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MrDorian
Hi Mage owo/
Kaosu
first of all that name hurst my nazi-grammar soul change kds plsyour diff has a lof of one sided flow (from 00:17:636 (17636|5) - to 00:20:363 (20363|0) - for instance or 00:23:272 - this kiai, it's mostly right left with some little changes sometimes), I don't know if it was your intention or not, but I'm pointing it out

00:31:272 (31272|2,31272|4,31363|1,31363|3,31454|2,31454|0) - flip it to balance it with 00:27:090 (27090|2,27090|4,27181|3,27181|1,27272|0,27272|2) - or sth

00:50:666 (50666|2,50787|3) - ctrl+j for pitch perhaps? .w.

00:51:818 (51818|3,51818|5,52000|0,52000|2) - they are the same sounds, what about making 16 16? owo

01:04:181 (64181|1,64363|3,64545|2) - why they and similiar lns later aren't in the same column? ;w; it would give so nice effect
Topic Starter
Meiju

MrDorian wrote:

Hi Mage owo/
Kaosu
first of all that name hurst my nazi-grammar soul change kds plsyour diff has a lof of one sided flow (from 00:17:636 (17636|5) - to 00:20:363 (20363|0) - for instance fixed here or 00:23:272 - this kiai, it's mostly right left with some little changes sometimes), I don't know if it was your intention or not, but I'm pointing it out

00:31:272 (31272|2,31272|4,31363|1,31363|3,31454|2,31454|0) - flip it to balance it with 00:27:090 (27090|2,27090|4,27181|3,27181|1,27272|0,27272|2) - or sth Ok

00:50:666 (50666|2,50787|3) - ctrl+j for pitch perhaps? .w. No..?

00:51:818 (51818|3,51818|5,52000|0,52000|2) - they are the same sounds, what about making 16 16? owo Cool owo

01:04:181 (64181|1,64363|3,64545|2) - why they and similiar lns later aren't in the same column? ;w; it would give so nice effect Hmm.. idk, maybe i'll change ir later uwu
Thanks!
DustMoon
Hi~ Mage
1|2|3|4|5|6
semyon422's Normal
00:10:727 (10727|0) - move to 5,follow pitch
00:30:181 (30181|0) - move to 3
00:44:606 (44606|1,44848|1) - wrong snap?
00:39:272 - 00:50:909 - 1/3 or 1/6
01:09:818 (69818|4) - move to 2&01:10:363 (70363|0) - move to 6
01:23:090 (83090|4,83272|3,83454|4,83636|2,83818|4,84000|1,84181|4) - Anouch?
01:26:272 - 01:27:272 - 1/6
Myle's Hard
00:17:454 (17454|2) - move to 2
00:33:818 (33818|4,33909|2,34000|0) - 00:34:090 (34090|4,34181|2,34272|0) - same? re,plz
00:45:454 (45454|5) - emmmm,highest diff{Kaoso}not catch thishttps://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8594342
00:50:424 (50424|2,50424|3,50545|1,50666|5,50666|0,50787|4) - Ctrl+h,follow pitch
i hope you can ask QAT about this mapset snap.
Good luck! :)
Kurisu Makise
Hi! IRL mod :D

