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This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Friday, March 2, 2018 at 9:28:41 PM

Artist: nano
Title: PARALYZE:D
Source: RE:VICE[D]
Tags: INFINITY≠ZERO / SABLE Rock on. west ground visual novel otomate 2014 idea factory paralyzed リヴァイスディー
BPM: 180
Filesize: 5000kb
Play Time: 01:21
Difficulties Available:
  1. Futsuu (2.39 stars, 215 notes)
  2. Inner Oni (4.12 stars, 526 notes)
  3. Kantan (1.77 stars, 112 notes)
  4. Muzukashii (2.81 stars, 311 notes)
  5. Oni (3.43 stars, 422 notes)


Download: nano - PARALYZE:D
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Hello! This is a m4m from your queue. My map: goreshit - the nature of dying (click)

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Suggestions
Unrankable issues

:idea: General
  1. You could change the vertical placement of the bg picture by changing this number in the .osu (Increase the number to move it down, decrease the number to move it up, keep the number at zero to have it the way it is currently.
  2. The tags on the difficulties are inconsistent!

Kantan
  1. 00:22:833 (44,45,46,47,48,49,50,51,52,53) - This part isn't consistent
  2. 00:28:166 (54,55,56,57,58,59,60,61,62,63,64) - I would suggest altering this entire section so that you can hit this 00:33:499 (65) - strong beat, as well as general consistency.
  3. 00:37:833 (73) - d
  4. 00:39:333 (76) - Add a finisher here
  5. 00:40:166 (77,78) - You could make these notes d
  6. 00:41:166 (79) - Delete this note for consistency
  7. 00:41:999 (81) - Add a finisher here
  8. 01:00:166 (116,117,118,119,120) - You should make this pattern something like this
  9. 01:02:833 (121,122,123,124,125) - ^
  10. 01:20:833 (157,158) - Instead of doing these two notes, you could put a spinner at 01:19:999 (155) - and have it end on 01:21:333 (1) -

Futsuu
  1. 00:06:166 (16) - You could make this k for some variation
  2. 00:11:500 (33) - Again, you could make this k for some variation
  3. 00:11:833 (34) - You could delete this note for a short break for the more unexperienced players to catch up.
  4. 00:16:833 (50) - k
  5. 00:28:166 (86,87,88,89,90,91,92,93) - I would highly recommend mapping more to the vocals in this part
  6. 00:40:999 (125) - d
  7. 00:46:499 (142) - Delete this note
  8. 00:54:499 (166,167,168,169,170,171,172,173,174,175,176) - This entire part is kind of bland, you could try mapping to the vocals here
  9. 01:05:499 (202) - A finisher note on 1/2 is kind of weird for Futsuu and inconsistent compared to the rest of the song, I suggest removing the next note or changing this to a normal d
  10. 01:21:166 (258,259) - change these to d in my opinion

Muzukashii
  1. You forgot to snap the notes on this diff after changing offset! They are a bit early.
  2. 00:25:333 (101,102,103) - Generally for Muzukashii diffs, you should use kkk or ddd on 1/4. This might not be a problem in the future for this difficulty, but keep it in mind.
  3. 00:41:833 (177,178,179,180,181,182,183,184,185,186) - This 1/2 pattern is pretty long, and kind of boring. You could delete this note to fix that 00:42:333 (180) -
  4. 00:49:833 (212,213,214,215,216) - You could change this pattern to something like this
  5. 01:10:166 (307,308,309,310,311,312) - You could change this pattern to something like this
  6. 01:20:999 (361) - Change this to d :P

Oni
  1. 00:12:000 (55) - You could delete this note because it doesn't have a guitar noise on it
  2. 00:14:666 (70,71) - Change these two notes to dk
  3. 00:27:499 (134) - k
  4. 00:41:333 (207) - Change this to d so that the player can prepare for the K
  5. 01:08:666 (357,358,359) - You could change this pattern to kkd
  6. 01:12:665 (383,384,385) - ^
  7. 01:17:666 (411) - Change this to k
I can't mod the Inner Oni because I am not good enough to pass it, sorry... :?

Good luck with this map!
posted
thanks for your mod! i'll do yours according to the queue
sorry sorry sorry i have a lot of questions and also the answers for the suggestions too c:

SPOILER
General

You could change the vertical placement of the bg picture by changing this number in the .osu (Increase the number to move it down, decrease the number to move it up, keep the number at zero to have it the way it is currently.
so is there an issue with the number i put or..? i just don't understand, sorry ^^'

