Ray - Baby Lady LOVE · forum

Saileach

Joined November 2014

Topic Starter

Saileach 2017-01-22T21:47:10+00:00

This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Tuesday, 23 January 2018 at 10:20:51 PM

Artist: Ray
Title: Baby Lady LOVE
Source: ネコぱらOVA
Tags: Cat girl visual novel ova bakery Coconut Chocola Vanilla Cinnamon Azuki Maple Kashou Minaduki Shigure neko paradise nekopara Moonlit Fizz Ambient Rizen DakiniBrave
BPM: 177
Filesize: 24044kb
Play Time: 01:28
Difficulties Available:

Ambient's Hard (2.93 stars, 229 notes)
Collab Hyper (3.68 stars, 274 notes)
Fizz's Insane (4.29 stars, 336 notes)
Moonlit's Normal (1.98 stars, 134 notes)
Rizen's Patisserie (5.44 stars, 381 notes)
Insane (4.75 stars, 354 notes)

Download: Ray - Baby Lady LOVE
Download: Ray - Baby Lady LOVE (no video)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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NEW MP3 AS OF THE SEVENTH OF MARCH, REDOWNLOAD

Baby Lady Grave
Difficulties!

Moonlit's Normal mapped by Moonlit Bliss

Ambient's Hard mapped by Ambient

Collab Hyper mapped by Rizen and Myself

Fizz's Insane mapped by Fizz

Insane mapped by Me

Rizen's Patisserie mapped by Rizen

Hyper Collab, Rizen did odds, I did evens

Last edited by Saileach 2018-01-23T11:28:05+00:00, edited 87 times in total.

Mir

osu! Alumni

2,151 posts

Joined July 2016

Mir 2017-01-24T20:38:15+00:00

Hi! Returning M4M.~

[

General]

Inconsistent video values. Under [Events] in your highest diff you mention "video.avi," but in no other .osu is this mentioned. http://i.imgur.com/GvW3Gdf.png
As you saw above, the Hard diff has no set combo colors.

[]

[

Moonlit's Normal]

00:34:045 (1) - Dead neko. :c
00:38:791 (4) - This slider skips 00:38:621 - (if intentional I don't really agree with it because it's REALLY noticeable) and and ends on a relatively significant downbeat.
00:45:401 - Add a circle here?

I really, really like the theme of this difficulty. Well done.~

[

Ambient's Hard]

00:10:824 (4) - Not symmetrical.
00:20:316 (5) - Uh, hm. I mean I get it, but there's just so much rhythm being skipped here. You could try something like this: http://i.imgur.com/LzyjfVU.png
01:22:180 (2,3) - I assume you want these to be stacked maybe? Since you did it for the vocal at 01:11:333 (3,4) -

[

Fizz's Insane]

00:53:028 (1,2) - This stack looks kinda weird? Why not stack under the end?
01:06:757 (2,3) - This is a pretty big jump for something without so much intensity. I think this jump could be nerfed.

Rest seems fine. I don't really agree with the 1/2 circle+slider head stacks but that's done so consistently it isn't worth pointing out.

[

La Soleil]

00:12:858 - Why is this note silenced? It plays so weird without feedback, please make it audible.
00:16:757 (2) - I get it, but it could be two 1/2 to keep with the intensity of the song. This 1/1 feels underwhelming especially here.
00:39:299 (6,1,2,3) - Ouch flow. Nothing in the song to warrant such flow imo, angles could be sharper.
00:45:570 (3,4) - Maybe a 1/2 slider here instead for the longer note? It would represent this part slightly better in my opinion.
00:46:926 (4) - This skips all the 1/4 here. Why? This is an extra and this 1/4 is way more interesting to play.
00:49:469 (3,4) - I can hear a triple here, could map it.
00:52:604 - There's a note here too, either map this as a circle or 00:52:519 (6) - as a kickslider because atm it sounds weird to play 6/7 of the 1/4 here with that missing note smack at the end.
00:54:384 (1) - Could be two circles. In fact you could ctrl+g the rhythm of 00:54:384 (1,2,3) - entirely and it looks better imo.
00:56:418 (2,3,4) - This is weird spacing. You don't ever do this before and this doesn't really represent the music too well for an extra imo. Should just be normal jumps.
00:59:723 - Possible triple, it's really noticeable.
01:01:079 - ^
01:08:960 (9,10) - Should really be a 1/2 slider.. that 10 isn't really emphasizing anything.
01:10:316 (5,1) - Ctrl+G this rhythm would sound better even if you were following the drums, because the vocals are way more powerful here and not playing them for the effective downbeat here feels really weird.
01:26:248 (3) - This kickslider isn't emphasizing anything either. I recommend a normal circle here.
01:26:757 (6) - A finish here would be way better than a drum clap imo lol.

Add bookmarks to make the map neater. :^)

That's all, good luck.~

Ambient

579 posts

Joined August 2013

Ambient 2017-01-24T21:16:46+00:00

Mir wrote:
Hi! Returning M4M.~

[ Ambient's Hard]
00:10:824 (4) - Not symmetrical.
00:20:316 (5) - Uh, hm. I mean I get it, but there's just so much rhythm being skipped here. You could try something like this: http://i.imgur.com/LzyjfVU.png
01:22:180 (2,3) - I assume you want these to be stacked maybe? Since you did it for the vocal at 01:11:333 (3,4) -

That's all, good luck.~

Applied all including combo colours, thanks Mir!

Update

osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: audio.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 63706
Countdown: 1
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1.8
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 1

[Metadata]
Title:Baby->Lady LOVE
TitleUnicode:Baby→Lady LOVE
Artist:Ray
ArtistUnicode:Ray
Creator:- Rain -
Version:Ambient's Hard
Source:ネコぱらOVA
Tags:Cat girl visual novel ova bakery Coconut Chocola Vanilla Cinnamon Azuki Maple Kashou Minaduki Shigure neko paradise
BeatmapID:1188556
BeatmapSetID:562021

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:5.5
CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:6
ApproachRate:8
SliderMultiplier:0.999999999999999
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"fd942a366ec881f0d1c171e2a420e2e5163c0541.jpg",0,0
//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples

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Saileach

525 posts

Joined November 2014

Topic Starter

Saileach 2017-01-24T21:31:16+00:00

Mir wrote:
Hi! Returning M4M.~

[ General]
Inconsistent video values. Under [Events] in your highest diff you mention "video.avi," but in no other .osu is this mentioned. http://i.imgur.com/GvW3Gdf.png All diffs had video but hte .osu files they sent had no reference to it, all diffs have video
As you saw above, the Hard diff has no set combo colors. fixeddd

