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Maxus

Sarahkuai wrote:

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pake B.Indonesia saja ya <(")
[box=SHOUT!]00:23:112 - lho kok ga ada notenya, padahal ada suaranya lho
00:23:288 (23288|2) - nih LN jgn mulainya disini aja 00:23:465 (23465|2) - biar sinkron sama pitchnya persiapan masuk ke wall LN nya
00:23:465 (23465|2) - tambah 1 note (jadiin jack, effect echo) sama, jack rda ga cocok ma suasananya yg masih tenang
00:27:347 - ^
00:27:876 - ^
00:29:288 - ^
00:30:170 - ^
00:32:288 - ^
00:32:994 - ^
00:36:170 - tambah 1 note sama smua, wa ngikutny yg piano ato synthny lbih kdngeran jelas.
03:05:112 - ^ oke utk ini
03:26:200 - dari sini sampai 03:26:376 - kenapa gk di ganti sama stair/roll aja? snap 1/8 http://prntscr.com/fcmmm0 ga ad 1/8 disini yg gw dnger, adny 1/4 synth buat LN, keep dah
tbh GOOD MAP NOODLES <3 D:
Gud Lak uwu
Makasih ya buat modny ^^
AncuL

owo ok

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00:18:347 (18347|2,18523|2,18700|2,18876|2,19053|2,19229|2) - anchornya panjang banget. mungkin di sini bisa rearrange notenya dikit
00:19:229 (19229|1,19406|1,19582|1,19759|1,19935|1,20112|1) - ^
00:56:818 (56818|3,56818|2,57347|3,57523|2) - tukar posisi buat PR
01:02:641 (62641|1,62818|2,63170|2,63170|1,63523|2,63700|1,64053|1) - ^
01:05:906 - tambahin satu not karena ada suara
01:07:318 - ^
01:08:641 (68641|1) - LN tailnya mungkin bisa dipendekin ke 01:08:994 - , ato nggak di part itu dibikin kayak gini buat konsistensi
01:10:406 (70406|2) - pindah ke telunjuk kiri karena suara di situ sama kayak di 01:10:582 -
01:11:465 (71465|2,71641|1) - ctrl+h buat PR
01:16:229 (76229|3,76406|0) - ^
01:18:347 (78347|2,78523|3,78876|3) - ini flip, 01:19:229 (79229|1,79406|3) - ini flip buat PR yang lebih baik
01:32:023 (92023|2,92112|1) - ctrl+h biar suaranya lebih keemphasize
01:33:347 (93347|0) - ini dijadiin not biasa terus 01:33:523 - ditambah satu not buat cymbal
02:05:641 (125641|0,125818|3) - ctrl+h biar suara vokal di 02:05:465 - lebih teremphasize dengan anchor
02:12:523 - add 1 not?
02:12:876 - ^
02:13:318 (133318|0,133670|0,134729|3,135082|2,135435|2) - 2 note? pattern kayak gini nggak masalah kok asalkan minijacknya di telunjuk
02:28:759 - kurangin 1
02:38:729 (158729|2,159082|2,159435|2) - 2 note aja tbh. mungkin bakal bikin beberapa minijack disini
02:58:229 - ^, mungkin ganti patternnya setiap 2 beat aja
03:03:876 - slowjamnya nggak kerasa. mungkin turunin ke 0.75x
03:21:523 (201523|3,201612|3) - ??????
03:26:465 - entah kenapa di bagian ini pas dimainin kerasa agak nggak nyaman. kayak ada perasaan tubuh nggak seimbang (mungkin karena gw emang nggak suka LN yang panjangnya cuma 1/4)
04:05:994 - jacknya di telunjuk pls :<
04:25:053 (265053|1,265053|0,265053|2,265141|3,265229|1,265318|3,265406|2,265406|1,265406|0,265494|3,265582|2) - coba rearrange biar 04:25:582 - bisa pake 2 not tanpa minijacking
04:27:170 - 2 not
04:28:053 (268053|2,268141|0,268406|3,268494|2) - 2 not
04:28:582 - kayak yang di atas (jangan takut bikin mapnya susah karena bagian ini emang bagian paling "epic" dari lagunya (bagian intro yang paling nggak kedengeran suaranya aja dibikin minijack masa ini nggak o3o))
cuma segini yang bisa gw dapet. kalo misalnya nggak setuju bilang aja.
good luck! :D
Topic Starter
Maxus

AncuL wrote:


owo ok

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00:18:347 (18347|2,18523|2,18700|2,18876|2,19053|2,19229|2) - anchornya panjang banget. mungkin di sini bisa rearrange notenya dikit
00:19:229 (19229|1,19406|1,19582|1,19759|1,19935|1,20112|1) - ^ dah wa coba, tp noteny jd antara nge OH trill lagi / shield/ aneh flowny, mnurut wa anchornya sama2 ngemirror 1 sama lain jadi strukturny msh dapet disitu.
00:56:818 (56818|3,56818|2,57347|3,57523|2) - tukar posisi buat PR ok struktur lebih baik
01:02:641 (62641|1,62818|2,63170|2,63170|1,63523|2,63700|1,64053|1) - ^ ok juga
01:05:906 - tambahin satu not karena ada suara fokus di red line ma white line dsini soalny pke LN kcil, klo blue line rda rumit imo.
01:07:318 - ^ ^
01:08:641 (68641|1) - LN tailnya mungkin bisa dipendekin ke 01:08:994 - , ato nggak di part itu dibikin kayak gini buat konsistensi rearrange ndirii
01:10:406 (70406|2) - pindah ke telunjuk kiri karena suara di situ sama kayak di 01:10:582 - agak ngmksa noteny dsitu imo, rda terdesak,
yg skrg lbi enak imo.