Kaosu
2017-08-21 23:16 Kivicat: есть парочка предложений
2017-08-21 23:16 Mage: Давай
2017-08-21 23:16 Kivicat: во-первых, очень много лесенок
2017-08-21 23:16 Mage: Ага
2017-08-21 23:16 Mage: Стоп
2017-08-21 23:16 Mage: Нет
2017-08-21 23:16 Mage: !
2017-08-21 23:16 Kivicat: тут можно и разнообразить
2017-08-21 23:16 Kivicat: нет?
2017-08-21 23:17 Mage: Ну а как разнообразить
2017-08-21 23:17 Kivicat: ну хотя бы на триплах сделать мини-триллы
2017-08-21 23:18 Kivicat: или что-нибудь менее мейнстримное типа 2-3-1
2017-08-21 23:18 Kivicat: или альтернейт
2017-08-21 23:18 Kivicat: 3-4-2, например, или 2-5-1
2017-08-21 23:18 Kivicat: в общем-то с триплами много чего сделать можно
2017-08-21 23:18 Kivicat: потом, тут есть очень хорошие места для св
2017-08-21 23:19 Mage: 00:39:272 - ты этот парт имеешь ввиду?
2017-08-21 23:19 Kivicat: это уже на твое усмотрение, но я их даже ожидал
2017-08-21 23:19 Kivicat: не-не
2017-08-21 23:19 Kivicat: 00:00:181 (181|0,272|1,363|2) - вот такие я имел в виду
2017-08-21 23:19 Kivicat: а в том парте можно сделать джеки
2017-08-21 23:19 Kivicat: по 3 ноты
2017-08-21 23:20 Kivicat: их как раз не так много выйдет, потому что ритм не постоянный
2017-08-21 23:21 Kivicat: 00:39:272 (39272|4,39393|3,39515|2) -
2017-08-21 23:21 Kivicat: 00:39:636 (39636|4,39757|3,39878|2) -
2017-08-21 23:21 Kivicat: 00:40:000 (40000|5,40121|4,40242|3) -
2017-08-21 23:21 Kivicat: 00:40:363 (40363|5,40484|4) - дабл
2017-08-21 23:21 Kivicat: 00:40:969 (40969|2,41090|1,41212|2) - джек или 2 дабла
2017-08-21 23:21 Kivicat: 00:42:181 (42181|4,42303|3,42424|2) - ну и отсюда по той же схеме
2017-08-21 23:22 Kivicat: и последнее
2017-08-21 23:22 Kivicat: 01:04:000 - начиная отсюда, очень сложно читать
2017-08-21 23:22 Mage: Ну почему, не сложно
2017-08-21 23:22 Kivicat: можно сделать менее хаотично
2017-08-21 23:23 Kivicat: ну не знаю, я прям сильно ощутил дифф спайк
2017-08-21 23:23 Kivicat: это, конечно, мое субъективное ощущение
2017-08-21 23:23 Kivicat: по этому поводу лучше спроси еще нескольких тестеров
2017-08-21 23:24 Mage: Чет я попробовал джеки и как-то больно
2017-08-21 23:24 Mage: 00:40:363 (40363|5) - не понял почему здесь дабл
2017-08-21 23:24 Kivicat: ну кстати, с джеками сложность ровнее
2017-08-21 23:24 Mage: 00:40:969 (40969|2,41090|1,41212|2) - и тут даблы
2017-08-21 23:24 Kivicat: если ты оставишь лны как есть
2017-08-21 23:26 Kivicat: в первом можно сделать и джек на 3 ноты, но там будет лучше дабл, потому что на третьей ноте больше воспринимается банджо (оно ли это?) и ударный
2017-08-21 23:27 Kivicat: то есть бас, под который делаются джеки, заглушается
2017-08-21 23:27 Kivicat: игрок не будет его чувствовать
2017-08-21 23:27 Mage: 00:39:272 (39272|4,39272|5,39636|4,39636|5,40000|4,40000|5,40363|4,40363|5,40727|4,40727|5) - да тут же одинаковые звуки везде D:
2017-08-21 23:27 Kivicat: он будет чувствовать, что на этом месте появился другой акцент, который ты никак не выделил, если сделаешь джек
2017-08-21 23:28 Kivicat: там да
2017-08-21 23:28 Kivicat: 00:40:606 (40606|0,40606|3) - а здесь другой
2017-08-21 23:28 Kivicat: джеки, кстати, я имел в виду в разных колонках
2017-08-21 23:28 Kivicat: по 3
2017-08-21 23:28 Mage: Да, я его и выделил даблом
2017-08-21 23:28 Kivicat: стоп
2017-08-21 23:29 Mage: Да, я понял, но это тоже жестко
2017-08-21 23:29 Kivicat: ты называешь даблом 2 ноты на линии?
2017-08-21 23:29 Mage: Да
2017-08-21 23:29 Mage: Так и есть лол
2017-08-21 23:29 Kivicat: 00:40:363 (40363|5,40484|4) - я имел в виду вот их в одну колонку
2017-08-21 23:29 Kivicat: мини-джек
2017-08-21 23:29 Kivicat: в мое время даблами называли мини-джеки
2017-08-21 23:29 Kivicat: 00:40:969 (40969|2,41090|1,41212|2) - и здесь то же самое
2017-08-21 23:31 Kivicat: 01:22:909 (82909|5,83090|4,83090|5) - вот это, кстати, немного неудобно
2017-08-21 23:31 Kivicat: ты специально так сделал7
2017-08-21 23:32 Mage: Да специально
2017-08-21 23:32 Mage: Но ладно, поправил
2017-08-21 23:33 Kivicat: ну, если в этом была какая-то идея, то можно было оставить
2017-08-21 23:33 Kivicat: хотя там и дисбаланс
2017-08-21 23:33 Kivicat: 01:22:909 (82909|5) - в общем, я бы это в 2 перенес просто
2017-08-21 23:34 Mage: 01:22:909 - 01:23:272 - 01:23:636 - 01:24:000 - думаю нормально будет везде тут триплы сделать
2017-08-21 23:34 Kivicat: можно и так
2017-08-21 23:34 Kivicat: кстати, вот этот вот последний паттерн
2017-08-21 23:34 Kivicat: 01:26:000 (86000|0,86060|1,86121|2,86181|3,86272|5,86363|0,86484|4,86606|3,86787|1,86909|2,87151|4) -
2017-08-21 23:35 Kivicat: он хорош, но можно сделать один паттерн для всех нот
2017-08-21 23:35 Kivicat: что-то вроде алтернейта
2017-08-21 23:35 Kivicat: ну или не алтернейт, что тебе нравится
2017-08-21 23:35 Kivicat: я бы сделал тупо 5-2-5-2-5-2...
2017-08-21 23:35 Kivicat: :D
2017-08-21 23:35 Kivicat: но это садистский вариант
2017-08-21 23:36 Mage: Окей, сделал лесенку в одну сторону
2017-08-21 23:36 Kivicat: просто здесь как бы идет один рваный стрим
2017-08-21 23:37 Kivicat: в треке это один паттерн, если можно так сказать
2017-08-21 23:37 Kivicat: вроде все
2017-08-21 23:38 неплохо я потестил *мунфейс*
2017-08-21 23:38 Mage: Ну и можно и в тред закинуть :moonface:
silentch
глото4ек мода куеуе хдд
аимод ок
бг ок
semyon422's nm
%SUBJECTIVE MODE%
ты андермапишь мейн звук на этом чарте, было бы прикольно сделать его более ощущаемым.
00:06:818 - ноту
00:08:272 - ноту
00:09:000 - ноту
00:09:727 - ноту
00:11:909 - ноту
00:12:636 - ^
00:14:090 - ^
etc вплоть до киая 00:23:272 - , там уже не надо
00:57:272 (57272|1,57363|2,57454|4) - CTRL H, ну и там выше стоящие немного подровняй =)
01:03:272 (63272|0) - правее
Отличная диффа!
Myle's Hard
%SUBJECTIVE MODE%
00:57:272 (57272|0,57272|2,57363|3,57454|5,57454|4) - разнообразь, ctrl H к примеру лул
01:03:090 (63090|0,63090|5,63181|4,63272|2,63272|3) - same here
01:12:363 (72363|0,72363|1,72454|2,72545|3,72636|4,72727|0,72727|2) - ^
Отличная диффа, тут все круто, ну если только ноты двигать фо энджоябл.
Ka osu!
00:42:181 - правая колонка че пустая а
00:45:454 - сейм
00:55:272 (55272|2,55272|0,55272|5,55272|1,55454|4,55454|3,55454|5) - xd
00:58:363 (58363|3,58545|3) - больно
01:06:181 (66181|2) - здесь джек не нужен, питч другой
01:08:181 (68181|0,68181|2,68181|1,68363|1) - боль
01:08:363 (68363|3,68363|5,68363|4,68545|5,68545|3,68727|4,68909|3,68909|5) - тоже больно очень, хотя баланс тут в порядке, я не знаю как, отдельно это играется более менее, однако после переходов с диков на этот парт - играется довольно анкамфортабл.
Дальше все ок
Крутая дифа <3
вот и все
Topic Starter
Meiju

