-Aerith- wrote:

# Hello !!! Hitsound Mod from my Modding Queue #

Galaxy

as i said this is a Short Mod so.....Anyway here it is :
-00:51:358 instead of normal how about you use soft-hitclap but without the costum hitsound ?
-00:51:013 instead of normal-hitclap how about you use Drum-hitfinish but without the costum hitsound
-01:22:392 change it to finish i guess ?

Done! Thats all from me Good luck with your map. i like your style btw

hohol454 wrote:

Hi, NM from my queue

Galaxy
00:01:013 (1) - 1/6 applied
00:04:978 (2,3,4) - I think it looks better slightly rotated like this is fine
00:11:530 (1) - random, low SV is not the gimmick of the map so why have this here its certain piano note that stand out to me i did here to 00:33:599 (1) -
00:15:151 (1,4) - rotate so 4 begins inside 1 sliderbody not needed
00:21:185 (2,3) - fix blanket fixd
00:24:633 (6,2) - could do something with this overlap i think looks fine
00:28:944 (1) - is pretty much covered up by the stream. you could stack the sliderend with a circle in the stream or rotate it to make it more visible. 00:26:185 (1) - looks better since the red anchor is nearly perfectly stacked on a circle of the stream it doesnt matter players can remember aesthetics no need to make visible and i kinda like it a bit hidden sometims
00:39:461 (1,2,3,1) - kinda bothered that it's not perfectly vertically symmetrical im not symmetrical mapper
00:40:840 (1,2,3,4) - move the pattern so sliderend of 4 stacks with the big slider yeah makes sense thanks
00:42:392 (8) - why are not all of these sliders copy pasted? this one is noticably different there is different sounds there going on so i did a different sliderdesign.
00:45:323 (8,1) - change the starting point of the star so it continues the motion into 1 i want a slight sharp angle here tho
00:57:047 (2) - offscreenfixd
01:12:393 (2,2) - blanket I want ruined blanket here.
01:12:737 (2,1) - this jump is a bit excessive, compare with 01:09:978 (2,1) - no is fine cus this is a song transition nd literally twice stronger lul
01:13:944 (1,1,2) - these don't make a straight line i dont know what u mean i think looks fine
01:51:702 (1) - the curve is a bit wasted when there's nothing in it its fine tho
01:55:840 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1,2,3,4) - the hanzer stream would play better if it started at the same place like those back and forth jumps this is really good suggestion, applied :v
02:16:530 (5) - offscreen fixddd
02:23:254 (5) - different slider from othersoh how did that hppen fixd!!
02:56:530 (1,2) - ctl+h for better flow ruins 120 angle aesthetic
03:06:185 (1) - and the rest of kiai is kinda inconsistent with the rest of the map. This sound used to be a normal slider 02:19:289 (1) - plays pretty nice tho entirely different sections of the song dunno lol

interesting map, reminds me of probox's odyssey

zev wrote:

(i actually did apply some things he rack mentioned)

1. Add 'Zetera' to tags please. Guest mapper, so they deserve the credit.
2. Some of the kiai lines are unsnapped in the Hard and ANOTHER diffs. Please go through and fix those.
3. Zetera's diff uses tick rate 2 when the other diffs use 1. Both sound accurate to me, but I suggest choosing Tick Rate 1 for all the diffs as tick rate 2 gives Hard a max combo of 1127 while Another has a max combo of 1195. They seem very close to me, especially when you compare Another to Galaxy; 1351.
4. I feel the spread could use 1 more diff to make it even. There's a .9* star gap between Normal / Hard and Another / Galaxy roughly, but 1.8* gap between Hard and Another. To me that seems very unbalanced, because of that I suggest adding an Insane around 4* that incorporates short bursts of 1/4 rhythm so as to prepare for the streams in the final diffs.
5. 02:55:151 (1,2) - For the final 2 diffs, I feel on Another the high sv here fits because it's a kick slider that's shaped in a way so that it's bunched up, so the movement on the sliderbody doesn't have to be played. In Galaxy the sliders are too long to be played as kick sliders, so the speed feels forced in. I suggest adjusting the shapes in Galaxy so the sliders act more like 'kick sliders'.

• Personal opinion, but I feel HP could be toned down to maybe 5-5.5 because of the complex NC patterns.

