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Duca & AiRI - Full Throttle Heart (Short Ver.)

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Hinacle
GladiOol,Leorda

Thank you mod~!!
R a i n
Star~☆
KSHR

Leorda wrote:

Aya
*AR +1? already changed, but it had not updated yet >,<

00:16:369 (5) - New combo? fixed
02:07:921 (4) - Not stack perfectly with tail slider stacked perfectly
thank you, Leorda :)

>Hinacle
何度もごめんなさい..

Download: Duca&UR@N - Full throttle Heart (Short Ver.) (Hinacle) [Aya].osu
IceBeam
Hinacle! :D

Nice song choice,as always~

Hm,the first thing I noticed is Title and Artist.
Sadly,I haven't found anything that would make me sure in it,so please double check the source and anything else that will give you the correct name,cause I think Duca & UR@N should be separated,and Throttle should be capitalized.

And the last thing that bugs me is cyborg in Tags.I believe he/she changed the nickname to Aenna,and as it's already in Tags,maybe you shouldn't put previous name? Though it's your choice,it's allowed.

[Kayoko]
00:03:955 (3) - I'd make this one symmetrical.
00:20:507 (2,3) - I think you should add finishes here,too.
00:23:265 (4) - Whistle?
01:15:679 - Finish?
01:39:128 (1) - This slider plays a little strange,you haven't used red ticks before this.So,shorten it to 01:39:817 or,if you want to keep it as it is,then maybe start 01:41:197 (1) at 01:41:024 to follow rhytm and music?
02:03:955 (1,2,3) - Really not sure about this :| It's off rhytm.
My suggestions are:
  1. Delete all objects here.
  2. Make 2 sliders or 1 slider with 2 repeats using these notes: (02:04:128 - 02:04:645 - 02:05:162 - 02:05:679).
  3. Add a note to 02:06:369 (optional) and then make a slider using 02:06:886 - 02:07:403.
Also,silenced spinners disturbed me a bit,cause I never knew where should they end,but I guess it's fine.

[Shizuna]
00:14:990 (3) - Finish?
00:24:645 - Maybe don't silence this note? It sounds good with finish.
01:57:059 (3) - This finish is a little off,remove or move to 01:56:369.
02:03:955 (1) - Maybe remove it and a single circle to 02:04:128 instead?

Perfect otherwise!

[Aya]
Hmm..too much objects,high BPM,maybe increase AR by 1?
Also OD is too low for Hard difficulty,increase it too.

Awesome flow,nothing else to say.

[Sera]
01:06:024 (1) - Finish.
01:36:369 (1) - ^
01:40:679 (1) - Hm..it's too close to previous object,and it's not that readable,I clicked too early during test play,try to fix it somehow.

Another awesome difficulty in this mapset.

[Mikoto]
I wouldn't reccomend to use OD 8,but it's up to you.

00:05:334 (1) - Finish?
00:32:921 (1) - Doesn't look so good because of previous slider,I'd place it somewhere else.
02:07:921 - I think there's a note missing here.Add a circle with finish,and start the last spinner from 02:08:093.

Nice one,too.

Flawless mapping,what else can I say?
Of course,starring and best of luck to you.
Aenna
Topic Starter
Hinacle

IceBeam wrote:

Hinacle! :D

Nice song choice,as always~

Hm,the first thing I noticed is Title and Artist.
Sadly,I haven't found anything that would make me sure in it,so please double check the source and anything else that will give you the correct name,cause I think Duca & UR@N should be separated,and Throttle should be capitalized.

And the last thing that bugs me is cyborg in Tags.I believe he/she changed the nickname to Aenna,and as it's already in Tags,maybe you shouldn't put previous name? Though it's your choice,it's allowed.

[Kayoko]
00:03:955 (3) - I'd make this one symmetrical.
00:20:507 (2,3) - I think you should add finishes here,too.
00:23:265 (4) - Whistle?
01:15:679 - Finish?
01:39:128 (1) - This slider plays a little strange,you haven't used red ticks before this.So,shorten it to 01:39:817 or,if you want to keep it as it is,then maybe start 01:41:197 (1) at 01:41:024 to follow rhytm and music?
02:03:955 (1,2,3) - Really not sure about this :| It's off rhytm.
My suggestions are:
  1. Delete all objects here.
  2. Make 2 sliders or 1 slider with 2 repeats using these notes: (02:04:128 - 02:04:645 - 02:05:162 - 02:05:679).
  3. Add a note to 02:06:369 (optional) and then make a slider using 02:06:886 - 02:07:403.
Also,silenced spinners disturbed me a bit,cause I never knew where should they end,but I guess it's fine.

[Shizuna]
00:14:990 (3) - Finish?
00:24:645 - Maybe don't silence this note? It sounds good with finish.
01:57:059 (3) - This finish is a little off,remove or move to 01:56:369.
02:03:955 (1) - Maybe remove it and a single circle to 02:04:128 instead?

Perfect otherwise!

[Aya]
Hmm..too much objects,high BPM,maybe increase AR by 1?
Also OD is too low for Hard difficulty,increase it too.

