1. 00:00:527 (1,1) - nice 16 seconds of emptiness boi (on a serious note, why)
2. 00:36:527 (1,2) - I expect sliders like these are actually way faster to really brings out the emphasizing. 0.1x SV multiplier doesn't really looks even slightly different. Same goes for another parts 01:41:982 (1,2) - 02:51:800 (1,2) -
3. 00:53:436 (5,1) - too bad you didn't stack this one
4. 01:13:618 (3) - remove whistle
5. 01:15:800 (3) - remove here too (actually I thought you're going for soft, as well as above)
6. 02:08:164 (3,4,5,6) - never really expect these to be stacked since all the previous pattern separates these (except 01:59:436 (3,4,5,6) - because this is different to any other part, as there's no "we are one" vocal)
7. 02:16:618 (2,3,4,5,6,7,1) - Personally speaking this plays a little bit weird, I'd rather go with circular or pentagram
8. 02:16:345 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - do the following for the hitsound because it fits the tom )if u want to) all the following are set to sampleset auto addition drum >> hat hat hat hat clap clap finish finish
9. 02:35:982 (3,4) - engery shep.

1. 01:46:891 (1,3) - stack this perfectly
2. 01:55:618 (1,2) - blanket fix
   

1. 03:27:254 (1) - don't stack this with the previous note, instead put it above the two sliders, making a triangle shape to really give the end look (stacking it gives a hanging feel imo)

1. 02:06:527 (1) - you have one job

• Normal

1. 00:46:891 (2,3) - should be like 00:41:436 (1,2) - for consistence make something like this if you want to change of pattern https://puu.sh/xmr2D/f2faaadadf.png
2. 00:59:982 (3) - add whistle on the tail like you did with 00:57:800 (6)

• Advanced

1. 02:12:254 (5) - ctrl+H for change flow?

• Hard

1. 00:41:982 (3,7) - imperfect stack..
2. 01:20:164 - i think this drum should be clickable, it is strong tbh
3. 01:39:799 (4,4) - not very stacked
4. 02:07:891 - map this electronic sound pls
5. 02:51:800 (1,2,3) - little contact lol
6. 03:00:254 - like i said before rip electronic sound..
7. 03:08:982 - ^

• Insane

1. 00:20:982 (5,1) - avoid this contact
2. 02:16:891 (3,4) - i find that when you replace them by circle it's fits better with the music, especially for drums like you make on last diff

• Night Begins

1. 01:15:254 (1,4) - not very stacked lol

ShogunMoon wrote:

Heyo!

NM from Q

• Normal

1. 00:46:891 (2,3) - should be like 00:41:436 (1,2) - for consistence make something like this if you want to change of pattern https://puu.sh/xmr2D/f2faaadadf.png umm, the reason I chose to make the objects denser, is that, the rap begins, so I think it's fine to map more things out.
2. 00:59:982 (3) - add whistle on the tail like you did with 00:57:800 (6) I don't found any key sound which is special to set a whistle tho...

• Advanced

1. 02:12:254 (5) - ctrl+H for change flow? I meant to make a curve like this 02:11:436 (3,4,5,6) -

• Hard

1. 00:41:982 (3,7) - imperfect stack.. fixed
2. 01:20:164 - i think this drum should be clickable, it is strong tbh fixed
3. 01:39:799 (4,4) - not very stacked err, fixed
4. 02:07:891 - map this electronic sound pls idk why but i just want to make the 'we are one' out ;w;
5. 02:51:800 (1,2,3) - little contact lol that's not obvious in game tho
6. 03:00:254 - like i said before rip electronic sound..
7. 03:08:982 - ^ the same

• Insane

1. 00:20:982 (5,1) - avoid this contact it disappears totally when (1) shows up
2. 02:16:891 (3,4) - i find that when you replace them by circle it's fits better with the music, especially for drums like you make on last diff it would be too hard to play if they are circles... be aware it's a 220bpm song indeed..

• Night Begins

1. 01:15:254 (1,4) - not very stacked lol k

Clean mapset!

gl!~

Thanks for modding!

