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Kagamine Rin - Waltz of the Lunar Rainbow

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Topic Starter
rui
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2011年12月17日 at 17:00:28

Artist: Kagamine Rin
Title: Waltz of the Lunar Rainbow
Tags: vocaloid avira0922 lelelep
BPM: 192
Filesize: 3534kb
Play Time: 03:13
Difficulties Available:
  1. avira's Normal (3.76 stars, 281 notes)
  2. Easy (2.79 stars, 259 notes)
  3. Hard (4.69 stars, 469 notes)
Download: Kagamine Rin - Waltz of the Lunar Rainbow
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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My 2nd map

Waltz song :-)

Easy - 100%
avira's Normal - 100%
Hard - 100%

9/17 Remade Easy diff

avira's Normal was made by avira0922
Thite
:)
Rigeru_old
8-)
senaya
Harro~

[General]
Background image needs to be of 4:3 ratio (for example 1024*768). Yours is widescreen (16:9). You have to change that.
Also, are you sure it's 1/3? feels weird, especially when I was playing Easy diff.

[Easy]
00:49:278 (1) - this spinner is way too short.

[Hard]
00:10:736 (3) - it doesn't fit, i'd remove it
00:25:111 (3) - ^
00:31:465 (4) - don't you think it's too high?
00:50:372 (3) - doesn't fit again, i'd delete that
01:10:841 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - sounds bad. use 1/2 divisor and change it to this http://puu.sh/2RNC
01:18:028 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - same here. use 1/2 divisor and change it to this http://puu.sh/2RNF
01:23:184 (3) - doesn't fit, i'd delete it
01:26:466 (1) - maybe a bit too high?
01:32:403 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - not sure if you should use 1/2 divisor and do it like this http://puu.sh/2RNK here..
01:48:549 (3) - i'd remove this
02:08:965 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15) - yes, again 1/2 divisor and change to this http://puu.sh/2RNV
02:16:153 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - and 1/2 divisor again to make it like this http://puu.sh/2RNY
02:32:299 (3) - i'd remove this
03:06:465 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - and yet again, 1/2 divisor and change it to this http://puu.sh/2ROq
03:13:654 (1) - this spinner is too short. it should be at least 2000 in autoplay mode.
GiNa
From #modreqs

My Mod
[General]
-BG needs to be 1024x768 or 800x600.
-Don’t really like the way you fitted hitsounds, but I’m not good at this neither, sorry ;<

[Easy]
-AR-1
-It’s better if you use 1/2 rather than 1/3 in easy.
-Change Distance Snap to 1.0x
00:49:278 (1) – this spinner is too short, remove it and map this part or make it longer
00:50:841 – start kiai here
01:03:966 – end kiai here
01:47:403 (1) – same as 00:49:278 (1)
01:48:966 – start kiai
02:00:841 (3) – end this slider at 02:02:403 –
02:02:403 – also end kiai here
02:31:153 (1) – too short …
02:32:716 – start kiai
02:46:466 (6) – New Combo (NC)
02:58:653 (1) – hidden by 02:57:716 (4) -, move this to somewhere else, BUT I suggest you change this to a spinner!
03:13:653 (1) – too short

[Hard]
-AR-2, OD-1
-Use 1/4 would be better.
-Use Distance Snap 1.2x and during kiai time, use 1.4x (don’t use it when you want to do jumps).
-I already fixed the kiai in Normal, please follow [Normal]’s to fix your [Hard]’s.
-Lots of jumps feel weird to me, imo.
-Some streams are too scared (too long), you might need to do some thing like this: 5 circles + 1 repeating slider + 5 circles + 1 repeating slider ... and so on. (It’s doesn’t matter how many repeats (in slider), just make it fits in music or vocal.)
01:53:966 (7) – NC
02:00:216 (5) - ^
02:06:778 (8) - ^

Have a star ;D
Topic Starter
rui
>Thite
Thank you star :)