Kantan
00:22:833 (44,45,46,47,48,49,50,51,52,53) - This part isn't consistent
what can i actually do to fix this?
00:28:166 (54,55,56,57,58,59,60,61,62,63,64) - I would suggest altering this entire section so that you can hit this 00:33:499 (65) - strong beat, as well as general consistency.
so you mean switching to the alternate hitsound? (sorry if u'm bothering you too much, it's just the first time i've got my map modded so.. :D)
00:37:833 (73) - d
i guess you're right, accepted
00:41:999 (81) - Add a finisher here
accepted
00:39:333 (76) - Add a finisher here
ok but i guess then 77 too
00:40:166 (77,78) - You could make these notes d
yeah, you're right, accepted
01:00:166 (116,117,118,119,120) - You should make this pattern something like this
01:02:833 (121,122,123,124,125) - ^
at first thought it's not "my style" but yeah, according to the music it's fine so i accept it
01:20:833 (157,158) - Instead of doing these two notes, you could put a spinner at 01:19:999 (155) - and have it end on 01:21:333 (1) -
omg it's so much better than what i've done, thx!!
Futsuu
00:06:166 (16) - You could make this k for some variation
00:11:500 (33) - Again, you could make this k for some variation
yep, didn't think much about it i guess, accepted
00:11:833 (34) - You could delete this note for a short break for the more unexperienced players to catch up.
yeah, good idea; accepted
00:16:833 (50) - k
accepted
00:28:166 (86,87,88,89,90,91,92,93) - I would highly recommend mapping more to the vocals in this part
not a problem, i'll remap this part a little bit; accepted
00:40:999 (125) - d
accepted
00:46:499 (142) - Delete this note
accepted
00:54:499 (166,167,168,169,170,171,172,173,174,175,176) - This entire part is kind of bland, you could try mapping to the vocals here
accepted; will be remapped
01:05:499 (202) - A finisher note on 1/2 is kind of weird for Futsuu and inconsistent compared to the rest of the song, I suggest removing the next note or changing this to a normal d
accepted, removed next note
01:21:166 (258,259) - change these to d in my opinion
yeah for some variation is good; accepted

Muzukashii
You forgot to snap the notes on this diff after changing offset! They are a bit early.
lol embarassing but thanks :'D
00:25:333 (101,102,103) - Generally for Muzukashii diffs, you should use kkk or ddd on 1/4. This might not be a problem in the future for this difficulty, but keep it in mind.
i kinda hate those rules because of how much muzu and oni can be different compared to each other but i can't break them
and i forgot about it to be honest xD
thx and fixed all the issues with that; accepted
00:41:833 (177,178,179,180,181,182,183,184,185,186) - This 1/2 pattern is pretty long, and kind of boring. You could delete this note to fix that 00:42:333 (180) -
yeah, perfect with music; accepted
00:49:833 (212,213,214,215,216) - You could change this pattern to something like this
omg wtf a moron mapped that, i'd probably do the same as you added to the post, dunno what happened to me
accepted
01:10:166 (307,308,309,310,311,312) - You could change this pattern to something like this
seems kinda strange for me i'll change that one to this better i think
01:20:999 (361) - Change this to d :P
yeah you're right
Oni
00:12:000 (55) - You could delete this note because it doesn't have a guitar noise on it
actually it has but not so loud anyway i'll keep it
this one rejected
00:14:666 (70,71) - Change these two notes to dk
this one i don't understand D:
00:27:499 (134) - k
accepted
00:41:333 (207) - Change this to d so that the player can prepare for the K
accepted
01:08:666 (357,358,359) - You could change this pattern to kkd
01:12:665 (383,384,385) - ^
yeah food idea; accepted
01:17:666 (411) - Change this to k
ok let it be; accepted


UPDATED
posted
Hi~ M4M from your queue.
[General]
  1. Please uncheck "Widescreen support" and "Enable Countdown" in Song Setup -> Design.
  2. Your Source on Kantan, Futsuu, Muzukashii and Oni are "Re:vice[D]" Please change it to "Re:Vice[D]".
  3. What strickluke was trying to say was that going into your .osu file (Which you have to go into your Osu file -> Songs -> nano - PARALYZE:D). All this does is change the position of the background when you're playing the map so that players can see the main part of the background. (If you're still having trouble try and find me in-game possibly)


[Kantan]
  1. 00:24:499 (47) - Change this to a kat as this is to be consistent with what you have been doing before this (k k dk)
  2. 00:29:499 (57) - Move this to 00:30:833 so give a two note break (You have done kdk kdk, which could be better and easier if it was like kdk k k kdk)
  3. 00:31:499 (61) - Same as above ^ (Move to 00:33:499)
  4. 00:34:166 (66) - Remove this don if you have applied the two suggestions above as this with break the consistency of kdk k k kdk.
  5. 00:36:499 (70) - Change this to a kat to be consistent with what you have been doing before.
  6. 00:37:833 (72,73) - Flip these two notes around (Ctrl+G) so that it's kd as this matches the song better.
  7. 01:19:999 (1) - Extend this spinner to 01:21:499 as the song doesn't finish until here.


[Futsuu]
  1. In your Futsuu, I think you can add a few more 1/4 patterns in (For instance; 00:19:999 or 00:27:999) as your Kantan is almost 2 stars and your Futsuu is 2.3 stars which isn't that big of a difference. You can possibly make your Kantan a bit easier by removing some of the notes that land on "Red Ticks".
  2. 00:16:833 (50) - Change this to a don to be consistent with the pattern of k dk k.
  3. 01:21:166 (259,260) - Change these to kats like you have done in the rest of your diffs (Muzukashii, Oni, Inner Oni)


[Muzukashii]
  1. 00:06:500 (22) - Change this to a kat instead of a don to make a little easier to play.
  2. 00:19:999 (79,80) - Change this to kkk, adding a note on 00:20:083 as you have done the same at 00:25:333
  3. 01:19:416 (349) - Remove this note as there isn't a strong enough sound to put it there.
  4. 01:20:999 (356) - Change this to a kat instead like you have done in your Oni and Inner Oni.