silentch wrote:

00:42:181 - правая колонка че пустая а По той че причине что и 00:39:272 - здесь первая
00:45:454 - сейм Так, а вот тут надо пофиксить
00:55:272 (55272|2,55272|0,55272|5,55272|1,55454|4,55454|3,55454|5) - xd Убрал квадр
00:58:363 (58363|3,58545|3) - больно Терпимо
01:06:181 (66181|2) - здесь джек не нужен, питч другой
01:08:181 (68181|0,68181|2,68181|1,68363|1) - боль
01:08:363 (68363|3,68363|5,68363|4,68545|5,68545|3,68727|4,68909|3,68909|5) - тоже больно очень, хотя баланс тут в порядке, я не знаю как, отдельно это играется более менее, однако после переходов с диков на этот парт - играется довольно анкамфортабл. Перефиксил ЛН парт, чекай
Дальше все ок
Крутая дифа <3
Спасибо за мод
Lacrima

DustMoon wrote:

Hi~ Mage
Myle's Hard
00:17:454 (17454|2) - move to 2 does not seem necessary
00:33:818 (33818|4,33909|2,34000|0) - 00:34:090 (34090|4,34181|2,34272|0) - same? re,plz
00:45:454 (45454|5) - emmmm,highest diff{Kaoso}not catch thishttps://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8594342 ...sooo?
00:50:424 (50424|2,50424|3,50545|1,50666|5,50666|0,50787|4) - Ctrl+h,follow pitch if I apply this, then there's some sort of disbalance like 00:49:575 (49575|4,49818|4,50060|4,50303|4,50545|4) - this, so no
i hope you can ask QAT about this mapset snap.
Good luck! :)
applied second suggestion after reviewing this mod, thank you

silentch wrote:

глото4ек мода куеуе хдд
аимод ок
бг ок
Myle's Hard
%SUBJECTIVE MODE%
00:57:272 (57272|0,57272|2,57363|3,57454|5,57454|4) - разнообразь, ctrl H к примеру лул не вижу ничего страшного, а вот зато если отзеркалить - будут 1/2 джеки, а здесь они будут сложноваты и типо дизбаланс, все дела
01:03:090 (63090|0,63090|5,63181|4,63272|2,63272|3) - same here ^
01:12:363 (72363|0,72363|1,72454|2,72545|3,72636|4,72727|0,72727|2) - ^ здесь не отзеркалил, но сделал что - то другое
Отличная диффа, тут все круто, ну если только ноты двигать фо энджоябл. <3
сенкс
semyon422

silentch wrote:

semyon422's nm
%SUBJECTIVE MODE%
ты андермапишь мейн звук на этом чарте, было бы прикольно сделать его более ощущаемым.
00:06:818 - ноту
00:08:272 - ноту
00:09:000 - ноту
00:09:727 - ноту
00:11:909 - ноту
00:12:636 - ^
00:14:090 - ^
etc вплоть до киая 00:23:272 - , там уже не надо
00:57:272 (57272|1,57363|2,57454|4) - CTRL H, ну и там выше стоящие немного подровняй =)
01:03:272 (63272|0) - правее
Отличная диффа!
первую часть мода я бы с радостью принял, но меня сильно ограничивают в старрейте, а он от этого возрастёт
вторую часть принял, но сделал по-своему
Topic Starter
Meiju
[semyon422's Normal]
Может изменить название дифы на 422's ? :^)
00:29:090 - по сути должен быть 1/2, который ты сделал 01:09:818 - тут
00:48:000 - https://puu.sh/xwhsZ/bb2e53459f.png - почему бы не сделать так (po krasote)
01:02:727 (62727|4,62818|5,63090|5,63181|4,63454|4,63545|5) - а может лучше сделать эти паттерны на 4|5 колонках, в качестве миррора 00:56:909 - этому паттерну, да и легче будет играть средним и указательным
[Myle's Hard]
00:00:909 (909|3,1000|2,1090|1) - смести на одну колону в сторону, что бы не казалось что это миррор 00:00:181 - этой лесенки
00:07:181 (7181|4) - удали
00:10:090 - 00:10:454 - 00:10:818 - должны быть даблы, так же как и раньше (00:06:818 - 00:08:272 - ), тогда 00:10:181 - 00:10:545 - 00:10:909 - синглы
00:14:545 (14545|2,14545|0) - лучше сместить на другую колонку, что бы 4 повторения как и раньше (00:11:636 (11636|5,11636|3,12000|5,12000|3,12363|5,12363|3,12727|5,12727|3) - )
00:17:090 (17090|3,17454|2) - удали что бы выделить 00:16:909 - 00:17:272 -
00:17:636 (17636|5) - 00:45:454 (45454|5) - 00:58:363 (58363|5) - каждый раз когда играю твою дифу, недоумеваю от этих ЛНов, пусть лучше тут будут триплы
00:29:636 - я не очень понял почему тут дабл, оставь сингл
00:29:363 - 00:29:545 - нот?
00:40:848 (40848|0) - нет звука, удали
00:44:606 (44606|1,44606|0) - 00:44:848 (44848|4,44848|5) - эти звуки не очень сильно выделяются чтобы мапать их даблами, оставь синглы
00:44:969 (44969|3) - а вот тут дабл бы
00:45:575 - 00:45:939 - ноты
00:47:878 (47878|2) - дабл
00:55:181 - 00:56:636 - 00:58:818 - 00:59:545 - 01:01:000 - 01:02:454 - нот?
00:57:818 - https://puu.sh/xwi8S/51da230db4.png - как-то так
01:01:818 (61818|0) - перемести на 2
01:02:545 - https://puu.sh/xwigS/9ec1ba51c3.png - po krasote
01:04:000 - этот парт выглядит странно в плане твоего решения мапа 1/4, предлагаю отмечать 1/4'ой 01:05:000 - 01:06:454 - 01:07:909 - 01:10:636 - 01:13:545 - только такие звуки, а остальные убрать
01:15:636 - ну и в этой парте тоже самое
01:24:181 - здесь 1/6

kds pls thx
semyon422

Mage wrote:

[semyon422's Normal]
Может изменить название дифы на 422's ? :^) я не против, тебе решать
00:29:090 - по сути должен быть 1/2, который ты сделал 01:09:818 - тут заменил лн на ноту
00:48:000 - https://puu.sh/xwhsZ/bb2e53459f.png - почему бы не сделать так (po krasote) принято
01:02:727 (62727|4,62818|5,63090|5,63181|4,63454|4,63545|5) - а может лучше сделать эти паттерны на 4|5 колонках, в качестве миррора 00:56:909 - этому паттерну, да и легче будет играть средним и указательным принято
Lacrima

Mage wrote:

[Myle's Hard]
00:00:909 (909|3,1000|2,1090|1) - смести на одну колону в сторону, что бы не казалось что это миррор 00:00:181 - этой лесенки
00:07:181 (7181|4) - удали
00:10:090 - 00:10:454 - 00:10:818 - должны быть даблы, так же как и раньше (00:06:818 - 00:08:272 - ), тогда 00:10:181 - 00:10:545 - 00:10:909 - синглы изменил паттерн, и вообще идея мне не нравится
00:14:545 (14545|2,14545|0) - лучше сместить на другую колонку, что бы 4 повторения как и раньше (00:11:636 (11636|5,11636|3,12000|5,12000|3,12363|5,12363|3,12727|5,12727|3) - )
00:17:090 (17090|3,17454|2) - удали что бы выделить 00:16:909 - 00:17:272 -
00:17:636 (17636|5) - 00:45:454 (45454|5) - 00:58:363 (58363|5) - каждый раз когда играю твою дифу, недоумеваю от этих ЛНов, пусть лучше тут будут триплы
00:29:636 - я не очень понял почему тут дабл, оставь сингл тут вообще должен быть 1/4 стрим, так что сдвинул какую то ноту на 1/4
00:29:363 - 00:29:545 - нот?
00:40:848 (40848|0) - нет звука, удали
00:44:606 (44606|1,44606|0) - 00:44:848 (44848|4,44848|5) - эти звуки не очень сильно выделяются чтобы мапать их даблами, оставь синглы
00:44:969 (44969|3) - а вот тут дабл бы
00:45:575 - 00:45:939 - ноты
00:47:878 (47878|2) - дабл
00:55:181 - 00:56:636 - 00:58:818 - 00:59:545 - 01:01:000 - 01:02:454 - нот?
00:57:818 - https://puu.sh/xwi8S/51da230db4.png - как-то так
01:01:818 (61818|0) - перемести на 2
01:02:545 - https://puu.sh/xwigS/9ec1ba51c3.png - po krasote
01:04:000 - этот парт выглядит странно в плане твоего решения мапа 1/4, предлагаю отмечать 1/4'ой 01:05:000 - 01:06:454 - 01:07:909 - 01:10:636 - 01:13:545 - только такие звуки, а остальные убрать сделал что то uwu
01:15:636 - ну и в этой парте тоже самое ^
01:24:181 - здесь 1/6