[ La Soleil]
00:12:858 - Why is this note silenced? It plays so weird without feedback, please make it audible. Done
00:16:757 (2) - I get it, but it could be two 1/2 to keep with the intensity of the song. This 1/1 feels underwhelming especially here. Done
00:39:299 (6,1,2,3) - Ouch flow. Nothing in the song to warrant such flow imo, angles could be sharper. done
00:45:570 (3,4) - Maybe a 1/2 slider here instead for the longer note? It would represent this part slightly better in my opinion. I prefer the single notes over the slider imo
00:46:926 (4) - This skips all the 1/4 here. Why? This is an extra and this 1/4 is way more interesting to play. Sure
00:49:469 (3,4) - I can hear a triple here, could map it. done
00:52:604 - There's a note here too, either map this as a circle or 00:52:519 (6) - as a kickslider because atm it sounds weird to play 6/7 of the 1/4 here with that missing note smack at the end. done
00:54:384 (1) - Could be two circles. In fact you could ctrl+g the rhythm of 00:54:384 (1,2,3) - entirely and it looks better imo. sure
00:56:418 (2,3,4) - This is weird spacing. You don't ever do this before and this doesn't really represent the music too well for an extra imo. Should just be normal jumps. done
00:59:723 - Possible triple, it's really noticeable. Done
01:01:079 - ^ Done
01:08:960 (9,10) - Should really be a 1/2 slider.. that 10 isn't really emphasizing anything. It was to keep the pacing of the kiai
01:10:316 (5,1) - Ctrl+G this rhythm would sound better even if you were following the drums, because the vocals are way more powerful here and not playing them for the effective downbeat here feels really weird. I was stuck here for a good 10 minutes trying to work out if i wanted to skip the downbeat and ended up deciding it was too strong to have as not a clickable object
01:26:248 (3) - This kickslider isn't emphasizing anything either. I recommend a normal circle here. sure
01:26:757 (6) - A finish here would be way better than a drum clap imo lol. Used to be a finish, now sure what happened lmao

Add bookmarks to make the map neater. :^) xd

That's all, good luck.~

Thanks

Moonlit

112 posts

Joined August 2013

Moonlit 2017-01-24T21:38:33+00:00

[

Moonlit's Normal]

00:34:045 (1) - Dead neko. :c Changed
00:38:791 (4) - This slider skips 00:38:621 - (if intentional I don't really agree with it because it's REALLY noticeable) and and ends on a relatively significant downbeat. Moved back half a beat and added circle on downbeat
00:45:401 - Add a circle here? done

I really, really like the theme of this difficulty. Well done.~

Fizz

275 posts

Joined September 2013

Fizz 2017-01-25T03:26:59+00:00

Mir wrote:
[ Fizz's Insane]
00:53:028 (1,2) - This stack looks kinda weird? Why not stack under the end? muh style, but fixed
01:06:757 (2,3) - This is a pretty big jump for something without so much intensity. I think this jump could be nerfed. fixed
Rest seems fine. I don't really agree with the 1/2 circle+slider head stacks but that's done so consistently it isn't worth pointing out.

That's all, good luck.~

update

osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: audio.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 63706
Countdown: 1
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1.4
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 32
TimelineZoom: 1.4

[Metadata]
Title:Baby->Lady LOVE
TitleUnicode:Baby→Lady LOVE
Artist:Ray
ArtistUnicode:Ray
Creator:- Rain -
Version:Fizz's Insane
Source:ネコぱらOVA
Tags:Cat girl visual novel ova bakery Coconut Chocola Vanilla Cinnamon Azuki Maple Kashou Minaduki Shigure neko paradise nekopara
BeatmapID:1188557
BeatmapSetID:562021

[Difficulty]
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CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:7
ApproachRate:9
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Hi M4M from my queue

[Moonlit's Normal]

00:18:113 (4) - This slider kinda doesn't fit in with all the curved sliders imo. Also Ctrl H Ctrl J Ctrl G and move it back to the original position for better flow
00:58:452 (3) - NC?

[Ambient's Hard]

00:17:774 (3,4) - 00:20:316 (5,6,1) - 00:21:333 (3,4,5) - These may be a problem because you stacked all 1/4 1/2 and 1/1 the same, it's confusing
00:47:604 (1) - 00:50:316 (1,2,3) - They're kinda the same so why not map it the same
01:17:943 (2,4) - Move these further apart maybe? I think it could look better

[Fizz's Insane]

00:01:502 (1,2) - 00:02:689 (1,2) - Wouldn't it be better if these were the same?
00:09:299 (4) - Ctrl H Ctrl j Ctrl G and move to original spot, it would look better
01:16:418 (2,3) - This doesn't flow as well as some of the other stuff in your map, it's at a too sharp angle with the next circle
01:24:892 (1) - Ctrl J?

[La Soleil]

00:04:723 (4,5) - The spacing from this may be confusing because it's almost the same as 1/2 spacing
00:11:333 (2,3,4,5,6) - 00:11:333 (2,3,4,5,6) - The spacing here may be confusing too because of the similar spacing of the both
00:13:367 (4,1) - I think you can move 4 to the left a bit, the jump doesn't have to be that big
00:33:367 (3,4) - Ctrl G?
00:59:808 (1) - Ctrl J

That's it for my mod, good luck!

Jensen

63 posts

Joined July 2014

Jensen 2017-01-26T04:37:10+00:00

La Soleil

General: OD 9.2 is a little questionable. I suggest lowering it a bit.

00:03:197 (3) - Strange to use this sort of slider when the vocals support two objects. Leaves a full blank beat after.

00:10:147 (2,3,4) - - could blanket here on the (1) beat for better flow, then adjusting the jumps after that to match the direction the flow is going in.

00:12:858 (2,3,4) - Like this pattern a lot.

00:13:536 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - The cursor movement required to hit these patterns are quite awkward. I don't have an alternative, but the flow is very sharp and difficult to hit comfortably. Not sure if intended, but thought it was worth mentioning.

00:22:519 (4) - Any reason for the curved slider here? Every slider in the early section is round besides this one and the early 1/4 slider, just feels visually awkward. It's understandable at 00:25:401 (4) because it correlates to a new note with the music, but the one at 22 feels a bit unfitting.

00:35:401 (1,2,3,4) - Like this a lot as well.

00:42:858 (3,4,5,6) - The perfect symmetry here doesn't really fit with the patterns you were previously using. In the patterns previously used in the map, such as at 00:08:452 (3,4,5,6), you have the (3),(4) and (5),(6) beats at two different angles. Having repeated patterns at the same angles here looks out of place with the theme. Maybe an alternative like this http://puu.sh/tAtMB.jpg?

00:45:570 (3) - May want to bring this slider down a little bit, jump to it is quite large and the follow jump is very short. Just seems uncomfortable to play.

01:12:011 (1,2,3,4) - Triangle is fine, but transitioning from it to the slider requires very awkward movement which could cause a lot of players to break. May want to either alter the triangle pattern, since the kick sliders are fine where they are.

Certainly not a bad difficulty, just a little awkward to play at some points. Overall, it's great!

A bit short on time atm, may mod other diffs.

Saileach

525 posts

Joined November 2014

Topic Starter

Saileach 2017-01-26T07:21:20+00:00

Jensen wrote:
La Soleil

General: OD 9.2 is a little questionable. I suggest lowering it a bit. I'll look into it in the future, might reduce to a flat 9 or maybe high 8.? range

00:03:197 (3) - Strange to use this sort of slider when the vocals support two objects. Leaves a full blank beat after. Changed to 2 circles

00:10:147 (2,3,4) - - could blanket here on the (1) beat for better flow, then adjusting the jumps after that to match the direction the flow is going in. [colo=orange]I used slider to change the flow while still being playable, i did however control g the 00:10:824 (1) - to flow a little better

00:12:858 (2,3,4) - Like this pattern a lot. Thanks!

00:13:536 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - The cursor movement required to hit these patterns are quite awkward. I don't have an alternative, but the flow is very sharp and difficult to hit comfortably. Not sure if intended, but thought it was worth mentioning. Yes, i experienced this while testplaying and have also yet to come up with a solution, i will try experimenting with maybe just a 5 note burst or 3 notes into a kick perhaps

00:22:519 (4) - Any reason for the curved slider here? Every slider in the early section is round besides this one and the early 1/4 slider, just feels visually awkward. It's understandable at 00:25:401 (4) because it correlates to a new note with the music, but the one at 22 feels a bit unfitting. This was a mistake on my part, thanks for pointing it out!

