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Camellia - Exit This Earth's Atomosphere [Taiko]

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Surono
7,195 posts
Joined November 2013
Surono
here comes a taiko mod

01:42:870 - change to kat then move 01:42:782 - here, 01:42:959 - kat and 01:43:312 - don here to follow burst drum. you cant just follow only backgrounds instru

01:59:988 - 02:00:165 - swap, 02:00:253 - 02:00:429 - these vocal need contrast emphasize

02:17:900 - ~ 02:24:959 - can you a bit rearrange the emphasize of snare drum as kat? for variation in this part. avoid repetitive structure with previous part.

02:28:665 - just don it to keep consistent follow with kick drum as you did follow the snare drum 02:26:017 - from here

02:30:782 - 02:30:694 - swap, 02:30:694 - instru here and then 02:30:959 - emphasize this drum with kat

02:36:341 - 02:36:429 - and 02:36:606 - same above

02:49:076 - 02:49:900 - 02:50:488 - these 1/6 3plet are too overmapped except 02:51:076 - this long kats stream. also 02:51:017 - delete this

wait 01:20:370 - this empty but 03:24:606 - add or delete them?

03:53:106 - 03:52:929 - same before

03:54:606 - 03:54:694 - high vocal flow, could be kat 03:54:694 -. but 02:01:753 - here is weak so keep it as don

04:03:782 - kat to emphasize drum and differ emphasize sounds with 03:59:547 - dddk

04:05:282 - kat to give rhytmic

04:15:076 - same before

04:18:782 - need contrast with sounds between 04:18:694 - 04:18:870 - . so don 04:18:694 - here, you cant kat them unless 04:17:194 - similar flow like this

wait, 04:05:194 - 04:06:606 - similar sounds from here but structure inconsistent.. orz but its ok as variation

04:21:782 - ~ 04:38:547 - you can follow that 2nd important sounds that just 03:27:429 - similar from here

but 03:59:194 - ~ 04:38:547 - try something with thats not repetitive, such as follow drum at first part then follow instru at second part.

04:55:665 - from here needs variation, example 04:57:076 - 04:57:782 - 04:58:488 - 04:59:900 - then 05:02:723 - repeat again from here 05:02:723 - 05:03:429 - 05:04:135 - 05:05:547 -

overall still repetitive, tho camellia songs are mostly have variation bg sound structure when entering the loop part so you need to vary the loop part that have variation bg sound.
ddm
207 posts
Joined February 2016
Topic Starter
ddm

Hanjamon wrote:

SPOILER
Hello DDM, from my modding queue.

  • d=Don
    D=Big Don
    k=Katsu
    K=Big Katsu
[General]

  1. All seems okay
[Space Velocity]
  1. 00:25:312 - move this note to 00:25:223 - , as it's inconsistent following that beat in 00:26:635 - and other sections but not there.
  2. 00:28:135 - same as ^, move this note to 00:28:047 - .
  3. 00:30:959 - same as ^, move this note to 00:30:870 - .
  4. 00:33:782 - same as ^, move this note to 00:33:694 - .
  5. 00:47:106 - i suggest leaving a break at least there as it's a bit difficult to hit the big note after these 1/6. keep, 00:47:017 (39,40,1) - its 1/4
  6. 01:20:370 - add a note here, as you have one in 03:24:606 - and it's inconsistent. delete second one
  7. 01:55:312 - how about add a finisher in these notes? 01:55:312 - 01:56:370 - 01:56:723 - 01:57:782 - 01:58:135 - 01:59:194 - and 01:59:547 - , it fits very good with vocals. hmm no, fits very good but cant add finisher at 02:00:606 (1) - this same sound.
  8. 02:15:429 - change to d? it fits better with the vocals and the beat.
  9. 02:33:606 - if you really want a 1/6 it should start in 02:33:782 - and not 02:33:606 - . why? it follows synth sounds at 02:33:606 (7,8,9,10) - here
  10. 02:44:900 - same as ^, the 1/6 should start in 02:45:076 - and not 02:44:900 - . same^ 02:44:900 (7,8,9,10) -
  11. 02:51:017 - i think it flows better if you delete this note as the "burst" starts at 02:51:076 - .
  12. 03:48:253 - if you applied the suggestion of 01:55:312 - same here, big notes at 03:48:253 - 03:49:312 - 03:49:665 - 03:50:723 - 03:51:076 - 03:52:135 - 03:52:488 - .
  13. 04:16:841 - i suggest deleting this note as it makes consistency with previous 4plets and the next one in 04:18:076 - .

