handsome wrote:

actually it seems if you change the title it works cuz thats how i fixed my set lol

Jonawaga wrote:

hai there
[General]

1. Flip bg horizontally so the lady's face is visible from song selection.
2. Please check your snapping, it seems that some notes are unsnapped.

[Kantan]

1. this is so light, please change OD to 2.5 no need to change for me, it's still decent with OD3 even though you said this is so 'light'
2. 01:52:239 (2) - consider d, that piano pitch is falling i know, but this structure is better without don imo
3. 01:57:953 (5,6) - consider d k to differentiate as you're going into the drums here added kat at 01:56:525 - and 01:59:382 - for stronger drum, but still only kat (reason as above).

call me back if necesary

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Jonawaga wrote:

hai there
[General]

1. Flip bg horizontally so the lady's face is visible from song selection. oWo good call~
2. Please check your snapping, it seems that some notes are unsnapped. AiMod said there were none ;w; help

[Muzukashii]

1. 00:23:668 - 50% is too quiet here imho, it's over-contrasted from the other section. please change it to ~70% to make the difference more subtle (this happens again later, consider the same) okie uwuwuwu
2. 00:46:525 (44) - add finisher? no~ I don't think it's important enough because it's in the middle of the kiai
3. 00:48:668 (53,54,55,56) - imho kdkk or ddkk (something with dk in the middle) makes the telephone beeping flow much better hm... I changed to kdkdddk? I understand what you're going for and I think this should help
4. 00:58:310 - / 01:06:882 - remove a few notes, as this is after the kiai the chain / pattern should be a little softer afterwards. I understand the pattern makes this difficult, but here are some places to consider 00:58:846 - / 00:59:203 - / 00:59:918 - (of course not all of these at once, but just combine some of these ideas and realize how open your possibilities are!) I understand this too but it's hard for me to remove anything because I have reasons behind each and every note
5. 01:32:239 (45) - finisher? same reason as above
6. 01:55:096 - / 02:04:918 - nerf this section... this is quite a spread jump from Futsuu, even for a GD. I expect to see more 1/1 breaks here eeeee ok
7. and for Oni, just consider what I said about adding finishers, changing volume, etc. ~

call me back if necesary

Stefan wrote:

[Oni]
00:34:918 - Smoother transistion if you have added a 0.95x line here. mhmkay
01:20:453 - ^ yup
01:24:560 - I'd prefer to have a don note here, flow-wise this goes pretty odd. Emphasis on the vocals~
01:25:275 (34) - And the note should be used for 01:25:096 - to provide a more suitable break on 01:25:275 - imo, and to support the vocals better. I added a k because there is a bass kick on that note
01:39:025 - 01:40:810 - The concept doesn't work out well: For the first half of the kiai you used d ddd d k d k while for the second half you mapped at least d ddd d k (for 01:33:310 (73,74,75,76,77,78) - ). HOWEVER, that is not the case for 01:39:025 - 01:40:810 - and makes it look oddly inconsistent. At least one note should be at 01:39:739 - . And generally you may want to change the part to a continuous section: https://derpovic.s-ul.eu/5DMyflyY.png I... added a k...?

[Muzukashii]
00:24:025 - and 00:24:739 - you may want to reduce the SV already from 00:24:025 - . Okie dokie


Rest looks fine to me, get the map rebubbled first.

Inoue wrote:

Taikocracy from future :^)

Surono wrote:

not wednesday my duds

gratz hypee with noice bege

KittyAdventure wrote:

Finally, Congratulations!

Stingy wrote:

oh okay next time I get a DQ can someone message me about it please thank you

Chewin wrote:

Stingy wrote:

oh okay next time I get a DQ can someone message me about it please thank you

? it passed just 1 hr xD

Okorin wrote:

00:34:382 (23,24,25) - why is this 1/4, the only thing going on at this point is 1/3? what diff

playing 1/4 there is really awkward

btw mapping vocals in the weird section without anything isn't the best idea ever because most of the vocal impacts are off the actual timeline so clicking them will feel super weird, like impact for 01:49:025 (7) - is late 01:47:596 (4) - is super early in comparison

like lmao mapping that section seems like a shitfest i think the mania map of it went through that and what it would take to not be that but uhhh i dont feel that's worth it okay so are you going to suggest anything or

Stingy wrote:

Okorin wrote:

00:34:382 (23,24,25) - why is this 1/4, the only thing going on at this point is 1/3? what diff

Arrival wrote:

Stingy wrote:

00:34:382 (23,24,25) - why is this 1/4, the only thing going on at this point is 1/3? what diff

well maybe the only diff where there are 1/4 used ??? lol

Okorin wrote:

btw i get the drink references for coca-kantan, diet futsuu and dr. muzukashii, but what's 0ni referencing?

