Guest
home
beatmaps
rankings
community
store
help
forum
  1. Forums
  2. Beatmaps
  3. Ranked Beatmaps (Archived)
  4. Beatmap Graveyard

IOSYS - One-sided Love

posted
Total Posts
93
show more
Nakagawa-Kanon
Featured Artist
1,893 posts
Joined March 2009
Nakagawa-Kanon
nothing to fix
Tony
1,510 posts
Joined July 2010
Tony
Hey! you requested a mod in my mod queue! so here I am :3

[General]
everything looks good

I did a timing check, everything looks good there too

[Soror's Normal]
00:43:146 (3,4) - try something like this: http://puu.sh/bPFi
01:14:812 (2,3) - ^
01:40:479 (4) - remove finish and add a finish 01:40:813 (1) - here instead. (on start)
01:55:479 (3,4) - try something like this: http://puu.sh/bPFV
02:47:479 (3) - add new combo here and remove nc 02:49:479 (1) - here instead
03:01:812 (1) - remove nc
03:17:479 (2,3,4) - try something like this: http://puu.sh/bPI0

[Hard]
01:28:812 (3) - add new combo
02:05:979 (1) - remove new combo
03:06:646 (4,6) - stack the end of these two sliders better like this http://puu.sh/bPIL
03:24:146 (5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - make that stream like you did in lunatic. It fits awesome

[dksslgj's Song]
I suggest dksslgj's Love as diff name. It relates better to the song title :P
00:35:312 (1) - 1 grid right and 00:35:812 (2) - 1 grid up. (It looks better imo) Nazi
00:38:479 (5,6) - 1 grid left Nazi
00:41:979 (1) - 1 grid right Nazi
01:02:646 (7) - stack the start of the slider with 01:01:979 (5) - better. Nazi
01:02:646 (7,1) - ^
01:43:312 (1,2) - ^
03:10:646 (1,2) - ^
02:26:146 (6) - NC?

[Lunatic]
AR -1
OD +1
01:51:146 (4) - make it 1/4 shorter
02:07:979 (4,5,6,7) - stack these slider ends better. Nazi
02:33:979 (9) - make it 1/4 shorter
03:16:813 (1,2,3,4) - stack these slider ends better. Nazi
omg. That SV in the end is killing everybody :D

that's all. Awesome map. Awesome song! Starr :3
Lami
1,756 posts
Joined June 2011
Lami
:) Lunatic is so hard :)

[Lunatic]
44:479 (4) - 별로 중요한 부분은 아니지만 1:51:146 (4)와 같은 부분인데 앞파트는 소리가 없고 뒤쪽은 소리가 있는데
의도 하신 부분인가요??
2:27:812 (1,2) - 1번 슬라이더에 가려서 뒤쪽의 3,4,1 부분이 눈에 잘 들어오지 않는데
특별히 문제가 없다면 이렇게 바꿔보는건 어떨까요
SPOILER
http://puu.sh/bUZo
3:19:449 (1,2,3,4) - 주변 슬라이더가 전부 대칭적이라 생각해봤는데 이렇게 하면 어떨까요
SPOILER
http://puu.sh/bUZT
Rare
1,118 posts
Joined August 2010
Rare
All suggestions~
You can ignore if you don't like it.

Soror's Normal
00:23:479 (1) - remove new combo
Looks nice~

Hard
00:43:979 (3) - add whistle to start this slider
01:50:646 (3) - Ctrl+R?
02:01:979 (1) - 1 grid up at red point
02:43:479 (6) - remove whistle to sliderslide this slider
03:00:479 (6) - this like x:256 y:328
SPOILER



dksslqj's Song
01:05:479 (3) - Ctrl+R?
02:20:479 (1,2,3,4) - this like pattern
SPOILER
02:48:813 (2) - add whistle to end this slider


Lunatic
02:24:479 (5) - Ctrl+R?
03:07:979 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - this like
SPOILER

Good song and Nice mapset!!!<3
sry I'm noob Modder :o
arien666
6,271 posts
Joined May 2009
arien666
[Lunatic]
01:51:146 (4) - Just end on 1/2??? I don't think why that should be on 1/4 ;_; Since there's no melody but just tricky orz



Just wonder about something but whatever orz
Chewin
osu! Alumni
4,082 posts
Joined December 2010
Chewin
Hai, took from #modreqs

