~Hello again!(When you see the symbol ''^'',it means that i mentioned my suggestion already on a previous pattern/kiai or whatever)Normal:00:20:669 (2,3) - : Hmm,you should never start sliders on blue ticks.In these difficulties you should always start sliders on white and red ticks.For
Normal's case,blue ticks are often difficult for newer players to play because of how quick and/or awkward they are when you start playing,so you should avoid using them.It's a bit inconsistent rhythm.I recommend to move them on the next white ticks.I know that you want to map the exact part that the vocals are starting from,but you should follow a normal cohesion on the hierarchy's of ticks.
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don't worry about the small delay,trust me it works better like this00:30:006 (2,3) - : Ctrl+G,it sounds better in my opinion.
00:31:842 (1,2) - : Hmm,i don't know about those reverse sliders.I think that this sounds better
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^03:03:373 (4) - : 1/1 sliders are too sudden and fast for a
Normal difficulty.Just add a simple note there.
03:04:597 (3) - : Same thing.
03:05:822 (6) - : Same thing.You can map those 03:05:515 (5,6,1) - simply like this
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^Advanced:00:06:740 (3,1) - : Kinda ugly overlap,fix it.
00:36:740 (1,2,3) - : I think that this sounds better in my opinion
01:01:230 (1,2,1,2) - : These sliders i think are too long for no reason.Maybe map it like this?
01:16:842 (3) - : This too,it's really akward for a ''kiai'' part.I recommend to map from 01:15:924 (1) - to 01:16:842 (3) - like this
01:21:740 (3) - This is very long too.Maybe do this?
01:34:904 (4) - This is a really noticeable held vocal,should be slider.
01:42:862 (1,2,3,4,5) - : Hmm,i think this is a better vocal cohesion
01:47:455 (5,6,1,2) - : The player will read it as whole stream line with that slider.I recommend to unstack this 01:47:760 (1) - .
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^02:27:862 (3) - : You should emphasize this more,so you can introduce the player on how strong sounds can change the distance of the notes.
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^,emphasize it more.
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^Hard:(Btw,why 1/8 Beat Snap Divisor :p ?)Uh.Ok so,i feel sad to say that but this difficulty will need a serious remap,for example this part(00:04:903 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4) - ).Your sliders end too often on strong sounds,instead on the vocal's end.You focused too much on the beats and you ignored a lot of important vocal parts.(for example,00:07:351 (1) - ,00:09:495)This mix of mapping vocals + beats is really inconcistent.This specific part is
calm and you should
focus to map
only the
vocals.Try to always start sliders on vocals(red+white ticks)and end them when they
stop,not in the
duration of them.I hope you get my point.
00:24:494 (1,2,3,4,5) - : As i said from above.There is no reason to map those beats that are on the song just to keep it живой(LOL,had to google traslate it to understand it quite better)and to keep it interesting,not boring.Your main goal is to map the vocals.So try this?
00:26:331 (8,9) - : Same thing.
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^(So i will just stop here.I gave you some examples about the issue,i wont continue the ^'s cause it will take forever for me.)Drives You Insane: .Same issues just like from above about the vocal things.
I will give a simple example on how you should map the whole map with this part 00:04:903 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4) -
I hope again that you got my point.If you want your mapset to get ranked,you should remap those things that i mentioned about this mix of beats+
vocals,it's really inconsistent.I would really recommend to contact BN and ask him to explain you better those things with a mod or with a IRC.For example,those pauses are really akward 00:15:464 (3,4,5,6) -
and they should not even exist,those 2 seconds break on the whole map.You should just map the vocals with a very little variety of those beats.
~That's all i had to say,good luck!