[Oni]
  1. 00:20:333 - Add a don here as it feels weird to play kkd and then have nothing after it.
  2. 00:22:749 - Add a kat here to make it a triplet as there is a clap sound in the song.
  3. 00:41:999 (211,216,219) - Add finishers to these notes? There are really strong cymbal sounds here.


[Inner Oni]
  1. 00:20:333 - Same as Oni, add a don here.
  2. 00:26:666 - Change this stream to be kdkdddk? It sounds better and fits the melody a bit better.
  3. 00:49:083 (283,284) - Flip these two around (Ctrl+G) as there is a lower note on 00:49:833 rather than 00:49:833.
That's all from me, Good Luck with this map!
posted

Ceryuia wrote:

Hi~ M4M from your queue.
[General]
  1. Please uncheck "Widescreen support" and "Enable Countdown" in Song Setup -> Design. Thx. Done
  2. Your Source on Kantan, Futsuu, Muzukashii and Oni are "Re:vice[D]" Please change it to "Re:Vice[D]". Thx for noticing, fixed
  3. What strickluke was trying to say was that going into your .osu file (Which you have to go into your Osu file -> Songs -> nano - PARALYZE:D). All this does is change the position of the background when you're playing the map so that players can see the main part of the background. (If you're still having trouble try and find me in-game possibly). Oh I guess I was blind that the part of the bg I wanted players to see is a bit lower than it should be. Thx.


[Kantan]
  1. 00:24:499 (47) - Change this to a kat as this is to be consistent with what you have been doing before this (k k dk) Done
  2. 00:29:499 (57) - Move this to 00:30:833 so give a two note break (You have done kdk kdk, which could be better and easier if it was like kdk k k kdk) Done
  3. 00:31:499 (61) - Same as above ^ (Move to 00:33:499) Done
  4. 00:34:166 (66) - Remove this don if you have applied the two suggestions above as this with break the consistency of kdk k k kdk. Done
  5. 00:36:499 (70) - Change this to a kat to be consistent with what you have been doing before. Done
  6. 00:37:833 (72,73) - Flip these two notes around (Ctrl+G) so that it's kd as this matches the song better. Yeah, you're right. Done
  7. 01:19:999 (1) - Extend this spinner to 01:21:499 as the song doesn't finish until here. Done


[Futsuu]
  1. In your Futsuu, I think you can add a few more 1/4 patterns in (For instance; 00:19:999 or 00:27:999) as your Kantan is almost 2 stars and your Futsuu is 2.3 stars which isn't that big of a difference. You can possibly make your Kantan a bit easier by removing some of the notes that land on "Red Ticks". Added some notes where suggested
  2. 00:16:833 (50) - Change this to a don to be consistent with the pattern of k dk k. Done
  3. 01:21:166 (259,260) - Change these to kats like you have done in the rest of your diffs (Muzukashii, Oni, Inner Oni) Done


[Muzukashii]
  1. 00:06:500 (22) - Change this to a kat instead of a don to make a little easier to play. Done; pretty much right decision if i try to remember my pain when hitting lots of same notes
  2. 00:19:999 (79,80) - Change this to kkk, adding a note on 00:20:083 as you have done the same at 00:25:333 Done
  3. 01:19:416 (349) - Remove this note as there isn't a strong enough sound to put it there. Done and changed 01:19:666 (351) to a k
  4. 01:20:999 (356) - Change this to a kat instead like you have done in your Oni and Inner Oni. That's how it was without previous suggestion and i liked it better than with. Changed back


[Oni]
  1. 00:20:333 - Add a don here as it feels weird to play kkd and then have nothing after it. I don't think so, no music signs for doing that except guitar noise which is ot that hearable. Pass
  2. 00:22:749 - Add a kat here to make it a triplet as there is a clap sound in the song. Done
  3. 00:41:999 (211,216,219) - Add finishers to these notes? There are really strong cymbal sounds here. Added to the 217 instead


[Inner Oni]
  1. 00:20:333 - Same as Oni, add a don here. Same as oni - nope :'D
  2. 00:26:666 - Change this stream to be kdkdddk? It sounds better and fits the melody a bit better. I think this one 00:26:999 (144) should go with k and i tried that pattern, for me it didn't work. Pass
  3. 00:49:083 (283,284) - Flip these two around (Ctrl+G) as there is a lower note on 00:49:833 rather than 00:49:833. Done for now
That's all from me, Good Luck with this map!
Thanks for your mod, very useful one. <3
I'll do my part today or tomorrow if i won't have much time.
posted
Hello

From p/5786867

Try it with offset 1493. Looks very accurate for me.
Also please add "West Ground" into tags, see as reference: http://puu.sh/tLWtx/7a56ce4ec2.jpg

Also i'm note sure but shouldn't the tag "otome" be "otomate" ?
Also the Source "Re:Vice[D]" Should be "RE:VICE[D]" // Full capitalized. See as reference the official website and this

No Kudosu

Good luck!
posted

Feerum wrote:

Hello

From p/5786867

Try it with offset 1493. Looks very accurate for me.
Also please add "West Ground" into tags, see as reference: http://puu.sh/tLWtx/7a56ce4ec2.jpg

Also i'm note sure but shouldn't the tag "otome" be "otomate" ?
Also the Source "Re:Vice[D]" Should be "RE:VICE[D]" // Full capitalized. See as reference the official website and this

