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Kagamine Rin - Waltz of the Lunar Rainbow

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Thite
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Joined April 2010
Thite
:)
Rigeru_old
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Joined January 2009
Rigeru_old
8-)
senaya
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5,798 posts
Joined March 2010
senaya
Harro~

[General]
Background image needs to be of 4:3 ratio (for example 1024*768). Yours is widescreen (16:9). You have to change that.
Also, are you sure it's 1/3? feels weird, especially when I was playing Easy diff.

[Easy]
00:49:278 (1) - this spinner is way too short.

[Hard]
00:10:736 (3) - it doesn't fit, i'd remove it
00:25:111 (3) - ^
00:31:465 (4) - don't you think it's too high?
00:50:372 (3) - doesn't fit again, i'd delete that
01:10:841 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - sounds bad. use 1/2 divisor and change it to this http://puu.sh/2RNC
01:18:028 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - same here. use 1/2 divisor and change it to this http://puu.sh/2RNF
01:23:184 (3) - doesn't fit, i'd delete it
01:26:466 (1) - maybe a bit too high?
01:32:403 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - not sure if you should use 1/2 divisor and do it like this http://puu.sh/2RNK here..
01:48:549 (3) - i'd remove this
02:08:965 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15) - yes, again 1/2 divisor and change to this http://puu.sh/2RNV
02:16:153 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - and 1/2 divisor again to make it like this http://puu.sh/2RNY
02:32:299 (3) - i'd remove this
03:06:465 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - and yet again, 1/2 divisor and change it to this http://puu.sh/2ROq
03:13:654 (1) - this spinner is too short. it should be at least 2000 in autoplay mode.
GiNa
1,023 posts
Joined September 2010
GiNa
From #modreqs

My Mod
[General]
-BG needs to be 1024x768 or 800x600.
-Don’t really like the way you fitted hitsounds, but I’m not good at this neither, sorry ;<

[Easy]
-AR-1
-It’s better if you use 1/2 rather than 1/3 in easy.
-Change Distance Snap to 1.0x
00:49:278 (1) – this spinner is too short, remove it and map this part or make it longer
00:50:841 – start kiai here
01:03:966 – end kiai here
01:47:403 (1) – same as 00:49:278 (1)
01:48:966 – start kiai
02:00:841 (3) – end this slider at 02:02:403 –
02:02:403 – also end kiai here
02:31:153 (1) – too short …
02:32:716 – start kiai
02:46:466 (6) – New Combo (NC)
02:58:653 (1) – hidden by 02:57:716 (4) -, move this to somewhere else, BUT I suggest you change this to a spinner!
03:13:653 (1) – too short

[Hard]
-AR-2, OD-1
-Use 1/4 would be better.
-Use Distance Snap 1.2x and during kiai time, use 1.4x (don’t use it when you want to do jumps).
-I already fixed the kiai in Normal, please follow [Normal]’s to fix your [Hard]’s.
-Lots of jumps feel weird to me, imo.
-Some streams are too scared (too long), you might need to do some thing like this: 5 circles + 1 repeating slider + 5 circles + 1 repeating slider ... and so on. (It’s doesn’t matter how many repeats (in slider), just make it fits in music or vocal.)
01:53:966 (7) – NC
02:00:216 (5) - ^
02:06:778 (8) - ^

Have a star ;D
rui
1,388 posts
Joined February 2009
Topic Starter
rui
>Thite
Thank you star :)

>Rigeru
Thank you star :D

>senaya
ALL fixed
Thank you mod & star ;)

>gina91189
[Hard]
-AR-2, OD-1 -AR1 OD-1
Use 1/4 would be better. sorry I use 1/2 and 1/6
Use Distance Snap 1.2x and during kiai time, use 1.4x (don’t use it when you want to do jumps). no changed
01:53:966 (7) – NC no changed
02:00:216 (5) - ^ no changed

Any other fixed

Thank you mod & star ;)
DeadAlready
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Joined August 2008
DeadAlready
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wring
596 posts
Joined February 2010
wring
☆忘れてた
senaya
osu! Alumni
5,798 posts
Joined March 2010
senaya
Heya, I've noticed that your bg looks deformed now.
Try this, it might look better: http://puu.sh/2V9F
rui
1,388 posts
Joined February 2009
Topic Starter
rui
>quintitem
hime! Thank you star＾▽＾/

>wring
ご丁寧にありがとうございます。
Thank you star ;)