01:11:465 (71465|2,71641|1) - ctrl+h buat PR ok sip
01:16:229 (76229|3,76406|0) - ^ yang ini ga, krna mw bkin struktur OH LN di part atasnya..
01:18:347 (78347|2,78523|3,78876|3) - ini flip, 01:19:229 (79229|1,79406|3) - ini flip buat PR yang lebih baiknanti ga konsisten ama 01:17:288 (77288|3,77818|3) - , LN di 01:19:229 (79229|1,79406|3) - wa ykin dh ssuai jg PRnya.
01:32:023 (92023|2,92112|1) - ctrl+h biar suaranya lebih keemphasize bole2x
01:33:347 (93347|0) - ini dijadiin not biasa terus 01:33:523 - ditambah satu not buat cymbal ok rearrange dikit
02:05:641 (125641|0,125818|3) - ctrl+h biar suara vokal di 02:05:465 - lebih teremphasize dengan anchor nice one
02:12:523 - add 1 not?
02:12:876 - ^ ga dulu dah, biar start sblm jumptrillny lebih stabil buat dipencet
02:13:318 (133318|0,133670|0,134729|3,135082|2,135435|2) - 2 note? pattern kayak gini nggak masalah kok asalkan minijacknya di telunjuk bagi wa minijack telunjuk justru susah wkwk, tp ini mmang sngaja biar adem2 di awal
02:28:759 - kurangin 1 emphasisny lmyn kuat dsini
02:38:729 (158729|2,159082|2,159435|2) - 2 note aja tbh. mungkin bakal bikin beberapa minijack disini ga mw minijack di dense partny wkwk
02:58:229 - ^, mungkin ganti patternnya setiap 2 beat aja sama.
03:03:876 - slowjamnya nggak kerasa. mungkin turunin ke 0.75x oh iya bener
03:21:523 (201523|3,201612|3) - ?????? sngaja wkwk, strukturny jg krng lbih sama kyk 03:22:759 (202759|3,202935|3) - yg scara progresif lbih ssh drpd sblmny
03:26:465 - entah kenapa di bagian ini pas dimainin kerasa agak nggak nyaman. kayak ada perasaan tubuh nggak seimbang (mungkin karena gw emang nggak suka LN yang panjangnya cuma 1/4) bbrp mmang wa sngaja ga seimbangin , tp hrsny udh keseimbang sndiriny krna wa bkin ga seimbang di 1 sisi, 1 sisinya lagi dibkin ga seimbang, biar flownya dapet, tapi wa rearrange lg.
04:05:994 - jacknya di telunjuk pls :< ga mw :> , sukany jack jari tengah
04:25:053 (265053|1,265053|0,265053|2,265141|3,265229|1,265318|3,265406|2,265406|1,265406|0,265494|3,265582|2) - coba rearrange biar 04:25:582 - bisa pake 2 not tanpa minijacking rda ngmksa ama bkin pattern laen jd ilang flowny, bgi wa ga pa2 ngrbanin dkit klo misalny strukturny dapet
04:27:170 - 2 not iyahh
04:28:053 (268053|2,268141|0,268406|3,268494|2) - 2 not gaa
04:28:582 - kayak yang di atas (jangan takut bikin mapnya susah karena bagian ini emang bagian paling "epic" dari lagunya (bagian intro yang paling nggak kedengeran suaranya aja dibikin minijack masa ini nggak o3o)campur aduk sih orang ama pattern dsini, bbrp bilangnya malah mereka ga suka klo misalnya dah mw slese marathonny tiba2 patternny malah bkin mrka ilang skornya, jadi wa tetep agak simplistik dsini wkkw, lgpula intro memang ad suara khas ndiri dan lebih ga dense :p
cuma segini yang bisa gw dapet. kalo misalnya nggak setuju bilang aja.
good luck! :D
Makasih ancul modnya, tuh bagus modnya wkwk
nnti wa dteng ke map lu
Shima Rin
Hey Maxus. M4M Here xddd ;)

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  1. 00:27:523 - miss a note
  2. 00:30:523 - ^
  3. 00:29:641 (29641|3) - this LN should ends at 00:30:523 -
  4. 00:31:406 (31406|3) - ends at 00:32:288 -
  5. 00:36:170 - 00:30:523 - miss note
  6. 00:42:700 (42700|3) - ends at 00:43:582 -
  7. 00:46:935 (46935|3,47112|2) - i guess these are not needed cuz no vocal sound here. If they are mixed with LNs that represent voacl sounds it will seems a little bit messy imo
  8. 01:26:112 (86112|0) - better move to 4 with respect to 01:23:288 (83288|0) -
  9. 01:30:347 - from here imo the notes are snapped not accurately, here is my suggestion about the snapping here(also one way to rearrange them) https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8525621
  10. 01:48:700 (108700|3) - this should be a single note, as 01:47:288 (107288|0,107288|1,107288|2,108700|3) -
  11. 01:49:847 (109847|1) - ghost note?
  12. 02:05:641 - actually you need triple here so add one in leftmost column
  13. 02:17:553 (137553|2,137553|3,137641|1,137641|0) - i dont really find any necessity to double them cuz they are not really staning out with a larger volume
  14. 02:21:170 - here the sounds should be like this imo: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8525680
  15. 03:35:112 (215112|0,215465|2) - these two should also be short LNs
  16. 04:10:759 - imo this also needs a double cuz it has same sound as 04:10:847 (250847|1,250847|0) -
  17. 04:14:465 - here is supposed to be a double note as the pattern you keep before: 04:13:759 (253759|2,253759|3,254112|0,254112|2,254112|1) - so imo u may delete one note. what's more, u dont use triple here 04:20:112 -
  18. 04:23:641 (263641|3,263641|2,263641|0,263994|2,263994|0,263994|3) - u can easily hear that the snare and kick still keeps the same as before, but u use triple notes for all of them instead of using double-triple-double-triple pattern. I guess it is better for you to still use the previous pattern here until 04:28:582 - except u triple this 04:22:935 -
I guess that's all. Anyway the pattern looks consistent but interesting for me. Good luck and hope my mods help you! ;)
Topic Starter
Maxus

Tofu1222 wrote:

Hey Maxus. M4M Here xddd ;)

