Crimson RebellionLet's begiiiin
I'll focus in aesthetics mostly
General:• Idk if you noticed but, you have 2 audios on your folder... delete audio.mp3
might be on your side cuz I don't have an extra audio.mp3 o,o?seems good
Objects:• 00:53:739 - I feel like the spinner starts here (i also tried hearing that part at 25% playback rate and you can see that there is where it starts)
I actually don't really hear it, maybe its the audience noise in the background or it might be too soft? the spinner lasts for almost a measure which is quite balance already.• 00:55:203 (1,2,3,4,5) - Right now, this seems like
this, but i think that , just for aesthetics :v), you should move this like
this... and yes, its like moved a bit only... but if you can see, now it does a perfect blanket with 00:55:934 (10) - and 00:56:081 (11) - so it looks a bit better. this is a bit nazi i know xD
zz lol if its by pixels its excusable...• 00:59:593 (6) - isn't this TOO far away from 00:59:446 (5,7) - ? i might consider moving it a bit to the left, at least to make the spacing a bit more comfortable to play
or you can also do an overlap on 00:59:739 (7) - like
this (maybe this is the best option , because you will also make the spacing between 00:59:739 (7,1) - lower than before, the current one is overspaced imo)
these jumps are actually just supposed to be growing in spacing if you look at it wholly. although, nice alternative but I'll keep mines ;P• 01:00:178 (2) - what about moving this to x:352 y:356, it looks better also if you see the follow point pass exactly over 00:59:593 (6) -
it's supposed to structure itself as a square with 00:59:154 (3,6) - and the previous slider-end overlap.• 00:59:446 (5,8) - Is this stack wrong or it's just me?
unintended stack• 01:01:788 (4) - what about putting NC here? seems like you broke the flow
the NC would break the measure in half when every other measure is kept consistent : o• 01:07:642 (6) - you might consider moving this a bit down to fit with the stream from before, at least it will looks better
I don't think I actually understand what youre trying to say here, but the overlap plays rather fine and moving it down would be too overspaced.• 01:07:934 (8,8) - hmm maybe an overlap (with less spacing) would play better, like, right now its kinda overspaced imo xD
spacing is fine lol everthing around here is spaced moderately apart.• 01:14:520 (2) - what about moving this to x:364 y:196 so it will be exactly (or almost exactly) between 01:14:081 (2,3) - ... it would look cleaner tho
mm, i'll see if I can work with these triangles a bit• 01:14:666 (3) - same here, x:88 y:288 , it will be exactly between 01:14:373 (1,2) -
• 01:14:812 (1) - same here x3 (or maybe HELLO THERE ... ok , no) x:304 y:76 so it will be exactly between 01:14:373 (1,2) -
• 01:16:861 (3) - Since this sounds really different than 01:16:715 (2) - , i think that you should make a different pattern for this notes 01:16:861 (3,4,5,6) - (since it says "higashi no" ... or "hi ga shi no" and it says nothin where the circle 2 is)
I mean, if youre looking to separate the vocals from each other, or compile a set of vocals into one pattern, both ideas work I just chose the latter.• 01:24:178 (13) - Add NC?
no need~• 01:26:373 (4,3) - same stack thing lol, like, it seems good but if you move its like it re-stacks (yes this is a lot nazi)
(then dont be too nazi >>)• 01:37:203 (6,1) - idk , i think that this shouldn't be THAAAAAAAAT spaced
the spacing is actually almost equal to 01:35:885 (4,1) - but instead of coming off of a slider its a circle.• 01:47:007 (2,4) - Ctrl + G, trust me, it really feels bad playing that D:
doesnt feel bad to me D:• 01:52:568 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - i think that you may move this a bit up, like 5 pixels or something like that, and moving 01:53:446 (1) - as part of the stream stair, if my explanation is bad, there's a pic with what im talking about:
Pattern also, i stacked the whole stream stair with 01:52:568 (1,2) - so it will works for aesthetics too :p
mines is organized for e m p h a s i s ye• 02:00:471 (7) - why not make this slider curvy like 01:59:300 (13) - ?
the first slider curves to complete the circle, there's no circle in the one you pointed out and curving it leads nowhere really since the stream is equal on both top and bottom. linear acts as a stump so it wouldn't be lopsided curved in one way or the other.• 02:05:154 (1) - and what about moving this to x:448 y:40? it will be exactly between 02:04:203 (4,1) - so it works as an aesthetic too
its just the flipped circle of 02:04:568 (1) - • 02:08:227 (3,4,5) - wat why did u brokw the consistency and added a triple?
triple isn't bad :<• 02:18:910 (9) - NC?
no need~• 02:40:568 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - OH WHAT THE FUCK KROYTZ REALLY?
wait what is this supposed to mean?? ;;;;;♦ 02:50:520 (7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - this sounds as only one stream tho, or well... it would be better if you change the pattern and you add a circle here 02:50:739 - imo
I guess it could be one stream, but the way I have it sort of leads into a build up without overdoing the streaming. yknow, adding some distance to give a finishing combo.• 02:56:081 (3) - plz dont make our lifes bad than they're rn and do ctrl + G on this :'(
a e s t h e t i c• 03:01:055 (4) - i think that breaking the flow here would play REALLY good, just hear at the guitar
not needed, anything basic works with this tbh.• 03:05:446 (1,2) - maybe it would be better if you move this circle to the left, or rotate the pattern to the left, or making it like
this (the circle 3 is doing a blanket with the last curve of 03:03:983 (1) - , maybe you should stack the circle 3 with the sliderend of 03:02:812 (1) - )
also you can make 03:05:592 (2) - blanket with 03:06:324 (1) -
I just made the visual spacing look more even~• 03:14:520 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - i was there when you made this pattern in stream and i know how many time it took to you to decide what pattern to use here, but hey, doesn't it looks like (combo) 4-4?, maybe you should consider making a different pattern, maybe something similar than Panda Eyes - Highscore
hope you understand the picture haha its interesting your idea but I think visually mines is okay and fits well to the strumming of the guitar ^.^• 03:57:837 (1) - this is the most nazi thing that ill say today, but you should move this a pixel to the right so it will be exactly between 03:57:178 (4,5) -
holy shit lmao• 04:19:276 (6,7,8,9,10) - A CIRCLE MADE WITH ONLY PURE HATE LOL WHY
okayyy okayyyy I'll fix this! >>>>>;;;;;• 04:20:227 (3,1) - i think that this should be overlapped.
• 04:25:788 (6) - move this to x:296 y:256 so it will be exactly between 04:24:764 (1,3) -
or you can stack the 6 with the sliderend of 04:27:105 (1) -
but it's a hexagrid :<• 04:45:470 (6,6) - this overlap looks really weird lol
I mean, there are bound to be slight overlaps like this with large spacing circles. I tried my best okay ;;• 04:49:349 - i think that the kiai should ends here
ended it a measure or two later• 04:51:983 (2,1) - fix stack i think
just editor glitches Don't take me wrong, i don't really wanted to sounds nazi but the details on the aesthetics are important to have a clean map imo
Ok thats all from me, good luck.
Thanks for the really long mod! Pixel deviations are a bit nazi so maybe hold back on some if the ideas are still 99% there lol. My suspicions of what to fix are becoming a bit clear so thank you! Sorry I couldn't apply much but the ones I will apply will take a great amount of time since it affects quite a bit of combos after~