hell mapper
Thanks for modding and starss frukofrukoyurdakul wrote:
Yolo! Nice song choice I gotta say that :^)
yeah XD
[General]
Now, as I see in the description you mentioned "Chromoxx: ???? (WIP)" and I think the Inner Oni already is good so no need to overmap it in the first place. Secondly: I see you used 1.30 SV multiplier in Muzukashii, and I recommend 1.40, for Kantan I recommend 1.20 instead of 1.10.
I asked Surono but he recommended to keep it as 1.3x,maybe I will leave this first
As Aimod say, the audio preview time is different on Inner Oni compared to Kantan and Muzukashii.
ok
[Inner Oni]
03:27:163 - I recommend turning the kiai off here. Since aimod gives a warning (and I know it still does not go if you do that), the song's chorus ends here.
it'd be inconsistent with first and second kiai,but I'll ask others opinions
00:41:808 (173) - How about a kat? The snare sound is pretty prominent.
00:43:990 (185) - ^
both changed and rework a little bit
01:24:946 (469) - This note is clearly put for variation. But, it is also clear that you are following drums. And from what I can hear, there is a pretty strong snare sound. Making a variation is not good at that point in my opinion, so you can change it simply to kat.
01:27:033 (477,485) - ^
but I think variation plays a more important role here,keep repeating a same pattern for number of times would be boring
01:35:511 (525) - Finisher? The crash cymbal is loud enough to put one.
retained to keep consistency as 00:33:899 -
01:43:076 (571) - I'd suggest making it kat in order to follow the snare.
01:59:772 - This stream could be improved. The drums are getting lower at 01:59:903 (665,666) - those two, and since the pitches are different, I suggest making it dk, which will result 01:59:772 (663,664,665,666) - these 4 as kkdk. 02:00:555 (675,676,677,678,679,680,681,682,683,684,685,686,687,688,689,690) - For this section, I recommend the variatitons of kkdd. What I mean is, you can either put kkddkkddkkddkkdd or make it various like kkddkdddkkddkddd, which will produce an extremely good flow to the drums. 02:01:598 (691,692,693,694,695,696,697,698,699,700,701,702,703,704,705) - For this one, I suggest kkkkddkkkkddddkkd to follow the drums as well.
all accepted!
That's all for this diff. It got mapped really nice.
[Muzukashii]
01:59:837 - I suggest adding a note here in order to keep the difficulty spread and because of the drum attack. That way you'll have a triplet on every pattern.
ok
02:00:163 (446,447) - Ctrl + g on those, 02:01:989 (460,461) - and those one too.
rework this part myself
03:37:788 (294,295) - Hmm, I don't know if this makes it follow hard for muzukashii players, but I suggest a swap between those to in order to follow the drums better.
sure!
[Kantan]
01:59:511 (1) - If i remember correctly, long sliders are acceptable on Kantan difficulties. Now, since there is a huge drum attack and if we consider there is a note on every 1/4 snap, I'd suggest changing this one to slider.
temporarily accepted!
Sorry to make only one suggestion on your Kantan difficulty, since I'm not experienced on mapping them.
This mapset looks pretty good to me, good luck on the ranking way! :^)
Thanks for moddingJarvisGaming YT wrote:
hai again
from queue
Title should be 'Song of a Small Love', change it if you want Song of a Small Love is the English title,but osu requires mappers to fill in Romanised Title unless official website stated as English Title
gud song :3
[Kantan]
00:25:172 (5) - k because this note is higher than the last ok
00:44:808 (25,26,27) - feel like this should be kdK, to follow the pitch, plus it sounds better I map to the drum sound on 00:45:899 - instead of following vocal,thus I think d k D would be better
01:19:717 (77) - d to follow pitch, or just keep it if its too hard too hard I think
01:33:424 (93) - k because this note is higher than the last ok
02:31:859 (50) - d to follow pitch, or just keep it if its too hard keep
03:25:163 (77) - k to follow pitch remap instead
03:38:163 (107) - k to follow pitch, keep if too hard same as above
[Muzu]
00:12:626 (20,21,22,23) - kdkd to fit pitch remap to the pitch instead
00:44:262 (138) - k because it starts with high vocal pitch ok!