00:35:401 (1,2,3,4) - Like this a lot as well. Yeah it felt satisfying to play to me when i testplayed it, thanks!

00:42:858 (3,4,5,6) - The perfect symmetry here doesn't really fit with the patterns you were previously using. In the patterns previously used in the map, such as at 00:08:452 (3,4,5,6), you have the (3),(4) and (5),(6) beats at two different angles. Having repeated patterns at the same angles here looks out of place with the theme. Maybe an alternative like this http://puu.sh/tAtMB.jpg? Fixed, great suggestion

00:45:570 (3) - May want to bring this slider down a little bit, jump to it is quite large and the follow jump is very short. Just seems uncomfortable to play. Done

01:12:011 (1,2,3,4) - Triangle is fine, but transitioning from it to the slider requires very awkward movement which could cause a lot of players to break. May want to either alter the triangle pattern, since the kick sliders are fine where they are. Changed the triangle to a 1/2 slider with a single note after

Certainly not a bad difficulty, just a little awkward to play at some points. Overall, it's great! Thanks for the mod, really helped, great to have a more of a players view with the angling and how it feels!

A bit short on time atm, may mod other diffs.

Jensen

63 posts

Joined July 2014

Jensen 2017-01-26T07:37:33+00:00

- Rain - wrote:
Jensen wrote:
Certainly not a bad difficulty, just a little awkward to play at some points. Overall, it's great! Thanks for the mod, really helped, great to have a more of a players view with the angling and how it feels!

You're welcome! Fantastic set. Excited to play it when it's ranked

Moonlit

112 posts

Joined August 2013

Moonlit 2017-01-26T08:33:03+00:00

[Moonlit's Normal]

00:18:113 (4) - This slider kinda doesn't fit in with all the curved sliders imo. Also Ctrl H Ctrl J Ctrl G and move it back to the original position for better flow Changed pattern, made slider straight
00:58:452 (3) - NC? Fine

Saileach

525 posts

Joined November 2014

Topic Starter

Saileach 2017-01-26T08:34:03+00:00

_orange wrote:
Hi M4M from my queue

[La Soleil]

00:04:723 (4,5) - The spacing from this may be confusing because it's almost the same as 1/2 spacing There is a .4 difference in spacing change, since this is a 4.9 star diff im sure players should be able to work it out
00:11:333 (2,3,4,5,6) - The spacing here may be confusing too because of the similar spacing of the both Should be fine
00:13:367 (4,1) - I think you can move 4 to the left a bit, the jump doesn't have to be that big Emphasising the new sound
00:33:367 (3,4) - Ctrl G? Sure
00:59:808 (1) - Ctrl J Nah, i think its fine the way it is

That's it for my mod, good luck!

Thanks for the mod

_Meep_

1,707 posts

Joined April 2014

_Meep_ 2017-01-26T17:11:50+00:00

Im here since i love ray

dank mod by meep

last diff
before anything, pls make offset like 110 or 115,urs is too late.

00:02:689 (1) - ew xd I'd rather it be a 3/4 because there isn't a clear stop to her vocals.
00:03:499 - from here I'd like the rhythm to be this so that there isn't random pauses here and there,having a 1/1 pause right off the bat feels really really awkward. http://puu.sh/tBb51/0e46766eb0.jpg
00:04:686 (4) - this can be a 1/1 slider and it should replace 00:05:025 (5) - with its sliderend as it sounds/plays a lot better than many 1/1 pauses.
00:05:364 (1) - Same for this,make it a 3/4 slider as there is no clear stop to the vocals
00:06:211 (5) - Even if you're mapping to the vocals,it's a bit too far'fetched to ignore all the sounds in the background, you can clearly hear them and they could've been mapped as many things such as a reverse slider or a burst,either way,it's a bad idea to ignore these sounds.
00:07:398 (3,4) - I rather the notes be something like http://puu.sh/tBbse/cbf3651abf.jpg (taken from 00:07:228 - ) because your sliderends end on the bass/whateveritis and it doesn't sound nice at all,even if it follows the vocals,the bass/whateveritis overpowers the vocals by a lot,making it the prominent sound here.
00:09:093 (6,7) - (6) could be NCed because it's a different sound,up to you. (6) should be further away from 00:08:923 (5) - because its such a distinct sound. If you want an alternative way,possibly NC 00:08:923 (5) - and then space 00:08:923 (1,2,3) - more than how u did over 00:08:415 (2,3,4) - to emphasize the distinct clap sounds.
00:10:448 - From here I'd like the rhythm to be http://puu.sh/tBbNq/ad6154eb41.jpg because as it is now,the transition is quite weird to me and doesn't have much impact, this way,you can focus on both vocals and background sounds without utilizing 1/2 jumps inbetween 1/1 sliders.
00:11:635 (5) - NC pls so we know it changed into a 1/3\
00:12:313 - From here I'd like the rhythm to be http://puu.sh/tBc2Z/e58562ac3f.jpg because what you did over on 00:12:991 (3) - beforehand was having a vocal start on the sliderend,which is ewwwww
00:13:499 (1,2,3) - Wider angle possibly?
00:14:347 (4,5,6) - Quite big for 4.92 tbh
00:22:991 (5,2) - ew overlap
00:16:381 (1,2,5) - ew overlap
00:19:601 (3,4) - rip emphasis
00:24:686 - theres a sound here so I suggest u make 00:24:347 (1) - a 3/4
00:26:211 (2,3) - can u blanket properly XD http://puu.sh/tBcqg/6e34ffbf17.jpg
00:26:211 (2,3,1) - staph overlapping its ugly
00:29:262 (4,5,2) - you could've made a triangle
00:30:618 - beat here and the echo of 'egao' is literally ignored? idk but im triggereed
00:35:279 - fukin sound here make this sexy triple pls
00:36:211 (4) - doesn't need to be so close imo,its a 4.92* >_>
00:36:635 - sound here ;x
00:37:059 (3,4,5) - make ds equal pls it looks so messy xd
00:39:771 (3,4,5) - make a triangle with the sliderheads
00:44:177 (3,1) - By using the same slider shape,it lowers emphasis and makes this part feel repetitive even though there is a tune change on 00:44:855 - . I suggest you change slider shape.
00:46:889 (4) - NC,no reason for it to be the same part as 00:46:042 (1,2,3) -
00:55:703 - this part you could've spammed 1/2 sliders or jumps to keep the buildup fun,don't keep placing 1/1 pauses,especially in the buildup when unneccessarry, it takes away so much fun.
00:58:245 - 00:58:330 - sound
01:03:160 (4,5,6,7) - too hard for 4.92.
01:04:347 (3,4) - Same issue as the first part of the song, drum beats/whateveritis lands on sliderends = bad

