Shimotsuki Haruka - Secret Liqueur

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Net0
I think Imoutosan and Pinkheart are soulmates. Their destiny is to fill osu! with quality eroge maps -w-
Fushimi Rio

Net0 wrote:

I think Imoutosan and Pinkheart are soulmates. Their destiny is to fill osu! with quality eroge maps -w-
No, nonono, never :? not soulmates at all
Cherry Blossom
pinkheart and imoutosan are best ♥
Net0

imoutosan wrote:

Net0 wrote:

I think Imoutosan and Pinkheart are soulmates. Their destiny is to fill osu! with quality eroge maps -w-
No, nonono, never :? not soulmates at all
I think you understood wrong when I said soulmates :3 , don't worry, just saying you guys are awesome.
I'll edit this to a mod later on when the map is finished.
nhule12345
i cannot map , but can i contribute somethings as i want to show that i love your maps and your hard works ? :D

一滲むネオンに溶けてゆく音は 秘密の逢引(ノクターン)一
一Nijimu neon ni tokete yuku oto ha himitsu no nokutaan

夜を照らす街灯が紅く頬を染めてった
Yoru wo terasu gaitou ga akaku hoo wo sometetta

寄り掛かるその先 伝うあなたの体温
Yori kakaru sono saki tsutau anata no taion


飲み込んでくリキュ―ルは 二人きりの夢―夜(ユートピア)
Nomikon de ku rikyuuru ha futari kiri no yuutopia


塗られてく濁った 白と紅が交わる
Nurareteku nigotta shiro to akaga majiwaru


粉雪が舞う裏側
Konayuki ga mau uragawa


口付けの音だけ 響く小さな部屋で
Kuchidzuke no oto dake hibiku chiisana heya de


「大好き」と呟いた
「Daisuki」to tsubuyaita


ねぇ、もっと強く私を揺さぶってよ
Nee motto tsuyoku watashi wo yusabutteyo

首筋にキスをして
Kubisuji ni kisu wo shite


速くなる二人の鼓動は、甘い快楽(セレナーデ)だから
Hayaku naru futari no kodou ha amai serenaade dakara

背徳的(インモラル)な夜はまだ終わらないから
Inmoraru na yoru ha mada owaranai kara


その指で愛してと
Sono yubi de aishite to

零れた”何か”で潤んだ
Koboreta ”nani ka”de urun da

ねぇ、もっともっと 抱き締めて―
Nee 、motto motto dakishimete―

肩で息をしたまま
Kata de iki wo shita mama

重なる二つの影は
Kasanaru futatsu no kage ha

夜の中紛れて 何度もキスを交わす
Yoru no naka de magirete nando mo kisu wo kawasu

織りあう夜 美しく
Ori au yori utsukushiku

香る2つ巴
Kaoru futatsu tomoe

いつまでもこのままで
Itsumademo konomama de

二人きり 願うだけ
Futarikiri negau dake

ねぇ もっと強く私を悶えさせて
Nee motto tsuyoku watashi wo modaesasete

ただ白く溺れたい
Tada shiroku oboretai

伝わるその体温さえ
Tsutawaru sono taion sae

今はただ愛しくて
Ima ha tada itoshikute

口移しで飲ませた
Kuchi utsushide nomaseta

リキュ―ルの味は
Rikyuuru no aji ha

あなたのキスと同じ
Anata no kisu to onaji

意識が飛んでしまうくらい
Ishiki ga tonde shimau kurai

甘い快楽(セレナーデ)に溺れるの
Amai serenaade ni oboreru no

ねぇ もっと強く私を揺さぶってよ
Nee motto tsuyoku watashi wo yusabutte yo

首筋にキスをして
Kubisuji ni kisu wo shite

速くなる二人の鼓動は
Hayaku naru futari no kodou ha

甘い快楽(セレナーデ)だから
Amai serenaade dakara

小さな部屋に
Chiisana heya ni

滲む口付けの音に
Nijimu kuchidzuke no oto ni

まだ溺れていたいから
Mada oboreteitai kara

終わらない秘密の逢引(ノクターン)
Owaranai himitsu no nokutaan

ねぇ もっともっと愛してよ―
Nee motto motto aishiteyo―
Misure
soulmates
Fushimi Rio
是这样的 扶老二说你滑条太tm快了 让你把跳再搞大一点 现在最难的一段反而是一堆小跳 显得很不aim 很不pp 建议把kiai中间全换成大跳算了
hehe
soulmates
Topic Starter
PinkHeart

imoutosan wrote:

是这样的 扶老二说你滑条太tm快了 让你把跳再搞大一点 现在最难的一段反而是一堆小跳 显得很不aim 很不pp 建议把kiai中间全换成大跳算了
made some big jumps
Free Hong Kong
I have some thoughts for flower

00:40:806 (6,7) - I think if you are going to map this sound, you should also map 00:40:681 -

00:45:931 (3,4) - extending 3 like this doesn't make sense to me because for 00:43:931 (5) - you made the slider end to strong beat, though for 00:46:222 - there is no beat, at least you should snap it to the 1/4 like 00:45:056 (1) -

00:55:056 (1) - this should be 1/4 because of vocal sound 00:55:431 - , you do similar for 00:54:306 (2) -

01:00:056 (1,2,3,4) - I think this should have more circles, and be more specific to the sounds. similar to 00:52:431 (4,1,2,3,4) - and 00:44:431 (6,1,2,3,4) -

01:01:806 (3) - 01:02:806 (4) - 01:03:806 (3) - I think this should be 1/4 since the drum beat on 01:01:931 - 01:02:931 - 01:03:931 -

01:06:806 - I don't think you should skip this beat

01:21:056 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5) - I don't think this rhythm works well with song, since its more held out notes than lots of 1/4 ones. Which in my mind takes away from the importance of 01:24:056 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5) -

01:53:056 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4) - this should be more specific to the drums, they don't repeat like this
[Kamiya]
摸摸妹桑的

00:00:625 (1) - 这里开始,如果是按照人声(声优吐字的节奏)的话。那么00:01:413 - 到00:01:698 - 是一段,00:01:841 - 到00:02:127 - 这里应该算另一段。00:02:613 - 到00:02:935 - 一段,00:03:096 - 这里自分一段(这里做成单点或者跟后面00:03:258 - 00:03:419 - 组成滑条或者折返都星)
00:13:306 (2,3,4) - 这里虽然看着没问题。但节奏突然太快可能不会太适应。有点像sotarks新rank的那首Outside of Melancholy的开头 感觉很不友好。
00:15:722 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - 这里能理解跟后面节奏呼应 但是bgm里并没特别凸显出这种节奏 希望简单点。(滑条)
00:24:556 (11,1) - 没包好
00:27:306 (2,3) - 3没包好2的尾巴

就这些吧 以上个人意见(除了最后两个。。)

牛逼牛逼牛逼
Pata-Mon
req by 妹桑
然后摸不动
但是
00:19:931 (4,1) - stack
00:21:056 (1,5) - 既然要用这种梗的话那么堆叠系数最好调一下.看了一眼后面有影响的地方还蛮多的
00:21:972 (7,8) - stack
glgl
Fushimi Rio
大声告诉大家谁是最菜的
是我
Vert
m4m from imoduo

