1. Voice of Shouko (4.33 stars, 967 notes)

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YinyinMeiDaiZi wrote:

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_MiaoFUuU_ wrote:

嘻嘻，弱弱的问一下这是要和谁collab啊

1. 00:12:288 (2,3) - just a small thing but would you mind moving this to 312|276 for blanket purpose with 00:11:740 (1) -
2. 00:13:203 (5) - 1/2 reverse isn't fit nicely when you mapped the 1/4 part on 00:12:288 (2) - or just make 00:11:740 (1) - 1/2 reverse as well lul
3. 00:49:422 (5,6) - 01:06:983 (4,5) - convert to slider is more natural to play in calm section imo
4. 00:55:276 (6) - pls dont stack to emphasize the 00:55:642 (1) - something same with 01:00:764 (4,5,1) - would work i guess
5. 02:02:227 (4,5,6,7) - woah man this jump is way too spooky, since you used 1/2 rhythm before with small spacing, consider to nerf this jump as well
6. 04:07:166 (3,1) - there's a 1/8 sound so consider to make this as triples
7. 04:23:447 (1,2,3,4) - w
8. 04:29:300 (1,2) - maybe overmap, also why u didn't used this earlier (1st kiai) lul
9. 04:51:252 (5,6) - maybe overmap too
10. 05:17:593 (1,2) - idk why u hold back to 1/2 again from 1/4 spams on 05:14:666 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - , the strong vocals is still there and ur kiai isn't ended yet so ye spam more
11. also you can just boost your spacings on 1/2 rhythm patterns to less confusing on your rhythm switch like on 02:49:788 (1,2,3,4) - 03:16:130 (1,2,3,4) - etc

Akitoshi wrote:

1. 00:12:288 (2,3) - just a small thing but would you mind moving this to 312|276 for blanket purpose with 00:11:740 (1) - fixed
2. 00:13:203 (5) - 1/2 reverse isn't fit nicely when you mapped the 1/4 part on 00:12:288 (2) - or just make 00:11:740 (1) - 1/2 reverse as well lulI think this fit is okay D:
3. 00:49:422 (5,6) - 01:06:983 (4,5) - convert to slider is more natural to play in calm section imo fix
4. 00:55:276 (6) - pls dont stack to emphasize the 00:55:642 (1) - something same with 01:00:764 (4,5,1) - would work i guessokay
5. 02:02:227 (4,5,6,7) - woah man this jump is way too spooky, since you used 1/2 rhythm before with small spacing, consider to nerf this jump as wellnerfed
6. 04:07:166 (3,1) - there's a 1/8 sound so consider to make this as triplesno:D...
7. 04:23:447 (1,2,3,4) - ww
8. 04:29:300 (1,2) - maybe overmap, also why u didn't used this earlier (1st kiai) lul remap
9. 04:51:252 (5,6) - maybe overmap too fixed
10. 05:17:593 (1,2) - idk why u hold back to 1/2 again from 1/4 spams on 05:14:666 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - , the strong vocals is still there and ur kiai isn't ended yet so ye spam more I think 1/2 slider is just for finish the end
11. also you can just boost your spacings on 1/2 rhythm patterns to less confusing on your rhythm switch like on 02:49:788 (1,2,3,4) - 03:16:130 (1,2,3,4) - etcw..

kk gl

Wikozo wrote:

From my modding queues M4M.

My Voice
00:31:496 (1) - removewhy...this is very important
02:02:593 (5) - get this circle next to the slider that was beforefixed
03:48:142 (7) - removethis is very important too
03:55:459 (4) - ^^
Bonus = This diff name is "My Voicce". Should be "My Voice"what the fuck am I doing xddd

~Wikozo

Dyl-Byl wrote:

great manga. finished it.

cried

CucumberCuc wrote:

Hi :3
M4M mod

[My Voice]
01:43:569 (2) You can move the circle a little closer to the next sliderfixed
02:34:422 (2) move the circle a little closer to the previous sliderno
03:29:118 (4) Do it in the center of the previous and next circlesfixed
05:20:154 (2) move the circle a little closer to the next sliderfixed
05:36:618 (1,3) you can add Whistle soundno
05:39:544 (1,3) ^no
05:42:471 (1,3,5,7) ^no


Nice song

[Jenn] wrote:

• My Voice- lame testplay i fucked up at end

1. 00:45:398 (3,4,5,6) - 我认为你把1-2-3-4便成1-3-2-4（像这打的跟舒服間距會變太大，而且我覺得這樣怪怪的ww
2. 00:53:813 (3) - 红点放在滑条中间是不是好看一点不用吧，這樣也不錯
3. 01:10:276 (1,2) - 也可以试试^
4. 02:12:837 - 应该放点东西， 有一点空不太舒服 （但是没声呃）因為沒聲音就不放了
5. 02:14:300 - 一样^
6. 02:15:764 - 也是^
7. 02:33:325 (3) - 自己觉得滑条s 形装不太好看耶稍改一下
8. 04:29:300 (1,2) - 四分钟里都没1/8实在放有一点太突然了，我的replay里我好像也没打到依照歌曲做的，實在沒辦法qq
9. 04:51:069 (3,4,5) - 把音调到50听，不大对劲不了
10. 05:01:496 (1,2) - 好像有.001 的没有overlap可不可以fix一夏 修了
11. 05:16:130 (1,2,3,4) - 方形不太好看會嗎xd
12. 05:20:520 (3,4) - 歌慢下了w好看一点，也reflect歌稍慢下来的几秒
13. 05:51:343 - ♥滑条在这里结束先保留因為我不太確定是不是這樣，等多一點mod再看看

Ametrin wrote:

M4M from my q
my map: https://osu.ppy.sh/s/568305

你还投什么q啊直接游戏里喊一句或pm啥的这摸不就给你了(

mod

00:20:154 (5) - 感觉这横的太直接了 可以考虑和00:18:691 (3,4) - 摆个对称
00:21:527 (2,3) - ctrl+g
00:51:252 (3) - 向上一点 到205|207
01:07:349 (1) - 高了 和 01:06:983 (4) - 组合起来不好看 到312|285
01:29:849 (4) - 有点远 ctrl+g
02:20:154 (6) - 3、4不一样高5、6就别一样高啦 下来点
02:33:325 (3) - 中间加红点干啥
02:34:788 (3) - 这个音弱 别放这么远 205|170差不多
03:02:959 (3) - 太高 410|115
03:19:057 (1) - ctrl+g 强调后面2
03:21:252 (1,2,3,1) - 这个空拍有点难读 2放左边3叠1上把
03:53:996 (8) - 这位置有点尴尬 干脆再右边点 306|31
04:08:813 (1) - 这里之后音乐变的比以前激烈了一点 感觉你还是在用前面的节奏在做 空的太多了 以及音效大声一点
04:24:179 (2) - 不i好看 前面直的部分也往下扭吧
05:06:618 (7) - NC
05:13:203 (1,2) - 这里节奏下复杂点 后面连续1/4跳感觉太突兀了
05:41:740 (1,2) - 怎么突然这么远

太好听了

mod after remap

General
stack leniency不能低於0.3啊 會被搞事的
全圖的節奏基本沒變，塞滿1/3滑條……倒不是不可以，只是感覺有些單調，連長滑條都沒幾個。曲子是1/6不代表你不能放1/4啊……合曲就行。
各個part的區別基本只有SV，滑條也基本沒有新奇的排列，就順著flow轉啊轉突然換個方向然後繼續轉……玩到後面很無聊啊
建議看看Lan Wings那張宵暗花火
總而言之，以你放滑條的水平基本不會出問題……然後這圖 全是四個滑條或者三滑條帶二連 我摸個什麼勁=_=

mod
沒啥好摸的 水幾個
00:30:651 (3) - ctrl+g体现下音乐 這裡音弱這樣會太遠
01:58:212 (4) - 改成兩個note 這樣結尾就能體現vocalk
02:30:041 (3,4) - 太近了，體現不出1/2k
03:21:627 (5,1) - 這個距離不合理……倒不是容易讀錯，但是確實近了。不如疊上，或者ctrl+g把flow反過來k
03:24:188 (3) - 說實話我不太喜歡這種滑條……看著有點笨（個人意見）呃...
03:42:480 (1,2,3,4) - 雖說是為了stack變整潔，但不放正中間強迫症很難受(x強迫正+1
03:53:639 (4,5) - ctrl+g，不然連續縱跳後接到03:54:188 (1) - 還向下太詭異了這還行
04:42:480 (1,2) - 包好k

美麗 GL

Shishou wrote:

hi
From my mod q
m4m

01:10:651 (2,3) - fix blanketk

01:17:968 (2,3) - ^k

00:19:797 (3,1,2) - ^wtf..

