Hi! Here's my fast mod :3
[Soror’s Normal]
00:12:979 (1) – This spinner starts really early to the previous slider for a Normal difficulty. You should move it at least 2 ticks forward or search for an alternative.
00:15:479 (1,2,3) – This rhythm sounds a bit weird to me. Maybe make (1) 1 tick larger? It sounds better imo.
00:17:812 (4) – NC and remove NC of 00:18:146 (1).
00:49:812 (1) – NC here and remove NC of 00:50:812 (1).
00:54:312 (1) – Same spinner problem as I told you above.
00:59:312 (2) – I see and understand that you’re following the vocal but I don’t like when there are notes placed (or ending in the case of sliders) at red ticks in Easy and Normal difficulties. It doesn’t sound good to me. It’s a Normal difficulty so try to follow the vocals in a more simple way, placing (and ending, again in the case of sliders) notes at white ticks. Try this, it sounds better to me: http://puu.sh/bKRu.
01:08:479 (2) – NC here and remove NC of 01:08:812 (1).
01:13:812 (4) – NC here and remove NC of 01:14:146 (1).
01:14:812 (2,3) – Try this to avoid red ticks and to make a more simple and easy to follow rhythm: http://puu.sh/bKSy.
01:30:146 (1,2,3) - ^ http://puu.sh/bKTv.
01:30:813 (1) – Remove NC.
01:35:146 (3) – Remove hitfinish. It doesn’t sound good there.
01:35:479 (1,2,3,4) – Again, try this to avoid red ticks and to make a more simple and easy to follow rhythm: http://puu.sh/bKTR.
01:40:479 (4) – Remove hitfinish here and add it to the next slider (1) start instead.
01:40:813 (1,2,3) - ^ http://puu.sh/bKUn.
01:43:813 (1,2,3,4) - ^ http://puu.sh/bKUG.
01:46:479 (1,2,3) - ^ http://puu.sh/bKUP.
01:49:146 (1,2,3) – Again, to avoid red ticks and stuff: http://puu.sh/bKVB. Also, I don’t want to be annoying complaining about slider shapes but the slider (2) shape doesn’t look good.
01:53:979 (1,2,3,4) - ^ http://puu.sh/bKWJ.
01:57:479 (1,2,1,2) - ^ http://puu.sh/bKX2.
02:04:813 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^ http://puu.sh/bKXl.
02:09:813 (1,2,3,4) - ^ http://puu.sh/bKXu.
02:12:813 (1) – Make this slider 1 tick shorter and add 1 repeat.
02:15:146 (4) – NC here and remove NC of 02:15:813 (1).
02:16:646 (2) – Move this slider 1 tick back, then make it 1 tick shorter and add 1 repeat.
02:17:812 (x) – Maybe you can add a note here.
02:20:813 (1,2,3) – Try this instead: http://puu.sh/bKYG.
02:23:146 (x) – Add a note?
02:23:479 (1) – Make 1 tick larger.
02:42:146 (3) – I don’t like this hitfinish here.
02:47:479 (3) – NC.
02:49:479 (1) – I don’t find this NC so necessary.
03:06:146 (3) – Add a repeat to this slider and delete (4).
03:14:812 (3) – Make this slider 1 tick shorter and add 1 repeat to it.
03:18:312 (3,4) – Move this 2 notes 1 tick back. After that, make slider (4) 1 tick shorter and add 1 repeat to it.
03:24:479 (4) – What a weird ending. It sounds better if you put a spinner at 03:23:146.
[Hard]
00:12:646 (3) – Whistle.
00:12:812 (5) – Whistle at start.
00:17:313 (8) - ^
00:17:979 (3) – Whistle.
00:18:146 (5) – Whistle at start.
01:10:813 (8) – Remove NC?
01:40:479 (5) – NC here instead of being at 01:40:812 (1)?
02:09:812 (3) – NC here instead of being at 02:10:146 (1)?
[dksslqj’s Song]
00:12:479 (1,2) – I don’t like this overlap >o<
00:22:146 (1) – Remove NC?
00:43:313 (4) – NC.
00:46:146 (3) – Maybe NC?
00:52:146 (4) - ^
03:01:479 (3) – Place where previous note 03:00:479 (4) was?
I like a lot this difficulty. Cool mapping style. Nice job!
[Lunatic]
Nothing special to say about this difficulty. Oh, since you used sound samples in a similar way than the Hard, you can apply the hitsound suggestions that I told you in the Hard Difficulty if you like how it sounds.