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  1. 00:27:523 - miss a note
  2. 00:30:523 - ^ both of them are too soft, i think the current one already emphasize what i try to do.
  3. 00:29:641 (29641|3) - this LN should ends at 00:30:523 - Felt like a residual of her voice, i prefer keeping the flow intact.
  4. 00:31:406 (31406|3) - ends at 00:32:288 - same
  5. 00:36:170 - 00:30:523 - miss note there's no need to map the soft sound, since it will make the loud sound bland that way.
  6. 00:42:700 (42700|3) - ends at 00:43:582 - the same i guess
  7. 00:46:935 (46935|3,47112|2) - i guess these are not needed cuz no vocal sound here. If they are mixed with LNs that represent voacl sounds it will seems a little bit messy imo I change into normal note here, no note makes it really awkward when it suddenly empty.
  8. 01:26:112 (86112|0) - better move to 4 with respect to 01:23:288 (83288|0) - however theres already 01:22:935 (82935|3,83112|3,83641|3,83818|3) - , it will make the stack even more awkward
  9. 01:30:347 - from here imo the notes are snapped not accurately, here is my suggestion about the snapping here(also one way to rearrange them) https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8525621 the whole section there is 1/8 Burst, i can hear each one of them sound, i'm sure of it.
  10. 01:48:700 (108700|3) - this should be a single note, as 01:47:288 (107288|0,107288|1,107288|2,108700|3) - no, 2LN for additional vocal "hey hey", while 1 other LN for synth sound i've been follow before.
  11. 01:49:847 (109847|1) - ghost note? no, there's clear repeating sound there.
  12. 02:05:641 - actually you need triple here so add one in leftmost column seem a bit forcing but oke
  13. 02:17:553 (137553|2,137553|3,137641|1,137641|0) - i dont really find any necessity to double them cuz they are not really staning out with a larger volume but they are snare, they quite have bigger sound compared with other single.
  14. 02:21:170 - here the sounds should be like this imo: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8525680 it has 1/4 hithat that repeating with quite loud there,that's why i put trill to compensate it.
  15. 03:35:112 (215112|0,215465|2) - these two should also be short LNs felt too small sound there, and i don't wanna force the pattern there since it's easy to make it spiky for unknown reasons when handling this.
  16. 04:10:759 - imo this also needs a double cuz it has same sound as 04:10:847 (250847|1,250847|0) - this one is a lot smaller than the double after this though.
  17. 04:14:465 - here is supposed to be a double note as the pattern you keep before: 04:13:759 (253759|2,253759|3,254112|0,254112|2,254112|1) - so imo u may delete one note. what's more, u dont use triple here 04:20:112 - yeah nice catch here.
  18. 04:23:641 (263641|3,263641|2,263641|0,263994|2,263994|0,263994|3) - u can easily hear that the snare and kick still keeps the same as before, but u use triple notes for all of them instead of using double-triple-double-triple pattern. I guess it is better for you to still use the previous pattern here until 04:28:582 - except u triple this 04:22:935 - If you hear and compared the section at 04:19:053 - and 04:22:935 - , you can easily notice the latter part have suddenly additional constant loud crash that consistently sounding, i'm focusing on that instead of bringing the same triple double, if i still use the same, it will be awkward as there's additional emphasizement within the musical composition but i still keep the pattern same right?
I guess that's all. Anyway the pattern looks consistent but interesting for me. Good luck and hope my mods help you! ;)
Thank you food!
Syadow-
aduh gatel tangan w pingin ngemod :v
senyum 'w'
01:21:523 - coba kek gini https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8545193 rada aneh kalo ngejack disitu imo

01:23:376 - mending ini double in soalnya sama kek 01:23:288 - *vocal + instru*

01:24:876 - ga konsisten soalnya tik merah single smua -w- sama suaranya kalem bgt mending single aja sama yg di tik biru 01:24:965 -

01:26:200 - sama

01:27:435 - single owo ga sama suaranya kek 01:27:347 -

01:32:288 (92288|2) - move ke 01:32:376 - ganti ke normal note, 01:32:288 - disini msh kalem jgn double uwu

01:42:170 - yah kalo mau ini double / dibuat jack soalnya kick

01:49:670 (109670|3) - move ke col 3 ga ena bgt ngejack soalnya suara jack abis itu ada suara woe woe 01:49:229 (109229|3,109318|3,109759|1,109847|1) -
01:54:435 (114435|0) - move ke col 2 biar lebih ena diliat wkwkw

01:54:523 (114523|2) - ini pendekin ke 01:54:700 - suaranya abis disitu n sebelah nya cover suara yg msh ada

01:55:053 (115053|1,115053|0,115318|2,115318|3) - suara nya sama nih =w= lebih ena buat col yg sama kek gini 01:55:229 - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8545354
sama 01:55:759 - dipisah biar lebih ngefeel n pas sama suara vocalnya

02:13:318 (133318|0) - hmm move col 2 biar col 1 ga full anchor :V

02:14:200 - ini timingnya unsnaped kah ?

02:17:288 - mungkin http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8545377 lebih ena, oiya 02:17:818 - ku jadiin ke note biasa aja emphasis ke LN 02:17:994 -

02:32:641 (152641|1,152641|0,152729|0,152729|1) - aduh aneh bgt mas ;w; ini mending single buat jack aja, ga terlalu keras jd susah kenotice

02:35:112 - how about this ? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8545406 bagian vocalnya yg ku biru2. sama flownya kurang ngeh kalo ngejack

02:52:935 (172935|0) - move ke 02:52:759 - n jadiin LN, pas kok sama suara huu - uuu

02:57:788 - ga terlalu keras imo jd single aja

03:32:465 (212465|1,212553|0) - swap col lebih ena

04:10:229 - gini ? biar variasi dari kiai awal https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8545551

04:32:818 - gmana kalo ini single2 aja, kesannya maksa gitu kan pas bagian kalem
gud lak >w<
Topic Starter
Maxus

Syadow- wrote:

aduh gatel tangan w pingin ngemod :v kaget wa wkwk :v
senyum 'w'
01:21:523 - coba kek gini https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8545193 rada aneh kalo ngejack disitu imo bole2 wkwk

01:23:376 - mending ini double in soalnya sama kek 01:23:288 - *vocal + instru* ga ah emng konsepny mw vocalny single jack kyk 02:30:876 (150876|3,150965|3) -

01:24:876 - ga konsisten soalnya tik merah single smua -w- sama suaranya kalem bgt mending single aja sama yg di tik biru 01:24:965 - klo mw dibandingin sama yg suaranya sama laa wkkw, mksd wa yg 01:27:347 (87347|3,87347|2,87435|3,87435|2) - , mrka brdua drum yg sama jd layeringnya sama

01:26:200 - sama sama

01:27:435 - single owo ga sama suaranya kek 01:27:347 - sama kyk pnjelasan sblmny jg

01:32:288 (92288|2) - move ke 01:32:376 - ganti ke normal note, 01:32:288 - disini msh kalem jgn double uwu synth nya dah kedengeran jelas itu.. tapi wa ubah dikit dsini

01:42:170 - yah kalo mau ini double / dibuat jack soalnya kick tp ga fokus konsep disana jdiny imo ini udh ckup

