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This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2023年2月18日 at 下午 03:26:44

Artist: Omoi feat. Hatsune Miku
Title: Chiisana Koi no Uta (Synth Rock Cover)
Tags: Vocaloid Sakurai Kimura MONGOL800 Message song of a small love japanese pop j-pop jpop rock j-rock jrock Volta Kin
BPM: 220
Filesize: 5965kb
Play Time: 03:41
Difficulties Available:
  1. Inner Oni (6.24 stars, 1531 notes)
  2. Kantan (1.9 stars, 322 notes)
  3. Kin's Oni (4.73 stars, 1279 notes)
  4. Muzukashii (3.87 stars, 926 notes)
  5. Volta's Futsuu (2.79 stars, 581 notes)
Download: Omoi feat. Hatsune Miku - Chiisana Koi no Uta (Synth Rock Cover)
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ほら あなたにとって
大事な人ほど すぐそばにいるの
ただ あなたにだけ
届いて欲しい 響け恋の歌
ほら ほら ほら 響け恋の歌

Difficulty

Kantan by me
Futsuu by Volta
Muzukashii by me
Oni by Kin
Inner Oni by me (All finished!)
Skylish
time to scam my KDS again
2017-04-12 23:09 iloveyou4ever: Hi,can you test a map?
2017-04-12 23:09 Skylish: yes, I am free rn
2017-04-12 23:09 iloveyou4ever: oops nvm...you cant play it
2017-04-12 23:09 Skylish: you play 9 me ?
2017-04-12 23:09 iloveyou4ever: let me find a better BG first
2017-04-12 23:18 Skylish: okay mei ?
2017-04-12 23:18 iloveyou4ever: mei
2017-04-12 23:31 iloveyou4ever: fuck I cant find a nice bg
2017-04-12 23:31 Skylish: ...
2017-04-12 23:32 iloveyou4ever: just temporaily use it then
2017-04-12 23:32 iloveyou4ever: https://puu.sh/vhWUP.osz
2017-04-12 23:33 iloveyou4ever: please don't disable the video
2017-04-12 23:33 iloveyou4ever: unless your computer sucks
2017-04-12 23:33 Skylish: video is not working lol
2017-04-12 23:33 Skylish: WAIT
2017-04-12 23:34 iloveyou4ever: oh ok
2017-04-12 23:34 Skylish: video is not displayed
2017-04-12 23:34 Skylish: not my fault wo
2017-04-12 23:34 Skylish: I can't see it in the Editor as well
2017-04-12 23:34 iloveyou4ever: here is ok wo...
2017-04-12 23:34 Skylish: nvm
2017-04-12 23:35 iloveyou4ever: http://puu.sh/vhX2E.png
2017-04-12 23:35 iloveyou4ever: did you see the mp4?
2017-04-12 23:35 Skylish: https://puu.sh/vhX4m/401cb3770b.png
2017-04-12 23:35 Skylish: yes
2017-04-12 23:35 iloveyou4ever: why is it 亂碼...
2017-04-12 23:35 Skylish: 亂左碼先display 唔到
2017-04-12 23:35 Skylish: 你用咩sys?
2017-04-12 23:36 Skylish: unicode?
2017-04-12 23:36 Skylish: 定ANSI?
2017-04-12 23:36 Skylish: you can rename the file of mp4 and in .osu
2017-04-12 23:36 iloveyou4ever: let me reupload...
2017-04-12 23:36 Skylish: then no fucking stupid error code will be shown
2017-04-12 23:38 iloveyou4ever: https://puu.sh/vhXcz.osz
2017-04-12 23:38 iloveyou4ever: try again?
2017-04-12 23:39 Skylish: https://puu.sh/vhXgo/1bd49dafd0.png
2017-04-12 23:39 Skylish: ???
2017-04-12 23:39 iloveyou4ever: oops I should correct the bg name
2017-04-12 23:39 Skylish: I mean the video is not working
2017-04-12 23:40 Skylish: this is what you should have in .osu https://puu.sh/vhXl3/9eea549ce5.png
2017-04-12 23:42 iloveyou4ever: https://puu.sh/vhXso.osz
2017-04-12 23:43 iloveyou4ever: fine now I think w
2017-04-12 23:43 Skylish: yes
2017-04-12 23:43 Skylish: spec me
2017-04-12 23:43 iloveyou4ever: rip offset...
2017-04-12 23:43 Skylish: ?
2017-04-12 23:44 Skylish: video offset?
2017-04-12 23:44 Skylish: you need to sync it
2017-04-12 23:44 iloveyou4ever: no,the notes offset
2017-04-12 23:48 Skylish: no hand speed
2017-04-12 23:48 Skylish: GG
2017-04-12 23:48 iloveyou4ever: rip
2017-04-12 23:48 Skylish: quite nice
2017-04-12 23:48 Skylish: I love those kkddk pattern
2017-04-12 23:48 Skylish: they are fine placed
2017-04-12 23:48 iloveyou4ever: I spot some errors...
2017-04-12 23:48 iloveyou4ever: ofc I am iloveyou4ever
2017-04-12 23:48 iloveyou4ever: pro mapper
2017-04-12 23:48 Skylish: :vomit:
2017-04-12 23:49 iloveyou4ever: is the offset right?
2017-04-12 23:49 Skylish: I did not feel too awkward
2017-04-12 23:49 Skylish: but if you hear in 25 %
2017-04-12 23:49 Skylish: the offset was set a bit too early
2017-04-12 23:49 iloveyou4ever: give me the correct value pls...
2017-04-12 23:50 Skylish: for BPM=220, I think 1171 works well
2017-04-12 23:52 Skylish: you just need all +4 ms for all timing points
2017-04-12 23:52 Skylish: imo
2017-04-12 23:53 iloveyou4ever: I think +3 is fine
2017-04-12 23:53 Skylish: up to you
2017-04-12 23:53 iloveyou4ever: nvm just 1ms w
2017-04-12 23:53 Skylish: +3/4 not really a big deal
2017-04-12 23:53 Skylish: yes
2017-04-12 23:53 iloveyou4ever: did you spot other problems in the map?
2017-04-12 23:53 iloveyou4ever: oops nvm you cant play it at all
2017-04-12 23:53 iloveyou4ever: :D
2017-04-12 23:53 Skylish: :(
2017-04-12 23:54 Skylish: you are naive
2017-04-12 23:54 Skylish: I can see how the map runs
2017-04-12 23:54 iloveyou4ever: 01:30:161 - I think the sv change here is a bit sudden...
2017-04-12 23:55 iloveyou4ever: I mean 01:30:161 - this is strange,the three finisher are fine I think
2017-04-12 23:56 Skylish: ?
2017-04-12 23:56 Skylish: https://puu.sh/vhYbG/5089e3a1ab.png
2017-04-12 23:56 Skylish: you put a 1.0x SV please....
2017-04-12 23:56 Skylish: arh nothing
2017-04-12 23:56 Skylish: I forgot to re-snap timing
2017-04-12 23:56 iloveyou4ever: before 01:30:161 - here is 0.9
