ensou ft. GUMI - COMA [CatchTheBeat] · forum

Nelly

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Topic Starter

Nelly 2017-03-23T13:38:49+00:00

This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2 апреля 2018 г. at 23:50:36

Artist: ensou ft. GUMI
Title: COMA
Source: Cytus
Tags: rayark vocaloid megpoid gumi filipino paranoid grapes hi_hello
BPM: 180
Filesize: 5519kb
Play Time: 01:45
Difficulties Available:

Cup (1,43 stars, 161 notes)
Grapes' Salad (1,89 stars, 207 notes)
Hi_Nelly's Platter (3,12 stars, 321 notes)
Rain (4,5 stars, 314 notes)

Download: ensou ft. GUMI - COMA
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
---------------

Ranked #2

● Rain by Kimitakari
● Platter by Sakary and Kimitakari
● Salad by wonjae
● Cup by Kimitakari
rain was picked for osu!catch World Cup 2017 (NM1)
wiki/en/Tournaments/CWC/2017#group-stage

hit the bell to know when I upload my latest catch maps!

Last edited by Nelly 2023-10-14T17:28:03+00:00, edited 100 times in total.

Terton

141 posts

Joined August 2015

Terton 2017-03-23T13:44:01+00:00

буду первым, ведь я молодец :thinking:

Nelly

Beatmap Nominator

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Topic Starter

Nelly 2017-03-23T13:57:31+00:00

Terton wrote:
буду первым, ведь я молодец :thinking:

:thinking:

wonjae

768 posts

Joined October 2014

wonjae 2017-04-30T05:43:49+00:00

hey btw make the rain AR 9.2 and OD 9.2, i think it plays better with the slightly low ar

Nelly

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1,533 posts

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Nelly 2017-04-30T05:44:50+00:00

Paranoid Grapes wrote:
hey btw make the rain AR 9.2 and OD 9.2, i think it plays better with the slightly low ar

Okay

wonjae

768 posts

Joined October 2014

wonjae 2017-05-03T06:45:56+00:00

Salad as requested from que.

Salad

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Sakary

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Joined July 2013

Sakary 2017-05-26T04:32:54+00:00

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DeletedUser_6709840

DeletedUser_6709840 2017-05-28T23:30:50+00:00

Congratz on CWC mappool pick.

Will mod after CWC

wonjae

768 posts

Joined October 2014

wonjae 2017-05-28T23:50:48+00:00

holy cwc grats

Nelly

Beatmap Nominator

1,533 posts

Joined August 2014

Topic Starter

Nelly 2017-05-29T06:47:34+00:00

Paranoid Grapes wrote:
holy cwc grats

RoseusJaeger wrote:
Congratz on CWC mappool pick.

Will mod after CWC

Thanks :d

Nelly

Beatmap Nominator

1,533 posts

Joined August 2014

Topic Starter

Nelly 2017-06-17T12:19:10+00:00

Lets go

wonjae

768 posts

Joined October 2014

wonjae 2017-06-17T16:39:24+00:00

Hell yea

DeletedUser_6709840

DeletedUser_6709840 2017-06-22T22:41:37+00:00

NM from queue

General

Shouldn't Salad be AR 7 so the AR spread is even?

Cup

00:59:710 (2,3) – Compared to the anti-flow of the rest of the map, this is uncomfortable for a new player because it doesn't match the music in a way that is expected. Move (3) to X=0 so the motion is more familiar.

Salad

In general, you should lower your walking distances a smidge so the dashes are clearer to read. Your 1/1 walks should be about 1.2x or 1.1x just so the 1.6x dashes are clear.

00:23:044 (3,4) – Bruh, this is almost an edge dash. Reduce a bit.

Just watch the distances on your dashes, otherwise it seems fine flow wise

Hi_Nelly's Platter

The hyperdash density is a little high and makes this diff feel like a Rain at times, I'll point out a few hypers that are unneeded and you can adjust on your own judgement for any others.

00:00:544 (1) – The spinner is ½ too early compared to the other diffs.

00:05:210 (8,1) – This could be argued as a hyper dash into antiflow because the slider moves against the direction of the hyperdash. Possibly unrankable for that reason

00:08:710 (3,1) – This hyper really isn't needed, it could be removed because a normal dash could accent the sound and doesnt follow the sound you're putting hypers on.

00:23:710 (4,1) – This hyper is a bit large for a platter, reduce it it 3x

00:26:044 (3,4) – It's a bit difficullt to catch this, try making the sliders more vertical.

00:34:710 (1,1) – Could be argued to be antiflow here as well for this hyper, please change the direction of the slider to the left.

00:37:210 (7,1) – Hyperdash is too large for the Platter. Reduce it to the trigger distances you used before for larger hypers at 3x at most.

00:39:710 (4,1) – This is an antiflow hyper, make the slider more vertical to fix this issue.

00:43:710 (4,1) – Large hyper, reduce.

01:00:544 (4,5) – Dash or walk?

01:01:044 (1,2) – Large hyper, reduce.

01:06:544 (7,1) - ^

01:11:710 (4,1) - ^^ with antiflow, make this more vertical as well to be rankable.

Rain

I can't play the Rain, I'm too newb and it feels like an overdose to me.

Good luck with your map

wonjae

768 posts

Joined October 2014

wonjae 2017-06-23T20:15:20+00:00

RoseusJaeger wrote:
NM from queue

General

Shouldn't Salad be AR 7 so the AR spread is even? applied on my end.

Cup

00:59:710 (2,3) – Compared to the anti-flow of the rest of the map, this is uncomfortable for a new player because it doesn't match the music in a way that is expected. Move (3) to X=0 so the motion is more familiar.

Salad

In general, you should lower your walking distances a smidge so the dashes are clearer to read. Your 1/1 walks should be about 1.2x or 1.1x just so the 1.6x dashes are clear. cleaned up some distances a bit to what feels nice to me. agreed though that alot of walks were hard to deal with.

00:23:044 (3,4) – Bruh, this is almost an edge dash. Reduce a bit. ok

Just watch the distances on your dashes, otherwise it seems fine flow wise

Hi_Nelly's Platter

The hyperdash density is a little high and makes this diff feel like a Rain at times, I'll point out a few hypers that are unneeded and you can adjust on your own judgement for any others.

00:00:544 (1) – The spinner is ½ too early compared to the other diffs.

00:05:210 (8,1) – This could be argued as a hyper dash into antiflow because the slider moves against the direction of the hyperdash. Possibly unrankable for that reason

00:08:710 (3,1) – This hyper really isn't needed, it could be removed because a normal dash could accent the sound and doesnt follow the sound you're putting hypers on.

00:23:710 (4,1) – This hyper is a bit large for a platter, reduce it it 3x

00:26:044 (3,4) – It's a bit difficullt to catch this, try making the sliders more vertical.

00:34:710 (1,1) – Could be argued to be antiflow here as well for this hyper, please change the direction of the slider to the left.

00:37:210 (7,1) – Hyperdash is too large for the Platter. Reduce it to the trigger distances you used before for larger hypers at 3x at most.

00:39:710 (4,1) – This is an antiflow hyper, make the slider more vertical to fix this issue.

00:43:710 (4,1) – Large hyper, reduce.

01:00:544 (4,5) – Dash or walk?

01:01:044 (1,2) – Large hyper, reduce.

01:06:544 (7,1) - ^

01:11:710 (4,1) - ^^ with antiflow, make this more vertical as well to be rankable.

Rain

I can't play the Rain, I'm too newb and it feels like an overdose to me.