General
  1. Try offset 12470, it's better to me.
  2. In the normal and dksslqj's song use the same kiai time of the hard and lunatic please :S
Soror's Normal
  1. 00:17:146 (3) - This circle follows nothing :\ Move it to 00:17:312 so it fits the sound "P" lol
  2. 01:15:646 (3) - Mh, I suggest you to move it to 01:15:812 and reduce it by 1/2:
  3. 01:55:479 (3) - Extend this slider 1/2 so it follows the voice, and make in this way?
Hard
  1. Rename it insane? It's has as an insane diff o:
  2. 02:13:812 (5,6) - Overlap with 02:12:646 (4)?
  3. fine :S
dksslqj's Song
  1. 01:05:479 (3) - ctrl + r
  2. 03:00:479 (4) - Un grid left, so it's overlap with the next slider 03:01:479 (3)
  3. Omg I like this map >w<
Lunatic
  1. 00:18:146 (7,1) - Exchange new combo :S
  2. 00:23:312 (1) - Useless circle, please remove it :\
  3. 00:57:646 - 00:57:812 - 00:57:979Add 3 circles here, they are good:
  4. 02:04:312 ^
  5. 03:02:979 ^ I understand that you did it on purpouse but it's better if you add it imho
That's all, good luck \:D/
Katsuri
1,075 posts
Joined February 2011
Katsuri
Modding! Hope to help you! >w<''

General
  1. Hmmm, At 'dksslqj's Song' the third and fifth kiais ends half tick after after the other difficulties, is that on purpose? I suggest you to finish them:
    1. #3 Kiai - 02:13:969
      #5 Kiai - 03:12:636
Easy
  1. 00:22:136 (2,1) - I think I can say about these two because they are on the end of the phrase... The flow looks really bad here, but it's still easy to fix, try making something like this. Just 'ctrl+<' the pattern and put it on it's place.
  2. 02:49:469 (1) - Here I suggest you to remove the new combo, it looks redundant since you have a new combo on the next note.
Overall Grade: 6.7

dksslqj's Song
  1. 00:48:803 (1,2,3,4,5) - dksslqj, sir. This pattern follows really nothing. I think you can do something like this.
  2. 01:55:469 (1,2,3,4,5) - Oh copy/paste copy/suggestion.
  3. Consider adding a spinner in somewhere to differentiate the score.
Overall Grade: 9.7

Insane
  1. 03:24:136 (1) - Oh, this spinner is not even rankable, autoplay needs to get at least 2000 points and gets 1000 now. Try to make something like this(move 1/4 beat before) and it will be fine.
  2. The bpm is too fast for AR8, consider moving it to 9, plays really better for me.
  3. 01:16:136 (1,2,3,4) - I particulary HATE circle'd jumps just sayin'.
Overall Grade: 9.3

Lunatic
  1. AR 9 is all I can say, if you don't use AR9 call me and I will mod this difficulty again point every hidden note by the AR8.
Overall Grade AR8: 6.8
Overall Grade AR9: 9.6
Gamu
Elite Mapper
2,606 posts
Joined December 2010
Gamu
hi- :)

request from my queue

[General]

●fine~

[Soror's Normal]

●00:39:803 (1) - Move (x:352 y:264) I think so
●00:51:469 (2) - Hmm.. change please ⇒ http://puu.sh/cM00 (Easier)

[dksslqj's Song]

●fine~

[Insane]

●00:22:136 (1) - Add whistle?
●00:41:803 (4,2) - try
156,312,41803,1,8

180,184,42470,2,0,B|220:224|204:304|132:320,1,150,8|0

[Lunatic]

●HP+1?
●00:21:025 (2) AND 00:21:692 (2) Move (x:256 y:276)

Good map!!!!!!

