IceBeam wrote:

Hello.

Folder is clean,everything else seems fine too.

[Easy]
00:09:138 (3) - Make this curve in different direction? Like this: fixed

SPOILER

00:29:573 (3) - Forgot to add a clap here too? oops.. added
00:56:095 (1) - Use full wide of a playfield.Rotating clockwise by 90 looks better. fixed
01:06:529 (3,4) - These objects are off beats.Try this: fixed

1. Make a slider from 01:06:529 to 01:07:182.
2. Add a circle to 01:07:616 or start another slider up to 01:08:051.
3. Then use 01:08:703 and 01:09:573 to keep the previous rhytm on.

01:32:616 (2) - Like this looks much better to me: ok fixed

SPOILER

[Normal]
00:45:660 (5) - Fix this slider a little to avoid overlapping with 00:44:790 (4)? fixed
00:52:616 (1) - Same,try to avoid overlapping with 00:52:182 (4),please. ^
01:21:964 (4,5) - Looks really bad =\ Stack (4) with (5). fixed

[Hard]
00:15:442 (4) - Fix distance,it's too close to previous object. mistake.. fixed
00:37:942 - Add a note here. added
01:10:008 (6) - New combo. ok
01:16:964 (3,4) - This pattern looks really weird.Try something else. some fixed

[Insane]
Looks a little overmapped to me.. ;__;

00:06:529 (1,2,3) - Odd spacing.It should be like this at least: fixed~

SPOILER

01:04:790 (1) - This is very sudden jump that goes out of flow,reduce distance,please. 2.0x spacing fixed
01:28:921 (1) - It's rankable,but I don't think anyone will get bonus score here.It's too fast and unexpected..so I suggest you to map this part with notes. ok.spinner removed,map this part with notes

Anyway,pretty solid mapset.
Deserves a star.

winber1 wrote:

General

--kiai times are not the all the same. (Hard and Insane are different from Normal and Easy) fixed

Insane

01:03:051 (4) - add finish added
01:06:964 (11,12) - add finish at the end of each slider? ^
01:08:486 (5) - honestly, i don't see the point of this repeat slider. You can probably do something more interesting than just have this repeat slider go on for a measure. Also the vocals hold the note at 01:08:703, not at 01:08:486. At present, there is no idea... editing now EDIT: remap here~
01:11:856 (4) - delete note. deleted
01:16:964 (6) - new combo and add finish at the beginning of slider. fixed
01:20:225 (x) - flows better imo if you add a note. Not a big deal tho. sorry, no change
01:30:008 (1) - change slider into one note, then add notes at 01:30:116 and 01:30:334? (drums are actually playing these notes, but it's kinda subtle) fmm.. no change ;_;

Hard

00:25:660 (5) - wow this just feels so empty here. Do you mind adding some notes, maybe something like this? (i kinda just randomly placed the notes, so you don't have to place the notes where i placed them): good suggestion! fixed

SPOILER

[attachment=1:c43ef]screenshot058.jpg[/attachment:c43ef]

01:07:182 (6) - add finishes added

Normal

01:05:225 (6) - Change into a slider like this?:nice changed

SPOILER

[attachment=0:c43ef]screenshot059.jpg[/attachment:c43ef]

01:16:095 (2) - new combo OK

Easy

01:40:008 (3) - remove clap from beginning and add it to the end. fixed
01:40:877 (x) - add note added

Awesome map! :3

Star~~

1. 00:11:312 (2) - Remove whislte and add whistle at 00:11:747 (3)?
2. 00:12:616 (4) - Remove whistle on start of the slider?

1. 00:17:834 (1) - I'd have the spinner start from this point in order to follow the rhythm.

1. 00:17:616 (3) - I'd remove this note and have the spinner start from this point. Becoz the lyrics isnt competely in the point. Pls test with speed 25%, you'll find it's actually a bit of later. So if you could put a spinner from this, the rhythm will flow better.
2. 01:04:573 (8) - What about changing it to a slider with 0.5x and make the end of it slinece? Becoz it's a bit odd without putting anything and just leave a long rhythm like an empty vessel.

1. All fine! Really can not pick out anything from this diff.

gdeath wrote:

Hey, here is my mod.