>Rigeru
Thank you star :D

>senaya
ALL fixed
Thank you mod & star ;)

>gina91189
[Hard]
-AR-2, OD-1 -AR1 OD-1
Use 1/4 would be better. sorry I use 1/2 and 1/6
Use Distance Snap 1.2x and during kiai time, use 1.4x (don’t use it when you want to do jumps). no changed
01:53:966 (7) – NC no changed
02:00:216 (5) - ^ no changed

Any other fixed

Thank you mod & star ;)
DeadAlready
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wring
☆忘れてた
senaya
Heya, I've noticed that your bg looks deformed now.
Try this, it might look better: http://puu.sh/2V9F
Topic Starter
rui
>quintitem
hime! Thank you star^▽^/

>wring
ご丁寧にありがとうございます。
Thank you star ;)

>senaya
Oh! I was Unaware that I mistake the size of picture.
Thank you pointed out the mistakes. :)
Muya
:) :) :)
Topic Starter
rui
>Muya
Thank you star ;)
terametis
:)
S o r d a
[overall]:
  1. もしかしたらMAT/BATにNormalが必要と言われるかもしれません あった方が安全かもしれないです
[Hard]:
  1. 00:28:340 (1) - リピートのスライダーにチェンジ?00:28:341 - start 00:28:653 - repeat 00:28:966 - end
  2. 00:57:715 (1) - スライダーのendにfinish
  3. 00:59:278 (1) - ^
  4. 01:47:403 (1) - オートで見てスピンボーナスが2000出てないので変えた方がいいと思います
  5. 01:55:841 (1) - end finish
  6. 01:57:403 (1) - ^
  7. 02:18:028 (1) - 始めにFinish
  8. 02:19:903 (1) - ^
  9. 02:23:653 (1) - Delete finish
  10. 02:25:528 (1) - はじめにFinish
  11. 02:27:403 (1) - ^
  12. 02:31:153 (1) - オートで見てスピンボーナスが2000出てないので変えた方がいいと思います
  13. 02:32:716 (1) - end finish
  14. 02:34:278 (1) - ^
  15. 02:46:465 (1) - ^
  16. 02:48:028 (1) - ^
  17. 02:53:341 (1) - ^
  18. 02:54:904 (1) - ^
[Easy]:
  1. HP,AR,OD+2
  2. 00:13:340 (4) - 1grid 右(Grid Level 4)
  3. 00:36:153 (1) - 1grid 上 ^
  4. 00:38:028 (1) - 1grid 左 ^
  5. 00:44:591 (2) - 1grid 左
Topic Starter
rui
>terametis
Thank you star! :)


>S o r d a
Normalの方も考慮してみますmodありがとうございました。
追記: ALL fixed 全部直しました
Thank you star and mod ;)
se-sukeEila
star~ :)
Topic Starter
rui
>se-sukeEila
Thank you star :D
Suzully
いい歌 :)

Audio Lead-inが2秒は必要だと思います。
Timing Signatureは3/4に設定してください。
数小節ごとに小節の区切りが動く特殊な曲ですね :o
それぞれにメトロノームを合わせると赤線の数がえらいことになるのでこのままでいいとは思いますが・・・。
Topic Starter
rui
> Suzully
アドバイスありがとうございます。
全て修正しました。
Thank you star ;)
Takos
=w=/
Topic Starter
rui
>Takos
Thank you star! \(=ω=.)
PSPDS Eddie
Hard

02:58:653 (1) - いきなり1/6だと唐突ですし、初見だと絶対できないので1/4の連打のほうがいいかなーと感じます
そのまま1/6の場合は03:00:528 (1) - のスペーシングを直してください。

02:50:215 (3) -近いタイミングで少しズレているので、 02:49:278 (4) - と重ねるとプレイ中の見栄えが良くなります。(4)を動かすといいかも