No Kudosu

Good luck!
Thanks for help <3
posted
hihi~~

Inner Oni
00:26:992 (144,145,146,147,148,149,150,151,152) - kdd ddk kdk
00:33:992 (191,192,193) - kdk
00:50:492 (294,295) - k d
00:51:992 (303,304,305) - try dkd?
01:02:659 - ddd
00:59:826 (361,362,363,364,365) - kkddk is better?
00:46:992 - 00:47:326 - add note here hv drum sound~
Oni
00:46:992 - 00:47:326 - add here too
00:47:992 - add d ?
Muzukashii
00:59:492 (256,257,258,259,260) - ddkdk?
01:08:826 (301,302,303,304) - kdkd
Futsuu
add some 00:33:659 - or 00:33:992 -
01:00:159 (190,191) - k d
01:18:326 - add d
01:20:992 - add k ?
Kantan
00:17:826 - to 00:37:826 - make some color change
00:38:492 - add d

gooood luck~~ and EXPLOSION!!!!!!!!!!!!
posted

Fantazy wrote:

hihi~~

Inner Oni
00:26:992 (144,145,146,147,148,149,150,151,152) - kdd ddk kdk Hmm~ Yeah, I like it, makes a bit harder to play and sounds good. Accepted.
00:33:992 (191,192,193) - kdk Naaah, doesn't sound good, k in the end even doesn't matches the song. Rejected. But i'll switch to kkd for now.
00:50:492 (294,295) - k d Probably not because there is drum sound when you suggested d.
00:51:992 (303,304,305) - try dkd? I made this part with a bunch of dons because part with kats is upcoming so no. And not k there because no music sign too. Rejected
01:02:659 - ddd Yeah why not. Accepted.
00:59:826 (361,362,363,364,365) - kkddk is better? Tried it but I don't like it. Still good suggestion but I'll stick with what I've made. Rejected.
00:46:992 - 00:47:326 - add note here hv drum sound~ Omg yes! Accepted and added d at 00:47:326 too.
Oni
00:46:992 - 00:47:326 - add here too Accepted.
00:47:992 - add d ? Accepted.
Muzukashii
00:59:492 (256,257,258,259,260) - ddkdk? Accepted.
01:08:826 (301,302,303,304) - kdkd Accepted.
Futsuu
add some 00:33:659 - or 00:33:992 - Accepted. Added at first.
01:00:159 (190,191) - k d Accepted.
01:18:326 - add d Accepted.
01:20:992 - add k ? Hmm~ Nope I guess, because I don't want it to be the same as in harder diffs. Rejected.
Kantan
00:17:826 - to 00:37:826 - make some color change Accepted and done.
00:38:492 - add d Accepted.

gooood luck~~ and EXPLOSION!!!!!!!!!!!! Ha-ha, thank you! And EXPLOSION!!!!!!!!! to you too xD
Thanks for your mod! Appreciate it~
posted

Hitsu wrote:

thanks for your mod! i'll do yours according to the queue
sorry sorry sorry i have a lot of questions and also the answers for the suggestions too c:

SPOILER
General

You could change the vertical placement of the bg picture by changing this number in the .osu (Increase the number to move it down, decrease the number to move it up, keep the number at zero to have it the way it is currently.
so is there an issue with the number i put or..? i just don't understand, sorry ^^' there is not a bug or anything, this is a simple aesthetic suggestion. you can change in the .osu file where the background is placed.

Kantan
00:22:833 (44,45,46,47,48,49,50,51,52,53) - This part isn't consistent
what can i actually do to fix this? move this note 00:27:826 (53) - to the red tick before it

00:28:166 (54,55,56,57,58,59,60,61,62,63,64) - I would suggest altering this entire section so that you can hit this 00:33:499 (65) - strong beat, as well as general consistency.
so you mean switching to the alternate hitsound? (sorry if u'm bothering you too much, it's just the first time i've got my map modded so.. :D) for this part i suggest remapping so that it can hit a few more of the strong beats


UPDATED
Hope I answered your questions well ;)
posted
Hope I answered your questions well ;)
Thank you again~ Appreciate your help <3
posted
The OD/HP scaling doesn't work this way in Taiko.
Also the use of finisher seems unconsistent regarding the song, there are many beat that could've been emphasized more with finishers.

[Kantan]
OD4 HP8
* - 00:06:826 - to - 00:17:492 - Too repetitiv considering the previous part that has the same patterns. Try moving - 00:07:659 (13) - to - 00:07:492 - instead => repeat for the whole part.
Also i would stick to that structure and not randomly use another like for - 00:11:826 (21) - / -00:14:159 (26,27) -.
Try having a break at the end to show the change in the song => remove - 00:16:826 (33) - at least imo.
* - 00:27:659 (53) - Better removing that one for the reason above. You made just no break at all and here we move to another part of the song again.
* - 00:44:159 (85) - That could probably be a finisher.
* - I would rather remove those and use a spinner or a slider to emphasize the vocal here, that also count for a break.
* - 01:00:159 - to - 01:04:826 - Plays awkward tbh, you should use again what you did the first half of the kiai which sounds much better.
* - 01:19:992 (1) - That doesn't quite sound like a spinner, maybe add one or two notes instead, consistency with other diffs that also don't use a spinner there.

