whymeman wrote:

[Easy]

Honestly, putting a storyboarded hitsound is not a good idea when there is no notes to use them with. It will really put some confusion on new players thinking they are either hitting too early or about to hit way too later, especially on sliders. Not just that but it sounds very odd in Taiko....
thanks for point out this, I just want to try new things in my maps, but seems it is not so good enough ;_;
I turn down the volume of sb hitsounds, hope it is not too confusing to play 0.0

[Normal]

Feels a bit harder than normal, but I can still find it within agreeable limits... Also, the hitsounded storyboard is confusing where there is no beats as i've said about Easy, but it's not as bad though.
same as Easy

[Insane]

03:39:310 (1) - The fact that this blends into the color of the spinner made me frown.... Please change the color to something else that won't blend into the spinner.
Fixed

The map is nice so far, but still worried about the storyboarded hitsounds as that is easily mixed up with that is actually being hit on time. If you still want to keep the hitsound in the storyboard, then it would be best to try lowering the volume of the sound itself (used for the storyboard).

happy30 wrote:

[General]

The video got some frame rate issues and the quality isn't that good, maybe replace it with this one:
http://www.mediafire.com/?eeco7o4epj2ppog
(the size is a bit big, but it looks good!)
sorry , but the size is 18MB , I think it is too big , so I change it to flv

I think you should remove all SBed hitsounds D:
fixed , removed all sb hitsound and fixed some hitsounds

02:25:360 (1) - Fix the break after this spinner on all diffs
what? the breaks are fine I think , sorry for my poor english , I don't know what you mean

[Hard]
00:09:160 (3) - I fail to see this slider after completing the spinner >_>
maybe move 00:08:560 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - to a different location?
fixed

nice stuff you have here o.o

whymeman wrote:

The video offset feels really off but may be due to the actual animation of the video itself that makes it appear late.
changed the video offset to -36ms , seems better now

[Easy]

00:43:210 (2) - The slider tick sound really awkward here. To make better use of the hitsounds, you would either use the hitnotes and sliders in whole beats like this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/132703 , or form another beat pattern to use the hitsound with 1/2 notes
this part is really mess , fixed
01:51:760 (1,3) - These sliders don't sound good at all. (1) ends 1/2 beat too early and (3) looks like it was moved back by 1/2.
sorry , I think it is fine , this part is following the vocal , and they are all sliders , I think it is not bad to play
02:18:910 (5) - Could have started this slider 1/2 later to make the clap hitsound fit with the consistency.
removed clap

[Normal]

01:46:210 (10) - The clap hitsound here doesn't sound right and isn't with the consistent flow.
removed clap
01:54:610 (7) - ^
sorry , but I want to keep this , it is sound ok cuz the claps in this part are not following the drums , and it is not confusing to play
02:44:560 (8) - This could sound and fit better with a single repeat to make it a 3 beat slider.
sorry , I really want to keep this , if repeat , it is sound too busy , but the music in this part is softer than other parts
02:49:360 (9) - ^ ^
02:54:160 (7) - ^ ^

happy30 wrote:

hmm let's try this again, happymod v.2
thanks

General technical stuff

1. 02:27:460 - Fix the break here on all diffs
   It looks like this currently:
   
   
   
   Make it look like:
   
   

I'm so sorry , I want to keep this , the break is following the music , and if I fix this , this break will be kinda long

[Easy]
SB Sounds / Sliderticks that sound a bit weird
I understand that you want to keep the hitsounds in the SB, however just a few should be removed imo, they came rather sudden

1. 00:43:510 - Remove it here
   sorry , but hiesounds feel empty if remove this , for not too sudden , I turn the volume down
2. 00:46:660 - Add one here?
   sorry , I feel so sudden if add this , and it is not follow the drums in music , so I just keep this
3. 00:58:660 - Try to get a sound 1/2 later instead?
   sorry , I think it is fine , not too sudden and fit the song , also not confusing to play
4. 01:49:060 - Remove it here
   sorry , same as 00:58:660 , I think it is fine

[Normal]

1. 01:06:010 (1,2,3,4,5) - This rhythm you used here is not very consistent to the rest of the map
   Maybe add some notes on red ticks, make it similar to 01:15:610 (1,2,3,4,1) -
   sorry , I want to keep this , the vocal in here is just "e~~~~" , so I follow the drums

[Hard]

1. 02:58:360 (2,3) - Hidden sliders, you might not see the repeat arrows ><
   oops , thanks to point out , fixed

I'll check the map again after you update it, also don't kudosu this post since you already gave me one on the other post

Azure_Kyte wrote:

Here's my mod

Blue = Suggestion Red = Fix this



[Easy]

I wouldn't recommend mapping using Grid level 4 here; it can cause a large number of smaller spacing issues that just cause confusion. I recommend sticking to Grid Level 2 or 3.
ok , I will use Gird Level 2 or 3 in my later maps

Additionally, this feels way to hard to be an Easy.
the BPM is 200 , so I think it is fine.

00:09:160 (1,2,1,2) - Might I suggest using this as the first two combos, as it looks a little messy to me (Flip the second combo first)? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/133644
sorry , I don't understand what you mean , I checked this and find nothing need to be fixed. the combo is ok imo

00:19:510 (2) - Reposition like this? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/133649
sorry , I don't think it need to be done like that

01:27:610 (3) - I would recommend shortening this by 1/2 and moving forward to the next tick. It's nice to follow the lyrics, but in an Easy it's recommended to follow the beat.
sorry , here is just following the vocal , and they are all sliders , so I think it is not hard to play

Apart from that, there's nothing "wrong" with it, but it feels a little too difficult for my liking.


[Normal]

01:13:960 (3) - Please don't put notes on the top of a slider end; it is quite confusing to players
fixed

Other than that, it's fine =3

[Hard]

00:09:760 (1,2,3,4) - To be honest I really don't see how this kind of spacing makes it fun. This would *maybe* be seen in an Insane Map, but I think it would be much more fun placed as small jumps, rather than negative spacing. The same applies to each group of notes placed like this.
sorry , I really want to keep this , the big spacing is following the bass , the amall spacing is following the drums , and I think they are easily readble with AR7

03:11:260 (1,2,3) - This is the only exception that I would suggest leaving as is.
same as ^

03:37:435 (1) - Please move this forward by 1/4 and shorten by 1/4. Spinners should not start 1/4 after a note, as they appear before the note has been hit, which confuses players.
fixed

Other than that, this was a great map. I loved your sliders. Keep up the great work.

[Insane]

03:37:435 (1) - Please move this forward by 1/4 and shorten by 1/4. Spinners should not start 1/4 after a note, as they appear before the note has been hit, which confuses players.
fixed

Other than that, I see no actual issues with this difficulty; It definitely earned it's name.

Popping this bubble for the time being; I'll run this map by some other MAT members before proceeding further.