Maxus wrote:

camellia is love

Cokiiplay wrote:

Maxus wrote:

camellia is love

camellia is live owob

hey mod from my queue

SHOUT!

01:28:847 (88847|3,88847|2) - delete a note yeah delete one note
01:31:053 (91053|1) - add a note
01:31:097 (91097|3) - delete this note
01:31:141 (91141|2) - ^^ hmm i purposely make full single stream burst instead of 1/8 jumpstream because i find the emphasis isn't that strong (not finish sound)
01:50:200 (110200|2,110376|1) - ghost notes? it kinda has low deep drum sound there.
01:52:494 (112494|1,112494|0) - delete a note yeah i delete one here too.
01:52:935 (112935|3) - add a note as explained before.
01:54:523 (114523|1,114523|2,114700|0,114700|3,114876|1,114876|0,115053|0,115053|1) - ctrl + H? i really feel the current pattern flows well with the drum instrument here, will keep.
02:14:023 (134023|3,134023|0) - delete a note for this one, since after this jumptrill is empty pattern, i intendedly make it like this.
03:42:170 (222170|2) - add a note same sound as 03:42:523 (222523|2,222523|1) - yeah kinda messed up my layering here, fixed and rearrange some.
04:08:465 (248465|1) - consider adding a note here same as before.
04:11:023 (251023|1) - add a note consider adding a note here nope but i rearrange something here.
04:29:553 (269553|0,269553|3) - delete a note same as before
04:34:759 (274759|3,274759|2) - ^ it's for piano.

sry for the short mod but your map is really nice and a didn't notice many flaws

good luck with your map

JooF12 wrote:

Hii hii Maxus-dono. . . here's the mod as requested

|1| |2| |3| |4|

SHOOT!

00:53:994 (53994|0,53994|1) - are this doubles for vocal? for a bit emphasis on the string sound (i put double every 4/1 thick white line
01:01:053 (61053|3,61229|3) - mov col1, 01:01:406 (61406|2,61406|1,61582|1) - ctrl + h, 01:01:759 (61759|0,61935|0) - col2 & 01:02:112 (62112|3,62112|2,62288|2) - swap col, ofc rearrange 01:02:465 (62465|3) - to avoid sumthing <--if you will apply this don't really see a problem with this one tbh.. still balance on its own and complement the structure well enough.
01:04:935 - & 01:06:700 - as you see here, col2's empty, might consider to rearrange some notes for balance tbh it's already balance if you look at 01:04:229 (64229|1,64229|0,64406|0,64582|1,64759|1,64935|0) - where it's pure left hand jack.
01:22:053 (82053|0,82141|0) - mov col2 & 01:22:229 (82229|1) - col1? (ofc rearrange sum conflicts of you'll apply this) the emphasis kinda getting bigger, so i want to spread the jack to accent that.
01:30:391 (90391|2,90435|3,90479|1,90523|2,90568|0) - this 1/8 burst really gonna hurt/too hard. but still looks good sice it follows the music hmm don't think it's too hard tbh, since it's 14-23 motion which still easy in readability.
01:44:288 (104288|2,104465|1) - ctrl + h, since you did same as 01:41:112 (101112|2,101288|1,101465|2,101641|1) - & 01:35:465 (95465|3,95641|2,95818|3,95994|2) - the pitch before is the same, this one has quite significant differences since this part actually lead to the second stanza.
02:32:465 - 02:34:582 - make triple like u did 02:31:759 - & 02:31:053 - how am i missed this.. fixed.
03:33:170 - better mov some LN's to the right hand, seems focus on left I kinda want to make stair lead starting from right to leftr at 03:32:641 - , and then going to left to right at 03:33:259 - , but i fixed the one at 03:33:700 - though.
03:42:876 - is the emptiness of col4 intentional? originally i want to make players prepare for the jumptrill there, that's why the col 4 started at 03:43:318 (223318|3) - , but i still move 03:42:965 - to col.4
03:59:288 - add note in the mini LN section, i kinda make the kick and crash the same amount of note for playability.
This is all I can see. . . and Im suck at looking in mapping vocals especially when I can still hear some various sound rip still help me figure out things here, thank you! xd

Well then that's all. . . .

Critical_Star wrote:

irc some stuff

22:27 Critical_Star: sorry about just now, my com sometimes got crazy a bit xd
22:28 Maxus: that;s alright, hope it's fine xd
22:28 Maxus: what do u think about the map?
22:29 Critical_Star: i accidentally sent wrong msg to monstrata lol
22:30 Critical_Star: l0oks, i just suggest a little stuff here
22:30 Critical_Star: 04:31:053 (271053|2,271097|1,271141|0,271185|2,271229|3,271273|0,271318|1,271362|2) -  personally prefer a short LN to differentiate the sound here
22:31 Maxus: omg to monstrata? ._.
22:31 Maxus: at first i want to, but im not sure about 1/8 LN
22:31 Critical_Star: because i click wrong since your name panel are just beside him lol
22:31 Maxus: it's not too excessive?
22:31 Maxus: u mutual with him? im jealous qwq
22:32 Critical_Star: nah no xd
22:32 Critical_Star: i think 1/8 LN is nice to do so here
22:32 Maxus: ok will make 1/8 'w')
22:33 Critical_Star: some pattern remind me of happiness xd
22:34 Maxus: the burst and the LN /run xd
22:34 Maxus: but this one is less agressive imo
22:34 Maxus: since i make this more comfortable xd
22:34 Critical_Star: 03:37:759 (217759|0,217759|3,217759|1,217847|2,217935|1,217935|0,218023|3,218112|2,218112|1,218200|0,218200|3,218288|1,218288|2,218376|0,218465|1,218465|3,218553|2,218553|0,218641|1,218641|3) - 
22:35 Critical_Star: how about just do double for vocal here?
22:35 Critical_Star: 03:40:582 (220582|1,220582|0,220670|3,220670|2,220759|0,220759|1,220847|3,220935|1,220935|2,221023|0,221023|3,221112|2,221112|1,221200|0,221288|1,221288|3,221376|2,221376|0,221465|1,221465|3) -  ^
22:35 Critical_Star: i think that
22:36 Critical_Star: u been doing this kind of pattern all the time so maybe give less anchor here will be good
22:36 Maxus: i just realize it can be made to follow vocal xd
22:36 Critical_Star: 03:43:406 (223406|0,223406|2,223494|3,223494|1,223582|0,223582|2,223670|3,223759|2,223759|1,223847|0,223847|3,223935|2,223935|1,224023|0,224112|3,224112|2,224200|1,224200|0,224288|3,224288|2) -  then start here is okay since the kick are getting intensive xd
22:37 Maxus: 02:35:641 -  here too i think?
22:37 Critical_Star: 04:05:994 (245994|1,245994|0,246082|3,246082|2,246170|0,246170|1,246259|3,246347|0,246347|1,246435|2,246435|3,246523|0,246523|1,246612|2,246700|0,246700|3,246788|2,246788|1,246876|0,246876|3,246965|1,247053|3,247053|2,247141|0,247141|1,247229|3,247229|2,247318|0,247406|2,247406|3,247494|1,247494|0,247582|2,247582|3,247670|0,247759|2,247759|1,247847|0,247847|3,247935|2,247935|1,248023|3,248112|1,248112|0) -  same idea vocal layering
22:37 Critical_Star: yea\
22:38 Maxus: to also differentiate with 02:38:465 - ? since i notice they are different in intensity xd
22:38 Critical_Star: u get the point xd
22:39 Maxus: yeah, it will be dense jumpstream instead of jumptrill xd
22:40 Maxus: 00:48:523 - hmm about this, do you think this too boring? bcoz i think so xd
22:40 Critical_Star: hmm seems pretty fine imo
22:41 Critical_Star: or
22:41 Critical_Star: u can ignore 1/2 sound and catch every vocal here with LN
22:41 Critical_Star: also it is a good build up structure after 00:59:641 - 
22:42 Critical_Star: but current one is fine too
22:42 Maxus: somehow i felt it is too long to make players waiting.. but i'm not sure either
22:43 Critical_Star: but still i prefer your current one 1/2 pattern
22:45 Maxus: hmm i see, then will use the current for now then xd.. if players find it boring, i might change it xd
22:45 Critical_Star: sure xd
22:46 Critical_Star: rest seems fine for me, only those double trill stuff i mention
22:47 Maxus: double trill for pp /run xd , jk
22:47 Maxus: thank u so much my moe star >//<
22:49 Maxus: may u post the irc so i can give kudosu? xd
22:49 Critical_Star: np np :D
22:49 Critical_Star: suree