kds pls thx
сенкс http://puu.sh/xxpgb/18f8f9d845.rar
Mentholzzz
hello, from my modding queue
1/4 in the lowest diff is kinda unrankable , so probably add another lower diff.
Xhaos
00:08:545 - add a note here for drum in column 6
00:10:909 - ^
00:14:909 - should be quad similar to 00:14:545 -
00:16:363 - ^
00:17:818 - could add another note here for the drum sound
00:20:727 - as above
00:22:181 - ^
00:23:000 (23000|1,23000|4,23181|1,23181|4) - could move this to like https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9291525 since the sound at 00:22:727 - and 00:23:000 - is different.
00:45:696 - add a note here
00:47:151 - ^
00:53:272 - add a note here, same sound as 00:53:090 -
00:54:727 - ^ and other notes like these
00:57:818 - triple here
01:04:000 - from here I suggest to map the Ln to match the instrument pitch there (idk what is it) like https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9293157 or smth

Hard
00:23:181 - double here
00:29:272 (29272|3,29454|1,29545|3) - swap this column
00:47:151 - double here
00:54:000 - double here too
01:05:818 (65818|1,66000|5) - swap this to make the left hand ezier

Normal
00:19:454 (19454|2,20000|3) - swap column, the old one is first left-heavy and right-heavy which is kinda too hard for NM imo
01:08:363 (68363|0,68545|2,68727|1,68909|2,69090|0) - this kind pof pattern in NM is quite too hard imo, as well as 01:12:000 (72000|2,72181|0,72363|1,72545|2,72727|0) -
01:26:272 (86272|0) - delet this and extend LN to 01:26:363 -
Topic Starter
Meiju

Mentholzzz wrote:

hello, from my modding queue
1/4 in the lowest diff is kinda unrankable , so probably add another lower diff.
Xhaos
00:08:545 - add a note here for drum in column 6 Yep
00:10:909 - ^ ^
00:14:909 - should be quad similar to 00:14:545 - nope, this is somethng like an echo
00:16:363 - ^ ^
00:17:818 - could add another note here for the drum sound Sure
00:20:727 - as above ^
00:22:181 - ^ ^
00:23:000 (23000|1,23000|4,23181|1,23181|4) - could move this to like https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9291525 since the sound at 00:22:727 - and 00:23:000 - is different. youre right
00:45:696 - add a note here i want to keep single
00:47:151 - ^ ^
00:53:272 - add a note here, same sound as 00:53:090 - not so
00:54:727 - ^ and other notes like these ^
00:57:818 - triple here yep
01:04:000 - from here I suggest to map the Ln to match the instrument pitch there (idk what is it) like https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9293157 or smth It looks pretty scare i don't know xd aaa
Thank you!
Lacrima

Mentholzzz wrote:

hello, from my modding queue

Hard
00:23:181 - double here why
00:29:272 (29272|3,29454|1,29545|3) - swap this column
00:47:151 - double here I was placing doubles every 1/1, so gonna keep that consistent
00:54:000 - double here too I'll keep this one as a single for a better emphasizing of 00:54:181
01:05:818 (65818|1,66000|5) - swap this to make the left hand ezier
no reply = fixed
http://puu.sh/xYXuO/05065543cd.rar
Ayydar
0|1|2|3|4|5|

Normal
00:16:909 (16909|5) и 00:17:272 (17272|5) - добавь в 0
00:29:090 - http://joxi.ru/DmBZp1FwK6OvmP.jpg
00:57:636 - http://joxi.ru/52aB4Ns4w0RRA0.jpg
01:09:818 (69818|5,69818|4) - поменяй на ЛН
01:27:151 (87151|5) - перетащи на 4
Hard
00:06:818 (6818|3) - Здесь должен быть дабл, коль ты выделяешь барабан
00:08:272 (8272|4) - ^
00:09:727 (9727|3) - ^
00:23:181 (23181|3) - на 4-ую
00:45:333 (45333|0) - добавь
00:49:454 (49454|1) - http://joxi.ru/823vZnhJywYBmO.jpg
00:52:363 - добавь
01:10:000 (70000|2) - раз выделял до этого этот шум, выдели и здесь, хотя бы даблом
01:12:909 (72909|3) - ты до этого не выделял тарелку на красном тике
01:20:000 (80000|0) - http://joxi.ru/V2V31RcxlGX9Av.jpg
01:24:181 - http://joxi.ru/MAjBK7s4NYJvAe.jpg
semyon422

Or1g1n wrote:

Normal
00:16:909 (16909|5) и 00:17:272 (17272|5) - добавь в 0
00:29:090 - http://joxi.ru/DmBZp1FwK6OvmP.jpg
00:57:636 - http://joxi.ru/52aB4Ns4w0RRA0.jpg
01:09:818 (69818|5,69818|4) - поменяй на ЛН
01:27:151 (87151|5) - перетащи на 4

Mentholzzz wrote:

Normal
00:19:454 (19454|2,20000|3) - swap column, the old one is first left-heavy and right-heavy which is kinda too hard for NM imo
01:08:363 (68363|0,68545|2,68727|1,68909|2,69090|0) - this kind pof pattern in NM is quite too hard imo, as well as 01:12:000 (72000|2,72181|0,72363|1,72545|2,72727|0) -
01:26:272 (86272|0) - delet this and extend LN to 01:26:363 -
all accepted
Lacrima

