Virtue- wrote:

Virtue- wrote:

Hi there, from Ngeng Familiy Mania Queue! and Christmas☆Queue 2016

General

- Metadata : OK!
- BPM/Offset : OK!
- BG/Video : OK!
- Hitsound : NO! Yep i think its gonna be my last job
- Files : OK!

col 1|2|3|4

first, i wanna remind you about this http://puu.sh/tagus/4850b009ad.png pls don't try to kill the beginners =w=
second, fix all of the patterns. if u ask why, then my answer will be same ^

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  well... i don't really mind the normal like this (it's ez lol) but in here i pretend to be a beginner. and after playing this diff for a long time i've found many umcomfortable, please make the patterns like this :
  - Kicks : single
  - Snares : double
  - Hihats : single or maybe u don't want to put any of it
  - Crashes : double
  - Another instruments : single LN or normal note

1. 00:43:474 (43474|0,43474|3,43747|2,44019|3,44019|0) - delete this pls 00:43:747 (43747|2) - it's really unnecessary, try this http://puu.sh/tah8k/5c330f65f6.png fixed
2. from 00:44:565 - until 00:59:292 - so, 00:44:565 (44565|2,44565|3,44701|0,44837|1,44974|2,45110|0,45110|1,45247|3,45383|2,45519|0,45656|2,45656|3,45792|1,45928|2,46065|1,46201|3,46201|0) - for this part and so on, i think it better to give it jacks http://puu.sh/tahNC/65382b41b9.png I think its harder to give jacks to a beginner i guess? but ill think about it
3. 01:00:110 (60110|3,60110|0) - single fixed
4. 01:21:928 - missed here fixed
5. 01:38:292 - ^ fixed
6. 01:53:837 - until 02:02:565 - well, you really want to kill the beginners don't you? =w= fix it pls change 01:53:974 (113974|0,114110|1,114247|2,114519|1,114656|2,114792|3,115065|3,115201|2,115337|0,115747|2,115883|1) - into LNs or something easier pls
7. 02:14:019 - until 02:29:837 - same mod with the 2nd mod up there ^ Working on it XD
   
   well, i don't find any errors :/
   but i'm concern about the patterns, better do some selfmod owo

Well i didnt really have paid much attention in this diff since im focused more on the terminate diff, but ill work on it

to be continue owo

Thanks for the mod

od3x wrote:

Heya

While I do think this mapset is a still lackluster, it has some nice ideas and I think it has potential. I will mostly focus on the Termiate diff with this mod.

I will say about the Normal diff that it was very dull, even for a easier map. Too much repetition, try to just randomize the patterns more since on an easier diff it doesn't need to make that much sense. Especially in the later half of the song. Also, make the first double note atleast a long note lasting till the rest of the mapping starts. Yep, I am not giving focus to Normal Diff for now, But Ill work on it later on..

Now for the real stuff

| 0 | 1 | 2 | 3 |

Terminate

I feel like there is so much I want to micro-manage here so I will just give some outlines on how I personally would make changes in the map.

Timings

First of all, your offset is set a bit late. (Both diffs) It should be 4735. Probably just a remenant of changing the songs BPM. This needs to change. I think its just right, because I used the std version of this map as my reference(I also used its mp3 file as my audio)

The next ones are not necessary but I feel they improve the songs feel.

00:09:110 - Add an uninherited timing point for 1,15x slider velocity (speed)
00:42:928 - And another one here for 1,30x speed I think Ill keep it as it is for now, I dont know

It felt offputting to play the slow and the fast parts at the same speed so I think this will make the speed changing more coherent.
Also, add some Kiai time-points for choruses or the solos. Oh right I forgot those Kiai time XP

Mapping

Now that I've said that your Normal diff needs more "randomness", I think that this difficulty has too much of it, or atleast is lacking any patterns.

Best example here would be the chorus jumstreams. They dont seem to have any logic behind them. I can sense a very faint pattern in them but mostly its just random. What I think would be good to fix this, would be to do patterns like you did at 02:14:007 - and even that had no rhyme or reason to it. But it had a pattern of sorts, and that pattern vaguely changed to the music. Or like the ones you did even later into the song. -Clear patterns- Ill work on it
I'm not saying this is the way to go, but I'm saying that variations of this will make the map easier to read and less awkward and random.

The next thing I want to touch on is your use of constant quads and mini-jacks. While I think they fit the song okay, your use can make some very uncomfortable patterns to happen. An example at 01:36:371 -. Everything here is mapped correctly to the beat, with corresponding intensity imo, it still is very uncomfortable to play. I would suggest making the patters vary with some thing like this. I personally liked that part, because my hands felt hopping in that part, But Ill change it XD

The last thing I want to mention is consistency. Prime example would be the chorus. Mostly you make the jacks/streams jumps, sometimes randomly you spice it up with hands and at the end you replace them with singles, while the volume, intensity and sound remains the same. And then there is this. '
I'm not saying here every part should be the same on repeat, but I am saying that some consistency/patterning would make the map better.

Yep, I changed it to a repeating pattern

I hope you pick out the parts here that you think wil make your map better and take it with you going forward. Good luck.

Thanks a lot for your mod!!

riunosk wrote:

slight metadata
might want to change to Panda Eyes & Teminite - Highscore
source from youtube

Ok got it! Thanks a lot!!

laughingcomet wrote:

Sorry for late mod. Forgot i had a queue
1 l 2 l 3 l 4

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00:14:837 (14837|3) - Move to 3 for pitch relevancy? Fixed
00:26:565 (26565|1) - to 1 for balance Fixed
00:40:610 (40610|2) - to 4 because the pitch is not the same for 00:40:747 (40747|2) - and shields are meh Fixed
01:19:474 - ~ 01:25:474 - not to sure what to say about this section, maybe try and avoid some shields? Think Ill keep it as it is, done that intentionally
01:27:656 - ~ 01:34:201 - ^ Same as above
02:02:837 - ~ 02:09:110 - maybe make some of them different? Ill change it somehow I think
02:14:565 - ~ 02:15:110 - here they are hands but in the rest of the drop they're doubles and even singles. Oh I forgot to remove col 1 in that part
03:10:201 (190201|1) - avoid shields Fixed
03:21:110 (201110|2) - ^ Fixed
03:45:110 (225110|2,225110|3) - move to left like you've done in the rest of the song Fixed
Having kaiais would be cool Oh right XD

Good luck

Thanks for your mod!

dkingo wrote:

Hi there, nm request from my queue, a roughly mod.

I feel so tired now so i just have some suggestion to the Hard... Sorry for that.

little mods

There is a lot of "roll" in your early pattern, i think it would be better if you can make them more mess. Ok I see that,gonna work on it

Also some ghost note like 00:19:474 (19474|1) - should be deleted. Fixed

The biggest problem what i saw was overusing jacks. For example 00:35:019 - you have a lot of place to put notes, so make it like https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7075854 , it works on the other jacks as well. Fixed

01:00:519 (60519|1,60656|1,60792|1,60928|2,60928|3,61065|3,61065|2,61201|3,61201|2,61337|2,61337|3) - Also these are not necessary, make them more mess, works on the other patterns as well. Fixed

01:36:383 - to 01:43:474 - the pattern is all the time same, you need to make some changes for them Fixed

02:29:837 (149837|1,149974|1,150110|1,150247|1) - Here, where the voice is very weak, you can't feel the beat when you hit those notes, so change them to LNs, works on the other patterns as well. Fixed

01:33:656 (93656|1,93792|2,93792|1,93928|1,93928|2,94065|2) - Ok in the last, let's turn back here. You should fix every single jack, which has over 2 notes in the same column, there's a lot of jacks in your map. Don't be lazy and fix them, or BN will tell you to fix them later. Ok, Ill consider reducing jacks, but ill still leave some because I think this map is for jacks XD

Ok that's all, good luck with your map

Adri wrote:

Seems to be going okay ! Ill think about updating and playing it

Good luck dude !

ArcherLove wrote:

hi

mod 4k

col = 1~4

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00:04:747 (4747|1) - how about moving to 3? Fixed
00:17:292 (17292|0) - move to 4? Fixed
00:28:747 (28747|2) - move to 4? Think Ill keep it as it is here
00:35:292 (35292|0) - move to 2? Fixed
00:47:837 (47837|2,47837|3) - missing 1 note? Oh right
01:01:474 (61474|3,61474|2) - add 2 more note? Kay
01:04:201 (64201|0,64747|0) - change to short note (LN) Right

[hard]

00:19:474 (19474|3,20019|2) - swap collumn? Fixed
01:09:383 (69383|0,69656|2) - how about move to 3-4?

