Faust wrote:

IRC suggestion on adding 1 more combo color.
added 1 more combo color (2→3)
Not a lot of things to point out.
But these are only very light suggestions, so you don't have to follow if you think you like it the way it is now.

Nothing actually wrong with the entire mapset.

Touching on Insane:

- 01:06:102 - I think this too close to the previous stack imo. You can shift this a little higher. changed a little

- 01:08:710 - Oh, this is nice thanks

- 01:22:189 - Maybe too close. hmm,sorry ;_; keep it now

- 01:35:558 - Actually, why not use a 1/4 slider like 3 - 4. If you do, don't forget the whistle. ok. fixed~

Rest are good. No kudosu is fine
ah.. sorry,already been give kds thanks for help,Faust

1. 00:06:536 - It's not recommended that use different BPM such as 75% in the easiest diff. If you insist, that would be fine, too.
   At least I think it's fairly easy enough

1. 01:07:189 (3,4) - I think use soft whistle here would be nice, normal finish sounds a bit loud

1. 01:07:189 (6) - Same to normal, soft whistle would fit music more IMO

1. 00:36:754 (5) - This slider would be hidden by previous slider while playing, hard to tell IMO
   
2. 00:55:341 (4) - Shouldn't this whistle be added to 3?
3. 01:07:189 (11), 01:07:623 (12) - Same, soft whistle
4. 01:11:319 (9) - Whistle instead of clap
5. 01:11:754 (3) - Remove whistle, it fit your previous sound partten

Breeze wrote:

おはようございます～ おはようございます
いい字体ですよ、すきですね 　

So you decide to delete video? If not, please add video and do a full-submit

swish wrote:

sorry,no video in this map

Because video of the same length as this song doesn't exist

sorry ;_;

[Easy]

1. 00:06:536 - It's not recommended that use different BPM such as 75% in the easiest diff. If you insist, that would be fine, too.
   At least I think it's fairly easy enough

[Normal]

1. 01:07:189 (3,4) - I think use soft whistle here would be nice, normal finish sounds a bit loud

[Hard]

1. 01:07:189 (6) - Same to normal, soft whistle would fit music more IMO

[Insane]

1. 00:36:754 (5) - This slider would be hidden by previous slider while playing, hard to tell IMO
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2. 00:55:341 (4) - Shouldn't this whistle be added to 3?
3. 01:07:189 (11), 01:07:623 (12) - Same, soft whistle
4. 01:11:319 (9) - Whistle instead of clap
5. 01:11:754 (3) - Remove whistle, it fit your previous sound partten

other all fixed~

良いマップですね ありがとうございます
When you done changes, call me back for a bubble
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