Or1g1n wrote:

0|1|2|3|4|5|

Hard
00:06:818 (6818|3) - Здесь должен быть дабл, коль ты выделяешь барабан
00:08:272 (8272|4) - ^
00:09:727 (9727|3) - ^ ваще не нравится как играется, пока пожертвую этим
00:23:181 (23181|3) - на 4-ую и так норм, + потеряется джек, который я во всей части использовал 00:23:181 (23181|3,23363|3) -
00:45:333 (45333|0) - добавь
00:49:454 (49454|1) - http://joxi.ru/823vZnhJywYBmO.jpg от души ваще братан
00:52:363 - добавь
01:10:000 (70000|2) - раз выделял до этого этот шум, выдели и здесь, хотя бы даблом
01:12:909 (72909|3) - ты до этого не выделял тарелку на красном тике
01:20:000 (80000|0) - http://joxi.ru/V2V31RcxlGX9Av.jpg не нраица
01:24:181 - http://joxi.ru/MAjBK7s4NYJvAe.jpg 01:24:454 (84454|0,84454|1,84636|3,84636|4,84818|0,84818|1) - эти штучки плохо играются если так поставить
no reply=fixed
ааааа http://puu.sh/yaOZw/71dcad46b6.rar
eyes
01:26:000 - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9570520 было бы интереснее (?)
я так же не уверен насчёт снапов, мне кажется тут лучше добавить редлайны
если нет, то перемести это 01:26:787 (86787|2) - сюда 01:26:757 -
Topic Starter
Meiju

eyes wrote:

01:26:000 - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9570520 было бы интереснее (?) Нет, не интересней
я так же не уверен насчёт снапов, мне кажется тут лучше добавить редлайны
если нет, то перемести это 01:26:787 (86787|2) - сюда 01:26:757 - Окей
Также нашел у себя пару ошибок, спасибо
Garalulu
Hola boi who will get my first bubble

[422's normal]
  1. Hitcircle/Slider Combo colours don't affect anything at mania, plz uncheck Enable Custom Colours at Colours tap
  2. Please uncheck Widescreen Support meme
  3. OD 6 HP 6 is too low, at least make it 7 please
  4. 00:08:545 - missing whistle hitsound
  5. 00:10:909 - missing clap hitsound
  6. 00:25:454 - maybe you added a one more because of the melody progress unlike 00:24:000 - , but it's normal diff, it should focus on one thing, just drum yeah. I recommend to delete one, even it's not same drum with 00:28:363 - 00:31:272 - .
  7. 00:29:090 - I don't think it has enough reason as double, no drum and just noise sound tho. How about just single LN from 00:29:090 - to 00:29:272 - ? it makes more clear to express this part.
  8. 01:09:818 - same reason with above.
  9. 00:29:818 - it should be double if you wanna make this 00:31:272 - double, same drum thing tho.
  10. 00:32:727 - same reason with above.
  11. 01:02:545 - 01:04:000 - making symmetry structure with 00:56:727 - 00:58:181 - is better tho. only 01:03:636 - 01:04:000 - are different with previous thing.
[Myle's Hard]
  1. Hitcircle/Slider Combo colours don't affect anything at mania, plz uncheck Enable Custom Colours at Colours tap
  2. Please uncheck Widescreen Support meme
  3. How about OD 7.5 / HP 7.5? It's hard diff so deserve it.
  4. 00:23:272 - 00:34:909 - has a big gap between last diff, you should buff it tho.
  5. 00:39:272 - missing finish hitsound
  6. 00:54:000 - why didn't you make double this? it has heavy drum like 00:52:545 - , no 1/4 notes around it. double is okay tho
  7. 00:59:818 - same reason with above
  8. 01:15:636 - 01:15:818 - only this part are placed at same col. I recommend to avoid the same col like 01:18:545 - 01:18:727 - .
  9. 01:17:272 - not enough heavy sound to be double, because you make double at heavy drum thing at this part. reduce one plz :3
  10. 01:18:000 - umm you should keep consistency like this part. At 01:16:545 - 01:16:727 - , you did two double for 1/4 triple drum line, but didn't at here.
    making double this is the right solution tho.
  11. 01:19:454 - same thing with above
  12. 01:19:090 - consistency, consistency, single plz

    maybe it has more consistency issue, you should keep an eye on this o.o
[Choas]
  1. Hitcircle/Slider Combo colours don't affect anything at mania, plz uncheck Enable Custom Colours at Colours tap
  2. How about OD 8 / HP 8? normal and hard od/hp is too low so I think they should buff a bit more.
  3. 00:13:363 (13363|3) - I don't think it has any sound. ghost note thing yeah
  4. 00:20:181 - missing clap hitsound
  5. 00:23:363 - you can add one more here, stream thing
  6. 00:27:636 - 00:29:090 - at this part, I have a question about 00:28:363 - 00:28:727 - . 00:28:636 - is more heavy than 00:28:727 - , but note spread is reversed. 00:28:727 - has not any heavy drum thing so I think it should be single.
  7. 00:33:272 - missing one note tho, unlike 00:34:727 -
  8. 00:34:363 - has finish sound, triple is better
  9. 00:39:272 - missing finish hitsound
  10. 01:09:818 (69818|4) - making this 1/2 length LN like 01:09:818 (69818|5) - is better rather than 1/4, it can emphasis the noise only and looks more sexy.
  11. 01:17:454 - one note for this sound is too light, at least double is better cuz you did triple at 01:16:000 -
  12. 01:18:545 - 01:18:909 - make consistency with 01:15:636 - 01:16:000 - , make triple 01:18:909 - to emphasis 1/2, or use 1/4 at 01:15:909 - and delete one at 01:16:000 -

plz check one more time after applying this
Good Luck!
semyon422

Garalulu wrote:

[notice][422's normal]
  1. Hitcircle/Slider Combo colours don't affect anything at mania, plz uncheck Enable Custom Colours at Colours tap accepted
  2. Please uncheck Widescreen Support meme accepted
  3. OD 6 HP 6 is too low, at least make it 7 please accepted
  4. 00:08:545 - missing whistle hitsound Mage is responsible for hitsounds. I tell him fix this.
  5. 00:10:909 - missing clap hitsound ^

    for this:
  6. 00:25:454 - maybe you added a one more because of the melody progress unlike 00:24:000 - , but it's normal diff, it should focus on one thing, just drum yeah. I recommend to delete one, even it's not same drum with 00:28:363 - 00:31:272 - .
  7. 00:29:090 - I don't think it has enough reason as double, no drum and just noise sound tho. How about just single LN from 00:29:090 - to 00:29:272 - ? it makes more clear to express this part.
  8. 01:09:818 - same reason with above.
  9. 00:29:818 - it should be double if you wanna make this 00:31:272 - double, same drum thing tho.
  10. 00:32:727 - same reason with above.
  11. 01:02:545 - 01:04:000 - making symmetry structure with 00:56:727 - 00:58:181 - is better tho. only 01:03:636 - 01:04:000 - are different with previous thing.
    remapped from 00:23:272 - to 00:34:909 - , LNs added here 00:29:090 - and here 01:09:818 - , for this 01:02:545 - made symmetry with 00:56:727 -
Thanks for mod. Most suggestions was accepted, Mage should fix hitsounds.
Garalulu
Please inform me what was changed or not,
I wanna specific respond about my mod so I can check them easily
Topic Starter
Meiju

Garalulu wrote:

Hola boi who will get my first bubble

[Choas]
  1. Hitcircle/Slider Combo colours don't affect anything at mania, plz uncheck Enable Custom Colours at Colours tap
  2. How about OD 8 / HP 8? normal and hard od/hp is too low so I think they should buff a bit more.
  3. 00:13:363 (13363|3) - I don't think it has any sound. ghost note thing yeah
  4. 00:20:181 - missing clap hitsound
  5. 00:23:363 - you can add one more here, stream thing Yes i can, but it would be a little bit confusing to play
  6. 00:27:636 - 00:29:090 - at this part, I have a question about 00:28:363 - 00:28:727 - . 00:28:636 - is more heavy than 00:28:727 - , but note spread is reversed. 00:28:727 - has not any heavy drum thing so I think it should be single. How you can see in this part i always use doubles for 1/2, in this section music doesn't gets even calmer, so i keep double
  7. 00:33:272 - missing one note tho, unlike 00:34:727 -
  8. 00:34:363 - has finish sound, triple is better
  9. 00:39:272 - missing finish hitsound
  10. 01:09:818 (69818|4) - making this 1/2 length LN like 01:09:818 (69818|5) - is better rather than 1/4, it can emphasis the noise only and looks more sexy.
  11. 01:17:454 - one note for this sound is too light, at least double is better cuz you did triple at 01:16:000 -
  12. 01:18:545 - 01:18:909 - make consistency with 01:15:636 - 01:16:000 - , make triple 01:18:909 - to emphasis 1/2, or use 1/4 at 01:15:909 - and delete one at 01:16:000 -
plz check one more time after applying this
Good Luck!
No reply = Accepted

Thank you very much!

Semёn's diff is also updated, waiting for Myle :^)
Lacrima

Garalulu wrote:

Hola boi who will get my first bubble

[Myle's Hard]
  1. Hitcircle/Slider Combo colours don't affect anything at mania, plz uncheck Enable Custom Colours at Colours tap
  2. Please uncheck Widescreen Support meme
  3. How about OD 7.5 / HP 7.5? It's hard diff so deserve it. I'll keep OD7 since some 1/3 patterns are quite hard in terms of accuracy
  4. 00:23:272 - 00:34:909 - has a big gap between last diff, you should buff it tho. That's not an actual problem, right? Also it's quite impossible to keep the pattern idea while buffing it
  5. 00:39:272 - missing finish hitsound
  6. 00:54:000 - why didn't you make double this? it has heavy drum like 00:52:545 - , no 1/4 notes around it. double is okay tho
  7. 00:59:818 - same reason with above
  8. 01:15:636 - 01:15:818 - only this part are placed at same col. I recommend to avoid the same col like 01:18:545 - 01:18:727 - .
  9. 01:17:272 - not enough heavy sound to be double, because you make double at heavy drum thing at this part. reduce one plz :3
  10. 01:18:000 - umm you should keep consistency like this part. At 01:16:545 - 01:16:727 - , you did two double for 1/4 triple drum line, but didn't at here.
    making double this is the right solution tho.
  11. 01:19:454 - same thing with above
  12. 01:19:090 - consistency, consistency, single plz

plz check one more time after applying this
Good Luck!
no reply=applied
Garalulu
oki I understand what you say

last thing
[Myle's Hard]
  1. 01:26:090 (86090|3,86772|1) - different snap with other diffs, I think mage's snap is right so you should move / add something
    01:26:000 - 01:26:181 - two drum at 01:26:060 - 01:26:121 -
    01:26:772 (86772|1) - Wrong snap, 01:26:757 - tho

