m4m
[easy]
00:20:965 (4,1) - DS
00:23:665 (4) - i think u screwed up on NC starting here, this should be NC here, and then 00:24:865 (1) - should delete, etc. because from here 00:11:665 - you've been NCing every 2 measures, but then you started NCing every 3 measures on the 2nd part
00:44:065 (3,4) - mm these 2 aren't exactly mirroring each other perfectly, maybe fix that?
00:46:465 (3,4) - hmm not liking how slider 3 is almost touching the 4's sliderbody.
00:27:265 (5,1) - DS
00:48:865 (3,4) - I feel like the placement of these sliders feel kind of unorganized.
[normal]
00:24:115 (2,3) - I'd recommend to just stack these, cause I feel like they are inconsistent with stacks like 00:29:965 (2,3) - and 00:52:165 (5,6) -
00:25:015 - note should be here to follow vocal (since you're following vocals everywhere else), not 00:25:165 (5) - (I'd recommend just make 00:24:865 (4) - a 1/2 slider
Just sayin, the object density is pretty low in the kiai compared to other non-kiai places like 00:16:015 (5,6,1,2,3,4) - . You have barely any 1/4 beats in the kiai, while you have tons of them everywhere else.
[hard]
00:35:365 (4) - looks out of place because it's not angled consistenly with 00:34:465 (1,2,3) -
00:36:115 - I recommend putting notes at 00:36:115 - 00:36:715 - 00:37:315 - and other similar parts too because it just feels underwhelming without those notes there.
00:43:165 (1) - try to map the drums and stuff because again it feels underwhelming.
[insane]
i'd try to have some kind of jump here instead of a stack to emphasize 00:21:265 (1) -
00:49:765 (5,1) - should have bigger spacing compared to 00:49:615 (4,5) - to emphasize the vocal better.
dat's all, I also recommend putting a spinner at the end for all diffs cause the music fades out and a spinner would be a good way to represent that instead of just an immediate stop at 00:52:315 -
GL
[easy]
00:20:965 (4,1) - DS
00:23:665 (4) - i think u screwed up on NC starting here, this should be NC here, and then 00:24:865 (1) - should delete, etc. because from here 00:11:665 - you've been NCing every 2 measures, but then you started NCing every 3 measures on the 2nd part
00:44:065 (3,4) - mm these 2 aren't exactly mirroring each other perfectly, maybe fix that?
00:46:465 (3,4) - hmm not liking how slider 3 is almost touching the 4's sliderbody.
00:27:265 (5,1) - DS
00:48:865 (3,4) - I feel like the placement of these sliders feel kind of unorganized.
[normal]
00:24:115 (2,3) - I'd recommend to just stack these, cause I feel like they are inconsistent with stacks like 00:29:965 (2,3) - and 00:52:165 (5,6) -
00:25:015 - note should be here to follow vocal (since you're following vocals everywhere else), not 00:25:165 (5) - (I'd recommend just make 00:24:865 (4) - a 1/2 slider
Just sayin, the object density is pretty low in the kiai compared to other non-kiai places like 00:16:015 (5,6,1,2,3,4) - . You have barely any 1/4 beats in the kiai, while you have tons of them everywhere else.
[hard]
00:35:365 (4) - looks out of place because it's not angled consistenly with 00:34:465 (1,2,3) -
00:36:115 - I recommend putting notes at 00:36:115 - 00:36:715 - 00:37:315 - and other similar parts too because it just feels underwhelming without those notes there.
00:43:165 (1) - try to map the drums and stuff because again it feels underwhelming.
[insane]
i'd try to have some kind of jump here instead of a stack to emphasize 00:21:265 (1) -
00:49:765 (5,1) - should have bigger spacing compared to 00:49:615 (4,5) - to emphasize the vocal better.
dat's all, I also recommend putting a spinner at the end for all diffs cause the music fades out and a spinner would be a good way to represent that instead of just an immediate stop at 00:52:315 -
GL