Hashimoto Miyuki - TIME (Short Ver.)

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YGOkid8
sorry for the late mod.

General:
01:41:095 (1) - Start spinner at 01:41:312 - instead

Normal:
00:17:616 (1) - Start spinner at 00:17:834 - instead

Hard:
01:33:269 (6,7,) - Move (6,7) 2 right and 2 down (lvl4) so it goes directly through the middle of the previous (5)

nice map (y)
Topic Starter
swish

YGOkid8 wrote:

sorry for the late mod.

General:
01:41:095 (1) - Start spinner at 01:41:312 - instead

Normal:
00:17:616 (1) - Start spinner at 00:17:834 - instead

Hard:
01:33:269 (6,7,) - Move (6,7) 2 right and 2 down (lvl4) so it goes directly through the middle of the previous (5)

nice map (y)
> YGOkid8
All fixed~
thanks for mod :)
YGOkid8
no problem.

EDIT: popped. didn't even realise there was meant to be video. like ykcarrot said, fullsubmit your map.
Sure
NOTE : The video file is missed. You have to full-submit again!

BTW star for nice map
Topic Starter
swish
sorry,no video in this map :cry:
It is a failure at the first upload

Because video of the same length as this song doesn't exist
Takos
ranked gogo~
Plucogi
;)
Topic Starter
swish
> Takos, Plucogi
thanks.
loli_milk
I am Swish's fan
and I love swish
yes,
My love is swish
so
She is My Wife...
Orgol
cuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuute mapppppppppppppppppppp
Rucker
:)
                                             
hoLysoup

Rucker wrote:

:)
                                             
Topic Starter
swish
> loli_milk, moelunet, Rucker, hoLysoup

thanks ;)
NatsumeRin
[General]
offset: +7 (450)
The time between the 2 kiai is a bit long (if it's a re-kiai technique), make it just 1/2 or 1/4 is enough.

[Easy]
The diffculty setting is a little harsh for such a Easy imo. HP,AR,OD all -1.
00:12:616 (1,2,3) - imo in this 0.75x part, you don't need to still follow the Distance Spacing multiplier very strictly, just make 1/1 circles have same spacing like 00:29:138 (2,3,4), means don't have a part stack with each other.
00:16:095 (2,3,4) - ^
01:15:008 (1) - whistle? (both beginning and end)

[Normal]
00:27:399 (6) - i suggest use a 1/2 repeated slider here. as it's very near the next section and about to start.
00:50:877 (3) - looks a little strange (because of 4's place), try this?

01:13:486 (1,1) - whistle?
01:40:660 (1) - add repeat?

[Hard]
00:08:269 (5,6,7) - why the spacing is larger here... it's not a big deal but feels strange to me.
00:15:877 (6,7) - spacing is a bit far, compared to 00:15:008 (3,4)
00:25:877 (7,8) - would be a little hard..?
00:31:747 (1) - notes comes just 1/2 after a spinner is not so good, maybe end this 1/1 earlier and then add a note at 00:34:790?
00:45:225 (1) - clap miss
01:41:095 - add a note?

[Insane]
Personally i think this song fits 1/4*2 (notes like oo oo) a lot, consider to use some?
00:17:508 (4) - i feel this is a bit extra...remove?
00:40:008 (4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4) - not complaining but this part is not that fun imo...
01:05:551 - add a note?
01:15:660 (2) - maybe add whistle too.
Topic Starter
swish

NatsumeRin wrote:

[General]
offset: +7 (450) ok~ offset +7
The time between the 2 kiai is a bit long (if it's a re-kiai technique), make it just 1/2 or 1/4 is enough.
ok. 1st,2nd kiai, 1/2 shorten

[Easy]
The diffculty setting is a little harsh for such a Easy imo. HP,AR,OD all -1. all -1
00:12:616 (1,2,3) - imo in this 0.75x part, you don't need to still follow the Distance Spacing multiplier very strictly, just make 1/1 circles have same spacing like 00:29:138 (2,3,4), means don't have a part stack with each other.
fixed
00:16:095 (2,3,4) - ^ ^
01:15:008 (1) - whistle? (both beginning and end) ok. add whistle

[Normal]
00:27:399 (6) - i suggest use a 1/2 repeated slider here. as it's very near the next section and about to start.
use 1/2 repeat slider
00:50:877 (3) - looks a little strange (because of 4's place), try this?
[attachment=0:f3b76]144.png[/attachment:f3b76]
changed it like that
01:13:486 (1,1) - whistle? add whistle
01:40:660 (1) - add repeat? added

[Hard]
00:08:269 (5,6,7) - why the spacing is larger here... it's not a big deal but feels strange to me.mistake.. :o fixed
00:15:877 (6,7) - spacing is a bit far, compared to 00:15:008 (3,4) fixed
00:25:877 (7,8) - would be a little hard..? hmm..i don't think so.. sorry keep it now ;_;
00:31:747 (1) - notes comes just 1/2 after a spinner is not so good, maybe end this 1/1 earlier and then add a note at 00:34:790?
ok. fixed
00:45:225 (1) - clap miss oops.. add a clap
01:41:095 - add a note? added

[Insane]
Personally i think this song fits 1/4*2 (notes like oo oo) a lot, consider to use some?
hmm.. keep it now :o
00:17:508 (4) - i feel this is a bit extra...remove? removed
00:40:008 (4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4) - not complaining but this part is not that fun imo...ok.changed this part
01:05:551 - add a note? It's not fit this song...imo, sorry ;_;
01:15:660 (2) - maybe add whistle too. ^
> NatsumeRin
thanks for modding~ :)
Hinacle
modリクエストありがとうございますー!
参考程度におねがいします~~

modの練習のために英語で書かせてもらいました!すいませんT^T

<Easy>
  1. 01:09:580 (6) - Remove clap and add whistle?
  2. 01:13:493 (5) - new combo?



