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sahuang wrote:

The OD Setting is very unreasonable in my opinion. Your previous Yearmix 2015 has a similar BPM (175 vs 176) and that one only has OD8. Given that 2016 is obviously much harder than 2015, I think OD9 would be more than enough. 10 is simply too high and won't do any good to your playcount (and rating) cuz it's a marathon and nobody wants to miss in the middle or get a very bad accuracy. OD 8 was way too little for the other marathon, od 9 would have been better for it, but this map is harder and longer, so it's easier to catch on the rhythm imo, OD 10 isn't as challenging as you think

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Strategas
01:02:899 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - I really think it's a bad idea to use such stream at the beginning of the song when the music is not so intense. In fact you used a much more friendly and small spaced stream 01:24:547 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4) - when the drums are actually more intense. It would really nice if you reduce ds a bit here. remade
01:04:092 (9,1,2,1,2,1) - judging from music the NC should be on 01:04:092 - 01:04:433 - 01:04:774 - so 01:04:092 (9,1) - 01:04:433 (2,1) - 01:04:774 (2,1,2,3,4) - are the three groups. Therefore 01:04:433 (2,1) - the spacing is very unreasonable, 01:04:774 (2) - should be emphasised instead. aesthetic ncs tho :( patterns look gross with ncing the white ticks, fixed the spacing
01:13:127 (5,6,7) - 01:32:558 (7,1) - sudden spacing?? They are kinda unexpected seems fine to me, both are very strong notes
01:34:263 (2,3,4) - dont expect a triplet cuz there's no 1/4 sound? there is a tripple here in the, it goes with the melody well but I made it made consistant with others, by not having clickable blue tick
01:36:990 (2) - same here
09:01:621 (2) - not sure if you need it here. Your other rhythms just ignore this, I don't really need it but it's cool and works well with transition
09:19:604 (2) - why not use a triplet stronger vocal here
11:20:627 (1,1,1,2,1,2,1,1) - 11:25:911 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - etc. I didn't get the NC spam in this section enable custom combo colors, maybe it will make some sense xd
11:39:206 (1) - i dont think this is necessary to NC, or swap with 11:39:717 (1) - as you did later on k
16:49:092 (1) - why nc when you didnt in other places removed
17:12:615 (1,1) - not sure if its fine to block the reverse arrow it's visible in game 2 beats with ar 9.5 is enough
17:48:922 -17:59:661 (3) - 18:05:115 (4) - i think ending slider at 1/2 is better, and add a circle at 3/4 changed all except 17:59:661 (3) - because I like how it looks
23:17:067 (5) - wtf ASPIRE??? sooo confusing same for others?? not sure if its k especially for total reverse like 23:29:340 (1) - made it look gross but rankable now


Should be all. milan and pishi god mappers
thanks!!!!!!!
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sahuang wrote:

Cheese
13:15:342 - this is a downbeat tbh so better make it clickable. consider using the same rhythm in 13:14:661 (4,1,2,3,4) - as 13:09:206 (5,1,2,3,4) - id rather keep it as is since im following lyrics where i can
13:40:911 (1,2) - need more aesthetics hell yea
14:04:604 (3,1) - probably reduce spacing a bit? its a bit surprised to me when im playing, not expecting such a big ds lol ok
osu file format v14

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Title:Liquicity Yearmix 2016
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Artist:Maduk
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Creator:Strategas
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Tags:ekgame _Kise Secretpipe Milan- NeilPerry GenDoNL Cheesecake DahplA pishifat nasobol90 M a r v o l l o m_a_r_v_o_l_l_o Come[Back]Home cbh Dan Dakota Stood In The Dark NCT Golden Hour ft. Deuce & Charger Champion What I Need VIP Maduk Never Give Up Cartoon Here Voicians Survival League Smooth Oxygen Monrroe Stay (feat. Charlotte Haining) Dualistic Subsequent Sunrise Ella Edlan Shadow ft Emy Perez (Original Mix) Hugh Hardie Light it up Dodge Fuski Your Love (Mob Tactics Remix) Madface Long Way Piece of U Flux Pavilion Matthew Koma Emotional Draper Feint Take It Koven Qbig Sleepless (VIP) Mitekiss Final Hours GLXY Malaky Marquis Pola Bryson Whisper To Me Sammie Bella Indivision Vitro Faceless (ft. Moleman Pipistrelle) Pogo No Worries Hybrid Minds Rainer Grimm Do Right Thomas Hayes Futuristik Waterborne Miyoki Metrik Cadence Reija Lee Little Bit Johnny Stimson We Go Again Atlantic Connection Got Thinking (ft Veela) Fox Stevenson Flash
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posted