>senaya
Oh! I was Unaware that I mistake the size of picture.
Thank you pointed out the mistakes. :)
Muya
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Joined August 2009
Muya
:) :) :)
rui
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Topic Starter
rui
>Muya
Thank you star ;)
terametis
1,140 posts
Joined April 2009
terametis
:)
S o r d a
1,576 posts
Joined July 2009
S o r d a
[overall]:
  1. もしかしたらMAT/BATにNormalが必要と言われるかもしれません あった方が安全かもしれないです
[Hard]:
  1. 00:28:340 (1) - リピートのスライダーにチェンジ？00:28:341 - start 00:28:653 - repeat 00:28:966 - end
  2. 00:57:715 (1) - スライダーのendにfinish
  3. 00:59:278 (1) - ^
  4. 01:47:403 (1) - オートで見てスピンボーナスが2000出てないので変えた方がいいと思います
  5. 01:55:841 (1) - end finish
  6. 01:57:403 (1) - ^
  7. 02:18:028 (1) - 始めにFinish
  8. 02:19:903 (1) - ^
  9. 02:23:653 (1) - Delete finish
  10. 02:25:528 (1) - はじめにFinish
  11. 02:27:403 (1) - ^
  12. 02:31:153 (1) - オートで見てスピンボーナスが2000出てないので変えた方がいいと思います
  13. 02:32:716 (1) - end finish
  14. 02:34:278 (1) - ^
  15. 02:46:465 (1) - ^
  16. 02:48:028 (1) - ^
  17. 02:53:341 (1) - ^
  18. 02:54:904 (1) - ^
[Easy]:
  1. HP,AR,OD+2
  2. 00:13:340 (4) - 1grid 右(Grid Level 4)
  3. 00:36:153 (1) - 1grid 上 ^
  4. 00:38:028 (1) - 1grid 左 ^
  5. 00:44:591 (2) - 1grid 左
rui
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Topic Starter
rui
>terametis
Thank you star! :)


>S o r d a
Normalの方も考慮してみますmodありがとうございました。
追記: ALL fixed 全部直しました
Thank you star and mod ;)
se-sukeEila
114 posts
Joined May 2010
se-sukeEila
star~ :)
rui
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Topic Starter
rui
>se-sukeEila
Thank you star :D
Suzully
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2,446 posts
Joined July 2010
Suzully
いい歌 :)

Audio Lead-inが2秒は必要だと思います。
Timing Signatureは3/4に設定してください。
数小節ごとに小節の区切りが動く特殊な曲ですね :o
それぞれにメトロノームを合わせると赤線の数がえらいことになるのでこのままでいいとは思いますが・・・。
rui
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rui
> Suzully
アドバイスありがとうございます。
全て修正しました。
Thank you star ;)
Takos
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Takos
=w=/
rui
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rui
>Takos
Thank you star! ＼(＝ω＝.)
PSPDS Eddie
457 posts
Joined November 2009
PSPDS Eddie
Hard

02:58:653 (1) - いきなり1/6だと唐突ですし、初見だと絶対できないので1/4の連打のほうがいいかなーと感じます
そのまま1/6の場合は03:00:528 (1) - のスペーシングを直してください。

02:50:215 (3) -近いタイミングで少しズレているので、 02:49:278 (4) - と重ねるとプレイ中の見栄えが良くなります。（4）を動かすといいかも

03:08:029 (1) - わざとならいいです

nice map~
rui
1,388 posts
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rui
> PSPDS Eddie

Hard

02:58:653 (1) - いきなり1/6だと唐突ですし、初見だと絶対できないので1/4の連打のほうがいいかなーと感じます
最初は1/4にしてたのですが少し音が多くてうるさすぎるかなと感じたので1/3にしています。もう少しこのまま様子を見ようと思いますが、何回も指摘されるようでしたら変えると思います。
そのまま1/6の場合は03:00:528 (1) - のスペーシングを直してください。 直しました。

02:50:215 (3) -近いタイミングで少しズレているので、 02:49:278 (4) - と重ねるとプレイ中の見栄えが良くなります。（4）を動かすといいかも
重なるように調節しました。

03:08:029 (1) - わざとならいいです 一応わざとです。01:10:841と同じ感覚でこのように配置しています。
Thank you mod & star :)
Gamu
Elite Mapper
2,606 posts
Joined December 2010
Gamu
Modしてもらったので　お返しという感じで　少ししますね　 :)

[overall]
SPOILER
・コンボカラーなんですが、この色にしてみてはどうですか？

Combo1 : 62,0,62
Combo2 : 176,176,0
Combo3 : 0,0,136
こちらのコードをosu.ファイルの[Colours]のとこに上書きで出来ます。
※わからなければPMまたは　osuのチャットで聞いてください

[Easy]
・fine~

[Hard]
SPOILER
・00:49:278 (1) - このスピナーなんですが　オート先生で１０００しか回らないのは駄目だと思います。
理由は


簡単に言うと、「スピナーのボーナス点はオートで２０００は出るようにする必要がある」と書いてあります。
参考ＵＲＬ　→　http://osu.ppy.sh/forum/viewtopic.php?f=3&t=56528

