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SENTIVE - Don't lose luck (short ver.)

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Lissette
kii-oni~sama<3
Bless
8-)
vivicat
8-)
KanaRin
Star for good map <3333
kanpakyin
Oh,BL..
LKs
are there anyone tell me what is the least word count that can let me submit a post :?
EnakoRin
General

  • try offset = 1129
    Mods will contain modder's own mapping style.So you could skip some mods you don't like.
    Sorry for my poor English TAT
Beren

  • 00:28:847 (3) - 不太好看,做成关于竖轴对称的?
    00:43:616 (4) - new combo,重画一下,中间的圈并不是在slider的正中,最后一个圈加finish
    01:00:231 (1) - 加finish
    01:07:616 (1) - 同上
    不知道3.11星能不能ranked
Hard

  • 00:11:770 (1) - Not very symmetrical.In order to making notes more pleasing,you should keep each anchor symmetrical.And same as those sliders like this.
    01:07:155 (4) - Add finish to the last circle.
Insane

  • 00:11:770 (1) - The slider like this is unrankedable.
    00:16:385 (2,3,4) - Try to stack those slider's end together?
    00:18:924 (1) - The slider like this is unrankedable.
    00:28:847 (1,2) - The slider like this is unrankedable.
    00:34:385 (1,2) - Distance is wrong.
    00:36:231 (1,1) - Stack them.
    00:36:693 (2,3) - Stack them.
    00:43:616 (1,2,3) - Try to stack those slider's end together?
    00:51:462 (1,2) - Stack them.
    00:54:231 (5,6) - Distance is wrong.
    00:59:770 (9) - The slider like this is unrankedable.
    01:01:155 (3) - The slider like this is unrankedable.
    01:03:001 (8,9) - Stack them.
    01:20:539 (1,2,3) - Try to stack those slider's end together?
    Remember that you can use only three "distance snaps" in one diff,and make sure that the distance between two notes is right.
LKs

  • 00:08:078 (6) - new combo
    00:21:462 (5,1) - 距离不对
    00:55:385 (4,5,1) - 据说不能这么排
    01:29:308 (3) - 最后一个圈加finish
    尼玛这是妹抖火么!
I have to say that the SB is very good!
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EasyModder 1.1
Program By Weiren
EnakoRin
If you don't know what I said, you could ask LKS for translation :lol:
Topic Starter
Kiiwa
Thank you Weiren, i am considering on how to fix these unrankable sliders now ~_~
Also, some stacks you pointed out were on purpose, so I will not change them. Sorry..
LKs

Weiren wrote:

我觉得offest1129太早了
LKs

  • 00:08:078 (6) - new combo
    00:21:462 (5,1) - 距离不对 咋不对
    00:55:385 (4,5,1) - 据说不能这么排 ok
    01:29:308 (3) - 最后一个圈加finish ok
    尼玛这是妹抖火么!
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EasyModder 1.1
Program By Weiren
Download: SENTIVE - Don't lose luck (Short ver.) (Kiiwa) [LKs].osu
EnakoRin

LKs wrote:

Weiren wrote:

我觉得offest1129太早了
LKs

  • 00:08:078 (6) - new combo
    00:21:462 (5,1) - 距离不对 咋不对
    00:55:385 (4,5,1) - 据说不能这么排 ok
    01:29:308 (3) - 最后一个圈加finish ok
    尼玛这是妹抖火么!
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EasyModder 1.1
Program By Weiren
[attachment=0:5cec0]SENTIVE - Don't lose luck (Short ver.) (Kiiwa) [LKs].osu[/attachment:5cec0]
0.5X么= =之前没注意
Dotsu
Hi~

My suggestions:

[General]


  • The BG is 798*598… Maybe you should convert it to 800*600
    Folder sb/sb is unused, so delete it
    Kiai Time doesn’t fit the song too much
[Beren]


  • 00:30:693 (1): Finish
    01:00:231 (1): ^
    01:07:616 (1): ^
[Hard]


  • 00:33:001 (1,2): I suggest removing this sudden jump
    01:07:616 (1): Add finish here
[Insane]