01:49:066 (3,4) - ^k

02:05:895 (7) - your missing a note hereNo missing a note it's blank

02:26:017 (4,1) - fix blanketummm I blanket here

02:49:797 (1,2) - ^^

03:02:602 (4) - Use ds. this slider is too far from the previous noteIt's no far

03:04:797 (2) - ctrl+g?nope

03:25:285 (2) - fix blanketk

02:57:114 (1) - drum hit clap?will add after there is very weird

02:57:846 (3) - ^^

03:49:066 (3) - put this a little lower like x443 y237 to make the flow better I think this follow is fine

03:53:090 (2,3) - put this a little lower nope

04:30:041 (4) - finish?nope

05:01:870 (2) - move this a little to the rightnope

05:27:846 (1,2) - fix blanketk

the rhythm is repetitive I guess. Hear the song I guess.xD
that's all good luck

• [Shouko's Voice]

1. 00:26:749 (3) - 這可以換掉嗎 這很醜..
2. 00:30:636 (3,5) - 這樣snapping比較對 https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8392806, 不會是1/6, 太晚了
3. 01:36:627 (1) - 不如stack八
4. 02:05:895 - undermapped, 加個note
5. 02:56:931 (6,1) - 這會跟02:56:261 (3,4) - 搞混, 我建議把02:56:931 (6,1) - 分開
6. 04:14:188 (6,7) - 建議:https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8392855, 和這部分consistent
7. 04:54:919 (4) - 換成1/3滑條來跟vocal

SnowNiNo_ wrote:

M4M

• [Shouko's Voice]

1. 00:26:749 (3) - 這可以換掉嗎 這很醜..k
2. 00:30:636 (3,5) - 這樣snapping比較對 https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8392806, 不會是1/6, 太晚了 你怎聽ㄉ==
3. 01:36:627 (1) - 不如stack八好八
4. 02:05:895 - undermapped, 加個notek
5. 02:56:931 (6,1) - 這會跟02:56:261 (3,4) - 搞混, 我建議把02:56:931 (6,1) - 分開k
6. 04:14:188 (6,7) - 建議:https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8392855, 和這部分consistentk
7. 04:54:919 (4) - 換成1/3滑條來跟vocalk

如果我bn考成功的話就來找我要泡ㄅ 認真!!??

346870,512.820512820513,4,2,9,100,1,0
348408,-260.89225150013,4,2,1,5,0,0

Gaia wrote:

[general]
會被dmca喔靠北阿不就完ㄌ
https://gist.github.com/peppy/6112759fa ... aeedcf86fa

tags: koe no katachi感謝

個人感覺有些地方不像是1/3

能點的東西不能靜音, 是unrankable. 00:02:267 - 00:08:582 - 05:48:456 -我第一次知道OAO fix
[a]
00:15:773 (8) - 太近, 跟 00:12:297 (2,3,4) - 00:16:139 (1,1) - 比k
00:18:944 (5) - 沒音吧仔細聽有ㄅ
00:41:017 (1,2,3,4) - 不順怎麼不順
00:42:480 (1,2,3,4,1) - spacingk
00:56:017 (2,3,4) - 複製?k
00:59:309 (3) - ^ 4k
01:01:383 - 通常你都有圈這卻沒 雖然我覺得應該沒音但因該要一致呃好
01:04:431 (1,2,3,4) - 你的滑條都不怎麼固體 (? ) 試試看這樣, 複製一下 又流的順 https://tsun.s-ul.eu/lNT0VxTn 01:05:773 (5,1,2,3) - 也有點一樣我覺得現狀不錯的
01:07:358 (1,2,3) - ^ (1,2)的重點就是疊嘛 但(3,4)卻完全不同所以就感覺不一致k
01:09:553 (3) - https://tsun.s-ul.eu/YQwYalH4k