01:49:670 (109670|3) - move ke col 3 ga ena bgt ngejack soalnya suara jack abis itu ada suara woe woe 01:49:229 (109229|3,109318|3,109759|1,109847|1) ga konsisten donk nnti ama 01:49:229 (109229|3,109318|3) - , lgpula woe ny trlalu ngeblend bkal aneh klo tiba2 mw ngikut dia -

01:54:435 (114435|0) - move ke col 2 biar lebih ena diliat wkwkw mw fokus konsep ama 04:09:523 - jadi imo jack skrg fine

01:54:523 (114523|2) - ini pendekin ke 01:54:700 - suaranya abis disitu n sebelah nya cover suara yg msh ada ada SV loh.. klo dipendekin SV nya bakal jelek ama LN nya nnti

01:55:053 (115053|1,115053|0,115318|2,115318|3) - suara nya sama nih =w= lebih ena buat col yg sama kek gini 01:55:229 - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8545354
sama 01:55:759 - dipisah biar lebih ngefeel n pas sama suara vocalnya 01:55:318 (115318|3,115318|2,115406|1,115406|0) - 2 double notes ini jg sbnernya smua snare, tp wa ambil yg lebih ngeflownya ja biar enak wkwk

02:13:318 (133318|0) - hmm move col 2 biar col 1 ga full anchor :V flow jumptrillny jd agk aneh imo krna biasanya col 1 ama col 4 lebih enak dijadiin fondasi stack biar fokus readabilitynya dapet

02:14:200 - ini timingnya unsnaped kah ? mantep dah nice catch owo

02:17:288 - mungkin http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8545377 lebih ena, oiya 02:17:818 - ku jadiin ke note biasa aja emphasis ke LN 02:17:994 - boleh,
wa arrange dikit biar lbih dapet imo


02:32:641 (152641|1,152641|0,152729|0,152729|1) - aduh aneh bgt mas ;w; ini mending single buat jack aja, ga terlalu keras jd susah kenotice drumnya kdngeran bgt suaranya sama.. apalagi drum ini jg msti dibedain drpd jack vocal lainny, klo single jack nnti keduanya jadi sama patternnya jadi aneh..

02:35:112 - how about this ? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8545406 bagian vocalnya yg ku biru2. sama flownya kurang ngeh kalo ngejack jngn jumptrill again :x .. jacknya buat drum udh ngeemphasis instrumenny lbih bgus, konsisten ama tmpt laen lalu ksih variasi laen jg drpd jumptrill trus..

02:52:935 (172935|0) - move ke 02:52:759 - n jadiin LN, pas kok sama suara huu - uuu ktauan ga liat SV ane ini mah wkwkwk..

02:57:788 - ga terlalu keras imo jd single aja sama kyk sblmny lg

03:32:465 (212465|1,212553|0) - swap col lebih ena nanti konsep flow 03:32:288 (212288|1,212376|2,212553|0,212641|3,212818|2,212906|1) - jadi ga konsisten..

04:10:229 - gini ? biar variasi dari kiai awal https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8545551 wa ngrasa patternny rada antiflow ke kiri smua wkwk, keep dlu dah

04:32:818 - gmana kalo ini single2 aja, kesannya maksa gitu kan pas bagian kalem itu double LN krna synthnya menonjol banget disitu..lgpula imo itu bukan bagian kalem, tapi transisi dari suara berisik burst ke bagian kalem, jadi mw ksih layering tebel buat ksih impression trkhir sblm mrka masuk ke bagian kalem
gud lak >w<
Kaget wkwkw, makasih modnya ya syadow :D
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00:36:700 (36700|2,37053|2) - is it necessary

01:30:347 - suggestion: , reason is more emphasizing this sound 01:30:700 , [23] double is more noticeable around these rolls than [14]

01:54:876 (114876|0,115053|0,115229|0,115406|0,115670|0) - maybe avoid this

01:58:935 - and 01:59:641 - are absolutely similar, I see you did such a patterns to alternate hand loadings from left ro right, but if we count the number of jacks in every hand, we can see:

left hand: 7 jacks 01:59:112 (119112|1,119288|1,119818|1,119994|1,119994|0,120170|0,120347|0) -
right hand:3 jacks 01:59:288 (119288|3,119465|3,119641|3) -

so you might want to make it more balanced

02:00:700 (120700|1,120876|1,121229|1,121406|0,121406|1,121582|0) - unbalance
02:12:347 (132347|1,132523|1,132700|0,132700|1,132876|0) - ^

02:34:053 (154053|0,154097|1,154229|0,154229|1,154406|1,154582|1) - is this intended

02:40:229 (160229|0,160318|0) - no reason for this

03:21:523 (201523|3,201612|3) - ^ why? looks really weird and out of place

03:37:935 (217935|0,218023|3) - ctrl+h for balance and do some fixes for no colflicts in next notes

03:50:729 (230729|3,230906|2) - these should make a jack, because you did a jack in previous same moment 03:49:318 (229318|0,229494|0) - or remove jack at all

04:39:876 (279876|1,280053|3,285523|1,285700|0,288170|3,288347|2,288523|0,291170|2,291347|3) - these should be jacks

04:45:523 - hitsounds are too loud by this point, especially in the end. please reduce the volume

02:35:465 (155465|1,155465|2,155553|2,155553|1) - make it [34] [34] for avoiding unbalance 02:35:112 (155112|1,155200|1,155465|1,155553|1) -
Gemu-
I really love this map >w< take 2 stars! <3


Good Luck :oops:
Topic Starter
Maxus

eyes wrote:

M4M

General
Add tags: "revolution of happy? #01 comic market コミックマーケット 91 cametek". Source: http://djgenki.net/gnkcd001/ added all

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00:36:700 (36700|2,37053|2) - is it necessary for vocal, ofc important

01:30:347 - suggestion: , reason is more emphasizing this sound 01:30:700 , [23] double is more noticeable around these rolls than [14] it results in making the burst too linear, the current one already utilize it properly

01:54:876 (114876|0,115053|0,115229|0,115406|0,115670|0) - maybe avoid this Intentional, it has same snare sound, so the stack is there to accenting that particular sound.

01:58:935 - and 01:59:641 - are absolutely similar, I see you did such a patterns to alternate hand loadings from left ro right, but if we count the number of jacks in every hand, we can see:

left hand: 7 jacks 01:59:112 (119112|1,119288|1,119818|1,119994|1,119994|0,120170|0,120347|0) -
right hand:3 jacks 01:59:288 (119288|3,119465|3,119641|3) -

so you might want to make it more balanced idk how you count 01:59:288 (119288|1) - as jack.. as the LN actually empty space without density to hit anything , only hold thing.. the jack is more or less actually already balance with 01:59:288 (119288|3,119465|3,119641|3) - hitting three times,
and 01:59:994 (119994|0,120170|0,120347|0) - also three times..


