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SECTOR-712
NM request / osu!taiko

general
  1. add "MONGOL800" and "Message" in tags for the original artist/album from where the cover is based on.
  2. "Sakurai" and "Kimura" for extra tags if ya want, since the pair make up Omoi.
  3. might as well turn off widescreen support in volta and kin's difficulties to keep consistent for your mapset, doesn't affect anything but feel free to change it.
  4. volta's futsuu hp could be upped to 7 as a small suggestion, though it's fine as it is since it's supposed to be the same hp as muzukashii like the oni/inner oni difficulties i'm guessing.
  5. here's a link for a higher res pic of the current bg you're using. since miku looks squished in the current res you're using. here's the original, if you want to crop it yourself.

kantan
  1. 00:20:808 - don't really need the inherited timing point here since the one before at 00:18:490 does the job.
  2. 00:21:899 / 00:38:262 - between these two parts, i do feel you could add more notes just to make it more interesting despite it being a kantan, considering volta's futsuu is much more active in this section and could let people get used to the kiai sections in having more note density.
  3. 01:00:626 (47) - think this should be a don, considering it's pretty similar to 00:51:353 (33,34,35) in how it sounds.
  4. 01:07:172 (57) - feels more suited as a kat for the drums in the background here, would allow you switch the finisher at 01:07:717 (58) to a don finisher to keep consistency with 00:50:262 (32) and 00:58:990 (45) unless, you wanted more variety on the finishers like you did with 01:12:081 (64) and etc., appears in the other kiai section as well.
  5. 01:30:163 - don't think you need this inherited timing point here.
  6. 02:39:163 - unneeded inherited timing point here as well, should check the other difficulties just in case.

volta's futsuu
  1. 00:02:262 (1) - can be a finisher, but a regular note is just as fine.
  2. 00:20:808 (32) - feel like this should be a finisher for that cymbal crash like you did earlier at 00:10:990 (10)
  3. 00:40:444 (11,12,13,14,15) - would recommend k,d,d,k,k for this pattern instead, captures the vocals better.
  4. 00:57:353 (20) - change to kat, pitch is still rather high here.
  5. 01:07:717 (28) - finisher for this note, still retains the same impact as 00:50:262 (1)
  6. 01:15:899 (48) - it's a bit strange this note is a don, considering you been emphasizing the vocals with kat like you did at 01:07:172 (26) and 01:11:535 (37)

muzukashii
  1. 01:41:250 (350) - would switch this to a kat, for that higher pitch to contrast the earlier note at 01:40:729 (349)
  2. solid patterning for muzu.

kin's oni
  1. 00:11:262 (21,22) - would ctrl+g this, just for the vocals honestly.
  2. 00:18:762 - a bit weird to have this rhythm gap here, adding a don here would keep the flow and transition nicely for the next part of the song.
  3. 01:04:240 - adding a don here for that 1/4 triple, kinda plays well and fits the vocal nicely.
  4. 02:02:185 (659) - i think deleting this note or simplifying the pattern would be fine, since the section here is pretty intense as it is already.
  5. 03:35:600 - having a don here for the 1/4 triple would be a nice lead up to the d,d,d,d,k pattern.

inner oni
  1. 00:12:081 (18) - i mean you could make every large white tick for this part here a kat for the vocalist, but what you have already is okay too. also applies to 01:53:250 (633) just in the opposite way.
  2. 00:41:535 (174) - making this a kat feels kinda nice to play for the pattern.
  3. 02:00:620 (680) - think the snare here needs to be a kat for the emphasis or change it up so it's a lot more impactful, feel free to experiment.


small mod for small brain, good luck with the mapset.
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Sansheng wrote:

SECTOR-712
NM request / osu!taiko

general
  1. add "MONGOL800" and "Message" in tags for the original artist/album from where the cover is based on. done
  2. "Sakurai" and "Kimura" for extra tags if ya want, since the pair make up Omoi. ok
  3. might as well turn off widescreen support in volta and kin's difficulties to keep consistent for your mapset, doesn't affect anything but feel free to change it. alright
  4. volta's futsuu hp could be upped to 7 as a small suggestion, though it's fine as it is since it's supposed to be the same hp as muzukashii like the oni/inner oni difficulties i'm guessing. Leaving to him
  5. here's a link for a higher res pic of the current bg you're using. since miku looks squished in the current res you're using. here's the original, if you want to crop it yourself. idk is it my illusion or sth...but it seems the current version is clearer than the one you linked...I guess I will keep it first


kantan
  1. 00:20:808 - don't really need the inherited timing point here since the one before at 00:18:490 does the job. fixed
  2. 00:21:899 / 00:38:262 - between these two parts, i do feel you could add more notes just to make it more interesting despite it being a kantan, considering volta's futsuu is much more active in this section and could let people get used to the kiai sections in having more note density. added on places like 00:24:626 - and 00:33:353 -
  3. 01:00:626 (47) - think this should be a don, considering it's pretty similar to 00:51:353 (33,34,35) in how it sounds. trying to give variation here, but I'll leave it first
  4. 01:07:172 (57) - feels more suited as a kat for the drums in the background here, would allow you switch the finisher at 01:07:717 (58) to a don finisher to keep consistency with 00:50:262 (32) and 00:58:990 (45) unless, you wanted more variety on the finishers like you did with 01:12:081 (64) and etc., appears in the other kiai section as well. yep make sense, changed!
  5. 01:30:163 - don't think you need this inherited timing point here. done
  6. 02:39:163 - unneeded inherited timing point here as well, should check the other difficulties just in case. only Kantan got this problem, fixed


muzukashii
  1. 01:41:250 (350) - would switch this to a kat, for that higher pitch to contrast the earlier note at 01:40:729 (349) nice catch! changed
  2. solid patterning for muzu. tyyyy


inner oni
  1. 00:12:081 (18) - i mean you could make every large white tick for this part here a kat for the vocalist, but what you have already is okay too. also applies to 01:53:250 (633) just in the opposite way. hmm I guess I would keep it as I focus on drum sound here and to emphasize 00:16:444 - this part
  2. 00:41:535 (174) - making this a kat feels kinda nice to play for the pattern. was focusing on drum sound here and since it's a downbeat, I guess d works well here
  3. 02:00:620 (680) - think the snare here needs to be a kat for the emphasis or change it up so it's a lot more impactful, feel free to experiment. I'll keep this first, since i am thinking whether to remap this stream or not, but still thanks for your idea!


small mod for small brain, good luck with the mapset.
Thanks for mod :) really appreciating you're checking v1 maps!
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@everyone
Adjusted offset by +1 to every diffs
also reduced Inner Oni's hp to 6
GDers Modders Please pay attention thanks!
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H Y P E
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Smallwu wrote:


H Y P E


HYPEEEEE
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Smallwu wrote:


H Y P E
hello I'm here for your NM request
[General]
add "Kin" "Volta" in tags to be honor for them and it's rule to added GDer's names

[Inner Oni]

:arrow: 00:20:809 ~ 00:50:263 - consider adding more notes around here by add some triplets such 00:21:763 - 00:22:923 - and like here 00:24:832 -
if you added them it's will be more balance of difficulty and look harder than kin's oni because around here is same his diffi.as 00:20:809 ~ 00:50:263 have a little triplats in beginning and softer than kiai and 00:50:263 - is stronger than before with more notes triplets,5-plets,7-plets or longer. so it's make sense to add some triplets at 00:20:809
:arrow::?: 01:07:718 - you should buff them because the part is just a bit softer than 00:50:263 ~ 01:06:627 -by add a bit triplets but not too much . and also 01:16:445 I think it's too much notes probably because length of notes is note always same and sound is same as 01:07:718 but just a bit stonger with miku's vocal. you can make it same as 03:27:164 - at all or a bit easier
:arrow: 01:35:512 (529) - add finisher? the point is strong sound and different from 01:43:860 (581)
:arrow: 01:46:338 (595,596,597) and 01:46:990 (600,601,602,603,604) - they aren't 1/4 but it's 1/2.you just change back to 1/2 and follow what I said in 01:31:338 and you can make 01:46:208 - a bit harder by triplats
:arrow: 01:59:773 (667,668,669,670,671,672,673,674,675,676,677,678,679,680,681,682,683,684,685,686,687,688,689,690,691,692,693,694,695,696,697,698,699,700,701,702,703,704,705,706,707,708,709) - to follow drum sound how about change to like this? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/10796262
:arrow: 02:20:382 - same as 01:07:718

