ok lets finish this off
Exterminate
02:14:565 (134565|3,134565|2,134701|2,134701|3,134837|3,134837|2,134974|3,134974|2,135110|2,135247|3,135383|2,135383|3,135519|2,135519|3) - ehhh?
02:18:792 (138792|2,138792|3,138928|0,138928|1,139065|2,139065|3) - seems so out of place, just change the jacks around aka
02:23:701 (143701|3,143837|3,143974|3) - not a good idea
02:27:247 (147247|1,147383|1,147519|1,147656|3,147656|1,147792|3,147928|3,148065|3,148337|3,148474|3,148610|3) - considering the other parts that sounded similar to this were more dense, this section should be too
02:29:837 (149837|1) - move to 1 because 02:29:565 (149565|1,149701|1,149837|1) -
02:30:247 (150247|2,150247|3,150383|3,150383|2,150519|0,150519|2,150656|3,150656|1,150792|0,150792|2) - ctrl-H to avoid too many one-handed jacks
02:32:156 - the following seems better fitted with the music
02:34:337 (154337|0) - note but no sound
02:34:610 (154610|3) - note doesn't need to be there
02:36:519 (156519|2,156519|3,156656|1,156656|0,156792|3,156792|0) - same pattern as suggested before or something similar like [14][23][14]
02:38:974 (158974|2,159110|3,159247|0,159519|3) - I feel like this section is too unnecessarily dense
if you're going to have 02:54:247 (174247|3,174383|3) - as a jack, don't have the following jack (aka 02:54:656 (174656|3,174792|3) - ) in the same column because it doesn't feel right
03:06:656 (186656|1) - move to 4 for PR
03:07:474 (187474|1,187474|0,187747|3,187747|2) - make these full 1/2
03:09:656 (189656|2,189656|0,189928|3,189928|1) - same
03:11:837 (191837|2,191837|1,192110|3,192110|0) - same
03:16:201 (196201|2,196201|3,196474|2,196474|3) - don't do this, make them different columns
if you decide against that, at least don't do this 03:18:383 (198383|3,198383|2,198656|2,198656|3,198928|3,198928|2) -
03:36:110 (216110|0,216247|0,216383|0,217474|0,217610|0,217747|0,217883|0,217883|1,218019|1,218156|0,218156|1,218292|0) - beware your hand-based jacks
considering 03:44:565 (224565|2,224565|3,224701|2,224701|3,224837|2,224837|3,224974|3,224974|2) - are right hand, make 03:48:928 (228928|3,228928|2,229065|2,229065|3,229201|3,229201|2,229337|2,229337|3) - left hand and then change up 03:47:837 (227837|0,227837|1,227974|1,227974|0,228110|0,228110|1) - this pattern
03:52:201 - at least if you're gonna do mini LNs keep it going for the entire section
03:57:110 (237110|2,237247|2,237383|2,237519|2,237792|2,237928|2,238065|2) - too many jacks
03:58:747 (238747|2,238883|2,239019|2,239156|2,239292|3,239428|3,239565|3,239701|3,239837|3,239974|3,240110|3,240247|3) - this poor right hand
04:15:110 (255110|2,255247|2,255519|2,255656|3,255656|2,255792|3) - hmmmm
I guess the only thing I can say is watch out for the density in those dense LN parts but considering it's 110bpm it might be fine
02:18:792 (138792|2,138792|3,138928|0,138928|1,139065|2,139065|3) - seems so out of place, just change the jacks around aka
02:23:701 (143701|3,143837|3,143974|3) - not a good idea
02:27:247 (147247|1,147383|1,147519|1,147656|3,147656|1,147792|3,147928|3,148065|3,148337|3,148474|3,148610|3) - considering the other parts that sounded similar to this were more dense, this section should be too
02:29:837 (149837|1) - move to 1 because 02:29:565 (149565|1,149701|1,149837|1) -
02:30:247 (150247|2,150247|3,150383|3,150383|2,150519|0,150519|2,150656|3,150656|1,150792|0,150792|2) - ctrl-H to avoid too many one-handed jacks
02:32:156 - the following seems better fitted with the music
02:34:337 (154337|0) - note but no sound
02:34:610 (154610|3) - note doesn't need to be there
02:36:519 (156519|2,156519|3,156656|1,156656|0,156792|3,156792|0) - same pattern as suggested before or something similar like [14][23][14]
02:38:974 (158974|2,159110|3,159247|0,159519|3) - I feel like this section is too unnecessarily dense
if you're going to have 02:54:247 (174247|3,174383|3) - as a jack, don't have the following jack (aka 02:54:656 (174656|3,174792|3) - ) in the same column because it doesn't feel right
03:06:656 (186656|1) - move to 4 for PR
03:07:474 (187474|1,187474|0,187747|3,187747|2) - make these full 1/2