tbh, some parts it feels the same as Raiden's version, but well, good luck~

Surono wrote:

SPOILER
here comes a taiko mod

01:42:870 - change to kat then move 01:42:782 - here, 01:42:959 - kat and 01:43:312 - don here to follow burst drum. you cant just follow only backgrounds instru change to another pattern, ddk is not good imo

01:59:988 - 02:00:165 - swap, 02:00:253 - 02:00:429 - these vocal need contrast emphasize

02:17:900 - ~ 02:24:959 - can you a bit rearrange the emphasize of snare drum as kat? for variation in this part. avoid repetitive structure with previous part. ok

02:28:665 - just don it to keep consistent follow with kick drum as you did follow the snare drum 02:26:017 - from here

02:30:782 - 02:30:694 - swap, 02:30:694 - instru here and then 02:30:959 - emphasize this drum with kat these are emphasis of 02:30:782 (7) - high synth sound

02:36:341 - 02:36:429 - and 02:36:606 - same above

02:49:076 - 02:49:900 - 02:50:488 - these 1/6 3plet are too overmapped except 02:51:076 - this long kats stream. also 02:51:017 - delete this

wait 01:20:370 - this empty but 03:24:606 - add or delete them? stupid mistake xdd

03:53:106 - 03:52:929 - same before

03:54:606 - 03:54:694 - high vocal flow, could be kat 03:54:694 -. but 02:01:753 - here is weak so keep it as don

04:03:782 - kat to emphasize drum and differ emphasize sounds with 03:59:547 - dddk

04:05:282 - kat to give rhytmic

04:15:076 - same before

04:18:782 - need contrast with sounds between 04:18:694 - 04:18:870 - . so don 04:18:694 - here, you cant kat them unless 04:17:194 - similar flow like this

wait, 04:05:194 - 04:06:606 - similar sounds from here but structure inconsistent.. orz but its ok as variation they have different synth sounds

04:21:782 - ~ 04:38:547 - you can follow that 2nd important sounds that just 03:27:429 - similar from here

but 03:59:194 - ~ 04:38:547 - try something with thats not repetitive, such as follow drum at first part then follow instru at second part.

04:55:665 - from here needs variation, example 04:57:076 - 04:57:782 - 04:58:488 - 04:59:900 - then 05:02:723 - repeat again from here 05:02:723 - 05:03:429 - 05:04:135 - 05:05:547 -

overall still repetitive, tho camellia songs are mostly have variation bg sound structure when entering the loop part so you need to vary the loop part that have variation bg sound.
Remap last kiai parts aa hh
Thnaks for mod both!
Hanjamon
1,461 posts
Joined June 2012
Hanjamon
would like to know if the suggestions without answer means ignored or accepted :thinking:
ddm
207 posts
Joined February 2016
Topic Starter
ddm

Hanjamon wrote:

would like to know if the suggestions without answer means ignored or accepted :thinking:
accepted
Surono
7,195 posts
Joined November 2013
Surono
when you mapped something that already ranked, people will say " nice remap duud " jk

03:46:223 - delete and 03:46:312 - change kat
04:28:665 - kat to follow mainsounds 04:28:488 -
04:39:959 - kkd 1/4, 04:39:782 - follow mainsounds and the flow

nice reconstruction at last part, but I still looking for consistency structure at there.

you can catch me in game to discus it.
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Hanjamon
1,461 posts
Joined June 2012
Hanjamon

DDM wrote:

Hanjamon wrote:

would like to know if the suggestions without answer means ignored or accepted :thinking:
accepted
thanks for clarify xD
ddm
207 posts
Joined February 2016
Topic Starter
ddm