Fixed

I think other diff is okay
to be honest this song and your style mapping is good but a bit repetitive and I got a bit bored .. Thanks man! Ill try harder

but good luck!~

Draftnell wrote:

haiii

chitchat for discusss this diff insane

irc with creator

05:30 wamster2: hello sir, can you take a look at my map if youre not busy? im looking for suggestions and mods XD, heres the link https://osu.ppy.sh/s/550476 thanks :)
05:31 Draftnell: dont call me sir dude x,x
05:32 wamster2: oh sorry XD
05:33 Draftnell: so u want me do what ?
05:36 wamster2: well im looking for opinions with my map, but if you can mod it its also ok, XD
05:36 wamster2: if youre not busy hehe
05:37 Draftnell: umm if u want can wait me 10min+ ?
05:37 wamster2: oh ok, take your time hehe
05:38 Draftnell: thx 
05:38 Draftnell: then i just check your map, and give u seems opinions 
05:38 Draftnell: but its not mdo
05:38 Draftnell: *mod
05:39 wamster2: oh ok XD
05:40 wamster2: oh ok XD
05:41 wamster2: thats fine XD
05:47 Draftnell: oke here
05:48 Draftnell: zzz
05:48 Draftnell: ok here
05:48 *Draftnell is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1166349 Panda Eyes & Teminite - Highscore [Terminate]]
05:49 Draftnell: umm first time make beatmap ?
05:50 Draftnell: hello ?
05:51 Draftnell: respon please....i not much have a time for this x.x
05:53 Draftnell: actually this pattern make me bored for play btw
05:53 Draftnell: zz
05:53 Draftnell: hello ? are u there -_-
05:54 wamster2: my net was untable sorry for that ><
05:55 wamster2: unstable*
05:55 Draftnell: first i ask 
05:55 Draftnell: this map first time u make ?
05:55 wamster2: yes
05:56 Draftnell: actually this pattern make me boring for play it
05:56 Draftnell: and other mapper agree for that
05:57 Draftnell: and me very hate pattern jack like this x.x
05:57 wamster2: what part?
05:57 Draftnell: all 
05:58 Draftnell: ( pink section )
05:59 wamster2: you mean in the 2 columns in the middle?
06:00 Draftnell: 01:23:837 (83837|3,84110|3,84247|3,84519|3) - like this lol
06:00 wamster2: aw i get it sorry hhahaha
06:01 Draftnell: this pitch no much same with that 
06:01 Draftnell: so make do random 
06:01 Draftnell: not jack
06:02 wamster2: oh ok ill take note on that
06:03 Draftnell: then in part begin
06:05 Draftnell: try avoid pattern like this 00:17:019 (17019|0,17292|0) - its not consider with the rhythm
06:05 Draftnell: 00:24:383 (24383|0,25065|0) - 
06:05 Draftnell: 00:28:474 (28474|2,28747|2) - 
06:06 Draftnell: if u see pattern like that please avoid like that
06:06 wamster2: done
06:08 Draftnell: umm
06:09 Draftnell: 03:28:337 (208337|2,208474|2,208747|2) - can u re-arrange for this ?
06:11 Draftnell: ok maybe enough for this 
06:12 wamster2: ok , moved 1note
06:12 Draftnell: hftt this like be mod lel....so want i post it ?
06:13 wamster2: yeah, *wags his tail*

Thanks for your time Draftnell-sama!

Ibrahim wrote:

chitchat

22:55 wamster2: hello sir, can you take a look at my map if youre not busy XD, im looking for mods and suggestions, heres the link https://osu.ppy.sh/s/550476 thanks a lot!
22:58 Ibrahim: hello, will look it later then x3
22:59 wamster2: oh thanks sir, take your time XD
23:05 Ibrahim: xD
23:12 Ibrahim: um can you do it now?
23:12 Ibrahim: i'll take a look your map
23:13 wamster2: okay
23:13 *Ibrahim is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1166349 Panda Eyes & Teminite - Highscore [Terminate]]
23:14 Ibrahim: 00:16:201 (16201|3,16337|2,16474|1,16610|0,16747|3) -  ctrl + H this for PR (Pitch Relevation)
23:14 Ibrahim: if you apply that suggestion please move it to col 3 00:17:019 (17019|0) - 
23:15 Ibrahim: col (1 2 3 4)
23:15 Ibrahim: 00:18:792 (18792|2,18928|3) -  ctrl + G for PR
23:15 wamster2: okay
23:16 Ibrahim: this 00:25:065 (25065|0) - move to col 4 and this 00:25:474 (25474|1) -  move to 1 for better structure
23:17 wamster2: done
23:17 Ibrahim: 00:38:156 (38156|0,38292|1,38428|2) -  ctrl + H again for PR and this 00:38:565 (38565|1) -  move to 1
23:18 wamster2: ok
23:19 Ibrahim: 01:19:065 (79065|0) -  ghost note imo
23:20 wamster2: oh yeah
23:20 Ibrahim: 01:19:065 (79065|0) - add for hit hat
23:21 Ibrahim: 01:35:292 (95292|2,95565|1,95837|0,96110|1) -  it will be nice if you change it to LN 
23:21 wamster2: can i ask what is hit hat? hehe not familiar with that word XD
23:22 Ibrahim: hit hat sound like this 01:20:156 (80156|3,80292|0) - 
23:22 Ibrahim: yeah too hard for explain but you will understand someday haha
23:23 wamster2: oh ok hahahaha
23:23 Ibrahim: 01:57:997 (117997|2) - this ghost to
23:24 Ibrahim: check more about ghost note x3
23:24 Ibrahim: you can use play back rate 25% for check that 
23:24 Ibrahim: maybe that's it
23:27 wamster2: thanks a lot XD

good luck!

Nysrogh wrote:

friendly irc mod xD

23:10 wamster2: hello sir, can you take a look at  my map if youre not busy ?im looking for mods and suggestions XD, heres the link https://osu.ppy.sh/s/550476 thanks a lot!
23:11 *Nysrogh is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1166349 Panda Eyes & Teminite - Highscore [Terminate]]
23:12 Nysrogh: :v
23:12 wamster2: thanks XD
23:12 Nysrogh: im a bit busy now but i can give you a fast mod
23:12 Nysrogh: xD
23:12 Nysrogh: in the terminate diff
23:12 wamster2: ok thats fine XD
23:12 Nysrogh: 00:14:019 (14019|3,14156|2,14292|1,14428|0) -  do similar like this
23:12 Nysrogh: 00:11:837 (11837|2,11974|1,12110|3,12247|2,12383|1) - 
23:13 Nysrogh: Is the same sound , and a stream, isn't represent good the rhythm
23:13 Nysrogh: 00:19:474 (19474|2,20019|0,20019|1) -  ctrl j
23:14 Nysrogh: 00:20:701 (20701|1) -  move to 2
23:14 wamster2: okay
23:14 Nysrogh: 00:36:247 (36247|2,36383|3) -  move to 4 and 2
23:15 Nysrogh: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7093927
23:15 Nysrogh: like this
23:15 Nysrogh: xD
23:16 wamster2: done
23:17 Nysrogh: 01:00:519 (60519|2,60656|2,60792|2,60928|1,60928|2,61065|1,61065|2,61201|2,61201|1,61201|0,61337|2,61337|1,61337|0) -  hmm
23:17 Nysrogh: are you asking others for this pattern? xD
23:17 Nysrogh: I don't really like so much because i feel, hmm a bit void
23:18 wamster2: uhhm, its a suggestion from a mod, but as far as now, no one complained yet with this XD
23:19 Nysrogh: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7093949
23:19 Nysrogh: try this one
23:19 Nysrogh: 01:14:565 (74565|2) -  move to 3
23:20 wamster2: got it
23:20 Nysrogh: 01:23:292 (83292|1) -  if you delete this LN and use a triple note?
23:21 Nysrogh: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7093960 like this
23:22 wamster2: uhm i think ill keep the LN
23:24 Nysrogh: 01:55:610 (115610|0) -  Hmm feel a bit umconfortable to play
23:24 Nysrogh: Why no delete that note :l 
23:24 Nysrogh: The LN is 
23:24 Nysrogh: representing
23:24 Nysrogh: the sound
23:24 wamster2: so i move to other collumn?
23:24 Nysrogh: 01:55:747 (115747|1) -  or move this to 4
23:25 Nysrogh: 01:56:156 (116156|1,116156|0,116292|3,116292|0) -  like you do here
23:25 Nysrogh: 01:57:247 (117247|3) -  delet this isn't hear 
23:25 Nysrogh: only hear when use 25%
23:26 Nysrogh: 02:29:974 (149974|2,150110|2,150247|2,150383|2,150383|1,150519|1,150519|2,150656|0,150656|1,150656|2,150792|2,150792|1,150792|0) -  
23:26 Nysrogh: the same with this
23:26 Nysrogh: I think you should do something similar
23:26 Nysrogh: pattern
23:26 Nysrogh: like i give you before
23:27 Nysrogh: 02:30:928 (150928|3,150928|2) -  why double? you use 4  in the same sound before
23:27 wamster2: yeah, Ill try that
23:28 Nysrogh: 03:34:883 (214883|0,215019|1,215156|2) -  make this a 1/4 LN
23:29 Nysrogh: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7094013
23:29 Nysrogh: like this
23:29 Nysrogh: 03:37:065 (217065|1,217065|0,217201|2,217201|1,217337|2,217337|3) -  same
23:29 Nysrogh: 03:39:247 (219247|1,219383|3,219383|2,219519|3,219519|1) -  same
23:29 Nysrogh: 03:41:428 (221428|0,221428|1,221565|1,221701|2) -  same xD
23:29 wamster2: done for that section XD
23:29 Nysrogh: Nothing more to say
23:29 Nysrogh: Nice diff man xD
23:29 Nysrogh: I like :v
23:29 Nysrogh: lets testplay after you update