Awesome flow,nothing else to say.

[Sera]
01:06:024 (1) - Finish.
01:36:369 (1) - ^
01:40:679 (1) - Hm..it's too close to previous object,and it's not that readable,I clicked too early during test play,try to fix it somehow.

Another awesome difficulty in this mapset.

[Mikoto]
I wouldn't reccomend to use OD 8,but it's up to you.

00:05:334 (1) - Finish?
00:32:921 (1) - Doesn't look so good because of previous slider,I'd place it somewhere else.
02:07:921 - I think there's a note missing here.Add a circle with finish,and start the last spinner from 02:08:093.

Nice one,too.

Flawless mapping,what else can I say?
Of course,starring and best of luck to you.
Thank you mod~!!
KSHR

IceBeam wrote:

[Aya]
Hmm..too much objects,high BPM,maybe increase AR by 1? maybe, already increased by 1 (GladiOol & Leorda's mod)
Also OD is too low for Hard difficulty,increase it too. ok, I asked Hinacle to do by 1

Awesome flow,nothing else to say. thx >,<
thank you for modding :)
Cyril Scarlet
恋色ぉおおおおおおおおおおおおおおおお
climbb65588
May I map a taiko diff for this?
Star~
hoLysoup
Hinacle~ ^^
Ekaru
Mikoto:

00:57:059 (1,2,3,4) - This tripped me up, but okay

Sera:

00:29:990 (1,2,3) - This is covered up by the previous (7), so it's a bit hard to read

Aya:

Nothing major

Shizuna:

nothing major

Gotta go to bed, so I'll just give you your star and be on my way ~
Snowy Dream
[Shizuna]
01:11:541 (1) - 1 grid down the middle point.


[Aya]
00:26:714 (6) - spacing?
00:27:403 (1) - ^
00:33:610 (2) - ^
01:47:921 (4) - ^


[Mikoto]
00:54:300 (3) - ctrl+r?
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Nice~!
Great mapset.
Star~☆
Aenna
KSHR

Snowy Dream wrote:

[Aya]
00:26:714 (6) - spacing? 00:26:024 (4,5) - 2grid down
00:27:403 (1) - ^ 1grid left
00:33:610 (2) - ^ 00:32:921 (1) - 1grid down
01:47:921 (4) - ^ 01:47:921 (4) - 2grid down, 01:48:438 (5) - 1grid down
thank you for modding :)

Download: Duca & AiRI - Full Throttle Heart (Short Ver.) (Hinacle) [Aya].osu
PeaChick
ほら~
Topic Starter
Hinacle

Ekaru wrote:

Mikoto:

00:57:059 (1,2,3,4) - This tripped me up, but okay

Sera:

00:29:990 (1,2,3) - This is covered up by the previous (7), so it's a bit hard to read

Aya:

Nothing major

Shizuna:

nothing major

Gotta go to bed, so I'll just give you your star and be on my way ~

Snowy Dream wrote:

[Shizuna]
01:11:541 (1) - 1 grid down the middle point.


[Aya]
00:26:714 (6) - spacing?
00:27:403 (1) - ^
00:33:610 (2) - ^
01:47:921 (4) - ^


[Mikoto]
00:54:300 (3) - ctrl+r?
-------------------------------------------------
Nice~!
Great mapset.
Star~☆

Thank you mod~!!
M A I D
XD
evalt_old
Star~ :)
h3k1ru
結婚してください

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Topic Starter
Hinacle

h3k1ru wrote:

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All star thank you~!!
DeadAlready
:D star~

ouch I can't find advice in this map to add star o__Q
Nymph
. .
:P star=v=
Topic Starter
Hinacle
... .
Thank you for star~!!><
merchat7
Random mod from me
[General]
- Disable letterbox during breaks (Song Setup > Storyboard > Misc Toggles) since you have a video. But it won't make much of a differences since you already have letterbox on your video.
- Map the break out in [Kayoko] & [Shizuna] or add a break at the same spot to other diffs. While i understand that those two are Easy and Normal, i feel you should keep it consistence.
[Kayoko]
No complaints
[Shizuna]
No complaints
[Aya]
- The slow slider at the beginning feels weird to me, just keep it 1.0x? If not 0.90x maybe. Actually i feel the slider velocity is too slow. 1.50x slider velocity perhaps?
00:48:783 (2) This note is hidden by the hit bursts from 00:47:403 (3). I understand why you stack it there, but i would not have seen it if i didn't check the editor.
Really dislike the slider velocity, please make it higher.
[Sera]
- Again i dislike the slider velocity, it doesn't fit well with the jump and for an Hard/Insane. Will give suggestion on what to change to after this.
The mapping seems fine.
[Mikoto]
Map seems fine, liked this difficulty due to the higher slider velocity, but i feel 1.9 or 2.0x is perfect.