03:08:029 (1) - わざとならいいです

nice map~
Topic Starter
rui
> PSPDS Eddie

Hard

02:58:653 (1) - いきなり1/6だと唐突ですし、初見だと絶対できないので1/4の連打のほうがいいかなーと感じます
最初は1/4にしてたのですが少し音が多くてうるさすぎるかなと感じたので1/3にしています。もう少しこのまま様子を見ようと思いますが、何回も指摘されるようでしたら変えると思います。
そのまま1/6の場合は03:00:528 (1) - のスペーシングを直してください。 直しました。

02:50:215 (3) -近いタイミングで少しズレているので、 02:49:278 (4) - と重ねるとプレイ中の見栄えが良くなります。(4)を動かすといいかも
重なるように調節しました。

03:08:029 (1) - わざとならいいです 一応わざとです。01:10:841と同じ感覚でこのように配置しています。
Thank you mod & star :)
Gamu
Modしてもらったので お返しという感じで 少ししますね  :)

[overall]
SPOILER
・コンボカラーなんですが、この色にしてみてはどうですか?

Combo1 : 62,0,62
Combo2 : 176,176,0
Combo3 : 0,0,136
こちらのコードをosu.ファイルの[Colours]のとこに上書きで出来ます。
※わからなければPMまたは osuのチャットで聞いてください

[Easy]
・fine~

[Hard]
SPOILER
・00:49:278 (1) - このスピナーなんですが オート先生で1000しか回らないのは駄目だと思います。
理由は


簡単に言うと、「スピナーのボーナス点はオートで2000は出るようにする必要がある」と書いてあります。
参考URL → http://osu.ppy.sh/forum/viewtopic.php?f=3&t=56528

・00:55:840 (5) - 1 grid 下に
・00:56:153 (6) - ^
・00:56:465 (7) - 1 grid 左に
・00:56:778 (8) - ^
・00:57:090 (9) - 2 grid 上に
・01:02:716 (5) - 1 grid 上に
・01:03:029 (6) - ^
・01:03:341 (7) - 1 grid 左に
・01:03:654 (8) - ^
・01:03:966 (9) - 2 grid 下に
・01:12:403 (1) -  01:10:841 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - のスペーシング0.50xに合わせてみてはどうですか?
・03:08:029 (1) -  03:06:466 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - のスペーシング0.50xに合わせてみてはどうですか?

もしかしたら、EasyよりもNormalのほうがいいと思います。
それか、Nomalつくるか・・・

もし、EasyをNomralに変えるのなら今のままじゃ簡単なので いろいろとオブジェクトを追加したり 配置を変更する必要があると思います。


良い譜面でした~ :)

私のModで「これは変だろ」というとこありましたら 

変更しなくてもいいです
Topic Starter
rui

-Gamu- wrote:

Modしてもらったので お返しという感じで 少ししますね  :)

[overall]
SPOILER
・コンボカラーなんですが、この色にしてみてはどうですか? 今の暗い感じの色合いが気にっているのでこのままで

Combo1 : 62,0,62
Combo2 : 176,176,0
Combo3 : 0,0,136
こちらのコードをosu.ファイルの[Colours]のとこに上書きで出来ます。
※わからなければPMまたは osuのチャットで聞いてください

[Easy]
・fine~

[Hard]
SPOILER
・00:49:278 (1) - このスピナーなんですが オート先生で1000しか回らないのは駄目だと思います。削除しました
理由は


簡単に言うと、「スピナーのボーナス点はオートで2000は出るようにする必要がある」と書いてあります。
参考URL → http://osu.ppy.sh/forum/viewtopic.php?f=3&t=56528

・00:55:840 (5) - 1 grid 下に Fixed
・00:56:153 (6) - ^ Fixed
・00:56:465 (7) - 1 grid 左に Fixed
・00:56:778 (8) - ^ Fixed
・00:57:090 (9) - 2 grid 上に Fixed
・01:02:716 (5) - 1 grid 上に Fixed
・01:03:029 (6) - ^ Fixed
・01:03:341 (7) - 1 grid 左に Fixed
・01:03:654 (8) - ^ Fixed
・01:03:966 (9) - 2 grid 下に Fixed
・01:12:403 (1) -  01:10:841 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - のスペーシング0.50xに合わせてみてはどうですか? no fixed
・03:08:029 (1) -  03:06:466 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - のスペーシング0.50xに合わせてみてはどうですか? no fixed