[Futsuu]
OD4.5 HP7
* - 00:17:159 (51) - Remove? Break before the second part, also just for the sake of consistency since there is nothing at - 00:11:826 -.
* - 00:18:159 - On the other hand that break is weird since the vocal is up and you kinda follow it for that whole part. - 00:17:492 (52,53,54,55,56,57,58) - :
d - k - - - k - d - k - d k => d - k - d - k k - d - k
Well what you are following is unclear since some stuff ignore the vocal for drums, so instead you could also just add a ddk 1/2 instead of the break.
* - 00:27:659 (85,86,87,88) - might be too much before that finisher, i would use only 2 notes here like d D or k D, also to get a break showing the song's change.
* - 00:28:159 - to - 00:38:826 - Also that whole part seems weird to me. Doesn't really follow the vocal nor drums. - 00:32:326 (102,103) - for example heres a weird transition between vocal/drum follow, and the break at - 00:35:492 - doesn't make much sense either. I suggest you just to focus more on one or another to get the whole thing more logic. Having break is indeed important but try to get them at the right time, for example i would've one at - 00:33:159 (105) - before the finisher.
* - 00:43:159 (137) - Remove to emphasize the voca/also consistency with - 00:40:492 -.
* - 00:46:826 (147,148,149,150,151) - As suggested in the muzu, this difficulty is still low enough to use spinner/slider to emphasize that kinda sound.
* - 00:54:492 (170) - / - 01:05:159 (207) - Remove those for more breaks/to emphasize the following finishers.

[Muzukashii]
OD5 HP6
* - 00:11:993 (44) - move to - 00:11:409 - ? consistency with - 00:06:076 (19,20,21,22,23) -.
* - 00:16:992 (66) - / - 00:17:326 (68) - Remove those? a bit overdone.
* - 00:27:492 (113,114,115,116,117) - 3/4 rythm usable here, by removing - 00:27:826 (115) - and moving - 00:27:659 (114) - to - 00:27:742 -. Adds a bit of variety.
* - 00:37:492 (158) - move to - 00:36:940 - ? Fits the vocal.
* - 00:54:992 (236) - / - 00:55:659 (239) - I would remove those to emphasize the strong vocal beat here, they could even be used with finishers.
* - 01:05:659 (287) - / - 01:06:326 (290) - ^.
* - 01:16:742 (336) - Plays weird.
This diff still heavily lacks breaks to be honest, requires more break in kantan/futsuu to begin with tho.


[Oni]
OD5 or 5.5, HP5
* - 00:03:409 (10) - / - 00:06:076 (24) - Maybe remove those 2, the following part is literally as dense as that one, which is not the case in all lower difficulties.
* - 00:30:826 (151) - Sounds weird, even muzukashii used previous/following beats instead for the vocal.
* - 00:37:492 (185) - Move to - 00:37:320 - ? For the vocal, as suggested in the muzu.
* - 00:54:992 (283,284) - Change to dk? As used at - 01:05:659 (342,343) -, sounds much better to me.
Some parts look barely denser than in the muzukashii, espacially the long one that starts at - 00:17:492 (85) -.

[Inner Oni]
OD5 or 6, HP5 or 6
* - 00:26:659 (140,141,142,143,144,145,146) - Try something like dddkd k instead ? Fits better the feeling of the song here imo.
* - 00:37:492 (209) - Same suggestion i made in other difficulties.
Same comment about density, only the kiai seems harder than the rest overall. Parts around the beginning could be harder.
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good luck
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SPOILER

Nofool wrote:

The OD/HP scaling doesn't work this way in Taiko.
Also the use of finisher seems unconsistent regarding the song, there are many beat that could've been emphasized more with finishers.

[Kantan]
OD4 HP8
* - 00:06:826 - to - 00:17:492 - Too repetitiv considering the previous part that has the same patterns. Try moving - 00:07:659 (13) - to - 00:07:492 - instead => repeat for the whole part.
Also i would stick to that structure and not randomly use another like for - 00:11:826 (21) - / -00:14:159 (26,27) -.
Try having a break at the end to show the change in the song => remove - 00:16:826 (33) - at least imo.
* - 00:27:659 (53) - Better removing that one for the reason above. You made just no break at all and here we move to another part of the song again.
* - 00:44:159 (85) - That could probably be a finisher.
* - I would rather remove those and use a spinner or a slider to emphasize the vocal here, that also count for a break.
* - 01:00:159 - to - 01:04:826 - Plays awkward tbh, you should use again what you did the first half of the kiai which sounds much better.
* - 01:19:992 (1) - That doesn't quite sound like a spinner, maybe add one or two notes instead, consistency with other diffs that also don't use a spinner there.
All applied

[Futsuu]
OD4.5 HP7
* - 00:17:159 (51) - Remove? Break before the second part, also just for the sake of consistency since there is nothing at - 00:11:826 -.
* - 00:18:159 - On the other hand that break is weird since the vocal is up and you kinda follow it for that whole part. - 00:17:492 (52,53,54,55,56,57,58) - :
d - k - - - k - d - k - d k => d - k - d - k k - d - k
Well what you are following is unclear since some stuff ignore the vocal for drums, so instead you could also just add a ddk 1/2 instead of the break.
* - 00:27:659 (85,86,87,88) - might be too much before that finisher, i would use only 2 notes here like d D or k D, also to get a break showing the song's change.
* - 00:28:159 - to - 00:38:826 - Also that whole part seems weird to me. Doesn't really follow the vocal nor drums. - 00:32:326 (102,103) - for example heres a weird transition between vocal/drum follow, and the break at - 00:35:492 - doesn't make much sense either. I suggest you just to focus more on one or another to get the whole thing more logic. Having break is indeed important but try to get them at the right time, for example i would've one at - 00:33:159 (105) - before the finisher.
* - 00:43:159 (137) - Remove to emphasize the voca/also consistency with - 00:40:492 -.
* - 00:46:826 (147,148,149,150,151) - As suggested in the muzu, this difficulty is still low enough to use spinner/slider to emphasize that kinda sound.
* - 00:54:492 (170) - / - 01:05:159 (207) - Remove those for more breaks/to emphasize the following finishers.
All applied