  • 00:11:770 (1): Can’t know where the sliderball goes
    00:28:847 (1,2): ^
    00:52:616 (5): New combo and 00:52:847 (1): Remove new combo
    00:59:770 (9): Can’t know where the sliderball goes
    01:07:616 (1): Add finish to the beginning
    01:14:078 (3,4): Confusing spacing
    01:15:001 (1): Add finish to the beginning
    01:21:924 (4): The repeat arrow is covered by hitburst
[Insane]
虽然间距变化有点大让人措手不及… 但神GD无疑 XD

  • 00:04:270 : 加个Circle
    00:09:693 (1,2,1): 统一一下间距
    01:14:770 : 加个Circle
    01:15:001 (1,2,3,4): 这干嘛加1/6…不太好认 建议改成1/4或者弄个1/8的Slider
    01:29:078 (1,2,3): 结尾不来点大跳什么的 XD
Good map and SB :D
LKs

impossiblexu wrote:

[Insane]
虽然间距变化有点大让人措手不及… 但神GD无疑 XD

  • 00:04:270 : 加个Circle 好 但是声音就不normal的了
    00:09:693 (1,2,1): 统一一下间距 ok
    01:14:770 : 加个Circle ok
    01:15:001 (1,2,3,4): 这干嘛加1/6…不太好认 建议改成1/4或者弄个1/8的Slider 我听错了 是1/8= =
    01:29:078 (1,2,3): 结尾不来点大跳什么的 XD 确实之前的有点无聊 少改一下 spinner懒得动了
Good map and SB :D
Download: SENTIVE - Don't lose luck (Short ver.) (Kiiwa) [LKs].osu
Topic Starter
Kiiwa
Thanks for mod, i've fixed all things pointed out, there is no unrankable sliders now =w=
oWingz
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...Star
Beren
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Download: SENTIVE - Don't lose luck (Short ver.) (Kiiwa) [Beren].osu
tutuhaha
BG 800*600 ↓
Title:SENTIVE - Don't Lose Luck (Short ver.)
Song need 192k
Tag add tennenouji
神SB神GD!
GOOD LUCK!~\(≧▽≦)/~

lovhin456
Hi! Mod requested by Beren

General;
- A 320 kbps mp3 is unrankable, encode to 192 or less

Beren;
- Nice Sb!
- 00:22:847 >> Extend to 00:23:308 and add a normal finish at the end
- 00:26:078 >> Shorten to 00:26:308 and add a repeat
- 00:27:001 >> Add a note ?
- 00:27:231 >> Add a repeat maybe ?
- 00:30:924 >> Move (2) here
- 00:52:847 (1,2) >> Better if you make (1) a slider from this point to 00:53:078 then add a repeat; and (2) just a note on 00:53:770
- 01:00:693 >> Remove the repeat and move to 01:01:155; then add a note at this point
- 01:15:492 >> Add a repeat
- 01:17:770 >> Move (5) and add repeat

Hard;
- 00:29:770 (2,3) >> Reverse arrow gets covered ?
- 00:35:078 >> Sounds better if it ends here
- 00:41:308 >> Shorten by 1 tick

Insane;
- 00:11:193 >> Move (3) here
- 00:31:962 >> Add a note ?
- 00:33:808 >> ^
- 00:45:001 >> Reverse arrow maybe gets covered ?
- 00:59:308 >> ^

LKs';
- 00:04:155 >> Add a note ?
- 00:51:231 >> Shorten by 1 tick and add a repeat
- 00:58:501 >> Add a note ?
- 00:58:847 >> ^
- 01:28:962 >> I would say add a note here, it sounds good, but is a little mean isn't it ? (:

* Star ~ BL + kd star ~
LKs

lovhin456 wrote:

LKs';
- 00:04:155 >> Add a note ? sry, i don't really eager to let so much notes fill the first part
- 00:51:231 >> Shorten by 1 tick and add a repeat ?
- 00:58:501 >> Add a note ? x
- 00:58:847 >> ^ k
- 01:28:962 >> I would say add a note here, it sounds good, but is a little mean isn't it ? (: i would like tol do if i have the right to rank a map ;)