good luck!

Hydria wrote:

this mod will be less focusing on PR and other general stuff and move focusing on concepts that can make the map more "unique" in a sense so this will probably be relatively short

SHOUT!

in places like 00:06:347 - 00:09:170 - 00:11:994 - and so on, I'd create two sets of minijacks following the "echo" of sorts from the voice coming in, so you'd end up with something like

if you wanted to carry this concept onto the LNs however you'd have to be careful, because stuff like

is the only decent way to do it to avoid potential LN breaking due to there being a minijack and an LN on the same hand sounds good, at first i was hesitant with this, but ok, applied

00:34:935 (34935|2,35288|3) - change these two around for PR (I did say this was not going to be a PR mod but this bothered me) switch the column

00:38:288 (38288|3,38465|2) - why are these two separate LNs? I don't hear any break in the music or vocals that would make sense for this the vocal keeps constant, but the bg instrument felt it was separated into different part, so i separate them.

00:48:347 - to 00:59:641 - why not keep the vocal LNs going? I don't see any reason to stop kinda want to emphasize the different section here.

00:59:641 - to 01:08:112 - there are very quiet 1/4 sounds throughout here that you might want to take advantage of (and then argue against because you know that's always fun) i love it tbh :p

02:52:582 - switch the 2 SV values around here and maybe make it a bit stronger for desired slam effect (0.5 / 1.5) naisss xd

03:42:612 (222612|0,222700|1) - maybe switch these two around to avoid 03:41:906 (221906|0,222082|0,222259|0,222435|0,222612|0) - the current trill kinda fit with the lead instrument imo

04:40:229 - etc same suggestion as earlier applied too

04:55:406 - from here on out I would just use a 1 bar pattern over and over again until the song ends because I feel like it's more fitting due to the music repeating itself over and over again kinda feel the repeating trill here already fit the instrument.

that's about it with the restrictions already in play (aka asking why the LNs at 02:55:406 - don't follow the triples as before then realising it would cause unnecessary minijacks) so good luck with ranking

genkicho wrote:

NM From My Mod Que

Col 1 2 3 4

SHOUT!

actually i wanted to do nm+, but i dont like the song, so i just do NM. sorry :>>

00:26:994 (26994|0) - vocal start at 00:26:906 Don't think so, it's correct in the red line.
00:38:465 (38465|2) - no beat, not vocal not sure if you look at outdated ver, but there's no note here.
00:38:288 (38288|3) - i think shouldnt be this short but it is ended that way?
01:21:700 (81700|1,81788|1,81876|2,81965|2,82053|0,82141|0) - i think no need minijacks, also idk what those minijacks what for vocal,
fast rapid 1/4 vocal for jack.
01:32:818 (92818|1) - delete, then 01:32:465 (92465|1) - extend to white line, i think looks better cuz consistency isnt everything :> decided to implement my LN idea.
01:54:700 (114700|0,114876|0,115053|0,115229|0,115406|0) - 5.. avoid (?) intended for hithat effect, i do think it flows naturally.
02:25:759 idk better or not.. im sleepy ;_; I won't delete the blue line note, it serves importantly to enhance the repeating instrument section.
03:02:465 (182465|1) - whats this for rising sound
03:02:818 try this intended for the current one because i want to emphasize rising background effect from LN at 03:02:818 (182818|3,183523|0) -
03:26:818 (206818|2,206906|2) - 03:28:229 (208229|2,208318|2) - pls avoid,, this is 4k, you dont need to map every sound ;_; theyre full and messy don't really get it why its messy, for me, this is pinnacle moment where the music started to get even higher and higher to near the "top moment", i find it important to layer it in the way that makes people think " oh, this map still have more?" , aside that, i follow PR for this map, if you see the structure more closely, you can see that this is not randomly placed :/
03:29:641 (209641|1,209729|1) - i suggest 03:29:641 (209641|1) - move to 4 sure okay
03:39:876 (219876|1) - you can make more variation if you dont map every sound, maybe something like this rearrange it on my own, the drum still quite prominent here.
03:41:994 (221994|2,222170|2) - 03:42:347 (222347|2,222523|2) - note + LN on same hand, it's okay if 1/2, but 03:41:818 (221818|2,221994|2,222170|2,222347|2,222523|2,222700|2) - anchors 03:41:818 (221818|2,221906|0,221994|2,222082|0,222170|2,222259|0,222347|2) - unintended trill, i suggest remap that part (?) intended though, it works to get the essence of emphasize the synth at 03:41:994 (221994|3,222347|3) - even better, the trill isn't unintended, but rather works as a symbol that the pattern want to emphasize certain instrument through other form of pattern, i do think this works as it is now.

i think thats all :>
*note : dat hitsound .... pls later.. wkwk

- Ly0572 - wrote:

owo

|1|2|3|4|
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00:08:906 (8906|1,8994|0) - jack should be here i believe then move 00:09:170 (9170|1) - to |3| I follow jack in places where there's 2 sound of 1/4 identic sound, not only one.
00:23:112 - add for that vocal? in |2| no need , i focus on gaining the increasing of momentum.
00:30:523 - add to |2| aswell not audible tbh
00:32:818 - ^ to |3| same
01:10:759 - add to |4| there's sv
01:32:112 (92112|0,92112|3) - would change to 2 ln's instead... then double this 01:32:376 - arrange it myself.
01:50:200 (110200|2) - move to |1| since the start of the stream [if thats what u call it lmao] is here 01:50:465 - and would change these to a long note 01:50:288 (110288|3,110376|1) a bit forget what i change here, but i think i make LN instead for this.
01:50:288 (110288|3,110376|1) - add to |2| for something like this note 02:40:406 (160406|2) - ^
02:58:141 - missing notes? yes i think
04:10:318 (250318|2,250318|1) - should be single only? i guess
04:42:876 (282876|3,282965|2,283053|0,283141|0,283229|2,283229|3,283318|3,283406|0) - ctrl+h the current works fine.
04:45:700 (285700|0) - move to |3| same as previous one

ps: im modding it with 50% playback rate to be able to read notes :3 and point out / suggest some comfortable stuffs to me
thats all i can find~ sorry if its short i did my best senpai >~<