03:09:656 (189656|2,189656|0,189928|3,189928|1) - same
03:11:837 (191837|2,191837|1,192110|3,192110|0) - same
03:16:201 (196201|2,196201|3,196474|2,196474|3) - don't do this, make them different columns
if you decide against that, at least don't do this 03:18:383 (198383|3,198383|2,198656|2,198656|3,198928|3,198928|2) -
03:36:110 (216110|0,216247|0,216383|0,217474|0,217610|0,217747|0,217883|0,217883|1,218019|1,218156|0,218156|1,218292|0) - beware your hand-based jacks
considering 03:44:565 (224565|2,224565|3,224701|2,224701|3,224837|2,224837|3,224974|3,224974|2) - are right hand, make 03:48:928 (228928|3,228928|2,229065|2,229065|3,229201|3,229201|2,229337|2,229337|3) - left hand and then change up 03:47:837 (227837|0,227837|1,227974|1,227974|0,228110|0,228110|1) - this pattern
03:52:201 - at least if you're gonna do mini LNs keep it going for the entire section
03:57:110 (237110|2,237247|2,237383|2,237519|2,237792|2,237928|2,238065|2) - too many jacks
03:58:747 (238747|2,238883|2,239019|2,239156|2,239292|3,239428|3,239565|3,239701|3,239837|3,239974|3,240110|3,240247|3) - this poor right hand
04:15:110 (255110|2,255247|2,255519|2,255656|3,255656|2,255792|3) - hmmmm
I guess the only thing I can say is watch out for the density in those dense LN parts but considering it's 110bpm it might be fine
Hard
00:04:747 - until 00:44:019 - look back in the mod I posted yesterday
00:48:928 (48928|2,49065|0) - ctrl-G
00:53:565 (53565|0,53701|1,53974|1,54110|0,54247|1,54383|0) - hand balance
00:57:110 (57110|2) - move to 1 it just looks nicer
00:58:201 (58201|2,58474|2,58747|2,59019|2) - watch your anchors man
01:00:656 (60656|3) - move to 3 because inner trills > outer trills
01:01:065 (61065|1,61065|0,61201|1,61201|3,61337|2,61337|0) - just make this a regular [12][34][12] JT it'll play better in the long run
01:05:019 (65019|1,65292|1,65428|1) - be careful with this in a low star diff
01:07:883 (67883|1,68019|2) - ctrl-G to avoid too much stress on the left hand
01:11:565 (71565|3,71701|1) - being the same density as 01:10:883 (70883|2,71019|3,71156|1,71292|2,71428|0) - doesn't feel right, I'd just delete those notes
01:12:110 (72110|1,72247|2) - move over one column to the right for same reason as before, if you do that move 01:12:383 (72383|3) - to 1
01:13:201 (73201|2,73201|0,73610|2,73610|1) - why are these suddenly doubles, same 01:15:383 (75383|0,75383|2,75792|2,75792|3) -
01:20:156 (80156|2,80292|2,80565|2,80701|2) - would HIGHLY AVOID these patterns in a low star diff, these shields would prob be hard enough for the players to hit in the first place, go through this section and just sort out those patterns
main melody sounds are 01:28:201 (88201|1,88610|0,89019|1) - and 01:29:428 - which is completely ignored for some reason
01:30:383 (90383|1) - move to 1 and 01:30:656 (90656|2) - to 2 also see previous note on main melody sounds
01:32:292 (92292|2,92428|0) - what are these notes for?
01:34:201 (94201|3) - avoid on stuff lower than 3*
try and avoid having too many of 01:39:656 (99656|3,100474|3,100747|3) - in a row just because it gets boring, also, not every sound in this section corresponds to a 1/1 LN, please re-listen to the music and snap notes accordingly
01:45:928 (105928|1) - move to 3 and 01:46:201 (106201|2) - move to 4
01:53:360 (113360|3,113428|2,113497|1,113565|3,113633|2,113701|1,113769|0) - just have 2 1/2 LNs here instead, this is not suitable here
01:54:110 (114110|2,115201|0) - that's not where LN sounds are unless you're mapping that beeping noise in the background and I don't see why you would be that's just weird
02:01:815 (121815|3,121951|0) - remove
02:02:565 - to 02:09:110 - this section just doesn't follow the main melody at all, I can hear what you've mapped it just doesn't make any sense
02:14:701 (134701|3,134837|3,134974|3,135110|3,135247|2,135383|2,135519|2) - NO JACKS, remove jacks from this section
03:05:837 - if this section was following the main melody it would be like
consider this throughout the entire section
03:22:747 (202747|1) - what is this LN for?
