Tomadoi wrote:

hey nice map

[Snowy]

00:15:025 (1,2,1,2) - fix the spacing here on purpose

00:27:320 (5,4) - let end of 5 be on the end of 4 ok

01:19:451 (2) - maybe ctrl + G here but it might be too hard then, up to you too hard imo, keep

02:02:238 (1) - move this note to x:288 y:184 (in the middle of the square) moved

02:18:467 (2) - same thing as before, up to you if you want to ctrl+g or not, it might look better, but a bit harder same

03:46:254 (6) - NC ok

04:28:303 (2) - as before^ same

05:14:656 (1) - I don't get this slider but if you want to keep it like that, maybe that will fit:
ok

Holy, that's a pretty nice map and song!!
Good Luck with ranking!

Finshie wrote:

hi m4m

[General]

Artist is 安田レイ

[Snowy]

00:14:533 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - too close compare to the rest of your spacings. might wanna adjust this alittle and lower the volume. maybe at 50s? it is intentional, since music slows down
00:26:336 (2) - ctrl+g i like the current way
00:32:238 (2,3,4,5) - this flow look better and smoother imo. https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7285506 like my way better ;;
00:44:533 (3) - x368 y79 that way 00:44:533 (3,4) - centered 00:44:287 (2) - and not that close to 00:43:549 (1) - 's sliderend fixed
00:50:926 (6) - might wanna change this slider's direction to the next slider rather than pointer at the corner because 00:50:680 (5,6) - flow feels really weird. you could also stack it to 00:50:926 (6) - then rotate 10 clockwise tried
00:52:893 (3,1,2) - adjust spacing a little more. ok
00:55:107 (1) - normal sample set intentional on sliderhead? oops
01:04:451 (4) - more this further away from 01:03:713 (2) - . looks cleaner when moved. ok
01:51:910 (3,1) - kinda big jump for a very calm part. its ok imo
02:18:467 (2) - ctrl+g
02:19:205 (4,5) - ^
02:29:779 (1,2) - ^ no need imo, like the current way
02:26:336 (2) - stack to 02:25:107 (6) - ? cant do that
03:15:762 - awkward pause. the vocals got ignored too similar with the other moments, should be ok
03:37:893 (4,1,2,3) - weird flow. its fine
05:14:533 (1,2) - i dont this this is necessary. if you removed this might as well removed the previous spinner will gather more opinions

a little bit confused about the usage of sliders on red tick sometimes even though they all sound the same. Might wanna check it out or i just suck at rhythms which is true but still learning xd

gl~

Hikan wrote:

m4m return

general

1. disable countdown? ok
2. the combo colors doesn't accord with theme song imo, try add some colors lighter?

snowy

1. 00:02:238 (1,3) - prefer fixing this overlap even this is intentional i like it ;;
2. 00:16:500 (2,3,4) - this flow is a bit weird because of the difference between those distance, try Ctrl H (3,4) for a better flow? https://puu.sh/tYwU1/9239048f6f.png like mine ;;;
3. 01:04:697 (5,1,2,3,4,5,6) - seems like it is overmapped a bit here. I think this rhythm will be more correct https://puu.sh/tYwG6/00c6cec548.png , too much circles just make that part feel awkward while playing cant agree with you, imo it works perfectly
4. 01:35:926 (6) - try putting it at 377;29, for better move xd wtf
   
5. 02:28:795 (3,4,1) - idk if this is better flow
6. 02:36:664 (1,2,3,4) - ye both fine imo
7. 02:39:369 (1,2,3) - this and 02:23:631 (6,1,2,3,4,5) - idk but there is inconsistent af if they are same, it will be completely boring
8. 02:56:090 (4,5) - ye why don't you do this one just like the 02:52:156 (2,3,1) - , this is better different rhytms
   
9. 03:09:123 (1,3) - blanket xd its not xP
10. 03:11:582 - the gap is changed so abrupt imo, I don't think the players will realize this while playing ( I didn't). If you can, just change 03:10:598 (5) - into a circle, by that way they will be able to detect the gap and easier to continue to play well, i asked for some testplays and everyone said that its fine so idk..
11. 03:20:434 (5,1) - improve blanket hue . 03:20:926 (1,2) - also fix this overlap fixed blanket, overlap is intentional
12. 03:28:549 (5,1) - merge it into a slider will emphasis the vocal harder no need imo
13. 04:07:648 (5,1,2) - you can make a perfect triangle here https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7303704 spacing will be way too much
14. 01:24:369 (6,1,2) - another triangle you can do seems like you love triangles hue
15. 04:57:443 (1,1) - Isn't the spinnet should be like this https://puu.sh/tZYRZ/f5e4fd05ad.png no, to fit the vocals better
16. 05:14:533 (1,2) - wtf why does this even exist here xD idk either

the song is hard to map imo, since the vocal and the rhythm are out of joint. the map is good overall, nice work
that's my mod, good luck

