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Hello Mage!
Requested Mod from the Featured Artist Modding Queue running by the Staff.
I'm here to help you with your Map!
General
Artist: Correct
Title: Correct
Source: Wrong! // All Featured Artist Songs must have the Source "osu!"
Tags: You can add following Tags: "Power Up", "Dragonball", "Featured Artist"
AiMod: No Problems
Background: To save some space (1Mb) You can replace your BG with this file: click
BPM/Offset: Correct
mp3/Hitsounds: Some of your hitsounds were a bit imbalanced and had a lot of unnecessary silence. To save some space i fixed all for you. You can get the fixes here: click. Just replace them with your current one.
Other: -
Easy
00:06:079 (6079|0,6246|2,6413|1,6579|3) - Can i suggest to arrange the pattern a bit different? They have clearly a higher pitch than the Pattern 00:05:413 (5413|0,5579|2,5746|1,5913|3) - and you can emphasize this with arrange them a bit different. How about 2-1-3-4 ? (Follows even perfect the pitch!)00:16:746 (16746|0,16913|1,17079|3,17246|2) - If you did apply my suggestion above please arrange these here too to something different.
00:26:413 (26413|3) - This one should be a Long Note, according to 00:31:746 (31746|1) - . Same sound.
Also 00:26:913 (26913|3,27246|0) - should be deleted because you didn't map it 00:32:246 - 00:32:579 - here too.
Nothing more to say.
Pretty solid Easy difficulty!
OWJI's Normal
00:02:746 (2746|3) - Add additionally a F hitsound here.00:09:413 (9413|2,9746|0,9746|1,9913|3,9996|2,10079|1) - I would suggest to CTRL+H the Pattern here. That's mainly to change the triple more to PR and different from 00:04:579 (4579|3,4663|2,4746|1) - .
00:18:579 - Either Add here a note or remove a note from 00:07:913 (7913|3,7913|2) - to make it consistent.
00:24:079 - Hmm.. i am not sure if i can agree with the notespread here to the Easy. I mean, just take a look:
You have 2/1 Notes in the Easy and directly 1/4 pattern in the Normal. That's really not a good spread. Simply way to dense here.
My suggestion would be: use 1/2 notes! And to make a different to the following sounds i suggest you to jack these notes 00:24:746 (24746|0,24913|1) - and 00:25:079 (25079|2,25246|3) - . As example 4-4 1-1. Same you can do with notes from 00:25:413 (25413|0,25413|1,25579|2) - and 00:26:079 (26079|2,26246|1) - and so on. You understand what i mean? You doesn't need denser notes to emphasize the difference to the music!
00:29:579 (29579|1,29663|0,29746|2,29829|1,29913|3,29996|2,30079|0) - Same goes for here.
00:30:413 (30413|2,30413|3) - Remove one note from here. You didn't had a chord at 00:25:079 - too.
Overall you really should look more for a less denser note spread to the Easy in this difficulty. The spread is really really strange here.
01:00:079 (60079|2) - I suggest you to make this note a 1/1 Long Note. The sound belongs to 01:00:413 (60413|0,60579|2,60746|1,61079|3) - .
Also 01:00:746 (60746|1) - should be 1/2 beat longer.
01:04:746 - ??? What happens here? Why is this suddenly empty? xD
The Part here is basically like the very beginning of the Song. Like 00:02:746 - .
And here we have again the same like before. You mapped 00:07:913 - with a jump but 01:09:246 - not.
01:15:246 (75246|3) - And why you mapped this Sound here when you didn't Mapped it before ever?
01:20:246 (80246|2,80579|1) - And suddenly you begin to map here hihat's while you didn't map them before either.
Okay overall the Difficulty is not bad. But i have a problem that the note spread is simply too high to the Easy difficulty. (No i do not pay the SR attention)
Also you have a big problem with lack of consistency here. You should check the complete difficulty again.