Good luck with your map

salad2.0

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464,160,4044,1,2,0:0:0:0:
424,160,4210,1,0,0:0:0:0:
368,160,4377,1,2,0:0:0:0:
176,168,4710,2,8,P|152:224|192:296,1,120,8|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
464,144,5377,5,6,0:0:0:0:
496,184,5544,1,2,0:0:0:0:
464,232,5710,1,2,0:0:0:0:
272,216,6044,2,8,L|184:312,1,120,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
368,208,6710,5,2,0:0:0:0:
304,208,6877,1,2,0:0:0:0:
256,256,7044,1,0,0:0:0:0:
80,248,7377,2,10,L|168:352,1,120,10|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
448,336,8044,6,6,L|496:296,2,60,6|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
272,272,8710,2,8,L|240:216,1,60,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
80,232,9210,5,2,0:0:0:0:
48,176,9377,1,6,0:0:0:0:
88,128,9544,1,2,0:0:0:0:
152,136,9710,1,2,0:0:0:0:
335,165,10044,1,8,0:0:0:0:
387,178,10210,1,8,0:0:0:0:
392,224,10377,1,0,0:0:0:0:
104,160,10710,6,6,L|32:224,2,90,6|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
232,160,11377,2,12,L|344:240,1,120,12|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
480,224,12044,6,2,L|400:272,2,90,2|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
368,144,12710,2,2,L|240:304,1,180,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
48,272,13377,6,6,P|24:224|48:160,1,120,6|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
240,160,14044,1,8,0:0:0:0:
280,192,14210,1,0,0:0:0:0:
328,224,14377,1,0,0:0:0:0:
144,184,14710,5,2,0:0:0:0:
93,213,14877,1,2,0:0:0:0:
85,276,15044,1,0,0:0:0:0:
264,296,15377,2,8,P|320:296|336:240,1,120,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
64,280,16044,5,4,0:0:0:0:
32,240,16210,1,2,0:0:0:0:
64,192,16377,1,2,0:0:0:0:
256,184,16710,2,8,L|360:96,1,120,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
160,104,17377,5,0,0:0:0:0:
120,144,17544,1,2,0:0:0:0:
80,184,17710,1,0,0:0:0:0:
264,192,18044,2,8,L|376:288,1,120,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
80,280,18710,5,6,0:0:0:0:
40,280,18877,1,2,0:0:0:0:
64,240,19044,1,0,0:0:0:0:
200,272,19377,2,8,L|320:336,1,120,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
472,280,20044,5,2,0:0:0:0:
432,248,20210,1,2,0:0:0:0:
392,208,20377,1,0,0:0:0:0:
207,180,20710,2,8,P|144:128|160:80,1,120,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
464,104,21377,5,6,0:0:0:0:
488,160,21544,1,2,0:0:0:0:
456,208,21710,1,0,0:0:0:0:
293,252,22044,2,8,L|166:252,1,120,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
344,288,22710,5,2,0:0:0:0:
392,288,22877,1,0,0:0:0:0:
428,289,23044,1,0,0:0:0:0:
120,296,23377,2,8,P|88:248|136:208,1,120,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
320,192,24044,6,6,L|464:192,1,120,6|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
264,192,24710,2,8,L|192:232,2,60,8|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
432,192,25377,6,0,L|504:232,2,60,0|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
144,184,26044,2,8,L|64:282,1,120,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
260,276,26710,5,2,0:0:0:0:
319,275,26877,1,0,0:0:0:0:
376,300,27044,1,2,0:0:0:0:
232,280,27377,2,8,L|120:338,1,120,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
304,280,28044,5,0,0:0:0:0:
360,280,28210,1,2,0:0:0:0:
328,280,28377,1,8,0:0:0:0:
56,328,28710,2,8,L|8:264,2,60,8|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
240,336,29377,6,6,L|368:336,1,120,6|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
208,256,30044,1,8,0:0:0:0:
152,256,30210,1,2,0:0:0:0:
136,200,30377,1,2,0:0:0:0:
440,192,30710,6,6,P|488:240|440:272,1,120,6|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
304,272,31377,1,0,0:0:0:0:
144,280,31710,6,8,L|208:288,1,60,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
312,296,32044,2,14,L|424:216,1,120,14|14,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
208,208,32710,2,12,P|176:168|216:112,1,120,12|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
488,144,33377,5,12,0:0:0:0:
504,200,33544,1,2,0:0:0:0:
448,216,33710,1,12,0:0:0:0:
272,226,34044,1,8,0:0:0:0:
207,220,34210,1,8,0:0:0:0:
177,164,34377,1,8,0:0:0:0:
206,121,34544,1,8,0:0:0:0:
264,118,34710,1,6,0:0:0:0:
480,232,35044,6,8,L|400:232,1,60,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
320,232,35377,2,2,L|232:320,1,120,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
64,312,36044,6,0,L|16:256,2,60,0|2|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
368,304,36710,2,2,L|512:312,1,120,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
311,223,37377,5,2,0:0:0:0:
148,221,37710,2,8,L|72:211,2,60,8|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
304,224,38377,2,8,L|384:224,1,60,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
192,224,38877,2,2,L|104:216,2,60,2|8|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
456,224,39544,6,2,L|504:160,1,60,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
296,176,40044,2,4,L|160:176,1,120,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
352,208,40710,2,2,L|480:272,1,120,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
272,248,41377,6,2,L|200:248,1,60,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
80,240,41877,2,0,L|160:240,1,60,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
334,239,42377,6,8,L|454:239,1,120,8|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,288,43210,2,2,L|196:288,1,60,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
40,288,43710,1,8,0:0:0:0:
336,272,44044,6,6,P|384:232|408:168,2,120,6|8|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
192,264,45044,1,8,0:0:0:0:
423,242,45377,6,6,P|455:279|490:357,2,135.000005149841,6|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
160,232,46877,1,0,0:0:0:0:
424,248,47377,2,2,L|480:336,1,90.0000034332277,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
240,312,48044,6,6,P|160:288|112:240,2,135.000005149841,6|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
384,320,49377,1,2,0:0:0:0:
144,304,50377,5,8,0:0:0:0:
352,272,50710,2,6,L|488:304,2,135.000005149841,6|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
144,256,52377,1,2,0:0:0:0:
280,256,52710,2,8,L|312:168,1,90.0000034332277,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
448,184,53377,6,6,L|416:96,1,90.0000034332277,6|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
272,112,54044,2,8,L|176:160,1,90.0000034332277,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
336,184,54710,2,0,L|416:240,1,90.0000034332277,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
184,240,56044,6,6,L|64:248,1,120,6|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
360,232,56710,2,2,L|432:240,1,60,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
496,240,57044,2,0,L|352:240,1,120,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
176,248,57710,6,0,L|248:280,1,60,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
312,280,58044,2,2,L|192:280,1,120,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
448,288,58710,6,2,B|504:288|504:288|432:288,1,120,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
240,288,59377,2,0,L|160:264,1,60,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
104,240,59710,2,8,L|240:240,1,120,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
432,256,60377,2,8,L|352:160,2,120,8|2|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
152,256,61377,6,6,P|88:224|80:176,1,120,6|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
272,152,62044,2,2,L|384:224,1,120,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
464,216,62544,1,2,0:0:0:0:
192,224,63044,6,8,P|136:232|88:272,2,120,8|2|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
480,224,64044,2,2,P|488:168|424:120,1,120,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
272,104,64710,2,2,L|144:120,1,120,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
336,104,65377,6,2,L|464:144,1,120,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
280,176,66044,1,8,0:0:0:0:
216,176,66210,1,8,0:0:0:0:
184,232,66377,1,8,0:0:0:0:
488,248,66710,6,4,P|520:304|464:336,1,120,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
288,312,67377,2,0,L|176:264,1,120,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
88,256,67877,1,2,0:0:0:0:
384,232,68377,6,8,L|496:304,2,120,8|2|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
80,232,69377,2,2,P|48:200|96:128,1,120,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
248,136,70044,2,2,L|360:184,1,120,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
440,216,70544,2,2,L|264:296,1,180,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
32,256,71710,5,8,0:0:0:0:
280,248,72044,6,6,L|480:304,1,192,6|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
224,264,73210,2,2,L|40:320,1,180,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
264,264,74044,2,8,L|392:336,1,120,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
104,304,74710,1,6,0:0:0:0:
336,304,75377,5,12,0:0:0:0:
48,288,75710,2,0,B|16:264|16:240|16:240|48:176|48:176|88:152|88:152|160:192,1,240,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
448,200,76710,2,8,P|472:160|432:80,1,120,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,77377,12,12,80044,0:0:0:0:
360,296,82710,6,6,P|464:280|408:200,1,240,6|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
136,184,84044,2,6,P|56:248|128:336,1,240,6|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
384,320,85377,2,6,L|128:304,1,240,6|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
480,120,86710,2,8,P|488:216|368:248,2,240,8|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
304,128,88377,5,0,0:0:0:0:
112,176,88710,1,0,0:0:0:0:
72,224,88877,1,0,0:0:0:0:
104,272,89044,1,0,0:0:0:0:
296,288,89377,6,0,L|440:296,1,120,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
224,264,90044,1,0,0:0:0:0:
168,240,90210,1,0,0:0:0:0:
176,192,90377,1,0,0:0:0:0:
488,216,90710,6,2,P|496:256|416:272,1,120,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,304,91377,1,8,0:0:0:0:
320,304,91544,1,2,0:0:0:0:
368,256,91710,1,8,0:0:0:0:
192,240,92044,6,2,L|48:256,1,120,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,168,92710,1,8,0:0:0:0:
312,168,92877,1,0,0:0:0:0:
368,168,93044,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,160,93377,6,6,L|24:288,1,120,6|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
216,296,94044,2,8,L|248:176,1,120,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
424,168,94710,6,2,L|288:168,1,120,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
112,168,95377,2,8,L|256:168,1,120,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
488,296,96044,5,6,0:0:0:0:
504,264,96210,1,2,0:0:0:0:
488,216,96377,1,0,0:0:0:0:
296,208,96710,1,8,0:0:0:0:
264,184,96877,1,0,0:0:0:0:
288,128,97044,1,8,0:0:0:0:
104,136,97377,6,8,L|40:144,1,60,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
136,184,97710,2,8,L|200:200,1,60,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
392,200,98044,5,8,0:0:0:0:
432,240,98210,1,8,0:0:0:0:
400,288,98377,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,98710,12,14,105377,0:0:0:0:

JBHyperion

osu!catch Paragon

3,885 posts

Joined September 2014

JBHyperion 2017-08-05T14:53:16+00:00

CWC recognition time

General

Why is Cup HP6? Way too high for new players, should be 3-4 lol. Also consider HP5 on the Salad so Salad>Platter gap isn't so big
Any special reason for AR9.2 on the Rain? I don;t have a problem with it, just curious
Custom hitwhistle is very quiet, suggest increasing the volume
Sliderslide hitsound is unused in catch, so it can be removed
01:39:044 (1) - Consider fading the spinner volume out over time in all diffs to match the fade out of the song

Cup

00:10:710 (1) - Curving this would fit the guitar sound a bit better and play more interesting-ly imo
00:25:544 (2,3) - Quite hard for a walk, consider reducing slightly
01:00:377 (4) - Would play better facing left imo, the direction change here is quite awkward for a new player
The last section after 01:22:377 (1) - is very clustered in the centre of the playfield, offering little variety in movement. Here's a screenshot to demonstrate: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8769095 - Try varying some directions to make better use of the full playfield, as it will make the map more varied and interesting to play, very important for simple difficulties like Cups.