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Good luck!
[Soror’s Normal]
00:12:979 (1) – This spinner starts really early to the previous slider for a Normal difficulty. You should move it at least 2 ticks forward or search for an alternative.
00:15:479 (1,2,3) – This rhythm sounds a bit weird to me. Maybe make (1) 1 tick larger? It sounds better imo.
00:17:812 (4) – NC and remove NC of 00:18:146 (1).
00:49:812 (1) – NC here and remove NC of 00:50:812 (1).
00:54:312 (1) – Same spinner problem as I told you above.
00:59:312 (2) – I see and understand that you’re following the vocal but I don’t like when there are notes placed (or ending in the case of sliders) at red ticks in Easy and Normal difficulties. It doesn’t sound good to me. It’s a Normal difficulty so try to follow the vocals in a more simple way, placing (and ending, again in the case of sliders) notes at white ticks. Try this, it sounds better to me: http://puu.sh/bKRu.
01:08:479 (2) – NC here and remove NC of 01:08:812 (1).
01:13:812 (4) – NC here and remove NC of 01:14:146 (1).
01:14:812 (2,3) – Try this to avoid red ticks and to make a more simple and easy to follow rhythm: http://puu.sh/bKSy.
01:30:146 (1,2,3) - ^ http://puu.sh/bKTv.
01:30:813 (1) – Remove NC.
01:35:146 (3) – Remove hitfinish. It doesn’t sound good there.
01:35:479 (1,2,3,4) – Again, try this to avoid red ticks and to make a more simple and easy to follow rhythm: http://puu.sh/bKTR.
01:40:479 (4) – Remove hitfinish here and add it to the next slider (1) start instead.
01:40:813 (1,2,3) - ^ http://puu.sh/bKUn.
01:43:813 (1,2,3,4) - ^ http://puu.sh/bKUG.
01:46:479 (1,2,3) - ^ http://puu.sh/bKUP.
01:49:146 (1,2,3) – Again, to avoid red ticks and stuff: http://puu.sh/bKVB. Also, I don’t want to be annoying complaining about slider shapes but the slider (2) shape doesn’t look good.
01:53:979 (1,2,3,4) - ^ http://puu.sh/bKWJ.
01:57:479 (1,2,1,2) - ^ http://puu.sh/bKX2.
02:04:813 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^ http://puu.sh/bKXl.
02:09:813 (1,2,3,4) - ^ http://puu.sh/bKXu.
02:12:813 (1) – Make this slider 1 tick shorter and add 1 repeat.
02:15:146 (4) – NC here and remove NC of 02:15:813 (1).
02:16:646 (2) – Move this slider 1 tick back, then make it 1 tick shorter and add 1 repeat.
02:17:812 (x) – Maybe you can add a note here.
02:20:813 (1,2,3) – Try this instead: http://puu.sh/bKYG.
02:23:146 (x) – Add a note?
02:23:479 (1) – Make 1 tick larger.
02:42:146 (3) – I don’t like this hitfinish here.
02:47:479 (3) – NC.
02:49:479 (1) – I don’t find this NC so necessary.
03:06:146 (3) – Add a repeat to this slider and delete (4).
03:14:812 (3) – Make this slider 1 tick shorter and add 1 repeat to it.
03:18:312 (3,4) – Move this 2 notes 1 tick back. After that, make slider (4) 1 tick shorter and add 1 repeat to it.
03:24:479 (4) – What a weird ending. It sounds better if you put a spinner at 03:23:146.
[Hard]
00:12:646 (3) – Whistle.
00:12:812 (5) – Whistle at start.
00:17:313 (8) - ^
00:17:979 (3) – Whistle.
00:18:146 (5) – Whistle at start.
01:10:813 (8) – Remove NC?
01:40:479 (5) – NC here instead of being at 01:40:812 (1)?
02:09:812 (3) – NC here instead of being at 02:10:146 (1)?
[dksslqj’s Song]
00:12:479 (1,2) – I don’t like this overlap >o<
00:22:146 (1) – Remove NC?
00:43:313 (4) – NC.
00:46:146 (3) – Maybe NC?
00:52:146 (4) - ^
03:01:479 (3) – Place where previous note 03:00:479 (4) was?
I like a lot this difficulty. Cool mapping style. Nice job!
[Lunatic]
Nothing special to say about this difficulty. Oh, since you used sound samples in a similar way than the Hard, you can apply the hitsound suggestions that I told you in the Hard Difficulty if you like how it sounds.
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Good luck!