That's All
Lissette
osu! Alumni
1,496 posts
Joined July 2008
Lissette
Lunatic
00:14:136 (1) - why new combo here? remove it
00:17:303 (1) - same
00:48:803 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - this combo sounds and plays better this way http://puu.sh/dbxu because the slider fits the guitar, and in the middle of where you had the slider before, you can place a note that follow the vocals very well

Insane
00:59:303 (1) - remove new combo and add new combo it here 01:00:136 (4) - (since this is the pattern you used in Lunatic you should keep it the same)

dksslqj's Song
01:02:636 (7) - the two sliders like here 01:00:136 (5,6) - fits way more
01:45:969 (1) - remove new combo and add it in next note
01:47:803 (1) - remove new combo too, those short combos doesn't make sense to me at all, an example of a good short combo is this one on Insane 02:17:469 (1,2) -
02:14:636 (3,4) - this is out of place, if you listen the song carefully the stream starts here 02:14:803 - and ends here 02:15:136 -
02:22:803 (8) - new combo here like you did here 02:17:469 (1,2,3) -
add a spinner to vary scores
Why not changing diff name to dksslqj's Hard?

Soror's Normal
00:21:470 (1) - remove new combo and add one here 00:22:136 - remove new combo from the next note too
01:55:470 (3,4) - sounds off, try something else that fits the music better

This is for all mappers on this set, I see you have some problem setting new combos. Not everyone uses the same criteria when adding new combo but, when you make a new combo pattern for your map, you should be consistent in it. For example, new combos will follow the music and will be one every 8 beats, or new combos will follow the vocals and will be one every 4 beats, something like that, i hope you guys understand me ^^

Good luck :)
L i a
Topic Starter
L i a
[quote="Lissette"]Lunatic
00:14:136 (1) - why new combo here? remove it (Fix)
00:17:303 (1) - same (Fix)
00:48:803 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - this combo sounds and plays better this way http://puu.sh/dbxu because the slider fits the guitar, and in the middle of where you had the slider before, you can place a note that follow the vocals very well (no ..)

Insane
00:59:303 (1) - remove new combo and add new combo it here 01:00:136 (4) - (since this is the pattern you used in Lunatic you should keep it the same) (Fix)
Soror
79 posts
Joined July 2011
Soror

Lissette wrote:

Soror's Normal
00:21:470 (1) - remove new combo and add one here 00:22:136 - remove new combo from the next note too I tried to used them every two white ticks here, and there is a long white tick before this note. And to say about the last note... it has the same reason firstly, and also there's a change of the atmosphere.
01:55:470 (3,4) - sounds off, try something else that fits the music better It follows the instrument here.
Thank you for the modding.
[CSGA]Ar3sgice
4,298 posts
Joined July 2011
[CSGA]Ar3sgice
Hi, from my queue


[Soror's Normal]

  1. 00:34:136 (1) - endpoint 1 grid left
  2. 01:11:469 (1) - move middle point to (192,160)
  3. 01:14:803 (2) - I think this slider end at 01:15:136 is better
  4. 01:30:803 (2) - add whistle at start?
  5. 01:31:803 (3,4) - add some curve between 3 and 4 will look better.
  6. 01:55:470 (3) - 1/2 longer
  7. 01:56:469 (5) - 1/2 later; 1/2 shorter
  8. 02:12:803 (1) - end at 02:13:469 is better imo...
  9. 02:13:803 (2,3) - clap at end
  10. 02:17:470 (3) - clap
  11. 02:18:136 (1,3) - clap at end
  12. 03:18:303 (3) - 1/2 slider here? fits the song better imo.
[Dksslqj's Song]

  1. 00:28:136 (1) - spacing? / why jump here?
  2. 00:35:803 (2) - 1 grid left?
  3. 00:38:469 (5) - ^
  4. 00:41:970 (1) - use white point? because use red point then it's hard to see where it's going
  5. under the other slider
  6. 00:40:636 (1) - ^, make some curve in this?
  7. 03:10:803 (2) - maybe you need to stack this slider?
[Insane]

  1. 00:52:636 (1) - move the 2nd pooint to (216,220) and third point to (308,220)
  2. 00:59:303 (5) - why not the same spacing here
  3. 01:19:803 (1) - move to (92,120)
  4. 01:24:803 (1) - add whistle
  5. 01:22:136 (3) - ^
  6. 01:41:969 (1) - move the 2nd point to (160,104)
  7. 01:51:469 (1,2,1,2) - add whistle?
[Lunatic]