Raveille wrote:

owo M4M owo

|1|2|3|4|

SOMEBODY SCREAM FIDUHUXCBIVZNUYVFUY A7A6BHTIOBK78YU

make overall hitsound to 10-20, 30 is a bit too loud =w= but it's soft hitsound lol, would be too small i think..
00:43:406 (43406|2,43406|0) - shouldn't this be a single note only, since double notes are mostly used for some blurry sound like 00:44:818 - ? no there's some kind of low kick sound as well, see 00:37:759 - too.
01:54:523 - this should be fitting of a triple, maybe a note at 1? if you apply this then 01:55:053 (115053|0,115053|1) - switch this to 3 and 4 It kinda forcing and makes the pattern felt awkward
02:14:112 (134112|2) - LN to 02:14:465 - ? can use that i think
02:30:347 (150347|2,150435|2,150523|1,150612|1) - I think you only use jacks when the voice becomes jacky, but this part, the voice is not jacky at all (slow down to 25%) so 02:30:435 (150435|2,150523|1) - ctrl+h this? true here, i make trill instead.
02:44:818 (164818|1,164818|0,165170|1,165347|0,165523|0,165876|0) - ctrl+h this whole pattern and then shift it to columns 1 and 2 (basically, I just ask you to swap column 1 notes and column 2 notes), so that the LNs are at PR and it plays out nicely want to exhibit the mirror pattern,
so i think will keep this.
03:00:700 (180700|0,180700|3,180744|1,180788|2,180832|0,180876|1,180920|3,180965|2) - this is a bit hard to press tbh. idk if this is much better but you can try? This is the pattern that i almost always FC.. although it looks stacked at the left column, in actuality, it mostly contained 1/8 linear stream, so will keep.
03:04:053 - missed out a uh... piano note? or is it a xylophone idk correct here
03:09:700 - another one here i think not
03:10:582 - another one here yes here
03:11:112 (191112|2) - note should be at 03:11:090 - (1/16) , if you apply, I suggest shifting 03:10:759 (190759|3) - LN end to same snap
03:11:288 (191288|0,191288|1) - this should be at 03:11:266 - too
hmmm idk, I feel like this part, the xylophone notes are on 1/16 snaps just one snap below...
03:11:818 (191818|3) - like this one, should be at 03:11:795 -
03:10:053 (190053|2,190053|0) - just spotted this one too.
apparently the first half is fine, but the second half turns into 1/16 :thinking:
03:10:759 (190759|3,190759|2) - this too, should be one snap (1/16) down regarding the 1/16, the current RC allowed me to have some sort of simplification as long as i do it consistently, so i will keep all 1/16 thingy
ok everything else is ok now
04:29:641 (269641|3) - LN to 04:29:994 - ? sure here

Somehow this is actually a really good song LOL

good luck on rank

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  SHOUT

1. 00:38:465 - till 00:38:994 - I think I can hear the sound on every 1/2. So, maybe add a note to represent it. I quite prefer it when playing.
2. 00:40:406 - Same issue as above
3. 00:44:465 - I think I can here this sound (and maybe a little sound from 00:44:288 - 00:44:641 -). I prefer adding a note in those position.
4. 00:46:053 (46053|1) - Maybe remove it? Same as 00:40:229 - and only LN can hold this sound already imo. Otherwise, add a note in other position that have same issue as here.
5. 00:47:994 - Maybe add a single note here in fourth column to represent its huge sound?
6. 00:55:406 - It has same sound as 00:53:994 -. Using a chord pattern could represent this sound better.
7. 00:57:876 - Maybe add a note here to represent this sound like 00:56:818 - .
8. 01:04:406 (64406|0) - Move to the fourth column, I think left hand hold too much dense in this verse. Then maybe change a pattern of 01:04:935 (64935|3,64935|0,65112|3) - to make it balance too~
9. 01:08:288 (68288|3,68641|2) - Because of 01:08:112 (68112|0) - sound, it maybe push these note down and I feel strange about that a bit. Maybe remove it and change the double note around there to single? imo~ (what i mean is https://puu.sh/vY1lt/4ee1ca7c3d.png)
10. 02:44:994 (164994|3) - Move to the third column for balancing? Fourth column is too dense imo.~
11. 02:46:759 (166759|1,166847|0) - Maybe swapping them? Because the overall LN pattern is swapped like 02:47:465 (167465|2,167553|0) - and 02:48:170 (168170|1,168259|2) - . I prefer it more~
12. 02:57:876 - Use triple note here? This sound is same as 02:57:170 - and others.
13. 03:32:465 (212465|1,212553|0) - Maybe swap it? I think it have too much of shield in this pattern.
14. 03:35:818 - LN here? I can hear the sound and it will make this verse consistence.
15. 04:39:523 - Maybe use short LN here to represent this sound?

PnX wrote:

m4m from pm

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  SHOUT

1. 00:38:465 - till 00:38:994 - I think I can hear the sound on every 1/2. So, maybe add a note to represent it. I quite prefer it when playing. too quiet imo, i want to maintain light density in calm part, that's why i tried to add for more audible one.
2. 00:40:406 - Same issue as above not sure, but will add for now.
3. 00:44:465 - I think I can here this sound (and maybe a little sound from 00:44:288 - 00:44:641 -). I prefer adding a note in those position. added only for 00:44:465 here.
4. 00:46:053 (46053|1) - Maybe remove it? Same as 00:40:229 - and only LN can hold this sound already imo. Otherwise, add a note in other position that have same issue as here. LN for vocal here, so i prefer have an independent note for snare.
5. 00:47:994 - Maybe add a single note here in fourth column to represent its huge sound? suree
6. 00:55:406 - It has same sound as 00:53:994 -. Using a chord pattern could represent this sound better. they have different emphasis though, this one is when it wanna repeat the same thing with different lyrics, so i have double for that.
7. 00:57:876 - Maybe add a note here to represent this sound like 00:56:818 - . prefer double at start of LN here.
8. 01:04:406 (64406|0) - Move to the fourth column, I think left hand hold too much dense in this verse. Then maybe change a pattern of 01:04:935 (64935|3,64935|0,65112|3) - to make it balance too~ only move 01:04:759 (64759|1) - to col 3 here, i think this will balance it.
9. 01:08:288 (68288|3,68641|2) - Because of 01:08:112 (68112|0) - sound, it maybe push these note down and I feel strange about that a bit. Maybe remove it and change the double note around there to single? imo~ (what i mean is https://puu.sh/vY1lt/4ee1ca7c3d.png) rearrange on my own but use your concept :3
10. 02:44:994 (164994|3) - Move to the third column for balancing? Fourth column is too dense imo.~ col 4 is easier to hit imo, will keep for now.
11. 02:46:759 (166759|1,166847|0) - Maybe swapping them? Because the overall LN pattern is swapped like 02:47:465 (167465|2,167553|0) - and 02:48:170 (168170|1,168259|2) - . I prefer it more~ I make LN at 02:46:759 (166759|1,166847|0) - at col 4-3 instead, will mirrored previous small LN and balance it more.
12. 02:57:876 - Use triple note here? This sound is same as 02:57:170 - and others. nice catch
13. 03:32:465 (212465|1,212553|0) - Maybe swap it? I think it have too much of shield in this pattern. kinda break the overall structure i want to make at 03:32:288 (212288|1,212376|2,212465|3,212465|1,212553|0,212641|3,212818|2,212818|0,212906|1) - , will keep for now. i think it's not too hard.
14. 03:35:818 - LN here? I can hear the sound and it will make this verse consistence. sure here
15. 04:39:523 - Maybe use short LN here to represent this sound? make double instead, felt it was too forcing if i try make LN there.