・00:55:840 (5) - 1 grid 下に
・00:56:153 (6) - ^
・00:56:465 (7) - 1 grid 左に
・00:56:778 (8) - ^
・00:57:090 (9) - 2 grid 上に
・01:02:716 (5) - 1 grid 上に
・01:03:029 (6) - ^
・01:03:341 (7) - 1 grid 左に
・01:03:654 (8) - ^
・01:03:966 (9) - 2 grid 下に
・01:12:403 (1) -　 01:10:841 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - のスペーシング0.50xに合わせてみてはどうですか？
・03:08:029 (1) -　 03:06:466 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - のスペーシング0.50xに合わせてみてはどうですか？

もしかしたら、EasyよりもNormalのほうがいいと思います。
それか、Nomalつくるか・・・

もし、EasyをNomralに変えるのなら今のままじゃ簡単なので　いろいろとオブジェクトを追加したり　配置を変更する必要があると思います。


良い譜面でした～ :)

私のModで「これは変だろ」というとこありましたら　

変更しなくてもいいです
rui
1,388 posts
Joined February 2009
Topic Starter
rui

-Gamu- wrote:

Modしてもらったので　お返しという感じで　少ししますね　 :)

[overall]
SPOILER
・コンボカラーなんですが、この色にしてみてはどうですか？ 今の暗い感じの色合いが気にっているのでこのままで

Combo1 : 62,0,62
Combo2 : 176,176,0
Combo3 : 0,0,136
こちらのコードをosu.ファイルの[Colours]のとこに上書きで出来ます。
※わからなければPMまたは　osuのチャットで聞いてください

[Easy]
・fine~

[Hard]
SPOILER
・00:49:278 (1) - このスピナーなんですが　オート先生で１０００しか回らないのは駄目だと思います。削除しました
理由は


簡単に言うと、「スピナーのボーナス点はオートで２０００は出るようにする必要がある」と書いてあります。
参考ＵＲＬ　→　http://osu.ppy.sh/forum/viewtopic.php?f=3&t=56528

・00:55:840 (5) - 1 grid 下に Fixed
・00:56:153 (6) - ^ Fixed
・00:56:465 (7) - 1 grid 左に Fixed
・00:56:778 (8) - ^ Fixed
・00:57:090 (9) - 2 grid 上に Fixed
・01:02:716 (5) - 1 grid 上に Fixed
・01:03:029 (6) - ^ Fixed
・01:03:341 (7) - 1 grid 左に Fixed
・01:03:654 (8) - ^ Fixed
・01:03:966 (9) - 2 grid 下に Fixed
・01:12:403 (1) -　 01:10:841 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - のスペーシング0.50xに合わせてみてはどうですか？ no fixed
・03:08:029 (1) -　 03:06:466 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - のスペーシング0.50xに合わせてみてはどうですか？ no fixed

もしかしたら、EasyよりもNormalのほうがいいと思います。
それか、Nomalつくるか・・・

もし、EasyをNomralに変えるのなら今のままじゃ簡単なので　いろいろとオブジェクトを追加したり　配置を変更する必要があると思います。前の人にも言われたのでNormalを作る方向で考えます


良い譜面でした～ :)

私のModで「これは変だろ」というとこありましたら　

変更しなくてもいいです
Thank you mod :D
avira0922
224 posts
Joined March 2008
avira0922
ii kyouku desu
I make normal diff!
よろしければ～ :)

Your message is too short
わー　何ですか　これ(´；ω；｀)

Download: Kagamine Rin - Waltz of the Lunar Rainbow (rui) [avira's Normal].osu
rui
1,388 posts
Joined February 2009
Topic Starter
rui
Thank you avira0922 :)
add this diff　and irc mod
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Breeze
osu! Alumni
4,949 posts
Joined March 2009
Breeze
This is Rin? Oh my...
俺の鈴がこんなに艶かしい わけがない (ﾟ´Д｀ﾟ)
Red is what you must fixed, others are just suggestions

