UniqueBlock11 wrote:

Hello, from my queue.

note: everything marked with * is just a comment

general
01:59:436 - (for all difficulties) This isn't needed, but you can disable Kiai here and activate it again at 01:59:982 to create a nice rhythmic fountain.
03:09:254 - (also for all) This isn't needed, but you can disable Kiai here and activate it again at 03:09:800 (1) to create another nice rhythmic fountain.ummm, I would keep that for a while cuz I think it's still high and it suits the kiai as well

normal
01:16:345 (1,2) - Blanket for appeal. ahh, I didn't mean to make a blanket though...
01:57:800 (3) - Changing this slider to a 1/4 slider would accompany the rhythm better:

02:15:254 (3) - ^
03:07:618 (3) - ^ however the bass is louder so I think we should stress the bass,

advanced
00:28:073 (6,1) - Blanket is a bit off, just move (6) left a grid unit. fixed
02:33:254 (2,3) - This rhythm would emphasize the vocals and accompany the rhythm better:
The voice 'we' is at 02:33:800 - , clearly I don't need to change it for emphasizing the vocals

hard
02:01:618 (6,1) - You can blanket this combo while retaining the distance snap:
actually I feel boring if there is too much blankets.. so yeah, it could be some... mutations.
02:10:891 (1,2, 3) - *This doesn't have to be blanketed since (3) is too high and would make retaining the distance snapping difficult. it is not blanket to me though. however I don't get what is DS difficult ;w;

Very clean mapset, nice work. thanks

Mismagius wrote:

[Normal]

1. 00:23:982 (1) - IMO the curve would be more natural if you moved the second sliderpoint to 92;40 sure, fixed
2. 00:43:618 (3,4) - blanket can be improved here, like this fixed
3. 01:56:709 (2) - blanket can be improved here, moving (2) to 299;263 should work wellum..I don't like to map w/o grid snap here.
4. 02:01:073 (3) - moving second sliderpoint to 144;335 would improve blanket fixed
5. 02:45:800 (1) - not sure if the NC is necessary here, for the entire map you used new combos every 2 measures and here you add NC so it's a bit inconsistent ..you're right, both were fixed

[Advanced]

• AR6.5 would definitely work better here, even AR7 maybe because of all the different 1/2 rhythms actually I am worried about the gap between Normal and Advanced... So I try to decrease the difficulty as much as possible... I will keep this one for now!

1. 00:28:345 (1) - blanket can be improved if you move this to 205;82 too minor to fix

[Hard]

1. 00:19:618 (1) - For this entire section, I personally think that the SV is a bit too high for the spacing you're using, and it feels a bit awkward to play. That can't be fixed without a remap though, so just a comment yeah... remap in coming.
2. 00:32:437 (6,1) - blanket seems really off, moving 2nd sliderpoint to 121;71 and 3rd sliderpoint to 188;85 should make it a bit better it is fine to me tho... I don't want to change the slider, cuz 00:33:254 (2) - is its copy.
3. 00:43:073 (7) - move 2px right to stack with (3)'s sliderend fixed
4. 01:02:709 (7,8) - jump here felt a bit unexpected, i'd rather just use 1.4x spacing here fixed
5. 01:09:800 (1,2) - blanket can be slightly improved fixed
6. 01:29:982 (2) - blanket can be improved a bit fixed
7. 01:33:800 (1,2) - maybe make these 2 sliders look the same but mirrored? currently it looks a bit weird that one is so different than the other fixed, now they look more different.
8. 01:40:345 (1) - imo should have the same distance as 01:39:254 (3,4) - for consistency it's denser than those reverses so I guess the difficulty is still level up
9. 01:52:345 (4,5,6) - spacing felt weird here, i'd rather just make (5) normal spacing especially since you didn't emphasize (5) on any other patterns 01:52:618 (5,1) - as example?
10. 02:34:891 (1) - same as 00:19 headache, fine, i would think about it for now.
11. 02:55:891 (5,6) - blanket can be really improved here fixed

[Insane]

1. 00:24:527 (2,3) - spacing felt too low, especially comparing to 00:19:618 (1,2) - , so i'd try to use the same spacing/flow as there fixed
2. 00:38:436 (4,5) - spacing felt too low here as well, (5) should definitely be more emphasized emphasizing 00:38:709 (5) - means the spacing between 00:38:709 (5,1) - would be harder to catch... moreover, 00:38:164 (3,4,5) - looks nice, I don't want to break it.
3. 00:41:845 (2) - shouldn't this note be closer to (1) than (3) since (3) is a stronger note and needs more spacing? fixed
4. 00:46:209 (2) - ^ same, applies throughout the diff as well fixed
5. 01:31:345 (6) - blanket can be improved by moving to x137 y264 fixed
6. 01:36:254 (2,3) - spacing felt too low here, i'd try to do something like this instead fixed
7. 01:52:073 (5,1) - spacing also feels really low here, i'd try to break symmetry and space (1) much further away to the right and maybe ctrl+g it fixed