03:28:474 (208474|2,208610|3,208747|2,208883|3,209156|2,209292|3,209565|3,209701|2) - watch this right hand
03:36:656 (216656|1) - note but no sound
03:38:837 (218837|0) - same
03:41:019 (221019|0) - same
03:48:383 (228383|1,228519|0,228656|1,228792|0,229065|0,229201|1) - watch hand
03:50:428 (230428|2,230565|3,230837|2,230974|3,231110|2,231247|3) - watch hand
04:00:383 (240383|1) - move to 1
04:01:474 - these and all subsequent kicks should be double notes
04:17:837 (257837|0) - delete
00:48:928 (48928|2,49065|0) - ctrl-G
00:53:565 (53565|0,53701|1,53974|1,54110|0,54247|1,54383|0) - hand balance
00:57:110 (57110|2) - move to 1 it just looks nicer
00:58:201 (58201|2,58474|2,58747|2,59019|2) - watch your anchors man
01:00:656 (60656|3) - move to 3 because inner trills > outer trills
01:01:065 (61065|1,61065|0,61201|1,61201|3,61337|2,61337|0) - just make this a regular [12][34][12] JT it'll play better in the long run
01:05:019 (65019|1,65292|1,65428|1) - be careful with this in a low star diff
01:07:883 (67883|1,68019|2) - ctrl-G to avoid too much stress on the left hand
01:11:565 (71565|3,71701|1) - being the same density as 01:10:883 (70883|2,71019|3,71156|1,71292|2,71428|0) - doesn't feel right, I'd just delete those notes
01:12:110 (72110|1,72247|2) - move over one column to the right for same reason as before, if you do that move 01:12:383 (72383|3) - to 1
01:13:201 (73201|2,73201|0,73610|2,73610|1) - why are these suddenly doubles, same 01:15:383 (75383|0,75383|2,75792|2,75792|3) -
01:20:156 (80156|2,80292|2,80565|2,80701|2) - would HIGHLY AVOID these patterns in a low star diff, these shields would prob be hard enough for the players to hit in the first place, go through this section and just sort out those patterns
main melody sounds are 01:28:201 (88201|1,88610|0,89019|1) - and 01:29:428 - which is completely ignored for some reason
01:30:383 (90383|1) - move to 1 and 01:30:656 (90656|2) - to 2 also see previous note on main melody sounds
01:32:292 (92292|2,92428|0) - what are these notes for?
01:34:201 (94201|3) - avoid on stuff lower than 3*
try and avoid having too many of 01:39:656 (99656|3,100474|3,100747|3) - in a row just because it gets boring, also, not every sound in this section corresponds to a 1/1 LN, please re-listen to the music and snap notes accordingly
01:45:928 (105928|1) - move to 3 and 01:46:201 (106201|2) - move to 4
01:53:360 (113360|3,113428|2,113497|1,113565|3,113633|2,113701|1,113769|0) - just have 2 1/2 LNs here instead, this is not suitable here
01:54:110 (114110|2,115201|0) - that's not where LN sounds are unless you're mapping that beeping noise in the background and I don't see why you would be that's just weird
02:01:815 (121815|3,121951|0) - remove
02:02:565 - to 02:09:110 - this section just doesn't follow the main melody at all, I can hear what you've mapped it just doesn't make any sense
02:14:701 (134701|3,134837|3,134974|3,135110|3,135247|2,135383|2,135519|2) - NO JACKS, remove jacks from this section
03:05:837 - if this section was following the main melody it would be like
consider this throughout the entire section
03:22:747 (202747|1) - what is this LN for?
03:28:474 (208474|2,208610|3,208747|2,208883|3,209156|2,209292|3,209565|3,209701|2) - watch this right hand
03:36:656 (216656|1) - note but no sound
03:38:837 (218837|0) - same
03:41:019 (221019|0) - same
03:48:383 (228383|1,228519|0,228656|1,228792|0,229065|0,229201|1) - watch hand
03:50:428 (230428|2,230565|3,230837|2,230974|3,231110|2,231247|3) - watch hand
04:00:383 (240383|1) - move to 1
04:01:474 - these and all subsequent kicks should be double notes
04:17:837 (257837|0) - delete
Normal
currently above 2* which makes this mapset unrankable, please either nerf below 2* or add an easier difficulty, a good start to either of these would be removing a decent chunk of the 1/4 notes available
V's Hard
looks good so far, only thing I'd be wary of is 00:58:747 (58747|3,58747|2,58883|2,59019|3,59156|3) - which can be fixed by switching which hands the jacks are on for this mini-section aka starting from 00:58:201 - and maybe moving 01:00:928 (60928|0,61065|0) - to 2, but that's just nitpicking