Garden wrote:

给个metadata参考 fixed

https://www.monstercat.com/release/MC012

Normal:
01:20:709 (1) - 这里换默认的normalfinish比较好吧，其他难度大概同 fixed
01:55:618 (1,2) - 这里包的视觉间距相比其他的有点小，可以微调一下 fixed

Adv:
00:38:436 (2,3,4) - 可以动下2包4，这里排版看着有点挤 fixed 稍微把4向右移动了下
02:42:527 (2) - ctrl-g可能比较好，02:41:436 (1,2,1) - 这样三个同向打起来有点怪怪的 ;? fixed

Insane:
00:45:800 (1,2) - 位置可以调整一下，目前 00:45:800 (1,2,3) - 的flow打起来感觉比较微妙，建议向右移弄成 00:41:436 (1,2,3) - 的角度->大概这样 虽然你的做法也不错，但是我改完后觉得差别不大...我还是不改了..而且我不怎么想动那个中心翻折过来的滑条..
02:16:891 (3,4) - https://puu.sh/xo3ba/6f46239ede.png 这个顺序可能打得更顺点 fixed

Night Begins:
00:44:027 (2) - 这里突出某一侧的间距打起来会比较有意思如 00:41:436 (1,2,3) - ，也有强调 00:44:164 - 的意思，类似地方也可稍微注意，现在老外摸图好像很抓consistency阿( 所谓consistency很多时候是借题耍流氓...只要不过分影响打图感受，根本不可能在高难度谈consistency之类的东西。要是作图听到白线有strong beat就必须跳，那作图的思路基本就锁死了... consistency会影响到ranking process的情况，要我说只适用于低难度。高难度有足够的空间来给mapper做一些他们可以自由发挥的地方，而不是从所谓音乐乐理上来限制他什么时候该放大间距，什么时候该放小间距—————回归正题，这里我这么放是因为这里有一个隐藏的blanket 00:44:027 (2,3) - ，要是放到其他位置就没有什么可以用来对照的图形了，也就一点也不好看了。
02:07:073 (3,4) - 可以试试这种flow -> https://puu.sh/xo3FD/26ebad0ce9.png 03:16:891 (3) - 类似 但是这样做了，02:07:345 (4,1) - 的衔接就很糟... 可能我是纯鼠的原因，我觉得上下移动对我来说移动起来就很舒服...板子的话感受或许不一样...

感觉也没啥非要改不可的 稳

KanpanRin wrote:

摸~

Insane

00:32:709 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - 我覺得將它們等間距排列比較好看。 等距离的话..有点挤..我觉得..
00:45:800 (1) - 嗯~我認為拉成拱型的滑條移動會比較流暢。 ummmm, 拱形吗...实际上我觉得直线更好打...可能是我用纯鼠的原因吧...
01:13:618 (7,8,1) - 這三個用相同的間距。 其实我本来的思路是让它们三个一样间距01:14:027 (8,1,2) - ，但是这里没有足够的空间放1.4x了...
02:56:982 (2) - 要不要試試看將頭尾對調放，這樣也比較好移動。 啊。好主意。但是单单只有这里这样放肯定要被bn说没有consistency什么的，不过我应该在extra用这个东西的..啊啊但是现在真的不好改extra那边了。

Night Begins

00:25:618 (3) - 移動到(x: 148, y: 148) 呃...这里已经叠好了没必要改呀..
00:25:891 (4) - 移動到(x: 196, y: 296) fixed
00:28:891 (3,4) - [box=要不要試試看這種擺法。] 个人觉得这里不是很棒，因为2到3的flow不是很好，同时我也不是很喜欢把滑条结尾藏到另外一个滑条结尾下面。
00:44:709 (5,6,7) - 用相同的間距如何? 嘛，同样间距的话，最后那声strongbeat也没有所突出，是吧..

嘛~感覺找不太到缺點了，能摸的東西太少了。
祝好運~

Thanks for modding!

Chaoslitz wrote:

肥 喵 肥 超

[Normal]

1. 00:45:800 (1,2) - 這種相反方向的flow在低難度還是避免下 fixed

[Hard]

1. 01:38:164 (1,2,3,4) - 這個距離再hard來說還是有點兒過大 (還有對比 02:47:982 (1,2,3,4) - ), 建議放近點 fixed

[Insane]

1. 01:10:891 (5,6) - 這個沒必要放這麼遠吧, 試試吧01:11:300 (6,7) - blanket了 fixed

[Night Begins]

1. 02:53:368 - 漏了drum-hitnormal? fixed
2. 03:26:845 - 沒有明顯的音要不考慮轉用滑條 这里有4声贝司声

圖沒毛病可是你還欠我一張女裝照 NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO

thanks for mod ;w;!

Chaoslitz wrote:

你還欠我一張女裝照

ShogunMoon wrote:

wow grats!~