2017-04-12 23:56 Skylish: bakalish
2017-04-12 23:57 iloveyou4ever: yes you're fucking stupid
2017-04-12 23:57 iloveyou4ever: runs
2017-04-12 23:57 Skylish: umm that's okay
2017-04-12 23:57 Skylish: I mean the usage of 0.9x to 1.0x
2017-04-12 23:57 iloveyou4ever: ok~thx
2017-04-12 23:57 Skylish: some inconsistent stuff though
2017-04-12 23:58 iloveyou4ever: where?
2017-04-12 23:58 Skylish: the place you use d d k d d k
2017-04-12 23:58 Skylish: k d k
2017-04-12 23:58 Skylish: wait I am finding
2017-04-12 23:59 Skylish: 01:07:716 -
2017-04-13 00:00 iloveyou4ever: I want to put 01:07:715 - K
2017-04-13 00:00 iloveyou4ever: but yes K k ddk ddk is a bit consistent
2017-04-13 00:00 iloveyou4ever: and I want to leave a space for 01:07:851 -
2017-04-13 00:00 iloveyou4ever: cuz new music part
2017-04-13 00:00 Skylish: I mean the whole session there
2017-04-13 00:00 Skylish: the notes are coherent
2017-04-13 00:01 Skylish: but not cohesive
2017-04-13 00:01 Skylish: like: 01:12:352 -
2017-04-13 00:01 iloveyou4ever: my english sucks...
2017-04-13 00:01 Skylish: you want to have drum=d after 01:12:080 - ?
2017-04-13 00:01 Skylish: * drum kick= d
2017-04-13 00:02 iloveyou4ever: map by melody here not drum kick
2017-04-13 00:02 iloveyou4ever: if I map to drum I would've put d k ddk d k ddk...
2017-04-13 00:03 Skylish: urh....
2017-04-13 00:03 Skylish: yes, but
2017-04-13 00:03 Skylish: *change back taiko skin
2017-04-13 00:03 Skylish: I was using a default skin when I was testplay LMAO
2017-04-13 00:05 Skylish: 01:12:080 (403) -
2017-04-13 00:05 Skylish: https://puu.sh/vhYFK/faba2273e9.png
2017-04-13 00:05 Skylish: arh, it is, firstly, fine that you can map to the pitch
2017-04-13 00:05 iloveyou4ever: yes~
2017-04-13 00:06 Skylish: but actually I wanna point out that at 01:12:625 -
2017-04-13 00:06 Skylish: ^ these on-beats
2017-04-13 00:06 Skylish: do not have any melody
2017-04-13 00:06 Skylish: i.e. they should be consistent first
2017-04-13 00:07 Skylish: okay explain my screen shot a bit first
2017-04-13 00:07 iloveyou4ever: oh I get what you mean
2017-04-13 00:07 Skylish: 01:12:080 (403) - D, the first thing I said
2017-04-13 00:07 Skylish: then you can use a k after this D
2017-04-13 00:07 iloveyou4ever: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7806782
2017-04-13 00:07 Skylish: D k makes sense, right?
2017-04-13 00:08 Skylish: urh....
2017-04-13 00:08 iloveyou4ever: 01:12:079 - I want here be K...
2017-04-13 00:08 Skylish: not this kind of consistent
2017-04-13 00:08 iloveyou4ever: be consistent with 01:07:715 -
2017-04-13 00:08 Skylish: no not like this
2017-04-13 00:08 Skylish: you have a very concrete division of using K tbh
2017-04-13 00:08 iloveyou4ever: what the fuck
2017-04-13 00:09 Skylish: my testplay version is already good
2017-04-13 00:09 Skylish: what I mean by consistency is here and there:
2017-04-13 00:09 Skylish: 01:12:080 - 01:14:261 -
2017-04-13 00:09 iloveyou4ever: 01:12:079 (403,404) - according to pitch this should be K d
2017-04-13 00:09 Skylish: according to my screen shot ^
2017-04-13 00:09 Skylish: answering your q. first because you focus on pitch
2017-04-13 00:10 Skylish: 01:12:080 - yes this is K/ (k) <-- not applicable
2017-04-13 00:10 Skylish: the vocal drops along with the time until 01:12:625 -
2017-04-13 00:10 Skylish: it is a very clear d
2017-04-13 00:10 iloveyou4ever: yes
2017-04-13 00:10 Skylish: however, does the drop of pitch that obvious to make you have an intention to use K d d ?
2017-04-13 00:11 iloveyou4ever: 01:12:624 (405,406) - but these two have similar pitch
2017-04-13 00:11 Skylish: sorry which two ?
2017-04-13 00:11 Skylish: our timings are fucked
2017-04-13 00:11 iloveyou4ever: 01:12:624 (405,406) - these two
2017-04-13 00:11 Skylish: *you need to give me two timing points
2017-04-13 00:12 Skylish: 01:12:625 - / 01:12:761 - ?
2017-04-13 00:12 iloveyou4ever: yes these two
2017-04-13 00:12 iloveyou4ever: have similar pitch
2017-04-13 00:12 Skylish: oh weak vocal my boy
2017-04-13 00:12 Skylish: aksdjak
2017-04-13 00:12 Skylish: * weak melody
2017-04-13 00:13 iloveyou4ever: not vocal
2017-04-13 00:13 Skylish: only 1 2 4 are strong
2017-04-13 00:13 Skylish: the 3rd beat is relatively weak in this music
2017-04-13 00:13 Skylish: dkd is fine
2017-04-13 00:13 Skylish: I do not get your point actually
2017-04-13 00:14 Skylish: K d d refers to 01:12:079 - 01:12:351 - 01:12:624 -
2017-04-13 00:14 Skylish: waeruiaow
2017-04-13 00:14 Skylish: fml
2017-04-13 00:14 iloveyou4ever: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7806835
2017-04-13 00:14 Skylish: I forget to see your updated ver
2017-04-13 00:14 Skylish: sorry my bad
2017-04-13 00:14 iloveyou4ever: my current ver is like this
2017-04-13 00:14 Skylish: fuck me
2017-04-13 00:14 iloveyou4ever: I don't update that part tho
2017-04-13 00:16 Skylish: where's your 408 ?_?
2017-04-13 00:17 iloveyou4ever: 01:13:170 - here
2017-04-13 00:17 Skylish: ur photo : https://puu.sh/vhZjN/78a158e850.png
2017-04-13 00:17 iloveyou4ever: 01:14:260 - but I think there are melody after this part
2017-04-13 00:17 iloveyou4ever: 01:13:170 - 408 is here
2017-04-13 00:17 Skylish: oh okay
2017-04-13 00:18 Skylish: 01:14:260 - what do you mean?