[general]
图全长不够05:00:056 - 00:00:625 - 差了半秒
没sb关widescreen support

[一抹多]
00:01:984 - 这里这个tick音不能想办法消掉吗,感觉很难受
00:25:555 (5) - 其实为什么不和前面的89叠起来呢
[扶老二]
00:44:431 (6,1) - 这个nc没问题吗
01:24:806 (5,6) - 换个滑条吧
01:30:556 (3,4,5,6) - 感觉不好看啊,我提个建议比如3放现在6,4包2,5放右下,6丢在左边
01:46:556 (3,4,5,6) - 类似,345这个钝角肯定吃屎,而且和前面比01:46:306 (2,3) - 这间距大太多了
01:53:056 (1) - 这一串能玩?
[Dxxxxxxxx]
02:07:931 (1,2) - blanket better?
02:57:931 (4,1) - ^
03:17:806 (2) - nc here
[粉心]
04:28:306 (2,2) - 没叠好吧
04:31:806 (3,2) - 调一下这俩应该能叠上
04:40:306 (2,1) - ^
04:45:722 (4,5,6) - 二连啊,喂一波屎,就像开头一抹多那样
04:53:722 (3,4,5) - ^
Crystal
shuang
blueloniess
既然是4个part 圈的,感觉没有必要分开了。
有图片说明,图源是imgur,估计要挂代理才能看到


00:01:413 (1,1) - 这里的节奏我是觉得挺怪的,这样应该舒服一点


00:04:503 (3,1) - 啊,虽然不影响,但是我有点强迫症...叠一下把...
00:15:722 (3,4) - 这个我有点想换成1/6滑条,当然,不换也不影响,只是换了之后好打一点而已.
00:22:556 (9) - 根据音乐节奏,这里应该NC
00:26:556 (9) - 同↑
00:30:556 (9) -
00:34:556 -

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00:44:556 (1,2,3,4) - 这么放成三角形感觉更加好看一点也更加pp一点 ;d



01:08:556 (2) - 理由同↑


01:22:056 (1,4,5) - 这里的5不建议跟1把,歌曲这里没有重音啥的,这里突然变距没看出想强调什么。建议跟歌曲走,跟前面一样DS就行.
01:53:056 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 爷爷...做成一个渐渐变大的跳如何,至少好打一点点吖...



02:04:306 (2,3,4,5,6,7,1) - 摆个正五角星如何
02:17:306 (2,3,4) - Ctrl+shift+D 做一个正三角形pls~
02:18:056 (6,7) - 这个flow有点怪,7拿开一点把