[Night begins]

• really nice diff, but i'd capitalize it so it says "Night Begins" and it looks nicer why not?

really nice map, last diff is sooo fun, hope it gets ranked soon appreciate it ><... but I don't want to add a slot for this song, sorry
(if you're looking for an extra gd i really liked this song sooo :u )

Senery wrote:

hi! from my queue

[Normal]

1. 00:19:618 (1) - maybe try and make this slider a bit nicer, it looks okay but it could be better ;;w;; sad, I knew I am not good at slider making... well, tbh it looks like a poop.
2. 01:46:891 (1,2) - maybe make these the same slider? if you blanket them it fits nicely and doesnt change a lot ummm, I was bored to making the same blankets, I think something new would refresh the playing performance
3. 03:12:254 (5,6) - ctrl+g sounds nicer here, need to change the positions of them though ...err to me they sounds the same,

[Advanced]

1. 00:30:254 (4,1) - move these up a bit so it blankets nicer fixed
2. 01:53:982 (3) - the sliderend ends on a strong sound i suggest you make this part the same as the section after it (01:54:527 (4,5,6) - ) or slightly different for variation. you have more of these later but it's a diff between normal and hard, can't make too many circle or the gap between normal and adv would be risky... from my experience, it's the safe way to avoid the risky gap.
3. 02:16:209 (4) - this doesnt align well with the slider fixed
4. 02:27:527 (4) - same for here the slider ends on a strong sound (this one is pretty noticeable) same for the ones after yeah, you're right,
   but you can't avoid clickable note on the slider tails cuz this is still a low level for new players. indeed, in my mapset, I regard Normal as Easy, Advanced as Normal/color]

[Hard]

1. 00:47:436 (5) - alignment is off

[Insane]

1. 00:20:164 (2,3) - why are these 2 stacked the rest have the same kind of sound fixed
2. 00:22:073 (2,3) - same for here more spacing than the rest but no sound difference umm, but, I don't think it's a problem... random placing in control is fine to me.
3. 00:22:618 (4,5,6,7,8) - and here the sounds are different but the spacing the same cough, ah. from what we are listening to, there is no difference if we make the spacing different. for real, hard to judge, and no one says you have to make the different spacing when the key sound is different.
   I focus on patterns more when I am mapping, and I believe it works.
4. 02:26:982 - its not really noticeable but you missed a sound here, same for the later ones I basically ignore the vocal in this part, so I won't change it.
5. 02:40:618 (4,6) - these 2 have the same kind of sound but not the same spacing as above

[Night Begins]

1. 00:19:618 - 00:28:073 - same point as insane
2. 02:26:982 - also same as insane, missed a sound here errrr, the same reason as above, sorry for laziness

thats it hope it helps

Arphimigon wrote:

[box=Lab Mod!]Results given in [x, y] formats

[Advanced]
Object at 00:46:891 - should be placed at: [290, 36] currently at: [292, 36] to move in line with slider
Object at 00:49:073 - should be placed at: [247, 279] currently at: [248, 280] to move in line with slider
Object at 01:07:618 - should be placed at: [320, 190] currently at: [320, 192] to move in line with slider
Object at 01:08:164 - should be placed at: [283, 22] currently at: [284, 24] to move in line with slider
Object at 01:43:891 - should be placed at: [495, 115] currently at: [496, 116] to move in line with slider
Object at 01:46:345 - should be placed at: [0, 138] currently at: [0, 140] to move in line with slider
Object at 02:06:936 - should be placed at: [118, 147] currently at: [120, 148] to move in line with slider
Object at 02:15:254 - should be placed at: [171, 255] currently at: [172, 256] to move in line with slider
Object at 02:16:209 - should be placed at: [66, 228] currently at: [68, 228] to move in line with slider
Object at 02:16:345 - should be placed at: [58, 180] currently at: [60, 180] to move in line with slider
Object at 02:55:891 - should be placed at: [399, 246] currently at: [400, 248] to move in line with slider
Object at 03:10:345 - should be placed at: [289, 111] currently at: [288, 112] to move in line with slider
Object at 03:14:982 - should be placed at: [487, 158] currently at: [488, 160] to move in line with slider