same and repeating issues in kiai

Saileach

525 posts

Joined November 2014

Topic Starter

Saileach 2017-01-27T03:54:42+00:00

_Meep_ wrote:
Im here since i love ray
dank mod by meep
last diff
before anything, pls make offset like 110 or 115,urs is too late. I think it's your headphones, i spoke to about 4-5 different people and they say 130-150, not 110
00:02:689 (1) - ew xd I'd rather it be a 3/4 because there isn't a clear stop to her vocals. There may not be a clear stop to her vocals but there is a clear beat on the downbeat which isnt strong enough to be clickable but its enough to cause a stop for a slider.
00:03:499 - from here I'd like the rhythm to be this so that there isn't random pauses here and there,having a 1/1 pause right off the bat feels really really awkward. http://puu.sh/tBb51/0e46766eb0.jpg Added 2 1/4 notes and a kick to fill that string instrument sound so it doesnt feel so empty
00:04:686 (4) - this can be a 1/1 slider and it should replace 00:05:025 (5) - with its sliderend as it sounds/plays a lot better than many 1/1 pauses. It's now a 3/4 slider with a note at the end
00:05:364 (1) - Same for this,make it a 3/4 slider as there is no clear stop to the vocals It starts fading on the downbeat
00:06:211 (5) - Even if you're mapping to the vocals,it's a bit too far'fetched to ignore all the sounds in the background, you can clearly hear them and they could've been mapped as many things such as a reverse slider or a burst,either way,it's a bad idea to ignore these sounds. Prioritizing the Vocals was one of my main things, it plays fine how it is and feel off at least to me
00:07:398 (3,4) - I rather the notes be something like http://puu.sh/tBbse/cbf3651abf.jpg (taken from 00:07:228 - ) because your sliderends end on the bass/whateveritis and it doesn't sound nice at all,even if it follows the vocals,the bass/whateveritis overpowers the vocals by a lot,making it the prominent sound here. The main theme of this diff is following the vocals, if my theme was following the beat/drums more then sure
00:09:093 (6,7) - (6) could be NCed because it's a different sound,up to you. (6) should be further away from 00:08:923 (5) - because its such a distinct sound. If you want an alternative way,possibly NC 00:08:923 (5) - and then space 00:08:923 (1,2,3) - more than how u did over 00:08:415 (2,3,4) - to emphasize the distinct clap sounds. Changed spacing, no new combos
00:10:448 - From here I'd like the rhythm to be http://puu.sh/tBbNq/ad6154eb41.jpg because as it is now,the transition is quite weird to me and doesn't have much impact, this way,you can focus on both vocals and background sounds without utilizing 1/2 jumps inbetween 1/1 sliders. The vocal very clearly ends on the white tick
00:11:635 (5) - NC pls so we know it changed into a 1/3 That isnt a 1/3, thats a 3/4 but fine
00:12:313 - From here I'd like the rhythm to be http://puu.sh/tBc2Z/e58562ac3f.jpg because what you did over on 00:12:991 (3) - beforehand was having a vocal start on the sliderend,which is ewwwww Made 2 notes not a slider
00:13:499 (1,2,3) - Wider angle possibly? Fine
00:14:347 (4,5,6) - Quite big for 4.92 tbh I don't decide the star rating
00:22:991 (5,2) - ew overlap Deal with it
00:16:381 (1,2,5) - ew overlap ???????????????????????
00:19:601 (3,4) - rip emphasis added more spacing
00:24:686 - theres a sound here so I suggest u make 00:24:347 (1) - a 3/4 There isnt
00:26:211 (2,3) - can u blanket properly XD http://puu.sh/tBcqg/6e34ffbf17.jpg Done
00:26:211 (2,3,1) - staph overlapping its ugly It's fine
00:29:262 (4,5,2) - you could've made a triangle It's fine
00:30:618 - beat here and the echo of 'egao' is literally ignored? idk but im triggereed But the slider after empshasises it
00:35:279 - fukin sound here make this sexy triple pls ok
00:36:211 (4) - doesn't need to be so close imo,its a 4.92* >_> I like it like that
00:36:635 - sound here ;x
00:37:059 (3,4,5) - make ds equal pls it looks so messy xd Fine
00:39:771 (3,4,5) - make a triangle with the sliderheads Fine
00:44:177 (3,1) - By using the same slider shape,it lowers emphasis and makes this part feel repetitive even though there is a tune change on 00:44:855 - . I suggest you change slider shape. its not a pointy slider
00:46:889 (4) - NC,no reason for it to be the same part as 00:46:042 (1,2,3) -
00:55:703 - this part you could've spammed 1/2 sliders or jumps to keep the buildup fun,don't keep placing 1/1 pauses,especially in the buildup when unneccessarry, it takes away so much fun. Fine
00:58:245 - 00:58:330 - sound
01:03:160 (4,5,6,7) - too hard for 4.92. If it was up to me it would be 5 stars, i cant control the sr
01:04:347 (3,4) - Same issue as the first part of the song, drum beats/whateveritis lands on sliderends = bad Here is the chat log if you dont believe me (this was before i changed it and it was on the drums)[/url'>

same and repeating issues in kiai

Fizz

275 posts

Joined September 2013

Fizz 2017-01-27T05:37:48+00:00

_orange wrote:
[Fizz's Insane]

00:01:502 (1,2) - 00:02:689 (1,2) - Wouldn't it be better if these were the same? i think i did what you suggested
00:09:299 (4) - Ctrl H Ctrl j Ctrl G and move to original spot, it would look better nah
01:16:418 (2,3) - This doesn't flow as well as some of the other stuff in your map, it's at a too sharp angle with the next circle i don't seem to feel the awkwardness
01:24:892 (1) - Ctrl J? nah, don't see why

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HML

343 posts

Joined June 2013

HML 2017-01-27T09:17:43+00:00

Fizz

(really fun DT map. Only if I wasn't so bad at 10.3)
00:01:502 (1,2) - Move down so it doesn't overlap with 00:02:689 (1) - in the editor? It get's me a bit kooky seeing that.
00:11:672 (1) - Maybe a different slidershape? I think it looks better with the red anchors further apart.
00:12:350 (1) - Move this NC to 00:12:858 (2) - so the player can read the 1/2 to 1/4 gap easier, and for the patterns to be their own combos?
00:35:909 (1,2) - ^
00:47:604 (1,2,3) - I think this pattern needs to be emphasized more, maybe up the spacing a bit?
00:50:316 (1,2,3) - ^ Ditto
01:14:045 (4) - Just a personal rule of mine, but I'd NC the stream to help it stand out more, and make it it's own thing.

La Soleil

00:03:536 (4) - NC to help the player read the 1/2 to 1/4 gap better. It also looks cleaner.
00:11:333 (2,3,4,1) - Reduce spacing here so the player doesn't confuse 00:11:672 (1,2,3) - with 1/2 (the spacing looks very similar)
00:25:401 (4) - NC because looks better and helps with gap reading
00:52:180 (2) - NC ^
01:08:621 (5) - NC because streams should be their own thingy
01:14:045 (4) - ^ Same dealio

Good luck hun

Fizz

275 posts

Joined September 2013

Fizz 2017-01-27T13:03:59+00:00

HML wrote:
Fizz
(really fun DT map. Only if I wasn't so bad at 10.3)
00:01:502 (1,2) - Move down so it doesn't overlap with 00:02:689 (1) - in the editor? It get's me a bit kooky seeing that. nothing wrong with it owo
00:11:672 (1) - Maybe a different slidershape? I think it looks better with the red anchors further apart. nah
00:12:350 (1) - Move this NC to 00:12:858 (2) - so the player can read the 1/2 to 1/4 gap easier, and for the patterns to be their own combos? im unsure on what 1/2 to 1/4 gap you're talking about, but you gotta respect the downbeat when comboing; 00:12:350 (1,2,3,4,5) - is its own pattern
00:35:909 (1,2) - ^ same thing
00:47:604 (1,2,3) - I think this pattern needs to be emphasized more, maybe up the spacing a bit? difficulty reasons
00:50:316 (1,2,3) - ^ Ditto difficulty reasons
01:14:045 (4) - Just a personal rule of mine, but I'd NC the stream to help it stand out more, and make it it's own thing. sure