Surono wrote:

when you mapped something that already ranked, people will say " nice remap duud " jk

03:46:223 - delete and 03:46:312 - change kat
04:28:665 - kat to follow mainsounds 04:28:488 -
04:39:959 - kkd 1/4, 04:39:782 - follow mainsounds and the flow

nice reconstruction at last part, but I still looking for consistency structure at there.

you can catch me in game to discus it.
all fixed and
remap kiai patterns again
it'll be fine now.
Kith190
178 posts
Joined November 2015
Kith190
Hi NM as asked here
First of all, gg for the song choise!
Space Velocity
00:36:782 - change to k
00:39:606 - same thing ^
00:59:370 (6,8) - control + g
01:01:135 - change to d
01:03:076 - change to d
01:05:017 (6,8) - control + g
01:06:959 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - change to d d d k d d d k d k k d
01:09:782 - same thing ^
01:31:488 - place d
02:29:370 - change to d
02:32:194 - same thing
02:35:017 - same
02:39:076 (3,4) - change to k (?)
02:40:665 - change to d
02:43:488 - ^
02:46:312 - ^
03:02:723 - same as since here 00:58:488 -
03:27:606 - change to d
03:38:900 - same thing ^
04:04:312 - change to d (?)
04:08:547 - same (?)
04:49:841 - change to d
I enjoyed it so much! Good luck for rank!! ;D
ddm
207 posts
Joined February 2016
Topic Starter
ddm

Kith190 wrote:

SPOILER
Hi NM as asked here
First of all, gg for the song choise!
Space Velocity
00:36:782 - change to k
00:39:606 - same thing ^ variation things, keep
00:59:370 (6,8) - control + g
01:01:135 - change to d
01:03:076 - change to d
01:05:017 (6,8) - control + g
01:06:959 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - change to d d d k d d d k d k k d
01:09:782 - same thing ^ Remap this part, Thanks!
01:31:488 - place d no sound here
02:29:370 - change to d big drum sound at next note 02:29:459 (6) - . so keep
02:32:194 - same thing ^
02:35:017 - same ^
02:39:076 (3,4) - change to k (?) keep, same drum sounds with previous one
02:40:665 - change to d same reason, big drum sound at next note 02:40:753 (6) -
02:43:488 - ^ ^
02:46:312 - ^ ^
03:02:723 - same as since here 00:58:488 - ^
03:27:606 - change to d d is too low
03:38:900 - same thing ^ ^
04:04:312 - change to d (?) same synth sound with previous note 04:04:223 (8) -
04:08:547 - same (?) ^
04:49:841 - change to d keep
I enjoyed it so much! Good luck for rank!! ;D
Thanks for mod!
Surono
7,195 posts
Joined November 2013
Surono
dobby still watching?/

last check ingame but idk idc lol nvm
22:47 Surono: im back, tell me if you have time to discus your map.
23:01 DDM: k sir
23:01 DDM: im in editer now
23:03 Surono: a
23:03 Surono: lol I on writing forum but oke i will paste here
23:03 DDM: okok
23:03 Surono: from 04:04:841 - here your pattern is d d kkdk kkdkdd, why not you placed same pattern from 04:06:253 - here too for consistency? I dont expect if thats as variation but looks randomly for me.
23:07 DDM: they have different synth sounds :s
23:07 DDM: not randomly
23:07 Surono: really? lol but idk
23:08 Surono: but at least make it similar for these part, to represent the consistency at similar sounds.
23:08 Surono: 04:10:841 - and this started as dddk? 04:12:253 - dd k lul rip
23:09 Surono: but tbh your mapset looks better than the latest ranked, so up to you. my concern just 04:04:841 - from here lol.
23:10 Surono: 04:27:429 - from here too, but you can make a bit variation. similar structure but vary it
23:12 DDM: yea i already did that
23:13 Surono: k
23:13 Surono: have self changes? if ye just update it.
23:14 DDM: ok update it in few minutes later
23:15 DDM: thanks
23:29 DDM: done
23:37 Surono: a
23:37 Surono: 04:19:047 - 
23:37 Surono: dlt? to emphasize the stop sign 04:18:959 - here for da cymbal?
23:38 Surono: 04:17:547 - jst like this.
23:38 Surono: 04:18:959 - u can fill finish too
23:38 DDM: cool
23:38 Surono: n i c e

last part structures are consistency and solid with additional vary colors maybe. lol simple words from me, other fine!
Lumenite-
625 posts
Joined April 2015
Lumenite-
hey look it's another pp farm map that's more overmapped than the other one. nice!