2017-04-13 00:19 iloveyou4ever: 01:14:260 - to 01:16:442 -
2017-04-13 00:21 Skylish: urh if I were you: 01:14:260 (415) - https://puu.sh/vhZvu/8ded9b4ac9.png
2017-04-13 00:21 Skylish: just my perspective
2017-04-13 00:21 Skylish: you use a concrete 8 bar 1 Finish pattern
2017-04-13 00:21 Skylish: you can change d/k representing the drum kick per 4 bars I guess
2017-04-13 00:21 Skylish: 01:15:351 - d k d match the PITCH
2017-04-13 00:22 iloveyou4ever: but the problem is that 01:12:079 - I use k d kkd k d kkd patterns
2017-04-13 00:22 iloveyou4ever: n n nnn n n nnn
2017-04-13 00:22 iloveyou4ever: 01:14:260 - but here it's nnn nnn nnn nnn
2017-04-13 00:22 iloveyou4ever: a bit inconsistent
2017-04-13 00:22 Skylish: 01:13:306 -
2017-04-13 00:23 Skylish: how about you add a note here?
2017-04-13 00:23 Skylish: then the whole 8 bars are consistent
2017-04-13 00:23 iloveyou4ever: there is no melody here
2017-04-13 00:23 Skylish: 01:14:397 - same as here
2017-04-13 00:23 Skylish: this is no melody here
2017-04-13 00:23 Skylish: but you can still put NOTES
2017-04-13 00:23 Skylish: arh
2017-04-13 00:24 Skylish: as you like
2017-04-13 00:24 Skylish: you can keep 01:13:306 - empty
2017-04-13 00:24 Skylish: to make it clear:
2017-04-13 00:24 iloveyou4ever: let me reupdate new ver
2017-04-13 00:24 iloveyou4ever: I https://puu.sh/vhZHf.osz
2017-04-13 00:24 Skylish: okay I shut up first
2017-04-13 00:25 iloveyou4ever: sorry...
2017-04-13 00:25 iloveyou4ever: you may check that first
2017-04-13 00:25 iloveyou4ever: I put n n nnn n n nnn
2017-04-13 00:25 iloveyou4ever: the structure is nicer now
2017-04-13 00:26 iloveyou4ever: but some melodies are ignored
2017-04-13 00:26 Skylish: I see what you mean, but you neglect the macro view of the pattern and music
2017-04-13 00:26 Skylish: I continue my words before I shut the fuck up
2017-04-13 00:26 iloveyou4ever: oh ok
2017-04-13 00:26 Skylish: 01:12:079 - / 01:16:442 -
2017-04-13 00:26 Skylish: you use K K
2017-04-13 00:27 iloveyou4ever: yes
2017-04-13 00:27 Skylish: that's good, why good? It shows a stanza (8 bars)
2017-04-13 00:27 iloveyou4ever: yes
2017-04-13 00:27 Skylish: typo
2017-04-13 00:27 Skylish: 4 bars
2017-04-13 00:27 Skylish: actually 5
2017-04-13 00:27 Skylish: but it does not matter I guess
2017-04-13 00:27 Skylish: you have a greater progression later
2017-04-13 00:28 Skylish: progression= 件事發展個程序becomes better and better developed
2017-04-13 00:28 iloveyou4ever: emm yes
2017-04-13 00:28 Skylish: 01:15:351 -
2017-04-13 00:28 iloveyou4ever: I am not that ignorant pls
2017-04-13 00:28 Skylish: obviously there is a progression right here
2017-04-13 00:28 Skylish: K (n) d
2017-04-13 00:28 iloveyou4ever: yes
2017-04-13 00:29 Skylish: you can put a note at 01:15:488 -
2017-04-13 00:29 Skylish: it is fine
2017-04-13 00:29 Skylish: do not worry about consistent
2017-04-13 00:29 Skylish: because it is more impt to consider the coherency right now, as the music becomes stronger
2017-04-13 00:29 Skylish: (and the vocal goes up with the music as well
2017-04-13 00:29 iloveyou4ever: oh yes I get what you mean now
2017-04-13 00:31 Skylish: the current note flow looks great
2017-04-13 00:31 Skylish: I am just a bit struggled of the usage of d/k matching the drum kicks
2017-04-13 00:32 iloveyou4ever: me too
2017-04-13 00:32 Skylish: I will consider the consistency more, by signaturing d/k = drum kicks by bars to bars
2017-04-13 00:32 iloveyou4ever: fuck the melody and drum kick
2017-04-13 00:32 Skylish: you can see my example above
2017-04-13 00:32 Skylish: I consider the drum kicks as well whenever they are after a Finish note
2017-04-13 00:32 Skylish: but nvm
2017-04-13 00:32 Skylish: you've got your style
2017-04-13 00:32 Skylish: and BN fucks me up because they do not notice that how I map
2017-04-13 00:32 Skylish: :(
2017-04-13 00:33 iloveyou4ever: should I follow the pitch or drum kick...
2017-04-13 00:33 Skylish: as you like, again
2017-04-13 00:33 iloveyou4ever: If I follow drum kick,that would be pretty repetitive
2017-04-13 00:33 Skylish: I think the current version is acceptable
2017-04-13 00:33 Skylish: it is not awkward
2017-04-13 00:33 iloveyou4ever: but I follow the melody,it seems that I ignore the macro view of the map
2017-04-13 00:33 Skylish: and the flow goes beautifully
2017-04-13 00:33 Skylish: narh you won
2017-04-13 00:33 Skylish: won't
2017-04-13 00:34 Skylish: you make sure you follow the density flow and the cutting edges of stanzas
2017-04-13 00:34 Skylish: then everything goes well
2017-04-13 00:34 iloveyou4ever: But for this part,the melody is more dominant than drum
2017-04-13 00:34 iloveyou4ever: ...
2017-04-13 00:34 Skylish: then you can go with melody!!!
2017-04-13 00:40 iloveyou4ever: yes the current ver works perfectly
2017-04-13 00:40 iloveyou4ever: thanks for help :D
2017-04-13 00:41 Skylish: give you a rating: 8.5/10
2017-04-13 00:41 Skylish: the map goes very smooth
2017-04-13 00:41 Skylish: nice job
2017-04-13 00:41 iloveyou4ever: 03:27:161 - but here is 240bpm part...
2017-04-13 00:41 iloveyou4ever: and I want notes to be denser :<
2017-04-13 00:41 Skylish: :O
2017-04-13 00:41 Skylish: hell4ever
2017-04-13 00:43 iloveyou4ever: nvm I know how to nerf it...