02:00:700 (120700|1,120876|1,121229|1,121406|0,121406|1,121582|0) - unbalance counter it with 02:01:935 (121935|3,122112|2,122112|3,122465|3,122465|2,122818|2,122818|3) -
02:12:347 (132347|1,132523|1,132700|0,132700|1,132876|0) - ^ the right hand double at 02:13:053 - is denser to mitigate that

02:34:053 (154053|0,154097|1,154229|0,154229|1,154406|1,154582|1) - is this intended 02:34:406 (154406|1,154494|0,154582|1,154670|0) - here is to mirror 02:34:759 (154759|2,154847|3,154935|2,155023|3) - so the overall structure is already balancing out by itself.

02:40:229 (160229|0,160318|0) - no reason for this vocal, and i actually do it consistently jacking vocal across my map here..

03:21:523 (201523|3,201612|3) - ^ why? looks really weird and out of place idk what's awkward with that.. literally i already place the jack within same column of the 2 pattern at 03:21:523 (201523|3,201612|3,202759|3,202935|3) - in col 4 where jack is the easiest to hit.

03:37:935 (217935|0,218023|3) - ctrl+h for balance and do some fixes for no colflicts in next notes it will result in more inbalance because the final result will be that you make even more one hand trill which make the denser part like these jumptrill becoming harder to hit and explore more efficiently.

03:50:729 (230729|3,230906|2) - these should make a jack, because you did a jack in previous same moment 03:49:318 (229318|0,229494|0) - or remove jack at all they both are different.. if you want to make comparison do it with 04:02:200 - , because i also make jack at 04:00:612 - but didn't do it at the 04:02:200 - simply because they are different.

04:39:876 (279876|1,280053|3,285523|1,285700|0,288170|3,288347|2,288523|0,291170|2,291347|3) - these should be jacks the one i make jack is rapid 1/4 not 1/2..

04:45:523 - hitsounds are too loud by this point, especially in the end. please reduce the volume fair enough, reduce to 20%

02:35:465 (155465|1,155465|2,155553|2,155553|1) - make it [34] [34] for avoiding unbalance 02:35:112 (155112|1,155200|1,155465|1,155553|1) - I make the pattern at 02:35:641 - focusing direction to right side to mitigate that.. i don't consider the jack has to be really different column since it's actually the closing intersection to other section and still easy to hit.
Thank you, will do your map soon.

game rock wrote:

I really love this map >w< take 2 stars! <3


Good Luck :oops:
Thank you!
Verniy_Chan
Belum di HSin ya? :3
Topic Starter
Maxus

Verniy_Chan wrote:

Belum di HSin ya? :3
mager ane wkwk, ama lg fokus req ;3
Shinzo-
M4M
[Colorful Smile]
01:05:288 (65288|0) - saran aja sih LN nya jadiin normal note yg ini karna di part 01:06:700 (66700|3,66965|2,67229|0) - kmu cuman layer yg keras aja suaranya, sementara 01:06:347 - ga dilayer. biar seimbang juga di 01:05:288 - 3 LN kecil di 01:06:700 - juga 3. lagian 01:06:347 - lebih kedengeran suaranya dari 01:05:288 - (referensi 03:21:876 - )
01:10:847 - unnesecary SV.
01:40:935 - salah satu jadiin LN ? saran aja sih soalny ssemua suara begini dibikin LN
01:41:818 (101818|3,101994|2) - tuker ? pitch ny sama 3x dan di part ini cuman itu yg ga sampe 3 same collumn nya, yang laen sampe 3 (01:35:465 (95465|3,95818|3,96170|3) - 01:46:759 (106759|3,107112|3,107465|3) -
02:13:670 (133670|0) - mungkin ini dibikin 1 note doang karna patternnya mo divariasiin di 02:13:759 - tapi yang 02:13:318 - malah jadi gaje gitu kenapa cuman satu note, mungkin maxudmu biar konsisten ama 02:13:670 - tapi nantinya 02:14:023 - ini yg gaje knp 2 note. saran ane sih 02:14:023 - aja yg dibikin1 note biar konsisten ama 02:15:082 - ato kalo ngga pattern 02:13:406 (133406|3,133406|2,133494|1,133494|0,133582|2,133582|3) - diganti aja biar ga gaje (rerferensi 04:28:935 (268935|2,268935|1,269023|0,269023|3,269112|2,269112|1) - )
02:18:700 - ini kiai nya ga brenti di sini aja ? biar sama kek 04:34:229 -
02:40:318 (160318|0) - aga gangerti sih ini kenapa jack xD cuman denger sih ada drum kecil kek exho doang, mending gausah jack
03:14:112 (194112|0) - saran ane sih ini di move aja ke kolom 3 biar player ngerti ini udah ngikut suara 03:13:759 (193759|2,193935|3,194112|0,194288|3,194465|0,194641|1,194818|0,194994|1) - udah bukan 03:12:347 (192347|0,192612|0,192876|0,193141|0,193406|0,193582|3) - karna kalo 03:13:935 (193935|3,194288|3) - kayak begini nanti dikira masih ngikut suara yg tadi tapi 1/2 jadi malah bingung nanti
03:35:112 - missing LN ? denger lagi coba (referensi 03:57:700 - )
03:41:641 (221641|1,221641|0,221729|0,221729|1) - jack nya di 34 aja gimana ? xD soalnya tadi ditangan kiri 03:38:818 (218818|0,218818|1,218906|1,218906|0) - iya ane tau sih bakal ribet nge re-pattern, tapi ya terserah deh ane cuman bilang aja xD
03:47:994 (227994|0,228082|0) - saran aja sih gausah jack.. aneh aja gitu gatau napa jack
03:57:523 - mungkin diatur lagi LN nya kebanyakan di kolom 3 4 padahal pitch nya aga merendah
04:28:053 (268053|2,268141|0,268406|3,268494|2) - gimana kalo ini dibikin jack ato apa kek buat nge emphasize 1/4 kick nya soalny kyk contoh 04:25:670 (265670|0,265670|1) - kan di bikin 2 note
04:32:288 - harusnya 2 note sih biar konsisten sama 04:31:759 (271759|0,271759|1,271935|1,271935|2,272641|0,272641|3) - (referensi 02:16:406