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Saileach

525 posts

Joined November 2014

Topic Starter

Saileach 2017-01-27T22:52:39+00:00

HML wrote:
La Soleil
00:03:536 (4) - NC to help the player read the 1/2 to 1/4 gap better. It also looks cleaner. I have the spacing the same every time there is a 1/4 section which should help the player read it, nc'ing it would most likely just be overkill in my opinon
00:11:333 (2,3,4,1) - Reduce spacing here so the player doesn't confuse 00:11:672 (1,2,3) - with 1/2 (the spacing looks very similar) It is currently new combod to indicate there is some sort of change
00:25:401 (4) - NC because looks better and helps with gap reading Sure
00:52:180 (2) - NC ^ Sure
01:08:621 (5) - NC because streams should be their own thingy Sure
01:14:045 (4) - ^ Same dealio Sure
Good luck hun

Ambient

579 posts

Joined August 2013

Ambient 2017-01-29T08:55:51+00:00

_orange wrote:
[Ambient's Hard]

00:17:774 (3,4) - 00:20:316 (5,6,1) - 00:21:333 (3,4,5) - These may be a problem because you stacked all 1/4 1/2 and 1/1 the same, it's confusing - Fixed!
00:47:604 (1) - 00:50:316 (1,2,3) - They're kinda the same so why not map it the same - Variation
01:17:943 (2,4) - Move these further apart maybe? I think it could look better - Fixed!

Thanks _orange!

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Moonlit

112 posts

Joined August 2013

Moonlit 2017-01-29T10:24:42+00:00

Update: http://puu.sh/tD81p/a54752ebdc.osu

Shad0w1and

1,588 posts

Joined April 2011

Shad0w1and 2017-01-30T01:53:06+00:00

did this for fun. dunno if you want it.
http://puu.sh/tG7rm/094998c284.flv

Korey

141 posts

Joined August 2013

Korey 2017-02-02T14:50:51+00:00

rizen's

http://puu.sh/tL87V/b1b349340c.osr playtest

00:05:401 (7) - nc
00:12:350 (1) - changed to 3/4 so 00:12:689 - is clickable since it feels weird to give it less emphasis then 00:12:858 (2,3,4,5) -
00:13:028 (3) - i also dont see why 3 is emphasised when i see it as arguably weaker then the rest. 00:13:028 (3,4,5) - also these linear circles are used later for 00:15:740 (3,4,5) - 00:18:452 (3,4,5) - when they sound distinctly different to me.
00:21:163 (3,4,5,1) - also on the topic of those linear circles this pattern should be different then 00:15:740 (3,4,5,1) - they shouldnt repeat till 00:21:163 (3,4,5) - those are the only two occurences of the rhythm.
00:28:282 (5) - 00:30:994 (5,6) - 00:39:130 (5,6) - 00:41:842 (5,6) - consistency, don't see why the first instance should be different other than to emphasize the bell or whatever on 00:30:994 (5) - if so 00:39:130 (5) - 00:41:842 (5) - should be a 1/2 slider
00:35:062 (5,6) - maybe stack for emphais since they have the same spacing as 00:34:553 (2,3) -
00:45:740 (4) - delete this
00:54:384 (1) - stack not emphasising anything particular and feels random
01:02:180 (2) - i suggest you change this slider as it causes unnecessary reading issues
01:11:672 - 1/2 slider here to emphasize the downbeat 01:12:011 (1) - because at the moment the downbeat has little contrast with the previous circles. or emphasize them better with spacing.

Ambient

579 posts

Joined August 2013

Ambient 2017-02-03T00:22:33+00:00

IRC with Rizen

the goods

10:41 Rizen: ambienttttt
10:41 Rizen: i was wondering if u could help me testplay somethin pls
10:41 Ambient: of course deary
10:41 Rizen: i'm thinking if it has too many problems, imma drop it
10:42 Rizen: =w
10:42 Ambient: is it the ol nekopara
10:42 *Rizen is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1194294 Ray - Baby->Lady LOVE [Rizen's Neko]]
10:42 Ambient: yup
10:42 Rizen: ya
10:42 Ambient: god i actually hate this song now
10:42 Rizen: first extra in like 6-8 months
10:42 Rizen: same x.x
10:43 *Ambient is playing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1194294 Ray - Baby->Lady LOVE [Rizen's Neko]]
11:02 Rizen: finally
11:02 Ambient: ayyyy
11:04 Ambient: tbh i don't really like it, but then again i don't like most tv size extras
11:05 Ambient: the chorus is great
11:05 Ambient: you really captured the "extra" of a tv size
11:05 Ambient: like some parts just feel too random
11:06 Rizen: mmm
11:06 Rizen: any parts that stood out?
11:06 Ambient: 00:04:214 (1,2,3,4) - i reckon should be all spaced the same
11:06 Ambient: too early in the map for spacing like that
11:06 Ambient: 00:09:638 (1,2,3,4) - same here just feels too wonky
11:08 Ambient: 00:47:096 (4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3) - eeehhhhhhhh
11:09 Rizen: b-but there are 1/8 sounds there T_T
11:09 Ambient: might want to have 00:47:604 (1) - apart of the stream instead of away from it, so many people are going to sliderbreak and or miss
11:09 Rizen: perhaps I can decrease spacing there
11:09 Ambient: or im just bad
11:09 Ambient: nah the visuals are good
11:09 Ambient: just hard to hit
11:09 Rizen: ya, that's a good idea
11:10 Rizen: part of stream
11:10 Rizen: btw what do you think of 00:53:706 (3,4,1,2) - ?
11:10 Ambient: i liek
11:10 Rizen: specifically the stacking at 00:54:045 (4,1) -
11:11 Ambient: mmm
11:11 Ambient: you could maybe stack 00:54:384 (1) - onto 00:54:553 (2) -
11:11 Rizen: I wanted to give spacing emphasis to 00:54:553 (2) - tho
11:11 Ambient: 00:54:553 (2) - is perf
11:12 Ambient: woops
11:12 Ambient: 01:13:197 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,1) -
11:12 Ambient: ok you cooouuuulldddddd
11:12 Rizen: pp jumpss
11:12 Rizen: oh, moved 00:54:384 (1) - to somewhere like x:35 y:323
11:12 Ambient: stack 00:54:384 (1) - onto the end of 00:53:706 (3) - ?
11:13 Ambient: then have 00:54:553 (2) - move up and blanket the start of 00:53:706 (3) -
11:14 Ambient: http://puu.sh/tLN4a/32bb42941f.jpg
11:15 Rizen: oo that works too
11:16 Ambient: ayy
11:16 Ambient: and from then on i enjoy the rest
11:17 Rizen: not too many errors orrr
11:17 Ambient: nah the kiai time is gud
11:17 Ambient: nothing i can really be picky on
11:18 Rizen: ah ok
11:18 Ambient: hopefully bikini gets some more mods shortly, like there is so much leniency on mapping tv size extras
11:18 Ambient: so dont worry too muich about it
11:18 Rizen: this if my first ever extra GD so i'm a little worried about it ;-;
11:18 Ambient: you'll be fine hun
11:19 Rizen: thanks xoxo