:D
KamizonoShinobu
hell mapper
frukoyurdakul
Yolo! Nice song choice I gotta say that :^)

[General]

Now, as I see in the description you mentioned "Chromoxx: ???? (WIP)" and I think the Inner Oni already is good so no need to overmap it in the first place. Secondly: I see you used 1.30 SV multiplier in Muzukashii, and I recommend 1.40, for Kantan I recommend 1.20 instead of 1.10.

As Aimod say, the audio preview time is different on Inner Oni compared to Kantan and Muzukashii.

[Inner Oni]

03:27:163 - I recommend turning the kiai off here. Since aimod gives a warning (and I know it still does not go if you do that), the song's chorus ends here.

00:41:808 (173) - How about a kat? The snare sound is pretty prominent.

00:43:990 (185) - ^

01:24:946 (469) - This note is clearly put for variation. But, it is also clear that you are following drums. And from what I can hear, there is a pretty strong snare sound. Making a variation is not good at that point in my opinion, so you can change it simply to kat.

01:27:033 (477,485) - ^

01:35:511 (525) - Finisher? The crash cymbal is loud enough to put one.

01:43:076 (571) - I'd suggest making it kat in order to follow the snare.

01:59:772 - This stream could be improved. The drums are getting lower at 01:59:903 (665,666) - those two, and since the pitches are different, I suggest making it dk, which will result 01:59:772 (663,664,665,666) - these 4 as kkdk. 02:00:555 (675,676,677,678,679,680,681,682,683,684,685,686,687,688,689,690) - For this section, I recommend the variatitons of kkdd. What I mean is, you can either put kkddkkddkkddkkdd or make it various like kkddkdddkkddkddd, which will produce an extremely good flow to the drums. 02:01:598 (691,692,693,694,695,696,697,698,699,700,701,702,703,704,705) - For this one, I suggest kkkkddkkkkddddkkd to follow the drums as well.

That's all for this diff. It got mapped really nice.

[Muzukashii]

01:59:837 - I suggest adding a note here in order to keep the difficulty spread and because of the drum attack. That way you'll have a triplet on every pattern.

02:00:163 (446,447) - Ctrl + g on those, 02:01:989 (460,461) - and those one too.

03:37:788 (294,295) - Hmm, I don't know if this makes it follow hard for muzukashii players, but I suggest a swap between those to in order to follow the drums better.

[Kantan]

01:59:511 (1) - If i remember correctly, long sliders are acceptable on Kantan difficulties. Now, since there is a huge drum attack and if we consider there is a note on every 1/4 snap, I'd suggest changing this one to slider.

Sorry to make only one suggestion on your Kantan difficulty, since I'm not experienced on mapping them.
This mapset looks pretty good to me, good luck on the ranking way! :^)
Topic Starter
iloveyou4ever

frukoyurdakul wrote:

Yolo! Nice song choice I gotta say that :^)
yeah XD
[General]

Now, as I see in the description you mentioned "Chromoxx: ???? (WIP)" and I think the Inner Oni already is good so no need to overmap it in the first place. Secondly: I see you used 1.30 SV multiplier in Muzukashii, and I recommend 1.40, for Kantan I recommend 1.20 instead of 1.10.
I asked Surono but he recommended to keep it as 1.3x,maybe I will leave this first
As Aimod say, the audio preview time is different on Inner Oni compared to Kantan and Muzukashii.
ok
[Inner Oni]

03:27:163 - I recommend turning the kiai off here. Since aimod gives a warning (and I know it still does not go if you do that), the song's chorus ends here.
it'd be inconsistent with first and second kiai,but I'll ask others opinions
00:41:808 (173) - How about a kat? The snare sound is pretty prominent.

00:43:990 (185) - ^
both changed and rework a little bit
01:24:946 (469) - This note is clearly put for variation. But, it is also clear that you are following drums. And from what I can hear, there is a pretty strong snare sound. Making a variation is not good at that point in my opinion, so you can change it simply to kat.

01:27:033 (477,485) - ^
but I think variation plays a more important role here,keep repeating a same pattern for number of times would be boring
01:35:511 (525) - Finisher? The crash cymbal is loud enough to put one.
retained to keep consistency as 00:33:899 -
01:43:076 (571) - I'd suggest making it kat in order to follow the snare.

01:59:772 - This stream could be improved. The drums are getting lower at 01:59:903 (665,666) - those two, and since the pitches are different, I suggest making it dk, which will result 01:59:772 (663,664,665,666) - these 4 as kkdk. 02:00:555 (675,676,677,678,679,680,681,682,683,684,685,686,687,688,689,690) - For this section, I recommend the variatitons of kkdd. What I mean is, you can either put kkddkkddkkddkkdd or make it various like kkddkdddkkddkddd, which will produce an extremely good flow to the drums. 02:01:598 (691,692,693,694,695,696,697,698,699,700,701,702,703,704,705) - For this one, I suggest kkkkddkkkkddddkkd to follow the drums as well.
all accepted!
That's all for this diff. It got mapped really nice.