\ O W O /
Lacrima

Garalulu wrote:

oki I understand what you say

last thing
[Myle's Hard]
  1. 01:26:090 (86090|3,86772|1) - different snap with other diffs, I think mage's snap is right so you should move / add something
    01:26:000 - 01:26:181 - two drum at 01:26:060 - 01:26:121 -
    01:26:772 (86772|1) - Wrong snap, 01:26:757 - tho

\ O W O /
I just made it like Mage did, should be fine
Garalulu
Hoi
Seems fine
Topic Starter
Meiju
Woah, thank you Lulu OwO
eyes
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축하해
Garalulu
hoi hoi
hitsounding in 2017 :blobsweat:
lenpai
nice! :D
Xinnoh
hitsound doesn't need rebub, just fix before qualification xd
DustMoon
Q,when? :)
error_exe777
i dont know how long ago you asked me to check this but i apologise for the massive delay :blobsweat:

h
[General]
  1. Okay so theres this weird aimod error that pops up about more than 6 notes being played simultaneously. i mean its quite obviously a bug but idk what to do about it, so i would set the offset to 1 instead of 0 to get rid of it idk
[Chaos]

00:23:454 (23454|1,23454|2) - could be cool to have this stack in like [12] with the quad below since the same sound is being played here, and would in turn emphasise it that little bit more

00:29:090 (29090|0) - ideally this should be a double LN like shown at 01:09:818 - for consistency's sake

otherwise, lookin good

[Myle's Hard]

00:55:272 - for the 1/2 here i would suggest adding some sort of 1/2 or 1/4th LN for the little wubby sounding things like top diff introduces.

01:20:727 (80727|2,80818|3,80909|2,81000|3,81090|2,81181|3,81272|2) - could be an idea to CTRL+H these to have the starting placement of the trill to the right instead of the left, which helps differentiate it with 01:20:000 (80000|1,80090|4,80181|1,80272|4,80363|1) - further than it already is

[422's Normal]

01:03:727 (63727|1) - id delete this since you are focusing on emphasising the drums here and this is pretty insignificant compared to that around it. you're probably just fine with the 1/2 gap here instead lol
semyon422

error_exe777 wrote:

[422's Normal]

01:03:727 (63727|1) - id delete this since you are focusing on emphasising the drums here and this is pretty insignificant compared to that around it. you're probably just fine with the 1/2 gap here instead lol
I really don't understand why I should delete this note. I think deleting of this note will bу a mistake because I mapped this sound before on 01:02:545 (62545|0,62909|1,63272|1,63636|0) -
error_exe777

semyon422 wrote:

error_exe777 wrote:

[422's Normal]

01:03:727 (63727|1) - id delete this since you are focusing on emphasising the drums here and this is pretty insignificant compared to that around it. you're probably just fine with the 1/2 gap here instead lol
I really don't understand why I should delete this note. I think deleting of this note will bу a mistake because I mapped this sound before on 01:02:545 (62545|0,62909|1,63272|1,63636|0) -
i suggested it since the note shown at 01:03:727 (63727|1) - is quieter and less significant than the other kicks and snares, so consequently takes that emphasis away from them. despite this, i dont mind either way
Lacrima
accepted both suggestions
also added lns 01:18:545 - here for consistency
semyon422

error_exe777 wrote:

i suggested it since the note shown at 01:03:727 (63727|1) - is quieter and less significant than the other kicks and snares, so consequently takes that emphasis away from them. despite this, i dont mind either way
Okay, I'll delete this note 01:03:727 (63727|1) - with 00:57:909 (57909|4) -
Topic Starter
Meiju

error_exe777 wrote:

i dont know how long ago you asked me to check this but i apologise for the massive delay :blobsweat:

h
[General]
  1. Okay so theres this weird aimod error that pops up about more than 6 notes being played simultaneously. i mean its quite obviously a bug but idk what to do about it, so i would set the offset to 1 instead of 0 to get rid of it idk it's weird lol, i won't change offset cuz 0 is super mega ideal and this bug doesn't really make anything
[Chaos]

00:23:454 (23454|1,23454|2) - could be cool to have this stack in like [12] with the quad below since the same sound is being played here, and would in turn emphasise it that little bit more it's not the same, and with mini-doube-jack it feels weird to play

00:29:090 (29090|0) - ideally this should be a double LN like shown at 01:09:818 - for consistency's sake i agree

otherwise, lookin good
also, 00:56:000 - 01:00:363 - i made it double as i did before (00:54:545 - )
01:22:545 - 01:21:818 - 01:16:727 - 01:17:454 - 01:18:181 - and added here triples for crash
01:22:000 - remapped this part a little bit, added doubles for kicks

thank you
updated~
Unpredictable
would also add these to the tags: "newgrounds"

the song originally came from newgrounds

the tags looked a bit bland so i hope this helps a bit (:
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