[Hard]
Object at 00:39:664 - should be placed at: [261, 163] currently at: [260, 168] to blanket slider body
Object at 00:55:891 - should be placed at: [48, 206] currently at: [48, 208] to move in line with slider
Object at 01:00:254 - should be placed at: [178, 230] currently at: [176, 224] to blanket slider body
Object at 01:01:482 - should be placed at: [370, 248] currently at: [372, 248] to move in line with slider
Object at 01:05:845 - should be placed at: [466, 75] currently at: [464, 76] to move in line with slider
Object at 01:10:209 - should be placed at: [72, 50] currently at: [76, 44] to blanket slider body
Object at 01:30:800 - should be placed at: [303, 136] currently at: [308, 136] to blanket slider body
Object at 01:47:982 - should be placed at: [38, 211] currently at: [36, 212] to move in line with slider
Object at 01:59:709 - should be placed at: [63, 127] currently at: [64, 128] to move in line with slider
Object at 02:03:254 - should be placed at: [180, 168] currently at: [180, 172] to blanket slider body
Object at 02:03:527 - should be placed at: [248, 117] currently at: [251, 115] to blanket slider body
Object at 02:05:164 - should be placed at: [228, 251] currently at: [224, 248] to blanket slider body
Object at 02:27:254 - should be placed at: [337, 65] currently at: [338, 66] to move in line with slider
Object at 02:30:118 - should be placed at: [14, 119] currently at: [16, 120] to move in line with slider
Object at 02:59:300 - should be placed at: [231, 179] currently at: [232, 180] to move in line with slider
Object at 03:04:618 - should be placed at: [217, 243] currently at: [216, 244] to move in line with slider
Object at 03:08:027 - should be placed at: [137, 292] currently at: [136, 296] to blanket slider body
Object at 03:10:209 - should be placed at: [362, 157] currently at: [356, 160] to blanket slider body
Object at 03:17:300 - should be placed at: [52, 362] currently at: [52, 360] to move in line with slider

[Insane]
Object at 00:33:254 - should be placed at: [178, 121] currently at: [181, 122] to blanket slider body
Object at 00:44:573 - should be placed at: [140, 308] currently at: [140, 304] to blanket slider body
Object at 00:55:754 - should be placed at: [302, 127] currently at: [303, 120] to blanket slider body
Object at 01:05:300 - should be placed at: [439, 76] currently at: [440, 80] to blanket slider body
Object at 01:06:254 - should be placed at: [163, 303] currently at: [164, 304] to move in line with slider
Object at 01:08:164 - should be placed at: [108, 277] currently at: [111, 274] to blanket slider body
Object at 01:18:936 - should be placed at: [428, 19] currently at: [428, 28] to blanket slider body
Object at 01:32:709 - should be placed at: [142, 135] currently at: [152, 136] to blanket slider body
Object at 01:44:709 - should be placed at: [298, 132] currently at: [296, 132] to move in line with slider
Object at 01:44:982 - should be placed at: [151, 115] currently at: [152, 116] to move in line with slider
Object at 01:45:800 - should be placed at: [298, 132] currently at: [296, 132] to move in line with slider
Object at 01:55:891 - should be placed at: [422, 319] currently at: [424, 320] to move in line with slider
Object at 02:02:982 - should be placed at: [277, 116] currently at: [280, 116] to blanket slider body
Object at 02:12:527 - should be placed at: [324, 335] currently at: [323, 336] to move in line with slider
Object at 02:52:073 - should be placed at: [371, 124] currently at: [372, 125] to move in line with slider
Object at 02:54:800 - should be placed at: [211, 123] currently at: [212, 124] to move in line with slider
Object at 02:56:573 - should be placed at: [125, 204] currently at: [124, 196] to blanket slider body
Object at 03:03:118 - should be placed at: [478, 52] currently at: [484, 47] to blanket slider body
Object at 03:05:300 - should be placed at: [317, 105] currently at: [320, 104] to blanket slider body
Object at 03:05:709 - should be placed at: [503, 243] currently at: [504, 244] to move in line with slider
Object at 03:11:845 - should be placed at: [504, 259] currently at: [510, 259] to blanket slider body
Object at 03:12:800 - should be placed at: [115, 215] currently at: [116, 216] to move in line with slider
Object at 03:17:982 - should be placed at: [151, 227] currently at: [152, 220] to blanket slider body
Object at 03:20:573 - should be placed at: [-6, 192] currently at: [0, 192] to blanket slider body
Object at 03:21:118 - should be placed at: [-6, 192] currently at: [0, 192] to blanket slider body
Object at 03:24:800 - should be placed at: [434, 80] currently at: [436, 76] to blanket slider body