GL man nice song and patterns xD

Staravia wrote:

MOD

2017-01-18 18:35 Staravia: so for this map, it's obvious that the hardest parts have to be 00:44:565 - 02:14:019 - because of the music imo. it felt overpowered by parts like these 01:53:837 - 02:12:383 - 02:29:974 - 02:37:883 - 
2017-01-18 18:37 Staravia: 01:00:519 - and 02:29:974 - try this: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7094045
2017-01-18 18:38 wamster2: oh ok, but ill not apply it yet for now, cuz there are other suggestions for that part, ill think about it XD
2017-01-18 18:38 Staravia: ok that's fine
2017-01-18 18:40 Staravia: on this part 01:19:747 (79747|3,79883|3,80156|3,80292|3) -  i would not put the jacks before the ln because it feels awkward to read
2017-01-18 18:41 Staravia: and on this part make every note an LN instead of one note in the chords 02:55:201 - cuz it feels better to play imo
2017-01-18 18:41 wamster2: oh ok
2017-01-18 18:42 Staravia: that is all i can think of, good luck with the map!
2017-01-18 18:42 Staravia: :p

Good luck with the map!

Hydria wrote:

ok im modding this at like 5am so I'll get terminate covered now and then do the rest tomorrow or something

TERMINATE

nice 4.7 sec of silence at the beginning of the map

PR TIME (re-arrange patterns as you see fit) ============================================
00:10:201 (10201|1,10474|2,10747|3,11019|2) - should prob be 4|3|2|1

00:12:383 (12383|1) - should be 1?

00:12:656 (12656|3,12928|2,13201|1) - should be ascending

00:16:201 (16201|0,16337|1,16474|2,16610|3) - should be 4|2|3|1 and then move 00:16:747 (16747|0) - to 2

00:17:565 (17565|2) - move to 2 just feels better

00:18:792 (18792|3,18928|2) - ctrl-G since it's all ascending

00:18:928 (18928|3) - make 1/2 LN?

00:19:474 (19474|1,20019|2) - feel like these two should be the other way around

00:20:701 (20701|1,20837|3,20974|0) - should be all ascending

00:23:292 (23292|3,23837|1) - should be ascending

00:25:065 (25065|3,25201|1,25337|2) - 2|3|4

00:27:383 (27383|2,27656|3) - ctrl-G

00:27:928 (27928|0,28201|1,28474|3) - make 4|3|2 full descending

00:34:201 (34201|1,34474|2) - should be descending instead of ascending

00:36:247 (36247|3,36383|2) - ctrl-G

00:36:383 (36383|3) - 1/2 LN?

actually in fact just follow what I put for the earlier part of this section

Applied all!

PR TIME OVER ==============================================================

00:47:837 (47837|2,47837|3) - move over one column to the left for consistency Fixed

00:49:337 (49337|3) - move to 1 for even more consistency Fixed

00:50:565 (50565|1) - move to 3 (the consistency checks are for balanced jack counts on each hand) Fixed

if you're doing 00:52:337 (52337|2,52337|1,52474|2,52474|1,52610|2,52610|1) - , make 00:51:656 (51656|3,51656|2,51792|2,51792|3,51928|2,51928|3,52065|2,52065|3) - 1|4 instead I think Ill keep it as it is

00:53:701 (53701|3) - move to 1 Fixed

00:55:883 (55883|0) - move to 4 because ^ Fixed

00:57:792 (57792|2,57792|0,57928|1,57928|2,58065|2,58065|0) - make it look like this for hand consistency Fixed


01:00:247 (60247|0,60247|1,60383|0,60383|1,60519|2,60519|3,60656|2,60656|3) - these double jacks should start 1/4 beat later, and from 01:00:110 - should look like Oh your'e right XD


suggestion for this next section: have you through about making the LNs be minijacks like Now that you've said it, Ill think about it XD

(make sure they're alternating per set, trying to do two sets of minijacks on one hand is not fun) (that applies up to 01:10:201 - )

OK QUICK LESSON ON JACK BALANCING IN SECTIONS
STARTING FROM 01:10:747 -

AS YOU CAN SEE, THERE'S A LOT MORE JACKS ON THE RIGHT HAND, THAN THERE IS ON THE LEFT HAND WHICH IS A PROBLEM.
TRY TO BRING THESE NUMBERS TO 4|4, LIKE SO Oh I didnt notice

WHILST THERE CAN BE DEVIATIONS IN HOW STRICT THE COUNT IS FOR JACKS ON HANDS, TRY TO KEEP IT WITHIN LIKE 3 DIFFERENCE MAX OF HALF THE TOTAL COUNT (E.G. 4|4 IS FINE, 5|3 IS FINE, 6|3 IS FINE, 5|2 IS FINE (LESS OPTIMAL), 6|2 IS NOT) Fixed
LESSON OVER

01:13:201 (73201|2,73201|1,73337|0,73337|3,73474|1,73474|2,73610|3,73610|0) - I feel like this should be [34][34][12][12] or [24][24][13][13] instead, same goes for 01:15:383 (75383|2,75383|1,75519|2,75519|1,75656|2,75656|1,75792|1,75792|2) - Changed it according to your suggested patterns

01:16:474 (76474|1) - move to 1 Fixed

01:17:019 (77019|3) - move to 2 because hand pref Fixed

01:19:747 (79747|2,79883|2,79883|3,80019|0,80019|1,80156|2,80292|3,80292|0,80428|1) - for this section, 01:19:747 (79747|2,79883|2) - the accented sounds here are followed properly due to the jack but the one following it at 01:20:156 (80156|2,80292|0) - is ignored, so I suggest moving around notes to fit the following: Changed it somehow

whether this is too stressful on the 2nd column is debatable but makes the most sense according to the song (and I guess to follow along move 01:20:701 (80701|1) - to 4 and move 01:20:837 (80837|3) - to 3)

01:21:519 (81519|1) - move to 1 because that being a jack makes no sense Fixed

01:23:156 (83156|1) - move to 3 and move 01:23:292 (83292|2,83292|1) - one to the left for future patterns and non-jacks Fixed

future patterns
01:23:701 (83701|3,83837|1,83837|3) - ctrl-H and move right one column Fixed

01:24:247 (84247|3,84383|2) - switch these two around Fixed

01:24:383 (84383|1,84519|0) - ctrl-G and 01:24:656 (84656|3) - move to 2 and 01:24:928 (84928|1) - move to 3 and 01:25:065 (85065|3) - move to 3 and 01:25:337 (85337|3) - move to 1
because 4th column LN patterns is wew Fixed

01:28:747 (88747|2,88883|2,89019|2) - this shouldn't be 3 note jack Fixed

01:30:519 (90519|3,90656|3,90656|0,90792|0) - ctrl-H and then move 01:30:519 (90519|0) - to 2 for balance Fixed

01:31:201 (91201|1) - move to 1? Fixed

01:32:019 (92019|2) - move to 4 because triple-jack Fixed

01:32:428 (92428|3,92565|3,92837|3,92974|3,93247|3,93383|3) - see previous suggestions for this pattern Fixed

01:38:837 (98837|1,98974|3) - ctrl-G, avoid having a jack on the same hand as an LN Fixed

01:41:156 (101156|2,101292|2) - 01:43:337 (103337|3,103474|3) - 01:44:428 (104428|2,104565|2) - same Fixed

01:45:110 - no LN section as well? That was intentional, to give a little breather before the intense part

01:53:292 (113292|1) - delete this and make the following

will prob work out better in the long run Yep youre right!