this diffi is look well,spread and consistent is seem good :)

[Kin's Oni]

:arrow: 01:35:512 (509) - add finisher to focus strong sound?
:arrow: 02:33:947 (888) - same^
:arrow: 02:37:795 (2) - move to 02:37:860 sound isn't in blue trick
:arrow: 03:01:789 - how about change to ddkkd k? I think use harder plets before starting new loop is should be great and fit the song and it's last kiai
:arrow: 03:13:664 - consider adding more notes here to make it consistent 03:11:664 (188,189,190,191,192,193,194,195,196,197,198,199,200,201,202) and it's feel not softer sound is always strong in kiai ,example https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/10796564
:arrow: 03:21:664 - same as 03:13:664

oh it's well diffi

[Muzukashii]

:arrow: 00:28:036 - change to kkdk? still can follow vocal and guitar.I think a bit hard pattern is should be nice at before started new loop 00:29:536 .same as 00:36:354 (104,105,106,107,108,109)
:arrow: 01:16:718 (269,270,271,272,273,274,275,276,277,278,279,280,281,282,283,284,285,286) - it's too hard .if you see ,it's harder than 00:50:263 - and you need to consider from top diffi.from top diffi from 00:50:263 -is hardest but why for muzu is 01:16:445 ? you should be balance of diffi is same
:arrow: 02:28:730 - same as first kiai
:arrow: 03:35:414 (277,278,279,280,281,282,283,284,285,286,287,288,289,290,291,292,293,294,295,296,297) -actually same but it's fine because it's just almost harder than 02:55:164 but it's look easier

great mapper for muzu,it's very well even spread and break 8-)

[Volta's Futsuu]

omg it's very well with enough 2/1 break and consistent this diffi is very well I don't have anything to say except HP
I guess with Sansheng
kantan=8
futsuu=6
muzu=6
should chenge hp in volta's diffi to 7 or change kantan to 7

[Kantan]

:arrow: 00:57:627 - consider add k here to make first kiai have a little triplets.I saw kiais and you're trying to make it from easy->harder but 01:18:627 (77,78,79,80,81,82,83,84) -make me feel weird because you use 1/1 and also if you added a little triplets.another kiai is harder anyway so don't worry
:arrow: 01:06:354 - same but use d^

it's well diffi too with consistent patterns and fit the song and hardest at last kiai

this map is play fun,hope my mod is helpful
goodluck with rank! I love you a lot
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Mod:

All diffs:
00:20:263 - It looks weird that this hihat isn't higlighted... Add k in all diffs.
01:22:445 - same as above

(If you choose not to put them, then delete those in Kin's Oni)



Kin's Oni
00:19:991 - Delete this note since there's no sound in that place.

00:23:809 - Change to k to highlight the snare sound.


00:23:945 - delete, no sound, also inconsistent with all other diffs.
00:25:309 - delete, no sound, also inconsistent with all other diffs.

00:36:900 - add a note here, there's snare sound, leaving it empty would be inconsistent with the other diffs. I suggest adding a k, then changing next k for d.

01:01:309 - ctrl+g this k and next d to highlight snare sound.