That's it. btw Nice map -- GL~

Arzenvald wrote:

ihhhh 4K D: 4K is love /run

01:54:700 (114700|0,114700|3) - could be removed to to emphasize 01:54:523 (114523|1,114876|0) -
01:54:170 (114170|2,114259|2,114347|3,114435|3,114523|2) - avoid awkward 1 hand jack thx https://puu.sh/vZS8z/d1d5ddef4b.png and better visual
Really nice >< , I also make the SV here to emphasize the "sudden drop sound" sound to compensate for not mapping hithat.

02:37:053 (157053|2,157318|2,157582|2) - ain't going to layer this authentic vocal? layer more vocal, want to consistent with drum first,
but i think variation can work better.
02:51:700 (171700|0) - move to 3 to avoid anchor + LN in same hand gotchaa

02:57:700 (177700|2,177788|3) - i think you can make a jack kinda forgot about this sound

03:26:288 (206288|0,206376|1,206465|2) - https://puu.sh/vZSiV/3b4c77aa39.png
03:26:641 (206641|2,206818|2,206906|2) - if you want to keep this jack, at least avoid it having anchor in 03:26:465 (206465|2) - more like i didn't have choice because i also want to layer the long vocal >< , anyway changed.

03:43:406 (223406|0) - kinda, i'd emphasize the synth over the other stuff because its really dominant, good for variation https://puu.sh/vZSng/10f615ec42.png I like the sheriruth jack >< , but this part here is arguably the densest part in the diff, and i kinda think people won't like get their acc dropped at the end in marathon map, so i'm still makes this straightforward for players

03:46:935 (226935|2,227112|3,227288|3,227465|0) - ain't going to be overkill to add doubles in these 1/8 8DD i will get my haters club later if i layer double on that xd
For serious one, I try to layer double on burst if i find the finish sound really hard to be emphasized, like my happiness map.

03:49:406 (229406|2) - optionally, consider to use triples for the loud snares, this part looks bland compared with the intensity of the song
04:01:406 (241406|0,241406|2) - and use LN for YELL in here hmm it will makes the other part get jacked with the small LN at other part,
and some player feedback me they don't like it, so i try to keep player focused to hit LN.I will try to do something with YELL sound though, I agree that i should layer that.

04:05:994 (245994|1,245994|0) - same as i suggested in 03:43:406 - honestly this part feels anticlimax D: I agree i can layer jack here,
since this part is shorter dense pattern, so player won't get surprised.

the ending kiai is okay i guess, though i personally it feels a little bit off because you choose to make a casual jumpstream through the percussion instead of the synth you mean when the vocal started? well, i thought it would be too same with previous kiai if i constantly use LN to signify the synth there, and vocal makes the synth kinda faded there, so i choose to not signify synth anymore.
I agree using handstream kinda "meh" , but i'm not sure how to layer that while the vocal exist either wkkw.
k thx bay kud thx

Surono wrote:

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Maxus wrote:

Bkinin wa GD taiko :<

Wonki wrote:

Hello hello ponki owo

SHOUT!

00:00:700 (700|1) - I would like this LN to start from 00:00:347 - since the song starts from there. It feels a bit awkward. Hmm I felt it is a bit too early because i don't hear any sound at that point, so will keep.

00:06:523 (6523|0,6523|1,6612|0,6700|1) - This is possible to play but i would like you to change it in a comfortable way for playability i want to maintain the jack though for the repeating sound for consistency and gimmick.

01:22:406 (82406|0) - I think it would be better if you move it to col 2 in order to make it a jack like above. done and rearrange little things

02:15:523 (135523|3,135523|0,135568|1,135612|2,135656|3,135700|0,135744|1,135788|2,135832|3) - You might want to reconsider making this LN in order to differ from the 8 snap drum sounds above I ever try to do this,
but i'm not sure whether it will be too hard or not, so i will consider it.

04:31:097 (271097|0,271141|1,271185|2,271229|3,271273|0,271318|1,271362|2,271406|3,271406|0) - same as above the same

04:59:553 (299553|0,299553|3) - It feels a bit awkward because the last LN finishes too early 05:02:465 - I recommend you to extend it until here I think it's alright so that people don't have to wait for too long xd

yee

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pake B.Indonesia saja ya <(")
[box=SHOUT!]00:23:112 - lho kok ga ada notenya, padahal ada suaranya lho
00:23:288 (23288|2) - nih LN jgn mulainya disini aja 00:23:465 (23465|2) - biar sinkron sama pitchnya persiapan masuk ke wall LN nya
00:23:465 (23465|2) - tambah 1 note (jadiin jack, effect echo) sama, jack rda ga cocok ma suasananya yg masih tenang
00:27:347 - ^
00:27:876 - ^
00:29:288 - ^
00:30:170 - ^
00:32:288 - ^
00:32:994 - ^
00:36:170 - tambah 1 note sama smua, wa ngikutny yg piano ato synthny lbih kdngeran jelas.
03:05:112 - ^ oke utk ini
03:26:200 - dari sini sampai 03:26:376 - kenapa gk di ganti sama stair/roll aja? snap 1/8 http://prntscr.com/fcmmm0 ga ad 1/8 disini yg gw dnger, adny 1/4 synth buat LN, keep dah
tbh GOOD MAP NOODLES <3 D:
Gud Lak uwu

AncuL wrote:

owo ok

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00:18:347 (18347|2,18523|2,18700|2,18876|2,19053|2,19229|2) - anchornya panjang banget. mungkin di sini bisa rearrange notenya dikit
00:19:229 (19229|1,19406|1,19582|1,19759|1,19935|1,20112|1) - ^ dah wa coba, tp noteny jd antara nge OH trill lagi / shield/ aneh flowny, mnurut wa anchornya sama2 ngemirror 1 sama lain jadi strukturny msh dapet disitu.
00:56:818 (56818|3,56818|2,57347|3,57523|2) - tukar posisi buat PR ok struktur lebih baik
01:02:641 (62641|1,62818|2,63170|2,63170|1,63523|2,63700|1,64053|1) - ^ ok juga
01:05:906 - tambahin satu not karena ada suara fokus di red line ma white line dsini soalny pke LN kcil, klo blue line rda rumit imo.
01:07:318 - ^ ^
01:08:641 (68641|1) - LN tailnya mungkin bisa dipendekin ke 01:08:994 - , ato nggak di part itu dibikin kayak gini buat konsistensi rearrange ndirii
01:10:406 (70406|2) - pindah ke telunjuk kiri karena suara di situ sama kayak di 01:10:582 - agak ngmksa noteny dsitu imo, rda terdesak,
yg skrg lbi enak imo.
01:11:465 (71465|2,71641|1) - ctrl+h buat PR ok sip
01:16:229 (76229|3,76406|0) - ^ yang ini ga, krna mw bkin struktur OH LN di part atasnya..
01:18:347 (78347|2,78523|3,78876|3) - ini flip, 01:19:229 (79229|1,79406|3) - ini flip buat PR yang lebih baiknanti ga konsisten ama 01:17:288 (77288|3,77818|3) - , LN di 01:19:229 (79229|1,79406|3) - wa ykin dh ssuai jg PRnya.
01:32:023 (92023|2,92112|1) - ctrl+h biar suaranya lebih keemphasize bole2x
01:33:347 (93347|0) - ini dijadiin not biasa terus 01:33:523 - ditambah satu not buat cymbal ok rearrange dikit
02:05:641 (125641|0,125818|3) - ctrl+h biar suara vokal di 02:05:465 - lebih teremphasize dengan anchor nice one
02:12:523 - add 1 not?
02:12:876 - ^ ga dulu dah, biar start sblm jumptrillny lebih stabil buat dipencet
02:13:318 (133318|0,133670|0,134729|3,135082|2,135435|2) - 2 note? pattern kayak gini nggak masalah kok asalkan minijacknya di telunjuk bagi wa minijack telunjuk justru susah wkwk, tp ini mmang sngaja biar adem2 di awal
02:28:759 - kurangin 1 emphasisny lmyn kuat dsini
02:38:729 (158729|2,159082|2,159435|2) - 2 note aja tbh. mungkin bakal bikin beberapa minijack disini ga mw minijack di dense partny wkwk
02:58:229 - ^, mungkin ganti patternnya setiap 2 beat aja sama.
03:03:876 - slowjamnya nggak kerasa. mungkin turunin ke 0.75x oh iya bener
03:21:523 (201523|3,201612|3) - ?????? sngaja wkwk, strukturny jg krng lbih sama kyk 03:22:759 (202759|3,202935|3) - yg scara progresif lbih ssh drpd sblmny
03:26:465 - entah kenapa di bagian ini pas dimainin kerasa agak nggak nyaman. kayak ada perasaan tubuh nggak seimbang (mungkin karena gw emang nggak suka LN yang panjangnya cuma 1/4) bbrp mmang wa sngaja ga seimbangin , tp hrsny udh keseimbang sndiriny krna wa bkin ga seimbang di 1 sisi, 1 sisinya lagi dibkin ga seimbang, biar flownya dapet, tapi wa rearrange lg.
04:05:994 - jacknya di telunjuk pls :< ga mw :> , sukany jack jari tengah
04:25:053 (265053|1,265053|0,265053|2,265141|3,265229|1,265318|3,265406|2,265406|1,265406|0,265494|3,265582|2) - coba rearrange biar 04:25:582 - bisa pake 2 not tanpa minijacking rda ngmksa ama bkin pattern laen jd ilang flowny, bgi wa ga pa2 ngrbanin dkit klo misalny strukturny dapet
04:27:170 - 2 not iyahh
04:28:053 (268053|2,268141|0,268406|3,268494|2) - 2 not gaa
04:28:582 - kayak yang di atas (jangan takut bikin mapnya susah karena bagian ini emang bagian paling "epic" dari lagunya (bagian intro yang paling nggak kedengeran suaranya aja dibikin minijack masa ini nggak o3o)campur aduk sih orang ama pattern dsini, bbrp bilangnya malah mereka ga suka klo misalnya dah mw slese marathonny tiba2 patternny malah bkin mrka ilang skornya, jadi wa tetep agak simplistik dsini wkkw, lgpula intro memang ad suara khas ndiri dan lebih ga dense :p

cuma segini yang bisa gw dapet. kalo misalnya nggak setuju bilang aja.
good luck!

1. 00:27:523 - miss a note
2. 00:30:523 - ^
3. 00:29:641 (29641|3) - this LN should ends at 00:30:523 -
4. 00:31:406 (31406|3) - ends at 00:32:288 -
5. 00:36:170 - 00:30:523 - miss note
6. 00:42:700 (42700|3) - ends at 00:43:582 -
7. 00:46:935 (46935|3,47112|2) - i guess these are not needed cuz no vocal sound here. If they are mixed with LNs that represent voacl sounds it will seems a little bit messy imo
8. 01:26:112 (86112|0) - better move to 4 with respect to 01:23:288 (83288|0) -
9. 01:30:347 - from here imo the notes are snapped not accurately, here is my suggestion about the snapping here(also one way to rearrange them) https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8525621
10. 01:48:700 (108700|3) - this should be a single note, as 01:47:288 (107288|0,107288|1,107288|2,108700|3) -
11. 01:49:847 (109847|1) - ghost note?
12. 02:05:641 - actually you need triple here so add one in leftmost column
13. 02:17:553 (137553|2,137553|3,137641|1,137641|0) - i dont really find any necessity to double them cuz they are not really staning out with a larger volume
14. 02:21:170 - here the sounds should be like this imo: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8525680
15. 03:35:112 (215112|0,215465|2) - these two should also be short LNs
16. 04:10:759 - imo this also needs a double cuz it has same sound as 04:10:847 (250847|1,250847|0) -
17. 04:14:465 - here is supposed to be a double note as the pattern you keep before: 04:13:759 (253759|2,253759|3,254112|0,254112|2,254112|1) - so imo u may delete one note. what's more, u dont use triple here 04:20:112 -
18. 04:23:641 (263641|3,263641|2,263641|0,263994|2,263994|0,263994|3) - u can easily hear that the snare and kick still keeps the same as before, but u use triple notes for all of them instead of using double-triple-double-triple pattern. I guess it is better for you to still use the previous pattern here until 04:28:582 - except u triple this 04:22:935 -

Tofu1222 wrote:

Hey Maxus. M4M Here xddd

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1. 00:27:523 - miss a note
2. 00:30:523 - ^ both of them are too soft, i think the current one already emphasize what i try to do.
3. 00:29:641 (29641|3) - this LN should ends at 00:30:523 - Felt like a residual of her voice, i prefer keeping the flow intact.
4. 00:31:406 (31406|3) - ends at 00:32:288 - same
5. 00:36:170 - 00:30:523 - miss note there's no need to map the soft sound, since it will make the loud sound bland that way.
6. 00:42:700 (42700|3) - ends at 00:43:582 - the same i guess
7. 00:46:935 (46935|3,47112|2) - i guess these are not needed cuz no vocal sound here. If they are mixed with LNs that represent voacl sounds it will seems a little bit messy imo I change into normal note here, no note makes it really awkward when it suddenly empty.
8. 01:26:112 (86112|0) - better move to 4 with respect to 01:23:288 (83288|0) - however theres already 01:22:935 (82935|3,83112|3,83641|3,83818|3) - , it will make the stack even more awkward
9. 01:30:347 - from here imo the notes are snapped not accurately, here is my suggestion about the snapping here(also one way to rearrange them) https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8525621 the whole section there is 1/8 Burst, i can hear each one of them sound, i'm sure of it.
10. 01:48:700 (108700|3) - this should be a single note, as 01:47:288 (107288|0,107288|1,107288|2,108700|3) - no, 2LN for additional vocal "hey hey", while 1 other LN for synth sound i've been follow before.
11. 01:49:847 (109847|1) - ghost note? no, there's clear repeating sound there.
12. 02:05:641 - actually you need triple here so add one in leftmost column seem a bit forcing but oke
13. 02:17:553 (137553|2,137553|3,137641|1,137641|0) - i dont really find any necessity to double them cuz they are not really staning out with a larger volume but they are snare, they quite have bigger sound compared with other single.
14. 02:21:170 - here the sounds should be like this imo: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8525680 it has 1/4 hithat that repeating with quite loud there,that's why i put trill to compensate it.
15. 03:35:112 (215112|0,215465|2) - these two should also be short LNs felt too small sound there, and i don't wanna force the pattern there since it's easy to make it spiky for unknown reasons when handling this.
16. 04:10:759 - imo this also needs a double cuz it has same sound as 04:10:847 (250847|1,250847|0) - this one is a lot smaller than the double after this though.
17. 04:14:465 - here is supposed to be a double note as the pattern you keep before: 04:13:759 (253759|2,253759|3,254112|0,254112|2,254112|1) - so imo u may delete one note. what's more, u dont use triple here 04:20:112 - yeah nice catch here.
18. 04:23:641 (263641|3,263641|2,263641|0,263994|2,263994|0,263994|3) - u can easily hear that the snare and kick still keeps the same as before, but u use triple notes for all of them instead of using double-triple-double-triple pattern. I guess it is better for you to still use the previous pattern here until 04:28:582 - except u triple this 04:22:935 - If you hear and compared the section at 04:19:053 - and 04:22:935 - , you can easily notice the latter part have suddenly additional constant loud crash that consistently sounding, i'm focusing on that instead of bringing the same triple double, if i still use the same, it will be awkward as there's additional emphasizement within the musical composition but i still keep the pattern same right?