[General]
  1. Add avira0922 as tag to [Easy] and [Hard] diff.
  2. Source : LeleleP? What's that? Game? I can't find that on wilipedia, could you please make a brief description about the source?
[Easy]
SPOILER
  1. 00:35:841 (2) - No finish here
  2. 00:36:153 (1) - Use finish instead of whistle seems better
  3. 00:38:028 (1) - ^
  4. 00:43:341 spinner - no finish
  5. 00:43:653 (1) - Finish instead of whistle
  6. 00:45:528 (1) - ^
  7. 00:51:153 (1) - Add finish and KIAI starts here
  8. 00:57:091 (3) - Clap or finish, use only one sound would better, I suggest keep clap, remove finish
  9. 00:58:028 (1) - Add finish
  10. 00:59:591 (1) - ^
  11. 01:03:028 (2) - ^
  12. 01:03:966 (2) - Remove finish
  13. 01:04:903 (1) - Finish instead of whistle
  14. 01:06:778 (1) - ^
  15. 01:12:403 (1) - ^
  16. 01:14:278 (1) - ^
  17. 01:33:966 (2) - No finish
  18. 01:34:278 (1) - Finish instead of whistle
  19. 01:36:153 (1) - ^
  20. 01:41:466 spinner - no finish
  21. 01:41:778 (1) - Finish instead of whistle
  22. 01:43:653 (1) - ^
  23. 01:49:278 (1) - Add finish here and KIAI starts here
  24. 01:50:841 (1) - Add finish
  25. 01:56:153 (1) - finish
  26. 01:57:716 (1) - ^
  27. 02:03:028 (1) - Finish instead of whistle
  28. 02:04:903 (1) - ^
  29. 02:08:966 (4) - 1 grid down?
  30. 02:10:528 (1) - Finish instead of whistle
  31. 02:12:403 (1) - ^
  32. 02:18:028 (1) - ^
  33. 02:19:903 (1) - ^
  34. 02:25:216 spinner - no finish
  35. 02:25:528 (1) - Finish instead of whistle
  36. 02:27:403 (1) - ^
  37. 02:33:028 (1) - Add finish here and starts KIAI here
  38. 02:38:966 (5) - Remove finish
  39. 02:39:903 (1) - Add finish
  40. 02:41:466 (1) - ^
  41. 02:45:841 (5) - No finish
  42. 02:46:778 (1) - Add finish
  43. 02:48:341 (1) - ^
  44. 02:53:653 (1) - ^
  45. 02:55:216 (1) - ^
  46. 03:00:216 spinner - no finish
  47. 03:00:528 (1) - Finish instead of whistle
  48. 03:02:403 (1) - ^
  49. 03:08:028 (1) - ^
  50. 03:09:903 (1) - ^
  51. 03:13:653 spinner - This spinner is too short as a Easy diff., I suggest use spinner starts at 03:11:778 or 03:12:716 and ends at 03:14:591
Too many repeat parts, that would make players feel boring, maybe you should try some other way to put notes

[avira's Normal]
  1. 00:36:153 (1) - Finish instead of whistle seems better, similarly hereinafter
  2. 00:38:028 (1) - ^
  3. 00:43:653 (1) - ^
  4. 00:45:528 (1) - ^
  5. 00:51:153 - KIAI stars here
  6. 01:04:903 (1) - Finish instead of whistle
  7. 01:06:778 (1) - ^
  8. 01:41:778 (1,6) - Add finish
  9. 01:49:278 - KIAI starts here
  10. 02:18:028 (1) - Add finish
  11. 02:19:903 (3) - ^
  12. 02:33:028 - KIAI starts here
  13. 02:39:903 (2,5) - Add finish
  14. 02:53:653 (1) - Finish instead of whistle
  15. 02:55:216 (3) - ^
  16. 02:57:403 (1) - Spacing a bit far
  17. 02:58:653 (3) - Finish instead of whistle
[Hard]
Same sound suggestion to [Easy], and same KIAI start time suggestion, didn't point out in this diff.
  1. 01:33:341 (1,2,3,4,5) - Use normal hitsound here seems better, and volume grade up, 60%-80%or90%
  2. 02:09:591 (5,6,7,8,9,10) - ^
  3. 03:07:091 (5,6,7,8,9,10) - ^
rui
1,388 posts
Joined February 2009
Topic Starter
rui

Breeze wrote:

This is Rin? Oh my...
俺の鈴がこんなに艶かしい わけがない (ﾟ´Д｀ﾟ) Rin of the background is very magnificence (*´д`*)
Red is what you must fixed, others are just suggestions

[General]
  1. Add avira0922 as tag to [Easy] and [Hard] diff. Fixed
  2. Source : LeleleP? What's that? Game? I can't find that on wilipedia, could you please make a brief description about the source? LeleleP is vocaloid song creator name. Source→http://vocaloidotaku.net/index.php?/topic/13801-rin-append-%E6%9C%88%E8%99%B9%E3%81%AE%E3%83%AF%E3%83%AB%E3%83%84-by-lelelep/