01:03:082 - add a note here, there's snare sound, leaving it empty would be inconsistent with the other diffs.

01:07:036 - changing this [d kkddk] into [ddkkd k] would match the drum fill better.


01:59:643 - move this [kkddk] 1/2 later... That means you have to delete the next d. There's no sound where you placed these 2 k, sound, leave this space empty until 01:59:773.

03:34:164 - change this [ddkdkkd] to [ddkkddk] to match the snare/drum play in that part. If you want a less simpler pattern then I'd suggest [kdkkddk].
posted
COLA!!! Kora!!!
I like this song a lot!

[ Overall]
  1. Yes, someone already mentioned about HP setting.
    I would like you to change HP on Kantan to 7. Since this is a long music. HP8 could kill the beginner player with that high note count.

  2. This is a high BPM music. So it is ok to raise Kin's Oni OD to 6 and Inner Oni OD to 7.


  3. At some section. Kin's Oni has a greater density than Inner Oni. Maybe it is not nice to see Oni become more difficult than Inner Oni. Even at some section.


    Timestamp for this issue.
    00:20:809 - 00:29:536 section. (Only a little bit, It would be nice if you can manage this section to make Inner Oni looks harder than Oni.)
    01:07:718 - 01:16:445 section. (This section Oni have a greater amount of notes than Inner Oni noticeably.)


I will have a check again when you've replied me.
Good luck~ :)
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Rhytoly wrote:

Smallwu wrote:


H Y P E
hello I'm here for your NM request
[General]
add "Kin" "Volta" in tags to be honor for them and it's rule to added GDer's names done

I will reply to Inner Oni later

[Muzukashii]

:arrow: 00:28:036 - change to kkdk? still can follow vocal and guitar.I think a bit hard pattern is should be nice at before started new loop 00:29:536 .same as 00:36:354 (104,105,106,107,108,109) ok
:arrow: 01:16:718 (269,270,271,272,273,274,275,276,277,278,279,280,281,282,283,284,285,286) - it's too hard .if you see ,it's harder than 00:50:263 - and you need to consider from top diffi.from top diffi from 00:50:263 -is hardest but why for muzu is 01:16:445 ? you should be balance of diffi is same good point! will leave this and come up with solution later
:arrow: 02:28:730 - same as first kiai ^
:arrow: 03:35:414 (277,278,279,280,281,282,283,284,285,286,287,288,289,290,291,292,293,294,295,296,297) -actually same but it's fine because it's just almost harder than 02:55:164 but it's look easier yeah I guess it's fine

great mapper for muzu,it's very well even spread and break 8-)

[Kantan]

:arrow: 00:57:627 - consider add k here to make first kiai have a little triplets.I saw kiais and you're trying to make it from easy->harder but 01:18:627 (77,78,79,80,81,82,83,84) -make me feel weird because you use 1/1 and also if you added a little triplets.another kiai is harder anyway so don't worry
:arrow: 01:06:354 - same but use d^ the most intense part among kiai time is 01:16:445 - , so I put kk kk and one triplet there yeah since it's most intense. But I don't think I should put note at places you suggest as it feels like ''too much'' for just the beginning of the kiai

it's well diffi too with consistent patterns and fit the song and hardest at last kiai

this map is play fun,hope my mod is helpful
goodluck with rank! I love you a lot

ARGENTINE DREAM wrote:

Mod:

All diffs:
00:20:263 - It looks weird that this hihat isn't higlighted... Add k in all diffs.
emm I personally think the hihat need not be highlighted, but I will leave it to GDers
01:22:445 - same as above ^

Tyistiana wrote:

COLA!!! Kora!!!
I like this song a lot! same XD

[ Overall]
  1. Yes, someone already mentioned about HP setting. ok
    I would like you to change HP on Kantan to 7. Since this is a long music. HP8 could kill the beginner player with that high note count.