1. 00:03:254 (2) - I feel a circle would be more interesting here because the kick sliders at 00:03:426 (3,4) - have more emphasis, so having the first note as a kick slider as well doesn't contrast the different strengths. You used a circle at 00:06:013 (3) - so I'm not sure why the same concept wouldn't apply.
2. 00:08:771 (2,1) - Because this pattern shares a similar visual concept to 00:03:426 (3,4) - 00:06:185 (4,5) - but is snapped differently, I feel could be misread. If you ctrl+g the heads of each slider separately it creates more distance from the notes, which I feel would better contrast the extended reverse.
3. 00:50:323 (1,1,2) - The emphasis sounds like it's on 2, so I feel 1 should be stacked under the other 1s so the jump is on 00:50:668 (2) - compared to 1 which shares the intensity of 00:49:978 (11,1,1) -
4. 01:07:564 - sounds like a loop of 00:51:013 - so to have the repeated sections play differently feels inconsistent. What I mean is 00:52:909 (1,2,3,4) - you have linear flow here but at 01:03:944 (1,2,3,4) - it's snappy. 00:56:185 (2,3) - perfect stack in contrast to 01:07:047 (1,2) - not-stacked. My point is it's hard to tell what idea you're going for, so it could make these patterns unpredictable. I highly suggest going through and making sure the concepts repeat with slight variations where it best suits the song and to keep the map engaging to play.
   Nice NC and Horizontal concept during the kiai
5. 03:36:531 (1,2) - I'm Not sure why you wouldn't stack these but stack 03:39:289 (2,3) - they sound similar so I feel different stacking styles would throw off the player.

1. 00:08:771 (3) - Because this pattern shares a similar visual concept to 00:03:426 (3,4) - 00:06:185 (4,5) - but is snapped differently, I feel could be misread. If you ctrl+g the heads of each slider separately it creates more distance from the notes, which I feel would better contrast the extended reverse.
2. 00:50:323 (29,1,2) - I feel you could better contrast the emphasis on 00:50:495 (1,2) - by spacing them out like so https://puu.sh/z5NJG/d512af5c2d.png I feel having the antijump on 00:50:668 (2) - would play too surprisingly because it's emphasis isn't as great as 1's.
3. 00:52:047 (4,1) - I think the stronger note is 4 so placing the NC here I feel would better represent the emphasis.
4. 01:53:944 (2) - I feel the kick slider here is confusing to play because the sound here isn't as emphasized as 01:52:564 (2) - so here it feels underwhelming. I suggest extending the reverse of 1 https://puu.sh/z5ODx/c222680c4d.jpg as it catches that sound while still serving as a 'cushion' to help with the upcoming slider.
5. 02:16:013 (2,1,2,3,4) - ^
6. 03:47:392 - I think you forgot the kiai burst here xp

1. 00:23:426 (1) - More of a personal opinion, but I feel 1/2 reverse sliders aren't that interesting to play. I think it'd look and play more engagingly if you use slider art instead.
2. 00:30:840 (1) - The start of this slider feels unexpected to me because the map has been simplified to 2/1 rhythm up until here, so throwing in a 1/2 click feels surprising. If you shorten the slider to the upcoming white tick I feel it captures the 1/8 layer while following the simplified rhythm.
   In general I feel the multiple reverse sliders are too simplified and static to play in comparison to the Hard diff. I feel you could incorporate more interesting slider shapes and 2/1 rhythm to make the diff more engaging to play. It's hard for me to judge the other aspects of the map based on this, so I'll let you decide how to go about handling the diff.

Bubblun wrote:

m4m from my queue (Sorry for the delay)

bubblun

General

1. Add 'Zetera' to tags please. Guest mapper, so they deserve the credit. ok
2. Some of the kiai lines are unsnapped in the Hard and ANOTHER diffs. Please go through and fix those.ok
3. Zetera's diff uses tick rate 2 when the other diffs use 1. Both sound accurate to me, but I suggest choosing Tick Rate 1 for all the diffs as tick rate 2 gives Hard a max combo of 1127 while Another has a max combo of 1195. They seem very close to me, especially when you compare Another to Galaxy; 1351.fair point, zetera decided to have slidertick 1
4. 02:55:151 (1,2) - For the final 2 diffs, I feel on Another the high sv here fits because it's a kick slider that's shaped in a way so that it's bunched up, so the movement on the sliderbody doesn't have to be played. In Galaxy the sliders are too long to be played as kick sliders, so the speed feels forced in. I suggest adjusting the shapes in Galaxy so the sliders act more like 'kick sliders'.no, these are practically played as two 1/2 circles in player perspective, feels really comfortable imo

Galaxy

• Personal opinion, but I feel HP could be toned down to maybe 5-5.5 because of the complex NC patterns. the song has a playful challenging vibe, you either can or can't play it which why it is 6.5