01:16:990 (270,271,272) - dkk to fit vocal emm I think kdk is better
02:29:250 (568,569,570) - ^ ^
Everything else is fine
Gl :3
thanks for the mod~[R] wrote:
xD
[Futsuu]
02:00:163 - add note ? stream nya sama kayak di 02:01:598 - biar ada peningkatan tensi, enakan tetep kayak gini. cocok sama melodynya juga
02:02:120 - kdk change dkk or ddk, klo di denger baik baik, suara drum disini rendah kdk juga gak masalah buat invert dari 01:57:946 (6,7,8) -
03:37:413 - change kat, suara drumnya tinggi konsisten sama 03:35:663 - dan 03:38:163 - dan ada kick nya juga
maybe just that from me
good luck
Thanks for modding[R] wrote:
xD
[Kantan]
00:54:626 - change don, to sync the note in 00:55:717 -
01:01:172 - ^ emm want to emphasize the high-pitched vocals by putting 3k here
03:34:913 - move 03:35:413 - to follow the drum following vocal here :l
03:38:913 - or 03:39:663 - current pattern feels confused, are follow u the vocal or drum changed to kd anyways XD
[Muzukashii]
00:10:717 - change kat, pitch different with kat backward
it's a k already o.o
00:27:626 - kd dkkd change kddk kd to follow the vocal more fit change to kd k kd
02:59:413 - change don ? to much dk at this part I do agree,and I'll reconsider about this part
[Inner Oni]
00:18:762 - make ddkkkd d k d k , start 00:19:172 - it feels like d d k d k will more fit yes
maybe just that from me
good luck
Thanks for mod really appreciating you're checking v1 maps!Sansheng wrote:
SECTOR-712 NM request / osu!taiko general kantan
- add "MONGOL800" and "Message" in tags for the original artist/album from where the cover is based on. done
- "Sakurai" and "Kimura" for extra tags if ya want, since the pair make up Omoi. ok
- might as well turn off widescreen support in volta and kin's difficulties to keep consistent for your mapset, doesn't affect anything but feel free to change it. alright
- volta's futsuu hp could be upped to 7 as a small suggestion, though it's fine as it is since it's supposed to be the same hp as muzukashii like the oni/inner oni difficulties i'm guessing. Leaving to him
- here's a link for a higher res pic of the current bg you're using. since miku looks squished in the current res you're using. here's the original, if you want to crop it yourself. idk is it my illusion or sth...but it seems the current version is clearer than the one you linked...I guess I will keep it first
muzukashii
- 00:20:808 - don't really need the inherited timing point here since the one before at 00:18:490 does the job. fixed
- 00:21:899 / 00:38:262 - between these two parts, i do feel you could add more notes just to make it more interesting despite it being a kantan, considering volta's futsuu is much more active in this section and could let people get used to the kiai sections in having more note density. added on places like 00:24:626 - and 00:33:353 -
- 01:00:626 (47) - think this should be a don, considering it's pretty similar to 00:51:353 (33,34,35) in how it sounds. trying to give variation here, but I'll leave it first
- 01:07:172 (57) - feels more suited as a kat for the drums in the background here, would allow you switch the finisher at 01:07:717 (58) to a don finisher to keep consistency with 00:50:262 (32) and 00:58:990 (45) unless, you wanted more variety on the finishers like you did with 01:12:081 (64) and etc., appears in the other kiai section as well. yep make sense, changed!
- 01:30:163 - don't think you need this inherited timing point here. done
- 02:39:163 - unneeded inherited timing point here as well, should check the other difficulties just in case. only Kantan got this problem, fixed
inner oni
- 01:41:250 (350) - would switch this to a kat, for that higher pitch to contrast the earlier note at 01:40:729 (349) nice catch! changed
- solid patterning for muzu. tyyyy
- 00:12:081 (18) - i mean you could make every large white tick for this part here a kat for the vocalist, but what you have already is okay too. also applies to 01:53:250 (633) just in the opposite way. hmm I guess I would keep it as I focus on drum sound here and to emphasize 00:16:444 - this part
- 00:41:535 (174) - making this a kat feels kinda nice to play for the pattern. was focusing on drum sound here and since it's a downbeat, I guess d works well here
- 02:00:620 (680) - think the snare here needs to be a kat for the emphasis or change it up so it's a lot more impactful, feel free to experiment. I'll keep this first, since i am thinking whether to remap this stream or not, but still thanks for your idea!
small mod for small brain, good luck with the mapset.
Smallwu wrote:
H Y P E
hello I'm here for your NM requestSmallwu wrote:
H Y P E
Rhytoly wrote:
hello I'm here for your NM requestSmallwu wrote:
H Y P E
[General]
add "Kin" "Volta" in tags to be honor for them and it's rule to added GDer's names done
I will reply to Inner Oni later
[Muzukashii]
00:28:036 - change to kkdk? still can follow vocal and guitar.I think a bit hard pattern is should be nice at before started new loop 00:29:536 .same as 00:36:354 (104,105,106,107,108,109) ok
01:16:718 (269,270,271,272,273,274,275,276,277,278,279,280,281,282,283,284,285,286) - it's too hard .if you see ,it's harder than 00:50:263 - and you need to consider from top diffi.from top diffi from 00:50:263 -is hardest but why for muzu is 01:16:445 ? you should be balance of diffi is same good point! will leave this and come up with solution later
02:28:730 - same as first kiai ^
03:35:414 (277,278,279,280,281,282,283,284,285,286,287,288,289,290,291,292,293,294,295,296,297) -actually same but it's fine because it's just almost harder than 02:55:164 but it's look easier yeah I guess it's fine
great mapper for muzu,it's very well even spread and break
[Kantan]
00:57:627 - consider add k here to make first kiai have a little triplets.I saw kiais and you're trying to make it from easy->harder but 01:18:627 (77,78,79,80,81,82,83,84) -make me feel weird because you use 1/1 and also if you added a little triplets.another kiai is harder anyway so don't worry
01:06:354 - same but use d^ the most intense part among kiai time is 01:16:445 - , so I put kk kk and one triplet there yeah since it's most intense. But I don't think I should put note at places you suggest as it feels like ''too much'' for just the beginning of the kiai
it's well diffi too with consistent patterns and fit the song and hardest at last kiai
this map is play fun,hope my mod is helpful
goodluck with rank! I love you a lot
ARGENTINE DREAM wrote:
Mod:
All diffs:SPOILER00:20:263 - It looks weird that this hihat isn't higlighted... Add k in all diffs.
