizigiefe is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1281346 Dragonforce - Dawn Over A New World [Tatsujin]]
00:51 zigizigiefe: we can start btw
00:52 zigizigiefe: 00:00:225 (1) - how about removing finisher? since piano sound isn't so strong worthy to add finisher
00:54 zigizigiefe: 00:03:412 (17) - there's no piano, it's like consecutively mapped and doesn't look good imo
00:55 zigizigiefe: i'll continue when you replied
00:56 Zing: Oh
00:56 Zing: I've been here and there, I'm reading
00:56 Zing: The first part of the map is pretty dense
00:57 zigizigiefe: at least break up 1/2 streams, it doesn't look good
00:58 zigizigiefe: there're no piano sounds somewhere you added note
00:58 zigizigiefe: 00:12:225 - is denser than 00:00:225 -
01:00 Zing: Yeah
01:01 Zing: I'm introducing a few 1/1 breaks to the map
01:01 Zing: In those parts
01:05 zigizigiefe: 01:09:580 (309,310,311,312,313) - drum doesn't go 1/4
01:06 zigizigiefe: i guess it's not 1/6 as well
01:07 Zing: There's a couple of parts where it does what feels like a 5-burst at 1/6
01:07 zigizigiefe: they were 1/6
01:07 Zing: That would be awkward to map as such
01:07 zigizigiefe: but this drum is kinda weird
01:08 Zing: There are other parts where it does it
01:08 Zing: I don't like it
01:08 Zing: I want to get rid of it
01:08 Zing: But nothing else sounds right
01:08 zigizigiefe: 01:35:455 (415) - how about changing as kat, it'd be the way more accurate according to the high pitch guitar
01:09 zigizigiefe: yes
01:09 Zing: I changed 414 to red, too. Seems to fit the lyrics better
01:09 Zing: Also 417 to red
01:10 Zing: Because that 1/6 is awkward considering the other two changes
01:10 Zing: *was
01:10 zigizigiefe: 01:44:830 - that flow is kinda weird, 01:45:205 - although there's strong drum and vocal, there's no note
01:11 zigizigiefe: so 01:45:392 (456) - move this there and change to kat
01:12 zigizigiefe: 01:53:267 (492) - seems like you followed drum here but i heard snare sound, so change this to kat as well
01:13 Zing: Hold on, our notes are out of sync now
01:13 Zing: Your 415 was now my 404 xD
01:14 zigizigiefe: rip lol
01:14 Zing: So I made that change there, as well as the other one I described
01:14 zigizigiefe: 02:00:205 (527) - why not finisher? it wouldn't make harder
01:15 Zing: So that other part you were talking about seemed to have a flam of 7
01:15 Zing: So from 01:45:017 it's now d-k-k-(ddddddk)-d
01:16 zigizigiefe: 02:00:205 - i meant here in my last suggestion
01:16 Zing: 1:53:267 does sound good ad a D
01:16 Zing: Wait
01:17 Zing: x.x
01:17 Zing: Yeah, now that's a k
01:18 Zing: And yeah, that 2:00:205 is good as a K
01:19 zigizigiefe: 02:10:705 - it's like a bunch of snare sounds coming consecutively, then drum sounds are coming. so i suggest 1/3 kkkkkkddddddK pattern
01:20 Zing: Yeah, I tried to be fancy there. I feel the monotony of a 1/3 pattern such as that hurts my map
01:20 zigizigiefe: no, that doesn't
01:20 zigizigiefe: it would express the difference of drum here
01:25 Zing: Warning that the solo might be a bit bad
01:25 Zing: I first made this map 4 months ago, after all
01:26 zigizigiefe: 04:23:286 (131,132) - not sure if kick sounds are worthy to be emphasized
01:26 Zing: Hmm.
01:26 Zing: In the last solo, I am desperately grabbing for sounds
01:27 zigizigiefe: you have ignored strong drums, it would take hours if i try to explain the whole issues in solo
01:27 zigizigiefe: and you could add kiai since the solo is pretty intense
01:28 Zing: I can take another look-see through the solo. Anything to keep in mind as I do?
01:28 zigizigiefe: 04:52:911 (279) - this note seems unnecessary, there's no vocal or drum
01:29 zigizigiefe: 04:57:911 (300) - and here, too
01:30 zigizigiefe: that's all parts i have concerns
01:30 Zing: Alright
01:31 Zing: Can you put a log of this on the feed? And give me some things to look out for when looking back through the solo?
01:31 zigizigiefe: i'll re-check the solo later, i'm kinda busy atm .w.
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