I guess that's all. Anyway the pattern looks consistent but interesting for me. Good luck and hope my mods help you!

Syadow- wrote:

aduh gatel tangan w pingin ngemod :v kaget wa wkwk :v

senyum 'w'

01:21:523 - coba kek gini https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8545193 rada aneh kalo ngejack disitu imo bole2 wkwk

01:23:376 - mending ini double in soalnya sama kek 01:23:288 - *vocal + instru* ga ah emng konsepny mw vocalny single jack kyk 02:30:876 (150876|3,150965|3) -

01:24:876 - ga konsisten soalnya tik merah single smua -w- sama suaranya kalem bgt mending single aja sama yg di tik biru 01:24:965 - klo mw dibandingin sama yg suaranya sama laa wkkw, mksd wa yg 01:27:347 (87347|3,87347|2,87435|3,87435|2) - , mrka brdua drum yg sama jd layeringnya sama

01:26:200 - sama sama

01:27:435 - single owo ga sama suaranya kek 01:27:347 - sama kyk pnjelasan sblmny jg

01:32:288 (92288|2) - move ke 01:32:376 - ganti ke normal note, 01:32:288 - disini msh kalem jgn double uwu synth nya dah kedengeran jelas itu.. tapi wa ubah dikit dsini

01:42:170 - yah kalo mau ini double / dibuat jack soalnya kick tp ga fokus konsep disana jdiny imo ini udh ckup

01:49:670 (109670|3) - move ke col 3 ga ena bgt ngejack soalnya suara jack abis itu ada suara woe woe 01:49:229 (109229|3,109318|3,109759|1,109847|1) ga konsisten donk nnti ama 01:49:229 (109229|3,109318|3) - , lgpula woe ny trlalu ngeblend bkal aneh klo tiba2 mw ngikut dia -

01:54:435 (114435|0) - move ke col 2 biar lebih ena diliat wkwkw mw fokus konsep ama 04:09:523 - jadi imo jack skrg fine

01:54:523 (114523|2) - ini pendekin ke 01:54:700 - suaranya abis disitu n sebelah nya cover suara yg msh ada ada SV loh.. klo dipendekin SV nya bakal jelek ama LN nya nnti

01:55:053 (115053|1,115053|0,115318|2,115318|3) - suara nya sama nih =w= lebih ena buat col yg sama kek gini 01:55:229 - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8545354
sama 01:55:759 - dipisah biar lebih ngefeel n pas sama suara vocalnya 01:55:318 (115318|3,115318|2,115406|1,115406|0) - 2 double notes ini jg sbnernya smua snare, tp wa ambil yg lebih ngeflownya ja biar enak wkwk

02:13:318 (133318|0) - hmm move col 2 biar col 1 ga full anchor :V flow jumptrillny jd agk aneh imo krna biasanya col 1 ama col 4 lebih enak dijadiin fondasi stack biar fokus readabilitynya dapet

02:14:200 - ini timingnya unsnaped kah ? mantep dah nice catch owo

02:17:288 - mungkin http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8545377 lebih ena, oiya 02:17:818 - ku jadiin ke note biasa aja emphasis ke LN 02:17:994 - boleh,
wa arrange dikit biar lbih dapet imo

02:32:641 (152641|1,152641|0,152729|0,152729|1) - aduh aneh bgt mas ;w; ini mending single buat jack aja, ga terlalu keras jd susah kenotice drumnya kdngeran bgt suaranya sama.. apalagi drum ini jg msti dibedain drpd jack vocal lainny, klo single jack nnti keduanya jadi sama patternnya jadi aneh..

02:35:112 - how about this ? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8545406 bagian vocalnya yg ku biru2. sama flownya kurang ngeh kalo ngejack jngn jumptrill again .. jacknya buat drum udh ngeemphasis instrumenny lbih bgus, konsisten ama tmpt laen lalu ksih variasi laen jg drpd jumptrill trus..

02:52:935 (172935|0) - move ke 02:52:759 - n jadiin LN, pas kok sama suara huu - uuu ktauan ga liat SV ane ini mah wkwkwk..

02:57:788 - ga terlalu keras imo jd single aja sama kyk sblmny lg

03:32:465 (212465|1,212553|0) - swap col lebih ena nanti konsep flow 03:32:288 (212288|1,212376|2,212553|0,212641|3,212818|2,212906|1) - jadi ga konsisten..

04:10:229 - gini ? biar variasi dari kiai awal https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8545551 wa ngrasa patternny rada antiflow ke kiri smua wkwk, keep dlu dah

04:32:818 - gmana kalo ini single2 aja, kesannya maksa gitu kan pas bagian kalem itu double LN krna synthnya menonjol banget disitu..lgpula imo itu bukan bagian kalem, tapi transisi dari suara berisik burst ke bagian kalem, jadi mw ksih layering tebel buat ksih impression trkhir sblm mrka masuk ke bagian kalem

gud lak >w<

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00:36:700 (36700|2,37053|2) - is it necessary for vocal, ofc important

01:30:347 - suggestion: , reason is more emphasizing this sound 01:30:700 , [23] double is more noticeable around these rolls than [14] it results in making the burst too linear, the current one already utilize it properly

01:54:876 (114876|0,115053|0,115229|0,115406|0,115670|0) - maybe avoid this Intentional, it has same snare sound, so the stack is there to accenting that particular sound.

01:58:935 - and 01:59:641 - are absolutely similar, I see you did such a patterns to alternate hand loadings from left ro right, but if we count the number of jacks in every hand, we can see:

left hand: 7 jacks 01:59:112 (119112|1,119288|1,119818|1,119994|1,119994|0,120170|0,120347|0) -
right hand:3 jacks 01:59:288 (119288|3,119465|3,119641|3) -

so you might want to make it more balanced idk how you count 01:59:288 (119288|1) - as jack.. as the LN actually empty space without density to hit anything , only hold thing.. the jack is more or less actually already balance with 01:59:288 (119288|3,119465|3,119641|3) - hitting three times,
and 01:59:994 (119994|0,120170|0,120347|0) - also three times..

02:00:700 (120700|1,120876|1,121229|1,121406|0,121406|1,121582|0) - unbalance counter it with 02:01:935 (121935|3,122112|2,122112|3,122465|3,122465|2,122818|2,122818|3) -
02:12:347 (132347|1,132523|1,132700|0,132700|1,132876|0) - ^ the right hand double at 02:13:053 - is denser to mitigate that

02:34:053 (154053|0,154097|1,154229|0,154229|1,154406|1,154582|1) - is this intended 02:34:406 (154406|1,154494|0,154582|1,154670|0) - here is to mirror 02:34:759 (154759|2,154847|3,154935|2,155023|3) - so the overall structure is already balancing out by itself.