Hard
00:10:746 (10746|3,10746|2,10913|1,10913|0) - and 00:11:413 (11413|2,11413|3,11579|1,11579|0) - . I highly suggest that you jack these too. The music is way more louder and noticeable than the kicks you did jack later. It simply feels like something is missing here.00:19:413 - You have a missing Note here according to 00:08:746 -
Maybe CTRL+H 00:20:079 (20079|2,20413|1) - to remove 00:20:413 (20413|1,20746|1,21079|1,21413|1) -
00:21:413 (21413|1,21413|0,21579|2,21579|3,22079|1,22079|0,22246|3,22246|2) - If you did apply my suggestion above to jack the jumps then do it here too for consistency.
00:25:579 (25579|2,25579|1) - And why is this one a Jump? You doesn't have here any additionally sound. Just a hihat like 00:24:913 (24913|3,25246|0) - .
Please remove 00:25:579 (25579|1) - to keep the jack consistency.
00:26:246 (26246|3,26246|2) - Same here. Suddenly a jump? There's nothing that can justify it.
00:27:579 (27579|1,27663|0) - CTRL+G here for PR and variety.
00:28:079 (28079|2,28079|3,28246|1,28246|0) - Jack these to follow the music better.
00:30:913 (30913|2,30913|1,31579|1,31579|0) - Same thing like above.
00:32:913 (32913|2,32996|3) - And again a CTRL+G here for PR and variety.
00:33:413 (33413|1,33413|0,33579|2,33579|3) - here again like above. Jack for music
// Is it me or does the 2nd Part that repeats looks copy/pasted and mirrored? xD
00:44:746 (44746|3,44913|3,45079|0,45246|0) - Please no jacks All 4 sounds have a different pitch. The Jacks are wrong.
00:45:913 (45913|3,45913|0,47246|3,47246|0) - Can i ask for what these jumps are? No Kick.. No snare.. i just hear the melody and a hihat like 00:48:246 (48246|1,48913|2) - and these are single notes too.
00:51:246 (51246|1,51246|0,52579|2,52579|3) - Same goes for these.
01:01:579 - The Spread to the Normal here is really bad
I mean look at it:
While the Normal is using 1/2 notes you use already 1/2 jumps with 1/4 pattern here.
I highly recommend you to nerf this part.
Here is what i would suggest you
Use 1/4 triples with a jump at the end. I also arranged the last 4 jumps at 01:02:746 - . The single jack to the next jump represent the intensity of the ending.
01:12:079 (72079|3,72079|2,72246|1,72246|0,72746|3,72746|2,72913|1,72913|0) - If you did apply the Jack suggestion at the beginning do the same here.
01:22:746 (82746|1,82746|0,82913|2,82913|3,83413|0,83413|1,83579|2,83579|3) - And here.
Overall a pretty solid Hard but needs more work. Especially the spread to the Normal looks a bit.. harsh.
Maximum
00:03:246 (3246|3,3246|1) - 00:08:579 (8579|2,8579|3) - Why the jumps here? You have here only a hihat. And really only a hihat. That's too much. Delete a note.00:13:913 (13913|2,13913|1) - 00:19:246 (19246|0,19246|3) - Same like above.
00:15:079 - Delete here a note. See at 00:04:413 - . Consistency~
For a better transition i suggest you to move 00:26:079 (26079|1) - to 3 and 00:26:413 (26413|2) - to 1.
00:31:413 (31413|2) - Same like above. This one to 2 and 00:31:746 (31746|1) - to 4
00:44:746 (44746|2,44913|2,45079|1,45246|1) - I think i mentioned this in Hard? The jacks here are wrong placed. All 4 notes have a different pitch so jacks doesn't fit here.
00:58:246 (58246|2,58413|2,58579|2) - That feels really weird. I highly suggest you to arrange the pattern here. Remove the triple jack.
01:02:746 - Pattern suggestion for better emphasis:
Well, i won't mod the remaining part because it's basically like the beginning and i would just repeat myself because that's the same issues like mentioned above.
Overall a pretty good diff. Yummy Noodles.
That's all. I hope my suggestions help you! Overall a good Map but i have a problem with the note spread.
Not looking at SR because SR says nothing.. The important is really the note spread.
I wish you good luck!