* Star ~ BL + kd star ~
Download: SENTIVE - Don't lose luck (Short ver.) (Kiiwa) [LKs].osu
lovhin456

LKs wrote:

lovhin456 wrote:

- 00:51:231 >> Shorten by 1 tick and add a repeat ?
Oh, sorry, I meant to shorten until 00:51:347 (1/4 snap) then add a repeat.
Beren
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Download: SENTIVE - Don't lose luck (Short ver.) (Kiiwa) [Beren].osu
Playing
Good map, good boy love
XD




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ise77777
BL~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ :oops: :oops: :oops: :oops: :oops: :oops: :oops: :oops: :oops: :oops: :oops:
phonic
Nice Map


Your map wishes Rnked certain.

This map lover ;)
NatsumeRin
[General]
StoryBoard is so pro, good job.
Worry a bit about the diff spread and the easiest difficulty (the standard may be 3.00 now), better if you could have a Easy.
I'm not sure about this but whatever...

(Also why "Touch he" but not him? 00:41:308 )

[Beren]
01:18:693 (6) - compared to use a nearly mute note here, what about just delete it? (This is the easiest diff at least for now)

[Hard]
00:02:770 (4,5,6) - ...meh nazi. i just think the spacing is a little difference and yeah it is...
00:03:924 (3) - i'd suggest use a 0.75x, 3/2 slider here (with the end muted), try it?
00:32:770 (2,1,2) - nothing wrong here but just feel a little strange (due to the placement), maybe change the hidden to some other thing.
01:26:539 (2) - sliderwhistle here? (for the bi---- sound)
01:28:847 (1,2) - personally i don't like it...= =

[Insane]
00:54:231 (7,8) - i hope you could stack 8 a bit better...= =
00:57:001 (1,2) - something i'll suggest (for the "wait, wait")

01:11:885 (3,4) - maybe move 4 further, your placement in previous notes make people want to hit as 1/4= =
01:26:539 (4) - sliderwhistle?

[LKs]
我很想说no comments
01:27:116 (6,1) - 这个真的不过分吗其他因为太多了而你显然是故意的。。。所以我也不知道从何说起。

LKs

NatsumeRin wrote:

[LKs]
我很想说no comments
01:27:116 (6,1) - 这个真的不过分吗其他因为太多了而你显然是故意的。。。所以我也不知道从何说起。这在现今osu界不算难吧 :roll:
Lissette
Bitrate of the mp3 should be between 128 kbps and 192 kbps, you have to change or re-encode your mp3 since is 320 kbps
why there's another SB folder in your SB folder?

Insane
00:45:001 (4) - reverse arrow is kinda hidden by the previous 300 bursts
01:14:539 (4) - 1/4 jump + hard to notice, this is not good ><
01:21:924 (4) - reverse arrow is kinda hidden by the previous 300 bursts
01:23:078 (3) - shorten 1/4 beat

Beren
easiest difficulty on a mapset should have less than 3 stars difficulty

LKs
hard D:
00:57:924 (2) - reverse arrow hidden by prev hit burst
haven't finish modding this diff, ill continue later~ XD
This difficulty is so confusing, approach rate doesn't fit the song, i think you should decrease it a bit.
There are also some patterns that are really confusing imo
00:09:693 (1) - 1/4 jump, i don't see how it fits there
00:12:231 (1,2,3,4) - is not tecnically wrong but i find it so confusing
00:52:155 (2) - kinda hidden by the prev hit burts
00:08:078 (6) - new combo? to make it more readable
00:15:693 (1) - why the new combo?

