Garden wrote:

Unused hitsounds:
soft-hitfinish9.wav
soft-sliderslide10.wav

00:13:212 (5,7) - 05:20:529 (5,7) - 可以考虑nc，一串combo有点长ok，但00:14:675 (1) - 可以不用吧?
00:40:651 (4) - 00:46:505 (4) - 02:20:164 (4) - 02:26:017 (4) - etc. 感觉换成圈更合曲，vocal和前面那个滑条跟到的音都停住了
00:42:114 (4) - stack到 00:40:651 (4) - 头？
00:55:651 - 01:19:066 - 02:33:334 - 02:35:163 - 02:58:578 - 03:45:407 - 04:07:358 (1) - 04:20:529 - 04:26:383 - 04:51:992 - 05:07:358 - 05:30:041 - 05:30:773 - finish?
01:23:090 (4) - 这里overlap还碰到了前面的滑条显得不太整洁，可以试试和 01:22:724 (3) - blanket
02:04:066 (4) - 03:21:261 (3) - 可以nc表示忽然切换到1/4节奏
02:45:285 (6) - 02:55:529 (6) - 03:08:700 (5) - etc. 可以加上clap之类的音效?
05:16:139 - 05:16:870 - 05:17:602 - 05:35:163 (1,2,3,4) - 个人会考虑额外加finish的地方，感觉效果挺好沒位置放音效了ww
沒回覆的都改了
有些地方感觉就不是1/6如 03:14:553 (5) - 不过出现得比较随机.... 头疼
以及最后一段piano的timing明显off，音频设备有点小问题没法仔细帮你check，你自己再调整下吧
好我會再調整
主要上面这两点搞好然后可以找我recheck，最近比较懒抱歉拖了挺久

Garden wrote:

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_MiaoFUuU_ wrote:

恭喜，你头像吓到我了。

Hey lululu123 wrote:

hahaha

Ametrin wrote:

坐等起飞

Regraz wrote:

Continue my mod. Do not kudosu this post.

[General]
Stack Leniency should be at least 4 unless you have strong reasons.
Any metadata reference?

[Voice of Shouko]
00:08:582 (1) - No need for a 1/16 slider tbh.
00:08:845 (1) - Seems unsnapped.
00:30:636 (3) - Unsnapped slider.
00:31:367 (5) - Unsnapped circle.
00:52:602 (5,1,2) - This pattern is questionable as to readability. I'd strongly recommend to change for another layout.
03:44:858 (2,3) - I am not recommending to stack them because they could easily be read as 1/6s.
04:07:724 (2,3,4,5,6) - Too weak for 1/4. Rhythm here needs re-arrangement.
04:30:651 (6,1) - Should snap onto 1/4
04:51:078 (1,2,3,4) - Simply "no" to this pattern. It is quite abrupt and without eligible support from music.
05:17:419 (5) - Apparent overmap. Remove.

Regraz wrote:

Reb

Garden wrote:

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