[Easy]:

1. 00:11:312 (2) - Remove whislte and add whistle at 00:11:747 (3)? fixed
2. 00:12:616 (4) - Remove whistle on start of the slider? fixed

[Normal]:

1. 00:17:834 (1) - I'd have the spinner start from this point in order to follow the rhythm. fixed

[Hard]:

1. 00:17:616 (3) - I'd remove this note and have the spinner start from this point. Becoz the lyrics isnt competely in the point. Pls test with speed 25%, you'll find it's actually a bit of later. So if you could put a spinner from this, the rhythm will flow better. fixed
2. 01:04:573 (8) - What about changing it to a slider with 0.5x and make the end of it slinece? Becoz it's a bit odd without putting anything and just leave a long rhythm like an empty vessel. fixed

[Insane]:

1. All fine! Really can not pick out anything from this diff.

Good job on this song. There are not many issues found. Hope it helped and good luck =) thanks
/me shoots a star~

wmfchris wrote:

[Insane]
00:55:334 (4,6) - +whistle? add
01:36:096 (6,7,8,9,10) - put the notes somehow like this?


OK~ some fixed
[Hard]
00:16:095 (1) - remove new combo? fixed
00:46:529 (3) - stack with last combo's (6) if possible? fixed

the whole map is really nice imo, no problems for me~

star >w<

0OoMickeyoO0 wrote:

#modreqs thanks :3

I'm beginner at modding, sorry

[Hard]
01:04:573 (8) - clap tail? fixed
01:08:051 (1) - finish sound better? fixed
01:11:095 (2,3) - add whistle? no change
01:16:964 (3) - new combo & add finish? add finish only
01:30:442 (1) - change whistle to finish sound better? fixed

[Insane]
00:36:747 (5) - slider are hid, maybe move this slider? sorry
01:27:073 (6) - delete? or put slider like this sorry

SPOILER

star~

1. 00:10:877 (1,2,3,4) - I really suggest make (4) first and (1)(2)(3) later , a slider first to let player know the rhyme then circles is better imo
2. 01:34:356 (3) - hidden back arrow is confusing

1. 00:40:008 (3) - slider to 00:40:225 ?
2. 01:29:138 (3) - try this http://puu.sh/2XRL
3. 01:39:573 (4) - move to 01:39:356

1. 00:41:421 - add circle

1. 00:11:747 (2) - ctrl + r
2. 00:46:421 - add circle
3. 01:24:356 (4) - ctrl + r
4. 01:37:399 (2) - I suggest move it to stack on (4)

KSHR wrote:

modding 　<#modreqs>
(all suggestions)

SPOILER

Easy

1. 00:26:529 (5) - 1grid up nazi
2. 00:26:529 (5) - 終点のwhistleを削除して、棒部分にwhistle追加
3. 00:30:877 (5) - 1grid left nazi
4. 00:47:834 (5) - x:352 y:216, 00:48:269 (6) - x:308 y:284
   　　　　　　　 　　(6)と(1)のスぺーシングが広がっていたため
5. 00:48:269 (6) - finish削除、clap追加
6. 00:55:225 (3) - whistle削除、clap追加（前の同じリズムのところと付け方と合わせてます）
7. 00:58:703 (2) - ^
8. 01:07:616 (4) - 01:08:051に緑線(音量80%くらい？)を追加して、終点にfinish追加
   　　　　　　　 　　もしこれをした場合は、01:08:703 (5)までの間に緑線(音量60%)を忘れずに！
9. 01:17:834 (3) - 始点にclap追加、終点のclap削除
10. 01:19:573 (4) - clap追加
11. 01:26:529 (1) - 終点のclapを削除して、始点にwhistle追加
12. 01:36:964 (4) - whistl削除、clap追加

Normal

• 
  青線配置が気になりました（Normalをプレイする人たちは混乱するかも？）

1. 00:06:964 (2) - whistlt追加
2. 01:05:008 (6) - このスライダーにfinishをつけるなら、終点より始点の方がいいと思います
3. 01:06:964 (2) - clap削除
4. 01:07:616 (4) - finishを削除して、clap追加？
5. 01:08:051 (5) - 始点のfinishだけ音量を上げてみてはどうでしょうか（Easy, Hard, Insaneも）
   　　　　　　　 　　（歌詞で言うと、「奪われている～」みたいなイメージ）
6. 01:28:921 (3) - 始点にfinish追加
7. 01:36:095 (5) - 終点にwhistle追加