[Muzukashii]
OD5 HP6
* - 00:11:993 (44) - move to - 00:11:409 - ? consistency with - 00:06:076 (19,20,21,22,23) -.
* - 00:16:992 (66) - / - 00:17:326 (68) - Remove those? a bit overdone.
* - 00:27:492 (113,114,115,116,117) - 3/4 rythm usable here, by removing - 00:27:826 (115) - and moving - 00:27:659 (114) - to - 00:27:742 -. Adds a bit of variety.
* - 00:37:492 (158) - move to - 00:36:940 - ? Fits the vocal.
* - 00:54:992 (236) - / - 00:55:659 (239) - I would remove those to emphasize the strong vocal beat here, they could even be used with finishers.
* - 01:05:659 (287) - / - 01:06:326 (290) - ^.
* - 01:16:742 (336) - Plays weird. Deleted then
This diff still heavily lacks breaks to be honest, requires more break in kantan/futsuu to begin with tho. Added some breaks in all three
All applied

[Oni]
OD5 or 5.5, HP5
* - 00:03:409 (10) - / - 00:06:076 (24) - Maybe remove those 2, the following part is literally as dense as that one, which is not the case in all lower difficulties.
* - 00:30:826 (151) - Sounds weird, even muzukashii used previous/following beats instead for the vocal. Added a d before
* - 00:37:492 (185) - Move to - 00:37:320 - ? For the vocal, as suggested in the muzu.
* - 00:54:992 (283,284) - Change to dk? As used at - 01:05:659 (342,343) -, sounds much better to me. Yeah probably, and also same is in inner
Some parts look barely denser than in the muzukashii, espacially the long one that starts at - 00:17:492 (85) -. Mm, yeah you're right
All applied

[Inner Oni]
OD5 or 6, HP5 or 6
* - 00:26:659 (140,141,142,143,144,145,146) - Try something like dddkd k instead ? Fits better the feeling of the song here imo. Lol this one was changed couple of times, it was kkdkddk which I prefer and now too, so I better switch to the first version of this stream again.
* - 00:37:492 (209) - Same suggestion i made in other difficulties. Got it
Same comment about density, only the kiai seems harder than the rest overall. Parts around the beginning could be harder. Made it harder a bit
All applied

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good luck

Thanks for your tender mode~ <3
Appreciate that you decided to help me with this when I suddenly wrote you. To be honest it was Arrival's idea, he recommended me to contact you.
Lol I was so scared xD
Thx a lot again, your mode was really useful
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Lol nobody had mentioned unsnapped kiai ending and I didn't notice
That one is fixed
UPDATED

^ now with Nofool's mod
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Greetings from my queue! \o

Kantan:
00:03:159 (5) – I’ve gotten snapped at before (multiple times) for using sliders of similar length, people claiming they’re too short. I’m not entirely sure what the rule is on there, but uh… yeah.
00:06:826 (11) – Notes like these should be big kats. It sounds better to me.
00:12:492 – to 00:16:492 – Why is this section different from 00:06:826 - ? It’s the same as far as I can tell and changing it can make players confused.
Futsuu:
00:03:492 (8) – Change to kat. It’s the same as 00:06:159 (16) –
00:06:826 (17) – Like in Kantan, I think this sounds better as a big kat.
00:16:826 (50) – This should be a kat. It’s a higher pitch than 00:16:492 (49) –
00:18:159 (53,54,55) – Triplets like these are not allowed in Futsuu
00:45:492 (137) – This note isn’t different from the others, make it a don.
00:54:159 (17) – This should be a kat. It’s a similar pitch to the previous note.
Muzukashii:
00:06:826 (23) – Like the other difficulties, big kat.
00:53:659 (218,219,220) – Switch. (Control + G)
00:54:159 (221) – Kat? Sounds better.
Oni:
00:03:659 (11) – Change to kat, matches guitar pitch.
00:06:326 (24,25) - ^^
00:06:826 (26) – Like the rest, big kat.
Inner Oni:
Your background isn’t positioned like the rest of the difficulties.
00:06:326 (29,30) - Kat? Matches guitar pitch.
00:06:826 (31) – Like the rest, big kat.
That’s all I could find. Sorry for delay, I opened the queue and then got sick, whoops :’D
Good luck with rank! o/
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That’s all I could find. Sorry for delay, I opened the queue and then got sick, whoops :’D
Not a problem! Anything can happen in this life lol. Hope you feel better now <3
Thanks for your mod! I'll look through it when I'll have time~
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Hello !

[General]
You don't use a lot the inhereted section. I'd suggest to put the song at 90% volume / and the kiai at 100% to make an emphasis. You can also make a small speed up of x1.05 for the kiai.