[Easy]
SPOILER
  1. 00:35:841 (2) - No finish here
  2. 00:36:153 (1) - Use finish instead of whistle seems better
  3. 00:38:028 (1) - ^
  4. 00:43:341 spinner - no finish
  5. 00:43:653 (1) - Finish instead of whistle
  6. 00:45:528 (1) - ^
  7. 00:51:153 (1) - Add finish and KIAI starts here
  8. 00:57:091 (3) - Clap or finish, use only one sound would better, I suggest keep clap, remove finish
  9. 00:58:028 (1) - Add finish
  10. 00:59:591 (1) - ^
  11. 01:03:028 (2) - ^
  12. 01:03:966 (2) - Remove finish
  13. 01:04:903 (1) - Finish instead of whistle
  14. 01:06:778 (1) - ^
  15. 01:12:403 (1) - ^
  16. 01:14:278 (1) - ^
  17. 01:33:966 (2) - No finish
  18. 01:34:278 (1) - Finish instead of whistle
  19. 01:36:153 (1) - ^
  20. 01:41:466 spinner - no finish
  21. 01:41:778 (1) - Finish instead of whistle
  22. 01:43:653 (1) - ^
  23. 01:49:278 (1) - Add finish here and KIAI starts here
  24. 01:50:841 (1) - Add finish
  25. 01:56:153 (1) - finish
  26. 01:57:716 (1) - ^
  27. 02:03:028 (1) - Finish instead of whistle
  28. 02:04:903 (1) - ^
  29. 02:08:966 (4) - 1 grid down?
  30. 02:10:528 (1) - Finish instead of whistle
  31. 02:12:403 (1) - ^
  32. 02:18:028 (1) - ^
  33. 02:19:903 (1) - ^
  34. 02:25:216 spinner - no finish
  35. 02:25:528 (1) - Finish instead of whistle
  36. 02:27:403 (1) - ^
  37. 02:33:028 (1) - Add finish here and starts KIAI here
  38. 02:38:966 (5) - Remove finish
  39. 02:39:903 (1) - Add finish
  40. 02:41:466 (1) - ^
  41. 02:45:841 (5) - No finish
  42. 02:46:778 (1) - Add finish
  43. 02:48:341 (1) - ^
  44. 02:53:653 (1) - ^
  45. 02:55:216 (1) - ^
  46. 03:00:216 spinner - no finish
  47. 03:00:528 (1) - Finish instead of whistle
  48. 03:02:403 (1) - ^
  49. 03:08:028 (1) - ^
  50. 03:09:903 (1) - ^
  51. 03:13:653 spinner - This spinner is too short as a Easy diff., I suggest use spinner starts at 03:11:778 or 03:12:716 and ends at 03:14:591
Too many repeat parts, that would make players feel boring, maybe you should try some other way to put notes
ALL adopted. Many repeat parts yet?

[avira's Normal]
  1. 00:36:153 (1) - Finish instead of whistle seems better, similarly hereinafter
  2. 00:38:028 (1) - ^
  3. 00:43:653 (1) - ^
  4. 00:45:528 (1) - ^
  5. 00:51:153 - KIAI stars here
  6. 01:04:903 (1) - Finish instead of whistle
  7. 01:06:778 (1) - ^
  8. 01:41:778 (1,6) - Add finish
  9. 01:49:278 - KIAI starts here
  10. 02:18:028 (1) - Add finish
  11. 02:19:903 (3) - ^
  12. 02:33:028 - KIAI starts here
  13. 02:39:903 (2,5) - Add finish
  14. 02:53:653 (1) - Finish instead of whistle
  15. 02:55:216 (3) - ^
  16. 02:57:403 (1) - Spacing a bit far
  17. 02:58:653 (3) - Finish instead of whistle
[Hard]
Same sound suggestion to [Easy], and same KIAI start time suggestion, didn't point out in this diff.
  1. 01:33:341 (1,2,3,4,5) - Use normal hitsound here seems better, and volume grade up, 60%-80%or90%
  2. 02:09:591 (5,6,7,8,9,10) - ^
  3. 03:07:091 (5,6,7,8,9,10) - ^
ALL adopted.
Thank you mod(*⌒∇⌒*)
avira0922
224 posts
Joined March 2008
avira0922

Breeze wrote:

This is Rin? Oh my...
俺の鈴がこんなに艶かしい わけがない (ﾟ´Д｀ﾟ)　<<< (*´ω｀*)

[avira's Normal]
  1. 00:36:153 (1) - Finish instead of whistle seems better, similarly hereinafter
  2. 00:38:028 (1) - ^
  3. 00:43:653 (1) - ^
  4. 00:45:528 (1) - ^
  5. 00:51:153 - KIAI stars here
  6. 01:04:903 (1) - Finish instead of whistle
  7. 01:06:778 (1) - ^
  8. 01:41:778 (1,6) - Add finish
  9. 01:49:278 - KIAI starts here
  10. 02:18:028 (1) - Add finish
  11. 02:19:903 (3) - ^
  12. 02:33:028 - KIAI starts here
  13. 02:39:903 (2,5) - Add finish
  14. 02:53:653 (1) - Finish instead of whistle
  15. 02:55:216 (3) - ^
  16. 02:57:403 (1) - Spacing a bit far
  17. 02:58:653 (3) - Finish instead of whistle
all fixed~

thanks a lot! Breeze~~ ;)

Download: Kagamine Rin - Waltz of the Lunar Rainbow (rui) [avira's Normal].osu
armina_old
12 posts
Joined July 2011
armina_old
(ΦωΦ)先に★だけ投げておきますね
イージーはリズムが安易じゃないので緊張感あっていいと思います。
何か気になる所があったらまた来ますねー(ﾟ∀ﾟ)
pieguyn
2,020 posts
Joined May 2009
pieguyn
Easy:

01:41:778 (1) - For an Easy, this note seems rather close to the spinner...
02:00:841 (3) - remove finish?
02:02:091 - add a note with finish?
02:08:966 (4) - new combo?
02:51:466 (5) - new combo?

avira's Normal:

01:08:653 (3) - new combo?
01:16:153 (5) - ^
02:13:653 (4,5,6) - (nazi) down 1 level 3 grid?