  1. just some hitsound suggestions... = =
  2. 00:12:803 (5,6,10) - add whistle at the beginning
  3. 00:15:470 (1,2) - ^
  4. 00:17:303 (6) - ^
  5. 00:19:803 (9) - ^
  6. 00:21:025 (2,3,1,2,3) - ^
  7. 00:45:470 (4) - add whistle
  8. 00:46:803 (4) - ^
  9. 00:47:303 (1,2,3) - add whistle at the beginning
  10. 00:50:803 (4,4) - add whistle
  11. 01:00:803 (1,3) - ^
  12. 01:01:303 (4) - add whistle at the beginning
  13. 01:01:970 (6) - ^
  14. 01:03:470 (1,3,4) - ^
  15. 01:06:636 (4) - ^
  16. 01:08:802 (1,3,4) - ^
  17. 01:12:136 (3,4) - ^
  18. 01:14:136 (3,5) - ^
  19. 01:15:303 (6) - ^
  20. 01:22:136 (1,2) - ^
  21. 01:24:803 (1,2) - ^
  22. 00:18:136 (1) - ^
Good luck~
Nichiyouki
1,579 posts
Joined August 2011
Nichiyouki
Hi, L i a

from my modding queue

[General]
No problem

[Soror's Normal]
00:16:469 (2) - add clap in the end of slider.
00:19:469 (3) - add clap in the beginning of slider.
00:46:136 (2) - remove finish in the beginning of slider.
03:24:469 (4) - change clap is finish in the end of slider.

[dksslqj's Song]
No problem

[Insane]
00:21:469 (2) - remove whistle in the end of slider
00:22:136 (1) - add finish
00:34:136 (1) - add clap in the beginning of slider
00:39:470 (1) - remove finish in the beginning of slider?
00:56:636 (1) - add whistle
01:09:470 (3) - remove whistle in the beginning of slider?
01:13:136 (7) - change whistle in the beginning is the end of slider
01:28:136 (2) - remove whistle in the end of slider
01:28:803 (1) - add finish in the end of slider
01:46:136 (1) - remove finish in the beginning of slider?
02:03:303 (1) - add whistle
02:05:969 (5) - remove whistle
02:10:136 (1) - add finish in the beginning of slider
02:19:803 (7) - change whistle is clap, then add whistle in the beginning of slider at 02:19:969?
02:37:970 (1) - add whistle in the end of slider
03:18:470 (7) - change whistle is clap, then add whistle in the beginning of slider at 03:18:636?

[Lunatic]
00:43:303 (4) - remove finish in the beginning of slider
00:56:636 (1) - add whistle
02:26:136 (1) - add finish in the beginning of slider
03:11:470 (1) - add clap in the end of slider
03:12:136 (3) - remove finish in the beginning of slider
03:18:470 (6) - add whistle in the end of slider?

That's all that I can find them.

Good luck~
Nakagawa-Kanon
Featured Artist
1,893 posts
Joined March 2009
Nakagawa-Kanon
내꺼 대신 고쳐주면 안됨?
happy30
Featured Artist
2,064 posts
Joined August 2008
happy30
[Soror's Normal]
Some suggestions for the rhythm in your map
  1. 00:17:136 (3) - Move the note 1/2 further (00:17:303 - ) for a better flow in the rhythm?
  2. 00:43:136 (3) - How about starting this slider 1/2 further (00:43:136 (3) - )
  3. 01:04:469 (2) - Maybe start this 1/2 later as well? (make it something similar to 00:58:136 (1,2) - this rhythm sounds nice.)
  4. Try this out: 01:33:803 (2) - move this slider 1/2 later, then remove this note: 01:35:136 (3) - and at last 01:35:303 (1) - move this slider 1/2 back and extend it by 1/2.
  5. 02:18:136 (1) - Extend the slider to the next red tick? and then move the startpoint of 02:18:803 (2) - 1/2 further.
  6. 03:16:803 (1,2) - same thing! Extend the slider to the next red tick? and then move the startpoint of 03:16:803 (1,2) - 1/2 further.
[dksslqj's Hard]
Some suggestions for the rhythm in your map
  1. 01:02:803 - It would be nice if you could place a note or start a slider at this position, it feels a bit empty. This is how I would do it, haha http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/225453
  2. 02:09:469 - ^
  3. 03:08:136 - ^
To be honest, this difficulty is too hard to be considered a [Hard]. Maybe rename it to [dksslqj's Insane]