もしかしたら、EasyよりもNormalのほうがいいと思います。
それか、Nomalつくるか・・・

もし、EasyをNomralに変えるのなら今のままじゃ簡単なので いろいろとオブジェクトを追加したり 配置を変更する必要があると思います。前の人にも言われたのでNormalを作る方向で考えます


良い譜面でした~ :)

私のModで「これは変だろ」というとこありましたら 

変更しなくてもいいです
Thank you mod :D
avira0922
ii kyouku desu
I make normal diff!
よろしければ~ :)

Your message is too short
わー 何ですか これ(´;ω;`)

Download: Kagamine Rin - Waltz of the Lunar Rainbow (rui) [avira's Normal].osu
Topic Starter
rui
Thank you avira0922 :)
add this diff and irc mod
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Breeze
This is Rin? Oh my...
俺の鈴がこんなに艶かしい わけがない (゚´Д`゚)
Red is what you must fixed, others are just suggestions

[General]
  1. Add avira0922 as tag to [Easy] and [Hard] diff.
  2. Source : LeleleP? What's that? Game? I can't find that on wilipedia, could you please make a brief description about the source?
[Easy]
SPOILER
  1. 00:35:841 (2) - No finish here
  2. 00:36:153 (1) - Use finish instead of whistle seems better
  3. 00:38:028 (1) - ^
  4. 00:43:341 spinner - no finish
  5. 00:43:653 (1) - Finish instead of whistle
  6. 00:45:528 (1) - ^
  7. 00:51:153 (1) - Add finish and KIAI starts here
  8. 00:57:091 (3) - Clap or finish, use only one sound would better, I suggest keep clap, remove finish
  9. 00:58:028 (1) - Add finish
  10. 00:59:591 (1) - ^
  11. 01:03:028 (2) - ^
  12. 01:03:966 (2) - Remove finish
  13. 01:04:903 (1) - Finish instead of whistle
  14. 01:06:778 (1) - ^
  15. 01:12:403 (1) - ^
  16. 01:14:278 (1) - ^
  17. 01:33:966 (2) - No finish
  18. 01:34:278 (1) - Finish instead of whistle
  19. 01:36:153 (1) - ^
  20. 01:41:466 spinner - no finish
  21. 01:41:778 (1) - Finish instead of whistle
  22. 01:43:653 (1) - ^
  23. 01:49:278 (1) - Add finish here and KIAI starts here
  24. 01:50:841 (1) - Add finish
  25. 01:56:153 (1) - finish
  26. 01:57:716 (1) - ^
  27. 02:03:028 (1) - Finish instead of whistle
  28. 02:04:903 (1) - ^
  29. 02:08:966 (4) - 1 grid down?
  30. 02:10:528 (1) - Finish instead of whistle
  31. 02:12:403 (1) - ^
  32. 02:18:028 (1) - ^
  33. 02:19:903 (1) - ^
  34. 02:25:216 spinner - no finish
  35. 02:25:528 (1) - Finish instead of whistle
  36. 02:27:403 (1) - ^
  37. 02:33:028 (1) - Add finish here and starts KIAI here
  38. 02:38:966 (5) - Remove finish
  39. 02:39:903 (1) - Add finish
  40. 02:41:466 (1) - ^
  41. 02:45:841 (5) - No finish
  42. 02:46:778 (1) - Add finish
  43. 02:48:341 (1) - ^
  44. 02:53:653 (1) - ^
  45. 02:55:216 (1) - ^
  46. 03:00:216 spinner - no finish
  47. 03:00:528 (1) - Finish instead of whistle
  48. 03:02:403 (1) - ^
  49. 03:08:028 (1) - ^
  50. 03:09:903 (1) - ^
  51. 03:13:653 spinner - This spinner is too short as a Easy diff., I suggest use spinner starts at 03:11:778 or 03:12:716 and ends at 03:14:591
Too many repeat parts, that would make players feel boring, maybe you should try some other way to put notes