Hard:

00:01:778 (1) - too close to (3)
01:09:591 (2) - too close to (1)
01:12:403 (1) - maybe space this 0.5x like the rest of the stream?
01:32:403 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - maybe lower the volume on these notes?
02:08:965 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - perhaps use soft hitsounds here? :?
03:06:466 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - maybe use soft histounds? Also, perhaps space (1) closer like the rest of the stream?

nice map~ :)
rui
1,388 posts
Joined February 2009
Topic Starter
rui
> armina
遅くなった、星ありがとう
Easyにしては少し難しいめだからリズムは取りにくいのかね。
楽しんで頂き光栄ですヽ(・ω・｀)ﾉ

> pieguy1372

pieguy1372 wrote:

Easy:

01:41:778 (1) - For an Easy, this note seems rather close to the spinner...　no fixed
02:00:841 (3) - remove finish? fixed
02:02:091 - add a note with finish? Fixed http://puu.sh/50cp
02:08:966 (4) - new combo? Fixed
02:51:466 (5) - new combo? Fixed

avira's Normal:

01:08:653 (3) - new combo?
01:16:153 (5) - ^
02:13:653 (4,5,6) - (nazi) down 1 level 3 grid?

Hard:

00:01:778 (1) - too close to (3) Fixed
01:09:591 (2) - too close to (1) Fixed
01:12:403 (1) - maybe space this 0.5x like the rest of the stream? Fixed
01:32:403 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - maybe lower the volume on these notes? no fixed
02:08:965 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - perhaps use soft hitsounds here? :? Fixed
03:06:466 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - maybe use soft histounds? Also, perhaps space (1) closer like the rest of the stream? Fixed

nice map~ :)
Thank you mod :)
avira0922
224 posts
Joined March 2008
avira0922

pieguy1372 wrote:

Easy:

avira's Normal:

01:08:653 (3) - new combo?
01:16:153 (5) - ^
02:13:653 (4,5,6) - (nazi) down 1 level 3 grid?


nice map~ :)
all fixed
thx pieguy1372~

修正しました

Download: Kagamine Rin - Waltz of the Lunar Rainbow (rui) [avira's Normal].osu
SamiPale
766 posts
Joined October 2009
SamiPale
ハロー～Team Chunbi Modding Queueからリクエストを受けました。これはわたしの意見です。

[General]
Offsetは211のほうがいいです

[Easy]
00:43:341(1,1) - このspinnerからcircleまでの時間ちょっと短い、初心者に難しいです。circleを削除してspinnerを00:43:653にENDどうか？
02:25:216(1,1) - 00:43:341と同じ難しすぎます
03:00:216(1,1) - ^

[Normal]
00:51:466(1,2,3,4) - 全体1/1後ろ移動して、もと(4)のところ新しいcircleをセットして(00:57:716のリズムのように)。あと01:49:591(1,2,3,4)もこのように
01:34:591(1,2,3,4) - (1)(2)を1/1後ろ移動して、(2)を1/1長くなって
01:42:716(4,5) - ちょっと難しいと思いますけど。。

[Hard]
00:00:216,00:01:778(1,2,3) - このリズムでどうか
00:05:216(1) - ここのspinner 00:05:528にはじめ、00:05:216にcircle?
00:52:716(1) - Finish?
01:10:528(x) - Add circle?
01:32:403(1,2,3,4,5),01:33:341(1,2,3,4,5) - 音量10~15%下がる？
02:38:653(1,2,3) - (3)を削除して、(2)を(1)と重ねるのはもっと面白いと思います。または02:37:716(1,2,3,1,2)を星の形になってもいいです（もちろん02:39:278の(3)削除）。

3/4は珍しいからリズムの方で頑張ってね
rui
1,388 posts
Joined February 2009
Topic Starter
rui

SamiPale wrote:

ハロー～Team Chunbi Modding Queueからリクエストを受けました。これはわたしの意見です。

[General]
Offsetは211のほうがいいです　Fixed

[Easy]
00:43:341(1,1) - このspinnerからcircleまでの時間ちょっと短い、初心者に難しいです。circleを削除してspinnerを00:43:653にENDどうか？ Fixed
02:25:216(1,1) - 00:43:341と同じ難しすぎます スライダーに置き換えました http://puu.sh/5bvR
03:00:216(1,1) - ^ スライダーに置き換えました http://puu.sh/5bEh

[Normal]
00:51:466(1,2,3,4) - 全体1/1後ろ移動して、もと(4)のところ新しいcircleをセットして(00:57:716のリズムのように)。あと01:49:591(1,2,3,4)もこのように
01:34:591(1,2,3,4) - (1)(2)を1/1後ろ移動して、(2)を1/1長くなって
01:42:716(4,5) - ちょっと難しいと思いますけど。。