sahuang wrote:

nasobol
15:38:609 (3) - no sound to support your 1/4 ?? there is one
15:39:206 (7,2) - need blanket here adjusted
15:39:547 (1,3) - the flow is kinda bad because of 15:39:888 (3) - curve. Try adjust the curve so the triangle flows naturally modified
15:41:252 (1,1) - why NC? they belong to one part. fixed
15:42:274 (1,2) - it would be better if you try with the same slider shape. Just because its better in aesthetics lol fixed
15:47:047 (4) - this is ugly, since you dont need the red anchor here. not ugly imo but fixed
15:47:388 (1,3) - space them as you did before for the equilibrium tri ye
15:53:524 (4) - same as mentioned above ^
16:01:706 (1) - not sure why you use this reverse cuz the strong beats were on 16:01:877 - 16:02:047 - Strong beats aren't that strong in that song, so i decided to emphasis a sound that reapeats each time (louder that beats too) to increase rhythm variety. i find it really hard to find wich beats are stronger in this song, but it's maybe because of my earphones xd
16:01:365 (6,1) - 16:03:070 (1,1,3,1) - etc please redo the NC here, it looks so messy. I dont know your undergoing logic lol changed
16:04:433 (1) - same. ^
16:08:183 (1,3) - aesthetics improved
16:10:740 - actually make a triple here, its quite obvious not that obvious, but done
16:11:422 (3,4) - judgin by the song you should swap the thyrhm swap the rhythm? what?
16:12:274 - it is clickable ehh yea?
16:13:638 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - more aesthetics please. The circles seem too random and they dont look good that wasn't random but mofied a bit
16:19:092 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - alright i will take this as an example...so basically you are not mapping to the beats. We know that the drum is more intense at 16:19:092 (1,3,6,7) - than the others, so its more reasonable to emphasis them better. Not just mapping 8 circles with a shape being very random and casual.
=fixed, but yk i'm not the best mapper in the universe, but i understand that thing, no need to explain nor to insist on my error. I don't have very much mapping exprience too, so plz be a little bit more gentle.

So basically idk why you keep using the reverse slider like 16:18:070 (3) - , they are weird af they aren't
. And aesthetics definitely need more improvement. yea maybe
Especially compare it with other collab parts. This needs to be reworked, im not so satisfied with its quality atm. i'm the worse mapper of that marathon and the less experienced one, it's hard for me, even if i spend time on my map.

thanks
posted
wow
  1. 00:39:547 (1,2,3,4,5) - 00:41:422 (3,4,5,6,7) - 00:42:615 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - Considering this is the first song, changing 1/4 stream to reverse sliders would help people build up. What's more, 00:35:456 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4) - You skipped 1/2 transition, that feels a little abnormal.
  2. 01:22:161 (3,4) - This transition plays really bad, following synthesizer (1/4) here would be better ( 01:22:331 (4) - to 01:22:672 (6) - )
  3. 01:44:831 (1,2,1,2) - Distance changes looks unreasonable.
  4. 02:10:911 (1,2) - I'm not sure but 1/3 snap here seems off a bit
  5. 05:53:524 (2,3,4) - 06:04:433 (2,3,4) - better rhythm
  6. 06:12:871 (5) - 06:18:325 (5,7) - Overmapped, there isn't any synth here, I won't mention more, or you could at least hitsound those overmpped triples so they would give better feedback.
  7. 09:16:024 (7) - 09:37:842 (7) - NC to hint rhythm change, I won't mention more.
  8. LOL Deconstruction Star -> tsubaki -> Monstrata
  9. 11:25:911 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - LOL
  10. 11:30:342 (2,3,4) - This is a not good gimmick cuz you don't introduce it properly before
    Reference: Difficulty Spike
  11. 16:21:820 (1) - 17:27:104 (1) - these two parts look better than previous part you mapped
  12. 20:39:377 (4) - A bit intense cuz you used a reversed slider before it
  13. 21:22:672 (6) - maybe place it further?
  14. 22:17:388 (5,1) - Reverse arrow is completely visually obstructed by that circle, it's unrankable.
  15. 23:47:728 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - LOL
  16. 24:21:563 - you missed rhythm here