Grapes' Salad

00:14:044 (2,3,4) - Feels unnecessary as a triple since the 1/2 sound is weak compared to the held guitar. 1/1 slider would fit better here, similar to 00:16:710 (4) -
00:13:377 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Very repetitive rhythms as a section, you should consider bringing some variety in here by alternating between drums and guitar. A good example would be something like: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8769149
00:38:877 (4,2) - NCs would fit better on these than 00:39:544 (1) - to maintain your previous patterns
00:41:210 - Good place for a circle on vocal to add variety
01:11:710 (1) - Reason to NC this single note?
01:14:710 (4,1) - Swap NC for downbeat
01:25:377 (3) - NC to avoid long combo, this stretches out for 17 beats
01:26:710 (4) - Consider splitting this into 2/1 slider and two 1/1 circles to emphasise the downbeat with a dash. The vocal and cymbal are really strong here

Hi_Nelly's Platter

00:10:627 (8,1) - 1/4 hyper at this BPM is unrankable, please remove (8) like you did at 01:17:209 (7,8) - or make this walkable like you did at 01:27:960 (8,1) -
00:13:877 (1,2) - For following guitar, this should be circle + 3/2 slider. Same applies to 00:19:210 (3,4) -
00:22:460 (4) - Overmapped, there's no 1/4 sound here
00:35:044 (1) - Unnecessary NC, you already have one on the note before and this isn't special in any way
00:37:210 (7,1) - Unexpectedly strong hyper, please reduce
00:45:377 (1,2) - etc. - Not a fan of these long sliders as you skip so many interesting vocal sounds. Breaking these up into smaller sliders can still keep the effect but follow the song much better. At the very least, consider mapping the skipped vocal sounds like 00:47:710 - 00:51:710 -
01:00:710 (5,6,1) - If you want to use 1/4 dashes at this BPM, make the distances more equal so it plays more smoothly and looks less jarring. Same applies to similar like 01:02:710 (1,2,3) -
01:08:210 (2,3) - Unexpectedly strong dash, consider reducing
01:15:876 (4) - Change to circle and 1/2 slider to map the strong downbeat cymbal sound
01:28:044 - Kinda surprising that the end kiai has only one hyper, right at the end. Isn't this the most intense part of the song? You can afford to add a few more in here for spread, e.g. 01:29:044 (4,1) - 01:31:710 (4,1) - 01:34:377 (6,1) - 01:37:877 (4,1) -

Rain

00:16:544 (1) - Unnecessary NC, your other patterns are 4 beat
00:25:544 (5) - But here is missing an NC, pretty long without it
00:26:877 - Missing drum sound, could add circle
00:28:710 (3,4) - As above, why not extend these to repeat sliders?
00:30:710 (5) - NC
01:02:544 (5,6) - Nothing to justify ending (5) on the downbeat really since the vocal is still held, suggest replacing this with 1/1 slider and circle
01:13:127 - Missing kick drum triplet which was mapped in the Platter
01:38:377 (5,6) - Consider making these more horizontal since the hypers are quite strong, it's easy to overshoot and troll the ending

Hope these suggestions help, good luck! (:

Nelly

Beatmap Nominator

1,533 posts

Joined August 2014

Topic Starter

Nelly 2017-08-24T07:03:41+00:00

JBHyperion wrote:
CWC recognition time

General
Why is Cup HP6? Way too high for new players, should be 3-4 lol. Also consider HP5 on the Salad so Salad>Platter gap isn't so big i'm dumb and didn't saw it. there it goes xd
Any special reason for AR9.2 on the Rain? I don;t have a problem with it, just curious because it's easier to read? i'll go with AR9.1 then ;\
Custom hitwhistle is very quiet, suggest increasing the volume
Sliderslide hitsound is unused in catch, so it can be removed
01:39:044 (1) - Consider fading the spinner volume out over time in all diffs to match the fade out of the song

Cup
00:10:710 (1) - Curving this would fit the guitar sound a bit better and play more interesting-ly imo
00:25:544 (2,3) - Quite hard for a walk, consider reducing slightly
01:00:377 (4) - Would play better facing left imo, the direction change here is quite awkward for a new player goes for offscreen so i did as left as it can
The last section after 01:22:377 (1) - is very clustered in the centre of the playfield, offering little variety in movement. Here's a screenshot to demonstrate: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8769095 - Try varying some directions to make better use of the full playfield, as it will make the map more varied and interesting to play, very important for simple difficulties like Cups. well, theres nothing i can do other than just remapping this section but i did my best

Grapes' Salad
00:14:044 (2,3,4) - Feels unnecessary as a triple since the 1/2 sound is weak compared to the held guitar. 1/1 slider would fit better here, similar to 00:16:710 (4) -
00:13:377 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Very repetitive rhythms as a section, you should consider bringing some variety in here by alternating between drums and guitar. A good example would be something like: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8769149
00:38:877 (4,2) - NCs would fit better on these than 00:39:544 (1) - to maintain your previous patterns
00:41:210 - Good place for a circle on vocal to add variety
01:11:710 (1) - Reason to NC this single note?
01:14:710 (4,1) - Swap NC for downbeat
01:25:377 (3) - NC to avoid long combo, this stretches out for 17 beats
01:26:710 (4) - Consider splitting this into 2/1 slider and two 1/1 circles to emphasise the downbeat with a dash. The vocal and cymbal are really strong here

Hi_Nelly's Platter
00:10:627 (8,1) - 1/4 hyper at this BPM is unrankable, please remove (8) like you did at 01:17:209 (7,8) - or make this walkable like you did at 01:27:960 (8,1) -
00:13:877 (1,2) - For following guitar, this should be circle + 3/2 slider. Same applies to 00:19:210 (3,4) -
00:22:460 (4) - Overmapped, there's no 1/4 sound here
00:35:044 (1) - Unnecessary NC, you already have one on the note before and this isn't special in any way
00:37:210 (7,1) - Unexpectedly strong hyper, please reduce
00:45:377 (1,2) - etc. - Not a fan of these long sliders as you skip so many interesting vocal sounds. Breaking these up into smaller sliders can still keep the effect but follow the song much better. At the very least, consider mapping the skipped vocal sounds like 00:47:710 - 00:51:710 -
01:00:710 (5,6,1) - If you want to use 1/4 dashes at this BPM, make the distances more equal so it plays more smoothly and looks less jarring. Same applies to similar like 01:02:710 (1,2,3) -
01:08:210 (2,3) - Unexpectedly strong dash, consider reducing
01:15:876 (4) - Change to circle and 1/2 slider to map the strong downbeat cymbal sound it sounds alright so i'll keep
01:28:044 - Kinda surprising that the end kiai has only one hyper, right at the end. Isn't this the most intense part of the song? You can afford to add a few more in here for spread, e.g. 01:29:044 (4,1) - 01:31:710 (4,1) - 01:34:377 (6,1) - 01:37:877 (4,1) - i'll just remap the entire section

Rain
00:16:544 (1) - Unnecessary NC, your other patterns are 4 beat
00:25:544 (5) - But here is missing an NC, pretty long without it
00:26:877 - Missing drum sound, could add circle
00:28:710 (3,4) - As above, why not extend these to repeat sliders?
00:30:710 (5) - NC
01:02:544 (5,6) - Nothing to justify ending (5) on the downbeat really since the vocal is still held, suggest replacing this with 1/1 slider and circle
01:13:127 - Missing kick drum triplet which was mapped in the Platter
01:38:377 (5,6) - Consider making these more horizontal since the hypers are quite strong, it's easy to overshoot and troll the ending
Hope these suggestions help, good luck! (:

No replies means accepted. Hi_Hello isn't responding to me so I have to fix it by myself. I accepted everything in Rain but I also made this kiai easier. Felt like it'll be difficult for advanced players. Thanks for modding!

wonjae

768 posts

Joined October 2014

wonjae 2017-08-25T23:39:11+00:00

JBHyperion wrote:
CWC recognition time

[notice] Grapes' Salad
00:14:044 (2,3,4) - Feels unnecessary as a triple since the 1/2 sound is weak compared to the held guitar. 1/1 slider would fit better here, similar to 00:16:710 (4) -
00:13:377 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Very repetitive rhythms as a section, you should consider bringing some variety in here by alternating between drums and guitar. A good example would be something like: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8769149
00:38:877 (4,2) - NCs would fit better on these than 00:39:544 (1) - to maintain your previous patterns
00:41:210 - Good place for a circle on vocal to add variety
01:11:710 (1) - Reason to NC this single note?
01:14:710 (4,1) - Swap NC for downbeat
01:25:377 (3) - NC to avoid long combo, this stretches out for 17 beats
01:26:710 (4) - Consider splitting this into 2/1 slider and two 1/1 circles to emphasise the downbeat with a dash. The vocal and cymbal are really strong here

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Hope these suggestions help, good luck! (:

fixed all besides last point.

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Nelly

Beatmap Nominator

1,533 posts

Joined August 2014

Topic Starter

Nelly 2017-08-26T06:43:52+00:00

Updated. Ready for modding.

Sakary

868 posts

Joined July 2013

Sakary 2017-08-29T23:33:46+00:00

Hi, Nelly
Sorry for not responding

But i did modify my part in the diff.
Fixed something that bothers me.
I will keep myself updated with the map soon. thanks!

platterific

osu file format v14

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Sorceress

332 posts

Joined September 2012

Sorceress 2017-08-30T03:59:28+00:00

Hey don't mind me, just passing through with a mod

[General]
Background: The overall quality on this background felt a little low so I did some quick and dirty upscaling with waifu2x, sharpened it a little and resized to 1920x1080. I think it looks noticeably better, certainly less blurry so check it out

[

Cup]

00:05:375 (1) - Quite a strong downbeat here with little distance to it. With the current distancing the emphasis is placed on 00:05:042 (2) - leaving 00:05:375 (1) - to feel very underwhelming. There's also a lack of emphasis on 00:08:042 (1) - due to low spacing but there's a quick way to sort both by moving all of 00:05:375 (1,2,3) - to about x:304
00:09:375 (1) - Almost purely for aesthetics I'd move this to x:112 to match the placement of 00:08:542 (2) - Though you'd also want to move all of 00:10:042 (2,1,2,3,4) - a grid space to the left too
There's a couple more downbeats in this section that would benefit from more distance, about 1.44x DS is good 00:18:708 (1) - and 00:21:375 (1) -
00:24:042 (1) - Strong downbeat marking the start of the next verse but there's no real movement here because 00:23:375 (5) - ends on the red tick. I reccomend ending 00:23:375 (5) - on the white tick at 00:23:708 - and then adding in some distance, about 1.56x DS worth to 00:24:042 (1) -
00:45:375 (1) - Is this slider meant to repeat on the red tick at 00:45:875 - It's really weird as it is right now
01:06:708 (1) - Greater distance to this would be good, try moving 01:06:042 (3) - to x:208
01:15:708 (2) - I think this plays and sounds better ending on the white tick at 01:15:708 (2) -
01:24:042 (3) - This is quite long for a complete standstill, maybe make it curve out to the right just a bit?
01:34:708 (1) - Really weak to distance to this, maybe try moving 01:33:708 (2) - to x:128 for a quick fix

[

Grapes' Salad]

I think tickrate 1 would be a good idea on this difficulty. It would make movements on sliders more forgiving and it currently conflicts with the Platter being tickrate 1
00:04:042 (3) - Absolutely 100% just aesthetics here, I think this looks nicer moved one grid space to the left at x:456
01:27:375 (3) - This note comes in at almost the absolute other side of the screen, no doubt very easy for a player at this level to only realise too late. I'd suggest changing the timeline up here a bit. Replace 01:26:708 (2) - with a 1/1 slider and same for 01:27:375 (3) - You'll have to delete 01:27:708 (4) - but I'd suggest this anyway as it currently ends on a prominent downbeat. You'll want to make a dash to a note on 01:28:042 - possibly a 1/1 slider or a repeating 1/2
01:37:375 (1,2) - I find the movement between these a bit awkward right now, possible to nerf the distance here a bit?