其他這種東西就不說了 圖剩下好像還有一樣的樣子 , 尤其像01:36:627 (1,2,3) - 就完全看不出來你想表達什麼k
02:23:456 (1) - soft finishk
02:26:383 (1) - 不順k
02:30:285 (4) - 這1/3節奏很突然 , 把spacing調好吧 (1,2)是1/6卻擺得比這1/3的還遠k
02:34:066 (1) - 也建議擺遠一點k
02:46:870 (1) - finish, (02:46:139 (3) - 也可以 但看你)k
02:56:749 (5,6) - 突然改polarity很不好, 沒有人會知道這是1/4的. 02:57:480 (2) - 跟這用一樣1/4調吧k
03:43:212 (3) - finishk
03:44:675 (1,2,3) - 複製 03:43:944 (1,2) - 然後 ctrl+h // (1,2), (2,3) 長得一樣k
03:57:114 (1) - 04:02:968 (1) - finishk
04:21:261 (3) - ctrl+g , (4) 也要ㄟ好
04:24:188 (3) - 太近k
04:26:383 (1) - ^^^^^^k
04:31:505 (1) - 藍點有鼓k
05:18:334 (2,1) - 太 近k
05:19:066 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 偷懶ㄇ絕對沒有XD這裡性質跟前面一樣，就弄這樣ㄌ
05:36:627 (1) - 太小聲 至少10-15% 吧k
05:48:456 (1) - wrong snap. 用這個

346870,512.820512820513,4,2,9,100,1,0
348408,-260.89225150013,4,2,1,5,0,0

幫大忙阿

同樣ㄉ問題就不囉嗦了 不然會煩死你
加油瞜

DarioTD wrote:

I want this map ranked but I wonder if you do more maps

Garden wrote:

Unused hitsounds:
soft-hitfinish9.wav
soft-sliderslide10.wav

00:13:212 (5,7) - 05:20:529 (5,7) - 可以考虑nc，一串combo有点长ok，但00:14:675 (1) - 可以不用吧?
00:40:651 (4) - 00:46:505 (4) - 02:20:164 (4) - 02:26:017 (4) - etc. 感觉换成圈更合曲，vocal和前面那个滑条跟到的音都停住了
00:42:114 (4) - stack到 00:40:651 (4) - 头？
00:55:651 - 01:19:066 - 02:33:334 - 02:35:163 - 02:58:578 - 03:45:407 - 04:07:358 (1) - 04:20:529 - 04:26:383 - 04:51:992 - 05:07:358 - 05:30:041 - 05:30:773 - finish?
01:23:090 (4) - 这里overlap还碰到了前面的滑条显得不太整洁，可以试试和 01:22:724 (3) - blanket
02:04:066 (4) - 03:21:261 (3) - 可以nc表示忽然切换到1/4节奏
02:45:285 (6) - 02:55:529 (6) - 03:08:700 (5) - etc. 可以加上clap之类的音效?
05:16:139 - 05:16:870 - 05:17:602 - 05:35:163 (1,2,3,4) - 个人会考虑额外加finish的地方，感觉效果挺好沒位置放音效了ww
沒回覆的都改了
有些地方感觉就不是1/6如 03:14:553 (5) - 不过出现得比较随机.... 头疼
以及最后一段piano的timing明显off，音频设备有点小问题没法仔细帮你check，你自己再调整下吧
好我會再調整
主要上面这两点搞好然后可以找我recheck，最近比较懒抱歉拖了挺久

Garden wrote:

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_MiaoFUuU_ wrote:

恭喜，你头像吓到我了。

Hey lululu123 wrote:

hahaha

Ametrin wrote:

坐等起飞

Regraz wrote:

Continue my mod. Do not kudosu this post.

[General]
Stack Leniency should be at least 4 unless you have strong reasons.
Any metadata reference?

[Voice of Shouko]
00:08:582 (1) - No need for a 1/16 slider tbh.
00:08:845 (1) - Seems unsnapped.
00:30:636 (3) - Unsnapped slider.
00:31:367 (5) - Unsnapped circle.
00:52:602 (5,1,2) - This pattern is questionable as to readability. I'd strongly recommend to change for another layout.
03:44:858 (2,3) - I am not recommending to stack them because they could easily be read as 1/6s.
04:07:724 (2,3,4,5,6) - Too weak for 1/4. Rhythm here needs re-arrangement.
04:30:651 (6,1) - Should snap onto 1/4
04:51:078 (1,2,3,4) - Simply "no" to this pattern. It is quite abrupt and without eligible support from music.
05:17:419 (5) - Apparent overmap. Remove.

Regraz wrote:

Reb

Garden wrote:

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