Good luck but I prefer Monstercat
posted

sahuang wrote:

DahplA
14:23:354 (2,3) - i recommend you to reduce spacing here, the sound is not as intense as 14:24:036 (6,7) - tbh The spacing emphasises the hard beats, and considering they are both placed on claps, I think the spacing is appropriate. Also the song's 'tone' is going from high to low, so I think this whole combo works well to represent that.
14:27:274 (1) - see no reason to extend slider when 14:27:445 - is much more obvious than 3/4 The whole section has been mapped similarly. I've chosen to highlight the 'long' (I don't know what the name of it is, but I'm sure you know what I mean) sound at the start of each other downbeat.
14:35:797 (2,3) - very misleading spacing without any notice or sign. This is kind of bad at the middle of a marathon... maybe you can do some other patterns, or ctrl+G 14:36:308 (3) - but then you have to adjust spacings later on The difficulty implies that higher performing players will play this map. This shouldn't be too demanding to read. Once the player has seen the initial hit area, they'll realise it's more than just a circle, and play it as a slider. Additionally, using the same slider shape also helps players read this section better. Adjustments have already been made to make this part play well.
14:38:524 (2,3) - same, consider 14:43:979 (2,3) - is good
14:46:706 (2,3) - 14:50:456 (1,2) - no Since these address the same issue, the response won't change.
hmm after considering that you're doing such pattern consistently in your part, maybe NC the second slider at all places so players would expect sth different? the 1/2 really looks like 1/4 imo
Thanks anyways :)
posted

NeilPerry wrote:

Hello! Let me mod some.:D

General: Dont find any issuses

Marathon:

28:04:092 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - disagree with this jump part. It's emphaze nothing D: I wanna keep it though
28:10:058 (4,5) - same thing this one does

Sinnoh wrote:

ComeBackHome
28:28:296 (5,1) - Increase spacing? yep

sahuang wrote:

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cbd
28:06:308 (4,5) - hoyl this spacing is too bigg reduced
28:07:501 (3) - i feel this is better with 2 circles, 28:07:671 - basically is loud okay
28:23:864 (3) - 28:32:046 (3) - same Okay
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Lavender wrote:

wow
  1. 00:39:547 (1,2,3,4,5) - 00:41:422 (3,4,5,6,7) - 00:42:615 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - Considering this is the first song, changing 1/4 stream to reverse sliders would help people build up. What's more, 00:35:456 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4) - You skipped 1/2 transition, that feels a little abnormal. changed
  2. 01:22:161 (3,4) - This transition plays really bad, following synthesizer (1/4) here would be better ( 01:22:331 (4) - to 01:22:672 (6) - ) tried something
  3. 01:44:831 (1,2,1,2) - Distance changes looks unreasonable. seems fine to me 01:45:172 (1,2) - feels much stronger
  4. 02:10:911 (1,2) - I'm not sure but 1/3 snap here seems off a bit, it's the closest it can get
  5. 05:53:524 (2,3,4) - 06:04:433 (2,3,4) - better rhythm
  6. 06:12:871 (5) - 06:18:325 (5,7) - Overmapped, there isn't any synth here, I won't mention more, or you could at least hitsound those overmpped triples so they would give better feedback. there are notes there, but made them hitsounded I guess
  7. 09:16:024 (7) - 09:37:842 (7) - NC to hint rhythm change, I won't mention more. ok
  8. LOL Deconstruction Star -> tsubaki -> Monstrata
  9. 11:25:911 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - LOL yes
  10. 11:30:342 (2,3,4) - This is a not good gimmick cuz you don't introduce it properly before yeah I removed other one's before just forgot about this
    Reference: Difficulty Spike
  11. 16:21:820 (1) - 17:27:104 (1) - these two parts look better than previous part you mapped and the least effort required
  12. 20:39:377 (4) - A bit intense cuz you used a reversed slider before it ?
  13. 23:47:728 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - LOL square
  14. 24:21:563 - you missed rhythm here emphasized snare drum by undermapping

Good luck but I prefer Monstercat monstercat is cool too
thanks
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Worminators wrote:

[*]02:46:024 (5,6,7,8) - ctrl+j this for a cleaner emphasis, better flow maybe, rearrange reverses sliders then if you apply changed entirely - removed jump streams
[*]02:49:092 - I think there are missing hitsounds during the 1/4 jumps part, some sliders sounds silent (edit: that may be my osu! client because of low fps idk) probably your client
[*]02:51:820 (1,1,1,1,1) - according to the RC there should be a 1/4 gap between buzz reverse sliders to prevent unfair sliderbreaks there are 1/4 gaps already

sahuang wrote:

niyuji
02:45:683 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - honestly i dont think spaced 1/4 stream is cool here, because 1/4s are kind of vague and whats more, it feels too sudden to do a spaced movement when the other notes are just reverse sliders. Of course, it's fine if u keep this but from gameplay aspect it's better to nerf a little xD replaced spaced streams with two sets of 2+1
02:53:524 (1,1) - maybe reduce distance a bit, and 02:54:036 (2,3,4) - is too spaced when music is very still placed 02:53:865 (1) - closer as well as 02:54:036 (2,3,4) -
03:15:854 (1,2,3,4) - would be good if you make a linear stream, just move 03:15:854 (1) - changed ending a little
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NeilPerry wrote:

Hello! Let me mod some.:D

03:47:388 (4) - hi im nazi. Try move it on x:141 y:183 :Dok
21:41:252 - will be cool to place note here. I understand abt vocal emphaze BUT TOO STRONG CLAP aaa. so plz: http://puu.sh/xhiZJ/10e18bb033.jpg :Dyes

DendyMudak wrote:

Hi

Secretpipe
03:22:331 (3) - ugly adjusted a bit

PoNo wrote:

03:32:388 (3,1) - eeeh fix

03:39:036 (3) - A kick slider here could be better cause the rhythm can be hard to read for the first time and thats looks better to me ye

03:49:433 (2) - this looks a bit too close to the end of the slider ye

Sinnoh wrote:

Secretpipe
03:49:092 (1,2) - Can you make this more readable as a 3/4 slider? None have been used after almost 4 minutes and it looks fairly similar to 1/1 sliders. Just moving the circle closer to tail should be fine yes
22:17:388 (5,1) - Unreadable slider repeat on any skin with a 300 hit animation, plenty of other options yes

[ IWeenox ] wrote:

[secretpipe]

20:55:058 (3) - you made this note clickable before why not here ? variety, it also repeats later

Waku wrote:

Secretpipe
  • I wouldn't really point out blanket issues in a marathon, but 03:32:388 (3,1) - is really noticeable, so something like https://puu.sh/xpPjg.png would look much better (also remember if you change this you will need to move 03:33:070 (2,3,4,5) - ) yep

    I don't understand why you overlapped 03:47:729 (1,4) - you never used this type of overlapping before so adding it now just feels weird to the aesthetics of the whole part. It can easily be changed be just moving (4) around. doesn't seem to matter, it blankets the slider head which is good enough

    21:22:842 (7,1) - This is also an easily noticeable blanket, but not that hard a fix since you only need to move the slider end around :3 yep

    21:38:695 (3,4) - Same as above, although (3) is fading away, still noticeable so fixing the slider end of (4) would make the blanket look better yes

Worminators wrote:

  1. 03:27:104 (1,2,3) - this curve with the triples looks/flows bad, would be better if it was linear imo adjusted
  2. 05:18:411 (1,2) - this blanket is off and particulary visible
  3. 08:16:365 (3,1) - the way these sliders overlaps looks bad and could be improved
  4. 22:17:388 (5,1) - according to RC, reverse arrow should be clearly visible, even though this is not totally unreadable, it sure is confusing with some skins yes
  5. 22:24:888 (2,3) - fix this blanket yes

sahuang wrote:

Secretpipe
03:32:388 (3,1) - blanket yes
03:41:252 (1,2) - looks bad tbh yes
03:43:297 (3,4,5,1) - need blanket yes
03:41:933 (3,4,5,1,2) - the flow is a pain here tbh yes
Obviously needs more aesthetics
21:16:877 (3,4,5) - spacing is confusing yes
21:18:752 (5,5) - etc for these kind of sliders as the sound is similar try to use the same length think it's fine for variety
21:22:502 (5,6) - maybe separate them? its a strong beat, so you can put 21:22:672 (6) - somewhere like 463|336 etc yes
22:13:297 (7,1) - maybe not such a small overlap, feels weird yes
22:17:388 (5,1) - the reverse arrow is fully covered and their duration is so low. yes
22:16:365 (1) - should be 1/2? extending the strong sound
22:20:286 (5) - NC yes
22:26:933 (6,7) - wow sudden spacing boost made a bit smaller, say if it needs more nerf
22:27:786 (3) - the reverse here does not fit music yes

Lavender wrote:

  1. 21:22:672 (6) - maybe place it further? ok
  2. 22:17:388 (5,1) - Reverse arrow is completely visually obstructed by that circle, it's unrankable. ok
replied for secretpipe cuz he ded
posted
im dead and im truly sorry

good luck to all of you guys
posted
Even though I still cannot agree with some mappers on some parts, they seem much better than before.