[

Hi_Nelly's Platter]
I used the code from Hi_Hello's latest post as the mapset hasn't been fully updated at the time of posting so the Platter mod should be on the absolute latest version of the map

00:06:042 (3) - This could really do with some more distance to it, it's easily walkable and it certainly deserves atleast a dash. I think the easiest way to do this would be to move 00:05:042 (7) - to x:264, 00:05:208 (8) - to x:136 and then 00:05:375 (1,2) - to x:432 This creates some space for a dash whilst making minor changes to the notes before it however it might be worth your time to try find an alternate solution that allows you to remove the antiflow on 00:05:375 (1) - as it makes for a pretty tricky hyperdash
00:08:042 (1,2) - The SV on these sliders is quite high, I think making these a little more vertical would help for players at this level, same for 00:08:875 (1,2) -
00:13:375 - Feels really weird to cover this downbeat with a slider end, I'd reccomend timelining this similar to the Rain instead
00:17:542 (6) - SV is a little high on this, try making it a bit more vertical. Also you may want to NC on this as the current combo gets as high as 14, exceeding the Ranking Criteria guideline of 12 in a Platter
00:35:375 (3) - Possible to make this slightly more vertical?
00:40:042 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6) - All of this is comfortably walkable and I think there's some room to spice it up a little. Try moving 00:41:042 (4) - to x:204 and move 00:42:042 (5) - to about x:396 and make it a little more horizontal
00:42:708 (1) - Quite strong antiflow and close to the edge of the playfield, I'd stronly suggest finding a way to nerf the antiflow and move it just a bit further into the playfield
00:48:042 (3) - After a hyper to 00:45:375 (1) - this certainly deserves atleast a nice dash, try moving 00:47:708 (2) - to about x:252 I'd also consider a NC on 00:48:042 (3) -
01:11:042 (2,3,4) - High SV sliders again, once more I'd suggest making them just a little less horizontal
01:12:042 (1) - Very much like at 00:42:708 (1) - but even closer to the edge of the playfield, I heavily reccomend nerfing this
Not really a point here, just that the last Kiai uses some more horizontal high SV sliders but they feel pretty good here due to the patterns they're used in so I'd say they're ok

[

Rain]

00:06:042 (5) - This is a very similar sound to 00:11:375 (2) - I think it would be worth making 00:05:875 (4,5) - a hyperdash
00:55:708 (2) - I'd see if you can get away with making this a cheeky extended slider ending at 00:55:958 - for the vocal. It would allow you to have a fast 1/4 hyper to 00:56:042 (1) - to start the Kiai with. You already use a couple of sliders like this in the Kiai so I think it would fit well
Fun Rain, I enjoyed playing it in cwc!

Hope this mod helps!

Nelly

Beatmap Nominator

1,533 posts

Joined August 2014

Topic Starter

Nelly 2017-08-30T05:11:05+00:00

Sorcerer wrote:
Hey don't mind me, just passing through with a mod
[General]
Background: The overall quality on this background felt a little low so I did some quick and dirty upscaling with waifu2x, sharpened it a little and resized to 1920x1080. I think it looks noticeably better, certainly less blurry so check it out

[ Cup]
00:05:375 (1) - Quite a strong downbeat here with little distance to it. With the current distancing the emphasis is placed on 00:05:042 (2) - leaving 00:05:375 (1) - to feel very underwhelming. There's also a lack of emphasis on 00:08:042 (1) - due to low spacing but there's a quick way to sort both by moving all of 00:05:375 (1,2,3) - to about x:304
00:09:375 (1) - Almost purely for aesthetics I'd move this to x:112 to match the placement of 00:08:542 (2) - Though you'd also want to move all of 00:10:042 (2,1,2,3,4) - a grid space to the left too
There's a couple more downbeats in this section that would benefit from more distance, about 1.44x DS is good 00:18:708 (1) - and 00:21:375 (1) -
00:24:042 (1) - Strong downbeat marking the start of the next verse but there's no real movement here because 00:23:375 (5) - ends on the red tick. I reccomend ending 00:23:375 (5) - on the white tick at 00:23:708 - and then adding in some distance, about 1.56x DS worth to 00:24:042 (1) -
00:45:375 (1) - Is this slider meant to repeat on the red tick at 00:45:875 - It's really weird as it is right now
01:06:708 (1) - Greater distance to this would be good, try moving 01:06:042 (3) - to x:208
01:15:708 (2) - I think this plays and sounds better ending on the white tick at 01:15:708 (2) -
01:24:042 (3) - This is quite long for a complete standstill, maybe make it curve out to the right just a bit?
01:34:708 (1) - Really weak to distance to this, maybe try moving 01:33:708 (2) - to x:128 for a quick fix
[ Grapes' Salad]
I think tickrate 1 would be a good idea on this difficulty. It would make movements on sliders more forgiving and it currently conflicts with the Platter being tickrate 1
00:04:042 (3) - Absolutely 100% just aesthetics here, I think this looks nicer moved one grid space to the left at x:456
01:27:375 (3) - This note comes in at almost the absolute other side of the screen, no doubt very easy for a player at this level to only realise too late. I'd suggest changing the timeline up here a bit. Replace 01:26:708 (2) - with a 1/1 slider and same for 01:27:375 (3) - You'll have to delete 01:27:708 (4) - but I'd suggest this anyway as it currently ends on a prominent downbeat. You'll want to make a dash to a note on 01:28:042 - possibly a 1/1 slider or a repeating 1/2
01:37:375 (1,2) - I find the movement between these a bit awkward right now, possible to nerf the distance here a bit?
[ Hi_Nelly's Platter]
I used the code from Hi_Hello's latest post as the mapset hasn't been fully updated at the time of posting so the Platter mod should be on the absolute latest version of the map

00:06:042 (3) - This could really do with some more distance to it, it's easily walkable and it certainly deserves atleast a dash. I think the easiest way to do this would be to move 00:05:042 (7) - to x:264, 00:05:208 (8) - to x:136 and then 00:05:375 (1,2) - to x:432 This creates some space for a dash whilst making minor changes to the notes before it however it might be worth your time to try find an alternate solution that allows you to remove the antiflow on 00:05:375 (1) - as it makes for a pretty tricky hyperdash
00:08:042 (1,2) - The SV on these sliders is quite high, I think making these a little more vertical would help for players at this level, same for 00:08:875 (1,2) -
00:13:375 - Feels really weird to cover this downbeat with a slider end, I'd reccomend timelining this similar to the Rain instead
00:17:542 (6) - SV is a little high on this, try making it a bit more vertical. Also you may want to NC on this as the current combo gets as high as 14, exceeding the Ranking Criteria guideline of 12 in a Platter
00:35:375 (3) - Possible to make this slightly more vertical?
00:40:042 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6) - All of this is comfortably walkable and I think there's some room to spice it up a little. Try moving 00:41:042 (4) - to x:204 and move 00:42:042 (5) - to about x:396 and make it a little more horizontal
00:42:708 (1) - Quite strong antiflow and close to the edge of the playfield, I'd stronly suggest finding a way to nerf the antiflow and move it just a bit further into the playfield
00:48:042 (3) - After a hyper to 00:45:375 (1) - this certainly deserves atleast a nice dash, try moving 00:47:708 (2) - to about x:252 I'd also consider a NC on 00:48:042 (3) -
01:11:042 (2,3,4) - High SV sliders again, once more I'd suggest making them just a little less horizontal
01:12:042 (1) - Very much like at 00:42:708 (1) - but even closer to the edge of the playfield, I heavily reccomend nerfing this
Not really a point here, just that the last Kiai uses some more horizontal high SV sliders but they feel pretty good here due to the patterns they're used in so I'd say they're ok
[ Rain]
00:06:042 (5) - This is a very similar sound to 00:11:375 (2) - I think it would be worth making 00:05:875 (4,5) - a hyperdash
00:55:708 (2) - I'd see if you can get away with making this a cheeky extended slider ending at 00:55:958 - for the vocal. It would allow you to have a fast 1/4 hyper to 00:56:042 (1) - to start the Kiai with. You already use a couple of sliders like this in the Kiai so I think it would fit well Don't really get myself about this meaning. If you meant to place a vertical slider then I'll accept it
Fun Rain, I enjoyed playing it in cwc!
Hope this mod helps!

No replies means accepted. This is actually really nice modding and thanks for getting out from this low quality background, it's even better then before. Thanks for modding!