01:53:837 (113837|3,113974|3,114110|2,114247|3,114247|2,114383|3) - jack balance Fixed

01:56:019 (116019|1,116156|1,116156|0,116292|0,116428|1,116565|0,116565|1) - ^ Fixed

01:57:247 (117247|3,117383|0) - ctrl-H Fixed

01:59:292 (119292|1,119428|1,119565|1) - try to avoid Fixed

02:01:815 (121815|1,121883|0,121951|1,122019|0) - nice trill, should be fine technically Thanks!

02:02:837 (122837|1) - what are these short LNs for? I was following a sound there

02:04:337 (124337|2,124474|2,124747|2) - might wanna change this Fixed

02:04:883 (124883|1,125019|1,125428|1,125565|1) - debatable I think Ill keep it for now

same 02:05:974 (125974|2,126110|2,126519|2,126656|2,126928|2) - here etc etc Fixed

there are sounds 02:09:383 - 02:09:928 - 02:10:337 - 02:10:474 - 02:10:610 - 02:10:883 - 02:11:019 - 02:11:156 - 02:11:428 - 02:11:701 - 02:11:974 - 02:12:247 - should prob map them (make the section starting 02:11:292 - like a slow jumpstream) Oh right

02:13:065 (133065|0) - to 2 and 02:13:201 (133201|3) - to 1 and 02:13:337 (133337|1) - to 4 Fixed

ok this is taking longer than expected and it's 6:30am, use this entire mod as a guidance to the next 50%, and make sure to keep the jacks, the patterns, and the note density consistent throughout; will check the other diffs tomorrow and if needed, I'll finish modding the other 50% once you've checked through it yourself.

Hydria wrote:

ok lets finish this off

Exterminate

02:14:565 (134565|3,134565|2,134701|2,134701|3,134837|3,134837|2,134974|3,134974|2,135110|2,135247|3,135383|2,135383|3,135519|2,135519|3) - ehhh? Fixed
02:18:792 (138792|2,138792|3,138928|0,138928|1,139065|2,139065|3) - seems so out of place, just change the jacks around aka Fixed

02:23:701 (143701|3,143837|3,143974|3) - not a good idea Fixed
02:27:247 (147247|1,147383|1,147519|1,147656|3,147656|1,147792|3,147928|3,148065|3,148337|3,148474|3,148610|3) - considering the other parts that sounded similar to this were more dense, this section should be too Fixed
02:29:837 (149837|1) - move to 1 because 02:29:565 (149565|1,149701|1,149837|1) - Fixed
02:30:247 (150247|2,150247|3,150383|3,150383|2,150519|0,150519|2,150656|3,150656|1,150792|0,150792|2) - ctrl-H to avoid too many one-handed jacks Fixed
02:32:156 - the following seems better fitted with the music >W<

02:34:337 (154337|0) - note but no sound Removed
02:34:610 (154610|3) - note doesn't need to be there OKay
02:36:519 (156519|2,156519|3,156656|1,156656|0,156792|3,156792|0) - same pattern as suggested before or something similar like [14][23][14]Fixed
02:38:974 (158974|2,159110|3,159247|0,159519|3) - I feel like this section is too unnecessarily dense I think Ill keep it
if you're going to have 02:54:247 (174247|3,174383|3) - as a jack, don't have the following jack (aka 02:54:656 (174656|3,174792|3) - ) in the same column because it doesn't feel right Fixed
03:06:656 (186656|1) - move to 4 for PR Fixed
03:07:474 (187474|1,187474|0,187747|3,187747|2) - make these full 1/2 Fixed
03:09:656 (189656|2,189656|0,189928|3,189928|1) - same Fixed
03:11:837 (191837|2,191837|1,192110|3,192110|0) - same Fixed
03:16:201 (196201|2,196201|3,196474|2,196474|3) - don't do this, make them different columns Fixed
if you decide against that, at least don't do this 03:18:383 (198383|3,198383|2,198656|2,198656|3,198928|3,198928|2) -
03:36:110 (216110|0,216247|0,216383|0,217474|0,217610|0,217747|0,217883|0,217883|1,218019|1,218156|0,218156|1,218292|0) - beware your hand-based jacks Okay, Im more aware of it since your previous mod XD
considering 03:44:565 (224565|2,224565|3,224701|2,224701|3,224837|2,224837|3,224974|3,224974|2) - are right hand, make 03:48:928 (228928|3,228928|2,229065|2,229065|3,229201|3,229201|2,229337|2,229337|3) - left hand and then change up 03:47:837 Fixed(227837|0,227837|1,227974|1,227974|0,228110|0,228110|1) - this pattern Fixed
03:52:201 - at least if you're gonna do mini LNs keep it going for the entire section OKI
03:57:110 (237110|2,237247|2,237383|2,237519|2,237792|2,237928|2,238065|2) - too many jacks Fixed
03:58:747 (238747|2,238883|2,239019|2,239156|2,239292|3,239428|3,239565|3,239701|3,239837|3,239974|3,240110|3,240247|3) - this poor right hand Oh right LMAO
04:15:110 (255110|2,255247|2,255519|2,255656|3,255656|2,255792|3) - hmmmm Fixed

I guess the only thing I can say is watch out for the density in those dense LN parts but considering it's 110bpm it might be fine

Hard

00:04:747 - until 00:44:019 - look back in the mod I posted yesterday
00:48:928 (48928|2,49065|0) - ctrl-G
00:53:565 (53565|0,53701|1,53974|1,54110|0,54247|1,54383|0) - hand balance
00:57:110 (57110|2) - move to 1 it just looks nicer
00:58:201 (58201|2,58474|2,58747|2,59019|2) - watch your anchors man
01:00:656 (60656|3) - move to 3 because inner trills > outer trills
01:01:065 (61065|1,61065|0,61201|1,61201|3,61337|2,61337|0) - just make this a regular [12][34][12] JT it'll play better in the long run
01:05:019 (65019|1,65292|1,65428|1) - be careful with this in a low star diff
01:07:883 (67883|1,68019|2) - ctrl-G to avoid too much stress on the left hand
01:11:565 (71565|3,71701|1) - being the same density as 01:10:883 (70883|2,71019|3,71156|1,71292|2,71428|0) - doesn't feel right, I'd just delete those notes
01:12:110 (72110|1,72247|2) - move over one column to the right for same reason as before, if you do that move 01:12:383 (72383|3) - to 1
01:13:201 (73201|2,73201|0,73610|2,73610|1) - why are these suddenly doubles, same 01:15:383 (75383|0,75383|2,75792|2,75792|3) -
01:20:156 (80156|2,80292|2,80565|2,80701|2) - would HIGHLY AVOID these patterns in a low star diff, these shields would prob be hard enough for the players to hit in the first place, go through this section and just sort out those patterns
main melody sounds are 01:28:201 (88201|1,88610|0,89019|1) - and 01:29:428 - which is completely ignored for some reason
01:30:383 (90383|1) - move to 1 and 01:30:656 (90656|2) - to 2 also see previous note on main melody sounds
01:32:292 (92292|2,92428|0) - what are these notes for?
01:34:201 (94201|3) - avoid on stuff lower than 3*
try and avoid having too many of 01:39:656 (99656|3,100474|3,100747|3) - in a row just because it gets boring, also, not every sound in this section corresponds to a 1/1 LN, please re-listen to the music and snap notes accordingly
01:45:928 (105928|1) - move to 3 and 01:46:201 (106201|2) - move to 4
01:53:360 (113360|3,113428|2,113497|1,113565|3,113633|2,113701|1,113769|0) - just have 2 1/2 LNs here instead, this is not suitable here
01:54:110 (114110|2,115201|0) - that's not where LN sounds are unless you're mapping that beeping noise in the background and I don't see why you would be that's just weird
02:01:815 (121815|3,121951|0) - remove
02:02:565 - to 02:09:110 - this section just doesn't follow the main melody at all, I can hear what you've mapped it just doesn't make any sense
02:14:701 (134701|3,134837|3,134974|3,135110|3,135247|2,135383|2,135519|2) - NO JACKS, remove jacks from this section
03:05:837 - if this section was following the main melody it would be like