GL ay
Topic Starter
Maxus

Shinzo- wrote:

M4M
[Colorful Smile]
01:05:288 (65288|0) - saran aja sih LN nya jadiin normal note yg ini karna di part 01:06:700 (66700|3,66965|2,67229|0) - kmu cuman layer yg keras aja suaranya, sementara 01:06:347 - ga dilayer. biar seimbang juga di 01:05:288 - 3 LN kecil di 01:06:700 - juga 3. lagian 01:06:347 - lebih kedengeran suaranya dari 01:05:288 - (referensi 03:21:876 - ) make them all consistently have short LN.
01:10:847 - unnesecary SV. necessary, the instrument has sudden stop feeling there.
01:40:935 - salah satu jadiin LN ? saran aja sih soalny ssemua suara begini dibikin LN ? i'm sure there's only crash?
01:41:818 (101818|3,101994|2) - tuker ? pitch ny sama 3x dan di part ini cuman itu yg ga sampe 3 same collumn nya, yang laen sampe 3 (01:35:465 (95465|3,95818|3,96170|3) - 01:46:759 (106759|3,107112|3,107465|3) - I know what you meant, but 01:41:818 (101818|3) - is still higher than 01:41:994 (101994|2) - , if i reverse it just for sake of that consistency, the pitch distinction will be incorrect inconsistent, so i prefer sacrifice the one that i find more minor there.
02:13:670 (133670|0) - mungkin ini dibikin 1 note doang karna patternnya mo divariasiin di 02:13:759 - tapi yang 02:13:318 - malah jadi gaje gitu kenapa cuman satu note, mungkin maxudmu biar konsisten ama 02:13:670 - tapi nantinya 02:14:023 - ini yg gaje knp 2 note. saran ane sih 02:14:023 - aja yg dibikin1 note biar konsisten ama 02:15:082 - ato kalo ngga pattern 02:13:406 (133406|3,133406|2,133494|1,133494|0,133582|2,133582|3) - diganti aja biar ga gaje (rerferensi 04:28:935 (268935|2,268935|1,269023|0,269023|3,269112|2,269112|1) - ) well the core basic of my jumptrill pattern is that, every three double like 02:13:053 (133053|2,133053|3,133141|0,133141|1,133229|3,133229|2) - , it will have single note except for the one direct to the LN simply because it's too short to give the transition, I do the consistent one at 04:29:288 - too so i won't try to break it as it has coordination with other pattern too.
02:18:700 - ini kiai nya ga brenti di sini aja ? biar sama kek 04:34:229 - nais
02:40:318 (160318|0) - aga gangerti sih ini kenapa jack xD cuman denger sih ada drum kecil kek exho doang, mending gausah jack vocal,
and that's one of core pattern i think make the section flows naturally

03:14:112 (194112|0) - saran ane sih ini di move aja ke kolom 3 biar player ngerti ini udah ngikut suara 03:13:759(193759|2,193935|3,194112|0,194288|3,194465|0,194641|1,194818|0,194994|1) - udah bukan 03:12:347 (192347|0,192612|0,192876|0,193141|0,193406|0,193582|3) - karna kalo 03:13:935 (193935|3,194288|3) - kayak begini nanti dikira masih ngikut suara yg tadi tapi 1/2 jadi malah bingung nanti i move to 03:14:023 - instead, just realize i still suppose to follow the col 1 sound.
03:35:112 - missing LN ? denger lagi coba (referensi 03:57:700 - ) changed, quite nice
03:41:641 (221641|1,221641|0,221729|0,221729|1) - jack nya di 34 aja gimana ? xD soalnya tadi ditangan kiri 03:38:818 (218818|0,218818|1,218906|1,218906|0) - iya ane tau sih bakal ribet nge re-pattern, tapi ya terserah deh ane cuman bilang aja xD felt like for consistency of same sound also alright, the current isn't that heavy left tbh even with those jack.
03:47:994 (227994|0,228082|0) - saran aja sih gausah jack.. aneh aja gitu gatau napa jack good point, switch column to avoid that
03:57:523 - mungkin diatur lagi LN nya kebanyakan di kolom 3 4 padahal pitch nya aga merendah There's three repeating pitch occured there, at 03:57:788 (237788|2,237876|3,238053|2,238141|3,238582|3,238759|2,238847|3) - if you heard the instrument synth repeating so i make LN repeating too, it's similar concept with how i went from 03:35:200 -
04:28:053 (268053|2,268141|0,268406|3,268494|2) - gimana kalo ini dibikin jack ato apa kek buat nge emphasize 1/4 kick nya soalny kyk contoh 04:25:670 (265670|0,265670|1) - kan di bikin 2 note yeah it can
04:32:288 - harusnya 2 note sih biar konsisten sama 04:31:759 (271759|0,271759|1,271935|1,271935|2,272641|0,272641|3) - (referensi 02:16:406) Wrong reference, the correct one is at 02:16:715 - , the third finish is at 1/8, it's awkward but somehow that the composer want, so i just follow since it is accurate snap but doesn't hinder playability anyway

GL ay
Thanks. will do soon.
Verniy_Chan

Hi Maxus aka DixonBW

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4K = |1|2|3|4|
| W (Whistle) | C (Clap) | F (Finish) |

(Focus : Pattern , Pitch, Hitsounds)
General
  1. Berhubungan mapnya belum di HS, baiklah saya yang HS kan (gak asik ngemod gak ada HSnya XD)
    Download contohnya https://puu.sh/wTzJP.rar
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OD : 7,8
HP : 8,7
  1. 00:08:818 (8818|2,8994|0) - 00:11:641 (11641|2,11818|3) - mungkin ini bisa dijadikan satu kolom untuk vocal, biar ngikutin mirror pattern dari 00:05:994 (5994|1,6170|1) - atau mungkin sebaliknya
  2. 00:46:229 - add note untuk konsistensi suara clap seperti 00:39:170 - 00:44:818 -
  3. 01:10:759 - apakah disini sengaja gak pasang note untuk suara tom drum seperti 01:10:406 - 01:10:582 - ? oh ya, ada SV rupanya XD
  4. 01:15:700 (75700|3,76053|2) - bukannya harus satu kolom karena pitchnya mirip sepeti 01:12:876 (72876|2,73229|2) -
  5. 01:27:170 - mungkin tertarik jadiin LN untuk suara 'Auu' seperti 01:26:465 (86465|0,86818|3) - lel
  6. 01:38:288 (98288|2,98641|1,98994|2) - sama seperti di atas, tapi kalau untuk variasi pattern gpp sih
  7. 01:49:759 (109759|1,109847|1) - sepertinya gak cocok ini dijadiin mini jack, karena agak beda pitchnya dari sebelumnya 01:49:229 (109229|3,109318|3,109582|3,109670|3) - kalau bisa 01:49:759 (109759|1,109847|1) - salah satu pindah ke |1|
  8. 02:49:935 (169935|1,170112|1,170288|1,170465|1) - mungkin hindari anchor ringan seperti ini, 02:49:935 (169935|1) - pindah ke |1|
  9. 02:55:670 - 02:56:376 - 02:57:082 - ini sengaja ya, gak pasang note seperti konsistensi dari blue line 02:53:553 - 02:54:259 - 02:54:965 -
  10. 03:43:053 - mungkin add note disini untuk impact suara keras + vocal effect, atau kalau tidak jadikan LN salah satu SN, sama halnya di bagian 04:05:641 -
Notes : Hadeh~ sulit nyari yang error lagi selain di atas, sangat solid patternnya