[Muzukashii]

01:59:837 - I suggest adding a note here in order to keep the difficulty spread and because of the drum attack. That way you'll have a triplet on every pattern.
ok
02:00:163 (446,447) - Ctrl + g on those, 02:01:989 (460,461) - and those one too.
rework this part myself
03:37:788 (294,295) - Hmm, I don't know if this makes it follow hard for muzukashii players, but I suggest a swap between those to in order to follow the drums better.
sure!
[Kantan]

01:59:511 (1) - If i remember correctly, long sliders are acceptable on Kantan difficulties. Now, since there is a huge drum attack and if we consider there is a note on every 1/4 snap, I'd suggest changing this one to slider.
temporarily accepted!
Sorry to make only one suggestion on your Kantan difficulty, since I'm not experienced on mapping them.
This mapset looks pretty good to me, good luck on the ranking way! :^)
Thanks for modding and starss fruko :)
It's a really helpful feedback and mod to me!
Volta
hi, here's the futsuu as requested: http://puu.sh/xlAQD/1ef9c0fe76.rar
you already made kantan so i guess it's fine if it's over 2 star xp
Topic Starter
iloveyou4ever
Updated guest difficulty!
vrnl
placehold for tmrw edit: might be a while not feeling like modding now
JarvisGaming
hai again
from queue
Title should be 'Song of a Small Love', change it if you want
gud song :3
[Kantan]
00:25:172 (5) - k because this note is higher than the last
00:44:808 (25,26,27) - feel like this should be kdK, to follow the pitch, plus it sounds better
01:19:717 (77) - d to follow pitch, or just keep it if its too hard
01:33:424 (93) - k because this note is higher than the last
02:31:859 (50) - d to follow pitch, or just keep it if its too hard
03:25:163 (77) - k to follow pitch
03:38:163 (107) - k to follow pitch, keep if too hard
[Muzu]
00:12:626 (20,21,22,23) - kdkd to fit pitch
00:44:262 (138) - k because it starts with high vocal pitch
01:16:990 (270,271,272) - dkk to fit vocal
02:29:250 (568,569,570) - ^

Everything else is fine
Gl :3
Topic Starter
iloveyou4ever

JarvisGaming YT wrote:

hai again
from queue
Title should be 'Song of a Small Love', change it if you want Song of a Small Love is the English title,but osu requires mappers to fill in Romanised Title unless official website stated as English Title
gud song :3
[Kantan]
00:25:172 (5) - k because this note is higher than the last ok
00:44:808 (25,26,27) - feel like this should be kdK, to follow the pitch, plus it sounds better I map to the drum sound on 00:45:899 - instead of following vocal,thus I think d k D would be better
01:19:717 (77) - d to follow pitch, or just keep it if its too hard too hard I think
01:33:424 (93) - k because this note is higher than the last ok
02:31:859 (50) - d to follow pitch, or just keep it if its too hard keep
03:25:163 (77) - k to follow pitch remap instead
03:38:163 (107) - k to follow pitch, keep if too hard same as above
[Muzu]
00:12:626 (20,21,22,23) - kdkd to fit pitch remap to the pitch instead
00:44:262 (138) - k because it starts with high vocal pitch ok!
01:16:990 (270,271,272) - dkk to fit vocal emm I think kdk is better
02:29:250 (568,569,570) - ^ ^

Everything else is fine
Gl :3
Thanks for modding :)
Arach
Are you available for a M4M? :)
[R]
xD

[Kantan]
00:54:626 - change don, to sync the note in 00:55:717 -
01:01:172 - ^
03:34:913 - move 03:35:413 - to follow the drum
03:38:913 - or 03:39:663 - current pattern feels confused, are follow u the vocal or drum

[Futsuu]
02:00:163 - add note ? stream nya sama kayak di 02:01:598 -
02:02:120 - kdk change dkk or ddk, klo di denger baik baik, suara drum disini rendah
03:37:413 - change kat, suara drumnya tinggi

[Muzukashii]
00:10:717 - change kat, pitch different with kat backward
00:27:626 - kd dkkd change kddk kd to follow the vocal more fit
02:59:413 - change don ? to much dk at this part

[Oni]
00:18:762 - add note, it feels sudden while the drum sound still continuous
01:30:946 - how about adding triplet here
01:23:903 - maybe invert kd to give it a variety
01:52:076 - add don ? it has a bit drum stream
02:46:663 - change kat, to follow the guitar swing

[Inner Oni]
00:18:762 - make ddkkkd d k d k , start 00:19:172 - it feels like d d k d k will more fit

maybe just that from me
good luck
Volta

[R] wrote:

xD

[Futsuu]
02:00:163 - add note ? stream nya sama kayak di 02:01:598 - biar ada peningkatan tensi, enakan tetep kayak gini. cocok sama melodynya juga
02:02:120 - kdk change dkk or ddk, klo di denger baik baik, suara drum disini rendah kdk juga gak masalah buat invert dari 01:57:946 (6,7,8) -
03:37:413 - change kat, suara drumnya tinggi konsisten sama 03:35:663 - dan 03:38:163 - dan ada kick nya juga

maybe just that from me
good luck
thanks for the mod~
Topic Starter
iloveyou4ever

[R] wrote:

xD

[Kantan]
00:54:626 - change don, to sync the note in 00:55:717 -
01:01:172 - ^ emm want to emphasize the high-pitched vocals by putting 3k here
03:34:913 - move 03:35:413 - to follow the drum following vocal here :l
03:38:913 - or 03:39:663 - current pattern feels confused, are follow u the vocal or drum changed to kd anyways XD

[Muzukashii]
00:10:717 - change kat, pitch different with kat backward
it's a k already o.o
00:27:626 - kd dkkd change kddk kd to follow the vocal more fit change to kd k kd
02:59:413 - change don ? to much dk at this part I do agree,and I'll reconsider about this part