consider this throughout the entire section
03:22:747 (202747|1) - what is this LN for?
03:28:474 (208474|2,208610|3,208747|2,208883|3,209156|2,209292|3,209565|3,209701|2) - watch this right hand
03:36:656 (216656|1) - note but no sound
03:38:837 (218837|0) - same
03:41:019 (221019|0) - same
03:48:383 (228383|1,228519|0,228656|1,228792|0,229065|0,229201|1) - watch hand
03:50:428 (230428|2,230565|3,230837|2,230974|3,231110|2,231247|3) - watch hand
04:00:383 (240383|1) - move to 1
04:01:474 - these and all subsequent kicks should be double notes
04:17:837 (257837|0) - delete
Applied all since im not fond of mapping hard and lower diffs XD, and I think it hit the spot

Normal

currently above 2* which makes this mapset unrankable, please either nerf below 2* or add an easier difficulty, a good start to either of these would be removing a decent chunk of the 1/4 notes available
Okay, Ill nerf it

V's Hard

looks good so far, only thing I'd be wary of is 00:58:747 (58747|3,58747|2,58883|2,59019|3,59156|3) - which can be fixed by switching which hands the jacks are on for this mini-section aka starting from 00:58:201 - and maybe moving 01:00:928 (60928|0,61065|0) - to 2, but that's just nitpicking

Thanks for the full mod! Its been a great help for me! thanks a lot

-SoraGami- wrote:

edit: welp, i didnt saw ^
there might some similar things that i may have pointed out too, but nvm i'm just gonna post it xD

Hi wamster~

here's my mod
pls reply every single of my mod so that i know what you accept/ reject

Column Format:
4K = |1|2|3|4|

[Terminate]

- 00:35:019 (35019|1,35292|2) - would prefer to ctrl + h this one, because 00:34:474 (34474|1,34747|0,35019|1,35292|0) feels monotonous Fixed

- 00:20:019 (20019|1) - 00:22:201 (22201|1) - 00:24:383 (24383|0) - 00:37:474 (37474|1) - etc... these should technically ends at 1/8, like this http://puu.sh/tuk4L.jpg I think Ill keep it at 1/4

- 00:41:292 (41292|1) - remove this, since the other parts like 00:36:928 - 00:39:110 are only single notes, unless you want to make them double notes too... Fixed

- 00:42:928 (42928|0) - this should be LN also to be consistent with the noise you've followed at 00:41:837 (41837|1) and also 00:43:610 Fixed

(43610|1,43747|1,43883|1,44019|1) - the sound is ascending so it would be better if you make something like this http://puu.sh/tukvl.png I think Ill keep it in that order, but I added LN

- 00:45:110 - jacks patterns like this that start on the blue line when the jack sound starts in the white lines can be confusing, should be like this http://puu.sh/tukPY.jpg for better execution, same case here 00:47:292 - 00:50:019 - and so on.. until the last pattern... also i suggest to make some [14] or [23] or [13] or [24] too for variation, repeated patterns can be quite boring if like that Made some variations, but Ill check again later to see if I have to make more variations XD..

- much better if you can maintain your starting pattern like 00:46:747 (46747|3,46747|1,46883|1,46883|3) in the other parts too for pattern consistency, as you can see here 00:48:928 (48928|1,49065|1,49201|1) there's a 3 consecutive note jack in column 2 would suggest like this http://puu.sh/tulw8.png, same here 00:51:110 (51110|2,51247|2,51383|2) etc... Changed it somehow, to avoid having 3 consecutive single jacks along the patterns

- 01:00:383 (60383|1,60383|0,60519|1,60519|0,60656|3,60656|2,60792|3,60792|2) - the melody stop for a moment, change these to single notes so that players can distinguish the difference of sounds between 01:00:383 (60383|0,60383|1) and 01:00:247 (60247|3,60247|1) and also 00:59:837 (59837|3,59837|2,59974|3,59974|2,60110|3,60110|2,60247|3) to be consistent with your other starting patterns, try this http://puu.sh/tulUU.png Okay

- 01:02:019 - onwards, you can notice that there are snare and kicks alternately in every 1/1 measure, i suggest to make the kick sounds double notes only like 01:02:565 so that, players can feel the difference of impact with the snare sounds here 01:02:019 - , there is also a kick sound here 01:03:656 and it is already a double note so it is ok, but i suggest you to add note here to become triple because the impact is so loud, it consists of kick + fx sound (dont what it is called xD) Oh I didnt notice some of that XD

- like i said above ^ 01:04:747 - double good, 01:05:837 - add; 01:06:928 - remove one, and so on... Okay

- 01:09:383 (69383|0) - move to 3, anchor at 01:08:837 (68837|0,69110|0,69383|0,69656|0) Fixed

- 01:10:747 - it has snare sound, so this should be triple to be consistent Fixed

- 01:12:110 (72110|2) - move to 4, that stacks at 3 can be bothersome Fixed

- 01:10:201 and 01:12:383 - add LN to be consistent with 01:14:565 (74565|0) Fixed

- 01:17:565 (77565|3) - move to 3, anchor at column 4 Fixed

- 01:17:837 (77837|2) - the melody ends at 01:18:383 - http://puu.sh/tunlH.png Fixed

- 01:18:928 - add note, strong sound Fixed

- 01:25:474 - add note here too... Fixed

- i cant find the difference between first part 01:19:883 (79883|3) and second part 01:28:201 (88201|3) - why does the others are 1/8? and the second part 01:28:201 tends to be more easier the first part because it has no notes in every end of the ln like here 01:28:337 - for me it would be much better if the first part is more easier than the 2nd part for proper diff curving Oh, I missed the second section of that, Ive made the two sections same density

- 01:34:201 - add 2 notes, you know why xD Haha yea ryt

- 01:35:292 - add 1 note here for kick sound Fixed

- i dont think the chord jack pattern doesnt fits here 01:53:837 - i suggest you try like this instead http://puu.sh/tuop0.png or http://puu.sh/tuoxS.png or something better Your suggestion was more comfortable for me, but I think I like chord jacks more, for density and intensity XD

i guess i'll stop here, run out of modding time, you can review the other similar parts that i may not have pointed out since i stop midway...

that's all for now i guess~
goodluck dude!

Takeshi Hiroshi wrote:

Hi
NM request~

Terminate

01:11:565 (71565|1) - Delete this note Fixed
01:02:019 - Suggest I think ill keep it as it is

01:04:201 - Suggest I think ill keep it as it is

01:11:565 (71565|1) - Delete this note Fixed
01:21:928 - Put it like this Fixed

03:33:383 (213383|3) - 03:33:656 - extend LN Fixed
03:33:656 (213656|1) - 03:33:928 - ^ Fixed
03:33:928 (213928|0) - 03:34:201 - ^ Fixed
03:37:474 (217474|3) - 03:38:019 - ^ Fixed
03:39:656 (219656|0) - 03:40:201 - ^ Fixed
03:41:837 - 03:42:315 - 03:42:383 - Do not put that, fix it Fixed

Good luck :v

Fontes wrote:

Hello wamster! i hope ur internet be better :3

here for sloppy NM mod QwQ

first of all , my Eng is not good much, so if u cant understand wat i mean plz pm me.

and this mod is not absolute answer as you know, plz take it as just one opinion :3

General

1. BG : 1366 x 768 ok
   
   
2. mp3 : 192kb ok
   
   
3. mapset : first diff must be under 2*. so if you wanna rank this map, make SR of Normal diff down or make easy diff more.
   and how about adjust OD,HP rate each diff ?