1. Your BG size 1365x768.
2. Tags : Will Tamai Kenji 玉井健二 Asyu Tomoegawa Takahiro 巴川貴裕

1. 01:37:771 - map vocal here.
2. 01:01:377 (1) - why do you use here spinner, bcz 02:19:943 (1,2,3,4,1,2) - here you map note.
3. 02:42:566 (4,1) - map it as 01:23:877 (5,6) - here.
4. 02:56:090 (4) - ^
5. 03:46:254 (1) - add finish? sounds cool .
6. 04:01:746 (3) - lengthen it to 04:02:115 - .
7. 04:06:172 (1,2) - 01:06:664 (6,7,1) - why are they different?
8. 04:54:369 (5) - 04:55:844 (2) - 04:56:336 (3) - 04:56:582 (4) - add finish?

Kibbleru wrote:

uhmm... ur using the normal-hitnormal sound for the soft hitclap so..

02:23:877 - on 1st and 3rd white tick u seem to use normal hitnormal as kick and 2 and 4 u use clap for snare.

but ur clap sounds exactly like the hitnormal so it just sounds like ur spamming claps LOL, either get a different sounding clap or a different sounding normal-hitnormal

Regraz wrote:

From my M4M queue: my map for M4M: https://osu.ppy.sh/s/582957
[General]
Your mapset contains 2 mp3 files, which is unrankable. oops, fixed xP
You may consider adding more combo colors. added!
Why you choose this picture as your BG? i think i fits very cool with the atmosphere of the song, so why not

HP6. No need to set it such low.

00:16:500 (2,3,4) - For this pattern, a larger spacing should be placed between 3 and 4 instead of 2 and 3 for the loud drum on 4. fixed
00:31:008 (4,5,6) - I think this jump should be smaller. At least it should be smaller than 00:31:500 (6,1) - . fixed
00:32:238 (2,3) - This antijump may not be a nice idea since you placed a consistent spacing for those 1/2 drumbeats. i actually like how it looks ;w; want to keep it if its not a big deal
01:11:090 (1,2) - This is anti-flowed ;w; fixed
01:39:861 (6,7,8,1,2,3,4) - This really needs to be nerf'ed (Too large jumps) fixed
01:44:287 (8,1,2,3,4) - Same fixed
02:18:959 (3,4,5,6) - 01:00:271 (3) - Should be kept with consistency. fixed
02:50:680 (5,1) - Blanket should be here fixed
03:08:631 (7,8,1) - A larger spacing should be between 8 and 1 than 7 and 8. fixed
03:13:057 (1,2) - This flow is kinda weird.i think its okay o.o
03:16:992 (1,2) - Spacing here is too large. fixed
04:00:271 (1) - Not recommend to follow the 1/6. Because it is vague, namely not clear enough. My suggestion is to follow the 1/3 instead. fixed
05:14:533 (1,2) - Not a good idea to follow the vocals here. The melody has already faded out here. deleted

I recommend to nerf some jumps in non-Kiai time.
Call me back when you want.

Pentori wrote:

heyo

00:28:795 (4) - could pay more attention to the vocal swing that occurs on 00:29:164 . it seems u were doing this stuff later on 01:00:271 (3) - 01:23:877 (5,6) - so it'd be nice to do it here well, i fixed it, but now it looks a bit odd, but maybe thats just me orz (pls take a look)
01:01:377 (1) - the spinner doesnt seem that great cos ur missing a whole lot of the build up, in the 2nd kiai you did this really nicely 02:19:943 - maybe try the same thing? ok
01:38:631 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4) - 01:42:566 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4) - really think you should look to break these jumps up somewhere a slider, so they aren't too demanding i think they're all right, because the spacing isnt too big and they are not really that long.. also, if i decrease their length, the only challenging part would be in the kiais, which will make jumps there look overdone, since they are the only one in the whole map.. so can i keep that if possible? ;;
01:52:402 - adding a whistle would be nice to represent the downbeat, like u did with 01:54:369 (1) done
02:42:566 (4) - something like 01:23:877 (5,6) - is nicer imo well, in this pattern 01:23:877 (5,6) - vocals 01:24:246 - are really strong and thats why theyre mapped.. here 02:42:934 - the vocals are not that strong at all, so i dont think i should emphasize them like i did in 01:24:246

call me back!!

Hikan wrote:

gratz~

Namki wrote:

wow, congrats!

Yohanes wrote:

Grats!

wajinshu wrote:

Good job!

wajinshu wrote:

Good job!

Sieg wrote:

wajinshu wrote:

Good job!