02:42:556 (6,7,8,2,3,4) - 这里,6的尾巴,7,8,后面的2,3,4的开头可以做个五角星


03:05:306 (2) - Ctrl+G 后成一个比较顺的flow把

04:15:306 (1,2,3) - 放成一个正三角型如何

04:16:056 (1) - 这个不好看,捏成这种躺着的感觉好一点








我还是太菜了,这种图根本摸不动。

感觉就是简单的水了一下而已.
:o:o
太神
ShirohaMyMommy
2017-05-13 00:51 Delis: henlo
2017-05-13 00:51 imoutosan: hi
2017-05-13 00:51 Delis: do you mod O.O
2017-05-13 00:52 imoutosan: umm, yes
2017-05-13 00:52 Delis: o mind me asking you for a mod then?
2017-05-13 00:53 imoutosan: send a pm would be fine
2017-05-13 00:53 imoutosan: I always forget request
2017-05-13 00:53 imoutosan: s
2017-05-13 00:53 Delis: do you mean in forum pm
2017-05-13 00:53 Delis: =.=
2017-05-13 00:53 imoutosan: yesh
2017-05-13 00:53 imoutosan: yes*
2017-05-13 00:53 Delis: okie!
2017-05-13 00:55 imoutosan: by the way can you do quick mods?
2017-05-13 00:55 imoutosan: I have a map need some mod too
2017-05-13 00:55 Delis: o
2017-05-13 00:55 Delis: a m4m thing would be great
2017-05-13 00:55 Delis: which one?
2017-05-13 00:55 imoutosan: ACTION is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/1169586 Shimotsuki Haruka - Secret Liqueur [Last order]]
2017-05-13 00:56 Delis: dl'ing
2017-05-13 00:57 Delis: is this a collab
2017-05-13 00:57 imoutosan: yes
2017-05-13 00:57 imoutosan: other diffs are just mappers' parts
2017-05-13 00:58 Delis: o I was hopefully going to do an irc mod lol
2017-05-13 00:58 imoutosan: I guess it's fine for my part...
2017-05-13 00:59 Delis: 03:04:306 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - this should be 1/3 D:
2017-05-13 00:59 Delis: oh alright..
2017-05-13 01:00 imoutosan: because I can't fix other's parts :(
2017-05-13 01:00 Delis: prolly just tell the mapper who made there lol
2017-05-13 01:01 imoutosan: um
2017-05-13 01:01 imoutosan: 00:37:056 - until here is mine
2017-05-13 01:01 imoutosan: then no more my parts
2017-05-13 01:01 imoutosan: ._.
2017-05-13 01:02 Delis: 00:01:413 (1) - the bpm is suspicious
2017-05-13 01:02 Delis: like, the vocal at 00:01:841 - isn't exactly there
2017-05-13 01:02 imoutosan: I see
2017-05-13 01:03 Delis: did you try bpm 93, and snap it in 1/6?
2017-05-13 01:03 Delis: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8067891
2017-05-13 01:03 Delis: this feels much right
2017-05-13 01:04 imoutosan: let me see
2017-05-13 01:04 Delis: though I'm not a timing person, not really sure with this lol
2017-05-13 01:04 imoutosan: seems much better
2017-05-13 01:05 imoutosan: I'll ask for some other people about it
2017-05-13 01:05 Delis: yea
2017-05-13 01:05 Delis: wow this song has really complicated rhythm
2017-05-13 01:06 imoutosan: I copied snapping from the ranked version
2017-05-13 01:06 imoutosan: I guess most rhythms would be fine...?
2017-05-13 01:07 Delis: 00:15:722 (3) - isn't this on the blue tick in 1/4?
2017-05-13 01:07 Delis: in the case there's the sax (or idk name) and the circle is following something else
2017-05-13 01:08 imoutosan: yeah i think so
2017-05-13 01:08 Delis: and the guitar is at 00:15:764 - lol
2017-05-13 01:09 imoutosan: hmm
2017-05-13 01:09 imoutosan: there's similar rhythms
2017-05-13 01:09 imoutosan: on 00:23:722 -
2017-05-13 01:09 imoutosan: maybe snapping to 1/6 is more consistent?
2017-05-13 01:11 Delis: but this still doesn't fit to the instrumentals properly?
2017-05-13 01:11 Delis: more like the timing is idk anything lol
2017-05-13 01:12 imoutosan: I don't know if players could notice the guitar
2017-05-13 01:12 Delis: well prob ask someone decent at timing i guess
2017-05-13 01:12 imoutosan: I guess so
2017-05-13 01:13 Delis: 00:28:431 (7) - a 1/4 slider here? the sax (i hope it is) plays to 00:28:556 - so to make a difference with the gaps you made around here
2017-05-13 01:13 Delis: such as 00:27:181 -
2017-05-13 01:15 Delis: 00:36:306 (1,2) - this is confusing in some aspect since it's overlapped with high-bpm single taps
2017-05-13 01:15 imoutosan: I see
2017-05-13 01:15 imoutosan: yea, so move it away from the slider?
2017-05-13 01:16 Delis: yep
2017-05-13 01:16 Delis: it's good to make a different pattern here because the song is much different from 00:35:806 (1,2,3) -
2017-05-13 01:17 Delis: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8068020
2017-05-13 01:17 imoutosan: I see, fixed
2017-05-13 01:17 Delis: this ruins your pattern so take it as an example
2017-05-13 01:17 Delis: :d
2017-05-13 01:18 imoutosan: I understand the idea
2017-05-13 01:18 Delis: 00:08:823 - the inherited line is unsnapping
2017-05-13 01:18 Delis: by 3ms
2017-05-13 01:18 Delis: I'd rather remove it
2017-05-13 01:18 Delis: because it doesn't change SV o
2017-05-13 01:18 Delis: yea i think you forgot to remove it lol
2017-05-13 01:19 imoutosan: I guess so
2017-05-13 01:19 Delis: um that's it you basically done cool patterns there
2017-05-13 01:19 Delis: and it's hard to mod only 30s!!
2017-05-13 01:20 imoutosan: ummmm actually I thought flower's part needs mod
2017-05-13 01:20 imoutosan: but irc happened before I could say this
2017-05-13 01:20 Delis: o I'd love to leave a mod for his part as well
2017-05-13 01:20 imoutosan: anyway it still helps a lot because I suck at timing lol
2017-05-13 01:20 Delis: "Flower‘s part"
2017-05-13 01:20 Delis: it's
2017-05-13 01:21 Delis: Flower's part
2017-05-13 01:21 Delis: XD
2017-05-13 01:21 imoutosan: oops
2017-05-13 01:21 imoutosan: ._.
2017-05-13 01:21 Delis: o
2017-05-13 01:21 Delis: flower takes longer part than you?
2017-05-13 01:21 Delis: it's unrankable iirc
2017-05-13 01:21 imoutosan: and everyone
2017-05-13 01:22 imoutosan: and I'm not the one who submit the map so it's fine ._.
2017-05-13 01:22 Delis: o
2017-05-13 01:22 Delis: fuck
2017-05-13 01:22 Delis: didn't really see that
2017-05-13 01:23 Delis: XD
2017-05-13 01:23 imoutosan: :D
2017-05-13 01:41 Delis: o so
2017-05-13 01:41 Delis: should probably post the mod with this log :D?
2017-05-13 01:41 imoutosan: I think so
2017-05-13 01:41 imoutosan: maybe just say irc modded with imoutosan could work too