02:40:229 (160229|0,160318|0) - no reason for this vocal, and i actually do it consistently jacking vocal across my map here..

03:21:523 (201523|3,201612|3) - ^ why? looks really weird and out of place idk what's awkward with that.. literally i already place the jack within same column of the 2 pattern at 03:21:523 (201523|3,201612|3,202759|3,202935|3) - in col 4 where jack is the easiest to hit.

03:37:935 (217935|0,218023|3) - ctrl+h for balance and do some fixes for no colflicts in next notes it will result in more inbalance because the final result will be that you make even more one hand trill which make the denser part like these jumptrill becoming harder to hit and explore more efficiently.

03:50:729 (230729|3,230906|2) - these should make a jack, because you did a jack in previous same moment 03:49:318 (229318|0,229494|0) - or remove jack at all they both are different.. if you want to make comparison do it with 04:02:200 - , because i also make jack at 04:00:612 - but didn't do it at the 04:02:200 - simply because they are different.

04:39:876 (279876|1,280053|3,285523|1,285700|0,288170|3,288347|2,288523|0,291170|2,291347|3) - these should be jacks the one i make jack is rapid 1/4 not 1/2..

04:45:523 - hitsounds are too loud by this point, especially in the end. please reduce the volume fair enough, reduce to 20%

02:35:465 (155465|1,155465|2,155553|2,155553|1) - make it [34] [34] for avoiding unbalance 02:35:112 (155112|1,155200|1,155465|1,155553|1) - I make the pattern at 02:35:641 - focusing direction to right side to mitigate that.. i don't consider the jack has to be really different column since it's actually the closing intersection to other section and still easy to hit.

game rock wrote:

I really love this map >w< take 2 stars! <3


Good Luck

Verniy_Chan wrote:

Belum di HSin ya? :3

Shinzo- wrote:

M4M

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01:05:288 (65288|0) - saran aja sih LN nya jadiin normal note yg ini karna di part 01:06:700 (66700|3,66965|2,67229|0) - kmu cuman layer yg keras aja suaranya, sementara 01:06:347 - ga dilayer. biar seimbang juga di 01:05:288 - 3 LN kecil di 01:06:700 - juga 3. lagian 01:06:347 - lebih kedengeran suaranya dari 01:05:288 - (referensi 03:21:876 - ) make them all consistently have short LN.
01:10:847 - unnesecary SV. necessary, the instrument has sudden stop feeling there.
01:40:935 - salah satu jadiin LN ? saran aja sih soalny ssemua suara begini dibikin LN ? i'm sure there's only crash?
01:41:818 (101818|3,101994|2) - tuker ? pitch ny sama 3x dan di part ini cuman itu yg ga sampe 3 same collumn nya, yang laen sampe 3 (01:35:465 (95465|3,95818|3,96170|3) - 01:46:759 (106759|3,107112|3,107465|3) - I know what you meant, but 01:41:818 (101818|3) - is still higher than 01:41:994 (101994|2) - , if i reverse it just for sake of that consistency, the pitch distinction will be incorrect inconsistent, so i prefer sacrifice the one that i find more minor there.
02:13:670 (133670|0) - mungkin ini dibikin 1 note doang karna patternnya mo divariasiin di 02:13:759 - tapi yang 02:13:318 - malah jadi gaje gitu kenapa cuman satu note, mungkin maxudmu biar konsisten ama 02:13:670 - tapi nantinya 02:14:023 - ini yg gaje knp 2 note. saran ane sih 02:14:023 - aja yg dibikin1 note biar konsisten ama 02:15:082 - ato kalo ngga pattern 02:13:406 (133406|3,133406|2,133494|1,133494|0,133582|2,133582|3) - diganti aja biar ga gaje (rerferensi 04:28:935 (268935|2,268935|1,269023|0,269023|3,269112|2,269112|1) - ) well the core basic of my jumptrill pattern is that, every three double like 02:13:053 (133053|2,133053|3,133141|0,133141|1,133229|3,133229|2) - , it will have single note except for the one direct to the LN simply because it's too short to give the transition, I do the consistent one at 04:29:288 - too so i won't try to break it as it has coordination with other pattern too.
02:18:700 - ini kiai nya ga brenti di sini aja ? biar sama kek 04:34:229 - nais
02:40:318 (160318|0) - aga gangerti sih ini kenapa jack xD cuman denger sih ada drum kecil kek exho doang, mending gausah jack vocal,
and that's one of core pattern i think make the section flows naturally
03:14:112 (194112|0) - saran ane sih ini di move aja ke kolom 3 biar player ngerti ini udah ngikut suara 03:13:759(193759|2,193935|3,194112|0,194288|3,194465|0,194641|1,194818|0,194994|1) - udah bukan 03:12:347 (192347|0,192612|0,192876|0,193141|0,193406|0,193582|3) - karna kalo 03:13:935 (193935|3,194288|3) - kayak begini nanti dikira masih ngikut suara yg tadi tapi 1/2 jadi malah bingung nanti i move to 03:14:023 - instead, just realize i still suppose to follow the col 1 sound.
03:35:112 - missing LN ? denger lagi coba (referensi 03:57:700 - ) changed, quite nice
03:41:641 (221641|1,221641|0,221729|0,221729|1) - jack nya di 34 aja gimana ? xD soalnya tadi ditangan kiri 03:38:818 (218818|0,218818|1,218906|1,218906|0) - iya ane tau sih bakal ribet nge re-pattern, tapi ya terserah deh ane cuman bilang aja xD felt like for consistency of same sound also alright, the current isn't that heavy left tbh even with those jack.
03:47:994 (227994|0,228082|0) - saran aja sih gausah jack.. aneh aja gitu gatau napa jack good point, switch column to avoid that
03:57:523 - mungkin diatur lagi LN nya kebanyakan di kolom 3 4 padahal pitch nya aga merendah There's three repeating pitch occured there, at 03:57:788 (237788|2,237876|3,238053|2,238141|3,238582|3,238759|2,238847|3) - if you heard the instrument synth repeating so i make LN repeating too, it's similar concept with how i went from 03:35:200 -
04:28:053 (268053|2,268141|0,268406|3,268494|2) - gimana kalo ini dibikin jack ato apa kek buat nge emphasize 1/4 kick nya soalny kyk contoh 04:25:670 (265670|0,265670|1) - kan di bikin 2 note yeah it can
04:32:288 - harusnya 2 note sih biar konsisten sama 04:31:759 (271759|0,271759|1,271935|1,271935|2,272641|0,272641|3) - (referensi 02:16:406) Wrong reference, the correct one is at 02:16:715 - , the third finish is at 1/8, it's awkward but somehow that the composer want, so i just follow since it is accurate snap but doesn't hinder playability anyway

GL ay

Verniy_Chan wrote:

Hi Maxus aka DixonBW

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4K = |1|2|3|4|
| W (Whistle) | C (Clap) | F (Finish) |

(Focus : Pattern , Pitch, Hitsounds)