EDIT: mp3 thingy
EDIT2: LKs mod
Beren
:)
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Download: SENTIVE - Don't lose luck (Short ver.) (Kiiwa) [Beren].osu
LKs

Lissette wrote:

LKs
hard D:
00:57:924 (2) - reverse arrow hidden by prev hit burst moved slider
haven't finish modding this diff, ill continue later~ XD ok
Download: SENTIVE - Don't Lose Luck (Short ver.) (Kiiwa) [LKs].osu
eveless
sorry for my late

but

Source : Lucky Dog > Lucky Dog1

this is not a mod post :)

EDIT:

PS.LKs你没事凑什么热闹MAP什么BL GAME SONG呢...终于决定要和H酱去结婚了吗...
Topic Starter
Kiiwa
Thank you eveeveveeee
<3~<3~<3~<3~<3~

SPOILER
Due to stars being useless, they are currently being phased on. More details will follow soon.
LKs

goodbye wrote:

EDIT:

PS.LKs你没事凑什么热闹MAP什么BL GAME SONG呢...终于决定要和H酱去结婚了吗... 在我眼里没有BL 只有map ;)
LKs

Lissette wrote:

LKs
hard D:
00:57:924 (2) - reverse arrow hidden by prev hit burst
haven't finish modding this diff, ill continue later~ XD
This difficulty is so confusing, approach rate doesn't fit the song, i think you should decrease it a bit. i just set it 9 for meeting players' taste. AR8 has become slow and boring to professional players(maybe #1~#1000) as you know
There are also some patterns that are really confusing imo
00:09:693 (1) - 1/4 jump, i don't see how it fits there removed jump
00:12:231 (1,2,3,4) - is not tecnically wrong but i find it so confusing sorry, there is a jump, it can be more exploict
00:52:155 (2) - kinda hidden by the prev hit burts really donno where the slider can go, so deleted it
00:08:078 (6) - new combo? to make it more readable ok
00:15:693 (1) - why the new combo? removed

EDIT: mp3 thingy
EDIT2: LKs mod
thx for mod

Download: SENTIVE - Don't Lose Luck (Short ver.) (Kiiwa) [LKs].osu
Topic Starter
Kiiwa
All ready 8-) 8-) 8-) 8-) 8-)
Too short :| :| :| :| :|
Lissette
Re-check~

LKs
00:14:078 (1) - can you avoid this 1/4 jumps? makes the map so confusing @.@
00:29:308 - add note? that missing not feels weird while playing
I still think AR8 fits better the song, the bpm is not too fast, that's why it looks out of place.
LKs

Lissette wrote:

Re-check~

LKs
00:14:078 (1) - can you avoid this 1/4 jumps? makes the map so confusing @.@ i will remove the jump abiding your suggestiong if there is one separate slider. however, it's a part of a triangle which consists of 3 sliders.
00:29:308 - add note? that missing not feels weird while playing i don't really care this. ok added
I still think AR8 fits better the song, the bpm is not too fast, that's why it looks out of place.
i'm more about to keep it AR9, no reason
Download: SENTIVE - Don't Lose Luck (Short ver.) (Kiiwa) [LKs].osu
Lissette
Bubble~

After some IRC Modding

*hidden reverse arrow on Insane and Hard
*Beren star difficulty

No kudos
Megurine Luka
Yes, Lucky dog1 :3
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Akiyama Mizuki
Hard : 00:03.923 3rd note to 00:04.863 plz make more distance
Alace
SB is so awesome
I love the insane diff \:D/
Damn you LKs why your maps are so hard!!

enjoy
lovhin456
oh yeahhhhhh congrats! ;D
Megurine Luka
Goooooooooooooooooood Job~

BL> <
LKs

Alace wrote:

SB is so awesome
I love the insane diff \:D/
Damn you LKs why your maps are so hard!!

enjoy
:? eh..
deadbeat
\o/
+1 NZ ranked map
gratz bro :)
Shiirn
(TV Size) vs (Short Ver.)

there aren't even any other versions...are there?
phonic
Congratulations on Rnked!!


I like your map ;)
tutuhaha
XDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDD!!!!!!!!!!!
Congratulations!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I‘m so happy yeah!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Beren 你的SB帅毙了有没有!!!!!!!!!!!!
XDDDDDDDD帅死了帅死了!!!!!!!!
Beren
<3
Lizbeth
Just noticed this~ >< Congratz~~

/late...runs
IkkiMinami
XD :)
eveless

Shiirn wrote:

(TV Size) vs (Short Ver.)

there aren't even any other versions...are there?
Why Tv size? this is a game but not an anime
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