so imouto3 asked me to take a look over flower's part, let's see what I can find out.
00:40:222 (4) - I would remove this note since this doesn't really play nice in terms of overmapping. compared to patterns that are similar to this one they're mostly covered by sliders not a single circle (00:45:931 (3) like this one), thus following it with a slider from 00:40:056 possibly could work better in playing wise.
00:59:056 (1,2) - this should be mapped on the vocals instead of nothing. 00:58:056 (1,2,3,4) is at least mapped to both the vocals and drums but the slider ends, though 00:59:056 (1,2) has literally no drums that can be mixed with 1/3 sliders nicely imo. a 1/2 slider and a circle at 00:59:431 could be enough and this still can accelerate the flow to the 1/3 slider at 00:59:556 (3)
01:02:556 (3) - isn't this supposed to be snapped in 1/4 for the guitar because you did the same for previous slider 01:02:306 (2) ?
01:53:056 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - lol this is too much for me .-.
hope I understand your mapping okay here lol.

03:04:306 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - besides flower's part, this should be snapped in 1/3 according to how the drums play. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8068236 actually this is the way to map the music properly if you care.
i am gay
Very great map! I would suggest one thing though:

-Maybe add a short break between 3.9% through 4.8% of the song, I'm a pretty bad osu player, and I find myself failing at that point easily. If you wanna know where those '%'s are, then go to the editor and look at the bottom left corner. (Just in case you didn't know)

I hope you get your map ranked very soon! Good luck to you!
J_8579
where's the hp 8

  1. 02:59:368 (3,4) - Ctrl+g (seems like your intention)



  2. 02:59:493 (4,1) - 10/10 blanket
  3. 02:02:493 (6,7,1) - So I noticed this is 1/8, but 04:46:118 (1,2,1,2) is 1/4. I compared both parts, and they sound musically the same. Can you explain why you made the first pattern 1/8 when there's no sound on yellow tick?
  4. 02:05:345 (4,5,6) - 04:49:220 (1,2,1,2) - ^
  5. 05:00:118 (1) - The music fades completely fades out at the end of the measure, so continuing the spinner past that doesn't make sense imo.

can't find much cus i'm bad at modding
J_8579
damn, didn't know you were already looking at the thread

added another point to my mod since you gave kudos
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