General

1. Berhubungan mapnya belum di HS, baiklah saya yang HS kan (gak asik ngemod gak ada HSnya XD)
   Download contohnya https://puu.sh/wTzJP.rar

yay makasih >w<

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OD : 7,8
HP : 8,7

1. 00:08:818 (8818|2,8994|0) - 00:11:641 (11641|2,11818|3) - mungkin ini bisa dijadikan satu kolom untuk vocal, biar ngikutin mirror pattern dari 00:05:994 (5994|1,6170|1) - atau mungkin sebaliknya ga disngaja prtamany si itu, ane jg ga ktmu cra buat bkin smuany sama kolom tanpa ngeremap smua wkwk, jdi mnurut ane rda "ngmksa" klo remap cma untuk itu, jadi keep dulu.
2. 00:46:229 - add note untuk konsistensi suara clap seperti 00:39:170 - 00:44:818 - ok sip
3. 01:10:759 - apakah disini sengaja gak pasang note untuk suara tom drum seperti 01:10:406 - 01:10:582 - ? oh ya, ada SV rupanya XD dipasang note pun suarany buyar bgt dsitu xd, lebih krasa klo emphasize pake SV -w-
4. 01:15:700 (75700|3,76053|2) - bukannya harus satu kolom karena pitchnya mirip sepeti 01:12:876 (72876|2,73229|2) - ngghh ane ykin yg ini pitchny beda ._. , LN prtama soalny kasa bgt tinggi pitchny dibanding yg kdua , klo yg di example mlah bner2 sama pitch imo
5. 01:27:170 - mungkin tertarik jadiin LN untuk suara 'Auu' seperti 01:26:465 (86465|0,86818|3) - lel saya tertarik disini >w<
6. 01:38:288 (98288|2,98641|1,98994|2) - sama seperti di atas, tapi kalau untuk variasi pattern gpp sih ga ad auu tapi ._.
7. 01:49:759 (109759|1,109847|1) - sepertinya gak cocok ini dijadiin mini jack, karena agak beda pitchnya dari sebelumnya 01:49:229 (109229|3,109318|3,109582|3,109670|3) - kalau bisa 01:49:759 (109759|1,109847|1) - salah satu pindah ke |1| dimodifikasi agar cocok dsini
8. 02:49:935 (169935|1,170112|1,170288|1,170465|1) - mungkin hindari anchor ringan seperti ini, 02:49:935 (169935|1) - pindah ke |1|
9. 02:55:670 - 02:56:376 - 02:57:082 - ini sengaja ya, gak pasang note seperti konsistensi dari blue line 02:53:553 - 02:54:259 - 02:54:965 - iya , klo setiap kali ketemu wall LN seperti itu, ane ga pake 1/4 karena bakal ngmaksa bgt disitu, jadi konsistensinya wktu tiap kali ada wall LN , 1/4 ga bakal mncul.
10. 03:43:053 - mungkin add note disini untuk impact suara keras + vocal effect, atau kalau tidak jadikan LN salah satu SN, sama halnya di bagian 04:05:641 - hmm , klo jadi triple disana jdi agak mmbingungkan soalny 03:43:406 - ja double tp malah lebih keras soundnya (karena jumptrillnya biar ga ngemaksa jg sih xd)

Notes : Hadeh~ sulit nyari yang error lagi selain di atas, sangat solid patternnya

msih noob x.x

Verniy_Chan wrote:

Score

88,5

(1-100)

just for fun only, don’t take it seriously

Nice Mapset, terutama LN Sectionnya >w<
Tebar bintang kejora
Хорошо~ Good Luck..

Kawawa wrote:

Hello Maxus! bloblob 'W' wawa moeee >w<>w< :blopblop owo!!!:

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01:08:553 (68553|2,68641|3) - This rhythm kinda weird to me.
I recognized that around LNs are followed vocal rhythm, and the start vocal place is here 01:08:465 -
Recommend this :: http://puu.sh/xdAV5/83d9fedb7b.jpg yeah this is kinda my mistake x_x , thank you for catching this!

02:18:347 - to 02:18:700 - It's 1/6 rhythm from 02:17:994 -
Just a feedback :: http://puu.sh/xdBEn/b251329fa1.jpg
(If you want to use those case LNs bundle, then the SV timing also should be changed something)
or just change that rhythm as 1/6th. Anyway It's up to what you want! yeah should be 1/6 rythm there, i hear it wrongly before xd , changed!

02:28:406 (148406|3,148450|2) - reverse it as 3 to 4 column?
because It's same patterning with below 02:27:347 (147347|3,147391|2,147435|0,147479|1) - so can have a various patterns. yeah it should be for different feeling owo

02:30:700 (150700|0) - I think you can add "W" hitsound here. add it, and also to all similar part.

02:32:994 - Add a note for kick drum, there is a drum added. compared with 02:31:229 -
you can ignore that, but I considered your structure that you added some note by snare durm sound. hmm I consider it too small sound for double note considering the density of the pattern around the section. If i add that, would be too dense because i need to add for other small snare too.

03:37:406 (217406|0,217494|2,217582|0,217670|2) - If you're not use 1/8th, then personally I prefer to jack for vocal vibration.
Feedback :: http://puu.sh/xdCrR/24ad74f999.jpg
It's not really difficult, and It follow the concept of the vocal vibration jack that you expressed from the below part. I tried to make the vocal vibration here consistent with 01:21:876 - , My pattern before also use jack here, but i consider them to have different feeling with vocal bundle in kiai i use for jack.

04:03:965 - You can make here two, I feel it also intense like 04:04:141 -
Feedback :: http://puu.sh/xdCzU/a8b38eb85e.jpg I consider 04:03:876 - To also have big sound, so i will make this double LN too.

04:28:406 (268406|3,268494|3) - It also should be same hitsound with 04:28:053 (268053|0,268141|0) - as your intention. Sorry my mistake x.x

04:31:053 - to 04:31:406 - here is synth sound part.
04:31:406 - to 04:31:759 - here is drum roll.
What I mean that they have different feelings to each other, but chart is same stair-ing.
If you can seperate the two part visually, then It can be better to feel when playing.
The first part is a good as an example 02:15:523 - to 02:16:229 - yeah i understand, will change here.

That's it. I could finish all the confirmation quickly
pretty cool!

Critical_Star wrote:

'x' hug cat 'x'
some little stuff before we get to qualify >w<

NYEELL!
00:24:259 - suggestion to break at 4th col so it look much neater , > http://puu.sh/xkQDi/1e23cc8e23.png really nice uwu
01:32:818 - double like 01:33:170 - i think they just having the same vocal clap yeah correct -w-
01:48:700 (108700|3) - make normal note? before u did with double LN + normal note hmm 3 LN is from synth like 01:48:347 (108347|2) -
(1 LN) + Hey sound (2 LN)
02:08:112 (128112|1,128112|3,128112|2,128818|0,128818|2,128818|3,129523|2,129523|3,129523|1) - make double here to differentiate the sound impact? The beat sound almost the same here so i wanna make them all triple. to differentiate with part before at 01:41:288 (101288|0,101288|1,101641|0,101641|1,101641|3) -
03:02:818 (182818|1,182818|0,183170|2,183523|3) - suggestion > http://puu.sh/xkR0y/b2b4d30d70.png i love it , but i have SV here, so the impact makes the 1/4 shield a bit too surprising imo, but i rearrange according to yours >w<
04:33:523 - suggestion > http://puu.sh/xkRas/b53e8367a6.png err maybe nvm lol tbh i really like it 'w' , really flowy for me >w<
04:40:935 - missed a double note here nice catch owo
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