Verniy_Chan wrote:

Score
88,5

(1-100)

just for fun only, don’t take it seriously
Nice Mapset, terutama LN Sectionnya >w<
Tebar bintang kejora
Хорошо~ Good Luck..
Topic Starter
Maxus

Verniy_Chan wrote:


Hi Maxus aka DixonBW

Mod Via PM Request

4K = |1|2|3|4|
| W (Whistle) | C (Clap) | F (Finish) |

(Focus : Pattern , Pitch, Hitsounds)
General
  1. Berhubungan mapnya belum di HS, baiklah saya yang HS kan (gak asik ngemod gak ada HSnya XD)
    Download contohnya https://puu.sh/wTzJP.rar
yay makasih >w<
Colorful Smile

OD : 7,8
HP : 8,7
  1. 00:08:818 (8818|2,8994|0) - 00:11:641 (11641|2,11818|3) - mungkin ini bisa dijadikan satu kolom untuk vocal, biar ngikutin mirror pattern dari 00:05:994 (5994|1,6170|1) - atau mungkin sebaliknya ga disngaja prtamany si itu, ane jg ga ktmu cra buat bkin smuany sama kolom tanpa ngeremap smua wkwk, jdi mnurut ane rda "ngmksa" klo remap cma untuk itu, jadi keep dulu.
  2. 00:46:229 - add note untuk konsistensi suara clap seperti 00:39:170 - 00:44:818 - ok sip
  3. 01:10:759 - apakah disini sengaja gak pasang note untuk suara tom drum seperti 01:10:406 - 01:10:582 - ? oh ya, ada SV rupanya XD dipasang note pun suarany buyar bgt dsitu xd, lebih krasa klo emphasize pake SV -w-
  4. 01:15:700 (75700|3,76053|2) - bukannya harus satu kolom karena pitchnya mirip sepeti 01:12:876 (72876|2,73229|2) - ngghh ane ykin yg ini pitchny beda ._. , LN prtama soalny kasa bgt tinggi pitchny dibanding yg kdua :x , klo yg di example mlah bner2 sama pitch imo
  5. 01:27:170 - mungkin tertarik jadiin LN untuk suara 'Auu' seperti 01:26:465 (86465|0,86818|3) - lel saya tertarik disini >w<
  6. 01:38:288 (98288|2,98641|1,98994|2) - sama seperti di atas, tapi kalau untuk variasi pattern gpp sih ga ad auu tapi ._.
  7. 01:49:759 (109759|1,109847|1) - sepertinya gak cocok ini dijadiin mini jack, karena agak beda pitchnya dari sebelumnya 01:49:229 (109229|3,109318|3,109582|3,109670|3) - kalau bisa 01:49:759 (109759|1,109847|1) - salah satu pindah ke |1| dimodifikasi agar cocok dsini :D
  8. 02:49:935 (169935|1,170112|1,170288|1,170465|1) - mungkin hindari anchor ringan seperti ini, 02:49:935 (169935|1) - pindah ke |1|
  9. 02:55:670 - 02:56:376 - 02:57:082 - ini sengaja ya, gak pasang note seperti konsistensi dari blue line 02:53:553 - 02:54:259 - 02:54:965 - iya , klo setiap kali ketemu wall LN seperti itu, ane ga pake 1/4 karena bakal ngmaksa bgt disitu, jadi konsistensinya wktu tiap kali ada wall LN , 1/4 ga bakal mncul.
  10. 03:43:053 - mungkin add note disini untuk impact suara keras + vocal effect, atau kalau tidak jadikan LN salah satu SN, sama halnya di bagian 04:05:641 - hmm , klo jadi triple disana jdi agak mmbingungkan soalny 03:43:406 - ja double tp malah lebih keras soundnya (karena jumptrillnya biar ga ngemaksa jg sih xd)
Notes : Hadeh~ sulit nyari yang error lagi selain di atas, sangat solid patternnya
msih noob x.x

Verniy_Chan wrote:

Score
88,5

(1-100)

just for fun only, don’t take it seriously
Nice Mapset, terutama LN Sectionnya >w<
Tebar bintang kejora
Хорошо~ Good Luck..
makasih ya modnya owo
Kawawa
Hello Maxus! bloblob 'W'
[Colorful smile]
01:08:553 (68553|2,68641|3) - This rhythm kinda weird to me.
I recognized that around LNs are followed vocal rhythm, and the start vocal place is here 01:08:465 -
Recommend this :: http://puu.sh/xdAV5/83d9fedb7b.jpg

02:18:347 - to 02:18:700 - It's 1/6 rhythm from 02:17:994 -
Just a feedback :: http://puu.sh/xdBEn/b251329fa1.jpg
(If you want to use those case LNs bundle, then the SV timing also should be changed something)
or just change that rhythm as 1/6th. Anyway It's up to what you want!

02:28:406 (148406|3,148450|2) - reverse it as 3 to 4 column?
because It's same patterning with below 02:27:347 (147347|3,147391|2,147435|0,147479|1) - so can have a various patterns.

02:30:700 (150700|0) - I think you can add "W" hitsound here.

02:32:994 - Add a note for kick drum, there is a drum added. compared with 02:31:229 -
you can ignore that, but I considered your structure that you added some note by snare durm sound.