AiChizuyu

3 posts

Joined March 2016

AiChizuyu 2017-08-30T06:30:20+00:00

, a few minutes ago I try this . It's latest version from your beatmap . Nice ~

#Edited, With a BGA

Sakary

868 posts

Joined July 2013

Sakary 2017-08-30T11:59:40+00:00

Sorcerer wrote:
[ Hi_Nelly's Platter]
I used the code from Hi_Hello's latest post as the mapset hasn't been fully updated at the time of posting so the Platter mod should be on the absolute latest version of the map

00:06:042 (3) - This could really do with some more distance to it, it's easily walkable and it certainly deserves atleast a dash. I think the easiest way to do this would be to move 00:05:042 (7) - to x:264, 00:05:208 (8) - to x:136 and then 00:05:375 (1,2) - to x:432 This creates some space for a dash whilst making minor changes to the notes before it however it might be worth your time to try find an alternate solution that allows you to remove the antiflow on 00:05:375 (1) - as it makes for a pretty tricky hyperdash alright, fixed the flow.
00:08:042 (1,2) - The SV on these sliders is quite high, I think making these a little more vertical would help for players at this level, same for 00:08:875 (1,2) - okay
00:13:375 - Feels really weird to cover this downbeat with a slider end, I'd reccomend timelining this similar to the Rain instead converted to slider instead
00:17:542 (6) - SV is a little high on this, try making it a bit more vertical. Also you may want to NC on this as the current combo gets as high as 14, exceeding the Ranking Criteria guideline of 12 in a Platter okay
00:35:375 (3) - Possible to make this slightly more vertical? yes
00:40:042 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6) - All of this is comfortably walkable and I think there's some room to spice it up a little. Try moving 00:41:042 (4) - to x:204 and move 00:42:042 (5) - to about x:396 and make it a little more horizontal made it a single 1 whole slider instead
00:42:708 (1) - Quite strong antiflow and close to the edge of the playfield, I'd stronly suggest finding a way to nerf the antiflow and move it just a bit further into the playfield true
00:48:042 (3) - After a hyper to 00:45:375 (1) - this certainly deserves atleast a nice dash, try moving 00:47:708 (2) - to about x:252 I'd also consider a NC on 00:48:042 (3) - okay
01:11:042 (2,3,4) - High SV sliders again, once more I'd suggest making them just a little less horizontal
01:12:042 (1) - Very much like at 00:42:708 (1) - but even closer to the edge of the playfield, I heavily reccomend nerfing this yes
Not really a point here, just that the last Kiai uses some more horizontal high SV sliders but they feel pretty good here due to the patterns they're used in so I'd say they're ok
It's my veryyy old mapping style. sorry for the ugliness of my diff.
Hope this mod helps!

zeplat

osu file format v14

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wonjae

768 posts

Joined October 2014

wonjae 2017-08-31T02:37:26+00:00

Sorcerer wrote:
Hey don't mind me, just passing through with a mod
[ Grapes' Salad]
I think tickrate 1 would be a good idea on this difficulty. It would make movements on sliders more forgiving and it currently conflicts with the Platter being tickrate 1 yea
00:04:042 (3) - Absolutely 100% just aesthetics here, I think this looks nicer moved one grid space to the left at x:456 nice aesthetics
01:27:375 (3) - This note comes in at almost the absolute other side of the screen, no doubt very easy for a player at this level to only realise too late. I'd suggest changing the timeline up here a bit. Replace 01:26:708 (2) - with a 1/1 slider and same for 01:27:375 (3) - You'll have to delete 01:27:708 (4) - but I'd suggest this anyway as it currently ends on a prominent downbeat. You'll want to make a dash to a note on 01:28:042 - possibly a 1/1 slider or a repeating 1/2 ok? i think i did it correctly lol
01:37:375 (1,2) - I find the movement between these a bit awkward right now, possible to nerf the distance here a bit? nerfed a little.
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Hope this mod helps!

ty.

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Nelly

Beatmap Nominator

1,533 posts

Joined August 2014

Topic Starter

Nelly 2017-08-31T04:51:47+00:00

Diffs has been updated. Waiting for a new mod.

Jemzuu

600 posts

Joined February 2016

Jemzuu 2017-09-01T09:07:44+00:00

hello it's me again if u dont mind tho here's a normal mod

General

add filipino to tags :> and also the names of the GDers as well

why not add combo colours? i'd suggest smth like

[Colours]
Combo1 : 0,140,0
Combo2 : 217,217,217
Combo3 : 108,54,0

00:00:709 - 01:17:542 - lower the volume for these spinners
Disable widescreen support for other diffs it's not needed cus there's no storyboard used

Rain

00:03:042 (2) - idk but i think that there's a missing hyper here since it's a strong beat
00:05:042 (6) - why not ctrl g this slider? it plays better imo and u also did it on 00:20:708 (5,6) - so why not amirite
00:26:875 - maybe add note here to support the guitar ? like what u did on 00:21:375 (1,2,3) -
01:06:208 (5) - just move this slightly a bit to the left
01:25:375 (1) - idk mayb make this a prepeat slider insted to support the percussion also make it look like 01:26:708 (1) -
01:26:208 (5) - maybe increase the spacing of this
01:37:875 (2) - could get more space imo

Hi_Nelly's Platter

00:10:542 (6) - idk but this note seems not quite fitting imo 00:10:375 (5) - i suggest to make this a repeat slider insted
00:18:708 - i'd suggest switch these 2 sliders and make (1) a repeat slider and (2) a 1/4 slider insted
00:19:708 - perhaps add a note here after to support the drums next
00:24:042 (1,2,3) - mayb reduce the spacing here a bit it's quite far visually
00:38:542 (1) - the spacing here is quite hard to catch imo reduce it a bit? x272 mayb
yea after adjusting that move 00:39:042 (2) - to x280
00:42:042 (3,4) - they look too close to each other even tho vocal is giving a new sound for (4)
01:02:708 (1,2,3,4,5) - mayb follow like what u did on 01:00:542 (4,5,6,1) - needs more spacing imo and i think this 01:03:708 (5) - slider here calls for a hyper for 01:04:042 (1) - since u did it on 01:01:042 (1,2) - as well and vocal is giving a strong beat. maybe move 01:04:042 (1) - to x444
01:22:708 (2) - whats with the fast SV here? song is calm in this section. change the offset it to 82708 for this timing point
01:32:708 (3,4) - i dont really think this part calls for a hyper or iiit'sss just a biiit tooo far.. yea i'd move it to x168 insted

welp that's all about it for me. hope it helps and goodluck!

wonjae

768 posts

Joined October 2014

wonjae 2017-09-01T21:47:12+00:00

u dont need to disable widescreen support and i dont think the tag change is needed unless the gder specifically say or if the song is actually fillipino, obviously nellys decision but thats my opinions

Jemzuu

600 posts

Joined February 2016

Jemzuu 2017-09-02T07:10:26+00:00

Paranoid Grapes wrote:
u dont need to disable widescreen support and i dont think the tag change is needed unless the gder specifically say or if the song is actually fillipino, obviously nellys decision but thats my opinions

hello yes i dont see a reason why u should keep widescreen support for the other diffs while Rain doesnt have it on? and the song is obviously Filipino??? I could definitely understand what is the lyrics of this song since im filipino myself and the ranked standard mapset also has Filipino in the tags as well as the GDers so i dont get ur point? ye it's up to nelly's desicion but it's actually necessary for rank lo

JBHyperion

osu!catch Paragon

3,885 posts

Joined September 2014

JBHyperion 2017-09-02T09:20:03+00:00

AJamez wrote:
Paranoid Grapes wrote:
u dont need to disable widescreen support and i dont think the tag change is needed unless the gder specifically say or if the song is actually fillipino, obviously nellys decision but thats my opinions
hello yes i dont see a reason why u should keep widescreen support for the other diffs while Rain doesnt have it on?

If there is no storyboard (which there isn't) then the widescreen support option does nothing. It literally doesn't make the slightest difference if it's on, off, or even inconsistent, so there's really no need to force the change unless that kind of thing triggers you for some reason :/

anyway recheck - no kudosu

General

soft-hitwhistle.wav is very quiet compared to the other hitsounds and blends in with the music. If you could increase the volume a little using audacity or fl studio or whatever that'd be cool
I included some hitsound suggestions in the Cup diff - be sure to apply these to the other diffs as well

Cup

00:34:208 (3,4,5) - Lacking hitsound emphasis - whistle / clap / whistle would be good
01:17:375 (4) - NC here would reduce clutter on the plate, since the next clear is after the spinner at 01:20:042 -. With 01:14:708 (1,2,3,4) - and the spinner bananas stacking up catching some of them might be difficult towards the end for new players
01:22:708 (2) - Should extend to the next white tick to catch the snare sound, the same as you did with 01:25:375 (1) -. Too strong to miss given you were emphasising them throughout
01:28:042 (1) - Finish would be good to emphasise the start of the kiai
01:33:042 - 01:36:375 - In the last kiai you were using clap on every 1/1 except these two, is that intentional? Maybe you wanna make them consistent

Salad
Let me just say that with recent changes to the Platter the spread gap between that diff and this one is becoming concerning. I'll recommend some places where you can add difficulty for better balance

00:23:375 (4,1) - Dash to start the new section, and pair the strong cymbal sound
00:42:375 (1) - Could be split into two circles with a jump emphasising the downbeat cymbal
00:45:042 (2,1) - Same as 00:23:375 (4,1) -
00:47:375 (3,1) - Dash can be increased since it's easy to overshoot right now. Looks like you were going off of DS to plan spacing, but I guess you forgot that you lowered SV here so this jump isn't as big as you thought?
00:50:375 (1,2) - As above
00:52:708 (4,1) - Cymbal emphasis once more, also helps to build intensity going into the kiai
01:11:708 (1,2) - Same as 00:47:375 (3,1) -
01:22:708 (1,2,1) - Jumps could be created by adding 1/1 circles for the vocal/kick drum
01:26:708 (1) - Really lacking emphasis for one of the strongest vocal pieces in the song, perhaps try adding a circle at 01:26:542 - for the kick drum to add a dash
01:27:875 - Could add a circle for drum roll to make this a 1/2 dash

Platter

00:19:875 (3,4,1) - Kind of an ugly curve, moving (4) left slightly (e.g. x-416) looks nicer
00:24:708 (4,1) - The flow here is pretty poor, since you have small movement into antiflow dash followed by another small movement. An alternative option that conserves flow would be something like this
00:26:542 (7,1) - 00:37:208 (7,1) - Seems excessive for a hyper given this section is so calm, I'd stick with a regular dash
00:42:042 (3,4) - Could be spaced a bit more for better flow, current distance forces the player to stop mid-movement to avoid overshooting
00:45:375 (1) - Shouldn't this slider end at 00:47:375 - for the vocal? Yes there's a vocal sound on the current tail to justify it ending there but the gap between 00:45:375 (1,2) - is just so awkward right now
01:17:375 (8) - Consider NC here to improve visibility, same reason as in Cup
01:22:708 (2) - Same as in Cup, this should be a 2/1 slider to hit the snare drum sound at 01:23:375 -

Rain

I wasn't criticising when I asked why you were using AR9.2 before, it was just curiosity. If you want to keep it that's fine lol
01:17:375 (9) - Consider NC here to improve visibility, same reason as in Cup
Nothing else to say on this diff, just fix the hitsounds I mentioned before and this will be ready to go

Get some more opinions on the Salad-Platter spread once this is applied and call me back after that.

Good luck! (:

Nelly

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Topic Starter

Nelly 2017-09-02T09:27:59+00:00

I'd recommend you to wait until it'll be updated.