01:19:992 (427) - Maybe add one here and put it to 80%, since the song is clearly lowering.

[Kantan]

00:42:826 (78,79) - Consider putting these 2 as dons, to remain cosistent with 00:40:159 (73,74) - and avoiding to have too many kats in a row.

Well nothing to say more !

[Futsuu]

00:38:659 - Add a note here ? For a better build up ?
00:39:326 (121) - 00:41:992 (128) - Put these two as finishers, they have the same sounds as the ones just before.
01:00:159 (38) - + 01:10:826 (71) - Finisher here

Of course if you make these finisher changes don't forget to do it in all your diffs !

[Muzukashii]

00:22:492 (86) - Consider deleting this note, doesn't fit with any sound here, and will emphasize the previous note.

Nothing more to say here

[Oni]

00:22:159 (105) - Move this note here 00:21:992 -
00:43:159 (221) - Delete this note for a little break and emphasis on the song ?
00:53:659 (278,279,280) - You put a triplet here, which is fine, but on the next part of the kiai you have a triplet here 01:04:659 (338,339,340) - Maybe make them correspond to each other.
01:16:742 (408,409,410,411,412,413,414,415,416,417,418,419,420,421,422) - This is a really long pattern compared at what you've done in the song overall. What about deleting this 01:18:326 (419) - ?

[Inner Oni]

00:03:826 (14,15,16) - Triplet here feels unecessery and forced. Consider letting only the k, or k + a note here 00:03:992 -
00:22:159 (118) - Move this here 00:21:992 -
00:33:326 (189,190,191,192,193,194,195,196,197,198,199,200) - Too many triplets in a row here, too many notes break the emphasis of themselves, I'd suggest deleting this note 00:34:076 (196) -
00:41:159 (240,241) - What about making these ones kats ?
00:52:659 (317,318,319,320) - Make this a quintuplet ? Like a kdkkd
00:54:409 - You should add a note here. Tbh the music feels like it

Good luck !
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poots_mcgoots wrote:

Greetings from my queue! \o

Kantan:
00:03:159 (5) – I’ve gotten snapped at before (multiple times) for using sliders of similar length, people claiming they’re too short. I’m not entirely sure what the rule is on there, but uh… yeah. Lol wth is wrong with this :DDD I won't change this but thanks for mentioning.
00:06:826 (11) – Notes like these should be big kats. It sounds better to me. No high pitch there so I'll keep it d.
00:12:492 – to 00:16:492 – Why is this section different from 00:06:826 - ? It’s the same as far as I can tell and changing it can make players confused. Well the first part is like introduction and then it's main song thing lol. I'm keeping it like this.
Futsuu:
00:03:492 (8) – Change to kat. It’s the same as 00:06:159 (16) – I did that for variety; keeping
00:06:826 (17) – Like in Kantan, I think this sounds better as a big kat. Like in kantan, keeping the way it is
00:16:826 (50) – This should be a kat. It’s a higher pitch than 00:16:492 (49) – Applied
00:18:159 (53,54,55) – Triplets like these are not allowed in Futsuu Are you sure about that? Many ranked maps contain 1/2 triplets in futsuu. And nobody here haf mentioned anything about that before
00:45:492 (137) – This note isn’t different from the others, make it a don. Okie-dokie, applied
00:54:159 (17) – This should be a kat. It’s a similar pitch to the previous note. Previous one is not about pitch, it's about drum sound. Keeping as it is
Muzukashii:
00:06:826 (23) – Like the other difficulties, big kat. Like in other diffs~
00:53:659 (218,219,220) – Switch. (Control + G) I guess so. Applied
00:54:159 (221) – Kat? Sounds better. I don't think so but thx for suggestion anyway
Oni:
00:03:659 (11) – Change to kat, matches guitar pitch. Than previous one should be k too, keeping as it is
00:06:326 (24,25) - ^^ Next one should be that too, keeping
00:06:826 (26) – Like the rest, big kat. Like in the rest~
Inner Oni:
Your background isn’t positioned like the rest of the difficulties. Lol whoops, Thanks for noticing!
00:06:326 (29,30) - Kat? Matches guitar pitch. Same as previous suggestions about that
00:06:826 (31) – Like the rest, big kat. Like in the rest~


That’s all I could find. Sorry for delay, I opened the queue and then got sick, whoops :’D
Good luck with rank! o/


Thanks for your mod!
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Arrival wrote:

Hello !

[General]
You don't use a lot the inhereted section. I'd suggest to put the song at 90% volume / and the kiai at 100% to make an emphasis. You can also make a small speed up of x1.05 for the kiai.

01:19:992 (427) - Maybe add one here and put it to 80%, since the song is clearly lowering.
All applied, thanks~

[Kantan]

00:42:826 (78,79) - Consider putting these 2 as dons, to remain cosistent with 00:40:159 (73,74) - and avoiding to have too many kats in a row. Applied

Well nothing to say more !

[Futsuu]

00:38:659 - Add a note here ? For a better build up ? Yeah, sure; applied
00:39:326 (121) - 00:41:992 (128) - Put these two as finishers, they have the same sounds as the ones just before. Applied
01:00:159 (38) - + 01:10:826 (71) - Finisher here 38 nope because it doesn't have that kind of sound there; 71 applied

Of course if you make these finisher changes don't forget to do it in all your diffs !