[Hard]
00:00:216,00:01:778(1,2,3) - このリズムでどうか No Fixed
00:05:216(1) - ここのspinner 00:05:528にはじめ、00:05:216にcircle? adopted
00:52:716(1) - Finish? No Fixed
01:10:528(x) - Add circle?adopted http://puu.sh/5bAh
01:32:403(1,2,3,4,5),01:33:341(1,2,3,4,5) - 音量10~15%下がる？ Fixed
02:38:653(1,2,3) - (3)を削除して、(2)を(1)と重ねるのはもっと面白いと思います。または02:37:716(1,2,3,1,2)を星の形になってもいいです（もちろん02:39:278の(3)削除）。星にしました http://puu.sh/5bDA

3/4は珍しいからリズムの方で頑張ってね はい！がんばります


Thank you mod :)
avira0922
224 posts
Joined March 2008
avira0922
[quote="SamiPale"]

[Normal]
00:51:466(1,2,3,4) - 全体1/1後ろ移動して、もと(4)のところ新しいcircleをセットして(00:57:716のリズムのように)。あと01:49:591(1,2,3,4)もこのように
前へ移動して～のようですのでそういたしました
01:34:591(1,2,3,4) - (1)(2)を1/1後ろ移動して、(2)を1/1長くなって 前へ移動して～のようですのでそういたしました
01:42:716(4,5) - ちょっと難しいと思いますけど。。　change

MOD thx~~(*´ω｀*)

Download: Kagamine Rin - Waltz of the Lunar Rainbow (rui) [avira's Normal].osu
Apricot
565 posts
Joined July 2010
Apricot
[!] = You NEED to change.
[.] = If possible, change.
[?] = Suggestion/nazi.

[NC] = Add New Combo.
[RNC] = Remove New Combo.

You can ignore hitsound mod if you don't like it.

[Easy]
00:07:086 (1) - 00:07:398 へ移動した方が音が取りやすいと思います nazi
00:10:523 (1) - 終点にFinish
00:13:961 (1) - ^
00:21:461 (1) - 00:21:773 へ移動した方が音が取りやすいと思います nazi
00:24:898 (1) - 終点にFinish
00:28:336 (1) - ^
00:32:086 (1) - (1) を 00:32:398 へ移動（終点は00:33:336）して、 00:32:086 にサークルを追加した方がやりやすいと思います nazi
00:33:961 (2) - ^
00:38:023 (3) - RNC.
00:45:523 (1) - ^
00:50:836 (1) - 終点にFinish
00:56:148 (3) - 終点のclapを削除してfinishを追加？
01:06:773 (1) - RNC
01:14:273 (1) - ^
01:18:961 (*) - Finishでサークルを追加？
01:30:211 (1,2) - 00:32:086 (1), 00:33:961 (2) と同じ
01:36:148 (1) - RNC
01:39:898 (3) - 始点にfinish
01:43:648 (1) - RNC
02:23:648 (1) - ^?
02:25:523 (1) - add finish.
02:46:461 (1) - Health Barと重なってるので修正してください
03:02:398 (1) - RNC.
03:07:398 (4) - add whistle.
03:07:711 (5) - remove whistle.
03:09:898 (1) - RNC.

[avira's Normal]
00:00:523 (2) - 始点にwhistle
00:01:461 (3) - add finish.
00:02:086 (5) - 始点にwhistle
00:03:023 (6) - add finish.
00:03:336 (7) - NC.
00:03:648 (8) - add whistle.
00:04:586 (9) - 終点にwhistle
00:05:211 (10) - 始点にwhistle、終点にfinish
00:07:086 (1) - remove whistle.
00:27:399 (4) - 折り返し地点にwhistleを追加し、終点のwhistleを削除してfinishを追加
01:44:898 (3) - 2grid left? nazi
01:58:648 (1) - Health Barと重なってるので修正してください
02:08:961 (4) - NC.
02:36:148 (6) - ^

[Hard]
00:38:023 (1) - 前の (1,2,3) と同じDSを使った方が綺麗に見えると思います nazi
00:40:523 (3) - add clap.
00:40:836 (4) - remove clap.
00:41:148 (5) - add clap.
00:45:523 (1) - 前の (1,2,3) と同じDSを使った方が綺麗に見えると思います nazi
01:19:039 (1) - RNC.
02:17:086 (1) - ^
rui
1,388 posts
Joined February 2009
Topic Starter
rui

Apricot wrote:

[!] = You NEED to change.
[.] = If possible, change.
[?] = Suggestion/nazi.

[NC] = Add New Combo.
[RNC] = Remove New Combo.

You can ignore hitsound mod if you don't like it.