[avira's Normal]
  1. 00:36:153 (1) - Finish instead of whistle seems better, similarly hereinafter
  2. 00:38:028 (1) - ^
  3. 00:43:653 (1) - ^
  4. 00:45:528 (1) - ^
  5. 00:51:153 - KIAI stars here
  6. 01:04:903 (1) - Finish instead of whistle
  7. 01:06:778 (1) - ^
  8. 01:41:778 (1,6) - Add finish
  9. 01:49:278 - KIAI starts here
  10. 02:18:028 (1) - Add finish
  11. 02:19:903 (3) - ^
  12. 02:33:028 - KIAI starts here
  13. 02:39:903 (2,5) - Add finish
  14. 02:53:653 (1) - Finish instead of whistle
  15. 02:55:216 (3) - ^
  16. 02:57:403 (1) - Spacing a bit far
  17. 02:58:653 (3) - Finish instead of whistle
[Hard]
Same sound suggestion to [Easy], and same KIAI start time suggestion, didn't point out in this diff.
  1. 01:33:341 (1,2,3,4,5) - Use normal hitsound here seems better, and volume grade up, 60%-80%or90%
  2. 02:09:591 (5,6,7,8,9,10) - ^
  3. 03:07:091 (5,6,7,8,9,10) - ^
Topic Starter
rui

Breeze wrote:

This is Rin? Oh my...
俺の鈴がこんなに艶かしい わけがない (゚´Д`゚) Rin of the background is very magnificence (*´д`*)
Red is what you must fixed, others are just suggestions

[General]
  1. Add avira0922 as tag to [Easy] and [Hard] diff. Fixed
  2. Source : LeleleP? What's that? Game? I can't find that on wilipedia, could you please make a brief description about the source? LeleleP is vocaloid song creator name. Source→http://vocaloidotaku.net/index.php?/topic/13801-rin-append-%E6%9C%88%E8%99%B9%E3%81%AE%E3%83%AF%E3%83%AB%E3%83%84-by-lelelep/


[Easy]
SPOILER
  1. 00:35:841 (2) - No finish here
  2. 00:36:153 (1) - Use finish instead of whistle seems better
  3. 00:38:028 (1) - ^
  4. 00:43:341 spinner - no finish
  5. 00:43:653 (1) - Finish instead of whistle
  6. 00:45:528 (1) - ^
  7. 00:51:153 (1) - Add finish and KIAI starts here
  8. 00:57:091 (3) - Clap or finish, use only one sound would better, I suggest keep clap, remove finish
  9. 00:58:028 (1) - Add finish
  10. 00:59:591 (1) - ^
  11. 01:03:028 (2) - ^
  12. 01:03:966 (2) - Remove finish
  13. 01:04:903 (1) - Finish instead of whistle
  14. 01:06:778 (1) - ^
  15. 01:12:403 (1) - ^
  16. 01:14:278 (1) - ^
  17. 01:33:966 (2) - No finish
  18. 01:34:278 (1) - Finish instead of whistle
  19. 01:36:153 (1) - ^
  20. 01:41:466 spinner - no finish
  21. 01:41:778 (1) - Finish instead of whistle
  22. 01:43:653 (1) - ^
  23. 01:49:278 (1) - Add finish here and KIAI starts here
  24. 01:50:841 (1) - Add finish
  25. 01:56:153 (1) - finish
  26. 01:57:716 (1) - ^
  27. 02:03:028 (1) - Finish instead of whistle
  28. 02:04:903 (1) - ^
  29. 02:08:966 (4) - 1 grid down?
  30. 02:10:528 (1) - Finish instead of whistle
  31. 02:12:403 (1) - ^
  32. 02:18:028 (1) - ^
  33. 02:19:903 (1) - ^
  34. 02:25:216 spinner - no finish
  35. 02:25:528 (1) - Finish instead of whistle
  36. 02:27:403 (1) - ^
  37. 02:33:028 (1) - Add finish here and starts KIAI here
  38. 02:38:966 (5) - Remove finish
  39. 02:39:903 (1) - Add finish
  40. 02:41:466 (1) - ^
  41. 02:45:841 (5) - No finish
  42. 02:46:778 (1) - Add finish
  43. 02:48:341 (1) - ^
  44. 02:53:653 (1) - ^
  45. 02:55:216 (1) - ^
  46. 03:00:216 spinner - no finish
  47. 03:00:528 (1) - Finish instead of whistle
  48. 03:02:403 (1) - ^
  49. 03:08:028 (1) - ^
  50. 03:09:903 (1) - ^
  51. 03:13:653 spinner - This spinner is too short as a Easy diff., I suggest use spinner starts at 03:11:778 or 03:12:716 and ends at 03:14:591
Too many repeat parts, that would make players feel boring, maybe you should try some other way to put notes
ALL adopted. Many repeat parts yet?