[Inner Oni]
00:18:762 - make ddkkkd d k d k , start 00:19:172 - it feels like d d k d k will more fit yes

maybe just that from me
good luck
Thanks for modding :)
Ladies Night
SECTOR-712
NM request / osu!taiko

general
  1. add "MONGOL800" and "Message" in tags for the original artist/album from where the cover is based on.
  2. "Sakurai" and "Kimura" for extra tags if ya want, since the pair make up Omoi.
  3. might as well turn off widescreen support in volta and kin's difficulties to keep consistent for your mapset, doesn't affect anything but feel free to change it.
  4. volta's futsuu hp could be upped to 7 as a small suggestion, though it's fine as it is since it's supposed to be the same hp as muzukashii like the oni/inner oni difficulties i'm guessing.
  5. here's a link for a higher res pic of the current bg you're using. since miku looks squished in the current res you're using. here's the original, if you want to crop it yourself.
kantan
  1. 00:20:808 - don't really need the inherited timing point here since the one before at 00:18:490 does the job.
  2. 00:21:899 / 00:38:262 - between these two parts, i do feel you could add more notes just to make it more interesting despite it being a kantan, considering volta's futsuu is much more active in this section and could let people get used to the kiai sections in having more note density.
  3. 01:00:626 (47) - think this should be a don, considering it's pretty similar to 00:51:353 (33,34,35) in how it sounds.
  4. 01:07:172 (57) - feels more suited as a kat for the drums in the background here, would allow you switch the finisher at 01:07:717 (58) to a don finisher to keep consistency with 00:50:262 (32) and 00:58:990 (45) unless, you wanted more variety on the finishers like you did with 01:12:081 (64) and etc., appears in the other kiai section as well.
  5. 01:30:163 - don't think you need this inherited timing point here.
  6. 02:39:163 - unneeded inherited timing point here as well, should check the other difficulties just in case.
volta's futsuu
  1. 00:02:262 (1) - can be a finisher, but a regular note is just as fine.
  2. 00:20:808 (32) - feel like this should be a finisher for that cymbal crash like you did earlier at 00:10:990 (10)
  3. 00:40:444 (11,12,13,14,15) - would recommend k,d,d,k,k for this pattern instead, captures the vocals better.
  4. 00:57:353 (20) - change to kat, pitch is still rather high here.
  5. 01:07:717 (28) - finisher for this note, still retains the same impact as 00:50:262 (1)
  6. 01:15:899 (48) - it's a bit strange this note is a don, considering you been emphasizing the vocals with kat like you did at 01:07:172 (26) and 01:11:535 (37)
muzukashii
  1. 01:41:250 (350) - would switch this to a kat, for that higher pitch to contrast the earlier note at 01:40:729 (349)
  2. solid patterning for muzu.
kin's oni
  1. 00:11:262 (21,22) - would ctrl+g this, just for the vocals honestly.
  2. 00:18:762 - a bit weird to have this rhythm gap here, adding a don here would keep the flow and transition nicely for the next part of the song.
  3. 01:04:240 - adding a don here for that 1/4 triple, kinda plays well and fits the vocal nicely.
  4. 02:02:185 (659) - i think deleting this note or simplifying the pattern would be fine, since the section here is pretty intense as it is already.
  5. 03:35:600 - having a don here for the 1/4 triple would be a nice lead up to the d,d,d,d,k pattern.
inner oni
  1. 00:12:081 (18) - i mean you could make every large white tick for this part here a kat for the vocalist, but what you have already is okay too. also applies to 01:53:250 (633) just in the opposite way.
  2. 00:41:535 (174) - making this a kat feels kinda nice to play for the pattern.
  3. 02:00:620 (680) - think the snare here needs to be a kat for the emphasis or change it up so it's a lot more impactful, feel free to experiment.
small mod for small brain, good luck with the mapset.
Topic Starter
iloveyou4ever

Sansheng wrote:

SECTOR-712
NM request / osu!taiko

general
  1. add "MONGOL800" and "Message" in tags for the original artist/album from where the cover is based on. done
  2. "Sakurai" and "Kimura" for extra tags if ya want, since the pair make up Omoi. ok
  3. might as well turn off widescreen support in volta and kin's difficulties to keep consistent for your mapset, doesn't affect anything but feel free to change it. alright
  4. volta's futsuu hp could be upped to 7 as a small suggestion, though it's fine as it is since it's supposed to be the same hp as muzukashii like the oni/inner oni difficulties i'm guessing. Leaving to him
  5. here's a link for a higher res pic of the current bg you're using. since miku looks squished in the current res you're using. here's the original, if you want to crop it yourself. idk is it my illusion or sth...but it seems the current version is clearer than the one you linked...I guess I will keep it first
kantan
  1. 00:20:808 - don't really need the inherited timing point here since the one before at 00:18:490 does the job. fixed
  2. 00:21:899 / 00:38:262 - between these two parts, i do feel you could add more notes just to make it more interesting despite it being a kantan, considering volta's futsuu is much more active in this section and could let people get used to the kiai sections in having more note density. added on places like 00:24:626 - and 00:33:353 -
  3. 01:00:626 (47) - think this should be a don, considering it's pretty similar to 00:51:353 (33,34,35) in how it sounds. trying to give variation here, but I'll leave it first
  4. 01:07:172 (57) - feels more suited as a kat for the drums in the background here, would allow you switch the finisher at 01:07:717 (58) to a don finisher to keep consistency with 00:50:262 (32) and 00:58:990 (45) unless, you wanted more variety on the finishers like you did with 01:12:081 (64) and etc., appears in the other kiai section as well. yep make sense, changed!
  5. 01:30:163 - don't think you need this inherited timing point here. done
  6. 02:39:163 - unneeded inherited timing point here as well, should check the other difficulties just in case. only Kantan got this problem, fixed
muzukashii
  1. 01:41:250 (350) - would switch this to a kat, for that higher pitch to contrast the earlier note at 01:40:729 (349) nice catch! changed
  2. solid patterning for muzu. tyyyy
inner oni
  1. 00:12:081 (18) - i mean you could make every large white tick for this part here a kat for the vocalist, but what you have already is okay too. also applies to 01:53:250 (633) just in the opposite way. hmm I guess I would keep it as I focus on drum sound here and to emphasize 00:16:444 - this part
  2. 00:41:535 (174) - making this a kat feels kinda nice to play for the pattern. was focusing on drum sound here and since it's a downbeat, I guess d works well here
  3. 02:00:620 (680) - think the snare here needs to be a kat for the emphasis or change it up so it's a lot more impactful, feel free to experiment. I'll keep this first, since i am thinking whether to remap this stream or not, but still thanks for your idea!
small mod for small brain, good luck with the mapset.
Thanks for mod :) really appreciating you're checking v1 maps!
Topic Starter
iloveyou4ever
@everyone
Adjusted offset by +1 to every diffs
also reduced Inner Oni's hp to 6
GDers Modders Please pay attention thanks!
Smallwu

H Y P E
Topic Starter
iloveyou4ever

Smallwu wrote:


H Y P E


HYPEEEEE
Raytoly

Smallwu wrote:


H Y P E
hello I'm here for your NM request
[General]
add "Kin" "Volta" in tags to be honor for them and it's rule to added GDer's names