1. 00:03:254 (2) - I feel a circle would be more interesting here because the kick sliders at 00:03:426 (3,4) - have more emphasis, so having the first note as a kick slider as well doesn't contrast the different strengths. You used a circle at 00:06:013 (3) - so I'm not sure why the same concept wouldn't apply.want 1/4 gap and these are different melody of the song
2. 00:08:771 (2,1) - Because this pattern shares a similar visual concept to 00:03:426 (3,4) - 00:06:185 (4,5) - but is snapped differently, I feel could be misread. If you ctrl+g the heads of each slider separately it creates more distance from the notes, which I feel would better contrast the extended reverse.no, it's done on purpose, it cycles through the melody in a more engaging way then
3. 00:50:323 (1,1,2) - The emphasis sounds like it's on 2, so I feel 1 should be stacked under the other 1s so the jump is on 00:50:668 (2) - compared to 1 which shares the intensity of 00:49:978 (11,1,1) - yah
4. 01:07:564 - sounds like a loop of 00:51:013 - so to have the repeated sections play differently feels inconsistent. What I mean is 00:52:909 (1,2,3,4) - you have linear flow here but at 01:03:944 (1,2,3,4) - it's snappy. 00:56:185 (2,3) - the 1/2 synth works a bit differently on the 00:56:185 (2,3)
   -perfect stack in contrast to 01:07:047 (1,2) - not-stacked. My point is it's hard to tell what idea you're going for, so it could make these patterns unpredictable. I highly suggest going through and making sure the concepts repeat with slight variations where it best suits the song and to keep the map engaging to play. i think it looks ok,
   Nice NC and Horizontal concept during the kiai thanks
5. 03:36:531 (1,2) - I'm Not sure why you wouldn't stack these but stack 03:39:289 (2,3) - they sound similar so I feel different stacking styles would throw off the player.ok

Another
Same suggestion with the HP. Please consider

1. 00:08:771 (3) - Because this pattern shares a similar visual concept to 00:03:426 (3,4) - 00:06:185 (4,5) - but is snapped differently, I feel could be misread. If you ctrl+g the heads of each slider separately it creates more distance from the notes, which I feel would better contrast the extended reverse ok.
2. 00:50:323 (29,1,2) - I feel you could better contrast the emphasis on 00:50:495 (1,2) - by spacing them out like so https://puu.sh/z5NJG/d512af5c2d.png I feel having the antijump on 00:50:668 (2) - would play too surprisingly because it's emphasis isn't as great as 1's. i already like how it is however i've did something like that in Galaxy now
3. 00:52:047 (4,1) - I think the stronger note is 4 so placing the NC here I feel would better represent the emphasis.no, pink nc=piano
4. 01:53:944 (2) - I feel the kick slider here is confusing to play because the sound here isn't as emphasized as 01:52:564 (2) - so here it feels underwhelming. I suggest extending the reverse of 1 https://puu.sh/z5ODx/c222680c4d.jpg as it catches that sound while still serving as a 'cushion' to help with the upcoming slider. did somth, thanks
5. 02:16:013 (2,1,2,3,4) - ^ no
6. 03:47:392 - I think you forgot the kiai burst here xp

yej


@bubblun all reject mods about normal cause it's done on purpose, I have to make some calm rhythms so the main parts of the song stand out,
the surpringsly 1/2 snap in the intro was just to indicate 1/4 in a simplified manner

For Zetera, please consider the HP suggestion I gave for the other 2 diffs.zetera's hard is hp6 now,

Hard looked good. Gl with the set.

don't forget about my map please

Naotoshi wrote:

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[galaxy]
00:29:806 (4,5) - for this and the others, why not continue the overlapping idea? seems oddly detached atm imo i felt like i could bind different placement concepts depending on the pitch of the beep

02:45:755 (10) - probably nc this lol yehaj

02:55:151 (1) - wtf why is this like this, the other ones are all jumps...?? there is suspense building at this part and this is the outburst, it's like the same jump actually if you place a circle on the sliderhead.

02:56:185 (1,2,1) - this seems like a really awkward angle rhythm feels comfortable here so the the edgy angle plays cute

03:06:703 (1) - fundamentally all of these feel really way too overspaced for me. since they come out of very low velocity sliders, having fullscreen spacing puts a ridiculous amount of pressure on them that i really doubt they deserve. I want the ridiculous pressure because it's a prolonged emphasize for the impact sounds on 03:06:185 lowering wud feels underwhelming for me because the rhythm is weak here while the song is intense. so i have to compensate in spacing




03:11:702 (10) - nc? extending combo represents extended stream tbh

yea idk... i feel like sliders in the slower part could also make more cohesive patterns overall the song isn't cohesive though the beep pitch and piano are constantly like clashing with each other so mapping it cohesive wudnt make sense it's because it's pretty variable,

and the slow > fast slider parts are pretty overspaced yea wubs

[another]
IMO (imo) the perfect overlaps feel kind of forced, you sort of only use them in one small section and never anywhere else. i'm comfortable with it because it fits the aesthetics

00:56:875 (1) - circle>slider or circle+circle works better than repeat, the red tick is quite prominent imo i'll fix

01:42:909 (2,1,1) - wtf is thsi stacking idk i fix i map without sliderends xd

01:51:358 - worth following imo i keep this wubs>boring durms

02:17:564 (2,1) - lol ok

03:05:323 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1) - i feel like having more or less the exact same pattern on extra and on insane is pretty bad for spread
nerfed streams a little, that's cause it's an Another, making an light insane/hyper

Zetera wrote:

help my diff keeps vanishing