[avira's Normal]
  1. 00:36:153 (1) - Finish instead of whistle seems better, similarly hereinafter
  2. 00:38:028 (1) - ^
  3. 00:43:653 (1) - ^
  4. 00:45:528 (1) - ^
  5. 00:51:153 - KIAI stars here
  6. 01:04:903 (1) - Finish instead of whistle
  7. 01:06:778 (1) - ^
  8. 01:41:778 (1,6) - Add finish
  9. 01:49:278 - KIAI starts here
  10. 02:18:028 (1) - Add finish
  11. 02:19:903 (3) - ^
  12. 02:33:028 - KIAI starts here
  13. 02:39:903 (2,5) - Add finish
  14. 02:53:653 (1) - Finish instead of whistle
  15. 02:55:216 (3) - ^
  16. 02:57:403 (1) - Spacing a bit far
  17. 02:58:653 (3) - Finish instead of whistle
[Hard]
Same sound suggestion to [Easy], and same KIAI start time suggestion, didn't point out in this diff.
  1. 01:33:341 (1,2,3,4,5) - Use normal hitsound here seems better, and volume grade up, 60%-80%or90%
  2. 02:09:591 (5,6,7,8,9,10) - ^
  3. 03:07:091 (5,6,7,8,9,10) - ^
ALL adopted.
Thank you mod(*⌒∇⌒*)
avira0922

Breeze wrote:

This is Rin? Oh my...
俺の鈴がこんなに艶かしい わけがない (゚´Д`゚) <<< (*´ω`*)

[avira's Normal]
  1. 00:36:153 (1) - Finish instead of whistle seems better, similarly hereinafter
  2. 00:38:028 (1) - ^
  3. 00:43:653 (1) - ^
  4. 00:45:528 (1) - ^
  5. 00:51:153 - KIAI stars here
  6. 01:04:903 (1) - Finish instead of whistle
  7. 01:06:778 (1) - ^
  8. 01:41:778 (1,6) - Add finish
  9. 01:49:278 - KIAI starts here
  10. 02:18:028 (1) - Add finish
  11. 02:19:903 (3) - ^
  12. 02:33:028 - KIAI starts here
  13. 02:39:903 (2,5) - Add finish
  14. 02:53:653 (1) - Finish instead of whistle
  15. 02:55:216 (3) - ^
  16. 02:57:403 (1) - Spacing a bit far
  17. 02:58:653 (3) - Finish instead of whistle
all fixed~

thanks a lot! Breeze~~ ;)

Download: Kagamine Rin - Waltz of the Lunar Rainbow (rui) [avira's Normal].osu
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