1. Beren (2.98 stars, 107 notes)
2. Hard (4.83 stars, 216 notes)
3. Insane (5 stars, 266 notes)
4. LKs (5 stars, 334 notes)

Beren wrote:

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  try offset = 1129
  Mods will contain modder's own mapping style.So you could skip some mods you don't like.
  Sorry for my poor English TAT

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  00:28:847 (3) - 不太好看，做成关于竖轴对称的？
  00:43:616 (4) - new combo，重画一下，中间的圈并不是在slider的正中，最后一个圈加finish
  01:00:231 (1) - 加finish
  01:07:616 (1) - 同上
  不知道3.11星能不能ranked

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  00:11:770 (1) - Not very symmetrical.In order to making notes more pleasing,you should keep each anchor symmetrical.And same as those sliders like this.
  01:07:155 (4) - Add finish to the last circle.

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  00:11:770 (1) - The slider like this is unrankedable.
  00:16:385 (2,3,4) - Try to stack those slider's end together?
  00:18:924 (1) - The slider like this is unrankedable.
  00:28:847 (1,2) - The slider like this is unrankedable.
  00:34:385 (1,2) - Distance is wrong.
  00:36:231 (1,1) - Stack them.
  00:36:693 (2,3) - Stack them.
  00:43:616 (1,2,3) - Try to stack those slider's end together?
  00:51:462 (1,2) - Stack them.
  00:54:231 (5,6) - Distance is wrong.
  00:59:770 (9) - The slider like this is unrankedable.
  01:01:155 (3) - The slider like this is unrankedable.
  01:03:001 (8,9) - Stack them.
  01:20:539 (1,2,3) - Try to stack those slider's end together?
  Remember that you can use only three "distance snaps" in one diff,and make sure that the distance between two notes is right.

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  00:08:078 (6) - new combo
  00:21:462 (5,1) - 距离不对
  00:55:385 (4,5,1) - 据说不能这么排
  01:29:308 (3) - 最后一个圈加finish
  尼玛这是妹抖火么！

Weiren wrote:

我觉得offest1129太早了
LKs

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  00:08:078 (6) - new combo
  00:21:462 (5,1) - 距离不对 咋不对
  00:55:385 (4,5,1) - 据说不能这么排 ok
  01:29:308 (3) - 最后一个圈加finish ok
  尼玛这是妹抖火么！

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EasyModder 1.1
Program By Weiren

LKs wrote:

Weiren wrote:

我觉得offest1129太早了
LKs

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  00:08:078 (6) - new combo
  00:21:462 (5,1) - 距离不对 咋不对
  00:55:385 (4,5,1) - 据说不能这么排 ok
  01:29:308 (3) - 最后一个圈加finish ok
  尼玛这是妹抖火么！

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EasyModder 1.1
Program By Weiren

[attachment=0:5cec0]SENTIVE - Don't lose luck (Short ver.) (Kiiwa) [LKs].osu[/attachment:5cec0]

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  The BG is 798*598… Maybe you should convert it to 800*600
  Folder sb/sb is unused, so delete it
  Kiai Time doesn’t fit the song too much

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  00:30:693 (1): Finish
  01:00:231 (1): ^
  01:07:616 (1): ^

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  00:33:001 (1,2): I suggest removing this sudden jump
  01:07:616 (1): Add finish here

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  00:11:770 (1): Can’t know where the sliderball goes
  00:28:847 (1,2): ^
  00:52:616 (5): New combo and 00:52:847 (1): Remove new combo
  00:59:770 (9): Can’t know where the sliderball goes
  01:07:616 (1): Add finish to the beginning
  01:14:078 (3,4): Confusing spacing
  01:15:001 (1): Add finish to the beginning
  01:21:924 (4): The repeat arrow is covered by hitburst

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  00:04:270 : 加个Circle
  00:09:693 (1,2,1): 统一一下间距
  01:14:770 : 加个Circle
  01:15:001 (1,2,3,4): 这干嘛加1/6…不太好认 建议改成1/4或者弄个1/8的Slider
  01:29:078 (1,2,3): 结尾不来点大跳什么的 XD

impossiblexu wrote:

[Insane]
虽然间距变化有点大让人措手不及… 但神GD无疑 XD

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  00:04:270 : 加个Circle 好 但是声音就不normal的了
  00:09:693 (1,2,1): 统一一下间距 ok
  01:14:770 : 加个Circle ok
  01:15:001 (1,2,3,4): 这干嘛加1/6…不太好认 建议改成1/4或者弄个1/8的Slider 我听错了 是1/8= =
  01:29:078 (1,2,3): 结尾不来点大跳什么的 XD 确实之前的有点无聊 少改一下 spinner懒得动了

Good map and SB

lovhin456 wrote:

LKs';
- 00:04:155 >> Add a note ? sry, i don't really eager to let so much notes fill the first part
- 00:51:231 >> Shorten by 1 tick and add a repeat ?
- 00:58:501 >> Add a note ? x
- 00:58:847 >> ^ k
- 01:28:962 >> I would say add a note here, it sounds good, but is a little mean isn't it ? (: i would like tol do if i have the right to rank a map

* Star ~ BL + kd star ~

LKs wrote:

lovhin456 wrote:

- 00:51:231 >> Shorten by 1 tick and add a repeat ?

NatsumeRin wrote:

[LKs]
我很想说no comments
01:27:116 (6,1) - 这个真的不过分吗其他因为太多了而你显然是故意的。。。所以我也不知道从何说起。这在现今osu界不算难吧

Lissette wrote:

LKs
hard D:
00:57:924 (2) - reverse arrow hidden by prev hit burst moved slider
haven't finish modding this diff, ill continue later~ XD ok

goodbye wrote:

EDIT:

PS.LKs你没事凑什么热闹MAP什么BL GAME SONG呢...终于决定要和H酱去结婚了吗... 在我眼里没有BL 只有map

Lissette wrote:

LKs
hard D:
00:57:924 (2) - reverse arrow hidden by prev hit burst
haven't finish modding this diff, ill continue later~ XD
This difficulty is so confusing, approach rate doesn't fit the song, i think you should decrease it a bit. i just set it 9 for meeting players' taste. AR8 has become slow and boring to professional players(maybe #1~#1000) as you know
There are also some patterns that are really confusing imo
00:09:693 (1) - 1/4 jump, i don't see how it fits there removed jump
00:12:231 (1,2,3,4) - is not tecnically wrong but i find it so confusing sorry, there is a jump, it can be more exploict
00:52:155 (2) - kinda hidden by the prev hit burts really donno where the slider can go, so deleted it
00:08:078 (6) - new combo? to make it more readable ok
00:15:693 (1) - why the new combo? removed

EDIT: mp3 thingy
EDIT2: LKs mod

Lissette wrote:

Re-check~

LKs
00:14:078 (1) - can you avoid this 1/4 jumps? makes the map so confusing @.@ i will remove the jump abiding your suggestiong if there is one separate slider. however, it's a part of a triangle which consists of 3 sliders.
00:29:308 - add note? that missing not feels weird while playing i don't really care this. ok added
I still think AR8 fits better the song, the bpm is not too fast, that's why it looks out of place.
i'm more about to keep it AR9, no reason

Alace wrote:

SB is so awesome
I love the insane diff \:D/
Damn you LKs why your maps are so hard!!

enjoy