[Insane]
  1. The difficulty is fine as an Insane but I suggest you to reduce some jumps, use AR7 and rename it to [Hard]. You mapset really needs a good [Hard] difficulty if you want it ranked, especially with 3 Insane diffs. Currently the diff spread in your mapset isn't good enough for ranking.
[Lunatic]
  1. 00:44:470 (4) - Don't silence the end. it's not really intuitive
  2. 01:51:136 (4) - Same here but the volume is still normal. (Just make the sampleset normal as well?)
  3. 02:33:969 (9) - you gotta change this. 1- don't silence notes. 2- don't let it randomly end on a blue tick
  4. The speed up at the end is a bit unnecessary but ok.
Soror
79 posts
Joined July 2011
Soror

happy30 wrote:

[Soror's Normal]
Some suggestions for the rhythm in your map
  1. 00:17:136 (3) - Move the note 1/2 further (00:17:303 - ) for a better flow in the rhythm? Fixed
  2. 00:43:136 (3) - How about starting this slider 1/2 further (00:43:136 (3) - ) Fixed
  3. 01:04:469 (2) - Maybe start this 1/2 later as well? (make it something similar to 00:58:136 (1,2) - this rhythm sounds nice.) I'll keep this at this time..
  4. Try this out: 01:33:803 (2) - move this slider 1/2 later, then remove this note: 01:35:136 (3) - and at last 01:35:303 (1) - move this slider 1/2 back and extend it by 1/2. Fixed in other way
  5. 02:18:136 (1) - Extend the slider to the next red tick? and then move the startpoint of 02:18:803 (2) - 1/2 further. I'll keep this, it follows a bit regular rhythm.
  6. 03:16:803 (1,2) - same thing! Extend the slider to the next red tick? and then move the startpoint of 03:16:803 (1,2) - 1/2 further. Fixed
Thanks for the modding ~
happy30
Featured Artist
2,064 posts
Joined August 2008
happy30
ok it seems fine for me now :)

bubbled
wcx19911123
3,862 posts
Joined June 2010
wcx19911123
from my queue
just did a quick check and no problem found , so
good luck :3
Elly-chan
969 posts
Joined January 2011
Elly-chan

Bubble Pop.

REASON(S)
  1. Incorrect title according to IOSYS' Website, Touhouwiki.net, VGMDB, and many other sources. The correct title should be 'one-sided love' (No Capitals.) This was confirmed by Faust and Blue Dragon.
  2. dksslqj's First Kiai Section should end at 01:07:303 - like it does in all of the other difficulties.
Me and L i a talked about the incorrect title on IRC and we both agreed that it's supposed to be in lowercase letters, so he/she didn't want to pop it. Since this is an unrankable issue, however, this must get popped.

Contact Faust for a rebubble after you fix these issues. (Simple Translation: You Will Get Another Bubble If You Fix These Things!) Kiddo-Kun Will ^^

((Waiting For Either a Bubble Pop Icon or for L i a to pop his/her bubble~))
Last edited by Elly-chan , edited 1 time in total.
Kiddo-Kun
1,014 posts
Joined May 2009
Kiddo-Kun
Yo!

[General]

• Popping that bubble because Elly-chan is right. The name should actually be one-sided love (With no caps)

Now, I guess I should take a good look at this map.

[Soror's Normal]

• 00:49:303 (3,4) - This could match the music better if it was like this instead.
• 00:51:469 (2) - Add a finish to the start of the slider to be consistent with 00:46:136 (2).
• 01:06:136 (1) - This slider will cause players to over-jump, thus rendering inappropriate for a Normal diff.
• 02:04:803 (1) - BOOORRRIIING Long kick sliders are boring and I expect something more exciting for the kiai start.
• 02:07:470 (2) - New combo on this note to match the previous parts like this.
• 02:49:469 (1) - Remove the new combo on this note, it does not really match the music.

[Lunatic]

• 03:01:970 (1) - This circle comes way too early after the spinner. I would delete it and just extend the spinner.

Yeah, fix those and I'll bubble.
The hunterx
91 posts
Joined April 2011
The hunterx
Nice map :)
BanchoBot
w00t p00t
34,830 posts
Here since the beginning
BanchoBot
This modding thread has been migrated to the new "modding discussions" system. Please make sure to re-post any existing (and unresolved) efforts to the new system as required.
Please sign in to reply.

New reply

0
73 / 93