Okorin wrote:

I was implying what the suggestion is, I realize i should have been more straight forward

the diff was 0ni btw, thanks arrival

the suggestion would be either only mapping the off-vocals accurately or only the instruments that are actually snapped for that part instead of mapping both halfway

btw i get the drink references for coca-kantan, diet futsuu and dr. muzukashii, but what's 0ni referencing?

xfraczynho wrote:

ZerOni looks really better xD, 0 is so ambiguous

• [0ni]

1. 00:32:596 and 00:33:132 - you may add d here to make a better spread with Muzukashii. Currently the note density at this spot is quite similar.
2. 00:37:418 (39,40,41) - maybe try d k k instead of k d d to emphasize the drum beat at 00:37:953 (42) - ?
3. 01:43:668 (1) - d as you did in Muzukashii for pattern consistency ? The background sound here is not really significant to add finish, so I would recommend using an ordinary don.
4. 01:54:739 (12) - consider changing this note to k ? This would follow the high-pitched sound effect there and contrast 01:49:025 (6) - nicely.
5. 02:19:560 (115) - maybe d as you did previously to follow the drum here as well ?

Stingy wrote:

xfraczynho wrote:

ZerOni looks really better xD, 0 is so ambiguous

idk

Noffy wrote:

yeah, the ingame menu font makes 0ni look a lot like oni so the pun is a bit lost in-game :s
I agree ZerOni would be a good alternative

Stingy wrote:

Noffy wrote:

yeah, the ingame menu font makes 0ni look a lot like oni so the pun is a bit lost in-game :s
I agree ZerOni would be a good alternative

idk still I like 0ni and I don’t see much of a need to change it besides the aesthetic look of the menu?

Noffy wrote:

Stingy wrote:

idk still I like 0ni and I don’t see much of a need to change it besides the aesthetic look of the menu?

well like, the menu is the main place you'd see the diffname. The only other place is on the web which you'd only see like, once.
It literally just looks like a plain lowercase oni
It's beyond aesthetics so much as the meaning and coolness is nearly totally lost due to the font :'c

Nardoxyribonucleic wrote:

Here comes a mod for Oni to follow through.

• [0ni]

1. 00:32:596 and 00:33:132 - you may add d here to make a better spread with Muzukashii. Currently the note density at this spot is quite similar. there's no sound lmao
2. 00:37:418 (39,40,41) - maybe try d k k instead of k d d to emphasize the drum beat at 00:37:953 (42) - ? ok
3. 01:43:668 (1) - d as you did in Muzukashii for pattern consistency ? The background sound here is not really significant to add finish, so I would recommend using an ordinary don. idk why that's a finish
4. 01:54:739 (12) - consider changing this note to k ? This would follow the high-pitched sound effect there and contrast 01:49:025 (6) - nicely. no because reverb bass kick
5. 02:19:560 (115) - maybe d as you did previously to follow the drum here as well ? yeah ;w;

You may call me back after that~

• [Oni Zero]

1. 00:32:596 and 00:33:132 - there is an audible beat at these spots. Please reconsider adding d to make a better spread with Muzukashii. Currently the note density at this spot is quite similar. Alternatively you may simplify the pattern in Muzukashii for better difficulty progression considering there is only few notes and a spinner in Kantan and Futsuu respectively.

Nardoxyribonucleic wrote:

A quick recheck here. (no kd)

• [Oni Zero]

1. 00:32:596 and 00:33:132 - there is an audible beat at these spots. Please reconsider adding d to make a better spread with Muzukashii. Currently the note density at this spot is quite similar. Alternatively you may simplify the pattern in Muzukashii for better difficulty progression considering there is only few notes and a spinner in Kantan and Futsuu respectively.

• [Dr. Muzukashii]

1. 00:23:668 - try to remove this timing point and move the one at 00:24:739 to 00:24:025 - as you did in Oni. Currently the 1/4 ddd overlaps with the next d substantially, which hinders the readability in a great extent.
2. 02:03:668 - you may move this timing point to 02:03:489 - with 0.9x SV for an aesthetically better slider velocity transition of the 1/4 kkk. Then try 01:55:096 - 0.84x; 02:00:810 - 0.87x for smoother SV increase.

Nardoxyribonucleic wrote:

The Oni difficulty looks fine now. Just some more suggestions regarding the SV usage in Muzukashii.

• [Dr. Muzukashii]

1. 00:23:668 - try to remove this timing point and move the one at 00:24:739 to 00:24:025 - as you did in Oni. Currently the 1/4 ddd overlaps with the next d substantially, which hinders the readability in a great extent.
2. 02:03:668 - you may move this timing point to 02:03:489 - with 0.9x SV for an aesthetically better slider velocity transition of the 1/4 kkk. Then try 01:55:096 - 0.84x; 02:00:810 - 0.87x for smoother SV increase.

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Nardoxyribonucleic wrote:

After all these changes, the set seems ready to be pushed forward again.

Rebubbled~

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ByBy wrote:

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