hi! my mod as requested on mi queue https://osu.ppy.sh/forum/t/579972
tbh I haven't mod so much camellia cuz it's almost the only artist that I don't like but let's give a try xD (sry if it's bad ;;)
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tbh I haven't mod so much camellia cuz it's almost the only artist that I don't like but let's give a try xD (sry if it's bad ;;)
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- 00:23:194 - what about using volume increase on this spinner?
- 04:17:194 - and 04:38:723 - . I really got what you want to do (and it's fine) but it looks awful from AiMod, I mean using SV changes on kiai are a little strange. Also I feel like the first one isn't that important and second is unnecesary cuz it has the same volume/speed. Try deleting'em
- 02:03:429 - you should change volumes here. I mean you should be increasing by each 1/1 cuz it's totally ascendant sound
- 03:56:370 - same applies here ^^
- 04:41:547 - ^
- About diffname it's great, but I think you can find for something more creative/interesting it's totally up to you
- 01:16:841 - this volume increase isn't neccesary imo, it's like the same as 01:15:429 -
- 03:58:135 - what about using here Preview timing point? I think there's only a silence before it ^^
just commenting first secion is perfect imo ^^
- 00:25:047 (6) - why not making this don to emphatise a little high pitch of 00:25:135 (7) - ?
- 00:26:459 (6) - could apply the same, but if you don't want to get it repetitive then it's fine to leave it
- 00:27:076 - there's a sound that deserves to be mapped since you're following the hard drum by using dons
- 00:28:135 - same as above, I got you want something different but it's neccesary imo
- 00:29:547 - ^
well to not be repetitive I'll skip these same comments through this section, but I think isn't the best part to make the break , patterns are good imo, but the breaks are not that exact - 00:42:959 (1) - if you're using kat here you should make this kat 00:43:665 (9) - aswell, so to avoid quadra-kat I suggest you making this 00:43:576 (8) - don
also I think it's so similar to Raiden's version of this, try making it a little different :c (just a personal pov) - 00:48:606 - since there aren't notes on this section you could delete these SV changes, they're unneccesary I think
- 00:58:488 (1) - you could do this big note because the background sound is kinda strong o:
- 01:00:429 (12) - make this don instead, kat is so high
00:58:488 - also this section is a little dense and... bored imo, you could give some breaks :3 and make it a little more dynamic - 01:21:076 - what about making slider here? it's more interesting
- 01:38:017 (1,2) - 01:39:429 (1,2) - 01:40:841 (1,2) - I think they should be kk instead dd cuz there's higher pitch than note that is right after'em
- 01:41:547 (6) - you should delete this that quarter makes it look strange D:
- 01:41:723 (8) - don!
- 01:54:517 (12) - I'm not a fan of this... but I think this should be don because pitches :c
- 02:03:606 (4) - try kat here, that pattern is a little weird
- 02:06:253 - this section is fine, but I think it's a little repetitive, try changing somenotes somewhere :d
- 02:29:194 (2,3,4,5) - try a kddk pattern, kkkk is overmapped imo
not like patterns after this :p - 02:44:900 (7,8,9,10) - kdkk fills better imo
- 02:51:429 (18) - yeah i know it's allowed and it's fine by talking about following drums... but probably make this little or let a break before this
- 02:51:429 - same comment about volumes xD