[Muzukashii]

00:22:492 (86) - Consider deleting this note, doesn't fit with any sound here, and will emphasize the previous note. Applied

Nothing more to say here

[Oni]

00:22:159 (105) - Move this note here 00:21:992 - Applied
00:43:159 (221) - Delete this note for a little break and emphasis on the song ? Good idea, applied
00:53:659 (278,279,280) - You put a triplet here, which is fine, but on the next part of the kiai you have a triplet here 01:04:659 (338,339,340) - Maybe make them correspond to each other. Applied
01:16:742 (408,409,410,411,412,413,414,415,416,417,418,419,420,421,422) - This is a really long pattern compared at what you've done in the song overall. What about deleting this 01:18:326 (419) - ? Good idea, applied

[Inner Oni]

00:03:826 (14,15,16) - Triplet here feels unecessery and forced. Consider letting only the k, or k + a note here 00:03:992 - I changed that the last time but yeah, that feels pretty bad; changed like it was before
00:22:159 (118) - Move this here 00:21:992 - Applied
00:33:326 (189,190,191,192,193,194,195,196,197,198,199,200) - Too many triplets in a row here, too many notes break the emphasis of themselves, I'd suggest deleting this note 00:34:076 (196) - Applied
00:41:159 (240,241) - What about making these ones kats ? I thought of that too, change for now
00:52:659 (317,318,319,320) - Make this a quintuplet ? Like a kdkkd I'll try that one for now! Applied
00:54:409 - You should add a note here. Tbh the music feels like it Pretty much yes, applied
Lol +0.2 to star difficulty xD

Good luck !


Thanks for your mod, Arrival-chi <3
Good luck with your one too~
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Hi! ^w^

Request from Gemu's Taiko & Mania Queue (M4M & GD)


M4M


d
k
D (Big d)
K (Big k)
  • [ Kantan]

    OD: 2

  1. 00:12:493 (22) - Remove because this note is interfering the finish 00:12:159 (21) -
  2. 00:17:492 (32) - Put a finish D and remove 00:17:826 (33) - to emphasis and flow of finish.
  3. 00:28:492 (51) - Remove to flow and emphasize the finish (If you apply the previous suggestion to consistency in both parts)
  4. 00:38:159 (69,70) - Remove to put a little break to the palyers can be antentive with the next patterns. Also, the notes 69 and 70 is interfering the flow of the finish 00:38:826 (71,72) -
  5. 00:40:659 (74) - Put a finish D for the sequence and consistency with the finish 73 and to emphasize it.
  6. 00:41:159 (75) - Remove because the note 75 is interfering with the flow and the emphasis of the finish 00:41:492 (76,77) -
  7. 00:42:826 (78,79) - You forgot put finish K in these notes to consistency with the previous finish 00:38:826 (71,72,73,74,76,77) -
  8. 00:43:826 (80) - Remove to emphasize and flow the finish 00:42:826 (78,79,81) -
  9. 00:49:492 (1) - You can put a finish D and remove 00:49:826 (2) - to flow.
  10. 00:55:159 (14) - Change to d and move to 00:55:492 - to emphasis the finish.
  11. 01:00:159 (22) - Put a finish D and remove 01:00:493 (23) - to consistency with 00:49:492 (1,2,3) -
  12. 01:05:826 (35) - Change to d and move to 01:06:159 - to keep consistency with 00:54:826 (13,14,15) -
  13. 01:16:492 (56) - This note is interfering the finish 01:16:159 (55) - I suggest you change to d the note 56 and move to 01:16:826 -
  • [ Futsuu]

    OD: 3

  1. 00:38:659 (120) - Change to k to emphasize the finish K 00:38:826 (121) -
  2. 00:40:159 (125) - You forgot put a finish K.
  3. 00:42:826 (132,133) - ^
  4. 00:44:159 (136) - You forgot put a finish D.
  5. 00:48:826 (1) - Remove to put a break to the players can be attentive to the next patterns.
  6. 00:49:492 (2) - You can put a finish D and remove 00:49:826 (3) -
  7. 01:00:159 (38) - Put a finish K, the voice increases and the drum too.
  8. 01:11:159 (72) - Remove to flow the finish 01:10:826 (71) -
  9. 01:16:492 (90) - Change to d and move to 01:16:826 - sounds much better.
  • [ Muzukashii]

    HP: 4

  1. 00:40:159 (163,164) - You forgot put finishs K.
  2. 00:41:826 (169) - Remove this, because is causing interefence the finish K 00:41:492 (168,170) -
  3. 00:43:159 (175) - Remove and put finish this notes 00:42:826 (174,176) -
  4. 00:44:159 (179) - Put a finish D because you have this finish and all dificulties.
  5. 00:49:597 - If you want can put a finish D.
  • [ Oni]

    OD: 5

  1. This parts 00:24:992 (120,121,122,123) - sounds weird without a note here 00:25:159 - so add a d.
  2. 00:40:159 (204,206) - You forgot put finishs K.
  3. 00:42:826 (219,221) - ^
  4. 00:47:326 - Add a d and change to k 00:47:492 (241,242) - to better the density and sounds very good.
  5. 01:00:159 (312) - You forgot put a finish D.
  • [ Inner Oni]

  1. 00:49:242 (293) - Change to d, the stream sounds much better.



I hope my mod has been helpful you, Good luck!
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