03:37:406 (217406|0,217494|2,217582|0,217670|2) - If you're not use 1/8th, then personally I prefer to jack for vocal vibration.
Feedback :: http://puu.sh/xdCrR/24ad74f999.jpg
It's not really difficult, and It follow the concept of the vocal vibration jack that you expressed from the below part.

04:03:965 - You can make here two, I feel it also intense like 04:04:141 -
Feedback :: http://puu.sh/xdCzU/a8b38eb85e.jpg

04:28:406 (268406|3,268494|3) - It also should be same hitsound with 04:28:053 (268053|0,268141|0) - as your intention.

04:31:053 - to 04:31:406 - here is synth sound part.
04:31:406 - to 04:31:759 - here is drum roll.
What I mean that they have different feelings to each other, but chart is same stair-ing.
If you can seperate the two part visually, then It can be better to feel when playing.
The first part is a good as an example 02:15:523 - to 02:16:229 -
That's it. I could finish all the confirmation quickly
pretty cool! :)
Topic Starter
Maxus

Kawawa wrote:

Hello Maxus! bloblob 'W' wawa moeee >w<>w< :blopblop owo!!!:
[Colorful smile]
01:08:553 (68553|2,68641|3) - This rhythm kinda weird to me.
I recognized that around LNs are followed vocal rhythm, and the start vocal place is here 01:08:465 -
Recommend this :: http://puu.sh/xdAV5/83d9fedb7b.jpg yeah this is kinda my mistake x_x , thank you for catching this!

02:18:347 - to 02:18:700 - It's 1/6 rhythm from 02:17:994 -
Just a feedback :: http://puu.sh/xdBEn/b251329fa1.jpg
(If you want to use those case LNs bundle, then the SV timing also should be changed something)
or just change that rhythm as 1/6th. Anyway It's up to what you want! yeah should be 1/6 rythm there, i hear it wrongly before xd , changed!

02:28:406 (148406|3,148450|2) - reverse it as 3 to 4 column?
because It's same patterning with below 02:27:347 (147347|3,147391|2,147435|0,147479|1) - so can have a various patterns. yeah it should be for different feeling owo

02:30:700 (150700|0) - I think you can add "W" hitsound here. add it, and also to all similar part.

02:32:994 - Add a note for kick drum, there is a drum added. compared with 02:31:229 -
you can ignore that, but I considered your structure that you added some note by snare durm sound. hmm I consider it too small sound for double note considering the density of the pattern around the section. If i add that, would be too dense because i need to add for other small snare too.

03:37:406 (217406|0,217494|2,217582|0,217670|2) - If you're not use 1/8th, then personally I prefer to jack for vocal vibration.
Feedback :: http://puu.sh/xdCrR/24ad74f999.jpg
It's not really difficult, and It follow the concept of the vocal vibration jack that you expressed from the below part. I tried to make the vocal vibration here consistent with 01:21:876 - , My pattern before also use jack here, but i consider them to have different feeling with vocal bundle in kiai i use for jack.

04:03:965 - You can make here two, I feel it also intense like 04:04:141 -
Feedback :: http://puu.sh/xdCzU/a8b38eb85e.jpg I consider 04:03:876 - To also have big sound, so i will make this double LN too.

04:28:406 (268406|3,268494|3) - It also should be same hitsound with 04:28:053 (268053|0,268141|0) - as your intention. Sorry my mistake x.x

04:31:053 - to 04:31:406 - here is synth sound part.
04:31:406 - to 04:31:759 - here is drum roll.
What I mean that they have different feelings to each other, but chart is same stair-ing.
If you can seperate the two part visually, then It can be better to feel when playing.
The first part is a good as an example 02:15:523 - to 02:16:229 - yeah i understand, will change here.
That's it. I could finish all the confirmation quickly
pretty cool! :)
Thank you so much wawa >w<
Kawawa
OK no problem. move on!
Topic Starter
Maxus
고맙습니다!
Verniy_Chan
00:00:700 (700|1) - lupa samplesetnya di ganti jadi auto :3
Kawawa
okay seems done!
Topic Starter
Maxus
Fix Verniy's concern, thank you!

also Thank you again wawa ><
Critical_Star
'x'
some little stuff before we get to qualify :)

NYEELL!
00:24:259 - suggestion to break at 4th col so it look much neater , > http://puu.sh/xkQDi/1e23cc8e23.png
01:32:818 - double like 01:33:170 - i think they just having the same vocal clap
01:48:700 (108700|3) - make normal note? before u did with double LN + normal note
02:08:112 (128112|1,128112|3,128112|2,128818|0,128818|2,128818|3,129523|2,129523|3,129523|1) - make double here to differentiate the sound impact?
03:02:818 (182818|1,182818|0,183170|2,183523|3) - suggestion > http://puu.sh/xkR0y/b2b4d30d70.png
04:33:523 - suggestion > http://puu.sh/xkRas/b53e8367a6.png err maybe nvm lol
04:40:935 - missed a double note here
Topic Starter
Maxus

Critical_Star wrote:

'x' hug cat 'x'
some little stuff before we get to qualify :) >w<

NYEELL!
00:24:259 - suggestion to break at 4th col so it look much neater , > http://puu.sh/xkQDi/1e23cc8e23.png really nice uwu
01:32:818 - double like 01:33:170 - i think they just having the same vocal clap yeah correct -w-
01:48:700 (108700|3) - make normal note? before u did with double LN + normal note hmm 3 LN is from synth like 01:48:347 (108347|2) -
(1 LN) + Hey sound (2 LN)

02:08:112 (128112|1,128112|3,128112|2,128818|0,128818|2,128818|3,129523|2,129523|3,129523|1) - make double here to differentiate the sound impact? The beat sound almost the same here so i wanna make them all triple. to differentiate with part before at 01:41:288 (101288|0,101288|1,101641|0,101641|1,101641|3) -
03:02:818 (182818|1,182818|0,183170|2,183523|3) - suggestion > http://puu.sh/xkR0y/b2b4d30d70.png i love it , but i have SV here, so the impact makes the 1/4 shield a bit too surprising imo, but i rearrange according to yours >w<
04:33:523 - suggestion > http://puu.sh/xkRas/b53e8367a6.png err maybe nvm lol tbh i really like it 'w' , really flowy for me >w<
04:40:935 - missed a double note here nice catch owo
'W'W'W'W'W'W'
xie xie so much madu :D
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Topic Starter
Maxus
Surono
wibu grenblu :shrugs:
Verniy_Chan
Gratz~
Gemu-
Congrats Maxus! <3
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