Rizen

1,662 posts

Joined August 2013

Rizen 2017-02-03T00:57:37+00:00

IRC with Ambient (will get to others when I have time ;;)

the other goods

13:21 Ambient: can you judge my hard pls
13:21 Ambient: o master of easier diffs
13:23 Ambient: your first time extra my first time hard ~w~
13:23 Rizen: surree
13:24 Ambient: cheeeers
13:25 Rizen: o
13:25 Rizen: u mean
13:25 Rizen: the neko one
13:25 Ambient: yas
13:29 Rizen: 00:16:248 (5,1) - could space a bit more since the spacing is similar to how you normally space 1/2 beats
13:29 Ambient: o yup
13:30 Rizen: I kinda found 00:16:757 (1,2,3) - sorta underwhelming
13:31 Rizen: maybe make slider 2 two 1/2 sliders
13:32 Ambient: okie
13:33 Rizen: 00:21:333 (3) - perhaps take this out of the stack
13:33 Rizen: like [https://puu.sh/tLOl4/a700c84518.png this] or somethin
13:33 Rizen: I just find stacks kinda boring ;;
13:34 Ambient: i luv stacks
13:35 Ambient: made two 1/2 sliders instead
13:36 Rizen: where at, 00:21:333 (3,4) - ?
13:36 Ambient: ye
13:36 Rizen: circles will still be better for those piano sounds
13:36 Ambient: :<
13:36 Rizen: 00:34:045 (1) - nice but I find the slider head too close to 00:33:875 (4) - mmmmm
13:37 Rizen: what do you think of smth like [https://puu.sh/tLOzf/117fe7eedf.png this]
13:38 Ambient: yah i was stuck on that for a but
13:38 Ambient: bit*
13:38 Rizen: 00:45:570 (3) - 1/2 slider then circle will fit the music better imo
13:39 Rizen: 00:46:079 (4,5,6) - space out circle 5 more plsss
13:39 Rizen: too similar to 00:45:570 (3,4) - 
13:40 Ambient: gotcha
13:40 Rizen: 00:47:604 (1) - three circles like 00:50:316 (1,2,3) - maybe
13:40 Rizen: for consistency and will work better with drum hits
13:41 Ambient: donezo
13:45 Rizen: kiai is nice
13:45 Rizen: 01:26:418 (4,5,6) - any chance to not stack these? ;c
13:46 Ambient: NO >:(
13:46 Ambient: yas
13:47 Ambient: made it a slider and a note
13:48 Rizen: what about a 3 circle triangle
13:48 Rizen: https://puu.sh/tLPkN/9847e8d5b8.png
13:49 Ambient: ooo thats much better
13:51 Ambient: phew thanks man
13:52 Rizen: np bro

Ambient

579 posts

Joined August 2013

Ambient 2017-02-03T01:02:33+00:00

Cheers Rizen

some more goods

osu file format v14

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Version:Ambient's Vol. 1
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Lully

1,270 posts

Joined September 2013

Lully 2017-02-04T14:52:45+00:00

How about renaming Neko to "OVA"?
would make more sense imo

lit120

3,251 posts

Joined August 2013

lit120 2017-02-04T21:02:19+00:00

wwwwwwwww

[rizen chan kun]

00:18:960 (6) - nice job for not NCing this :^)
00:21:672 (1) - hey m8, just tellin' ya that u missed a tail whistle there, that's all
00:27:943 (4,5,1) - nice stack. fix it by manually pls xd
00:34:892 (4,1) - dat (4) is almost at the position of (1)'s anchor there. 00:34:892 (4) - is 1 x pixel away from (1)'s anchor xd
01:01:672 (1,2) - manual stack again

[rain]

try to use rizen's diff for hitsounds. it feels much better tbh .-.
00:01:502 - why no hitsound here? it feels so empty here tbh
00:13:536 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - missing hitsound + wrong use of hitsound
00:31:333 (1,2,3) - why (3) seems like having a low distance spacing since it's an emphasize beat here .-.
01:01:163 (1,2,3) - 3 1/1 slider vocal notes here huh... use triangle pattern instead, cuz it seems suitable to use it
01:06:418 (7) - aim it to 01:06:587 (1) - otherwise it'd be a "misleading" direction here
01:13:197 (6) - NC, 01:13:536 (1) - remove NC
01:15:231 (3) - this doesn't emphasize anything as a loud beat and it's a huge gap here

[ambient]

00:16:248 (5) - missing whistle tail
the use of DS on some parts are really weird, like 00:24:384 (3,1,2) - 00:50:316 (1,2,3,1) - etc
00:20:485 (1) - use finish since it's an emphasize beat
00:24:384 (3) - this slider doesn't look like neko for me .-.

hmm

Saileach

525 posts

Joined November 2014

Topic Starter

Saileach 2017-02-05T00:16:10+00:00

nyu - wrote:
How about renaming Neko to "OVA"?
would make more sense imo

Agreed

lit120 wrote:
wwwwwwwww

[rain]
try to use rizen's diff for hitsounds. it feels much better tbh .-.
00:01:502 - why no hitsound here? it feels so empty here tbh
00:13:536 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - missing hitsound + wrong use of hitsound
00:31:333 (1,2,3) - why (3) seems like having a low distance spacing since it's an emphasize beat here .-. Increased spacing
01:01:163 (1,2,3) - 3 1/1 slider vocal notes here huh... use triangle pattern instead, cuz it seems suitable to use it done
01:06:418 (7) - aim it to 01:06:587 (1) - otherwise it'd be a "misleading" direction here Thanks for the mod
01:13:197 (6) - NC, 01:13:536 (1) - remove NC done
01:15:231 (3) - this doesn't emphasize anything as a loud beat and it's a huge gap here Yeah that was unintentional, thanks
All hitsounding will be taken from rizen's

hmm This worries me

Ambient

579 posts

Joined August 2013

Ambient 2017-02-05T00:19:34+00:00

lit120 wrote:
[ambient]
00:16:248 (5) - missing whistle tail - - Fixed!
the use of DS on some parts are really weird, like 00:24:384 (3,1,2) - 00:50:316 (1,2,3,1) - etc - ah yup, Fixed!
00:20:485 (1) - use finish since it's an emphasize beat - Fixed!
00:24:384 (3) - this slider doesn't look like neko for me .-. - I hate neko girls ~w~, made it a little better

Thanks for the mod!

baby>toddler>child>teenager>lady

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Pentori

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Joined November 2015

Pentori 2017-02-21T06:59:12+00:00

henlo
[General]
can u try avoid brown combo colours? doesn't really seem like a kawaii colour