emm I personally think the hihat need not be highlighted, but I will leave it to GDers
01:22:445 - same as above ^
Thanks for moddingTyistiana wrote:
COLA!!!Kora!!!
I like this song a lot! same XD
[ Overall]I will have a check again when you've replied me.
- Yes, someone already mentioned about HP setting. ok
I would like you to change HP on Kantan to 7. Since this is a long music. HP8 could kill the beginner player with that high note count.- This is a high BPM music. So it is ok to raise Kin's Oni OD to 6 and Inner Oni OD to 7. hmm I will raise mine to od6.3 and leave kin's one to him
At some section. Kin's Oni has a greater density than Inner Oni. Maybe it is not nice to see Oni become more difficult than Inner Oni. Even at some section.
Timestamp for this issue.
00:20:809 - 00:29:536 section. (Only a little bit, It would be nice if you can manage this section to make Inner Oni looks harder than Oni.)
01:07:718 - 01:16:445 section. (This section Oni have a greater amount of notes than Inner Oni noticeably.) wil reply later
Good luck~
Sansheng wrote:
SECTOR-712 NM request / osu!taiko
- 00:02:262 (1) - can be a finisher, but a regular note is just as fine. applied
- 00:20:808 (32) - feel like this should be a finisher for that cymbal crash like you did earlier at 00:10:990 (10) ^
- 00:40:444 (11,12,13,14,15) - would recommend k,d,d,k,k for this pattern instead, captures the vocals better. changed to dkkdk instead
- 00:57:353 (20) - change to kat, pitch is still rather high here. considering the pitch decrease from (18), i think d is also fine
- 01:07:717 (28) - finisher for this note, still retains the same impact as 00:50:262 (1) fixed
- 01:15:899 (48) - it's a bit strange this note is a don, considering you been emphasizing the vocals with kat like you did at 01:07:172 (26) and 01:11:535 (37) i want to highlight the raised pitch between 01:15:900 (48,50) - at this point, and for variety sake
small mod for small brain, good luck with the mapset.
thanks for the mods~ARGENTINE DREAM wrote:
Mod:
All diffs:SPOILER00:20:263 - It looks weird that this hihat isn't higlighted... Add k in all diffs.
01:22:445 - same as above
different mapper might have different perspective, i personally would like to give a rest moment at those point.
(If you choose not to put them, then delete those in Kin's Oni)
osu file format v14
[General]
AudioFilename: audio.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 49717
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Normal
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 1
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[Editor]
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DistanceSpacing: 1
BeatDivisor: 2
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[Metadata]
Title:Chiisana Koi no Uta (Synth Rock Cover)
TitleUnicode:小さな恋のうた (Synth Rock Cover)
Artist:Omoi
ArtistUnicode:Omoi
Creator:iloveyou4ever
Version:Volta's Futsuu
Source:
Tags:初音ミク Hatsune Miku Vocaloid Sakurai Kimura MONGOL800 Message song of a small love Volta Kin
BeatmapID:1399856
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[Difficulty]
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[R] wrote:
[Oni]
00:18:762 - add note, it feels sudden while the drum sound still continuous
01:30:946 - how about adding triplet here
01:23:903 - maybe invert kd to give it a variety that'd just look like an inconsistency
01:52:076 - add don ? it has a bit drum stream
02:46:663 - change kat, to follow the guitar swing
(I'm still not done yet, gotta have to check Rhytoly, ARGENTINE DREAM & Tyistiana's mod/check)Sansheng wrote:
kin's oni
- 00:11:262 (21,22) - would ctrl+g this, just for the vocals honestly. 00:11:263 (21) - vocal is actually higher pitched here
- 00:18:762 - a bit weird to have this rhythm gap here, adding a don here would keep the flow and transition nicely for the next part of the song.
- 01:04:240 - adding a don here for that 1/4 triple, kinda plays well and fits the vocal nicely. i'm trying to be careful about spread w ith muzu
- 02:02:185 (659) - i think deleting this note or simplifying the pattern would be fine, since the section here is pretty intense as it is already. considering how inner is done i'd say its ok
- 03:35:600 - having a don here for the 1/4 triple would be a nice lead up to the d,d,d,d,k pattern.