So suggestions for slider velocity, 1.5x/1.6x [Aya] 1.7x/1.8x [Sera] & 1.9x/2.0x [Mikoto]. Please consider them, i really think the slider velocity is too slow for this song. Other than this, good map and song. Starred!
Acyfd
ひなちゃんさん                                                                                                                                                                                                      Star
SOSX
戀色空模樣的歌 ;)
最喜歡了 :D
祝你Rank喔 ;)
:lol: :lol: :lol: :lol:
abalee
kiai time seems too long, consider to shorten them.

mikoto:
00:10:852 (1,2) - spacing?
00:20:507 (1,2) - as a jump it doesn't fit I think. or try to remove combo @ 00:20:507 (1) -,00:21:886 (1) - and add combo @ 00:21:024 (2) -
00:46:024 (5) - hmm.. try this?

01:03:265 (1,2) - jump's not fits
01:33:438 (4) - ^
01:55:679 (1,2) - what.. OK I gonna think that you like this spacing..
Aenna
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Download: Duca & AiRI - Full Throttle Heart (Short Ver.) (Hinacle) [Mikoto].osu
Topic Starter
Hinacle

abalee wrote:

kiai time seems too long, consider to shorten them.ok.Fixed!!
Thank you mod~!!><
Aenna
tyotto syuusei ~~~

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Download: Duca & AiRI - Full Throttle Heart (Short Ver.) (Hinacle) [Mikoto].osu
abalee
seems fine now but I think i must type more to make sure it isn't too short OH it's too long just for a bubble lol.
Topic Starter
Hinacle

abalee wrote:

seems fine now but I think i must type more to make sure it isn't too short OH it's too long just for a bubble lol.
Thank you bubble~!!><
Garven
[All difficulties]
Set slider tick rate to 1. Sounds much better.

[Kayoko]
01:00:507 (1) - Remove new combo
01:06:024 (1) - ^
02:01:197 (1) - Maybe end this at 02:03:265 - so there's more recovery time
02:06:369 (3,4) - This spacing felt deceiving even if it's distance snapped. Maybe move it left one or two grids?

[Shizuna]
00:09:472 (1) - Remove new combo
This was... kind of boring. Very square patterns and many straight lines with a 1/1/1/1 rhythm for the majority of the map. Think you can spruce things up a bit and make it more interesting to play?

[Aya]
Circle/Slider ratio is :/ 86:191
That said, it plays nice.

[Sera]
01:06:024 (1) - Remove new combo
01:46:197 (6) - This repeat is getting covered by 01:44:990 (3) - Please rearrange.

[Mikoto]
01:41:369 (1,2,3) - Doesn't really feel like a good spot for an anti-jump like this. If anything, actual jumps or a short repeating slider would work better imo

Normal could use a lot of improvement in the design area, and Easy could also use a little sprucing up, but there's not much you can do with the rhythms you chose. The upper-level difficulties felt a lot more polished.
Aenna
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Download: Duca & AiRI - Full Throttle Heart (Short Ver.) (Hinacle) [Mikoto].osu
Topic Starter
Hinacle

Garven wrote:

[All difficulties]
Set slider tick rate to 1. Sounds much better. Done.

[Kayoko]
01:00:507 (1) - Remove new comboDone
01:06:024 (1) - ^^
02:01:197 (1) - Maybe end this at 02:03:265 - so there's more recovery time^
02:06:369 (3,4) - This spacing felt deceiving even if it's distance snapped. Maybe move it left one or two grids?^

[Shizuna]
00:09:472 (1) - Remove new comboDone
This was... kind of boring. Very square patterns and many straight lines with a 1/1/1/1 rhythm for the majority of the map. Think you can spruce things up a bit and make it more interesting to play?Little Done.

[Aya]
Circle/Slider ratio is :/ 86:191
That said, it plays nice.

[Sera]
01:06:024 (1) - Remove new comboDone
01:46:197 (6) - This repeat is getting covered by 01:44:990 (3) - Please rearrange.^

[Mikoto]
01:41:369 (1,2,3) - Doesn't really feel like a good spot for an anti-jump like this. If anything, actual jumps or a short repeating slider would work better imoDone

Normal could use a lot of improvement in the design area, and Easy could also use a little sprucing up, but there's not much you can do with the rhythms you chose. The upper-level difficulties felt a lot more polished.
Thank you mod~!!
Garven
[Mikoto]
01:41:369 (1) - Remove new combo
01:42:576 (1) - ^
Topic Starter
Hinacle

Garven wrote:

[Mikoto]
01:41:369 (1) - Remove new combo
01:42:576 (1) - ^
Thank you mod~!!
Garven
!!
Topic Starter
Hinacle

Garven wrote:

!!
Thank you!!
Muya
grats :)
hoLysoup
^^
swish
omedetou~ :)
Topic Starter
Hinacle
muyaさん hoLysoupさん swishさん

ありがとうございます!!
Sharp
gratz :oops:
h3k1ru
hinaclesama omedeto
Cyril Scarlet
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Darksonic
Gratz, awesome map and song.
Topic Starter
Hinacle
All

Thank you~!!l
M A I D
omedetou XD~
Topic Starter
Hinacle

M A I D wrote:

omedetou XD~
arigatou XD~
Topic Starter
Hinacle
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