[Easy]
00:07:086 (1) - 00:07:398 へ移動した方が音が取りやすいと思います nazi no Fixed
00:10:523 (1) - 終点にFinish Fixed
00:13:961 (1) - ^ Fixed
00:21:461 (1) - 00:21:773 へ移動した方が音が取りやすいと思います nazi no Fixed
00:24:898 (1) - 終点にFinish Fixed
00:28:336 (1) - ^ Fixed
00:32:086 (1) - (1) を 00:32:398 へ移動（終点は00:33:336）して、 00:32:086 にサークルを追加した方がやりやすいと思います nazi adopted
00:33:961 (2) - ^ adopted
00:38:023 (3) - RNC. Fixed
00:45:523 (1) - ^ Fixed
00:50:836 (1) - 終点にFinish Fixed
00:56:148 (3) - 終点のclapを削除してfinishを追加？ Fixed
01:06:773 (1) - RNC Fixed
01:14:273 (1) - ^Fixed
01:18:961 (*) - Finishでサークルを追加？ 01:18:961~01:19:273までスライダーを足しましたFinishは終点につけました http://puu.sh/5kME
01:30:211 (1,2) - 00:32:086 (1), 00:33:961 (2) と同じ Fixed
01:36:148 (1) - RNC Fixed
01:39:898 (3) - 始点にfinish Fixed
01:43:648 (1) - RNC Fixed
02:23:648 (1) - ^? Fixed
02:25:523 (1) - add finish. Fixed
02:46:461 (1) - Health Barと重なってるので修正してください Fixed
03:02:398 (1) - RNC. Fixed
03:07:398 (4) - add whistle. Fixed
03:07:711 (5) - remove whistle. Fixed
03:09:898 (1) - RNC. Fixed

[avira's Normal]
00:00:523 (2) - 始点にwhistle
00:01:461 (3) - add finish.
00:02:086 (5) - 始点にwhistle
00:03:023 (6) - add finish.
00:03:336 (7) - NC.
00:03:648 (8) - add whistle.
00:04:586 (9) - 終点にwhistle
00:05:211 (10) - 始点にwhistle、終点にfinish
00:07:086 (1) - remove whistle.
00:27:399 (4) - 折り返し地点にwhistleを追加し、終点のwhistleを削除してfinishを追加
01:44:898 (3) - 2grid left? nazi
01:58:648 (1) - Health Barと重なってるので修正してください
02:08:961 (4) - NC.
02:36:148 (6) - ^

[Hard]
00:38:023 (1) - 前の (1,2,3) と同じDSを使った方が綺麗に見えると思います nazi Fixed
00:40:523 (3) - add clap.Fixed
00:40:836 (4) - remove clap. Fixed
00:41:148 (5) - add clap. Fixed
00:45:523 (1) - 前の (1,2,3) と同じDSを使った方が綺麗に見えると思います nazi Fixed
01:19:039 (1) - RNC. Fixed
02:17:086 (1) - ^ Fixed


丁寧なmodありがとうございました。
Thank you mod :)
avira0922
224 posts
Joined March 2008
avira0922

Apricot wrote:

[!] = You NEED to change.

[avira's Normal]
00:00:523 (2) - 始点にwhistle
00:01:461 (3) - add finish.
00:02:086 (5) - 始点にwhistle
00:03:023 (6) - add finish.
00:03:336 (7) - NC.
00:03:648 (8) - add whistle.
00:04:586 (9) - 終点にwhistle
00:05:211 (10) - 始点にwhistle、終点にfinish
00:07:086 (1) - remove whistle.
00:27:399 (4) - 折り返し地点にwhistleを追加し、終点のwhistleを削除してfinishを追加
01:44:898 (3) - 2grid left? nazi
01:58:648 (1) - Health Barと重なってるので修正してください
02:08:961 (4) - NC.
02:36:148 (6) - ^
almost fixed
thx MODDING =v=

Download: Kagamine Rin - Waltz of the Lunar Rainbow (rui) [avira's Normal].osu
Kotone
2,402 posts
Joined August 2008
Kotone
:) Hi~modding here
General
no break time of 3 min song@_@?

Easy
00:31:461 (4) - add whistle here and remove whistle of next (1) ?
01:03:023 (1) - I suggest remove clap of this slider and add whistle at slider end
02:23:648 (3) - add finish at slider head?
02:34:273 (1) - finsh at slider end

avira's Normal
fine

Hard
00:50:523 (4) - whistle?
01:03:961 (9) - remove clap and add finish?
01:47:398 (7) - you had newcombo of 00:49:273 (1) ,maybe newcombo here and remove newcombo01:48:336 (1)
01:48:648 (3) - whistle?
02:21:773 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - big jump,Crtl+Shift+S 9.000x look better
02:29:273 (1) - finish
02:32:398 (3) - whistle?
02:58:648 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17,18,1) - don't use same spacing of them please...that's hard to read for me


nice map,and sorry for nazi modTvT
I want to shoot a star but I don't have any kds Q_Q
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