  2. This is a high BPM music. So it is ok to raise Kin's Oni OD to 6 and Inner Oni OD to 7. hmm I will raise mine to od6.3 and leave kin's one to him


  3. At some section. Kin's Oni has a greater density than Inner Oni. Maybe it is not nice to see Oni become more difficult than Inner Oni. Even at some section.


    Timestamp for this issue.
    00:20:809 - 00:29:536 section. (Only a little bit, It would be nice if you can manage this section to make Inner Oni looks harder than Oni.)
    01:07:718 - 01:16:445 section. (This section Oni have a greater amount of notes than Inner Oni noticeably.) wil reply later


I will have a check again when you've replied me.
Good luck~ :)
Thanks for modding :)
posted

Sansheng wrote:

SECTOR-712
NM request / osu!taiko
  1. 00:02:262 (1) - can be a finisher, but a regular note is just as fine. applied
  2. 00:20:808 (32) - feel like this should be a finisher for that cymbal crash like you did earlier at 00:10:990 (10) ^
  3. 00:40:444 (11,12,13,14,15) - would recommend k,d,d,k,k for this pattern instead, captures the vocals better. changed to dkkdk instead
  4. 00:57:353 (20) - change to kat, pitch is still rather high here. considering the pitch decrease from (18), i think d is also fine
  5. 01:07:717 (28) - finisher for this note, still retains the same impact as 00:50:262 (1) fixed
  6. 01:15:899 (48) - it's a bit strange this note is a don, considering you been emphasizing the vocals with kat like you did at 01:07:172 (26) and 01:11:535 (37) i want to highlight the raised pitch between 01:15:900 (48,50) - at this point, and for variety sake

small mod for small brain, good luck with the mapset.

ARGENTINE DREAM wrote:

Mod:

All diffs:
00:20:263 - It looks weird that this hihat isn't higlighted... Add k in all diffs.
01:22:445 - same as above
different mapper might have different perspective, i personally would like to give a rest moment at those point.

(If you choose not to put them, then delete those in Kin's Oni)
thanks for the mods~

osu file format v14

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AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 49717
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Normal
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 1
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
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DistanceSpacing: 1
BeatDivisor: 2
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 0.9999999

[Metadata]
Title:Chiisana Koi no Uta (Synth Rock Cover)
TitleUnicode:小さな恋のうた (Synth Rock Cover)
Artist:Omoi
ArtistUnicode:Omoi
Creator:iloveyou4ever
Version:Volta's Futsuu
Source:
Tags:初音ミク Hatsune Miku Vocaloid Sakurai Kimura MONGOL800 Message song of a small love Volta Kin
BeatmapID:1399856
BeatmapSetID:598573

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:6.5
CircleSize:2
OverallDifficulty:4
ApproachRate:5
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posted
because i'm lazy, no reply=fixed

[R] wrote:

[Oni]
00:18:762 - add note, it feels sudden while the drum sound still continuous
01:30:946 - how about adding triplet here
01:23:903 - maybe invert kd to give it a variety that'd just look like an inconsistency
01:52:076 - add don ? it has a bit drum stream
02:46:663 - change kat, to follow the guitar swing

Sansheng wrote:

kin's oni
  1. 00:11:262 (21,22) - would ctrl+g this, just for the vocals honestly. 00:11:263 (21) - vocal is actually higher pitched here
  2. 00:18:762 - a bit weird to have this rhythm gap here, adding a don here would keep the flow and transition nicely for the next part of the song.
  3. 01:04:240 - adding a don here for that 1/4 triple, kinda plays well and fits the vocal nicely. i'm trying to be careful about spread w ith muzu
  4. 02:02:185 (659) - i think deleting this note or simplifying the pattern would be fine, since the section here is pretty intense as it is already. considering how inner is done i'd say its ok
  5. 03:35:600 - having a don here for the 1/4 triple would be a nice lead up to the d,d,d,d,k pattern.
(I'm still not done yet, gotta have to check Rhytoly, ARGENTINE DREAM & Tyistiana's mod/check)
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