<Normal>
  1. 00:26:971 (5) - x:256 y:88. 00:27:406 (6) - x360 y:152. I think place of here is good.
  2. 00:49:145 (5) - new combo?
  3. 00:49:797 (1) - Remove new combo?
  4. 01:12:841 (7,8) - 1 or 2 grid left (grid size: Tiny)
  5. 01:18:710 (1) - Remove new combo?
  6. 01:22:189 (5) - looks a little strange. try this? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/132744
  7. 01:30:015 (1) - add whistle at beginning?
  8. 01:32:623 (1) - Remove new combo?



<Hard>
  1. 00:43:493 (3) - stack it. Perv: 0.01x http://puu.sh/4wMb
  2. 01:13:493 (1,1) - Remove whistle and add finish?



<Insane>
  1. 01:02:623 (2) - Remove clap and add whistle?
  2. 01:02:841 (3) - add whistle?
  3. 01:41:102 (x) - add note

Nice map!!
gal song mapper= =+
Topic Starter
swish

Hinacle wrote:

<Easy>
  1. 01:09:580 (6) - Remove clap and add whistle? fixed
  2. 01:13:493 (5) - new combo? fixed



<Normal>
  1. 00:26:971 (5) - x:256 y:88. 00:27:406 (6) - x360 y:152. I think place of here is good. fixed
  2. 00:49:145 (5) - new combo? ok
  3. 00:49:797 (1) - Remove new combo? ok
  4. 01:12:841 (7,8) - 1 or 2 grid left (grid size: Tiny) 2grid left
  5. 01:18:710 (1) - Remove new combo? ok
  6. 01:22:189 (5) - looks a little strange. try this? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/132744 少し変えました ;)
  7. 01:30:015 (1) - add whistle at beginning? added
  8. 01:32:623 (1) - Remove new combo? ok



<Hard>
  1. 00:43:493 (3) - stack it. Perv: 0.01x http://puu.sh/4wMb ;_;
  2. 01:13:493 (1,1) - Remove whistle and add finish? ほかのdiffに合わせてそのままにしておきます :o



<Insane>
  1. 01:02:623 (2) - Remove clap and add whistle? fixed
  2. 01:02:841 (3) - add whistle? added
  3. 01:41:102 (x) - add noteadded
> Hinacle
thanks for modding :)
Faust
IRC suggestion on adding 1 more combo color.

Not a lot of things to point out.
But these are only very light suggestions, so you don't have to follow if you think you like it the way it is now.

Nothing actually wrong with the entire mapset.

Touching on Insane:

- 01:06:102 - I think this too close to the previous stack imo. You can shift this a little higher.

- 01:08:710 - Oh, this is nice :)

- 01:22:189 - Maybe too close.

- 01:35:558 - Actually, why not use a 1/4 slider like 3 - 4. If you do, don't forget the whistle.

Rest are good. No kudosu is fine ;)
Topic Starter
swish

Faust wrote:

IRC suggestion on adding 1 more combo color.
added 1 more combo color (2→3)
Not a lot of things to point out.
But these are only very light suggestions, so you don't have to follow if you think you like it the way it is now.

Nothing actually wrong with the entire mapset.

Touching on Insane:

- 01:06:102 - I think this too close to the previous stack imo. You can shift this a little higher. changed a little :)

- 01:08:710 - Oh, this is nice :)thanks ;)

- 01:22:189 - Maybe too close. hmm,sorry ;_; keep it now

- 01:35:558 - Actually, why not use a 1/4 slider like 3 - 4. If you do, don't forget the whistle. ok. fixed~

Rest are good. No kudosu is fine ;)
ah.. sorry,already been give kds :o thanks for help,Faust :D
Breeze
おはようございます~
いい字体ですよ、すきですね ;)

So you decide to delete video? If not, please add video and do a full-submit

[Easy]
  1. 00:06:536 - It's not recommended that use different BPM such as 75% in the easiest diff. If you insist, that would be fine, too.
    At least I think it's fairly easy enough


[Normal]
  1. 01:07:189 (3,4) - I think use soft whistle here would be nice, normal finish sounds a bit loud


[Hard]
  1. 01:07:189 (6) - Same to normal, soft whistle would fit music more IMO


[Insane]
  1. 00:36:754 (5) - This slider would be hidden by previous slider while playing, hard to tell IMO
  2. 00:55:341 (4) - Shouldn't this whistle be added to 3?
  3. 01:07:189 (11), 01:07:623 (12) - Same, soft whistle
  4. 01:11:319 (9) - Whistle instead of clap
  5. 01:11:754 (3) - Remove whistle, it fit your previous sound partten


良いマップですね
When you done changes, call me back for a bubble
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