JBHyperion

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Joined September 2014

JBHyperion 2017-09-02T09:59:31+00:00

Whoops, take the suggestions anyway since most of them concern the Salad and nothing on the Rain that really bothers me

Nelly

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Joined August 2014

Topic Starter

Nelly 2017-09-02T10:29:12+00:00

AJamez wrote:
hello it's me again if u dont mind tho here's a normal mod
General
add filipino to tags :> No thanks but thanks for mentioning to add some people who helped me out :thinking:
why not add combo colours? i'd suggest smth like
[Colours]
Combo1 : 0,140,0
Combo2 : 217,217,217
Combo3 : 108,54,0
00:00:709 - 01:17:542 - lower the volume for these spinners
Disable widescreen support for other diffs it's not needed cus there's no storyboard used Looking a bit about this conversation I came for a conclusion to deny it since it's pointless. Also it dosen't have a storyboard so xd
Rain
00:03:042 (2) - idk but i think that there's a missing hyper here since it's a strong beat I don't feel any strong sounds and stuff. Kept.
00:05:042 (6) - why not ctrl g this slider? it plays better imo and u also did it on 00:20:708 (5,6) - so why not amirite Denied because it will look like it's an Overdose diff.
00:26:875 - maybe add note here to support the guitar ? like what u did on 00:21:375 (1,2,3) -
01:06:208 (5) - just move this slightly a bit to the left
01:25:375 (1) - idk mayb make this a prepeat slider insted to support the percussion also make it look like 01:26:708 (1) - Why. It feels great for this part. Denied.
01:26:208 (5) - maybe increase the spacing of this
01:37:875 (2) - could get more space imo Moved a bit.
Hi_Nelly's Platter
01:22:708 (2) - whats with the fast SV here? song is calm in this section. change the offset it to 82708 for this timing point
01:32:708 (3,4) - i dont really think this part calls for a hyper or iiit'sss just a biiit tooo far.. yea i'd move it to x168 insted Then they'll tell that theres no hyperdashes or anything. Denied.
welp that's all about it for me. hope it helps and goodluck!

No replies means accepted. Thanks for modding!

Nelly

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1,533 posts

Joined August 2014

Topic Starter

Nelly 2017-09-02T10:46:27+00:00

JBHyperion wrote:
General
soft-hitwhistle.wav is very quiet compared to the other hitsounds and blends in with the music. If you could increase the volume a little using audacity or fl studio or whatever that'd be cool
I included some hitsound suggestions in the Cup diff - be sure to apply these to the other diffs as well

Cup
00:34:208 (3,4,5) - Lacking hitsound emphasis - whistle / clap / whistle would be good
01:17:375 (4) - NC here would reduce clutter on the plate, since the next clear is after the spinner at 01:20:042 -. With 01:14:708 (1,2,3,4) - and the spinner bananas stacking up catching some of them might be difficult towards the end for new players
01:22:708 (2) - Should extend to the next white tick to catch the snare sound, the same as you did with 01:25:375 (1) -. Too strong to miss given you were emphasising them throughout
01:28:042 (1) - Finish would be good to emphasise the start of the kiai
01:33:042 - 01:36:375 - In the last kiai you were using clap on every 1/1 except these two, is that intentional? Maybe you wanna make them consistent Well when I played the original version in standard I thought it sounds great for that so I'll keep this section in peace.

Platter
01:17:375 (8) - Consider NC here to improve visibility, same reason as in Cup
01:22:708 (2) - Same as in Cup, this should be a 2/1 slider to hit the snare drum sound at 01:23:375 -

Rain
I wasn't criticising when I asked why you were using AR9.2 before, it was just curiosity. If you want to keep it that's fine lol Thought the players could catch with 9.2 because AR 9 might be a bit slower. Thus I changed to AR 9.1 to avoid some new problems.
01:17:375 (9) - Consider NC here to improve visibility, same reason as in Cup
Nothing else to say on this diff, just fix the hitsounds I mentioned before and this will be ready to go

Double post because I can ignore the rules sometimes xd. Anyway, no replies means accepted. Let me finish with hitsounding first so my buds could reach me out. Thanks for recheck!

Sakary

868 posts

Joined July 2013

Sakary 2017-09-02T11:50:09+00:00

AJamez wrote:
hello it's me again if u dont mind tho here's a normal mod
Hi_Nelly's Platter
00:10:542 (6) - idk but this note seems not quite fitting imo 00:10:375 (5) - i suggest to make this a repeat slider insted how can i even?
00:18:708 - i'd suggest switch these 2 sliders and make (1) a repeat slider and (2) a 1/4 slider insted what? i have to convert 2 as 1/4 repeat slider? that would be off.
00:19:708 - perhaps add a note here after to support the drums next i'm following the sync here. let's see if someone notices it again.
00:24:042 (1,2,3) - mayb reduce the spacing here a bit it's quite far visually okay
00:38:542 (1) - the spacing here is quite hard to catch imo reduce it a bit? x272 mayb okay
yea after adjusting that move 00:39:042 (2) - to x280 okay
00:42:042 (3,4) - they look too close to each other even tho vocal is giving a new sound for (4) fixed
01:02:708 (1,2,3,4,5) - mayb follow like what u did on 01:00:542 (4,5,6,1) - needs more spacing imo and i think this 01:03:708 (5) - slider here calls for a hyper for 01:04:042 (1) - since u did it on 01:01:042 (1,2) - as well and vocal is giving a strong beat. maybe move 01:04:042 (1) - to x444 move 5 further only.
01:22:708 (2) - whats with the fast SV here? song is calm in this section. change the offset it to 82708 for this timing point nelly did that
01:32:708 (3,4) - i dont really think this part calls for a hyper or iiit'sss just a biiit tooo far.. yea i'd move it to x168 insted ^
[/notice]

welp that's all about it for me. hope it helps and goodluck! Thanks!

Sakary

868 posts

Joined July 2013

Sakary 2017-09-02T12:24:58+00:00

JBHyperion wrote:
Platter
00:19:875 (3,4,1) - Kind of an ugly curve, moving (4) left slightly (e.g. x-416) looks nicer yay
00:24:708 (4,1) - The flow here is pretty poor, since you have small movement into antiflow dash followed by another small movement. An alternative option that conserves flow would be something like this looks nicer
00:26:542 (7,1) - 00:37:208 (7,1) - Seems excessive for a hyper given this section is so calm, I'd stick with a regular dash sure
00:42:042 (3,4) - Could be spaced a bit more for better flow, current distance forces the player to stop mid-movement to avoid overshooting sure
00:45:375 (1) - Shouldn't this slider end at 00:47:375 - for the vocal? Yes there's a vocal sound on the current tail to justify it ending there but the gap between 00:45:375 (1,2) - is just so awkward right now edited this. i agree its awkward.
01:17:375 (8) - Consider NC here to improve visibility, same reason as in Cup yes
01:22:708 (2) - Same as in Cup, this should be a 2/1 slider to hit the snare drum sound at 01:23:375 - sure.

Good luck! (:

Thanks for the mod. it helped a lot.

platter

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wonjae

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Joined October 2014

wonjae 2017-09-02T17:57:17+00:00

JBHyperion wrote:
Salad
Let me just say that with recent changes to the Platter the spread gap between that diff and this one is becoming concerning. I'll recommend some places where you can add difficulty for better balance
00:23:375 (4,1) - Dash to start the new section, and pair the strong cymbal sound
00:42:375 (1) - Could be split into two circles with a jump emphasising the downbeat cymbal
00:45:042 (2,1) - Same as 00:23:375 (4,1) -
00:47:375 (3,1) - Dash can be increased since it's easy to overshoot right now. Looks like you were going off of DS to plan spacing, but I guess you forgot that you lowered SV here so this jump isn't as big as you thought?
00:50:375 (1,2) - As above
00:52:708 (4,1) - Cymbal emphasis once more, also helps to build intensity going into the kiai
01:11:708 (1,2) - Same as 00:47:375 (3,1) -
01:22:708 (1,2,1) - Jumps could be created by adding 1/1 circles for the vocal/kick drum i only did this after the 3rd 2/1 slider.
01:26:708 (1) - Really lacking emphasis for one of the strongest vocal pieces in the song, perhaps try adding a circle at 01:26:542 - for the kick drum to add a dash added a note at 01:26:374 instead to make a dash.
01:27:875 - Could add a circle for drum roll to make this a 1/2 dash

Good luck! (:

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Nelly

Beatmap Nominator

1,533 posts

Joined August 2014

Topic Starter

Nelly 2017-09-02T18:00:05+00:00

Everything is updated

wonjae

768 posts

Joined October 2014

wonjae 2017-09-02T18:21:51+00:00

alright ima throw my opinions on the platter since its pretty hard or something

idk if i get kds for this since im apart of the mapset lul

General:

I noticed that the AR gap between salad - platter - rain is a bit big, i would maybe reduce ar to 7.8-7.6

ok heres the map

hypers like 00:39:874 (6,1) - are pretty hard to hit accurately for players in this level, i think adding a curve would be better like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8999970

00:44:041 (1) - add more curve to this, hitting droplets is hard bc of how verticle it is after the hyper like this 00:42:707 (1) -

00:57:207 (4,1) - hyper here isnt needed imo since i dont really think theres that loud or distinct of a noise here to emphasise. Hypers like 01:01:374 (1) - make sense tho so jeep ones like these lol

01:04:041 (1) - antiflow makes this hard to acc and catch for lower players also. try to curve like the first point.

01:32:541 (2,3) - yikes, thats a screen hyper right out of a dashing part, i would suggest lowering distance or something like https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9000071

ok thats it.