[Inner Oni]

:arrow: 00:20:809 ~ 00:50:263 - consider adding more notes around here by add some triplets such 00:21:763 - 00:22:923 - and like here 00:24:832 -
if you added them it's will be more balance of difficulty and look harder than kin's oni because around here is same his diffi.as 00:20:809 ~ 00:50:263 have a little triplats in beginning and softer than kiai and 00:50:263 - is stronger than before with more notes triplets,5-plets,7-plets or longer. so it's make sense to add some triplets at 00:20:809
:arrow: :?: 01:07:718 - you should buff them because the part is just a bit softer than 00:50:263 ~ 01:06:627 -by add a bit triplets but not too much . and also 01:16:445 I think it's too much notes probably because length of notes is note always same and sound is same as 01:07:718 but just a bit stonger with miku's vocal. you can make it same as 03:27:164 - at all or a bit easier
:arrow: 01:35:512 (529) - add finisher? the point is strong sound and different from 01:43:860 (581)
:arrow: 01:46:338 (595,596,597) and 01:46:990 (600,601,602,603,604) - they aren't 1/4 but it's 1/2.you just change back to 1/2 and follow what I said in 01:31:338 and you can make 01:46:208 - a bit harder by triplats
:arrow: 01:59:773 (667,668,669,670,671,672,673,674,675,676,677,678,679,680,681,682,683,684,685,686,687,688,689,690,691,692,693,694,695,696,697,698,699,700,701,702,703,704,705,706,707,708,709) - to follow drum sound how about change to like this? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/10796262
:arrow: 02:20:382 - same as 01:07:718

this diffi is look well,spread and consistent is seem good :)

[Kin's Oni]

:arrow: 01:35:512 (509) - add finisher to focus strong sound?
:arrow: 02:33:947 (888) - same^
:arrow: 02:37:795 (2) - move to 02:37:860 sound isn't in blue trick
:arrow: 03:01:789 - how about change to ddkkd k? I think use harder plets before starting new loop is should be great and fit the song and it's last kiai
:arrow: 03:13:664 - consider adding more notes here to make it consistent 03:11:664 (188,189,190,191,192,193,194,195,196,197,198,199,200,201,202) and it's feel not softer sound is always strong in kiai ,example https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/10796564
:arrow: 03:21:664 - same as 03:13:664

oh it's well diffi

[Muzukashii]

:arrow: 00:28:036 - change to kkdk? still can follow vocal and guitar.I think a bit hard pattern is should be nice at before started new loop 00:29:536 .same as 00:36:354 (104,105,106,107,108,109)
:arrow: 01:16:718 (269,270,271,272,273,274,275,276,277,278,279,280,281,282,283,284,285,286) - it's too hard .if you see ,it's harder than 00:50:263 - and you need to consider from top diffi.from top diffi from 00:50:263 -is hardest but why for muzu is 01:16:445 ? you should be balance of diffi is same
:arrow: 02:28:730 - same as first kiai
:arrow: 03:35:414 (277,278,279,280,281,282,283,284,285,286,287,288,289,290,291,292,293,294,295,296,297) -actually same but it's fine because it's just almost harder than 02:55:164 but it's look easier

great mapper for muzu,it's very well even spread and break 8-)

[Volta's Futsuu]

omg it's very well with enough 2/1 break and consistent this diffi is very well I don't have anything to say except HP
I guess with Sansheng
kantan=8
futsuu=6
muzu=6
should chenge hp in volta's diffi to 7 or change kantan to 7

[Kantan]

:arrow: 00:57:627 - consider add k here to make first kiai have a little triplets.I saw kiais and you're trying to make it from easy->harder but 01:18:627 (77,78,79,80,81,82,83,84) -make me feel weird because you use 1/1 and also if you added a little triplets.another kiai is harder anyway so don't worry
:arrow: 01:06:354 - same but use d^

it's well diffi too with consistent patterns and fit the song and hardest at last kiai

this map is play fun,hope my mod is helpful
goodluck with rank! I love you a lot
DeletedUser_1981781
Mod:

All diffs:
SPOILER
00:20:263 - It looks weird that this hihat isn't higlighted... Add k in all diffs.
01:22:445 - same as above

(If you choose not to put them, then delete those in Kin's Oni)


Kin's Oni
SPOILER
00:19:991 - Delete this note since there's no sound in that place.

00:23:809 - Change to k to highlight the snare sound.


00:23:945 - delete, no sound, also inconsistent with all other diffs.
00:25:309 - delete, no sound, also inconsistent with all other diffs.

00:36:900 - add a note here, there's snare sound, leaving it empty would be inconsistent with the other diffs. I suggest adding a k, then changing next k for d.

01:01:309 - ctrl+g this k and next d to highlight snare sound.

01:03:082 - add a note here, there's snare sound, leaving it empty would be inconsistent with the other diffs.

01:07:036 - changing this [d kkddk] into [ddkkd k] would match the drum fill better.


01:59:643 - move this [kkddk] 1/2 later... That means you have to delete the next d. There's no sound where you placed these 2 k, sound, leave this space empty until 01:59:773.

03:34:164 - change this [ddkdkkd] to [ddkkddk] to match the snare/drum play in that part. If you want a less simpler pattern then I'd suggest [kdkkddk].
Tyistiana
COLA!!! Kora!!!
I like this song a lot!

[ Overall]
  1. Yes, someone already mentioned about HP setting.
    I would like you to change HP on Kantan to 7. Since this is a long music. HP8 could kill the beginner player with that high note count.

  2. This is a high BPM music. So it is ok to raise Kin's Oni OD to 6 and Inner Oni OD to 7.


  3. At some section. Kin's Oni has a greater density than Inner Oni. Maybe it is not nice to see Oni become more difficult than Inner Oni. Even at some section.


