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YURiKA - Shiny Ray

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Hazu-
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on sábado, 06 de octubre de 2018 at 18:37:57

Artist: YURiKA
Title: Shiny Ray
Source: リトルウィッチアカデミア
Tags: little witch academia tv opening HappyRocket88 Kyuukai Alphabet vick Venax
BPM: 183
Filesize: 14895kb
Play Time: 01:25
Difficulties Available:
  1. Alphabet's Insane (4,48 stars, 296 notes)
  2. Hard (3,24 stars, 262 notes)
  3. Kyuukai's Normal (2,11 stars, 165 notes)
  4. Magic (5,44 stars, 331 notes)
  5. Rocket's Easy (1,49 stars, 87 notes)
  6. vick's Insane (5,14 stars, 309 notes)
Download: YURiKA - Shiny Ray
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Redownload 08/27

  1. Easy - HappyRocket88
  2. Normal - Kyuukai
  3. Hard - Hazu-
  4. Insane - Alphabet
  5. Insane - vick
  6. Expert - Hazu-
Special thanks to Yogurtt and Cosmolade for help me with mp3~
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As we are using the same MP3, I'm just going to say that 147 offset works better than 133.
So you don't have to resnap all timing points at the end when fixing offset
Topic Starter
Hazu-

Gottagof4st wrote:

As we are using the same MP3, I'm just going to say that 147 offset works better than 133.
So you don't have to resnap all timing points at the end when fixing offset
Yeah, changed~ Thx :d
Shunao
NM from Q

  • Melon xd
  1. check aimod for DS
  2. 00:57:851 (1,4) - make a better stack
  3. 01:16:212 - add a circle and move your spinner on the blue tick behind circle, it's work better imo
  • Kyuukai's Normal
  1. 00:49:327 (3) - j'pense que ce cercle serait mieux à x:176 y:284 (n'oublie pas de décaler le cercle 4 après si tu fix ça)
  2. 00:52:606 (3) - nc?
  3. 01:01:458 (3,2) - ils devraient être similaires
  • Hard
    d
  • Alphabet's Insane
  1. 00:43:425 (1) - should be curved, would work better with 00:44:081 (2)
  2. 00:47:032 (4) - make it straight, like i said before ^
  3. 00:49:983 (1,2) - increase this blanket for a better circular flow https://puu.sh/xYIub/0a2ee0bf05.png
  • vick's Insane
  1. 00:02:769 (1,4) - a little close xd https://puu.sh/xYIyH/85bcaa91ae.png
  2. 00:49:327 (4,1) - try a blanket
  3. 01:19:819 (4,5) - increase spacing between these like you did 00:06:376 (4,1)
  • Magic ~
  1. 00:22:278 (1) - remove nc then add it to 00:22:606 (2) - it's more logic xd
  2. 00:31:294 (5,2,3,4) - umm i'm not very fan of this overlap, i think you can avoid it
  3. 00:38:015 (1) - remove nc and add one here 00:38:671 (3) - it's make more sense
  4. 01:10:310 (1) - remove nc
  5. 01:19:656 (4,2) - avoid little overlap like this lol
  6. 01:03:589 (4) - nc?
Nice mapset!

gl!~
Kyuukai
g toufix mrci
hihi
osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: Shiny Ray.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 54477
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 85870
DistanceSpacing: 1
BeatDivisor: 2
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 1.6

[Metadata]
Title:Shiny Ray
TitleUnicode:Shiny Ray
Artist:YURiKA
ArtistUnicode:YURiKA
Creator:Hazu-
Version:Kyuukai's Normal
Source:リトルウィッチアカデミア
Tags:little witch academia tv opening HappyRocket88 Kyuukai Alphabet vick
BeatmapID:1217534
BeatmapSetID:564204

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:3
CircleSize:3
OverallDifficulty:4
ApproachRate:5
SliderMultiplier:1
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"Shiny Ray.jpg",0,0
//Break Periods
2,39691,43537
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples

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[Colours]
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Combo2 : 255,121,121
Combo3 : 86,202,222
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466,286,81458,6,0,P|453:225|472:168,1,100,6|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
491,148,81950,2,0,P|504:87|485:30,1,100,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
454,23,82442,1,10,0:0:0:0:
408,44,82606,6,0,L|274:37,1,100,6|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
259,25,83097,2,0,L|159:30,1,100,10|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
109,36,83589,2,0,L|97:117,1,50,8|8,0:0|0:3,0:0:0:0:
93,135,83917,1,8,0:3:0:0:
87,184,84081,6,0,L|168:196,1,50,14|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
235,207,84573,2,0,L|316:219,1,50,14|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
302,313,85065,2,0,L|221:301,1,50,14|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
154,290,85557,2,0,L|73:278,2,50,14|10|14,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
Topic Starter
Hazu-

ShogunMoon wrote:

NM from Q

  • Hard
    x d
  • Magic ~
  1. 00:22:278 (1) - remove nc then add it to 00:22:606 (2) - it's more logic xd Fixed.
  2. 00:31:294 (5,2,3,4) - umm i'm not very fan of this overlap, i think you can avoid it Fixed.
  3. 00:38:015 (1) - remove nc and add one here 00:38:671 (3) - it's make more sense I prefer to have NC here because the downbeat.
  4. 01:10:310 (1) - remove nc Emphasizes drums' sound
  5. 01:19:656 (4,2) - avoid little overlap like this lol It can't be see while playing
  6. 01:03:589 (4) - nc? Isn't really necessary.
Nice mapset!

gl!~
Thanks~
Affirmation
Q

[Magic]
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9398763 file was crackes, could you reupload it?
00:08:671 - tbh this part doesn't have emphasis, so I suggest using just 1/1.
00:28:671 (5,1) - avoid overlap? can be better for visual.
00:52:606 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - totally you used this pattern at 1/2 jump., so this pattern can be read by 1/2 too, I suggest setting just antijump,
01:06:376 - I suggest clickable beat here, for emphasis vocal sounds,
01:21:950 (3,4,5) - stacking makes bad flow https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9398785, I suggest setting like 00:35:392 (5,6,1) -

GL
- Frontier -
q

[Melon's Easy]

  1. I wonder why you use Melon's Easy instead of Rocket's Easy?????
  2. 00:13:261 - What's the point in adding a break time here? This break part here is totally has the same rhythm density as 00:15:884 -, but why they are different? You might map the break part (starts from 00:14:409 - is also okay, since the following notes have been followed the guitar sound.) for consistency.
[Kyuukai's Normal]

  1. 00:11:950 - The point here has the same beat (if you hear closely) as 00:10:966 -, but why 00:10:966 - has a circle there while 00:11:950 - not. Consider making them the same, by adding a circle at 00:11:950 -, for consistency.
  2. Try to avoid long chains of hitobjects with 1/2 gaps in kiai part and after. Note density in normal should mostly use 1/1, for cohesion between Easy and Normal. In this case, Easy has used 1/1 gaps throughout the diff and Normal has mostly used 1/2 gaps in the diff. It appears that the difficulty gap become quite big. Consider reducing some hitobjects to add more 1/1 gaps.
[Hard]

  1. 00:09:655 (2,3) - These should be swapped imo, since the pitch at 00:09:983 - is much higher than the previous ones. Using a circle here could express more than just being a slider-tail
The map is pretty neat. GL~
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