Hard

1. 00:13:921 (1) - 終点にwhislte追加
2. 00:15:008 (3) - whislte追加
3. 01:01:856 (T) - 緑線の削除
4. 01:09:682 (T) - ^
5. 01:17:834 (5) - 返しにwhistle追加
6. 01:18:703 (6) - 終点のwhistleを削除して、返しにwhistle追加
7. 01:21:312 (2) - 終点のwhislte削除
8. 01:22:182 (3) - 始点にwhistle追加
9. 01:30:877 (1) - 始点にfinish追加
10. 01:36:095 (5) - 始点のwhistle削除

Insane

1. 00:13:486 (8) - こんな感じの方が流れ的にいいかも？（個人的な考えかもしれませんがw）
2. 00:13:921 (9) - new combo追加して、00:14:356 (1) - このnew combo削除、00:16:095 (9) - new combo追加
3. 00:14:138 (11) - whistle削除
4. 00:15:008 (2) - 始点にwhistle追加
5. 00:16:095 (5,6,7,8,9) - こんな感じにスライダーを曲げてみてはどうでしょうか
   　　　　　　　 　　　　　　　ちなみに画像は、
   　　　　　　　 　　　　　　　(5) x:360 y:288, x:392 y:320, x:444 y:320
   　　　　　　　 　　　　　　　(6) x:476 y:144, x:464 y:196, x:420 y:224
   　　　　　　　 　　　　　　　(7) x:260 y:164, x:216 y:144, x:200 y:104
   　　　　　　　 　　　　　　　(8) x:284 y:180, (9) x:312 y:184
6. 00:46:095 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - コンボがちょっと長めかも

ふぁいとー！

YGOkid8 wrote:

sorry for the late mod.

General:
01:41:095 (1) - Start spinner at 01:41:312 - instead

Normal:
00:17:616 (1) - Start spinner at 00:17:834 - instead

Hard:
01:33:269 (6,7,) - Move (6,7) 2 right and 2 down (lvl4) so it goes directly through the middle of the previous (5)

nice map (y)

Rucker wrote:

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NatsumeRin wrote:

[General]
offset: +7 (450) ok~ offset +7
The time between the 2 kiai is a bit long (if it's a re-kiai technique), make it just 1/2 or 1/4 is enough.
ok. 1st,2nd kiai, 1/2 shorten

[Easy]
The diffculty setting is a little harsh for such a Easy imo. HP,AR,OD all -1. all -1
00:12:616 (1,2,3) - imo in this 0.75x part, you don't need to still follow the Distance Spacing multiplier very strictly, just make 1/1 circles have same spacing like 00:29:138 (2,3,4), means don't have a part stack with each other.
fixed
00:16:095 (2,3,4) - ^ ^
01:15:008 (1) - whistle? (both beginning and end) ok. add whistle

[Normal]
00:27:399 (6) - i suggest use a 1/2 repeated slider here. as it's very near the next section and about to start.
use 1/2 repeat slider
00:50:877 (3) - looks a little strange (because of 4's place), try this?
[attachment=0:f3b76]144.png[/attachment:f3b76]
changed it like that
01:13:486 (1,1) - whistle?　add whistle
01:40:660 (1) - add repeat? added

[Hard]
00:08:269 (5,6,7) - why the spacing is larger here... it's not a big deal but feels strange to me.mistake.. fixed
00:15:877 (6,7) - spacing is a bit far, compared to 00:15:008 (3,4) fixed
00:25:877 (7,8) - would be a little hard..? hmm..i don't think so.. sorry keep it now ;_;
00:31:747 (1) - notes comes just 1/2 after a spinner is not so good, maybe end this 1/1 earlier and then add a note at 00:34:790?
ok. fixed
00:45:225 (1) - clap miss oops.. add a clap
01:41:095 - add a note? added