    Timestamp for this issue.
    00:20:809 - 00:29:536 section. (Only a little bit, It would be nice if you can manage this section to make Inner Oni looks harder than Oni.)
    01:07:718 - 01:16:445 section. (This section Oni have a greater amount of notes than Inner Oni noticeably.)
I will have a check again when you've replied me.
Good luck~ :)
Topic Starter
iloveyou4ever

Rhytoly wrote:

Smallwu wrote:


H Y P E
hello I'm here for your NM request
[General]
add "Kin" "Volta" in tags to be honor for them and it's rule to added GDer's names done

I will reply to Inner Oni later

[Muzukashii]

:arrow: 00:28:036 - change to kkdk? still can follow vocal and guitar.I think a bit hard pattern is should be nice at before started new loop 00:29:536 .same as 00:36:354 (104,105,106,107,108,109) ok
:arrow: 01:16:718 (269,270,271,272,273,274,275,276,277,278,279,280,281,282,283,284,285,286) - it's too hard .if you see ,it's harder than 00:50:263 - and you need to consider from top diffi.from top diffi from 00:50:263 -is hardest but why for muzu is 01:16:445 ? you should be balance of diffi is same good point! will leave this and come up with solution later
:arrow: 02:28:730 - same as first kiai ^
:arrow: 03:35:414 (277,278,279,280,281,282,283,284,285,286,287,288,289,290,291,292,293,294,295,296,297) -actually same but it's fine because it's just almost harder than 02:55:164 but it's look easier yeah I guess it's fine

great mapper for muzu,it's very well even spread and break 8-)

[Kantan]

:arrow: 00:57:627 - consider add k here to make first kiai have a little triplets.I saw kiais and you're trying to make it from easy->harder but 01:18:627 (77,78,79,80,81,82,83,84) -make me feel weird because you use 1/1 and also if you added a little triplets.another kiai is harder anyway so don't worry
:arrow: 01:06:354 - same but use d^ the most intense part among kiai time is 01:16:445 - , so I put kk kk and one triplet there yeah since it's most intense. But I don't think I should put note at places you suggest as it feels like ''too much'' for just the beginning of the kiai

it's well diffi too with consistent patterns and fit the song and hardest at last kiai

this map is play fun,hope my mod is helpful
goodluck with rank! I love you a lot

ARGENTINE DREAM wrote:

Mod:

All diffs:
SPOILER
00:20:263 - It looks weird that this hihat isn't higlighted... Add k in all diffs.
emm I personally think the hihat need not be highlighted, but I will leave it to GDers
01:22:445 - same as above ^

Tyistiana wrote:

COLA!!! Kora!!!
I like this song a lot! same XD

[ Overall]
  1. Yes, someone already mentioned about HP setting. ok
    I would like you to change HP on Kantan to 7. Since this is a long music. HP8 could kill the beginner player with that high note count.

  2. This is a high BPM music. So it is ok to raise Kin's Oni OD to 6 and Inner Oni OD to 7. hmm I will raise mine to od6.3 and leave kin's one to him


  3. At some section. Kin's Oni has a greater density than Inner Oni. Maybe it is not nice to see Oni become more difficult than Inner Oni. Even at some section.


    Timestamp for this issue.
    00:20:809 - 00:29:536 section. (Only a little bit, It would be nice if you can manage this section to make Inner Oni looks harder than Oni.)
    01:07:718 - 01:16:445 section. (This section Oni have a greater amount of notes than Inner Oni noticeably.) wil reply later
I will have a check again when you've replied me.
Good luck~ :)
Thanks for modding :)
Volta

Sansheng wrote:

SECTOR-712
NM request / osu!taiko
  1. 00:02:262 (1) - can be a finisher, but a regular note is just as fine. applied
  2. 00:20:808 (32) - feel like this should be a finisher for that cymbal crash like you did earlier at 00:10:990 (10) ^
  3. 00:40:444 (11,12,13,14,15) - would recommend k,d,d,k,k for this pattern instead, captures the vocals better. changed to dkkdk instead
  4. 00:57:353 (20) - change to kat, pitch is still rather high here. considering the pitch decrease from (18), i think d is also fine
  5. 01:07:717 (28) - finisher for this note, still retains the same impact as 00:50:262 (1) fixed
  6. 01:15:899 (48) - it's a bit strange this note is a don, considering you been emphasizing the vocals with kat like you did at 01:07:172 (26) and 01:11:535 (37) i want to highlight the raised pitch between 01:15:900 (48,50) - at this point, and for variety sake
small mod for small brain, good luck with the mapset.

ARGENTINE DREAM wrote:

Mod:

All diffs:
SPOILER
00:20:263 - It looks weird that this hihat isn't higlighted... Add k in all diffs.
01:22:445 - same as above
different mapper might have different perspective, i personally would like to give a rest moment at those point.

(If you choose not to put them, then delete those in Kin's Oni)
thanks for the mods~

update
osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: audio.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 49717
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Normal
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 1
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 2262,10990,20808,38262,50262,108816,175413,191288,207163,222163
DistanceSpacing: 1
BeatDivisor: 2
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 0.9999999

[Metadata]
Title:Chiisana Koi no Uta (Synth Rock Cover)
TitleUnicode:小さな恋のうた (Synth Rock Cover)
Artist:Omoi
ArtistUnicode:Omoi
Creator:iloveyou4ever
Version:Volta's Futsuu
Source:
Tags:初音ミク Hatsune Miku Vocaloid Sakurai Kimura MONGOL800 Message song of a small love Volta Kin
BeatmapID:1399856
BeatmapSetID:598573

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:6.5
CircleSize:2
OverallDifficulty:4
ApproachRate:5
SliderMultiplier:1.2
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"BG.jpg",0,-15
//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples

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Kin
because i'm lazy, no reply=fixed

[R] wrote:

[Oni]
00:18:762 - add note, it feels sudden while the drum sound still continuous
01:30:946 - how about adding triplet here
01:23:903 - maybe invert kd to give it a variety that'd just look like an inconsistency
01:52:076 - add don ? it has a bit drum stream
02:46:663 - change kat, to follow the guitar swing

Sansheng wrote:

kin's oni
  1. 00:11:262 (21,22) - would ctrl+g this, just for the vocals honestly. 00:11:263 (21) - vocal is actually higher pitched here
  2. 00:18:762 - a bit weird to have this rhythm gap here, adding a don here would keep the flow and transition nicely for the next part of the song.
  3. 01:04:240 - adding a don here for that 1/4 triple, kinda plays well and fits the vocal nicely. i'm trying to be careful about spread w ith muzu
  4. 02:02:185 (659) - i think deleting this note or simplifying the pattern would be fine, since the section here is pretty intense as it is already. considering how inner is done i'd say its ok
  5. 03:35:600 - having a don here for the 1/4 triple would be a nice lead up to the d,d,d,d,k pattern.
(I'm still not done yet, gotta have to check Rhytoly, ARGENTINE DREAM & Tyistiana's mod/check)
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