Ok, on progress

Normal, Hard, V's Hard

1. V's Hard : this is not finished yet right? :s Yep, i think Virtue-sama is busy right now
   
   
2. Normal : i think Normal diff seems too focused on drum sound. maybe this song is hard to make as Normal,
   but you can make it better with melody sounds. there is many parts has none should be exist. Ill take note
   
   
3. Hard : honestly, i felt this like Terminate diff that removed some notes except jump hand part n long notes.
   i think you should fix a lot with distinct patterns suited this diff. Yeah rightQWQ
   
   
4. most of all, i wish u would keep notes at 'pitch' as posible and hav consistency of number of notes. (for the rank!)
   u can understand what i mean when u see terminate mod :3

okay

Terminate

l1l l2l l3l l4l line set

1. 00:04:747 - add a note likewise Hard diff or remove on the contrary. added a note
   
   
2. 00:09:110 (9110|2,9110|3) - and 00:11:292 (11292|2,11292|1) - has differant pitch so how about move latter notes at 2,3 line fixed
   
   
3. 00:11:837 (11837|2,11974|1,12110|3,12247|2,12383|1) - how about like this? I think Ill keep it as it is
   
   
4. 00:14:019 (14019|2,14156|1,14292|3,14428|2) - move 1 space left in groups like this. this too
   
   
5. 00:20:974 (20974|3) - move 2 line. fixed
   
   
6. 00:22:883 (22883|0,23019|1,23156|2,23292|1) - ctrl H fixed
   
   
7. 00:25:474 (25474|0) - move 2 line. fixed
   
   
8. 00:27:928 (27928|3) - move 2line 00:28:201 (28201|2) - 1line 00:28:474 (28474|1) - 4line 00:28:747 (28747|0) - 2line pic fixed
   
   
9. 00:43:610 (43610|1,43747|1,43883|1) - how about move 4 line? and 00:43:610 (43610|1,43747|1,43883|1) - add a note. fixed
   
   
10. 00:48:383 (48383|1) - 00:48:383 (48383|1) - this part that has jacks , looks like you intend to do. right? 5 jacks hit same place - Yeah I intended that
    
    
11. 00:48:383 (48383|1) - add a note fixed
    
    
12. 01:00:519 (60519|0,60656|1,60792|1) - how about avoid jack. it would be better Ill keep the jacks, but rearanged the position
    
    
13. 01:01:747 (61747|1) - delete it or 01:01:883 (61883|2) - both fixed
    
    
14. 01:02:019 - 01:03:110 - how about make this part like reverse of 01:04:201 - 01:05:292 - . not entirely, just to feel similar with 'reverse' fixed
    
    
15. 01:05:292 - 01:05:837 - how about like this. to avoid 3jacks fixed
    
    
16. 01:06:928 (66928|3) - move 1line. fixed
    
    
17. 01:07:474 - 01:08:019 - how about like this fixed
    
    
18. 01:08:292 (68292|3,68837|0) - delete it and 01:09:110 - add a note cuz this notes interrupt to feel 01:09:110 (69110|1,69383|2,69656|1,69928|1,70065|3) - this melody. fixed
    
    
19. 01:10:201 (70201|2) - delete and 01:10:201 - and 2notes or not delete LN n add a note fixed, not deleting the LN
    
    
20. if u do not delet that LN, plz avoid jack here 01:10:610 (70610|0,70747|0) - same at repeated part. and 01:12:656 - add a note I think Ill keep it as it is, I think the jacks there are just fine
    
    
21. 01:17:019 (77019|1,77565|2) - delete it and 01:17:837 (77837|2,78110|3,78383|2,78656|0,78792|1) - if u wanna LN here, make same under part fixed
    
    
22. 01:19:201 - delete a note fixed
    
    
23. 01:18:928 - 01:25:474 - i can see what u tried. but jack positions are little twisted so let me give you an example.
    01:18:928 - 01:21:110 - Pic 1 01:21:110 - 01:23:292 - Pic 2 01:23:292 - 01:25:481 - Pic 3
    
    The concept is , at 01:18:928 - 01:23:837 - , sheld jack on up LN, 01:23:837 - 01:25:474 - on the contrary, reverse, jack on down LN. beside there,
    avoid jack. same on repeated part latter. fixed
    
    
24. 01:27:519 - sound here so split 01:27:383 (87383|2) - up as 2 LN. fixed
    
    
25. 01:36:383 (96383|2) - kind of this LNs are Bass sound notes right? then
    01:36:656 (96656|1,96792|0,97201|1,97337|2,98292|2,98428|1,98974|1,99519|1) - 01:37:883 (97883|2) - delete it. and fix short notes location. Changed it somehow
    
    
26. 01:45:110 - 01:52:747 - this part, i think should be same as 01:36:383 - i mean use LN to express Bass sound. try some transformed pattern. I think Ill keep it as it is, to give a littlle breather for the intense part
    
    
27. 01:52:883 - and 01:53:769 - add a note. fixed
    
    
28. 01:55:474 - delete a note except LN. quad is too much. and 01:55:610 (115610|3) - delete it. 01:55:474 (115474|1) - lengthen at 01:55:474 (115474|1) - fixed
    
    
29. 01:56:701 (116701|2,116701|3) - delete it. and among 01:56:565 (116565|0,116565|3,116565|1) - , change LN at 01:56:837 - fixed
    
    
30. 01:57:247 (117247|0) - delete it fixed
    
    
31. 01:57:383 (117383|1,117519|0) - change as short note or 01:57:656 - and 01:57:792 - make one note as LN. fixed, made it all LN
    
    
32. 01:58:065 (118065|1) - move 1line, and 01:58:133 (118133|0) - move 2line. fixed
    
    
33. 01:58:133 (118133|1) - and 01:58:133 (118133|1) - delete a note 01:58:133 (118133|1) - add a note fixed
    
    
34. 01:58:133 (118133|1) - delete a note, 01:58:133 (118133|1) - add 2 notes Its the same part, did you put wrong section here?
    
    
35. 01:58:133 (118133|1) - like this sound, i recommand to delete at this part. and try use LN before snap. cuz that sound close to ghost notes ^
    
    
36. 02:04:337 (124337|0) - delete it. 02:02:565 - 02:09:110 - this part has ghost notes. check it out :3 I think its not ghost notes. its just covered by other sounds because its like a faint sound
    
    
37. 02:09:110 - 02:13:474 - this part, from 02:11:292 - you choose the 4snap sound right? Yeah
    but that sound start in 02:10:747 - here. and, how about add LN 02:09:110 - here for giving feel Bass like this. fixed
    
    
38. 02:13:474 - 02:14:019 - add LN. make same at 02:15:656 - other parts too. fixed
    
    
39. 02:30:928 - change a note as LN at 02:31:201 -or 02:31:474 - like 02:35:292 (155292|1,155565|0) - , and 02:31:201 (151201|1,151201|2) - delete a note fixed
    
    
40. 02:31:201 (151201|1,151201|2) - move to same line cuz this is same sound, locating at same line each notes wil be more gd.
    02:31:201 (151201|1,151201|2) - too. and 02:32:974 (152974|2) - lengthen at 02:32:974 (152974|2) -

fixed

How about this SV sample

00:44:019 - 01:01:474 - for sample.

4747,545.454545454546,4,2,0,50,1,0
44019,-166.666666666667,4,2,0,50,0,0
44428,-71.4285714285714,4,2,0,50,0,0
44565,-100,4,2,0,50,0,0
46201,-166.666666666667,4,2,0,50,0,0
46610,-71.4285714285714,4,2,0,50,0,0
46747,-100,4,2,0,50,0,0
48383,-166.666666666667,4,2,0,50,0,0
48792,-71.4285714285714,4,2,0,50,0,0
48929,-100,4,2,0,50,0,0
50565,-166.666666666667,4,2,0,50,0,0
50974,-71.4285714285714,4,2,0,50,0,0
51111,-100,4,2,0,50,0,0
52747,-166.666666666667,4,2,0,50,0,0
53156,-71.4285714285714,4,2,0,50,0,0
53293,-100,4,2,0,50,0,0
54928,-166.666666666667,4,2,0,50,0,0
55337,-71.4285714285714,4,2,0,50,0,0
55474,-100,4,2,0,50,0,0
57110,-166.666666666667,4,2,0,50,0,0
57519,-71.4285714285714,4,2,0,50,0,0
57656,-100,4,2,0,50,0,0
59292,-166.666666666667,4,2,0,50,0,0
59701,-71.4285714285714,4,2,0,50,0,0
59838,-100,4,2,0,50,0,0

you can use this at Terminate diff
try add this at timing point at .txt file Added this

half done! il promise will finish it

Thanks man! and sorry for being unavailable in IRC because of my internet

Pizza wrote:

Hello!