[Rizen]
hp 8 is ridiculous lol, definitely doesn't support your combo usage/rhythm density. try hp 7 or lower
there are a few missing nc's that you can probably find urself, stuff like 00:05:401 (7) - 00:13:536 (6) - etc
00:10:147 (4) - doesnt look that nice, should try centre the red node, or at least give the tail some length http://puu.sh/ucGPv/89d1357625.jpg
00:11:672 (1,2,3) - these jumps feel like they come out of no where, since everything else has justified placement. 2.0x ds feels more appropriate. also while ur at it u should make the triangle look even
00:20:147 (10) - doesnt stand out as much as is does in the music, try using a lot more spacing?
00:34:892 (4,5,6,1) - these angles play really awkwardly since everything previously was sharp
00:35:316 - 00:36:672 - triplets here?
00:35:401 (1,3) - these seem really undermapped lol, stuff like 00:35:570 - 00:36:418 - can be mapped. i get that u want to emphasise the vocals, but this can be done with circles too with appropriate spacing
00:38:452 (2,3,4) - gross angle ;w; especially because its highly spaced
00:44:892 (1,3) - why overlap now? normally u wouldve stacked this
00:45:401 (2) - whistle?
00:45:571 (3,4) - could make this a 1/2 slider instead, since 3 is a lot stronger than 4
00:46:418 (1,2,3) - should have a finishes as well, its the same as 00:46:079 (6)
00:46:587 - clap for snare
00:47:096 (4) - sounds like the stream starts at 00:46:926 (3) - instead
00:47:519 (9,1) - dont think ppl will be able to read this. i had no idea what was going on here until i opened editor
00:56:757 (7,8) - 00:58:113 (7,8) - making these sliders is a good idea to show that it's different to the other jumps
00:59:808 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - instrumentally, this is no different from 00:58:452 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - yet in the second instance you put unnecessary jumps 01:00:147 (2,3,4) - to fill time

also u should use the triplet at 01:01:079 - for consistency
01:02:180 (2) - should nc this too?
01:20:146 (1) - spacing is pretty underwhelming for a downbeat

[Rain]
od 8 pls
cant u just use "Vol. 3" as a diff name. looks like you're gding ur own map
00:01:502 - would be a lot nicer if you used s:c2 for the beginning so ur whistles dont sound like kick drums
00:05:740 (2,3,4) - the intensity of the first section doesnt feel right, u have big jumps like this for a quieter part, yet later on u dont even use this much spacing 00:15:740 (3,4,5,6) - 00:17:096 (3,4,5,6) . try to make the beginning a little easier so the player can feel a difference between sections
00:04:723 (4,5) - 00:08:113 (1,2) - dont think u should use extended sliders when u aren't specifically emphasising anything out of these
00:07:774 (4) - using 2 circles would be more appropriate to address the snare on 00:07:943
00:10:485 (3,4,1) - such random jumps.. i dont think u need so much spacing for 00:10:655 (4) - since 00:10:824 (1) - is the strongest here
00:13:028 (3,4) - doesnt look that nice
00:16:757 (2,3,4) - flow is pretty uncomfortable, use something sharper
00:20:147 - such a strong sound, should try make it clickable
00:23:536 (2,3,4,5) - try give some angle to this, the almost vertical angle looks so robotic
00:25:401 (1) - an sv change would work nicely here
00:25:909 (1,2) - these sliders aren't the same?
00:30:994 (5,1,2) - doesnt flow very well, since 5 implies anti-clockwise motion, could try placing 2 around 490|55
00:31:333 (1,2,3,4,5) - 00:33:197 (2,3,4) - 00:34:553 (2,3,4,5,6) - spacing feels a little too inconsistent. compare these for example and u'll notice visually that the distances drastically change for each pattern
00:35:740 (2,3) - dont think it's a good place to stack when the music is intense
00:36:248 (4) - skipping the strong snare 00:36:418 - creates a weird rhythm. id just use circles on the 1/2 here
00:36:757 - sv is suddenly less than 00:25:909 - ? i cant hear much of a difference between these sections
00:37:096 (3,4,5) - visually consistent spacing pls. 00:37:435 (4,5) - look much closer than 00:37:096 (3,4)
00:46:079 (1,2) - why not make these 1/2 sliders instead? to avoid skipping the snare on 00:46:587
00:46:418 (2,3,4) - finishes
00:49:299 - 00:52:011 - shouldnt skip snares
00:54:384 (1,2,3) - you should probably avoid the overlaps with 00:54:384 (1,3) - since it's a different pattern to 00:53:706 (3,4,1) . also it would be nicer if u made 00:54:384 (1,2) - bigger than 00:54:553 (2,3) - for emphasis on clap
00:55:062 (4) - why use a single slider to represent so many different sounds? 00:55:062 - 00:55:231 - are pretty strong so u should space those
00:56:418 (3,4) - should prob rethink this, since 3 is stronger than 4
00:57:435 (2) - u put so much emphasis into 00:56:757 (5) - yet here u have the clap on the slider's end 00:58:113 -

01:06:248 (5,6,7) - dont think u need the whistles
01:12:011 (1,2) - such weak spacing
01:12:519 (3,4) - doesnt work at all with the triplet. this kinda pattern works for 2 dominant sounds or a drum roll, but in the music there's only a triplet on 01:12:519
01:13:452 - why whistle on slider end? if anything this should be silenced with a green line
01:17:265 (7) - can u point the kick slider in the general direction of the next beats? right now implied flow is all over the place
01:21:841 (3,4) - music hasn't really changed intensity, yet the density suddenly becomes really low :/
01:21:841 (3) - extended slider seems pretty inconsistent, 1/2 would be better like u did at 01:10:994 (3,4)
01:24:892 (5,6,7) - u should just use circles on the 3/4, to be consistent with 00:11:672 (1,2,3)
01:26:079 (2,3) - pls, u cant just use a kick slider and treat is as a circle

enjoy ur trump wall

Saileach

525 posts

Joined November 2014

Topic Starter

Saileach 2017-02-21T07:29:40+00:00

Pentori wrote:
henlo
[General]
can u try avoid brown combo colours? doesn't really seem like a kawaii colour

[Rain]
od 8 pls
cant u just use "Vol. 3" as a diff name. looks like you're gding ur own map Fine
00:01:502 - would be a lot nicer if you used s:c2 for the beginning so ur whistles dont sound like kick drums Rizen was in charge of hitsounding i think
00:05:740 (2,3,4) - the intensity of the first section doesnt feel right, u have big jumps like this for a quieter part, yet later on u dont even use this much spacing 00:15:740 (3,4,5,6) - 00:17:096 (3,4,5,6) . try to make the beginning a little easier so the player can feel a difference between sections ok
00:04:723 (4,5) - 00:08:113 (1,2) - dont think u should use extended sliders when u aren't specifically emphasising anything out of these I agree with the first one but the 2nd one is emphasising that ding sound
00:07:774 (4) - using 2 circles would be more appropriate to address the snare on 00:07:943 Sure
00:10:485 (3,4,1) - such random jumps.. i dont think u need so much spacing for 00:10:655 (4) - since 00:10:824 (1) - is the strongest here
00:13:028 (3,4) - doesnt look that nice
00:16:757 (2,3,4) - flow is pretty uncomfortable, use something sharper
00:20:147 - such a strong sound, should try make it clickable
00:23:536 (2,3,4,5) - try give some angle to this, the almost vertical angle looks so robotic
00:25:401 (1) - an sv change would work nicely here
00:25:909 (1,2) - these sliders aren't the same?
00:30:994 (5,1,2) - doesnt flow very well, since 5 implies anti-clockwise motion, could try placing 2 around 490|55
00:31:333 (1,2,3,4,5) - 00:33:197 (2,3,4) - 00:34:553 (2,3,4,5,6) - spacing feels a little too inconsistent. compare these for example and u'll notice visually that the distances drastically change for each pattern
00:35:740 (2,3) - dont think it's a good place to stack when the music is intense
00:36:248 (4) - skipping the strong snare 00:36:418 - creates a weird rhythm. id just use circles on the 1/2 here
00:36:757 - sv is suddenly less than 00:25:909 - ? i cant hear much of a difference between these sections
00:37:096 (3,4,5) - visually consistent spacing pls. 00:37:435 (4,5) - look much closer than 00:37:096 (3,4)
00:46:079 (1,2) - why not make these 1/2 sliders instead? to avoid skipping the snare on 00:46:587
00:46:418 (2,3,4) - finishes
00:49:299 - 00:52:011 - shouldnt skip snares
00:54:384 (1,2,3) - you should probably avoid the overlaps with 00:54:384 (1,3) - since it's a different pattern to 00:53:706 (3,4,1) . also it would be nicer if u made 00:54:384 (1,2) - bigger than 00:54:553 (2,3) - for emphasis on clap
00:55:062 (4) - why use a single slider to represent so many different sounds? 00:55:062 - 00:55:231 - are pretty strong so u should space those
00:56:418 (3,4) - should prob rethink this, since 3 is stronger than 4
00:57:435 (2) - u put so much emphasis into 00:56:757 (5) - yet here u have the clap on the slider's end 00:58:113 -
01:06:248 (5,6,7) - dont think u need the whistles
01:12:011 (1,2) - such weak spacing
01:12:519 (3,4) - doesnt work at all with the triplet. this kinda pattern works for 2 dominant sounds or a drum roll, but in the music there's only a triplet on 01:12:519
01:13:452 - why whistle on slider end? if anything this should be silenced with a green line
01:17:265 (7) - can u point the kick slider in the general direction of the next beats? right now implied flow is all over the place
01:21:841 (3,4) - music hasn't really changed intensity, yet the density suddenly becomes really low :/
01:21:841 (3) - extended slider seems pretty inconsistent, 1/2 would be better like u did at 01:10:994 (3,4)
01:24:892 (5,6,7) - u should just use circles on the 3/4, to be consistent with 00:11:672 (1,2,3)
01:26:079 (2,3) - pls, u cant just use a kick slider and treat is as a circle