[Night begins]
Object at 00:29:845 - should be placed at: [392, 343] currently at: [392, 340] to blanket slider body
Object at 00:56:573 - should be placed at: [310, 296] currently at: [312, 296] to move in line with slider
Object at 00:56:709 - should be placed at: [293, 190] currently at: [296, 193] to blanket slider body
Object at 02:11:982 - should be placed at: [59, 25] currently at: [60, 32] to blanket slider body
Object at 02:12:118 - should be placed at: [230, 64] currently at: [228, 64] to move in line with slider
Object at 02:31:618 - should be placed at: [408, 194] currently at: [409, 189] to blanket slider body
Object at 02:34:618 - should be placed at: [355, 285] currently at: [356, 284] to move in line with slider
Object at 02:39:800 - should be placed at: [432, 249] currently at: [432, 252] to blanket slider body
Object at 02:44:027 - should be placed at: [358, 226] currently at: [360, 232] to blanket slider body
Object at 02:58:345 - should be placed at: [419, 160] currently at: [420, 156] to blanket slider body
Object at 03:03:254 - should be placed at: [199, 103] currently at: [200, 112] to blanket slider body
Object at 03:03:527 - should be placed at: [240, 35] currently at: [240, 32] to blanket slider body
Object at 03:05:982 - should be placed at: [195, 131] currently at: [192, 132] to blanket slider body
Object at 03:06:527 - should be placed at: [250, 71] currently at: [256, 72] to blanket slider body
Object at 03:06:799 - should be placed at: [195, 131] currently at: [192, 132] to blanket slider body
Object at 03:24:664 - should be placed at: [238, 115] currently at: [244, 115] to blanket slider body
Object at 03:25:345 - should be placed at: [238, 115] currently at: [244, 115] to blanket slider body

[Normal]
Object at 00:51:800 - should be placed at: [412, 58] currently at: [412, 56] to move in line with slider
Object at 00:57:527 - should be placed at: [400, 123] currently at: [400, 127] to blanket slider body
Object at 01:10:618 - should be placed at: [319, 148] currently at: [320, 152] to blanket slider body
Object at 01:10:618 - should be placed at: [321, 151] currently at: [320, 152] to move in line with slider
Object at 01:45:254 - should be placed at: [464, 22] currently at: [464, 20] to move in line with slider
Object at 01:59:164 - should be placed at: [318, 61] currently at: [318, 59] to move in line with slider
Object at 02:27:254 - should be placed at: [315, 123] currently at: [316, 124] to move in line with slider
Object at 02:58:891 - should be placed at: [459, 167] currently at: [460, 168] to move in line with slider
Object at 03:00:800 - should be placed at: [71, 158] currently at: [72, 156] to move in line with slider

the first time I try to avoid replying...... partially fixed. Have to say it works perfectly in low levels, nice job

I hope I didn't malfunction! C:

Sorry I couldnt make it output less LOL but it sees what it sees
ps: super fun thanks><

- titan wrote:

hi, nm from my queue

SPOILER

Normal
00:00:800 (1) - why is this on the red tick? the sound starts on the white tick. also lower the volume for it because 80% sounds bad :/ fixed
00:34:345 (4) - ctl+g ctrl+h ctrl+j looks better imo fixed
00:46:891 (2,3) - blanket is somewhat off
01:10:618 (5,6) - yes ^ too picky to fix...
01:16:345 (1,2) - not spaced perfectly between the slider head and tail. super minor but idk fixed
01:46:891 (1,2) - fix blanket fixed
01:55:618 (1,2) - ^ ow fine
02:00:527 (2,3) - ahh ^ this one is fine to me
02:03:254 (7) - looks better if you move this down imo fixed
03:02:164 (3) - move this down a few pixels? fixed
03:10:891 (3) - move this up it's too close to the other slider imo fixed

Advanced
same thing about the spinner at the start k
00:28:073 (6,1) - blanket :/ fixed
00:43:618 (1) - move this down the body is too close to 4 it's clear to distinguish
02:26:164 (1,2) - blankettt it's one is fine
02:32:709 (1,2,3) - ^ fixed

Hard
same spinner thing
00:37:073 (1) - the 2 anchors seems unnecessary lesjuh style
00:39:664 (2,3) - blanket is ehh this one is fine
00:42:391 (4,7) - ^ it's not clear to regard it as a blanket when playing
00:45:800 (1) - same anchor thing don't think it's a problem tho
00:46:618 (2,5) - blanket the same as above
01:06:254 (4,5) - ^ it's fine/


oh and same spinner stuff on other diffs

really fun map

[ClickMyCircle] wrote:

There's very little to mod but I'll try
Only 2 highest diffs cause I'm really weak in modding easier maps

Night Begins
00:41:982 (3,4) - I think you shouldn't start slider from place where previous slider ends why, it's totally safe in high levels
00:47:982 (1,2) - same umm but it's not trick or hard to play right?
00:53:300 (4,5) - a bit too spaced, playable but idk if enough to consider it for an Extra, this place is not very difficult to catch.
00:56:709 (1,2) - slider under slider
01:07:618 (1,2) - same, you know that I mean so I'm gonna skip every next ok...
01:18:254 (5) - turn it horizontally fixed
01:48:527 (3,4,5,6) - this pattern is kinda strange imo fine to me
02:13:618 (3,4,5,6) - that's strange too fixed
03:13:345 (3,4) - increase the spacing fixed

Insane
01:12:936 (4) - imo this blanket is not enough spaced too picky ;w;
01:18:936 (2) - same ;;w;;
01:29:436 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6) - I don't know what's wrong but it's strange to play fine, I will keep it for a while cuz idk how to fix it.

CucumberCuc wrote:

Hi

[Normal]
00:38:436 (2) do a little curve
01:02:164 (6,7,1) slightly different range
01:14:164 (4,5,6,1,2,3) ^
01:47:982 (2,3) do slightly are close for better distance
01:54:527 (7) do end slightly more curve
02:37:073 (3,4,5) slightly different range

[Advanced]
00:23:982 (1,2,3) slightly different range
00:54:527 (1,2,3,4) ^
01:41:709 (4) do end slightly more curve
all fixed
sorry if a little, just all diffs as for me look good

Saturnalize wrote:

nb

1. 00:00:527 (1,1) - nice 16 seconds of emptiness boi (on a serious note, why) there is a natural blank for showing the title.
2. 00:36:527 (1,2) - I expect sliders like these are actually way faster to really brings out the emphasizing. 0.1x SV multiplier doesn't really looks even slightly different. Same goes for another parts 01:41:982 (1,2) - 02:51:800 (1,2) - keep it for a while cuz I am not sure
3. 00:53:436 (5,1) - too bad you didn't stack this one a jump at the end fits more to me.
4. 01:13:618 (3) - remove whistle
5. 01:15:800 (3) - remove here too (actually I thought you're going for soft, as well as above) they are suitable... no reason to remove
6. 02:08:164 (3,4,5,6) - never really expect these to be stacked since all the previous pattern separates these (except 01:59:436 (3,4,5,6) - because this is different to any other part, as there's no "we are one" vocal) if we map '--are one' slider out, the difficulty would be a bit easy so I think some overmapping would be fine to go/
7. 02:16:618 (2,3,4,5,6,7,1) - Personally speaking this plays a little bit weird, I'd rather go with circular or pentagram err, I tried circular before but i think it was too easy so I changed it
8. 02:16:345 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - do the following for the hitsound because it fits the tom )if u want to) all the following are set to sampleset auto addition drum >> hat hat hat hat clap clap finish finish too loud
9. 02:35:982 (3,4) - engery shep. excuse me?

normal

1. 01:46:891 (1,3) - stack this perfectly
2. 01:55:618 (1,2) - blanket fix all fixed

hard

1. 03:27:254 (1) - don't stack this with the previous note, instead put it above the two sliders, making a triangle shape to really give the end look (stacking it gives a hanging feel imo) fixed

insen

1. 02:06:527 (1) - you have one job that blanket is not obvious in gaming

[ L u k a s ] wrote:

from queue uwu

Normal

1. 00:34:891 (1) - I think it's better that you put a spinner here because the song is getting more intense, by putting a long slider there you ave even less density than the parts that aren't intense you may be right but there is no place for denser rhythm so a long slider is also fine to use in low levels..
2. 00:38:436 (2) - Slider is ending on a stronger sound than it began
3. 00:40:618 (4) - 00:42:800 (2) - ^
4. 00:47:436 (3) - The arrow is on a stronger sound that should be emphasized
5. 01:38:164 (1) - Same as the first point
6. 01:51:254 (1,2,3) - This is the same as 01:53:436 (4,5,6,7) - but you put different rhythm, try make it the same the thing as above won't hurt the playing performance cuz in low levels. cuz I follow the strong beats everywhere, it won't hurt if they aren't start with it unless it's extremely special

Hard

1. 00:35:709 (4,5) - These two are the same they should be equally spaced fixed

Nice map
map for m4m: https://osu.ppy.sh/s/629374 (mod hard and light insane) or https://osu.ppy.sh/s/641711 (mod hard and advanced)