1 | 2 | 3 | 4

Normal

00:47:837 (47837|1) - move to 1 I think Ill keep mine
00:47:974 (47974|0) - this notes is unnecessary for normal diff Oh ok
00:48:383 (48383|3) - move to 1 Ok
00:49:201 - try this https://puu.sh/tMFTZ/8aee5c1cce.png Ok
00:51:110 (51110|3) - move to 1 Ok
00:52:474 (52474|0,52747|3) - ctrl+h Ok
00:53:292 (53292|3) - does this notes should be double? like this part 00:51:110 (51110|0,51110|1) - or this part 00:48:928 (48928|3,48928|2) - Ok
00:55:474 (55474|2) - ^ Ok
00:57:656 (57656|3) - ^ Ok
00:59:837 (59837|1) - ^ Ok
01:32:019 (92019|1) - delete this, this souldn't be on normal diff Ok
01:45:110 (105110|1) - move to 1 Ok
03:04:747 - try this https://puu.sh/tMGn1/6437724914.png Ok
03:07:474 (187474|0) - move to 4

Terminate

00:14:019 (14019|2,14156|1,14292|3,14428|2,14565|3) - coloumn 1 is seems empty here, try re-arrange this part Ok, fixed
00:16:474 (16474|1,16610|0,16747|1) - make it 1-2-3 Ok
00:22:201 (22201|1) - move to 1 Ok
00:40:474 (40474|1,40610|3) - ctrl+j Ok

nice maps! Thanks for modding! XD

saikooppai wrote:

irc mod

12:04 wamster2: hello, can you take a look at my map, if youre not busy XD, im looking for suggestions and mods, heres the link https://osu.ppy.sh/s/550476 thanks a lot!!
12:04 saikooppai: uh sure
12:05 wamster2: thanks XD
12:15 saikooppai: hard diff
12:15 saikooppai: 02:17:292 (137292|0) - i dont think theres supposed to be a triple here
12:18 wamster2: oh ok
12:18 wamster2: fixed
12:19 saikooppai: 02:24:383 (144383|3) - fromhere on when theres the loud synth you have a triple 
12:19 saikooppai: i think its ok to have a triple for every loud synth on here too
12:19 saikooppai: 03:25:474 (205474|3) - 
12:19 saikooppai: also you should add kiai time
12:19 wamster2: should it be triples? or doubles?
12:19 wamster2: oh ok i always for gat kiai XD
12:19 saikooppai: triple
12:20 wamster2: forgot*
12:20 saikooppai: except when theres the ln
12:20 saikooppai: then i think you can just have a double + the ln
12:20 wamster2: oh ok
12:21 saikooppai: 03:36:383 - guessing u missed a note here
12:22 wamster2: fixed
12:23 saikooppai: 03:47:565 (227565|2) - i would move this note to not have a 1/2 jack
12:24 saikooppai: 03:28:883 (208883|3) - unintentional 1/4 jack here
12:25 wamster2: fixed
12:25 saikooppai: 03:34:883 (214883|3) - here too
12:26 wamster2: fixed
12:26 saikooppai: now ill take a look at the terminite diff
12:26 saikooppai: remember to add kiai time too
12:26 wamster2: ok XD
12:27 wamster2: yah yah haha ill not forget it this time
12:31 wamster2: did i disconnected?
12:31 saikooppai: no
12:31 saikooppai: im just trying to find stuff to change
12:31 saikooppai: xd
12:32 wamster2: oh ok i thought i disconnected hha
12:32 wamster2: my internet is slow XD
12:33 saikooppai: 01:48:383 (108383|2) - this part you could probably add some jacks here
12:34 saikooppai: test
13:35 saikooppai: rip

after dc

01:48:383 (108383|2) - this part you could probably add some jacks here OK
edit: terminite diff
Thanks dude! XD

Herkkupala wrote:

ye it took some time.

Terminate

Column 1 | 2 | 3 | 4
Pretty solid map.

02:26:019 (146019|3,146019|0) - why not triple? Fixed

02:27:247 (147247|0,147247|1,147383|0,147383|1,147519|1,147519|0) - why do you suddenly make these jacks but not here 02:22:883 (142883|2,142883|3,143019|2,143019|1,143156|0,143156|1) - ? Fixed

03:20:565 (200565|2) - add note to column 4? Fixed

03:43:474 - 03:58:133 - imo the LNS are placed kinda inconsistently. Fixed it somehow

Otherwise it looks good to me.

Good luck.
Thanks a lot !!

Curiossity wrote:

Panda Eyes & Teminite - Highscore MOD

From Curiossity's Mania Modding Queue

Columns: 1|2|3|4

General disclaimer: This is just my opinion, sorry if I come across as harsh. Just trying to help

Only looking at the top diff here. Let's get going, then.

Terminate

00:27:110 (27110|1) - These notes starting here, they might be better as LNs since the sound changed. Fixed

00:43:474 (43474|2,43610|3,43747|3,43883|3) - Maybe move the last 3 notes to column 3, since they then follow the first note Fixed

00:45:110 (45110|1,45110|2) - So i think this is my biggest issue with the jack patterns you have, is that they don't always follow the first note. The sounds come in pairs of four, so it feels intuitive that these two notes would instead be on columns 3 and 4 to be the same as the notes that follow them. Changed it somehow, well i placed it there to serve as a divider of some sort

00:45:656 (45656|2,45656|1) - Likewise, move a few of the notes here to be one column over so that the next four notes all have the same base. same here

This follows for all the jacks in the main chorus, as well as throughout the map I'd think. Make them more like 00:49:474 (49474|0,49474|1) - this, where they're the same as the first note. Changed somehow

In my opinion, having jacks structured that way makes playing them feel a bit better.

01:02:019 (62019|3,62156|0,62292|1,62428|0) - So this is cool, no jacks here cause the player gets a bit of a break, but then you have 01:06:383 (66383|1,66519|1,66656|1,66792|1) - this just a bit later which does have jacks. I understand that the notes are more intense here, but I'd still recommend you stay consistent in the patterning. Fixed

01:10:747 (70747|2,70747|1,70747|0,70883|2,70883|3,71019|0,71019|3,71156|0,71156|1) - Here, should you have the 1/8 LNs that you had last time? It's the same sound I think... Fixed

01:36:383 (96383|2,96928|3) - What do these long notes represent? If they map the melody, then there's places where they should be 1/2 and split up. Also, why don't they continue into 01:45:110 (105110|2) - this section? For this part, im not mapping for the flute-like sound there, theres something else that follows that LN. Instead, I mapped the flute-like sound here 01:45:110

02:10:747 (130747|0) - 1/2 LN? Fixed

02:13:474 (133474|3) - The SV here is good. Technically the slowdown and the speedup should average to 1.0x, which this doesn't, but the slowdown is long enough that the player can react. I think it's ok. Not really a criticism or anything, just wanted to say that I guess. @.@

02:27:656 (147656|2,147656|3) - In the previous two parts, like 02:25:474 (145474|3) - you had a kind of jump trill, where the notes went 14,23,14,23. But here you just have jacks. Why did the pattern change so suddenly? Fixed somehow

02:30:247 (150247|1,150247|0) - Don't think these two should be 1/8 LNs, just notes. Fixed

02:30:928 (150928|2) - Also, here you could use some SVs like at 02:13:474 (133474|3) - it could look pretty cool. Ok ill try

02:39:519 (159519|3) - Stay consistent with the rest of the section; I don't think this note should be here. Fixed

02:53:019 (173019|2) - Maybe have a 1/4 LN here for the womp sound Fixed

03:25:474 (205474|2) - 1/1 LN here? Fixed

03:34:201 (214201|3) - Maybe here too Fixed

03:46:747 (226747|1,226747|0) - Kinda weird that here there's no jacks but before there were... Fixed

03:50:565 (230565|2,230565|3) - And now you have two sets of jacks. Pay attention to being consistent here. Fixed

03:51:656 (231656|2,231656|1) - This is a bigger sound than 03:52:201 (232201|1,232201|3,232201|0,232201|2) - imo Fixed

04:01:337 (241337|3,241337|2,241883|2,241883|0) - Why are notes like these jumps? I don't hear anything particularily loud about them. i guess it could be the clicking sound, but wouldn't that be the two sounds before the kick or snare, not just one? Fixed somehow

04:17:701 (257701|0) - And wouldn't this note be a jump as well, in the case described above? I think ill keep it

Overall, not a bad jack map, just a few things I thought I'd point out. Keep it up, and good luck getting this mapset ranked!