enjoy ur trump wall We're gonna build a wall and the nominators will pay for it

Yeah so like
im remapping my shitty diff, Sorry for the time wasted ;-;

Fizz

275 posts

Joined September 2013

Fizz 2017-03-06T13:11:41+00:00

Rizen

1,662 posts

Joined August 2013

Rizen 2017-03-23T15:47:14+00:00

srry for delayyy

ikorza wrote:
rizen's

http://puu.sh/tL87V/b1b349340c.osr playtest

00:05:401 (7) - nc fixed
00:12:350 (1) - changed to 3/4 so 00:12:689 - is clickable since it feels weird to give it less emphasis then 00:12:858 (2,3,4,5) - reworked that part ;w;
00:13:028 (3) - i also dont see why 3 is emphasised when i see it as arguably weaker then the rest. 00:13:028 (3,4,5) - also these linear circles are used later for 00:15:740 (3,4,5) - 00:18:452 (3,4,5) - when they sound distinctly different to me. the 3 is emphasised since the pitch of that instrument is going from low to high. Also I removed all linear patterns in rework
00:21:163 (3,4,5,1) - also on the topic of those linear circles this pattern should be different then 00:15:740 (3,4,5,1) - they shouldnt repeat till 00:21:163 (3,4,5) - those are the only two occurences of the rhythm. no more linear circles because of rework aaa
00:28:282 (5) - 00:30:994 (5,6) - 00:39:130 (5,6) - 00:41:842 (5,6) - consistency, don't see why the first instance should be different other than to emphasize the bell or whatever on 00:30:994 (5) - if so 00:39:130 (5) - 00:41:842 (5) - should be a 1/2 slider the first one is a slider because it didn't have the echo vocals as opposed to the other times you have listed, hence the slider
00:35:062 (5,6) - maybe stack for emphais since they have the same spacing as 00:34:553 (2,3) - reworked that pattern
00:45:740 (4) - delete this but there's a sound at that tick, hence the circle and reduced spacing ?.?
00:54:384 (1) - stack not emphasising anything particular and feels random fixed this previously with amb
01:02:180 (2) - i suggest you change this slider as it causes unnecessary reading issues personally I like it as it adds flavour to the difficulty
01:11:672 - 1/2 slider here to emphasize the downbeat 01:12:011 (1) - because at the moment the downbeat has little contrast with the previous circles. or emphasize them better with spacing. spaced more

lit120 wrote:
wwwwwwwww

[rizen chan kun]
00:18:960 (6) - nice job for not NCing this :^) nc'd the object just before this one
00:21:672 (1) - hey m8, just tellin' ya that u missed a tail whistle there, that's all i'll wait for rain because he's in charge of hitsounds ;w;
00:27:943 (4,5,1) - nice stack. fix it by manually pls xd reworked so no longer valid
00:34:892 (4,1) - dat (4) is almost at the position of (1)'s anchor there. 00:34:892 (4) - is 1 x pixel away from (1)'s anchor xd reworked,
no longer valid
01:01:672 (1,2) - manual stack again reworkedd, no longer valid

Pentori wrote:
henlo

[Rizen]
hp 8 is ridiculous lol, definitely doesn't support your combo usage/rhythm density. try hp 7 or lower 6
there are a few missing nc's that you can probably find urself, stuff like 00:05:401 (7) - 00:13:536 (6) - etc fixxed
00:10:147 (4) - doesnt look that nice, should try centre the red node, or at least give the tail some length http://puu.sh/ucGPv/89d1357625.jpg done
00:11:672 (1,2,3) - these jumps feel like they come out of no where, since everything else has justified placement. 2.0x ds feels more appropriate. also while ur at it u should make the triangle look even I gave more emphasis to circle 3 since that instrument thing in the background is going from a low note to high note
00:20:147 (10) - doesnt stand out as much as is does in the music, try using a lot more spacing? s p a c e d more
00:34:892 (4,5,6,1) - these angles play really awkwardly since everything previously was sharp reworked, no longer valid
00:35:316 - 00:36:672 - triplets here? fixed
00:35:401 (1,3) - these seem really undermapped lol, stuff like 00:35:570 - 00:36:418 - can be mapped. i get that u want to emphasise the vocals, but this can be done with circles too with appropriate spacing ok, changed to circles
00:38:452 (2,3,4) - gross angle ;w; especially because its highly spaced new patternn
00:44:892 (1,3) - why overlap now? normally u wouldve stacked this reworked that part
00:45:401 (2) - whistle? dun
00:45:571 (3,4) - could make this a 1/2 slider instead, since 3 is a lot stronger than 4 kinda still want the circle for those other instruments in the music ;( I did reduce spacing though
00:46:418 (1,2,3) - should have a finishes as well, its the same as 00:46:079 (6)
00:46:587 - clap for snare removed circle in rework
00:47:096 (4) - sounds like the stream starts at 00:46:926 (3) - instead fixedd
00:47:519 (9,1) - dont think ppl will be able to read this. i had no idea what was going on here until i opened editor made a part of stream
00:56:757 (7,8) - 00:58:113 (7,8) - making these sliders is a good idea to show that it's different to the other jumps done
00:59:808 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - instrumentally, this is no different from 00:58:452 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - yet in the second instance you put unnecessary jumps 01:00:147 (2,3,4) - to fill time also u should use the triplet at 01:01:079 - for consistency changed rhythm so jumps not there. Also placed triplet as stated
01:02:180 (2) - should nc this too? yipp
01:20:146 (1) - spacing is pretty underwhelming for a downbeat fixed with rework

thanks for the mods!

boop (reworked A LOT)

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