Nelly

Beatmap Nominator

1,533 posts

Joined August 2014

Topic Starter

Nelly 2017-09-02T18:39:59+00:00

Paranoid Grapes wrote:
General:

I noticed that the AR gap between salad - platter - rain is a bit big, i would maybe reduce ar to 7.8-7.6

01:32:541 (2,3) - yikes, thats a screen hyper right out of a dashing part, i would suggest lowering distance or something like https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9000071

Applied everything. AR is now at 7.8

Sakary

868 posts

Joined July 2013

Sakary 2017-09-03T01:08:00+00:00

Paranoid Grapes wrote:
alright ima throw my opinions on the platter since its pretty hard or something

hypers like 00:39:874 (6,1) - are pretty hard to hit accurately for players in this level, i think adding a curve would be better like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8999970

00:44:041 (1) - add more curve to this, hitting droplets is hard bc of how verticle it is after the hyper like this 00:42:707 (1) -

00:57:207 (4,1) - hyper here isnt needed imo since i dont really think theres that loud or distinct of a noise here to emphasise. Hypers like 01:01:374 (1) - make sense tho so jeep ones like these lol

01:04:041 (1) - antiflow makes this hard to acc and catch for lower players also. try to curve like the first point.

ok thats it.

huhuhu
Thanks!!!

platter

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Nelly

Beatmap Nominator

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Nelly 2017-09-03T05:39:15+00:00

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wonjae

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wonjae 2017-09-09T04:56:15+00:00

monkaS

JBHyperion

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Joined September 2014

JBHyperion 2017-09-16T12:22:30+00:00

Recheck I guess, no kudosu

Salad:

00:34:707 (8,1) - Intented walk? Feels a bit far, either reduce or make a clear dash here
00:39:541 (2,1) - Strong cymbal sound really missing a dash imo
01:05:374 (1,2) - Same, but for strong vocal, would help emphasise 01:06:707 (1) - as well with double dash
01:07:874 (3,1) - Could be a dash for strong vocal, it's quite a hard walk atm already
01:11:374 - Skipping a drum sound does offer a pause, but since you're in the kiai it feels a bit unnecessary since you then have a pause at 01:13:040 -. I'd add a circle here
01:12:041 (2,3) - Kinda hard because 3/2 spacing, but a dash would be really nice here for the vocal
01:17:374 (1) - Could also add circle here with dash and move the spinner start back to hit that high pitch vocal sound
01:34:707 (1,2) - Dash for strong drum sound? Could also make this a 1/2 triple as in the Cup tbh

Platter:

00:16:040 (1,2,3) - Hyper into antiflow is not permitted in Platter difficulties, so move (2) to x-16 or so. This also avoids a flowstop on (3) - similar to what you did at 00:24:041 (1,2,3) -
00:37:374 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,1,2) - Very cluttered around the middle-left of the playfield, so offers little play variety. Try varying the flow around here. Ex. 00:39:374 (4,5) - 00:39:874 (6,1) - would be great places for dashes and/or direction changes to make use of the playfield edges
00:52:707 (3,1) - Feels a bit underwhelming for a dash, could be increased a bit

Cup and Rain are fine for me.

Call me back.

Sakary

868 posts

Joined July 2013

Sakary 2017-09-16T13:44:30+00:00

JBHyperion wrote:
Recheck I guess, no kudosu

Platter:
00:16:040 (1,2,3) - Hyper into antiflow is not permitted in Platter difficulties, so move (2) to x-16 or so. This also avoids a flowstop on (3) - similar to what you did at 00:24:041 (1,2,3) -
00:37:374 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,1,2) - Very cluttered around the middle-left of the playfield, so offers little play variety. Try varying the flow around here. Ex. 00:39:374 (4,5) - 00:39:874 (6,1) - would be great places for dashes and/or direction changes to make use of the playfield edges
00:52:707 (3,1) - Feels a bit underwhelming for a dash, could be increased a bit
Cup and Rain are fine for me.

Call me back.

Thank you JBH

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wonjae

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wonjae 2017-09-16T16:36:54+00:00

JBHyperion wrote:
Recheck I guess, no kudosu

Salad:
00:34:707 (8,1) - Intented walk? Feels a bit far, either reduce or make a clear dash here
00:39:541 (2,1) - Strong cymbal sound really missing a dash imo
01:05:374 (1,2) - Same, but for strong vocal, would help emphasise 01:06:707 (1) - as well with double dash
01:07:874 (3,1) - Could be a dash for strong vocal, it's quite a hard walk atm already hard to do because these notes are placed 3/2s away from eachother.
01:11:374 - Skipping a drum sound does offer a pause, but since you're in the kiai it feels a bit unnecessary since you then have a pause at 01:13:040 -. I'd add a circle here even though its in the kiai, song intensity changes and it switches off of kiai right after where this note would be anyway.
01:12:041 (2,3) - Kinda hard because 3/2 spacing, but a dash would be really nice here for the vocal
01:17:374 (1) - Could also add circle here with dash and move the spinner start back to hit that high pitch vocal sound
01:34:707 (1,2) - Dash for strong drum sound? Could also make this a 1/2 triple as in the Cup tbh
Platter:
00:16:040 (1,2,3) - Hyper into antiflow is not permitted in Platter difficulties, so move (2) to x-16 or so. This also avoids a flowstop on (3) - similar to what you did at 00:24:041 (1,2,3) -
00:37:374 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,1,2) - Very cluttered around the middle-left of the playfield, so offers little play variety. Try varying the flow around here. Ex. 00:39:374 (4,5) - 00:39:874 (6,1) - would be great places for dashes and/or direction changes to make use of the playfield edges
00:52:707 (3,1) - Feels a bit underwhelming for a dash, could be increased a bit
Cup and Rain are fine for me.

Call me back.

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salad

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Nelly

Beatmap Nominator

1,533 posts

Joined August 2014

Topic Starter

Nelly 2017-09-16T16:38:49+00:00

Updated

MBomb

MBomb 2017-09-29T03:54:27+00:00

I'm here to check a few things, concerns were had with salad-platter gap, apparently, but will check everything.

[Cup]

HP3 would work nice for spread, as well as maybe a lower AR/OD, such as 5.5.

00:18:707 (1) - Not really comfortable with having the same distance to this as 3 as this is clearly a stronger note, try x:416 on it.
00:24:040 (1,2) - Distancing to 1 is really small considering how strong that note is. Maybe try 1 on x:80 and 2 on x:176 here.
00:45:374 (1) - Again, pretty strong section change with a pretty small distancing. x:144 would help to emphasise the change more.
00:50:707 (1) - Bigger distancing on this strong sound too please, x:384 is great.
00:56:040 (1) - Start of the kiai could do with a bit more power than what this distance currently provides, x:320 would help to give that.
01:30:041 (2) - Movements in this section currently feel kinda repetitive. I think making this go to the right instead is a nice way to help reduce that repetitive feeling slightly.

[Salad]

I'm good at buffing salads, don't worry :^)

00:03:374 (4) - For the first actual movement in the map, this is pretty strong, could do with a slight reduction to help ease the player into the difficulty, x:224 is nice.
00:37:374 (1) - I think a dash to this would fit pretty well for the guitar on this part.
00:48:041 (1) - Pretty small dash distance in comparison to other dashes in the map. Maybe increase to x:192 to make it more obvious.
00:50:708 (2) - Same as above really, try a slightly weaker curve, and move it to the right a bit more, like x:408.
00:53:374 (1) - You generally used strong dash distances throughout the beginning of the map, so such a weak one here could throw the player off quite a bit. A bigger distancing such as x:128 would help to remedy this.
00:55:374 - Could add a 1/1 slider on this for the vocal, and then have a dash into the start of the kiai. Sounds really good to me, personal preference though.
01:07:374 (2,3) - Really inconsistent timeline here with earlier in this kiai, try to either make this similar to that, or change that to be similar to this. Also, the current distancing from this to the next note is really strong so if you choose to change the other, fix this.
01:13:207 (4) - This one's a bit too harsh, try reducing to x:184.
01:34:041 (2) - This not being 3 circles feels really weird considering it's been 3 circles for every other drum section like this in this kiai.
01:35:374 (2) - This one even more so, especially considering how strong the 1/2 drum is on this one.
01:37:041 (6,1) - Could be nice to have a dash to 1 for consistency on this part. 6 on x:320 and 1 on x:40 as a vertical slider is a nice way to accomplish this that I like a lot.

Really nice salad, wasn't much changes I could make to buff it that I particularly wanted to do here.

[Platter]

HP5 would work nice for spread.

00:12:040 (1) - I think due to the sudden volume decrease and lowering drum intensity, a normal dash to this could be used to emphasise that toning down.
00:14:207 (4) - Not really sure of the point of a dash to this, it's not a particularly strong note, just the held guitar sound. A normal movement would work fine.
00:25:207 (2,3) - Movement to 2 feels pretty strong right now for a normal dash. Try x:304 on this part.
00:42:707 (1) - Pretty strong HDash to this, can be easily reduced by ctrl+g and moving it to x:128.
00:44:041 (1) - Another ridiculously strong HDash here, definitely can be reduced to like x:224 and given a shape like this.
00:45:374 (1) - HDash to this is pretty strong currently too. Definitely reduce the distancing to it slightly, some changes to slider shape maybe necessary to accomplish that.
00:55:374 - 1/1 slider here with a HDash into the kiai would be really nice in my opinion to emphasise the start of the kiai.
01:06:707 (1) - HDash strength to this one is really strong too. Try a curve like this at x:144.
01:10:041 (2) - Not really a necessary HDash to this, the note isn't particularly strong. Could try moving the head to x:144 and keeping the tail in approximately the same place.
01:12:041 (1) - Try moving the head to x:112 to make the HDash slightly weaker, with a similar curve but have the tail at the same place.
01:16:707 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1) - HDash to that curve could be nice for the high pitched vocal there. Try x:128 on this section.
01:32:707 (3) - Try making this 3 circles instead of a slider for consistency, and move the start one closer to make the HDash slightly weaker, x:208 is a good starting place for this pattern.
01:35:707 (4) - Very strong HDash, especially considering it's followed by that kind of direction change. x:208 would feel a lot more comfortable here.

[Rain]

00:52:707 (4,1) - Could be nice to rearrange this in such a way where there's a HDash to 1, considering there has been for every other cymbal in this section.
00:56:041 (1) - Beginning of kiai here feels very underemphasised without a HDash in my opinion considering it's a very strong introduction. Maybe find a way to add one in?
01:03:707 (3) - I see the decreasing pitch of the vocals here as a good reason to maybe just have a normal movement to this, a HDash definitely seems a bit much. ctrl+H and x:292 feels nice to me.
01:04:707 (3) - Normal dash would be fine here, a HDash feels a little unnecessary given the vocal strength isn't too strong on this one. x:168 accomplishes this well and also weakens the next jump which is an antiflow HDash, which makes it feel nicer to play.
01:14:041 (2) - The music being weaker here as well as the vocals getting slowly lower pitch makes me feel like it'd be nicer to play these as normal dashes, moving this to x:248 works well for that.
01:26:374 (6) - Ridiculously weak drum, there's no need for there to be a HDash to this at all, or even a dash, really. Try ctrl+H and put it on x:288.