Ah, and don't hesitate to ask me if you've got questions about what I've suggested.

Thanks for the help!!!

- Ly0572 - wrote:

back~

V's Hard

01:18:928 (78928|0,78928|1) - how about change one of then to 1/2 ln to cover the sound then just add one note here 01:19:337 -
01:19:337 - btw those are kinda awkward imo.. hmm~ maybe add another note ate the end of that ln's? well, it doesn't fit if i change it into LN
01:21:110 (81110|3,81110|0) - same as 01:18:928 change one note to 1/2 ln same reason as above
01:21:519 - add nope
01:21:928 (81928|3,82337|2,82747|1) - same as 01:19:337 - nope
01:23:292 (83292|3,83292|0) - ^ nope
01:23:701 - ^ nope
01:24:110 (84110|3,84519|2,84928|3) - ^ nope
--
01:25:337 - add ~ deserves a note based on what i hear~ nope
--
01:27:656 (87656|1,87656|0) - 1/2 ln nope
01:28:065 - add nope
01:28:474 (88474|3,88883|2,89292|1) - note at the end of the ln~ sure, more easier to play
etc..
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01:46:201 (106201|2) - 1/2 ln? nope, for some reason. i just wanna focus on that main synth
01:55:747 (115747|3,115883|2) - 1/2 as well same as above
01:57:928 (117928|1) - this one 1/4 ln's same as above
--
01:59:428 - how about this? re-arrange

looks more comfy

02:03:110 (123110|0) - change to 1/4 ln like the next notes nope
02:12:519 (132519|2,132656|3,132792|1,132928|0,133065|3,133201|2,133337|0) - y sudden change of patterns~ well, u might wanna hear it in 25%. you gonna hear that sound
02:32:292 (152292|0) - move to |2| cuz it doesnt feel right to jack hue i want jacks right here
02:36:656 (156656|3) - move to |3| ^ same reason as above
02:37:474 (157474|2) - 1/2 ln maybe? yep to cover the sound like 02:39:656 (159656|3) - what?
02:41:837 (161837|1) - ^ nope, wanna make it easier
02:44:019 (164019|1) - ^ same as above
02:50:565 (170565|3) - ^same as above
etc..
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03:06:519 - add
03:06:792 - ^
03:06:928 (186928|3,187201|2) - change to LN ends here 03:07:474 -
03:07:474 - suggestion~ just to avoid the same style as hard

--
03:08:701 - add
03:08:974 - ^
03:09:110 (189110|0,189383|2) - ln ends here 03:09:656 -
03:10:883 - add
03:11:156 - ^
03:11:292 (191292|2,191565|1) - ln again end here 03:11:837 -
03:13:065 - add
03:13:337 - ^
03:13:474 (193474|3) - oh yes u did the ln here~ so maybe delete this 03:13:747 (193747|1) - since the sound is low
--
03:15:248 - add
03:15:519 - ^
03:15:656 (195656|0,195928|1) - ln ends here 03:16:201 -
03:17:428 - add
03:17:701 - ^
03:17:837 (197837|3,198110|1) - ln end here 03:18:383 -
--
03:19:610 - add
03:19:883 - add
03:20:019 (200019|1,200292|2) - ln ends here 03:20:565 -
03:21:792 - add
03:22:065 - add
03:22:474 (202474|2) - delete same reason as 03:13:747 (193747|1) -
03:23:019 (203019|2) - delete no sound to cover
04:09:110 - triple?

from 03:06:519 - until 04:09:110 - rejected, well it seems u have to change your modding style. try not to change what are people already made.

JooF12 wrote:

Ok I'm gonna point something on this map since I didn't much help before this map posted. First is having 2 hard diff's really necessary? Well might suggest if you make the other one to Hard+. Second, the SR gap, after the Hard(which is 2.7) then the last diff is 4*+, why there's no 3*?? Dunno if it's an issue but I feel that you need another diff that will reach 3.5+ up(well that's only my opinion).

Well that's all I can say. . . Just passing by

DustMoon wrote:

Hi~ from CanPoint modding queue
1|2|3|4|

Normal

00:17:292 (17292|0) - move to 2 Fixed
00:19:474 (19474|1) - …… Fixed
00:33:656 (33656|2,33928|0,34201|1,34474|2) - idk you catch anything I just divided the 1/4 notes to a 1/2 so i think its technically okay
00:42:519 (42519|1,42656|2,42792|3,42928|0) - change pattern to (1,2,3,4) Fixed
00:59:292 (59292|1) - move to 4 Fixed
01:00:383 (60383|3,60656|1,60928|3,61201|2,61474|1,61474|3) - fuzzy mapping Intended that tho
01:06:383 (66383|2,66383|3) - move to （1，2） Fixed
01:11:837 (71837|0,71974|3,72110|1,72247|0) - change pattern to (4,3,2,1) Fixed
01:15:110 (75110|1) - move to 4 Fixed
01:18:383 (78383|2,78656|0,78792|1) - change to single notes Ill keep it as it is
01:31:747 (91747|3,91883|2,92019|0) - change pattern to (3,2,1) Fixed
01:35:292 (95292|1) - move to 3 Fixed
02:00:519 (120519|3,120656|0,120792|2,120928|3,120928|1,121065|0,121201|2,121337|1,121474|3,121474|0) - ^ Fixed
02:12:383 - https://puu.sh/v01SZ/48946c4224.jpg
02:19:474 (139474|2) - move to 3 Fixed
02:29:974 (149974|3,150110|2,150247|1,150383|3,150519|0,150656|1,150792|0,150928|2,150928|3) - ^ Fixed
03:23:292 (203292|2) - delete Ill keep it
03:22:747 (202747|1) - this LN should end 03:23:292 - Fixed

sorry, i'm too lazy
Good luck!

LordTimeWaste wrote:

From my modding queue

Just to clarify this, if i say something about 0/1/2/3, i mean the 4 keys you are using for playing (1 = most left key, 4 = most right key).
Anyways, let's go!!!

V's Hard

00:05:837 (5837|1) I can't here a sound adding to the one LN from the beginning, would delete that one i know there's no sound if u hear it with 100%, but hear it with 25% or u must hear a sound along with this LN 00:04:747 (4747|0) -
01:01:474 I would suggest mapping this sound with LN's nope, focus on crash
01:03:656 ^^ (Would do this for all of them, adds some variaty) nope, don't wanna add LN for some reason
01:46:201 (106201|2) This should be split into 2 LN's nope, because i follow the background sound so i put long LN
01:58:201 Why do you stop mapping like before here? I'd keep on mapping i'm just following this 01:53:837 (113837|0,114247|0,114656|3,115065|3) -
02:05:292 - 02:08:019 Suggestion: https://puu.sh/v1p8G/b1371f8d69.PNG nope, sorry
02:08:565 (128565|0) Then move this to col [2] why? give me the reason
02:29:974 (149974|0,150110|0,150247|0) Would not map a three-stack jack in this difficulty it's the same sound from the beginning until the last part of the jack
02:30:656 (150656|3,150792|3,150928|3) ^^ ^^
02:32:156 (152156|0,152292|0,152428|0) ^^ ^^
02:36:519 (156519|3,156656|3,156792|3) ^^ (I stop mentioning this from here on) ^^ (I stop mentioning this from here on)

Pretty solid map, would just nerf these jacks i mentioned at 2:29. Good Luck, hope i could help!