[Insane]
Personally i think this song fits 1/4*2 (notes like oo oo) a lot, consider to use some?
hmm.. keep it now
00:17:508 (4) - i feel this is a bit extra...remove? removed
00:40:008 (4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4) - not complaining but this part is not that fun imo...ok.changed this part
01:05:551 - add a note? It's not fit this song...imo, sorry ;_;
01:15:660 (2) - maybe add whistle too. ^

Hinacle wrote:

＜Easy＞

1. 01:09:580 (6) - Remove clap and add whistle? fixed
2. 01:13:493 (5) - new combo? fixed

＜Normal＞

1. 00:26:971 (5) - x:256 y:88. 00:27:406 (6) - x360 y:152. I think place of here is good. fixed
2. 00:49:145 (5) - new combo? ok
3. 00:49:797 (1) - Remove new combo? ok
4. 01:12:841 (7,8) - 1 or 2 grid left (grid size: Tiny) 2grid left
5. 01:18:710 (1) - Remove new combo? ok
6. 01:22:189 (5) - looks a little strange. try this? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/132744　少し変えました
7. 01:30:015 (1) - add whistle at beginning? added
8. 01:32:623 (1) - Remove new combo? ok

＜Hard＞

1. 00:43:493 (3) - stack it. Perv: 0.01x http://puu.sh/4wMb ;_;
2. 01:13:493 (1,1) - Remove whistle and add finish? ほかのdiffに合わせてそのままにしておきます

＜Insane＞

1. 01:02:623 (2) - Remove clap and add whistle? fixed
2. 01:02:841 (3) - add whistle? added
3. 01:41:102 (x) - add noteadded

Faust wrote:

IRC suggestion on adding 1 more combo color.
added 1 more combo color (2→3)
Not a lot of things to point out.
But these are only very light suggestions, so you don't have to follow if you think you like it the way it is now.

Nothing actually wrong with the entire mapset.

Touching on Insane:

- 01:06:102 - I think this too close to the previous stack imo. You can shift this a little higher. changed a little

- 01:08:710 - Oh, this is nice thanks

- 01:22:189 - Maybe too close. hmm,sorry ;_; keep it now

- 01:35:558 - Actually, why not use a 1/4 slider like 3 - 4. If you do, don't forget the whistle. ok. fixed~

Rest are good. No kudosu is fine
ah.. sorry,already been give kds thanks for help,Faust

1. 00:06:536 - It's not recommended that use different BPM such as 75% in the easiest diff. If you insist, that would be fine, too.
   At least I think it's fairly easy enough

1. 01:07:189 (3,4) - I think use soft whistle here would be nice, normal finish sounds a bit loud

1. 01:07:189 (6) - Same to normal, soft whistle would fit music more IMO

1. 00:36:754 (5) - This slider would be hidden by previous slider while playing, hard to tell IMO
   
2. 00:55:341 (4) - Shouldn't this whistle be added to 3?
3. 01:07:189 (11), 01:07:623 (12) - Same, soft whistle
4. 01:11:319 (9) - Whistle instead of clap
5. 01:11:754 (3) - Remove whistle, it fit your previous sound partten

Breeze wrote:

おはようございます～ おはようございます
いい字体ですよ、すきですね 　

So you decide to delete video? If not, please add video and do a full-submit

swish wrote:

sorry,no video in this map

Because video of the same length as this song doesn't exist

sorry ;_;

[Easy]

1. 00:06:536 - It's not recommended that use different BPM such as 75% in the easiest diff. If you insist, that would be fine, too.
   At least I think it's fairly easy enough

[Normal]

1. 01:07:189 (3,4) - I think use soft whistle here would be nice, normal finish sounds a bit loud

[Hard]

1. 01:07:189 (6) - Same to normal, soft whistle would fit music more IMO

[Insane]

1. 00:36:754 (5) - This slider would be hidden by previous slider while playing, hard to tell IMO
   [attachment=0:f7800]0.jpg[/attachment:f7800]
2. 00:55:341 (4) - Shouldn't this whistle be added to 3?
3. 01:07:189 (11), 01:07:623 (12) - Same, soft whistle
4. 01:11:319 (9) - Whistle instead of clap
5. 01:11:754 (3) - Remove whistle, it fit your previous sound partten

other all fixed~

良いマップですね ありがとうございます
When you done changes, call me back for a bubble
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