The rest is fine to me.

wonjae

768 posts

Joined October 2014

wonjae 2017-09-29T06:19:02+00:00

- Magic Bomb - wrote:
I'm here to check a few things, concerns were had with salad-platter gap, apparently, but will check everything.

[Salad]

I'm good at buffing salads, don't worry :^)

00:03:374 (4) - For the first actual movement in the map, this is pretty strong, could do with a slight reduction to help ease the player into the difficulty, x:224 is nice. okay
00:37:374 (1) - I think a dash to this would fit pretty well for the guitar on this part. ok
00:48:041 (1) - Pretty small dash distance in comparison to other dashes in the map. Maybe increase to x:192 to make it more obvious. ok
00:50:708 (2) - Same as above really, try a slightly weaker curve, and move it to the right a bit more, like x:408.
00:53:374 (1) - You generally used strong dash distances throughout the beginning of the map, so such a weak one here could throw the player off quite a bit. A bigger distancing such as x:128 would help to remedy this.
00:55:374 - Could add a 1/1 slider on this for the vocal, and then have a dash into the start of the kiai. Sounds really good to me, personal preference though.
01:07:374 (2,3) - Really inconsistent timeline here with earlier in this kiai, try to either make this similar to that, or change that to be similar to this. Also, the current distancing from this to the next note is really strong so if you choose to change the other, fix this.
01:13:207 (4) - This one's a bit too harsh, try reducing to x:184.
01:34:041 (2) - This not being 3 circles feels really weird considering it's been 3 circles for every other drum section like this in this kiai. no
01:35:374 (2) - This one even more so, especially considering how strong the 1/2 drum is on this one.
01:37:041 (6,1) - Could be nice to have a dash to 1 for consistency on this part. 6 on x:320 and 1 on x:40 as a vertical slider is a nice way to accomplish this that I like a lot.

Really nice salad, wasn't much changes I could make to buff it that I particularly wanted to do here.

The rest is fine to me.

applied all but marked.

dont mind the okays, i got lazy

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Nelly

Beatmap Nominator

1,533 posts

Joined August 2014

Topic Starter

Nelly 2017-09-29T06:29:41+00:00

- Magic Bomb - wrote:
I'm here to check a few things, concerns were had with salad-platter gap, apparently, but will check everything.

[Cup]

HP3 would work nice for spread, as well as maybe a lower AR/OD, such as 5.5.

00:18:707 (1) - Not really comfortable with having the same distance to this as 3 as this is clearly a stronger note, try x:416 on it.
00:24:040 (1,2) - Distancing to 1 is really small considering how strong that note is. Maybe try 1 on x:80 and 2 on x:176 here.
00:45:374 (1) - Again, pretty strong section change with a pretty small distancing. x:144 would help to emphasise the change more.
00:50:707 (1) - Bigger distancing on this strong sound too please, x:384 is great.
00:56:040 (1) - Start of the kiai could do with a bit more power than what this distance currently provides, x:320 would help to give that.
01:30:041 (2) - Movements in this section currently feel kinda repetitive. I think making this go to the right instead is a nice way to help reduce that repetitive feeling slightly.

[Salad]

I'm good at buffing salads, don't worry :^)

00:03:374 (4) - For the first actual movement in the map, this is pretty strong, could do with a slight reduction to help ease the player into the difficulty, x:224 is nice.
00:37:374 (1) - I think a dash to this would fit pretty well for the guitar on this part.
00:48:041 (1) - Pretty small dash distance in comparison to other dashes in the map. Maybe increase to x:192 to make it more obvious.
00:50:708 (2) - Same as above really, try a slightly weaker curve, and move it to the right a bit more, like x:408.
00:53:374 (1) - You generally used strong dash distances throughout the beginning of the map, so such a weak one here could throw the player off quite a bit. A bigger distancing such as x:128 would help to remedy this.
00:55:374 - Could add a 1/1 slider on this for the vocal, and then have a dash into the start of the kiai. Sounds really good to me, personal preference though.
01:07:374 (2,3) - Really inconsistent timeline here with earlier in this kiai, try to either make this similar to that, or change that to be similar to this. Also, the current distancing from this to the next note is really strong so if you choose to change the other, fix this.
01:13:207 (4) - This one's a bit too harsh, try reducing to x:184.
01:34:041 (2) - This not being 3 circles feels really weird considering it's been 3 circles for every other drum section like this in this kiai.
01:35:374 (2) - This one even more so, especially considering how strong the 1/2 drum is on this one.
01:37:041 (6,1) - Could be nice to have a dash to 1 for consistency on this part. 6 on x:320 and 1 on x:40 as a vertical slider is a nice way to accomplish this that I like a lot.

Really nice salad, wasn't much changes I could make to buff it that I particularly wanted to do here.

[Platter]

HP5 would work nice for spread.

00:12:040 (1) - I think due to the sudden volume decrease and lowering drum intensity, a normal dash to this could be used to emphasise that toning down.
00:14:207 (4) - Not really sure of the point of a dash to this, it's not a particularly strong note, just the held guitar sound. A normal movement would work fine.
00:25:207 (2,3) - Movement to 2 feels pretty strong right now for a normal dash. Try x:304 on this part.
00:42:707 (1) - Pretty strong HDash to this, can be easily reduced by ctrl+g and moving it to x:128.
00:44:041 (1) - Another ridiculously strong HDash here, definitely can be reduced to like x:224 and given a shape like this.
00:45:374 (1) - HDash to this is pretty strong currently too. Definitely reduce the distancing to it slightly, some changes to slider shape maybe necessary to accomplish that.
00:55:374 - 1/1 slider here with a HDash into the kiai would be really nice in my opinion to emphasise the start of the kiai.
01:06:707 (1) - HDash strength to this one is really strong too. Try a curve like this at x:144.
01:10:041 (2) - Not really a necessary HDash to this, the note isn't particularly strong. Could try moving the head to x:144 and keeping the tail in approximately the same place.
01:12:041 (1) - Try moving the head to x:112 to make the HDash slightly weaker, with a similar curve but have the tail at the same place.
01:16:707 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1) - HDash to that curve could be nice for the high pitched vocal there. Try x:128 on this section.
01:32:707 (3) - Try making this 3 circles instead of a slider for consistency, and move the start one closer to make the HDash slightly weaker, x:208 is a good starting place for this pattern. Denying this suggestion because there's no HD for (1) and I want to keep it rhythmically
01:35:707 (4) - Very strong HDash, especially considering it's followed by that kind of direction change. x:208 would feel a lot more comfortable here.

[Rain]

00:52:707 (4,1) - Could be nice to rearrange this in such a way where there's a HDash to 1, considering there has been for every other cymbal in this section. Changed this (6) slider to vertical to avoid problems with circle part
00:56:041 (1) - Beginning of kiai here feels very underemphasised without a HDash in my opinion considering it's a very strong introduction. Maybe find a way to add one in?
01:03:707 (3) - I see the decreasing pitch of the vocals here as a good reason to maybe just have a normal movement to this, a HDash definitely seems a bit much. ctrl+H and x:292 feels nice to me.
01:04:707 (3) - Normal dash would be fine here, a HDash feels a little unnecessary given the vocal strength isn't too strong on this one. x:168 accomplishes this well and also weakens the next jump which is an antiflow HDash, which makes it feel nicer to play. Accepted but I did some tricks to this section
01:14:041 (2) - The music being weaker here as well as the vocals getting slowly lower pitch makes me feel like it'd be nicer to play these as normal dashes, moving this to x:248 works well for that.
01:26:374 (6) - Ridiculously weak drum, there's no need for there to be a HDash to this at all, or even a dash, really. Try ctrl+H and put it on x:288.

The rest is fine to me.

No replies means accepted. Thanks for modding! Waiting for Hi_Hello to accept things.

Sakary

868 posts

Joined July 2013

Sakary 2017-09-29T13:47:43+00:00

- Magic Bomb - wrote:
I'm here to check a few things, concerns were had with salad-platter gap, apparently, but will check everything.

[Platter]

HP5 would work nice for spread.

00:12:040 (1) - I think due to the sudden volume decrease and lowering drum intensity, a normal dash to this could be used to emphasise that toning down.
00:14:207 (4) - Not really sure of the point of a dash to this, it's not a particularly strong note, just the held guitar sound. A normal movement would work fine.
00:25:207 (2,3) - Movement to 2 feels pretty strong right now for a normal dash. Try x:304 on this part.
00:42:707 (1) - Pretty strong HDash to this, can be easily reduced by ctrl+g and moving it to x:128.
00:44:041 (1) - Another ridiculously strong HDash here, definitely can be reduced to like x:224 and given a shape like this.
00:45:374 (1) - HDash to this is pretty strong currently too. Definitely reduce the distancing to it slightly, some changes to slider shape maybe necessary to accomplish that.
00:55:374 - 1/1 slider here with a HDash into the kiai would be really nice in my opinion to emphasise the start of the kiai. true. i can see your style of mapping. nice suggestion anyway.
01:06:707 (1) - HDash strength to this one is really strong too. Try a curve like this at x:144.
01:10:041 (2) - Not really a necessary HDash to this, the note isn't particularly strong. Could try moving the head to x:144 and keeping the tail in approximately the same place.
01:12:041 (1) - Try moving the head to x:112 to make the HDash slightly weaker, with a similar curve but have the tail at the same place.
01:16:707 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1) - HDash to that curve could be nice for the high pitched vocal there. Try x:128 on this section.
01:32:707 (3) - Try making this 3 circles instead of a slider for consistency, and move the start one closer to make the HDash slightly weaker, x:208 is a good starting place for this pattern.
01:35:707 (4) - Very strong HDash, especially considering it's followed by that kind of direction change. x:208 would feel a lot more comfortable here.

Thanks!

zeplat

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84,147,87707,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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129,69,87874,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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