don't hate me it's the truth
Surono
7,195 posts
Joined November 2013
Surono
nope it doesnt overmapped, well soon(tm) someone will come here and give some bad words about this map. ™

edit:
almost about veto this map, lul misskek to nominated it. >_>

edit:
wew updated, okey rip lul.
davidminh0111
1,335 posts
Joined January 2017
davidminh0111
Hello from my queue:
This beatmap is popped bubble so jus a few suggestion before rebub

[Space Velocity]
00:15:959: Change to d here since to make a unity in 00:14:194 and 00:14:194 .

02:51:429: Remove D here. This note 02:51:370 is too close to do a big hit when playing.

03:24:606: Add d here since there is a small vocal.

04:10:488 (1, 2): Ctrl + G?

04:16:135: Remove D, calm part here

Not really much things to fix. This mapset is very good now.
I love this beatmap. Good luck on ranking

Hope this help you. : (
ddm
207 posts
Joined February 2016
Topic Starter
ddm

davidminh0111 wrote:

SPOILER
Hello from my queue:
This beatmap is popped bubble so jus a few suggestion before rebub

[Space Velocity]
00:15:959: Change to d here since to make a unity in 00:14:194 and 00:14:194 . they are different sounds. keep

02:51:429: Remove D here. This note 02:51:370 is too close to do a big hit when playing. consider it because the synth sounds certain there.

03:24:606: Add d here since there is a small vocal. can't hear that vocal sound

04:10:488 (1, 2): Ctrl + G? really? first one has higher pitch

04:16:135: Remove D, calm part here same BIG BASS sounds 04:17:547 (1) - 04:18:959 (1) -

Not really much things to fix. This mapset is very good now.
I love this beatmap. Good luck on ranking aa thanks

Hope this help you. : (
Thanks for mod!
Pachiru
osu! Alumni
2,957 posts
Joined June 2013
Pachiru

Taikocracy wrote:

hey look it's another pp farm map that's more overmapped than the other one. nice!

don't hate me it's the truth
Why are you hating? This mapper provide content on the game, and you blame him, lol nice.
Surono
7,195 posts
Joined November 2013
Surono
@DDM I'd like you to tell the mapper s other version of this song, so that we can know is this can be rank or not. I still have concern about it since it was discussed by BNG and you had better to ask first.

might some people doubt with this map because your profile stats ( play count/time, rank, kudosu, own beatmaps )

02:51:370 - delete this if you keep that finish and moreover 02:51:312 - this too and from 04:42:253 - still similar with latest ranked section idc idk in previous 1/6+1/4.. yeah the other version mapper should give statement about it...

edit:

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Enon
2,690 posts
Joined November 2012
Enon
why does mapper's stats should be considered to go forward to ranked lol
ddm
207 posts
Joined February 2016
Topic Starter
ddm

Surono wrote:

might some people doubt with this map because your profile stats ( play count/time, rank, kudosu, own beatmaps )
wait what
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Surono
7,195 posts
Joined November 2013
Surono
idk tho, you can ask about that to them for clarity.
Shinsekai-
1,314 posts
Joined November 2012
Shinsekai-

Surono wrote:

might some people doubt with this map because your profile stats ( play count/time, rank, kudosu, own beatmaps )
wait what[/quote]

?????????? what

The map is rankeable AF looks like Raiden version... IDK why the stats oft he player need be considerated when you make a map ._. is just weird AF and is too crazy think things like that... xd Don't give up DDM rank this shit... is a rellay good map and you follow all the song XD and that's amazing, In my oppinion this version is better than Raiden one :X

Greetings~
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