Since my concerns are minor, I will bubble the map for now.
posted
wait why is the map od10
posted
Strategas

01:05:456 (1) - Kinda lame to have the first kick be a slider-end.
01:45:002 (2,1) - Jump felt quite forced tbh... it's not really a strong beat until 2 for the snare.
08:40:058 (3,4,5,6) - The arrangement just looks really confusing imo cuz of how 08:39:547 (1,2) - are spaced the same but are 1/2
16:27:274 (1,2,3,4,1,2) - Break them into more NC's or make them a single NC? kinda looks bad that the 3rd slider is a different combo but meh maybe its just me
17:03:240 (4,5,6,7,8) - Ehh... idk about this stream aesthetic, it just really doesn't fit what you've been using so far imo
17:40:911 (1,3) - Could position this a bit better visually.
20:20:456 - How about a break here? Short breaks are kinda cool imo
23:36:328 (4) - Repeat isn't pointing exactly where 5 is. Cool concept though :D I remember doing this on one of my really old Kuroko maps haha.


Milan-


04:50:115 (5) - Ctrl+H'ed pattern would be cool here. Like something similar to 04:49:092 (1) - ?

NeilPerry

05:36:649 (5,1) - Needs a jump I think..

[]

Yea
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Monstrata wrote:

Strategas

01:05:456 (1) - Kinda lame to have the first kick be a slider-end. more emphasis on the first downbeat that way, which is more important in this case
01:45:002 (2,1) - Jump felt quite forced tbh... it's not really a strong beat until 2 for the snare. adjusted a bit, not too much cuz there's other strong sound other than drum on it, but snare is bigger now
08:40:058 (3,4,5,6) - The arrangement just looks really confusing imo cuz of how 08:39:547 (1,2) - are spaced the same but are 1/2 moved 2
16:27:274 (1,2,3,4,1,2) - Break them into more NC's or make them a single NC? kinda looks bad that the 3rd slider is a different combo but meh maybe its just me yea
17:03:240 (4,5,6,7,8) - Ehh... idk about this stream aesthetic, it just really doesn't fit what you've been using so far imo, agree, but I'm using it as indication that something is changing, hopefully it wokes the player not to mess up the following pattern
17:40:911 (1,3) - Could position this a bit better visually. tried
20:20:456 - How about a break here? Short breaks are kinda cool imo did
23:36:328 (4) - Repeat isn't pointing exactly where 5 is. Cool concept though :D I remember doing this on one of my really old Kuroko maps haha. done, and would be cooler if I could keep the slider shape normal but repeat arrow broken alone B) (like it was before)


Milan-

04:50:115 (5) - Ctrl+H'ed pattern would be cool here. Like something similar to 04:49:092 (1) - ? he did it

NeilPerry

05:36:649 (5,1) - Needs a jump I think.. he did it

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Yea
thanks!
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I'm sorry I have to be the bearer of bad news, but as it stands the length of the map goes over 2,147,483,647 score when converted to catch when any mod is applied. Since the map has the possibilty of going over the cap and causing issues with the leaderboards, the map is unrankable with the current lenght. Just to be sure I discussed this with Deif because I really didn't want to have to pop this (this map is seriously amazing) but due to the limits of the scoring system changes need to be made to the map

As seen below a No Mod FC doesn't reach the cap


But HD being applied, HDHR or 4 mod (which I just did first as a test) goes over the score.

Score goes over limit at around 9200 combo
Score goes over at around 8700 combo
Score goes over limit at around 8k combo



The only solution, as much as it sucks, would be to cut the map down. Turning down OD didn't do enough to avoid the issue. Similar issue happened here: p/5780082 and the solution there was cutting the song down until the score didn't go over the limit of the scoring system.

Now as for how much you'll need to cut, probably making it so HDHR scores don't go over the limit is probably the safest best, since it's not really reasonable to think anyone will ever FL or HDHRDT this.
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nerf osu! score system
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Tbh just make one combo right in the middle that is basically impossible to hit in catch and ur good
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remove converts
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